小学英语游戏活动教学（热门20篇）

Hi, my name is white rabbit. My head is like a mouse head, ears are based on the variety of small, upper lip split, very cute, tail and feet as long as the forelimb shorter than the hind legs, so jump very fast. White velvet snow white, really comfortable! Flushed eyes, like a pair of crystal translucent ruby, really cute ah!

I like to live at night and sleep during the day. Eat to eat. I will also have depression, so you want to let me out to play 1-2 hours. If you can not accompany me, can give me some toys.

I like to dry, do not like the wet little animals. You should always hold me out of the sun, the best shade of the place, or I will heat stroke.

Children, listening to my introduction, you know me?

一月二十五日下午四点左右，窗外下起了茫茫大雪。

妈妈告诉我下雪了!我飞快地跑进阳台，打开窗户，向窗外望去：北风呼呼地吹着，雪花就象小精灵一般在风中舞蹈。浓雾也来凑热闹，盖住了远处的房屋，盖住了奔跑的汽车，只看见从远处开过来的汽车远光灯闪闪的亮着。

晚上雪停了，整个世界仿佛披上了白纱。灌木上、树上满是白色的雪，看起来好象奶油味的冰淇淋甜筒，美滋滋的!楼下车顶上也积了许多白雪，仿佛雪精灵给车织了一件雪白的毛衣。对面楼房的顶上也积了不少雪，象厚厚的白毛毯，美丽极了!

我家阳台外的晾衣竿上也有雪，我轻轻的把雪拢在手中，雪在我手心里渐渐的融化了，变成了一滩晶莹透明的水。很快我的手指就被冰得象胡萝卜一样，红通通的。由于已经是夜晚，所以妈妈不许我下楼，我只能希望晚上继续下，好让我明天起床可以下楼去玩雪。

第二天，我起床，窗棂上的雪已经消失了，可房子上，树上，草地上还残留着一些积雪。我开心地跑到楼下，找了一些雪，放在手里握啊握，团成一个小雪球。心里想，瞧，我可以利用这些雪做一个小雪人呀。于是我四处寻找雪，把它们堆在一起，可是因为雪已经融化得差不多了，所以可以用来堆雪人的雪不多了，我只做了一个很小的迷你雪人。我分别揉了两个大小不一的雪球，又捡了一截小树枝当作它的鼻子，再拿两根较长的枝条做成它的手。还冲到楼上拿来了做手工的钮扣，做成它的眼睛和嘴巴。并且用花布给它做了一件斗蓬。

哈哈!我的小雪人，圆圆脑袋，花衣裳，可爱极了，好象在对我笑!

我和小雪人一起玩了好几个小时，风依然很冷，可我一点也不觉得。我的心里乐开了花。小小的雪人，给这个冬天增添了许多生机，也给我带来无比的快乐。

On Computer Games

From ancient times, there have been quite a variety of addictive activities to people, such as gambling, taking drug and what not. In recent years, computer games as a new form of addiction have emerged and are booming among the young now. They are just like other addictions that enchant and enmesh people with their prevailing power.

The original intention of the invention of computer games was just for entertainment and they do bring people lots of fun and happiness. They are always stimulating and help to refresh people who feel tired and dull. They are rule-governed and are stocked with sundry obstacles to conquer. Through playing the games, players can develop a habit of following rules and strengthen their problem-solving ability. In addition, the games always call for the simultaneous movements of hands and eyes, between which the coordination will be well improved. According to some researchers, some specially designed computer games may even be able to help children overcome dyslexia and other language difficulties by teaching their minds to understand the rapid sounds of normal speech.

However, as a coin has two sides, computer games have a character of a demon as well as an angel. As we know, everything should be kept within the boundary of moderation. A step out of the limit can always bring about unfavorable results. Indulgence in computer games can alienate people from health. A too long engagement in the games will strain the eyes and make them become tired easily. What’s more, they can turn out to be sleep saboteurs who disorder the body’s internal clock, mess people’s minds and seduce them to stay up late at night.

Computer games peril people psychologically as well as physically. They don’t encourage people to communicate with others. In this case, people can become alienated from friends, which is essentially harmful, especially to young people. Another aftermaths of the indulgence in the computer games is that some kids who have weak judgment and self-control may imitate the violence in the games and even flirt with crimes.

