初二英语作文我的朋友Myfriend汇编20篇

My friend

One of my friend is a beautiful and clever girl whoes name is Li Hua.

with rosy cheeks,she has a pair of bright eyes,which shine below her

arch eyebrows. within her small mouth there are two lines of white teeth.

Her hair is straight and long. hanging down to her shoulders. she is healthy and attractive.

she is loved by her classmates.

我的朋友

我的一个朋友是一个漂亮,聪明的女孩不懂的名字是李华。

红润的脸颊,她有一双明亮的眼睛,这光芒下她拱形的眉毛。在她小嘴里有两行白牙齿。

她的头发是直的,并且长。她的肩膀垂下来。她是健康的和有吸引力的。

她被她的同学喜爱。

My best friend is lai LAN, we are always together.

She is very attractive, long eyelashes, deep eye sockets, a pair of very air small

Eyes, a smile to squints, an angry stare like a small ball. Her small, erect nose was warped. Her lips are lined, her teeth white and red, and she talks like a brother. Look at her ears, small and pink, like shells. Her fingers were long and long, like a new shoot of a bamboo shoot after the rain.

One time, lylan was ill, and when I got the news, I hurried to buy some fruit for her with my allowance, and hurried to the house of rylan. When I arrived at her home, I immediately asked, "are you feeling better?" She said, "I am much better off receiving your concerned greetings." In the evening, I dream of lai LAN, dreaming that we are playing happily together in school. Dream here, I suddenly wake up, decide to fold a wish star, wish the disease of lai LAN to rise quickly. The second day early in the morning, I found Lai Lan had to go to school, I jumped with joy, rushed over and she came a big hug, "super" this is no ordinary hug, I hugged her for a long time for a long time to separate.

Look, we are really best friends, right?

【篇一】

I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing.

She is a clever girl. she likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much..

我有一个好朋友。她是一个美丽的女孩。她有又长又黑的头发,两个黑色的大眼睛和一个红色的嘴巴。她的声音是更好的。她擅长唱歌。

她是一个聪明的女孩。她喜欢读书,玩电脑游戏和象棋。她还好。她经常帮助我们。我们班的同学非常喜欢她.

【篇二】

My best friend is very beautiful.She has long staight hair.She is tall and thin.She doesnt like others girl.She likes wearing jeans best.I never look her wearing dresses and high-heeled shoes.We know when we in the senior middle school.We are all like to go to the movies and listen to muisc.We go shopping together when we have the time.

Thats my best friend!

我最好的朋友非常漂亮,她有一头乌黑亮丽的直发(长的),很高很瘦,和其他女孩子不一样,她喜欢穿牛仔裤而不是裙子,我从没见过她穿裙子和高跟鞋,我们高中时认识,爱好一样，都喜欢看电影和听音乐。当我们有时间时，我们就会一起去逛街.

Everybody has a best friend that they can share everything with.I also have a best friend.We met in school,and were in the same grade.

My best friend is a good student because he is very hardworking.I learn a lot from him.He helps me with math;I help him with English.We always help each other.besides that,hes honest and reliable.I trust him completely and we share secrets all the time.

My best friend is also loyal and brave.Once when a bully teased me,he came to my rescue right away.He always remembers my birthday and he is fun to be with.He tells funny jokes and stories.He always makes me laugh.Finally,he is a very good listener and he knows how to cheer me up when Im down.

My best friend is really one of a kind.I hope well stay friends forever.

每个人都有一个最好的朋友,他们可以分享一切。我也有一个最好的朋友。在学校时我们见过面,我们在同一个年级。

我最好的朋友是一个好学生,因为他非常勤奋。我从他学到很多东西。他帮我复习数学,我帮他复习英语。我们总是互相帮助。除此之外,他的诚实和可靠的。我完全信任他,我们互相分享秘密。

我最好的朋友也是忠诚和勇敢。一旦当欺负嘲笑我,他马上来到我的救援。他总是记得我的生日,他很有趣。他经常讲有趣的笑话和故事。他总是让我发笑。最后,他是一个很好的倾听者,他知道如何鼓励我当我下来。

我最好的朋友是真正独一无二的。我希望我们能成为永远的朋友。

A man who is careful in choosing friends will certainly derive benefit from them. Why? Because there are more false friends than real ones in this world. To have one real friends is better than a hundred false ones. Friends who flatter you to your face are not true friends.

