关于低碳生活的英语作文高中【热门20篇】

Many traditional arts are losing nowadays, because some of them have been

replaced by the new machines and the scientific products. I feel so sorry about

the losing arts, in my opinion, they are so classic and their charm will never

fade away. Take my grandma for example. She is good at paper-cut which was

inherited from her mother. But when comes to my mother’s generation, paper-cut

seems to be kicked out, there are less people need it, so my mother doesn’t

learn this skill. The paper-cut art is losing in my family. When I found my

grandma had this skill, I was so surprised and curious about it. I asked my

grandma to teach me this skill. During the process, I found this art was so

great, I was attracted by it. Some traditional arts like paper-cup should be

kept.

Nowadays, smart phone has been part of our life. We can see people lowing

down their heads and playing smart phones all the time. When people are walking

on the street, the traffic regulations are no longer their first concern. It is

so dangerous for them to keep their attention on the phone. Dutch officers

figured out a new rule to let people realize the traffic lights. On the ground,

the traffic light can be seen. What a smart idea. When people are watching smart

phones, they can see the lights, too. At the same time, we need to think about

the problem that whether our life is controlled by the technology.

忙完了家务，我又坐到了电脑前，打开新华博客，我想在这里寻找一点轻松与愉悦。虽然生活还很难，但我不是那种喜欢把哀愁放在脸上的人，我只是喜欢把真实的心情流露在博客里，想说给博友们听，也希望能得到博友们的回应。

最近一写文章，我的脑海里总有妻子痛苦的影子，结果文字里跳跃的总是生活的琐事。不象有的博友文章里，描绘的都是时政要闻，解读的都是民生话题。因为在我看来，那些离自己的生活真的很遥远，就象是故事里描写的一样，似乎与我永远不沾边。

我已经记不起来自己多久没有看新闻联播了，也不知道国内发生了何种大事，更不知道哪些明星又有了什么绯闻。我的生活里就只有两个字：痛苦，我每天必须要借用文字来释放，否则我会怕自己看不到雨后的彩虹，欣赏不到绝美的人间风景。

是快乐我得接受，是痛苦我更得承受！因为在家人眼里，我是个顶天立地的男人，我得时刻要为她们撑起一片湛蓝的天空，给她们更多的阳光与雨露，焕发她们对生活的信心。

在妻子做透析的日子里，我总要小心地侍侯着。病人的心态永远没有边际，我只能在模糊里思考着透彻。既然自己不能立即帮助妻子恢复健康，那么歉疚只能是自己咀嚼的最好心情。

曾经有网友问过我，“面对这样的日子，你觉得苦吗？你感到委屈吗？”还记得我给网友的回答是：“生活是有点苦，但我在品尝苦的味道时，总会主动加点糖，这样吃起来我就不觉得苦了！”

人生是一面镜子，如果你用苦脸对着它，那么回报你的就是痛苦；反之如果我用微笑注视着它，那么人生留给自己的就是快乐。生活也是一样的，有付出才会有爱的味道。

在每个周末，妻子心情好的时候，我总喜欢带她们去外面走走，让她们在自然的熏陶下，忘却那些不愉快的事情，暂时感受下湖光山色的清纯与美丽。

在公园里，我喜欢看着妻子陪女儿游玩时的模样。这是一张多么美丽的脸，笑容总是荡漾在其中。我就在一瞬间仿佛又找回了恋爱时的感觉。看着妻子荡秋千，女儿在一旁跳着笑着。。。我就会想上天对我们太不公平了！为什么要惩罚如此单纯善良的女子呢？佛说世间有轮回，但下个轮回时，我们还能有缘分相聚吗？今生难道只是一场黄梁美梦？不能给予我们永恒的幸福吗？

记得妻子对我的女儿说过这样的话：“你长大后，爸爸就老了。到那时候你要好好孝敬爸爸，不能让爸爸感到不开心哦！”而女儿却问道：“不是有妈妈陪着爸爸吗？爸爸老的时候，有妈妈照顾啊！”妻子的眼神里闪过一丝凄凉，但脸上还是笑着说：“到那时候妈妈就不在了，只有你能陪着爸爸了！”。。。。