In conclusion, computer games are not an angel or a demon by themselves. It’s up to game player to mold them. The principle of moderation applies to everything in the world, including playing the games. Only when people strike a balance between entertainment and regular life, can they enjoy a healthy and joyful lifestyle.

[关于电脑游戏的英语作文

to waste and to lose the way. We only have two years. Two years to go， we were still talking about the new school and new friends. Yes! A year later， we have grown riper. And we learned much more things and got new life. We haven’t enough time to play， we will get the real life which belongs to us. ，。

January 27 2008 Today， I will take a job and work. It’ time for me to begin to learn how to work. January28 2008 I have rested for a week. I began to feel bored. So I went out with my friends. They are my best friends in the middle school. We didn’t go to someplace special. We just saw the other. We had lunch together. While we were having lunch， but I think I should share the work with them. I am one of my family member. In the future， so was my father. They always live in Beijing. They must get up early. Because they will manage the factory. So I know they are very laborious. So I should save my money. Also I should help them. Although I can’t do something useful， I still went to my mother’s office. My mother was very busy。

[小学生寒假英语日记参考

今天下午，严老师神采奕奕地走进教室，轻描淡写地说了那么一句：“今天我们做一个有趣的游戏！”听到这个，教室里立刻沸腾起来，有的奇怪地问：“玩什么游戏呢？”有的激动得趴在桌子上说：“耶，太棒了！太棒了！”而我却在位子想：“游戏好玩吗？”只见严老师神情淡定，默默地转过身，在黑板上写下了三个大字——抢糖果。原来是抢糖果啊！既然这个游戏叫抢糖果，那么一定有糖果喽。果然不出所料，只见严老师拿出了一袋糖，给我们每对同桌发了一块，哇哦，我们分到的糖果包着紫色的包装纸，亮晶晶的，远远看去，就像穿了一条梦幻的花裙子，我想，它的味道肯定也是棒棒的。想着想着，我的嘴里似乎洋溢起了牛奶的味道，从舌尖一直沁入我的心脾我最喜欢牛奶味的糖果了，香！甜！

接着，严老师宣布了游戏规则，老师说一二，左手，我们就得举起右手，如果对了就能得到糖果。就这么简单啊！我的意地想：得到糖果也太容易了！比赛要正式开始了，同学们个个摩拳擦掌，跃跃欲试。我和同桌一起目不转睛地盯着糖果，生怕一不留意就让对方给抢了。 “一、二左手！”我的心咯噔了一下，居然举起了左手。哎!甜蜜蜜的糖果就这样和我擦肩而过了。真是遗憾！还好还好，后面还有机会，我也如愿以偿地抢到了心爱的糖果。

抢糖果虽然只是简简单单的一个游戏，但我们在游戏的过程中分享了快乐，还懂得了做事要一心一意。这真是有意义的一堂课。

[游戏中的快乐小学作文

I have many cousins. I like Stella best. She is a pretty girl. She likes eating cucumbers , eggplants, cabbages… She doesn’t like eating eggs and milk. So she is very short.

Stella is an excellent student . She is the monitor of her class. She likes studying and she studd. So she is always the top student in her class.

In this summer holiday , I spent a very happy time with her in Sichuan . I often miss her very much.

I like my cousin best!

One of my classmates was knocked down by car last term. He was badly hurt. He had to stay in the hospital for several months. We were very sad.

One night, he felt very hungry. He wanted to buy some easy noodles to eat. He ran very fast. He didn’t stop when the traffic lights were red. He couldn’t escape. His legs were injured. He said that was a terrible(可怕的) memory. He said he would obey the traffic rules forever.

Please always remember the traffic rules. It is very important for us. Life is wonderful. Let’s obey the rules at any time.

