杭州英语中考作文范文（最新20篇）

近年来，中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请你用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。

要求：(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。

② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。

(2)字数：60---80词。

(3)短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

范文：Every one wants to keep healthy today, especailly our students. But we dont pay attention to our health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, espacially at the weekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke.

It is important for us to have good habbits. We should eat breakfast every morning. We can watch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy.

篇一：My Favorite Animal 我最喜欢的动物

Last year, my father bought a lovely pet for me. She has four white paws and a white and yellow tail. She has two small ears, two green eyes and eight whiskers on her face. Her name is Sally and she is one year old.

Do you know what it is? A cat? Yes, it is a cat. She has very short fur and she is quite small. She weighs about 2 kilograms. She is usually very friendly and quiet. We never frighten her or pull her tail or ears. She likes walking around me and playing with me.

If she is hungry, she will miaow. Usually, she eats food from a tin, but her favorite food is fish. She likes juice if it is not too cold. She likes to chase and catch mice and sometimes she plays with butterflies. Sally often plays with balls and pieces of string. She does not like dogs and she hates the rain. She likes sitting on the sofa and watching TV.

Sally is a very good friend, but she is quite lazy! She never worries because we take good care of her. She is always a happy cat.

去年，我爸爸给我买了一个可爱的宠物。她有四个白色的爪子和白色和黄色的尾巴。她有两只小耳朵，一双绿色的眼睛和八胡须的脸上。她的名字是萨利和她一岁。

你知道这是什么吗？一只猫？是的，它是一只猫。她有很短的皮毛，她是相当小。她重约2公斤。她通常是非常友好和安静。我们从不吓唬她或拉她的尾巴或耳朵。她喜欢走在我和我一起玩。

如果她饿了，她会喵。通常，她吃罐头食品，但她最喜欢的食物是鱼。她喜欢果汁如果不是太冷。她喜欢追逐和捕捉老鼠，有时她扮演的蝴蝶。萨莉经常用球和绳子打。她不喜欢狗，她讨厌下雨。她喜欢坐在沙发上看电视。

萨莉是一个很好的朋友，但她很懒惰！她从不担心，因为我们把她照顾得很好。她是一个快乐的猫。

篇二：My plan for College life 我的大学计划

Im extremely excited now ,In face of new envirenment of study and life ,I must make a good plan for it .我现在感到无比的兴奋，面对的学习和生活环境，我必须为此做个好的打算。

Study comes first so I should make new goal and improve my study method.Hard will I study in the college as I do now.It is also important to learn how to live by myself . I will join in various activities and try my best to manage the relationship with other classmates.学习是第一位的所以我要制定新的目标并改善我的学习方法。在大学里，我要像现在一样的努力学习。学会独立生活也同样重要，我要参加各种各样的活动，并尽我所能处理好和其他同学的关系。

No matter what I will meet in the future,happiness or sorrow,keep an optimistic attitud towards life and I believe that my college life will be colorfull as planned.不管我将在未来的日子里遇到什么，快乐或悲伤，对生活始终保持乐观的态度，我相信我的大学生活一定会像我想象的那样丰富多彩。

篇三：the second day of the summer holiday 暑假第二天

It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.

这是我们第二天的暑假。我感觉很好。我觉得我很自由。我有很多时间做我喜欢。我的父母都在中山。所以，我独自生活，但我并不感到孤独。但是，我没有做什么特别。我住在家里看电视。噢!我写了英语日记组成。这是我的功课。今天，我睡了14 小时.我以为我很疲惫。现在是吃晚饭。我必须去!我非常饿。

篇四：Discrimination in Education 学历歧视

According to the picture, an employer turns down a job applicant, for his degree is less advanced than the other applicants, even though he has a good resume. Actually, what’s behind the cartoon is the tendency that employers focus on academic performance when hiring.

No one disputes that a college or higher degree opens doors. Despite that, as far as I’m concerned, academic degree should not be the primary criteria in selecting talents. First of all, academic degrees only represent the applicants’ proficiency in their school work, and cannot demonstrate their personality or other abilities. For instance, the responsibility of a human resources manager is to deal with people, and thus it requires advanced people skill which is by no means shown in the diploma. Second, emphasis on degrees may stall the development of the company. They will lose real talents if they judge people only by their educational background, while it is often the case that college drop-outs like Bill Gates, Michael Dell, Steve Jobs, etc., run wildly successful enterprises.

Therefore, instead of running after applicants with higher degrees, companies should become more concerned about what it takes to do the job and what a college education actually provides.

根据图片，雇主拒绝求职者，因为他的学历不比其他人高，即使他有一个好的简历。其实在漫画中展示的东西是，雇主当雇用员工时专注于学业成绩。

没有人质疑大学或更高学历能打开求职门。尽管如此，在我看来，学历不应是选择人才的首要标准。首先，学历只能代表申请人在学业方面的能力，并不能证明他们的个性或其他能力。例如，一个人力资源经理的职责是与人打交道，因此需要拥有先进技巧的人，但是这个不是在学历上可以证明的。第二，过于强调学历可能停滞公司的发展。如果他们认为人只有通过他们的教育背景来证明自己，他们就会失去真正的人才，而这是通常的情况下，大学辍学者，像比尔盖茨，迈克尔戴尔，史蒂夫·乔布斯等都非常成功的进行了创业。

因此，不是招聘高学历的应聘者，公司应更加关注职位需要什么人才和大学教育实际上提供了什么。

[关于中考的英语作文4篇

好的句子运用得到可以为作文提高分值。下面是语文迷为大家整理的英语励志名言，希望对你写作有帮助。

1、When all else is lost the future still remains.就是失去了一切别的，也还有未来。

2、Sow nothing, reap nothing.春不播，秋不收。

3、Keep on going never give up.勇往直前， 决不放弃!