We must make friends with those who have good character and kindness of heart. On the other hand, we should do our best to a void keeping company with bad people.

参考译文：

一个小心选择朋友的人一定会从他们那里获得益处。为什么?因为在这个世界里假朋友比真朋友要多。有一个真朋友要比有一百个假朋友来得好。凡是当面奉承你的朋友不是真朋友。

我们必须和凡是具有良好品格和心地善良的人交朋友。反过来说，我们应尽力避免结交坏人。

A sunny Sunday, usually every day and sleep until the sun father-drying bottoms climb to get up early and get up in red, wake up my mother. Drowsily mother slowly said: "Today what the section, from Why so early?" Little Red said excitedly: "Mom, do not install confused, you said that today took me to the park!"

Came to park, mother and son were two beautiful scenery attract: kids, some kite-flying, and some shooting while playing ball ...... red bumper cars, while also playing slippery slides, played with enjoying themselves, was sweating profusely.

Little Red hobbled down to holding mothers hand while walking while singing. Suddenly, a banana peel, a red block of the avenue, little red slip banana skin reminded once again to see if the banana peel to her protest, then do not fight a gas, the foot kicked the banana peel. Mom saw, as if aware of her mind like, and did not criticize her, she just pulled the banana skin side next to her while saying with great earnestness: "I know you have been slipping on banana peel, very angry, but you should From the perspective of others think that if you somehow accidentally stepped on a banana peel how to do? red listened to, very ashamed, the banana peel thrown into the bin.

Little Red looked at the move, my mother smiled.

Yes ah! Would it not everyone should be protected?

I have a good friend.

我有一个好朋友。

She is a cute girl. Her hair is long and straight. Her eyes are big. Her nose is small. She is very thin.

她是一个可爱的女孩。她有一头又长又直的头发。大大的眼睛，小巧的鼻子。她很瘦。

She likes to help others. She is a hard-working student. She is good at English and Chinese.

她喜欢助人为乐。她是个很用功的学生。她的英语和语文都很好。

Her favorite season is summer, because she likes eating ice-creams in hot days.

她最喜欢夏天，因为她喜欢在大热天吃冰激凌。

She has many hobbies. She likes playing the piano, reading books and singing songs.

她有很多爱好。她喜欢弹钢琴，读书，唱歌。

We often play games together. I hope we can be friends forever.

我们经常一起玩游戏。我希望我们永远是好朋友。

In modern society, the problem of heavy traffic has aroused a wide concern.

Concerning with this problem, different people hold different opinions. As far

as I am concerned, to solve this problem, we need to begin with the following

steps.

First, limiting the number of private cars is a significant step to solve

the problem of heavy traffic. Private car occupies a larger space and it is

responsible for traffic jam to a large extent. Less private cars will accelerate

the flow of traffic. Second, it is also a good means to open up the special

roads for buses. By doing this, the phenomenon that the buses block the street

when passengers get on or get off the buses will not occur again. At the same

time, it will upgrade the efficiency of buses. Finally, reinforcing punish

toward the over-speed cars and drunk driving so as to reduce the rate of traffic

accident, and then decrease traffic jam.

To put it in a nutshell, only we put the above advice into practice

together can we solve the problem of heavy traffic.