小学英语实习日记一

2.28星期二晴

今天是实习授课的第二天，我早早地准备好今天讲课的内容，但真的要上课时，我心里却不免有点紧张，因为昨天是我第一次上讲台用自己的方式去向学生传授知识啊!今天在上新课之前，我必须先要把昨天的内容

简单复习一下，这可正是对我教的好坏一个全面的检验......上课了，我表面上镇定自如地走上了讲台。一些常规的课堂程序之后，我开始了课堂复习步骤，出乎意料的是学生们反应迅速，对答如流。说真心话，看到这我心里真的感到无比喜悦。

晚上回到家，想起白天上课的情景，我感慨颇多，我想我真正体味到了劳动并享受着劳动后的成果的愉悦了。当然，在物欲横流的现代社会，这个观念也许会显得有些陈旧和俗套，但它却有着与生俱来的独特的古朴、风韵和精华。我们不能将快乐简单地理解为物质利益的获得和某种非精神意味的享受，快乐与否在于我们自身、我们的付出和我们的感受。由此我想到现在的学习，很长的一段时间，我都因没有进入理想的学府而怨天尤人，失却快乐。其实不断的学习便是一种快乐，奋进着永不放弃，需要不断体验快乐来支撑。不久的将来，我会成为一名人民教师，我会辛勤地工作，用心地去教书育人，我相信我一定能在平凡、艰苦中感受到欣慰和快乐。

3.3星期五小雨

今天是我实习的最后一天。因为课程安排在上午一、二两节，所以我得起早，偏偏天公不作美，下着小雨，清晨躺在床上的我真的不想起床，看看表，哎呀!快六点了，再不起来就会迟到了，可是由于昨晚备课到很晚加上心里一直惦记着今天要起早。所以整夜没睡好，夜里醒了好几次，真不想起床啊......然而想到那些学生们，我自问“我有理由迟到吗?”最后我终于没有给我的实习留下什么遗憾，事后我却想了许多，也明白了由立志到实现目标非常关键的一点就在于坚持。坚持对于我们来说都是再熟悉不过的字眼，可是真正把握住它的人却凤毛麟角，坚持需要毅力，需要对目标价值的深切期望和正确估价，有时甚至需要人格力量来支撑。事情的成功有时往往便在于我们能否坚持那关键的一步，走过去，前面就可能是另一番海阔天空，而习惯了坚持，久而久之，这一信念范畴的东西便会逐渐地融入我们的个性之中，成为一种素养，一种道德，现在的我们马上面临毕业，就要踏入社会了，或许一些人会认为到了现在我们可以不再努力，毕业后找份工作，那便是一生了。如果这样的话，那么我们就永远失去了成就某种事业的机会。事实上作为师范专业的学生，我们更应该树立正确的劳动观念和道德意识。为人师表，认真而严肃的从事自己所热爱的事业，愉快而充实的度过我们平凡的一生。、

小学英语实习日记二

在小学实习的每一天都是充满意义与欢乐的，每一天每一名学生都能给我带来新的体验与感悟，我看到他们在成长，在变成一个越来越懂事的大孩子。放学后的路上，甚至不知不觉走过了头儿，又折了回去。回到寝室，我激动的心情溢于言表!但总感觉无论我用多么感人肺腑的话语，都无法比拟这一天在学校度过的令我感动的、难忘的点点滴滴!

充实的一天

今天是忙碌的，整整一个上午，都是在不断的听写英语、督促同学们学习中度过的，下课了，我就立刻找那些英语单词背不好的孩子听写，课上，便马不停蹄的批作业，并且时刻盯着宇，让她学习。我是喜欢和她一起学习的，感觉她是有那种学习的热情的，可以给我以感染力，又让我充满动力与激情。她也是听话的，只是稍微不仔细了一些，慢慢改正，应该是可以的。

让优秀坚持下去

中午批数学卷时，我分配给了几名学生，他们都欣然接受了，只有艾不想批，我对她说：“你不是答应老师可以做值日班长吗?为什么又不要做了?优秀是需要坚持的，今天优秀，明天就不了那算不上优秀。”艾似乎觉得有道理，便争着要批卷了。在我看来，艾是个心灵手巧、善于观察的小姑娘，只是有时候不太注意自己是在一个集体中，总做一些特立独行的事情，但这些并不影响她成为一个优秀的人，如果她能把这份优秀一直坚持下去，那真的是不可估量啊!

肩负一份责任

今天，我考了很多同学英语单词，并且让她们的同桌考他们第二轮、第三轮，直到全对为止，其中就有一直很愿意帮助同学的卓，她真是个温文尔雅的好姑娘。还有一个就是让我刮目相看的达，我一直认为学习好的同学只会学习，不会帮助别人，但这一观点，将从今天起转变。我让达督促他的同桌然背单词，达尽职尽责，不仅监督然学习，还一字一句的教他。中午，我见然回到教室开始学习，虽说是在补之前欠的债，但我还是很欣喜的，不多久，达也回来了，是回来帮助然的，着实让我很受感动。在达身上，我看到了一份对同学无私奉献的爱和他那弱小的肩上支起的坚定的责任!相比之下，辛，你要加油了!今天就你没有考呀，至少该对自己负责吧，期待可以看到你主动来找我听写哦!