4、The wealth of the mind is the only wealth.精神的财富是唯一的财富。

5、Never say die.永不气馁!

6、Nurture passes nature.教养胜过天性。

7、There is no garden without its weeds.没有不长杂草的花园。

8、The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.对明天做好的准备就是今天做到最好!

9、The reason why a great man is great is that he resolves to be a great man.伟人之所以伟大，是因为他立志要成为伟大的人。

10、The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.

对明天做好的准备就是今天做到最好!

11、You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted.

你不能改变你的过去，但你可以让你的未来变得更美好。一旦时间浪费了，生命就浪费了。

12、Knowlegde can change your fate and English can accomplish your future.

知识改变命运，英语成就未来。

13、Dont aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

如果你想要成功，不要去追求成功;尽管做你自己热爱的事情并且相信它，成功自然到来。

14、Jack of all trades and master of none.

门门精通，样样稀松。

15、Judge not from appearances.

人不可貌相，海不可斗量。

16、Justice has long arms.

天网恢恢，疏而不漏。

17、Keep good men company and you shall be of the number.

近朱者赤，近墨者黑。

18、Kill two birds with one stone.

一箭双雕。

19、Kings go mad, and the people suffer for it.

君王发狂，百姓遭殃。

20、Kings have long arms.

普天之下，莫非王土。

21、Knowledge is power.

知识就是力量。

21、Knowledge makes humble, ignorance makes proud.

博学使人谦逊，无知使人骄傲。

22、Learn and live.

活着，为了学习。

23、Learning makes a good man better and ill man worse.

好人越学越好，坏人越学越坏。

24、Learn not and know not.

不学无术。

25、Learn to walk before you run.

先学走，再学跑。

26、Let bygones be bygones.

过去的就让它过去吧。

27、Let sleeping dogs lie.

别惹麻烦。

28、Let the cat out of the bag.

泄漏天机。

29、Lies can never changes fact.

谎言终究是谎言。

30、Lies have short legs.

谎言站不长。

31、While there is life there is hope.一息若存，希望不灭。

32、I am a slow walker,but I never walk backwards.我走得很慢，但是我从来不会后退。

33、Cease to struggle and you cease to live. 生命不止，奋斗不息。

34、Never underestimate your power to change yourself!永远不要低估你改变自我的能力!

35、Nothing is impossible!没有什么不可能!

36、Do what you say,say what you do.做你说过的，说你能做的。

37、The man who has made up his mind to win will never say "impossible ".凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说“不可能的”。

38、Live a noble and honest life. Reviving past times in your old age will help you to enjoy your life again.过一种高尚而诚实的生活。当你年老时回想起过去，你就能再一次享受人生。

39、You have to believe in yourself . Thats the secret of success.人必须相信自己，这是成功的秘诀。

40、If you fail, dont forget to learn your lesson.如果你失败了，千万别忘了汲取教训。

41、You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted.你不能改变你的过去，但你可以让你的未来变得更美好。一旦时间浪费了，生命就浪费了。

42、There is but one secret to sucess---never give up!成功只有一个秘诀--永不放弃!

43、For man is man and master of his fate.人就是人，是自己命运的主人。

44、What makes life dreary is the want of motive.没有了目的，生活便郁闷无光。

45、Difficult circumstances serve as a textbook of life for people.困难坎坷是人们的生活教科书。

46、Gods determine what youre going to be.人生的奋斗目标决定你将成为怎样的人。

旅游作文：北京、杭州旅游

今天，阳光灿烂，万里碧空，动物学校里传来一阵阵欢笑声，原来他们今天要到北京、杭州去旅游。

小白兔校长带着动物学生和老师来到飞机场，坐上了飞机。飞机起飞了，离学校越来越远，动物们看下去学校像蚂蚁。一会儿工夫北京到了，小动物们都下了飞机，“哇，这么漂亮!”小动物们异口同声地说。小白兔校长领着动物学生来到故宫，“好美的房子”，小白兔说：“那是故宫，很久以前明朝皇帝住的宫殿。”小动物们听了都很羡慕。他们参观了一间间房子，小白兔又带着大家来到北海，她介绍说：“北海是很大的海，闻名中外。”小白兔他们又来到天安门广场，她介绍道：“这是雄伟的天门城楼，这是金水桥，这是中国历史博物馆，这是……”。

小白兔又带着动物们来到杭州，最先来到的是西湖。小白兔说：“我给大家讲个传说，很久很久以前，女娲娘娘有一颗明珠掉在了杭州的马路上，明珠马上变成了湖，看守明珠的两位神仙不敢面见女娲娘娘，就变成了玉皇山和凤凰山，守在这湖边，此湖称为‘西湖’”。小动物们听了这个传说，非常想登上玉皇山和凤凰山。

这次旅游，北京和杭州牵住了小动物，牵住了那一天，也牵住了童年和动物们迷人的微笑。

[中考话题作文:北京、杭州旅游

想要写好英语作文平常肯定少不了积累，下面是语文迷网整理的关于中考英语作文的句子素材，希望对你有帮助。

1. According to a recent survey， four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

依照最近的一项调查，每年有4，000，000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。

2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.

最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。

3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。

4. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.

人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。

5. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.

越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。

6. When it comes to education， the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。

7. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness.