导语：每个人都有童年，你的童年是怎么度过的呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Since I went to middle school, I left my hometown and moved to the city to live with my parents. I missed the time when I stayed at my hometown. I was so close to the nature, and I could see green trees and beautiful flowers. The most important thing was that I had a great time to play with my friends. The small place was full of my memory about my childhood. I liked to catch fish in the clear water. In summer, the water was cool and I stepped into the water to enjoy the coolness. Now I am getting used to the new environment, and have made many friends and happy about it.

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自从我上了中学，我就离开了家乡，搬到城市与爸爸妈妈一起生活。我想念呆在家乡的时光。我可以近距离接触大自然，我可以看到绿色的树木和美丽的花朵，更重要的是，我和我的朋友一起度过了愉快的时光。这个小地方布满了我童年的记忆。我喜欢在清澈的水里抓鱼。在夏天，水清凉清凉的，我走进水享受清凉。现在我也适应了新的环境，认识了很多朋友，过得也很开心。

____ She is my good friend. She is a lovely little girl. Her eyes are big

and bright, like shining stars; She has a round face and a pair of lovely

dimples when she smiles. LAN LAN is very optimistic and always smiles. Whenever

I see her smiling face, I feel happy.

After school, LAN LAN and I often exercise on the playground. We like

running very much and often have running competitions. In a running race, I

accidentally fell down and couldnt help crying. Lan Lan hurriedly ran over to

help me and encouraged me to carry on the game to the end. I clenched my teeth

and tried to rush to the finish line. LAN LAN is waiting for me at the end.

Cheer for me!

This is my good friend, a kind little girl. She always gives roses and

shares happiness with others.

____是我的好朋友，她是个可爱的小姑娘。她的眼睛大大的，亮亮的，就像闪亮的星光;脸蛋圆圆的，笑起来有一对可爱的小酒窝。兰兰非常乐观，总是面带微笑，每当我看到她的笑脸，也跟着快乐起来。

放学以后，我和兰兰经常在操场上锻炼身体。我们很喜欢跑步，经常进行跑步比赛。在一次跑步比赛中，我不小心摔倒了，眼泪忍不住流下来。兰兰连忙跑过来扶我，还鼓励我要将比赛进行到底。我咬咬牙，努力冲向终点。兰兰在终点等我呢，为我欢呼加油!

这就是我的好朋友，一个善良的小姑娘。她总是予人玫瑰，与人分享快乐。

My mother is the best friend in my life. I can tell her anything, his mother was always education of a person.

Remember the fifth grade, I envy my a good friend, her name is LuoLinLin, and reason is she just learn better than me. Back home at noon, I lie prone on the bed to cry. At that time, my heart is covered with a group of evil, I thought: I must step on her foot. At this time, the mother came back and see me like that, and ask the reason, with her gentle voice said to me: "dont cry, baby, she in learning than hello, but you also have edge. This world, stronger than you are not only one, she still has a lot of, you cant meet a cry for a time, finally recovered?" I shook my head, wipe the tears of the face cry way: but I just dont understand, we are the same, why I didnt she? "Her mother smiled, smile my innocence:" some things are not. For example someones personality, habits, and psychological quality, etc., are not. "My mother still let I looked at a lot of good men online is how to face the people better than they are. At that time, I really understand. Know they shouldnt be jealous of real talent, should take a long, fill yourself short, can to the next level.

I think: the mother should be very disappointed. Dont work hard to earn his own daughter, but secretly envy others... Anyway, I figured it out, someone outside the person, behind as long as your efforts, it doesnt matter what kind of result, also need not to envy others.

Mother, thank you! You are my a beacon in the dark; Is sincere when I went to circuit warning; Is the compass when I lose my way.

Mother, I love you!