妻子的话就象针一样刺痛着我的心，使得我的眼睛都有些湿润了。这是妻子的心里话，也是我最不愿意听到的话！“执子之手，白头携老”，这才是我最想听的誓言！即使将来我依然没有能力帮助妻子恢复健康，我也会做到尽量延续妻子的生命，让她时刻享受着我的爱我的情！

爱，是我永恒的追求。爱家人，将是我一辈子用行动去诠释的幸福。

[高中作文我的生活

My father is busy all the time, he promises me that once he has the time,

he will bring me to the zoo. This week, he finally keeps his promise. I am so

happy, I see many animals, the monkeys impress me so much. They are so active

and they climb everywhere. My father and I have the good time in the zoo. I also

broaden my vision.

weeks ago ,I had a military training . Many students think military training is not only boring but also terrible .but I don‘t think so .In my opinion ,military training life is wonderful .At first ,I‘m afraid of joining military training ,at that time ,I think military training is scaring ,but I have to take part in it ,because I‘m a student .I have to obey the school regulations .But in fact ,we are wrong,military training is cold .but at the same time ,military training also brings happiness for us.For example , in our spare time ,the commander taught us singing songs,or had a singing match with other classes .On September third ,we had a match with Class Five . First ,one of the girls from Class Five sang songs ,she sang very well,I thought . Next, other students also performed the programmes ,some sang ,some dancd ,and another students told jokes . Finally ,our class won the first prize ,the other class‘ students are also very happy ,although they failed in the match .All in all ,all of us were very happy .What a happy day it was ! I‘ve never forgotten that day.

[军训生活英语作文

During the winter vacation, nothing is different for my life. i wake up 11 oclock am everyday, after a washing, i have a good lunch with my parents. next i play computer games till the time to have supper. after have dinner. i go on playing till 2 oclock am, and then go to sleep with tired. this is one dull day of my winter vacation.

But i havent bored all the time. sometimes i read the books, sometime i listen to the music or the radio in the bed, because it was very cold outside and snowy all the day. and i also meat some of my good friends during the vacation, we have a very long talk about the life of each other in the past year and play table tennis tegether. and i watched the spring festival party of the cctv in the last seconds of the 2004 year! i think this is the thing most people of china doing at that time.

The summer vacation is long. The summer vacation is rich; Summer vacation is hard, but this summer holiday is happy. This summer holiday, it is to let a person to be in love, is to let a person pass also think once, in what, also can not tire. During this long summer vacation, did you go to some places of interest, go to the countryside, or... Or guess where I went. Yeah, I went to the sand.

You must be confused. I went to live there. Is it a hotel? No, I have my relatives there. She is my aunt and I live in her house. Their house is near the place in idong square. I can go there any time. The most striking place there is the "martyr tower", which records the sacrifices of many of the countrys prosperous and prosperous countries, and buried their ashes. Martyr tower near, there are many trees, heard that where every tree represents a martyr, where the original tree as tall, instructions, they sacrificed, but they will not destroy, and to encourage our every minute, in support of us, lets keep up, not to retreat, to be in the evening, where the music fountain will spray, colorful lights, also singing pop songs, make people dancing. There, watching a movie and watching a fountain, its a real kill.

At the moment of departure, I seem to loathe to give up everything down there, I looked up, two birds chattering in the, as if to say: "you are welcome to come again next time." I left without leaving.

“啪啦啦------”随着一声声清脆的鞭炮声，我们迎来了新的一年。新年到来之际，我们家热闹开了，人人都忙着为新年作准备。你瞧！妈妈，姑姑，奶奶们正准备着美味的菜肴，让人看着都眼馋；你看！爸爸，舅舅们跑东跑西——摆桌子，放椅子就是他们的活；你瞅！可爱的孩子们蹦来跑去，一起玩耍，嬉戏。这时，谁都放开了繁重的工作，新年的喜悦带走了大家心中所有的烦恼和不快，我们欢快的脸颊上都挂着会心的笑，笑得自然，笑得舒心。

晚上吃团圆饭是过年最热闹的时候了！我们都围聚一堂，享受着难有的团聚的味道。此刻，大家都一边享受着菜桌上丰富，美味，最可口的饭菜，一边纷纷诉说一年生活中的喜怒哀乐。时而从桌子边飘出阵阵善意的笑声，时而却又听见爱护的“指责”，真是热闹非凡，大家都为即将过去的一年作总结，边笑边谈着自己的新年的新愿望。真是新年新气象哦！