许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。

8. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.

应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。

9. An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However， this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents， who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.

越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题，像犯罪和**.

10. Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus， which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.

许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。

11. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem： the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。

12. An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.

一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。

13. A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. In fact， it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes： All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间，事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。

14. Any government， which is blind to this point， may pay a heavy price.

任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。

15.Nowadays， many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately， for most young people， it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

当前，一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而，对多数年轻人来说，校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。

16. In view of the seriousness of this problem， effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施。

17. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills， which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。

18. It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.

无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。

19. Although this view is wildly held， this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.

尽管这一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。

20. No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.

没有人能否认：教育是人生最重要的一方面。

21. People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.

人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。

22. In the last decades， advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.

在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。

23. In fact， we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.

事实上，我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。

24. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。

25. People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.

人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。

26. The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.

从这几年我搜集的信息来看，这些知识并没有人们想象的那么有用。

27. Now， it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.

现在，人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教给学生所有的知识。

28. This is a matter of life and death——a matter no country can afford to ignore.

这是一个关系到生死的问题，任何国家都不能忽视。

29. For my part， I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons：

我同意后者，有如下理由：

30. Before giving my opinion， I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.

在给出我的观点之前，我想看看双方的观点是重要的。

31. This view is now being questioned by more and more people.

这一观点正受到越来越多人的质疑。

32. Although many people claim that， along with the rapidly economic development， the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information Ive collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.

尽管许多人认为随着经济的高速发展，用自行车的人数会减少，自行车可能会消亡， 然而，这几年我收集的一些信息让我相信自行车仍然会继续在现代社会发挥极其重要的作用。

33. Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.

环境学家指出：持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题，而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。

34. In view of such serious situation， environmental tools of transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before.

考虑到这些严重的状况，我们比以往任何时候更需要像自行车这样的环保型交通工具。

35. Using bicycle contributes greatly to peoples physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.

使用自行车有助于人们的身体健康，并极大地缓解了交通阻塞。

36. Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle， it is not without its problem.

尽管自行车有许多明显的优点，但是它也存在它的问题。

37. Bicycle cant be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.

在速度和舒适度方面，自行车是无法和汽车、火车这样的交通工具相比的。

38. From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.

通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：自行车的优点远大于缺点，并且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用。

39. There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes. One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.

当前在高校和研究机构对教育存在着大量争论，其中一个问题就是教育是否是个终身学习的过程。

40. This issue has caused wide public concern.

这个问题已经引起了广泛关注。

41. It must be noted that learning must be done by a person himself.

必须指出学习只能靠自己。

42. A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that they had completed their education when they finished their schooling. Obviously， they seem to fail to take into account the basic fact that a persons education is a most important aspect of his life.

许多人存在这样的误解，认为离开学校就意味着结束了他们的教育。显然，他们忽视了教育是人生重要部分这一基本事实。

43. As for me， Im in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation， for the following reasons：

就我而言，我同意教育不应该随着毕业而结束的观点，有以下原因：

44. It is commonly accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate.

人们普遍认为高校是不可能在毕业的时候教会他们的学生所有知识的。

45. Even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.

即使最优秀的毕业生，要想成为一个博学的人也要不断地学习。

46. It is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology， and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.

人们普遍认为我们的现代科技使我们的社会发生了巨大的变化，近几十年人类在科技方面取得了惊人的进步。

47. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.

现在越来越多的人开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮助他们获得工作就会或提升的机会。

48. An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.

一项调查显示许多老人都有到大学继续学习的愿望。

49. For the majority of people， reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment after their retirement.

对大多数人来讲，退休以后，阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们生活的中心和快乐的来源。

50. For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style， it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes： it is never too late to learn.

对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说，找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：活到老，学到老。

最近几年的中考英语当中，很多省市已经摆脱了单一作文模式，采用一大一小两个作文相结合的模式。例如，去年辽宁沈阳中考英语作文就是一个小作文，应用文-写假条，加上一个大作文，汉语提示作文构成。今年，北京中考英语作文也将是两个，一个看图作文在加上一个提示作文构成。这一讲，我们先来学习一下看图作文的写法。

看图作文要求考生按照所给图画，通过合理的联想将一组画面的内容正确地表达出来。看图作文与其他类型作文的不同之处在于，它除了要求考生有英语语言表达能力，还要求考生有观察能力、分析能力和想象能力。

写好看图作文应注意的事项1、结合文字提示，正确理解图意。一般情况下，看图作文在提供图画的同时也附带有简要的文字提示，我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图意，得到要点。切忌孤立地看图而忽视文字提示。

写作从图画的细节出发。所谓细节，就是指图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等。依据图画细节，就可以把图画的内容用英语具体而生动地表达出来了。

(三)例题分析(例题)

同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形?请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。

要求：

⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。

⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确;

⒊ 词数 80 ～ 100。

参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n.

气体 gas n. 污染 pollution n.

THE POLLUTIONS

① One third of the worlds people dont have enough clean water.

② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.

这道看图作文题，主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说，虽是看图，实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点，选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面：

1、认真读题。注意，题目虽然给了四幅图，但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。

2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。

3、结合所给的提示。提示中，对每种污染都进行了阐述，考生可以这些描述进行写作。

4、注意字数，语法，拼写等，避免错误。

下面是两个例文，大家可以参考一下。

One possible version:

The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people cant live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. Wed better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.

Another possible version:

The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People cant sleep well if there is too much noise. Thats why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldnt make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isnt allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which cant make terrible noise.

The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.