我的母亲是我一生中最好的朋友。我可以向她倾诉任何事情，母亲也时刻教育做人的道理。

记得五年级的时候，我妒忌我的一个好朋友，她叫骆琳琳，而原因只单单是她学习比我好。中午回到家中，我趴在床上哭了起来。当时，我的心被一群邪恶笼罩着，我想：我一定要把她踩在脚底下。这时，母亲也回来了，见我这般伤心，就问清楚了原因，用她那温柔的声音对我说：“别哭了，孩子，她在学习方面比你好，可是你也有过人之处啊。这天下之大，比你强的人不是只有她一个，还有很多，你总不能遇到一个就哭一次，最后一蹶不振吧?”我摇头，拭去脸上的泪珠哭哭啼啼道：可我就是不明白，我们都是一样学，为什么我就没有她好呢?”母亲笑了，笑我的天真：“有些东西是学不会的。例如别人的性格，习惯，还有心理素质等等，都是学不会的。”母亲还让我在网上看了一下很多优秀的人是怎样面对比自己强的人的事例。那时，我真正明白了。知道自己不该嫉贤妒能，应该取人之长，补己之短，才能更上一层楼。

我想：母亲应该很失望吧。自己的女儿不努力去争取，却在暗地里妒忌别人……不管怎样，我想通了人外有人，天外有天只要自己努力过了，什么样的结果都无所谓，也无需去嫉妒别人。

母亲，谢谢您!您是我在黑暗中的一盏明灯;是我走向歧路时真诚的告诫;是我迷失方向时的指南针。

母亲，我爱您!

In grade one, I met a new friend, xiao Ming.

His hair is not long not short, short. His round face, big eyes, a small nose. Looks not bad!

The summer holiday, I and xiao Ming go to the park to play. We happily juggle walked. Xiaoming suddenly stopped walking. I dont know whats the matter, asked him. He pointed to the bin said: "look, the earth is full of garbage, lets pick it up!" I reluctantly said: "its none of your business! Dont you throw". He said: "the teacher told us to protect the environment, you forget?" I have to say: "ok". But we began to pick up Im tired. Ill go to buy food, for a while go to the toilet, it took a long time I dont go back, I didnt past xiao Ming picked up the trash out. An uncle saw pointing to xiao Ming said: "this child is really good!" Listen to my uncle I know I made a mistake. I think: I must learn from xiao Ming, and he became best friends.

From then on I and xiao Ming really became best friends.

一年级的时候，我结识一位新朋友——小明。

他的头发不长不短，个头不高。他圆圆的脸蛋儿，大大的眼睛，小小的鼻子。长得还不错!

暑假我和小明去公园玩。我们兴高采烈地边走边聊。走着走着小明突然停下来。我不知道怎么回事，忙问他。他用手指了指垃圾箱说：“看，地上全是垃圾，咱们把它捡起来吧!”我不情愿地说：“这关你什么事!又不是你扔的”。他说：“老师告诉我们要保护环境，你忘了?”我只好说：“好吧”。可是我们一开始捡我就烦了。我一会儿去买吃的，一会儿上厕所，过了好长时间我也不回去，小明把垃圾拾完了我才过去。一位叔叔看见了指着小明说：“这孩子真好!”听了叔叔的话我知道自己做错了。我想：我一定要向小明学习，一定和他成为最好的朋友。

从那以后我和小明真的成了最好的朋友。

Computersare changing our life. You can do a lot of things with a computer. Such as, you can use a computer to write articles, watch video CDs, play games and do office work. But the most important use of a computer is to join the Internet. By joining a computer to Internet, we can get the latest information in all fields. We dont need to leave home to borrow books from a library or to do shopping in a supermarket.

Computers help us live a more convenient life. With the development of computers, the word is becoming a large family.

What is a friend? Friends are willing to help when I have difficulty, share in my trouble when I meet, and share with me when I am happy... With these, its a real friend.

One day, we were taking an exam. The basic knowledge in front of I do very quickly, do very well, when I do read the title, a difficult problem in front of me, I think for a long time did not think of the answer, I could not help but quietly looked at the table, as it happened, she also thinking about this problem I think, for a moment, suddenly a good idea, patted her shoulder, whispered: "the first reading of the third questions, you do it?" She nodded to me and said, "did you do the problem, too?" When I dont talk, she pretends to say, "ah, its done at last. Its really cool!" "What?" Do you have to do it? "  "Tell me how to do it!" She saw my eagerness, the expression on her face was very serious, and I knew she must be proud of her. "Tell me soon!" My eyes are burning, but the table is still silent, see its no use shouting, and is of no use, I have no choice but to continue to contemplate.

