介绍西安的英语作文(精彩20篇)
导语:孩子是祖国的未来,也是每个家庭的希望,学生的健康成长是家长与老师共同期待的。以下小编为大家介绍介绍西安的英语作文文章,欢迎大家阅读参考!
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1000大一英语口语考试自我介绍
全文共 791 字
+ 加入清单i am xxx. i was born in xx. i graduate from senior high school and major inenglish. i started learning english since i was XX years old. my parents have alot of american friends. that’s why i have no problem communicating withamericans or others by speaking english.
in my spare time, i like to do anything relating to english such aslistening to english songs, watching english movies or tv programs, or evenattending the activities held by some english clubs or institutes. i used to goapoad for a short- term english study. during that time, i learned a lot ofdaily life english and saw a lot of different things.
i think language is very interesting. i could express one substance byusing different sounds. so i wish i could study and read more englishliteratures and enlarge my knowledge.
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篇1:介绍清明节英语作文
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+ 加入清单The Qingming (Pure Brightness) Festival is one of the 24 seasonal division points in china, falling on April 4-6 each year. After the festival, the temperature will rise up and rainfall increases. It is the high time for spring plowing and sowing. But the Qingming Festival is not only a seasonal point to guide farm work, it is more a festival of commemoration.
The Qingming Festival sees a combination of sadness and happiness.
This is the most important day of sacrifice. Both the Han and minority ethnic groups at this time offer sacrifices to their ancestors and sweep the tombs of the diseased. Also, they will not cook on this day and only cold food is served.
The Hanshi (cold Food) Festival was usually one day before the Qingming Festival. As our ancestors often extended the day to the Qingming, they were later combined.
On each Qingming Festival, all cemeteries are crowded with people who came to sweep tombs and offer sacrifices. Traffic on the way to the cemeteries becomes extremely jammed. The customs have been greatly simplified today. After slightly sweeping the tombs, people offer food, flowers and favorites of the dead, then burn incense and paper money and bow before the memorial tablet.
In contrast to the sadness of the tomb sweepers, people also enjoy hope of Spring on this day. The Qingming Festival is a time when the sun shines brightly, the trees and grass become green and nature is again lively. Since ancient times, people have followed the custom of Spring outings. At this time tourists are everywhere.
People love to fly kites during the Qingming Festival. Kite flying is actually not limited to the Qingming Festival. Its uniqueness lies in that people fly kites not during the day, but also at night. A string of little lanterns tied onto the kite or the thread look like shining stars, and therefore, are called "gods lanterns."
The Qingming Festival is also a time to plant trees, for the survival rate of saplings is high and trees grow fast later. In the past, the Qingming Festival was called "Arbor Day". But since 1979, "Arbor Day" was settled as March 12 according to the gregorian calendar.
篇2:关于自我介绍是英语
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+ 加入清单Hello, my name is Kong Shiqi. I’m 12 years old. I like spring best. Because It’s always windy and warm. I wear my new T-shirt. I like to go hiking and fly kites. The sky is very blue. The M要My Saturdayleaves are very small and green.
Today is Saturday, the weather is very cool and windy. I wear my T-shirt. I get up at 8:00 in the morning. I eat breakfast at 8:30. At 10 o’clock, I nill go to Xinhua bookstore. It’s near the hospital. How can I get to Xinhua bookstore?
1、 Start from my home, it’s near the Chengshi plaza(广场).
2、 Take the No.11 bus.
3、 Get off at the cinema.
4、 Turn right at the traffic light. There are three lights: red, yellow and green. Red means“Stop”. Yellow means“Wait”.Green means“Go”. In China, drivers drive on the right side of the road. We must remember the traffic rules.
5、 Walk east for five minutes.
6、 Find the white building on the left.
The Xinhua bookstore is opposit to the white building.
The road is too long.
篇3:介绍杨利伟的英语作文
全文共 2070 字
+ 加入清单导语:“当我登上了神舟五号飞船的第一次,我不禁感到兴奋,我决定,我要飞了。”下面是yuwenmi小编为备考的同学准备的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
"When I boarded the Shenzhou-5 spacecraft for the first time, I couldnt help feeling excited, I decide that I must fly it."------said by Yang Liwei.
Colonel Yang Liwei is an astronaut, and he is also a member of the Astronaut Team of the Peoples Liberation Army.