下面，我们来看看这道题的评分标准。一般来说，各地的评分标准都和下面的这个标准差不多。这个最高的标准，实际上也就是我们写作的目标。

评分标准：

1. 内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分;

2. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分;

3. 内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分;

4. 只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。

看图作文不可小视。希望大家掌握答好这种题型的要点，并积累词汇。

Hello,Everyone! Here are two important activities that happened this week. These days,Li Jia,our classmate,has kept practising spoken English hard with the teachers help. On Wednesday afternoon,she won the first prizein the English speech contest. How exciting it is!We should learn from her. Yesterday,we donated 200 books, 50 backpacks and 4200 yuan for the students in Sichuan. He Li alone donated 500 yuan,the most of all. Thats good. I think that as a student,we neednt care how much we should give. Showing our love is the most important.

Thats all,thank you!

导语：写英语作文的时候适当引用一些名言警句，能够给我们的作文加分哦，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

01. Practice makes perfect.

熟能生巧.

02. Time is money.

时间就是金钱

03. Easier said than done.

说来容易做来难

04. Where there is a will, there is a way.

有志者事竟成.

05. Look before you leap.

三思而后行.

06. Knowledge is power.

知识就是力量

07. God helps those who help themselves.

自助者天助.

08. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.

心之所愿，无事不成

09. It’s never too old to learn.

活到老，学到老

10. No pains, no gains.

不劳无获

11. Once in a blue moon.

千载难逢

12. To make the impossible possible.

将不可能变为可能

13. Failure is the mother of success.

失败乃成功之母

14. A friend in need is a friend indeed.

患难见真情

15. First things first.

先做重要之事

16. Great minds think alike.

英雄所见略同

17. Rome was not built in a day.

成功并非一朝一夕的事

18. All that glitters is not gold.

闪光的未必都是金子

19. East or west, home is the best.

金窝银窝不如自家草窝

20. Time and tide wait for no man.

时间不等人

21. There is but a secret to success—Never give up!

成功只有一个秘诀—永不放弃!

22. Where there is life, there is hope.

有生命必有希望

23. Beauty will buy no beef.

漂亮不能当饭吃

24. Better late than never.

迟做总比不做好

25. Every little helps.

点滴都有用;积少成多

26. The shortest answer is doing.

最简短的回答就是行动

27. No news is good news.

没消息，就是好消息

28. Well begun, half done.

好的开始是成功的一半

29. All for one, one for all.

人人为我，我为人人

30. One false step will make a great difference.

失之毫厘，谬以千里

31. Facts speak louder than words.

事实胜于雄辩

32. As the tree, so the fruit.

种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆

33. To live is to learn; to learn is to better live.

活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着

34. Like and like make good friends.

趣味相投

35. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

只学习不玩耍聪明的孩子也变傻

导语：中考时，英语作文是必考项，重要性不言而喻。它也是让大多数学生最头疼的事情。词汇是最重要的一部分。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料，希望对您有所帮助。

above prep. 在 …… 上面

a. 上面的

ad. 在 …… 之上

abroad ad. 到(在)国外

absent a. 缺席， 不在

accent n. 口音，音调

accept vt. 接受

accident n. 事故，意外的事

ache vi.& n. 痛，疼痛

achieve vt. 达到，取得

across prep. 横过，穿过

act n. 法令，条例 v. (戏)表演，扮演(角色)，演出(戏);行动，做事

action n. 行动

active a. 积极的，主动的

activity n. 活动

add vt. 添加，增加

address n. 地址

advantage n. 优点; 好处

advertisement n. 广告

advice n. 忠告，劝告，建议

advise vt. 忠告，劝告，建议

afford vt. 负担得起( …… 的费用);抽得出(时间);提供

afraid a. 害怕的;担心

after ad. 在后;后来 prep. 在 …… 之后;在 …… 后面 conj. 在 …… 以后

afternoon n. 下午，午后

again ad. 再一次;再，又

against prep. 对着，反对

age n. 年龄;时代

ago ad. 以前

agree v. 同意;应允

agreement n. 同意，一致;协定，协议

air n. 空气;大气

airline n. 航空公司;航空系统

airplane n. (美)飞机

airport n. 航空站，飞机场

alive a. 活着的，存在的

all ad. 全部地

a. 全(部);所有的;总;整

pron. 全部;全体人员

allow vt. 允许，准许

almost ad. 几乎，差不多

alone a. 单独的，孤独的

along ad. 向前;和 …… 一起;一同

prep. 沿着;顺着

aloud ad. 大声地

already ad. 已经

also ad. 也

although conj. 虽然，尽管

always ad. 总是;一直;永远

America * n. 美国;美洲

American a. 美国的;美国人的 n. 美国人

among prep. 在 …… 中间;在(三个以上)之间

amuse vt. (使人)快乐，逗乐

ancient a. 古代的，古老的

and conj. 和;又;而

angry a. 生气的，愤怒的

animal n. 动物

another a. 再一;另一;别的;不同的 pron. 另一个

answer n. 回答，答复;回信; 答案 v. 回答，答复;回信;(作出)答案

ant n. 蚂蚁

any pron. (无论)哪一个;哪些 任何的;(用于疑问句、否定句)一些;什么

anybody pron. 任何人，无论谁

anyone pron. 任何人，无论谁

anything pron. 什么事(物);任何事(物)

anyway ad. 不管怎样

anywhere ad. 任何地方

appear vi. 出现

apple n. 苹果

April n. 4 月

area n. 面积;地域，地方，区域;范围，领域

arm n. 臂 , 支架

army n. 军队

around ad. 在周围;在附近 prep. 在 …… 周围;大约

arrive vi. 到达;达到

article n. 文章; 东西;冠词

art n. 艺术，美术;技艺

asad.& conj. 像 …… 一样;如同;因为 prep. 作为，当做

Asia * n. 亚洲

Asian a. 亚洲的，亚洲人的 n. 亚洲人

ask v. 问，询问;请求，要求;邀请

asleep a. 睡着的，熟睡

at prep. 在(几点钟);在(某处)