把机会让给他

下午上了一节令人震撼的语文公开课，不仅因为老师和同学们精彩的配合，更是因为那个多次发言的禹(同学们说他“外刚内萌”，感觉很有趣)。在这节课快要下课时，老师再次点到了他，但他并没有急于回答，而是说：“老师，我把这个机会让给我的同桌，因为他也总举手，可是一次机会也没有得到。”顿时，听课的老师们被禹的回答说笑了，包括安老师也包括我，这个笑绝对不是嘲笑，也不是搞笑，而是一种欣慰的笑，一种赞赏的笑。在大家都急于表现自己的时候，禹的这种友情、这种谦让，让所有人为他竖起大拇指，又怎能不令我感动呢?

我叫游戏王，住在珠穆朗玛峰下面，我喜欢玩电脑游戏和跑马拉松。我今年13岁。

一天，我刚刚从山上跑马拉松跑下来远远的就听到了我家有动静。“有贼！”我想。我轻轻的、慢慢的走过去，想捉到那个贼。不料踩到一根刺，痛的我差点叫出来。我把刺拔出来，努力让自己不叫出来。这时，那贼似乎已经的手，拿着偷来的东西便溜之大吉。我虽然想去追，可脚被刺刺到了，速度也没那个贼快。我就先回家看看损失多不多。

我走回家查看了一下，只丢了一些吃的东西，损失还不严重。我把刺拔出来，包扎了一下。就坐到电脑前开始玩游戏。

我熟练的打开装电脑游戏的文件夹，准备玩游戏。打开后一看，呆住了，因为那个文件夹里，居然什么东西都没有了。我看了一下文件夹的名称，没错；又看了下文件夹：空空如也。

我马上打开360卫士：虽然这里是山区，可计算机并不可一点不比其他地方少。打开了系统修复，开始修理电脑。过了一会儿，修复好了。我一看，居然没有病毒。我有点着急了，打开我的电脑，把E盘翻了个底朝天，可还是找不到。我发飙了，打开360、奇虎、瑞星、金山把所有的杀毒软件都开起来了。我就不信还差不出原因。

过了一会儿，毒都杀完了。我逐一看过，脸色越来越难看，最后我叫起来：“天哪！我的游戏啊！”那些破杀毒软件都显示没有任何病毒在沮丧了很长时间后，我打开网站，下载了一个游戏“合金弹头”，杀毒软件一查，有毒。我就把它扔到回收站去，然后打开回收站把它删了。

在打开回收站后，我的脸呈现出五花八门的颜色，然后我就哈哈大笑起来，因为那个可恶的小偷，居然把我的游戏一股脑的扔到回收站离了。

[小学生作文：找回电脑游戏

Hi,boys and girls,Do you want to know my lastWeekend? Let me tell you.

On Saturday morning,I got up at 10:00,Then I ate breakfast,I did my homework.In the afternoon,I had to go to school to study.

In the evering,I watched TV and played with my little dog. It’s white and lovely.

On Sunday morning, I got up early and went to the school to study. After school, I helped my mother to do housework, She was happy.

In the afternoon, I played a ball with my friends and washed my clothes. At night, I went to bed at 9:00.

This is my last weekend.what a busy one!

今天，老师说要带我们玩传话游戏。有些同学高兴地跳了起来，有些同学愣住了，还有些同学在说：“要玩什么游戏啊？”

游戏开始了！老师写了一行字，分别让朱杍璨、殷欣祺、刘艾杰看。老师说开始，他们才开始传。殷欣祺对我说：“妈妈喂马，马踢妈妈。”我对第二个人也说：“妈妈喂马，马踢妈妈。”好像后来也是这样传的，可是到第四个人的时候就卡壳可。第三个人又说了一遍，可他还是愁眉苦脸的。我急得直跺脚，见已经有一组去告诉老师了，还好他们的答案不正确，最后一组也没有答对，老师公布结果了，结果是：妈妈喂马，马踢妈妈，妈妈腿麻。听到这个，我气得差点晕了过去。