我最喜欢的就是吃完饭放烟花了。每一簇火苗带着我们新年的新愿望和祝福从烟花筒里窜出，伸向和我们心胸一样广阔无垠的天空，在空中绽放出美丽的烟花。虽然它在瞬间消失，但是给我留下的印象是永恒的，五彩的烟花酒向我们五彩的心境，有红的激情，蓝的遐想，紫的浪漫……让我情不自禁地久久沉浸在他给我们带来的快乐之中。

美好的一天总是短暂的，在鞭炮声中开始的新年，又在烟花中慢慢的结束了，留给我们的是和烟花一样美好的，永恒的记忆。

我仰望天空，感受着飘来的丝丝风，在心里默默地为大家祝愿：我们所有人都能在新的一年里快快乐乐，健健康康，更希望我家新年的幸福，喜悦能伴随着我们度过每一个美好的日子！

[我家的幸福生活高中作文

高中英语作文一次不愉快的旅行

一次不愉快的旅行

I went to Changsha for my holiday by train on the night of July 15th,2012. It was so hot in the carriage that many passengers wanted something to drink. Just then, a young man came to deliver water with a water jug in hand. "Water, water. Free water. "shouted the young man.

A middle-aged woman asked for a glass of water and was very grateful to the young man. But after a while, two tall and strong men came to charge her five yuan for that glass of water. The middle-aged woman looked at them and took out a five-yuan note from one of her pockets slowly. Without a word, she handed the note to one of them, her eyes being filled with anger.

The carriage was silent. The two men went away without any sense of shame. "Robbers!" someone said in a low voice.

This was really an unpleasant trip I have ever had!

2012年7月15日晚，我乘火车去长沙度假。由于天气很热，车厢里有很多乘客都想喝水。正好，一个年轻人提着水壶来送水。"水，水，免费供水。"年轻人大声嚷着。

一位中年妇女喝了一杯水，非常感激他。可过了一会儿，来了两个又高又壮的人向她要5元水钱。中年妇女看着他们，慢慢地从兜里掏出了5元纸币给其中一个人。她什么也没说，眼里充满了愤怒。

车厢里一片寂静。那两个人毫无愧色地走了。"强盗!"有人小声说道。

这是我经历过的一次不愉快的旅行。

On the night of July 15th,2012,I went to Changsha for my holiday on a train. It was very hot. The temperature went up to 38 centigrade. It was stuffy and crowded in the carriage, so many passengers wanted something to drink, Just then, a young man came to deliver water with a water jug in hand. "Water, water. Free water. "The young man shouted while walking.

A middle-aged woman asked for a glass of water and was very thankful to the young man. But after a while, two tall and strong men came to charge her 5 yuan for that glass of water. The woman looked at them for a while,then she took out a 5-yuan note from one of her pockets and handed it to one of them. Though she said nothing, her eyes were full of anger. The two men went away without any sense of shame.

This was the most unpleasant trip I have ever had.

2012年7月15日晚，我乘火车去长沙度假。天气很热，气温高达38摄氏度。车厢里又闷又挤，因此许多乘客都想喝水。正在这时，一个年轻人提着水壶来送水。"水，水。免费供水。"年轻人一边走一边大声嚷着。

一位中年妇女喝了一杯水，非常感谢他。可是过了一会儿，来了两个又高又壮的人向她要5元水钱。她看了他们一会儿，从口袋里掏出5元纸币给了其中一个人。尽管她什么也没说，可是她眼里充满了愤怒。那两个人毫无愧色地走了。

这是我经历过的最不愉快的一次旅行。

鹏北海，凤朝阳，又携书剑路茫茫。

怀着对初中的留恋，对未来的憧憬，我走进了大冈中学，开始一段全新的求学之旅。

高中生活就像一幅刚展开的画卷，充满着无穷的奥秘，等待着我们去探索。路漫漫其修远兮，我们只能一步步脚踏实地走下去。高中是我们进入大学的阶梯，也是步入社会的门槛。但前行的道路可能荆棘丛生，我们要以风的精神去穿越荆棘。高中生活比我想象中的更不容易：新环境、新老师、新同学，一切都是那么的陌生;全新的教学模式，全新的作息时间，一切都是那么的充满挑战。开学以来，我总还会将初中的思维定势不自觉地搬到高中学习中来，但一点效果没有。高中更注重我们的主观能动性，需要我们以努力为画笔，为我们高中生活画卷填上五彩斑斓的美丽。