Atlantic a. 大西洋的

attention n. 注意，关心

August n. 8 月

aunt n. 伯母;舅母;婶;姑;姨

Australia * n. 澳洲;澳大利亚

Australian a. 澳洲的，澳大利亚人的 n. 澳大利亚人

autumn n. 秋天，秋季

avoid v. 避免，躲开，逃避

awake (awoke, awo ken) v. 唤醒 醒着的

away ad. 离开;远离

The computer is widely used in education，and some people think teachers do not play important roles in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In this period of communication, computer has been used in all kinds of fields widely, and plays a particular role in our lives. Especially computer has become more and more important in educational field, therefore dozens of people considered teachers could be replaced computers that will go with the current of the times. The above point is certainly wrong; this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that peoples brain better than computer. Firstly, people design all kinds of computers programs. Secondly, computer doesnt have logistic ideation. Computer only can defend on that designer inputted computers programs to judge a questions right or wrong. In other words, computer cant defend on thinking that computer independently analyzes a questions right or wrong. In case, designer inputted programs that are wrong. Computer output the result that also will be wrong. If this kind of problem happened in classroom, students would be infused plenty of wrong information.

Another reason is that computers programs designed software of education that could be amended difficultly. If software of education of bugs were found, commonly these of problems couldnt be solved in the classroom. The software was amended that means total of program were corrected, not only parts of program were ed or amended usually.

Last but not the least reason is computer is mechanical, it couldnt be suited all kinds of students and different demands. As students intellect is different, same of software couldnt base on every status of student to set a perfect project.

In conclusion, computers couldnt instead of the position of teachers in the classroom, however computer is an absolutely good helper for teacher.

计算机计算机在教育领域中的广泛应用，一些人认为没有老师在课堂上发挥重要作用。你同意还是不同意？在这一时期的通信，计算机已被应用于各种领域广泛，并且在我们的生活中起着独特的作用。尤其是在教育领域，计算机已成为越来越重要的作用，因此教师数十人认为可以取代电脑，将顺应时代的潮流。上述观点肯定是错误的；本文将概述三个原因。主要的原因是，人们的大脑比电脑。首先，人们设计了各种各样的计算机程序。其次，计算机没有逻辑思维能力。计算机只能在该设计师保卫输入计算机的程序来判断问题的对错。换句话说，计算机不能捍卫独立思考的计算机分析问题的正确或错误。在情况下，输入的程序设计是错误的。计算机输出的结果，也将是错误的。如果这类问题发生在课堂上，学生将注入大量的错误信息。另一个原因是计算机程序设计的软件教育可以修改难。如果教育软件的漏洞被发现，通常这类问题不能在课堂上解决。该软件进行了修订，这意味着总计划得到纠正，不仅在程序部分，插入或修改通常。最后但并非最不重要的原因是计算机的机械，它不可能适合学生和各种不同的要求。学生的智力是不同的，相同的软件无法根据每一个学生的身份设定一个完美的计划。总之，计算机不能代替教师在课堂上的位置，但是计算机是教师绝对的好帮手。

中考英语作文范文 我梦想的工作my dream job

Since i was an innocent child, i had the idea to be a doctor in the future. I always see the people died in the TV, i feels

frustrated about it. therefore, a dream to be a doctor came into my mind. I want to be the person who can save people＇s life just like God Jesus

中考英语作文评分标准一般分为三类：一等作文、二等作文和三等作文。为了让不同层次的学生在作文得分率上都能有所提高，现对各类作文进行分析，找出相应的得分秘诀。下面说说中考英语一等作文的写作方法。

一、中考英语一等作文的评分标准

内容完整，具体，丰富，包含所有要点，能够围绕内容适当发挥，语句流畅，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连续，层次分明，表达清楚，无语法错误，书写规范，标点正确，计满分。

二、中考英语一等作文的写作要求

(一)确保作文的完整性，关注评卷第一印象

考试的时候，要尽量留出充足的时间写作文。这样，我们才能有足够的时间去构思，打草稿。由于评卷是人工进行的，所以作文留给人的第一印象是很重要的，从以往经验看，第一印象至少占1分，那些卷面整洁，文字自然流畅，书写工整，标点符号正确的非常“吃香”，所以，大家平时就应该注意作文的“形象”，“仪表”一定要保证自己看卷面时觉得舒服，那么中考得高分就不是一句空话了。

不论做哪种题目，审题是最关键的，写好中考作文更是这样!要做到内容完整，我们首先要认真看好题目的要求，分析题目到底要我们写什么。比如要求我们用第三人称来写作，如果审题没有审好，用了第一人称，那么，作文一定得不到满分，说不定还是最差的。所以，要重视审题，按题目的具体要求进行构思。中考书面表达基本上都是提示性作文(包括看图作文)，因此要保证运用所有的提示要点，进行合理的发挥，为写下满分作文打好基础。