玩了这个游戏，我明白了做任何事都要专心。

老师点评：详细的游戏过程，生动细腻的心理描写，突出游戏的有趣，结尾点题！

十月的一天， 天气晴朗。 我们小队的六个人到证大家园三期举行小队活动。 我们活动的内容是捡垃圾。

开始我们觉得很没意思， 后来组员们一听干完了活有东西吃就愉快地干了起来： 有的捡废纸， 有的捡废饮料瓶， 有的捡枯树叶， 还有的捡烟头。 捡啊， 捡啊， 等组员都累得快直不起腰的时候， 我们这次的小队长——陈笑宇才宣布开始休息。 当时， 我心里想： 陈笑宇这样做是为了让环境更清洁。

通过这次小队活动， 我知道了爱护环境人人有责。

①in+月、年 the morning/afternoon/evening/a week 表示时间

②on+具体某一天(几月几日)/某个假期(…Day)

③at+具体某点时间、某个假期(…Festival)/the weekend

①in…street 表示方位

②on…road/left/right

③at the…crossing/stop/某个具体的地点

①in the tree(不是树上长出来的)

②on the tree(树上原来自己长出来的)

表示时间：

① ago(……以前) later(……以后)

② before (在……以前) after(在 ……以后)

be 动词和助动词

1. be 动词(am/is/are)

主语 be 动词(原形) be 动词(过去式)

I am was He/she/it is was

We/you/they are were

2.助动词(do/does/did)

Do+非第三人称单数 +动词原形…?

…do/dont

Does+第三人称单数

…does/doesnt

Did+所有主格

…did/didnt

What do you/they/we…

+动词原形?

I/They/We+动词原形…。

What does he/she/it…

He/She/It +(动词+S)….

What did you/they/we/ he/she/it…

I/They/We/ He/She/It +动词过去式。

Dear Sue,

I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.

We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?

How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.

All the best.

Yours，

Li Hua

第一次做家务

he summer vacation began. I decided to work to make money for the next

term. But I didnt know what work I could do.

At that time, my mother was writing a book. I decided to type for her for

pay. She agreed and paid me 5 yuan for 1000 words.

I began to work. I typed so slowly that I could type only several hundred

words a day. It was a hard job for me. I kept typing all day long.

I finished the work two weeks later. I came to know how hard it was to make

money.

12 May 2006

Dear Sir,

I am writing to apply for a British Council scholarship to study in Britain. I did my five years basic training in medicine at Shanghai University. After this I successfully completed a one-year postgraduate course in Ophthalmology at the Peoples General Hospital, where I am at present serving a two-year probation in the Eye Clinic.

As a result of the publication in 2003 of my article in New Scientist entitled "Soft and Rigid Contact Lenses ", which was based on a survey of 37 patients over 6 months, I made contact with Dr. Li Ming of the Capital Hospital and Dr. Ma Li of the University College Hospital. I have received their help and advice with my current research project, which is a two-year survey of the acceptance of various types of contact lenses in 200 patients.

Despite their help, I feel that I cannot make real progress in this field unless I can actually have day-to-day contact with these specialists. I would therefore like to continue my research at either the Capital Hospital or the UCH as soon as my probationary period here is completed, and I would like to study in Britain for two years.

I enclose a detailed curriculum vitae and an offprint of my article, together with two letters of recommendation from Dr. Li Ming and Dr. Ma Li.

Yours faithfully,

Lily Chen

小学英语作文:MySchoolBag我的书包

I have a good friend. Her name is school bag. She is a very beautiful girl. Look! There is a picture on her face. Its a picture of a lovely girl. She wears a red coat. There are some books, some copybooks and a pencil case in her stomach. From Monday to Friday, I go to school with her. She helps me a lot. And I like her very much.

hello!im amy.i have a good friend.her name is zhangyun.her english name is betty. she is a chinese girl. she is ten years old.she is in the no.5 primary school. she is in class 7,grade 2. she is good at english.she likes chinese ,too.she is kind and very friendly. she likes helping others. she likes singing and playing basketball.

this is my good friend.do you want to know more?