After a long time, I suddenly found the knack and thought of the answer. I was filled with ecstasy, and I wrote the answer quickly.

At the end of the examination, I told my deskmates answers to several questions. She answered the answer again, and the files were the same for every question. At the same time, the deskmate said to me, "if you want to be confident of yourself, everything will be successful if you have confidence." Yes, I also feel that the result of my meditation is more worth cherishing.

Although things have been going on for several days, I can never forget that I think friends should use appropriate methods to help each other, thats true friends.

Hello everyone! My name is Zhang Li, I am twelve years old, and I am in Class four, Grade one. I like playing football, running, swimming and drawing. Yang Hua is my friend, he is my desk mate. He is taller than me. We have the same hobbies. We often play football or go swimming together after school. This is me and my friend. We would like to be your friends too.

i have a good friend. her name is emily. we are very friendly. yesterday was her thirteenth birthday. her friend and her parents held a party for her.

in the evening, all her friends came to emily’s home. each had a very nice present for her. at the moment, emily felt very happy. and so were her parents and her friends. look! the meal was on the table. how delicious they were! there were all kinds of food: eggs, fish, fried chicken, dumplings, pork, beef and some fruits.

after supper, emily sang a song“ happy birthday to you!” she has a nice voice. everybody said that she was a good singer. then we celebrated emily, “happy birthday to you! ” she said, “thank you! ” after this, emily’s mother took a birthday cake to the table. we gave presents to emily and emily began to blow candles. everybody was very delighter.

at last, we watched cartoon. what a good, nice birthday party.

People dont work or study every day constantly, but would take a break from time to time, in the entertainment activities Relax, its necessary. Recreational activities in a variety of forms, from horseback riding, hiking, travel to play computer play, read comic books, or just watching TV. Different people can choose according to their interest in different entertainment activities.

Also, the effects of people for entertainment also have different views. Some people aware of the benefits of it are that recreational activities can make our attention is diverted from the hard work, make body and mind rest. While people who hold the opposite opinion think, recreational activities will lead to many problems, such as some might because of the bad habit, such as addicted to computer games.

Although each has its according to two kinds of views, but I personally believe that if we make the appropriate entertainment, its benefits will far outweigh the disadvantages. As a college student, to participate in recreational activities not only can make us relax from the intense study, at the same time also can let us get knowledge in real life. Really is kill two birds with one stone.

人们不会每天不间断地工作或学习，而是会不时地休息一下，在娱乐活动中 放松一下，这很必要。娱乐活动的形式多种多样，从骑马、远足、旅游到玩电脑游 戏、看漫画书抑或只是看电视。不同的人会根据自己的兴趣选择不同的娱乐活动。

同样，人们对于娱乐活动所带来的影响也有着不同的看法。有些人意识到了它 们的好处，认为娱乐活动可以把我们的注意力从辛苦的工作上转移开来，使身心 得到休息。而持相反意见的人则认为，娱乐活动会导致不少问题，如有人可能会因 此染上坏习惯，比如沉迷于电脑游戏等。

虽然两种观点各有其根据，我个人却认为，如果我们进行适当的娱乐活动，其益处会远远大于坏处。作为一名大学生，参加娱乐活动不仅能使我们从紧张的学习中得到放松，同时也可以让我们获得现实生活中的知识。真可谓是一举两得。

I have a good friend -- China pistil. Under her with a knife flat bang, bang has a pair of jiongjiongweishen eyes, always fly fly. China pistil or a wise girl.