(二)打好草稿质量，全面留意扣主题

写好中考英语一等作文除了做到上面讲的内容之外，还要做到以下几点：

1. 要做到内容具体。中考提示性作文都有具体的内容和要求，写作时只要按规定将作文写出来，得分就不难，但是要想得满分，必须做到围绕内容适当发挥，并且要突出文章的主题，体现实际的中心思想。

2. 要做到语句流畅。这就要求有扎实的英语基本功。在平时的学习过程中，注意一些常用句式的表达方法。要尽量使用自己最熟悉的词语和句型，要尽量避免汉语式的表达方式。要注意句子之间的连贯性，不仅仅从语法上，更主要的是从句意上，把握句子的连贯性。

3. 要做到层次分明。写文章不都是一个段落，一个模式，要根据文章的具体需要，来确定文章究竟用几个段落，作文要讲究层次分明，突出主题。

4. 要按规定的词数书写。中考提示作文都有具体的词数要求，写作时要注意数一数所用的单词数量，词数过多或过少都会丢分。

5. 最后要注意检查。写完作文不是没事可做，最后一步就是细心检查，这很关键。检查时要从题目要求开始，到具体内容无误结束。保证词语，句型的运用正确，标点运用得当等等，都是重点检查的项目，直到在一定的时间之内完成好作文，不留遗憾为止。

假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail，请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。

提示词语：listen to，mothers love，care about，communicate with，get along with，smile

写作要求：1.语句通顺，书写工整;2.可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥;3.词数在60-80左右

Dear Han Mei，

Im afraid Ive got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me，“Be careful while crossing the street。” “Put on more clothes。” “Did you do a good job at school?”And so on. Im annoyed(烦恼)。What shall I do?

Alice

例文

Dear Alice，

As a teenager，I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you。

Your mother talks much，because she cares about you. Maybe its not a good way，but it shows your mothers love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mothers，you can communicate with her，and tell her what you are thinking about。

If your mother doesnt take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile。

I hope what I say here can help you a lot.

i have two great-grandfathers, one from my mother’s side. my father’s grandfather is now97 years old and lives. in toufen although his eyesight and hearing is poor, his mind is still sharp and clear.

he always asks each visitor many pertinent questions and shares his ideas and opinions. he often talks with a loud voice and with much enthusiasm and energy. he can remember all he can remember all the names of his relatives and friends.

in his youth he was trained to be a medical doctor; through his life he was an avid reader.

[中考英语作文:我的曾祖父

I think it’s very important for everyone to do sports. I like sports because they’re not only good for my health but also good for my study. My favorite sport is swimming. Whenever I am free, I will have a swim with my friends in the swimming pool. After swimming,I usually feel happy and relaxed. What’s more,Ican put more energy into my study. SoLet’s do sports,and we will become stronger and stronger.

现在是各大学校放寒假的时间，年后要参加中考的同学们要注意了，趁着假期要好好恶补一下英语哦，下面是小编收集整理的中考英语作文写作指导，希望对您有所帮助。

最近几年的中考英语当中，很多省市已经摆脱了单一作文模式，采用一大一小两个作文相结合的模式。例如，去年辽宁沈阳中考英语作文就是一个小作文，应用文-写假条，加上一个大作文，汉语提示作文构成。今年，北京中考英语作文也将是两个，一个看图作文在加上一个提示作文构成。这一讲，我们先来学习一下看图作文的写法。

看图作文要求考生按照所给图画，通过合理的联想将一组画面的内容正确地表达出来。看图作文与其他类型作文的不同之处在于，它除了要求考生有英语语言表达能力，还要求考生有观察能力、分析能力和想象能力。

写好看图作文应注意的事项1、结合文字提示，正确理解图意。一般情况下，看图作文在提供图画的同时也附带有简要的文字提示，我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图意，得到要点。切忌孤立地看图而忽视文字提示。

写作从图画的细节出发。所谓细节，就是指图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等。依据图画细节，就可以把图画的内容用英语具体而生动地表达出来了。

例题分析(例题)

同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形?请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。

要求：

⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。

⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确;

⒊ 词数 80 ～ 100。

参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n.

气体 gas n. 污染 pollution n.

THE POLLUTIONS

① One third of the worlds people dont have enough clean water.

② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.

这道看图作文题，主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说，虽是看图，实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点，选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面：

1、认真读题。注意，题目虽然给了四幅图，但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。

2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。

3、结合所给的提示。提示中，对每种污染都进行了阐述，考生可以这些描述进行写作。

4、注意字数，语法，拼写等，避免错误。

下面是两个例文，大家可以参考一下。

One possible version:

The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people cant live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. Wed better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.

Another possible version:

The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People cant sleep well if there is too much noise. Thats why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldnt make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isnt allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which cant make terrible noise.

The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.

下面，我们来看看这道题的评分标准。一般来说，各地的评分标准都和下面的这个标准差不多。这个最高的标准，实际上也就是我们写作的目标。

评分标准：

1. 内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分;

2. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分;

3. 内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分;

4. 只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。

看图作文不可小视。希望大家掌握答好这种题型的要点，并积累词汇。

写作，作为中考英语三大重点模块之一，满分15分，是整张试卷中最难拿满分的部分，也是很多同学头疼的地方。

中考英语作文分四档：第一档（15—13分），第二档（12—9分），第三档（8—5分），第四档（4—0分），每一档都有具体的评分细则。

乐加乐中考研究中心胡赛楠老师强调：“充分认识到写作评分标准的重要性，按照标准要求规范自己的写作并多加修改，才能做到知己知彼、百战不殆。”