Born on June 21st,1965 in a teathers family in Suizhong Country of Liaoning Province,Yang Liwei had a happy childhood with his parents.Not only was he a good student in school,but he also had a gift for math.He won a lot of math competition prizes.After graduating from middle school,Yang Liwei continued his studies at the No.8 Aviation College of the Air Force of the Peoples Liberation Army.He studied very hard and graduated with a Bachelors degree.Later,hebecame a fighter pilot.
Several years later,because of his excellent manifestaion,Yang Liwei was among 14 persons chosen from 1,500 pilots for astronaut training.Yang Liwei did very well and passed astronaut tests in 1996 and 1997.Then he became one of three astronauts for Chinas first manned space flight.After a series of hard trainings and tests,Yang Liweibecame Chinas first astronaut on Oct15,2003 at last.
Being the first Chinese to travel in space,Yang Liwei is a hero of our nation in our heart and mind.He devotes himself to Chinese space program.Whenever we review the moments which Yang Liwei was traveling in Shenzhou-5 in space,holding our national flag in hand, we will be proud of our country and think highly of Yang Liwei.I believe that China will make greater progress in space flight in the future.
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“当我登上了神舟五号飞船的第一次,我不禁感到兴奋,我决定,我要飞了。”------杨利伟说。
杨利伟上校是一名宇航员,也是人民解放军航天员小组的成员。
出生于绥中的国家辽宁省在一个教师家庭1965年6月21日,杨利伟有一个幸福的童年和父母。他不仅是个好学生,但他也有一个礼物给数学。他赢得了很多数学竞赛的奖品。中学毕业后,杨利伟继续他的研究,在对人民解放军空军航空大学8。他学习很努力,和学士学位毕业后,成为一名战斗机飞行员。
几年后,由于他出色的表现,杨利伟被选为宇航员训练飞行员从1500 14人中,杨利伟做的非常好,在1996和1997通过测试的宇航员。然后他成为了对中国的首次载人航天飞行的三名宇航员。一系列的艰苦训练和测试后,杨利伟成为中国的第一个宇航员。
作为第一个中国旅游的空间,杨利伟是我在我们心目中的民族英雄。他致力于中国的太空计划。每当我们回顾的时刻,杨利伟乘坐神舟五号在太空,手里拿着我们的国旗,我们会为我们的国家感到自豪,对杨利伟的评价很高。我相信中国会在太空飞行的未来更大的进步。
篇4:简单的英语自我介绍
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+ 加入清单good morning, my name is jack, it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview, i would like to answer whatever you may raise, and i hope i can make a good performance today, eventually enroll in this prestigious university in september.
now i will introduce myself briefly,i am 21 years old,born in HeiLongJiang province,northeast of china,and i am curruently a senior student at BeiJing xx university.my majoris packaging engineering.and i will receive my bachelor degree after my graduation in June.in the past 4 years,i spend most of my time on study,i have passed CET4/6 with a ease.and i have acquired basic knowledge of packaging and publishing both in theory and in practice. besides, i have attend several packaging exhibition hold in Beijing, this is our advantage study here, i have taken a tour to some big factory and company. through these i have a deeply understanding of domestic packaging industry.compared to developed countries such as us, unfortunately,although we have made extraordinary progress since 1978,our packaging industry are still underdeveloped, mess, unstable, the situation of employees in this field are awkward. but i have full confidence in a bright future if only our economy can keep the growth pace still. i guess you maybe interested in the reason itch to law, and what is my plan during graduate study life, i would like to tell you that pursue law is one of my lifelong goal,i like my major packaging and i wont give up,if i can pursue my master degree here i will combine law with my former education. i will work hard in these fields ,patent ,trademark, copyright, on the base of my years study in department of p&p.
my character? i cannot describe it well, but i know i am optimistic and confident. sometimes i prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but i am not lonely, i like to chat with my classmates, almost talk everything ,my favorite pastime is volleyball,playing cards or surf online. through college life,i learn how to balance between study and entertainment. by the way, i was a actor of our amazing drama club. i had a few glorious memory on stage. that is my pride
篇5:介绍人口英语
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+ 加入清单Nowadays,with the rapid increase of population,the problems of overloading in cities is becoming more and more serious around the world.
For instance,the resources such as education,jobs,health care that a city can supply is limited.So more populations mean that everyone living in the city have less welfare.In addition,the phenomenon of pollution can also be aggravating.And the traffic jams will disturb drives frequently.
In order to deal with the problems caused by overloading,in my opinion,Lowering the birth rate is the essential methods.On the other hand,another way which is executable to reduce the pressure of population in cities is to move people from cities to suburban areas.Of course,this need the help of governments.