Every May in Chinese lunar calendar is Dragon Boat Festival, do you know anything about it? Let me speak for you.

Once upon a time, there was a patriotic poet Qu Yuan, once he went to Beijing to go to work, see a decline of state variable, then vote Miluo River to commit suicide. Before he died, he wrote a poem. People in order to commemorate the patriotic poet, the annual Lunar New Year in May at the beginning of a dragon boat festival.

The main contents of the Dragon Boat Festival is the dragon boat racing, zongzi.

Dragon boat racing scene is very lively, crowded shore. Just listen to the sound of gunfire, paddled boat people desperately, but the river is full of cheering.

Rice dumplings wrapped in bamboo leaves, is for filling, with glutinous rice. When the package is very sticky, not professionals, but the package is not good!

According to legend, the dragon boat race is to salvage the Miluo River to die of the patriotic poet Qu Yuan. Threw rice dumplings into the river, is to let the fish and shrimp to eat, not eat Qu Yuans body.

My birthday is on XXX. I always have both happy and sad feelings on my birthday.

Why I am happy? I have group of friends that come over to celebrate with me. And they give me birthday presents， sometimes the gifts surprised me very much. Also， I can feel how much my family loves me because my parents always make a birthday cake for me.

They do not go to buy one， but make one themselves. I feel so happy about that. However， I understand my mother was the one who suffered the most pain on the date I came to the world. I feel so sorry for my mother for what she had suffered. But I promise her， I will take good care of her when I have that ability.

【参考译文】

我的生日是在XXX。我一直都在我的生日快乐和悲伤的情感。

我为什么开心?我的朋友过来和我一起庆祝他们给我的生日礼物有时让我十分惊讶的礼物。同时我能感觉到我的家人有多爱我因为我的父母总是为我做一个生日蛋糕。

他们不去买一个但让人自己。我感到很高兴。然而我知道我的母亲是最痛苦的人遭受了我来到世界上。我为我的母亲感到抱歉她遭受了什么。但是我答应她我会好好照顾她当我有这样的能力。

一、忆春游——创设情境，引发真情

1、录像引入。师：同学们，我们来看一段录像好吗？（播放录像，再现春游活动场面，激发情感兴奋）。

2．引发回忆。

师：告诉我这是一次什么活动？你参加过吗？想一想哪些人、事、景、物给你留下最深的感受呢？（学生自由答）

3．闭目想象。

师：闭上眼睛，伴着音乐，把感受最深的人、事、景、物再回忆一遍。

（播放一段轻音乐。）

二、说春游——开拓思路，引吐真情

1．小组交流。

师：把刚才回忆中感受最深的人、事、景、物，真实、具体地讲给小组同学听听，怎么想就怎么说，做到说真话，吐真情。（学生小组交流，教师巡视，参与交流。）

2．集体交流。

师：好，接下来，同学们把你感受最深的人或事或景讲给全班同学听听。其他同学可以围绕是否把意思表达清楚、具体，进行补充、评议。

①谁愿意讲讲让你感受最深的人是谁？他（她）为什么令你感受最深？（个人发言，其他同学补充、评议）

②谁愿意讲讲你感受最深的事是什么？说说事情的起因、经过、结果怎么样？

③谁还愿意讲讲你感受最深的是哪个地方的景？说说景色的特点。

④谁愿意讲讲其他方面的内容？

3．教师小结：同学们刚才讲得生动、精彩，能把感受最深的情节，具体地、形象地描述出来，令听者有种“身临其境”的感觉。

三、写春游——引导习作，抒发真情

1．习作导入。

还有许多同学要讲，可由于时间关系，这样吧，请你提起笔，无拘无束，自由自地写下你感受最深的人、事、景的片断，体裁不限，怎么想就怎么写，做到写真话，吐真情。

2．学生进行片断写作，教师巡回指导。

四、品春游——评析习作，交流真情

1．小组评析。写好了读，让小组的同学评议，有没有把意思表达满楚。

2．集体评析。投影仪出示几个学生的习作，让全班同学评议。

3．小结延伸。同学们，作文是心与心交流的书面表达形式，选择真实的事例，抒发真实的感情，带给我们无穷的乐趣。课后，请大家把习作念给家长或小朋友听一听，让他们评一评，然后自己改一改，抄一抄，贴在教室的习作园地里，互相交流，互相学习。