首先，审题要准。要点齐全，8分以上；要点不全，直接进入三类文；

其次，一档文应“观点正确”“语言准确”。“观点正确”是文章要积极向上，不可出现反动消极言论；所谓“语言准确”是要忠诚于词汇的惯用法和辨析，要有非常好的文字功底才能达到。

最后，第一档的“句式多样，词汇丰富”与第二档的“语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要”不同，要求更多的句式和词汇。因此，应在作文中适量使用定语从句、感叹句、倒装句、祈使句等特殊句型；此外，一二档文的差别还在于“逻辑性”，在句式、词汇都相当的基础上，逻辑性强的文章容易得高分。

“太棒了！太棒了！”经过我的“刻苦努力”终于使爸爸妈妈同意了，原来是今年暑假我们学校举行夏令营是去杭州，虽说在小时后跟爸爸妈妈去过一次，可那是我小什么也不懂到了那也好像什么也没看。这次我长大了，完全可以自己照顾自己，再说今年我们已经小学毕业了，可能以后再也见不了面了，所以这次夏令营我让爸爸，妈妈给我报了名。可他们开始说都去过了还去干什么，我听后就把自己的想法一说，哎，你猜是什么使爸爸，妈妈同意了？你说是不是天助我也。就这样我参加了夏令营。

坐了一夜的火车，终于到了。哇！杭州真好呀！我们在老师的带领下去了很多地方。这真是让我饱了眼福啊！可是，在这么多的景点里，最让我陶醉的就数西湖了，在我看见西湖的那一刻，我就喜欢上它了。你看那西湖的水翠绿翠绿的，用手一摸，哇，凉丝丝的，真舒服！你再看那西湖的鱼，一条比一条欢快，有的还蹦出水面，好像在给你打招呼。船过去之后，湖面上就出现了一条长长的水波，美丽极了。在西湖两边种的柳树一棵比一棵茂盛，它们都把腰弯着好像是在照镜子。呦！快看，那不是一列大雁吗，排着“一”字的队伍，从西湖上方飞过，这真是给西湖又添了一道风景线。

白天我们坐在船上看西湖的风景，到了晚上，天黑了，虽看不清西湖旁边的美景，但我们看到了更美丽的景色，那就是三潭映月，把月亮分成了三个，倒映在水里那可真叫美。古人说把西湖比作西施，我看一点也不假。

这次游西湖，可真让我大饱眼福了。杭州的西湖，你的美让我心醉，更让我陶醉

[杭州的西湖让我陶醉中考优秀作文

Guyu "the valley", every year in April 20th or 21, the sun reaches 30 degrees for rain. "On seventy-two designate variorum" said, "in March, after the rain, the soil paste pulsation, today and its valley in the rain water...... In this case seeding, from bottom to top ", hence the name. Grain rain season, the South "poplar fall cuckoo cry", liuxufei falls, the cuckoo crying, Peony Blossoming azaiea, Cherry ripe, the natural scenery tells us: it is the late spring. At this time, the temperature increases rapidly, usually in late April average temperature, in addition to the north and west of Southern China area, has reached 20 to 22 DEG C higher than 2 DEG C, mid. In eastern Southern China, often have one or two days of high temperature of more than 30, people began to have hot feeling. The low altitude Valley industry to enter the summer.

谷雨是春季的最后一个节气，这时田中的秧苗初插、作物新种，最需要雨水的滋润，所以说“春雨贵如油”。这时，我国南方大部分地区东部这时雨水较丰，常年4月下旬雨量约30至50毫米，每年第一场大雨一般出现在这段时间，对水稻栽插和玉米、棉花苗期生长有利。但是华南其余地区雨水大多不到30毫米，需要采取灌溉措施，减轻干旱影响。西北高原山地，仍处于干季，降水量一般仅5至20毫米。华南谷雨前后的降雨，常常“随风潜入夜，润物细无声”，这是因为“巴山夜雨”以4、5月份出现机会最多。“蜀天常夜雨，江槛已朝清”，这种夜雨昼晴天气，对大春作物生长和小春作物收获是颇为适宜的。

Grain rain last spring throttle, then Tanaka plug seedlings early crop of new species, most need the rain, so that the spring precious as oil". At this time, most parts of South China in the east when the rainfall is abundant, the annual rainfall in late April, about 30 to 50 mm per year, the first heavy rain appeared in this period of time, planting rice and corn and cotton seedling growth. But the rest of Southern China are mostly less than 30 mm, irrigation need to take measures to mitigate the effects of drought. The plateau of the northwest of the mountain, still in the dry season, precipitation is generally only 5 to 20 mm. Southern China Guyu before and after the rainfall, often "wind sneaked into the night, moisten things silently", this is because the evening rain appears most frequently in 4 and May. Chang Shu day rain, the river toward the threshold has been cleared, the rain day sunny weather in spring and early spring crop harvest is quite appropriate.

谷雨节的天气谚语大部分围绕有雨无雨这个中心，如“谷雨阴沉沉，立夏雨淋淋”、“谷雨下雨，四十五日无干土”等等。

Guyu Festival weather proverbs most rain no rain around this center, such as "rain cloudy, Li Xia Yu," and "rain rain, forty-five days no soil" and so on.

还有谷雨节气如气温偏高，阴雨频繁，会使三麦病虫害发生和流行。广大农村要根据天气变化，搞好三麦病虫害防治。

Such as high temperature and the grain rain, rain frequent, will make three wheat diseases and pests occurrence and epidemic. The vast rural areas according to the changes in the weather, do a good job in the three wheat diseases and pests control.