In a nutshell,it is time for us to make efforts to control the population timely.
篇6:介绍我喜欢的小动物英语
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+ 加入清单My favorite little animal is a chicken.
Just, my house downstairs 307 to raise a few chicks. Every day when we pass by, these chicks are leaning on the head to see us miles.
The chicks are full of hairy and cute. A golden feather like a golden dress. The chicks have a pair of pointed mouths. Round eyes to see people when it is quite spirit of it
I did not see their ears, but chicks could not have ears. If there is no ears, then we walked over, how they will be wiped out toward our head look at us?
Mother said, just hatched chicks can only eat small grains, can not eat millet or corn, but also often give them water. If there are small insects to eat them, they will grow more air.
I like these lovely chicks too much But Mom and Dad said that now can not raise, do not raise well, they will die.
篇7:介绍自己的英语作文
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+ 加入清单My Chinese name is Peng Wanjun and English name is Alice. Im a girl in my 12 years old. I like singing and acting. Besides, I like doing sports. Table tennis is my favorite sport. I have a brother and a sister. They are middle school students. I study in Xing Gong Primary School. Im in Class Two Grade Four. I have three best friends. They are Huang Yue, Xia Yu and Wang Tongtong. We have many things in common. Do you like me?
我的中文名字叫彭万军,英文名字是爱丽丝。我是一个12岁的女孩。我喜欢唱歌和表演。另外,我喜欢运动。乒乓球是我最喜欢的运动。我有弟弟和姊姊。他们是中学生。我在兴工小学学习。我在四年级二班。我有三个最好的朋友。他们是黄阅,夏雨和王彤彤。我们有很多共同之处。你喜欢我吗?
篇8:英语作文自我介绍
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+ 加入清单I am a boy.My name is Sheng Qiyun.I am a pupil in Pingjiang school in Suzhong.I like play table tennis very much,and I like swimming,too.I go to school five days every week. My school is not far from my home,and it is a nice school.There are 3000 teachers and 7000 students in my school.There are 300 classes in my school.My English teacher is tall, my PE teacher is tall,too.I love them a lot.Welcome to my school.
篇9:介绍朋友的作文英语
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+ 加入清单I am so glad that I have a chance to introduce my friend Tony and myself.
Tony, a 13- year- old boy, who comes from Canada, studies in Red Star Middle School. The reason why we become friends is that we have a lot in common. As for our appearance, we all have black hair and black eyes. When it comes to our size, he is taller than I. What’s more, he is helpful and independent, while I am more outgoing and hopeful. In addition, I want to thank him for helping with my history.In a word, I’m so happy that I have a friend like Tony. We will be friends forever!
篇10:英语作文介绍别人
全文共 423 字
+ 加入清单My English teacher is MiLiu, she is a young lady. She has long hair and big eyes, a small nose and a small mouth. She speaks English well. She likes eating fish very much. She likes eating fruit, like grapes, apples. She also likes sweet dessert.
Her bedroom is big. There is an air-conditioner and some flowers in her bedroom. She likes pink flowers and green plants. She likes nature very much.
I like my teacher very much.
篇11:自我介绍的英语作文30字带翻译
全文共 738 字
+ 加入清单To introduce myself(介绍我自己)
Hello,every one!(大家好)
My name is **** . (我叫****)
Im a 15 years old boy. (我是一个15岁的男孩)(具体情况自己改) I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.(我住在美丽的Rizhao城)(你可以把Rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音)
Im an active ,lovely and clever boy.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的男孩)
In the school , my favourite subject is maths .(在学校,我最喜欢数学)
Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well .(也许有些人认为这很难学)
But I like it.(但我喜欢他)
I belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.(我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果)
I also like sports very much.(我也很喜欢运动)
Such as,running,volleyball and so on. (像跑步、排球等等) Im kind-hearted.(我很热心)
If you need help ,please come to me .(如果你需要帮助,就来找我) I hope we can be good friends!(我希望我们能成为好朋友) OK.This is me .A sunny boy.(好了,这就是我,一个阳光男孩
篇12:介绍故宫的四六级英语
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+ 加入清单I am pleased to serve as your guide today.