高中生活像一首待完成的长诗，蕴含着无尽的想象，激励着我们去奋斗。诗，充满了画意，它带我们闯入中外文化的__大海。我会把握现在的每分每秒，为我的人生大厦添砖加瓦。经历了初中三年，让我深知这是个美好的开始，不管高中三年残酷也好，平淡也好，欢喜忧愁也罢，但我来过，我会尽我所能去奋斗。我的班主任，严肃不失俏皮;我的任课老师，负责不失热情;我的同学，上进不失温暖!同这样的师友为伴，我相信我的高中生活一定是充实又美好的。

高中生活虽然短暂，但只要我们科学规划，努力奋斗，我们定能将这幅画卷描绘得分外美丽，将这首长诗谱写得意蕴深长。今日踽踽独行，他日化蝶飞去。我始终相信：自己既是狂澜也是无人能扑灭的火花。只要我们在心底种下一片花海，让心中贮满阳光，以后的每一天，不管是寒潮还是雾霭，我们都能坚定信念，向阳而生。

thanknot onlbrightensomeone elseworld, it brightenyours. if youre feeling left out, unloved or unappreciated, trreaching out to others. it mabe just the medicine you need.

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of course, there are timewhen you cant expresgratitude immediately. in that case dont let embarrassment sink you into silence -- speak up the first time you have the chance.

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now ai saw her, i realized what an uncommon sacrifice it had been. and, after all those years, i told her so! what you did wawabeyond the call of duty, i said. thank you. i warewarded with a surprised smile and a sparkle in her eyes.

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古有三国演义，“今有两国演义，”古有世界大战，今有“寝室大战。”我们

寝室里的同学都很调皮，上铺组成了“上铺国”，下铺组成了“下铺国”，经常寝室就会出现“两国之战”

这件事发生在“公元”2008年9月某日，中午我和王梓旭都急着去上厕所，让我们意想不到的是，上铺的同学早已做好了埋伏，当我和王梓旭走到王柯皓的地盘时，王珂皓便拿出他的“绝世传宝”—枕头，把我们打了一下，我没有反抗就直接去了厕所，我心想晚上再找你算账。

很快地，晚上到了，我和周鑫宇出了“打仗”这个主意，没有人反对，我们便进入了战争中，一开始还没多少人加入，只有我和周鑫宇在打仗，正好周鑫宇是上铺，我是下铺，正合我意。

寝室大战开始了：我慢慢地站起来，我心想，这次周鑫宇可惨了，哪知道那个“死哨兵”—谢海涛大叫：“敌人来了，敌人来了。”我已顾不得从我那“登天梯”——床前让我借以向上铺进攻的凳子上下去了，只好猛地站起来，哪知周鑫宇拿出他的“尚方宝剑”刺了我几刀，我惨叫了几声：“啊！啊！”，只见我倒在床上动了几下，心想：嘿，这次模仿得像吧！我心里早想把那死哨兵杀了，可惜没有机会，他在东我在西，王梓旭就像我的脑细胞一样，像是知道我在想什么似的。他急忙说：“我去打谢海涛，把他的注意力转开，那时你趁机去打周鑫宇。”我心里一乐，周鑫宇这次总应该被我打了吧！哈！哈！哈哈！我又学着乌龟爬，正当我准备拿着“冲锋枪”射击时，那哨兵不顾一切地大吼：“敌—人—来—了！”哨兵的话音未落，我就又被那尚方宝剑给刺了一刀。我心想我是活不成了，周鑫宇每次都击中我，把我打得晕头转向的。大家看我们打着很有意思，也都参加进到了我们的大战中。

打了一阵后，我们都累了，大家都歇了下来，这才发现聂仲黎没有参加，在我们的吵闹声中他仍然在看书，顿时让我觉得很是惭愧，我们不但没有像他一样抓紧时间学习，还打扰他读书。从那以后，我们便没有了寝室大战，也没有了两国相争。每天晚上我们的寝室都弥漫着浓浓的书香气息。

[高中寝室生活作文800字

I took part in a few meaningful activities during the summer vacation. Through this activity, let me experience the hard work of making money and not easy!