自己被自己感动，这是一种崇高的精神境界。

这种精神境界之所以崇高，是因为与批评与自我批评相比，其作为表扬与自我表扬，无论理论上，还是实践上，都不是一般人能轻而易举做到的。除非信口雌黄者。

就此而言，2009年杭州中考语文作文题“被自己感动”，是一竿“己所不欲，‘可’施于人”的道德髙标。

如何才能被自己感动?

柏拉图给人下过两个定义：一为“人是两脚直立、没有羽毛的动物”，一为“人不是别的，只不过是使用肉体的灵魂而已”。相比较，后者更接近于人的本质，也更切近于我们的议题。

肉身，是个体灵魂的殖民地。没有对灵魂的拷问，就无法真正感动自己;换言之，只有具备灵魂且“吾日省吾三身”的人，才能被自己感动。难怪迅翁会借祥林嫂之口“放低了声音，极秘密似的切切的说，‘一个人死了之后，究竟有没有魂灵的?’”没有灵魂的不朽，人就与动物无异。

有人说集体(包含国家、社会、家庭、学校)存在的状态取决于个体灵魂的状态，其实更应该说个体灵魂的状态取决与集体存在的状态。前者之归纳孰若后者之演绎科学?!

日前，教育部发出《教育部关于当前加强中小学管理规范办学行为的指导意见》，内容大意为：

各地要对小学、初中、高中的考试科目和考试次数在全面排查的基础上加以科学规范。坚决制止随意组织学校参加各种统考、联考或其他竞赛、考级等现象。学校考试命题要科学合理，考试内容要符合课程方案的基本要求，不得随意提升考试难度，增加考试次数。积极探索以完成本学段国家规定教育目标为基本标准、以学业水平测试和学生综合素质等为主要指标的综合评价体系。不以升学率对学校排队，不以考试成绩对学生排名。

教育部出台这样一个“指导意见”，盖因“此地‘有’银三百两”：

最近，国内中学连连发生学生忍受不了紧张的“学习”跳楼自杀的事件，学生在校学习十七八个小时，请假回家要层层批准，吃饭时间只有15分钟，管理之严酷，有如过去的包身工。学校里面竞争激烈，气氛紧张，没有温暖，没有欢乐，因此，有些学生们宁愿选择死也不愿再读这个“书”。教育杀人已见血，一时间，网上骂声四起，众人的矛头直指教育制度，教育当局。

教育部的“金蝉脱壳”计似提醒善良的人们，在如此大背景下，杭州的教育能否独善其身“出淤泥而不染”?对此，经受了语文题海“考验”与月考“洗礼”的杭州中考生的灵魂最清楚!

于是他们将怎样“被自己感动”，就是一件折磨灵魂的事了。

眼下方“束发”与“及筓”，生理尚未达到现代人成年标准，心理处于“贪玩”阶段的初三孩子，竟然能超越生理与心理特征，战胜野蛮开发智力的应试，这不能不说是一个中国教育的奇迹，着实应当自我感动一番。

感动之余，我们不妨将眼光投向我们无知的原始先民——那些赤手空拳的哺乳动物。

那些赤手空拳的哺乳动物在自然的“威权”下，是如何战胜细菌与猛兽、冰雪与酷热，成为万物主宰的呢?

“有一点可以肯定：这绝非个人的力量所能达到。为了获取成功，那时的人不得不把自己的个性如冰雪一样融化在复杂的部落生活之中。”“原始社会被一个唯一的信条所主宰——高于一切的求生欲望。”

看来，埋没个性于教育之集体无意识，应试教育会被一个唯一的信条所主宰——高于一切的升学欲望。

将中考作为神圣的“职责”、完美的“目标”，以升学之“欲望”替代思想之“灵魂”，是那些只受《教育法》、《未成年人保护法》形式上“保护”的未成年学生，在有违教育初衷的境遇下“任凭风吹浪打，胜似闲庭信步”的唯一秘诀。

“上下五千年”，在人类历史的长河中，“欲望”成为中介取代“绝对理念”，大抵是“中介”这一哲学概念的“不幸”。

被自己的灵魂感动，是唯美的;被自己的欲望感动，是唯利的。

加里宁有一句教育名言：“教师是人类灵魂的工程师。”

窃以为：“教师是人类欲望的工程师(包括那位操语文应试生杀予夺大权的出题者)。”这比较符合目下教师的身份。

其实，没有将“被自己感动”斟酌为“被自己的欲望感动，”是今年中考语文命题者不可饶恕的错误!

My dream job will be working in one of the biggest international accounting firm as an accountant.I want to be an accountant because I love mathematics and business so much.Also,being an accountant can help me to explore my knowledge of business and provide me a board range of network among the business world.I need to do a lot in order to achieve my goal.First,I have to get an undergraduate degree in accounting from college.Then I might either to go graduate school for a more advanced degree in accounting or get prepare for the CPA exam.With the CPA lisence,I have a better opportunity to get a job in the accounting firm.Finally,with my experience in the accounting firm,I can apply accounting position in the international accounting firm and to serve as an accountant there!

我梦想的工作将工作在一个最大的国际会计公司当会计。我想成为一名会计师,因为我非常喜欢数学和商业。同时,作为一个会计能帮助我去探索我的商业知识,提供我一个板范围的网络在商业世界。我需要做很多为了达到我的目标。首先,我要从大学会计本科学位。然后我可以去研究生院更高级的学位,主修会计或得到准备会计师考试。CPA lisence,我有一个更好的机会在会计师事务所工作。最后,以我的经验在会计事务所,我可以申请会计职位在国际会计师事务所,作为一个会计!