Remember last summer vacation, home filled with the turquoise on jujube jujube, jujube is the sweetest. I embrace the trunk of Chinese jujube forcibly shake, but thick trunk did not move. At this time, China pistil said, "tang also heart, dont bother, look at me." She picked up a few small stones, want to put the dates down. I looked at her and said, "its too dangerous, falls to one thousand?" Around China pistil looked around as if (he were) in search tool that can be used. Her eyes stopped on my balcony hanging clothes on a bamboo pole, she said, "tang heart, also can ask your mother for drying clothes pole? We can use bamboo to knock the branches, so dates will fall down, we can eat to the dates." I listened to the idea of China pistil, happy said: "China pistil, you are so clever." She picked up a bamboo pole, want to knock the branches. Jujube is too high, however, she couldnt reach, how to do? "There is!" She stepped on a branch and two feet and a push, like a flexible monkey climbed up the tree. China pistil hugging the trunk, one hand picked up knocks on the bamboo pole to forcibly branches, see dates like raining down. So blessed and overjoyed, we run go to pick up dates. I put a jujube in your mouth, heartfelt China rui said: "China pistil, its too much of you." China pistil cheerful smiled and said: "a piece of cake." Jujube sweet filled our hearts.

Look, this is my good friend -- China pistil. A lively and cheerful, clever girl.

我有一个好朋友——华蕊。她有着一刀平的刘海，刘海下有一双炯炯有神的大眼睛，总是扑闪扑闪的。华蕊还是一个充满智慧的女孩呢。

记得去年暑假，家门口的枣树上结满了青绿色的枣子，这时的枣子是最甜的。我抱住枣树的树干用力摇晃，但是粗粗的树干纹丝不动。这时，华蕊说：“唐亦心，别白费力气了，看我的。”她捡了一些小石子，想把枣子扔下来。我看了看她，说：“这样太危险了，万一掉下来砸到人怎么办?”华蕊环顾了一下四周，似乎在寻找可以使用的工具。她的目光停在了我家阳台晾衣服的竹竿上，她说：“唐亦心，能问你妈妈要晾衣服的竹竿吗?我们可以用竹竿来敲打树枝，这样枣子就会掉下来，我们就能吃到枣子了。”我听了华蕊的想法，我开心说：“华蕊，你真是太聪明了。”她拿起竹竿，想敲打树枝。可是，枣树太高了，她够不着，怎么办?“有了!”她踩在一根树枝上，两脚使劲一蹬，像一只灵活的猴子似的爬上了树。华蕊一手抱紧树干，一手拿起竹竿用力往树枝上敲打，只见枣子宛如下雨般落了下来。我们高兴极了，跑东跑西地捡枣子。我放了一颗枣子在嘴里，由衷的对华蕊说：“华蕊，你真是太厉害了。”华蕊欢快的笑了笑，说：“小事一桩。”枣子的甜味沁入了我们的心田。

瞧，这就是我的好朋友——华蕊。一个活泼开朗，聪明伶俐的女孩。

Dear Zhang Wei,

I’m glad to know that you are coming to my city during the summer

vacation.

However, I’m afraid there’s some bad news. I’m planning to take part in an

international conference to be held in another city during the time of your

visit.

All the top scientists in my field will show up at the conference. More

importantly, I’m lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf

of my research team at the Conference. I really can’t miss it.

I understand that it’ll be your first time to this city and I’m your only

friend here. I’ve asked my roommate to meet you at the airport, and you can stay

in my room.

He is a very nice person and he will show you around the city. Hope you two

will get on well and have a nice holiday!

Yours,

Li Ming

My english friend name is Peter.

He is nine years old , his family in America ,He and his family member comes our china to play.he has a cosin,he name is Wuhong ,He is four years old,but he has a lot of questions.look he is pointing at the chopsticks to ask that my this is anything.

I and Peter has become the good friend .several days later Peter said that he wanted, he said that i love china .I will forget that you zhou lei, will have free time America to look at me .ok see you Peter.see you．

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。