I buy a newspaper on the first day: "I got up early, with the fastest speed to reconcile my things packed, I will happily out of the door, called TaoYaNi also, we with the feelings of a is full of joy to Simon in the paper, on the way we are very happy. When we put the newspapers apart, begin to set the papers, we have earnestly brightly colored paper sets together, after we put the newspapers set, found on the ground, there are two or three zhang section TaoYaNi immediately and I hurry up, we have apart just set good paper, each carefully again to turn over again, the results of a no more and no less, only one person is missing one or two newspapers, it can put us under can be anxious that bad, I said, or well sell motionless... we are talking about."

After a while, we finally proposed the same thing, but at this time it was half past seven and we hurried out of the door, and we were fighting for business... It was almost nine o clock when I finally sold the newspaper.

We counted the money you earn, the in the mind very happy, because this is the first time that oneself earn money, although very hard, hot with smelly sweat, but we are still very happy, happy. Because only oneself know, the money that oneself make is very good!

Now we are facing two problems of global warming and a shortage of natural

resources, both of which are getting more and more serious day by day. Thus, it

is important for us to promote a low-carbon lifestyle.

Low-carbon lifestyle covers many aspect of our life like transportation,

traveling, home-heating, and so on. In order to promote a low-carbon life, some

plans must be carried out as follows. Firstly, don’t waste any electricity and

water. Remember to turn off the lights and water taps unless we use them.

Secondly, we had better take the subways or bus to work, so as to reduce the

emissions of carbon dioxide. Thirdly, we should use cloth bags for shopping

instead of plastic bags, and use recyclable bowls and chopsticks instead of

disposable ones, for it can not only save resources, but also reduce pollution.

What’s more, it is of great significance to plant more trees, since trees can

balance the carbon dioxide emissions.

In a word, if we live a low-carbon life from now on, we will have a better

environment and more resources left for our descendants.

HOW TO KEEP HEALTHY

As a middle school student,keeping healthy is very important.If we dont

pay attention to keep healthy,we cant study well.But most of the students dont

know how to do it.Do you know the ways to keep healthy?Now,let me give you some

advice.

Firstly,we should eat more fresh vegetables and fruits instead of eating

the food with fats and sugar.By this we wont be fat.We should also drink less

alcohol and drinks.And we shouldnt smoke.Secondly,we ought to have a goog

living habit.Getting up early and going to bed early can help us keep

healthy.Besides this,we can take regular exercise to have a healthy

body.Thirdly,we shouldnt be too tired.Its bad for our health.

All in all,we should pay more attention to keep healthy.Dont wait any

more!Lets start now!

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如何保持健康

作为一名中学生，保持健康是非常重要的。如果我们不注意保持身体健康，我们不能好好学习。但是大多数的学生不知道如何来做它。你知道如何保持健康?现在，让我给你一些建议。

首先，我们应该吃更多的新鲜蔬菜和水果代替的食用脂肪和糖的食物。我们不会是肥胖的。我们应该也少喝酒和饮料。我们不应该吸烟。其次，我们应该有一个键康的生活习惯。早起早睡可以帮助我们保持健康。除此之外，我们可以采取定期锻炼有一个健康的身体。第三，我们应该不会太累。它对我们的健康有害。

总的来说，我们应该多注意保持身体健康，不要再等待了!让我们现在开始!

写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查，是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天，我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳，并举以实例，大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。

一.名词

写作中，学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。

1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.

句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在要其前加apieceof，类似的词有：news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。

2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.

可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.

3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.

一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s，如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词，改为abookshop.

4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.

一些集合名词如看成一个整体，则用单数的谓语动词，如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team,class,audience等。

5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.

中学阶段，以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。

6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.（这和他们的信仰没关系。）

以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves，如knife—knives,

thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.

二.冠词

7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.

用a还是an，取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说aEuropeancountry.

8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.

plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a，变为Aplane。

9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.

把a改为the，因为乐器前用定冠词。

10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.

在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代inthe80s。

11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.

去掉the，因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。

三.代词

使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。

12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.