This is the palace museum; also know as the Purple Forbidden City. It is the largest and most well reserved imperial residence in China today. Under Ming Emperor Yongle, construction began in 1406. It took 14years to build the Forbidden City. The first ruler who actually lived here was Ming Emperor Zhudi. For five centuries thereafter, it continued to be the residence of23 successive emperors until 1911 when Qing Emperor Puyi was forced to abdicate the throne .In 1987, the United Nations Educational, Scientific and Cultural Organization recognized the Forbidden City was a world cultural legacy.
It is believed that the Palace Museum, or Zi Jin Cheng (Purple Forbidden City), got its name from astronomy folklore, The ancient astronomers divided the constellations into groups and centered them around the Ziwei Yuan(North Star). The constellation containing the North Star was called the Constellation of Heavenly God and star itself was called the purple palace. Because the emperor was supposedly the son of the heavenly gods, his central and dominant position would be further highlighted the use of the word purple in the name of his residence. In folklore, the term ”an eastern purple cloud is drifting” became a metaphor for auspicious events after a purple cloud was seen drifting eastward immediately before the arrival of an ancient philosopher, LaoZi, to the Hanghu Pass. Here, purple is associated with auspicious developments. The word jin (forbidden) is self-explanatory as the imperial palace was heavily guarded and off-explanatory as the imperial palace was heavily guarded and off-limits to ordinary people.
The red and yellow used on the palace walls and roofs are also symbolic. Red represents happiness, good fortune and wealth. Yellow is the color of the earth on the Loess Plateau, the original home of the Chinese people. Yellow became an imperial color during the Tang dynasty, when only members of the royal family were allowed to wear it and use it in their architecture.
The Forbidden City is rectangular in shape. It is 960 meters long from north to south and 750 meter wide from east west. It has 9,900 rooms under a total roof area 150,000 square meters .A 52-meter-wide-moat encircles a 9.9-meter—high wall which encloses the complex. Octagon —shaped turrets rest on the four corners of the wall. There are four entrances into the city: the Meridian Gate to the south, the Shenwu Gate(Gate of Military Prowess) to the north, and the Xihua Gate(Gate of military Prowess) to the north, and the Xihua Gate(Western Flowery Gate )to the west ,the Donghua (Eastern Flowery Gate) to the east.
Manpower and materials throughout the country were used to build the Forbidden City. A total of 230,000 artisans and one million laborers were employed. Marble was quarried from fangshan Country Mount Pan in Jixian County in Hebei Province. Granite was quarried in Quyang County in Hebei Province. Paving blocks were fired in kilns in Suzhou in southern China. Bricks and scarlet pigmentation used on the palatial walls came from linqing in Shandong Province .Timber was cut ,processed and hauled from the northwestern and southern regions.
The structure in front of us is the Meridian Gate. It is the main entrance to the forbidden City. It is also knows as Wufenglou(Five-Phoenix Tower). Ming emperors held lavish banquets here on the 15th day of the first month of the Chinese lunar year in hornor of their counties .They also used this place for punishing officals by flogging them with sticks.
Qing emperors used this building to announce the beginning of the new year. Qing Emperor Qianglong changed the original name of this announcement ceremony from ban li(announcement of calendar)to ban shou(announcement of new moon )to avoid coincidental association with another Emperor` s name, Hongli, which was considered a taboo at that time. Qing Dynasty emperors also used this place to hold audience and for other important ceremonies. For example,when the imperial army returned victoriously from the battlefield ,it was here that the Emperor presided over the ceremony to accept prisoners of war.
(After entering the Meridian Gate and standing in front of the Five Marble Bridges on Golden Water River)
Now we are inside the Forbidden City.Before we start our tour, I would like to briefly introduce you to the architectural patterns befour us .To complete this solemn, magnificent and palatial complex, a variety of buildings were arranged on a north-south axis, and 8-kilometer-long invisible line that has become an inseparable part of the City of Beijing. The Forbidden City covers roughly one –third of this central axis. Most of the important building in the Forbidden City weree arranged along this line. The design and arrangement of the palaces reflect the solemn dignity of the royal court and rigidly –stratified feudal system.
The Forbidden City is divided into an outer and an inner count.We are now standing on the southernmost part of the outer count. In front of us lies the Gate of supreme Harmony .The gate is guarded by a pair of bronze lions ,symbolizing imperial power and dignity. The lions were the most exquisite and biggest of its kind. The one on the east playing with a ball is a male, and ball is said to represent state unity. The other one is a female. Underneath one of its fore claws is a cub that is considered to be a symbol of perpetual imperial succession. The winding brook before us is the Golden Water River. It functions both as decoration and fire control .The five bridges spanning the river represent the five virtues preached by Confucius :benevolence, righteousness, rites, intellence and fidelity. The river takes the shape of a bow and the north-south axis is its arrow. This was meant to show that the Emperors ruled the country on behalf of God.