定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。

13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?

放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语，应把Whom改为Who。

14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.

John和I在句中都做的宾语，应把I改为me。

15.Thesebooksaremine；thoseinthebagareher.

her是形容词性物主代词，后面应该加名词books，或把her改为hers。

四.数词

16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.

hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s，前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of，表示大约几百几千的概念。如two

hundredstudents（两百个学生），hundredsofstudents（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。

17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.

表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.

18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.

几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.

19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.

英语表达中分数的分子用基数词，分母用序数词，分子大于一时分母后要加s，所以就把third改为thirds.

五.形容词和副词

形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。

20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.

appear在此是个系动词，其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.

21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.

此句需要一个副词来修饰，hardly是副词，但意为“几乎不”，hard也可以是副词，表努力，因此把hardly改为hard.

22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.

more只构成比较级，而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。

23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.

两者相比较时，比较级前用定冠词，三者或三者以上才用most，因此把most改为more.

24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.

表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级，因此把harder改为hard.

25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.

fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级，可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有：much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等，因此把fairly改为rather.

26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.

as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as，因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.

27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.

同样的事物才能相比较，weather和不具有可比性，因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.

29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.

这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?，因此把went改为go.

30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?

修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。

31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.

像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后，实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.

32.Thebookisworthtoberead.

beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.

33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.

sure的主语只能为人，而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.

34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.

alive为表语形容词，偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living，或把alive放在writers后面。

35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.

yet用于否定和疑问句，already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.

36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.

nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中，而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。

六.介词

37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.

by加上名词表示一种交通方式，中间什么都不加，如bycar,bybus,byplane等；如果名词前有其他的词修饰，则应用除by以外的其他介词，此处把by改为in.

38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.

wait为不及物动词，需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。

39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.

marry不跟with连用，应把with改为to。

40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.

Seeing mywhole education history, I have many teachers. But my favorite teacher is onlyone. He is Mr Lu. He is my middle Chinese teacher and head teacher. He is aboutfifty years old. Maybe he works too hard, so his back is a little bent.

He alwayswears a black glasses. He looks amiable but serious in study.

He always thinks us before everything. His class isvery interesting and full of different kinds of encouraging stories. He is verystrict to us in study. But whoever has difficulties, he would help us withouthesitation.

Sometimes he plays the role of a strict teacher, sometimes he takesthe place of a kind father.

纵观我整个受教育史，我有过很多老师。但我最喜欢的老师只有一个。他是陆老师。

他是我的初中语文老师兼班主任。他大约五十岁。也许是因为工作辛苦，所以他的背有点弯了。

他总是戴一副黑色的眼镜。他看上去很和蔼可亲，对学习却是很严格的。他总是把我们放在第一位。

他的课是非常有趣的，也经常讲各种不同励志故事。他对我们学习很严格。但无论谁有困难，他都会毫不犹豫地帮助我们。有时他是一个严格的老师，有时候他是一个慈祥的父亲。

Iusually have a lot of things to do after work. Every day after I come home, Ialways read some English passages, in order to improve my spoken English andfeel the charm of language.

After doing that, I surf the Internet to watch thelatest news and find some useful information for my work.

I think this is aneffective way for me to learn more knowledge and widen my horizon.

Then I beginto learn English by listening to VOA and BBC. There are so many interestingstories in these programs. And the hostesses are very excellent. I can alwayssleep well with their beautiful voices. At weekend, I usually have aget-together with my close friends to share our life experience. Sometimes wealso go out for a walk, so as to enjoy our beautiful nature. In short, I usuallyarrange a lot of activities for myself in my free time, because I want to makemy life more wonderful and interesting.