篇13:自招面试英语自我介绍
全文共 985 字
+ 加入清单Good morning professors.Thank you for providing me with such a chance to introduce myself and I hope I can make a good performance today. My name is Zang Yinfeng ,a boy who is from Xing Yue Middle School and has dreamed of entering your school.The strong desire for knowledge has promoted my progress in subjects.I am a hard working student. In the past years,I have won several awards in the competions of English and Computer.Owning strong organizational ablities is my another advantage.I once served as monitor,announcer and so on. English is always my favorite subject and I am good at English .English is my favorite subject, because it’s such a widely used language.
In my spare time, I like to read novels. I think reading could enlarge my knowledge. In addition to reading, I also like to play basketball. I have been trained in the school basketball team.I think playing basketball not only builds up my body, but also helps me to learn to work in a team.That’s all.
Thank you.
篇14:初中英语作文自我介绍带翻译
全文共 805 字
+ 加入清单Hello, everyone. I can tell you about me! I am a happy girl. My name is Nina, I am 12 years old this year. My hobbies are singing and dancing. I usually play basketball on Saturday. I want to grow up to be a doctor .I didn’t like playing video games, but I like reading some books .I ride bike to school .I go to school from Monday to Friday. I am a good student in my school .Because I so like study .I am good kid too, Do you know? I usually do homework, help my family. My cook food is tasty .I like cat my favorite season is fall. I like warm and sunny. I so like red. This is me! What about you?
大家好。我可以告诉你关于我的!我是一个快乐的女孩。我叫妮娜,今年12岁。我的爱好是唱歌和跳舞。我通常在星期六打篮球。我想长大后成为一名医生,我不喜欢玩电子游戏,但我喜欢读一些书,我骑自行车上学,我从星期一到星期五上学。我是一个好学生,因为我很喜欢学习,我也是一个好孩子,你知道吗?我通常做家庭作业,帮助我的家庭。我的烹调食物很好吃,我喜欢猫,我最喜欢的季节是秋天。我喜欢温暖和阳光。我很喜欢红色。这是我!你呢?
篇15:介绍假期的英语作文
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+ 加入清单it was a sun day of the summer holiday. the weather was hot. my little brother and i decided to go to the resrvoir to swim by bike. it took us half an hour when we got there, many people were swimming. the we dived into the water……
about an hour later, suddenly somebody called: “help! help!” we were surprised to see a boy struggling in the deep water. as quickly as possible. we swam towards him and pulled him to the shore. he lost his consciousness. we sent him to the nearest hospital at once luckily, he was saved.
in the end, we were worn out, but felt happy. that day was meaningful. we did a good deed!
篇16:有关春节美食的英语介绍
全文共 798 字
+ 加入清单Nian Gao:The northerners eat Jiao Zi, but southerners like to eat Nian Gao, which translates to "New Year Cake". In Chinese, Gao is a homonym for high. Nian Gao is also called Nian Nian Gao, which is a homonym for "higher each year", symbolizing progress and promotion at work and in daily life and improvement in life year by year.
Nian Gao is a sweet, sticky, brown cake made from rice flour and sugar, a kind of glutinous white cake in the shape of rectangle. Often given as a gift, it is delicious when steamed, fried, fried with eggs or even eaten cold.
Given the importance of food in Chinese culture, it is not surprising that food plays a major role in Chinese New Year celebrations. "Lucky" foods are served through the two week Chinese New Year celebration, also called the Spring festival.
篇17:介绍妹妹英语作文
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+ 加入清单My Sister goes to Taipei First Municipal Girls High School and is in her second year there. This is the best girl high school in the city, and My sister is a very good student. My sister likes Sports. And now she is a member of the school track team. The regular schoolwork and the sports keep my sister very busy and yet very happy. She hopes to be able to go to college when she graduates. She enjoys English which they have nine sessions of one hours class every week she hopes to major in English in the future. Usually she goes to school at six in the morning and in the afternoon she comes home at six, too. After dinner she usually studies until ten oclock or so and then goes to bed. On Saturday afternoons she spends her time at the school track. I think I have a very good sister; she also likes to smile often.
篇18::介绍小兔子的英语作文
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+ 加入清单Today, I see a super cute little rabbit, I heard just full moon!