下班后，我通常有很多事情要做。为了提高我的英语口语以及感受到语言的魅力，每天我回到家后我总是看英语短文。

这样之后，我会上网看最新的新闻，找一些对我工作有用的信息。我觉得这是我学习的知识，开阔了我的视野的有效途径。

然后我开始听VOA和BBC来学习英语。在这些节目中有很多有趣的故事。女主持人是很优秀的。

我总是能听着她们甜美的声音入睡。周末的时候我通常和我关系亲密的朋友聚在一起来分享我们的生活经验。有时我们也去散步，以便享受美丽的大自然。总之，我通常会在我空闲的时间为自己安排很多的活动，因为我想让我的生活更精彩有趣。

[高中英语作文：课后活动

那是个大男人，那是座桥;人老了，桥不老;那个人已经走了，但是桥还在。

我对自己的童年非常不满，认为自己远没有书上说的那么天真无忧无虑。门前的河总是占据我的视线。如果你想去那里，你只能去一个小镇。我常常一次又一次地把目光投向河对岸，河对岸的一切都在拨动我的心弦。于是我就在这块手表里度过了童年。

转眼间，我长大了，学会了一项极其重要的技能————沟通。没有它，你永远上不了别人的桥。就像我们在第十四课里教的：条条大路通罗马，也就是说你要以自己为中心，不断的和别人搭桥，让你的朋友不断的流动，而不是那几个。

总想留着点东西，就拼命招人签名拍照，好像有点不公平。在别人眼里，我好像是在营造一种氛围，但我觉得我是在努力改过。我曾经固执地认为一个人是一种很好的生活方式。沟通是一件很复杂的事情，不仅要照顾好同学，还要照顾好朋友。然而，有一天我突然意识到我其实很孤独。我曾经走过一座电缆桥，连根都没有连起来，吓得我半死，但回想起来，生活还是一样的。路口越多，桥越坚固;路口越少，桥越抖。

打开和关闭窗户，时间流逝。“青少年不懂得感受，说一些给新词的话。”。岁月为我冲走了太多太多的东西，就像郑志华里的《水手》，永远像一个懦弱的懦夫。我给父母寄去了太多的悲伤和失望。我在肆意破坏两代人之间的联系，而我的父母却在小心翼翼的呵护着，但我从来不设身处地的为父母着想，我总是毫不留情的用刀切断这种联系。直到有一天我才发现父母鬓角的白绢特别刺眼，心如刀割，才知道自己长大了。

这个人老了，但这座桥并不老。

那个人已经走了，但是桥还在。

人、桥、人生是三个不同但密切相关的词，必须同时存在。

The beginning of the New Year is coming, and in this summer holiday, the experience is quite a lot.

What a big adventure, hide-and-seek, dads dream of a trip to lanzhou, and so on, but one thing is memorable and interesting. One afternoon, I dont have a nap, but, plunged into the sea of books to read my favorite book - charlottes web, and a look round and, see of I, seems to have become a small role in the book. Watch, I am all of two eyes closed, how wide also hard to open, my father asked me, I will also paste is not clear answer and went through this began to go to bed. I dream of sleeping, dreaming that I am walking in a green forest, the birds sing, the spring sings and the flowers sing. The trees dance, the grass dance, the peacock dance... The whole forest was a scene of spring. There was also a forest of peach blossoms, which were very refreshing. I was wearing a green dress in harmony with nature, walking I smelled a foul smell, turned out to be a pile of smelly rubbish gives off, I pulled out environmental protection sword to clear the rubbish...

Suddenly, I woke up in my dream, I saw a smelly sock in front of my nose, huh! Mom did it! azuoweng my daydream, I leng on the sofa, thinking back to my dream, all of a sudden burst into a belly laugh, how interesting this thing is!

We will never forget our freshman year at college. In general it is a time filled with anticipation, some anxiety, and wonderful discoveries.

College is much different than high school. You may decide to commute from your home to a local campus. Without doubt, the most dramatic freshman year is for those living away from home. What can we expect as we head off into the wonderful world of higher education?

The first thing I notice is the workload. It is heavier and more intense than I ever experienced before. The major challenges of college work are large volume of reading, short deadlines, and “endless” writing. A related effect that can be brought on by the workload is doubt, frustration, and loneliness if possible.

On some of those long, seemingly endless nights of studying and writing, it will be very natural for me to long for fine old days. Hang in there. These down periods will pass.

I have made a lot of new friends. I am sure college friendships will be among the most satisfying and long-term in my life. Its always exciting to discover how wonderfully diverse college relationships can be.

I am enjoying my newfound freedom. Stay up until dawn talking about my ideals and ambitions with my dorms regular bull session buddies. Sleep in until the afternoon on a light class day. Explore the local town or suburbs with one or two of my new friends.

I even start to think about my future. Going to college is as much about finding out who am I as it is about getting the degree.