Its ears are gray, high erected on the forehead. Its hair is gray and white, the back of a cluster of brown hair, it is particularly personality. Its mouth is three mouth, eat something to not sloppy. The most characteristic of the number of its eyes: the other rabbits have had "pink eye", and this rabbit is inlaid with two "black gem" it! This rabbit seems to have no sleep last night, long dark circles like , And it seems like a beautiful lady dressed in eye shadow looks very funny!
The rabbit is very gentle, and some shy, it put it out, it hides in a corner shy to graze; we put it around, it is panic, scared everywhere scurry; it grazing when the mouth fast To chew the leaves, "rabbit expert" item to Lin also learn the story of the rabbit to eat it!
We put some grass on the ground, it has been put in the rabbit nest, but it does not eat, was "rabbit expert" care into the.
The rabbit has been quietly watching us, and then in the nest in the spin, and finally the ass toward us!
This rabbit where the mother to go? Rabbit who even put it and bunny apart, the bunny really poor!
篇19:英语口语一分钟自我介绍
全文共 845 字
+ 加入清单My name is ________. I am graduatefrom ________ seniorhigh school and major in ________. There are ________ people in my family. My father works in a computer company. And my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest one in my family.
In my spare time, I like to read novels. I think reading could enlargemy knowledge. As for novels, I could imagine whatever I like such as a well-known scientist or a kung-fu master. In addition to reading, I also like to play PC games. A lot of grownups think playing PC games hinders the students from learning. But I think PC games could motivate me to learn something such as English or Japanese.My favorite course is English because I think it is interesting to say one thing via different sounds. I wish my English could be improved in the next four years and be able to speak fluent English in the future.
篇20:中考英语作文高分秘诀介绍
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+ 加入清单想要获得更加高分的英语写作,在语言表达需要增加一些"亮点"。下面是语文迷为大家提供的具体指导,大家一起来阅读吧。
一、了解高分作文的特点
要想作文获得高分,必须了解高分作文具有的特点,才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点:
1、书写工整,书面整洁,很少有涂改痕迹。
2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段,让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。
3、要点齐全,不缺要点。
4、首尾呼应,自然成一体。
5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般,自然就给打高分了。
6、开头言简意赅,不啰嗦,不偏题,迅速引入主题。
7、段与段之间,自然过渡。有合适的连接词。
8、句与句之间,有恰当的连接词,使之自然成一体。
9、全文中同一个意思,基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等,说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。
10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。
二、勤积累,巧准备
要想作文得高分,除了了解以上的特点外,还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面:
1、牢记课标词汇是基础
一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的,这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此,牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。
2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法
要想作文不扣分或者少扣分,有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习,掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如,对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。
3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式
高分作文有个特点是:让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量,你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中,逐步积累起来的。比如:今年的中考作文,谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”,假如你就用一个动词“help”,岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式,用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思,岂不更好呢?
像这样的例子很多,比如:大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有:My name is Jim. I’m Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。
表达年龄的方式有:She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old). She is a girl aged 12.等等。
很显然,使用高级一点的更好。
4、加强练习,积累经验
学习语言最好的方法是运用,作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分,必须经常练习,才能提高水平。
5、充分利用作文范文
很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然,他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。
我们怎么利用它们呢?首先,我们先不要看文章,自己先思考一下:假如你来写,你会怎么去写,会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较,勾出其中的好词佳句,并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。
另外,背一些范文也是很有必要的。
6、背诵一些谚语和警句
作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句,会有锦上添花的效果。
三、精心审题,沉着写初稿
很多同学看到作文后,下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句,涂改后书面又不整洁,影响得分。
其实,会写作文的同学都知道,审题非常的重要,可以防止很多毛病,提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?
审题主要要做一下事情:
1、审人称、时态、体裁等
审题时,要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称,什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误:全文皆错。例如,如果一篇文章,本来应该一般过去时,你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想,那还能得高分吗?
2、明确必须表达的要点
高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点,则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求,把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。
3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型,确定好使用哪个?
4、确定好如何分段
就是要确定好,将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面,首段、尾段打算写哪些?
拓展阅读:写好作文"加分点"
合理使用动词使表达更生动
(例)In front of the building, there was a tall tree。
In front of the building stood a tall tree。巧妙使用动词短语增加表达的新颖性
(例)I like writing poems at middle school。。
I took great interest in writing poems at middle school。
改变动词增强文章的感染色彩
(例)When she heard he had died, she was very sad。
At the news of his death, she felt very sad。