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+ 加入清单My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut
down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon
life to save energy and reduce pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I
always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I
always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more
beautiful.
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篇1：2024中考英语作文题目预测:幸福
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+ 加入清单幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确， 字迹工整，80-100词。
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Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it。
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder。
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents。
篇2：中考英语作文指导：电子邮件
全文共 460 字
+ 加入清单李明要到加拿大上大学，必须找一间住房。请帮他发一封电子邮件给Jenny, 叫她帮忙找一间较便宜的房间(大约150美元)，因为那里的房租较贵。李明的邮箱是Liming @163.com, Jenny的邮箱是mail:Jenny@com From: Liming@163.com
Subject Help Rent a Room Date 30/06 9:04AM
Dear Jenny,
Im going to study in Canada, so Ill have to find a room to live in. I know housing is very expensive there. Please help me find a room at a lower price (about 150 dollars). Please e-mail me if you have any good news. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
篇3：2024年广州中考作文真题剖析
全文共 832 字
+ 加入清单请以“迟了一分钟”为题目写一篇文章。
要求：文体不限(除诗歌外)，600字以上，文中不出现考生真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
题目延续了12年“改变一点点”、13年“出错”的出题方法，属“文题+要求”的命题形式，没有导语，审题要求全部落在命题本身，标题的每一个字显得更加的重要。
“迟了一分钟”，看上去很普通的一个题，也很贴近生活。题目也充分体现中考作文关注成长、关注生活、关注社会的宗旨。狭义上看，通讯科技高度发达使沟通便捷顺畅，交通设施与工具的进步使距离拉近，奇怪的是，这也让现代人变得没有那个相对落后年代里的人们那样守时，于是迟到成为人们家常便饭，上学上班踩点成为很多人的追求，因此而“迟到一分钟”的现象也层出不穷。这是一个值得反思的社会问题。深层意义上看，题目还隐藏更深的立意，如可以谈及生活错失机缘而留下遗憾等人生的感悟。
从考生的角度看，个人认为今年这个题比以往广州中考作文题难度要大不少。问题出在“一分钟”三个字的限定，作文的审题往往要虚实结合，但这“一分钟”会让考生一时有些纠结，一时难于处理好这个问题，它无形中束缚了考生联想和想象的空间，缩小了选材范围，由实到虚也成了一道不浅的坎。事实上考生可以谈生活中某次课堂，或者某次活动迟到的感悟，更多的可以从生活中因为某些细微的主客观原因导致错失某个机会而获得写作的灵感和素材，这样可以写的面就很广，也能充分发挥个人的才情底气。文章要紧扣“一分钟”，要体现一分钟这个短暂的时间给我们生活带来的影响。所以要求学生对生活的感悟很细腻，很敏感，要能以小见大，用小视角看大世界。“迟了一分钟”这个题，部分考生会感到有些难于找到切入点。同时，选材和主题如何紧扣“一分钟”，这是考生面对的一个难题，也是决定这次写作高分与否的重要衡量标准之一。
“迟了一分钟”，该题对考生的写作水平提出了更高的要求，需要考生平时扎实的训练;需要考生对生活有自己的思考和感悟;更需要考生具备考场快速精准审题，快速调动生活积累，快速建构写作思路的能力。
篇4：2024中考关于保护动物的英语作文
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+ 加入清单春天到了，青蛙又开始“呱呱”地唱歌了，我发现又有人在田野里开始捕捉青蛙了，使青蛙成为那些人的“盘餐中”，我感到非常痛心。
Spring has come, the frog began to "Gua Gua" to sing, I found someone in the field began to catch frogs, the frog became those who "tray", I feel very sad.
青蛙是动物世界中最出色的“庄稼的保护神”。它头上那两只圆而突出的眼睛，能让它看清庄稼天敌，但捉害虫全靠它又长又宽的舌头，舌根长口腔的前面，舌尖向那么一伸，快速地伸长长的舌头，一下子把害虫粘住，然后吃掉。青蛙的背上有绿色的深色花纹，腹部是白色，能帮它逃脱天敌血盆大口。身体下面有四条腿，前腿短，后腿长。青蛙是两栖动物，不仅能在地上跳，而且也能在水里游。
The frog is the best protection of God in the animal world "crops". Its head the two round and protruding eyes, can let it see the crops of natural enemies, but to catch insects depend on it long and wide front long tongue, tongue in oral cavity, the tip of the tongue to then extend, rapid elongation of long tongue, all of a sudden the vermin stick, and then eat. The frog is green dark pattern on the back, abdomen is white, can help it escape predators jaws. Has four legs, the body below the forelegs are short, long hind legs. Frogs are amphibious animal, not only on the ground to jump, but also can swim in the water.
青蛙吃苍蝇，蚊子，蝗虫，小飞娥等害虫，一天大约能吃掉120只，半年下来就能吃掉15000只，这是多么大的功劳哇!就连青蛙的幼虫 ------ 蝌蚪也能消灭许多害虫哩!真不愧“庄稼的保护神”，农民伯伯的好助手呀!
Frogs eat mosquitoes, flies, moths and other insects, locusts, a day can eat only about 120, six months down can eat only 15000, this is how big a contribution wow! Even the frogs, tadpoles can also destroy larvae of many of the pests miles! Really deserves to be called "the crops the protection of God", farmers uncle a good assistant!
从现在开始，我们一起保护“庄稼的保护神”------ 青蛙吧!让我们共同保护[动物]生态平衡!
From now on, we work together to protect the "protection of God" crops - frog! Let us work together to protect the ecological balance [animal]!
篇5：中考英语作文出色善用“潜规则”的方法
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+ 加入清单很多同学对英语书面表达的部分都感到头疼，一是因为突然拿到一个题目，脑中一片空白，写不出几个句子来，二是写好一篇文章，可是总是流于平淡，语言枯燥，不得老师喜爱，分数也一直不高不低，难以突破。建议同学们，第一类问题，是可以通过练习而补救的，第二类问题，则需要我们的积累和智慧了。
每一次考试或练习，我们的语文写作中总是时不时的会出现很多诗词，名言，他们或哲理，或抒情，或励志，或优美，总能让我们的文章读来津津有味，而且让老师觉得有文学感，甚至会因此而觉得有文采。同样是作文，我们为什么不能把这种思路搬到英文中来呢?答案当然是可以的，而且成功的例子也不少。
在英文的写作当中，运用名言警句这样的潜规则也是存在的。根据目前的要求，一篇英文作文篇幅在100词以上，这样的长度相对于语文作文来说自然是很简单了，但是对于高考水平的英语写作来说，是完全有空间在其中运用名言警句的，只要我们用的合适，就会取得意想不到的效果。
那么，我们如何善用这些名言警句呢?
第一，积累是必需的。英语是一门语言，语言是没有速成的，尤其是一些经典的词句，是需要我们一点一滴积累的。在收集名言警句的过程中，我们可以有目的性地收集。所谓目的性，是指在作文中，命题的形式和题材一般是固定的，那么针对这样的内容，我们就要尽量收集能用得上的名言警句，或者说，名言警句要对的上路子，这么做可能有一点功利，但咱们毕竟是应试，退一步说，这样收集的句子也不一定都是没有用的，所以，我们要首先找准方向，少走弯路。
第一类是哲理类的，这一类名言警句可以说是万精油，放之四海而皆准，几乎在每一篇作文中都能用到它们。比如说描写做家务活。我们就可以用上Just as the saying goes： It is never too late to learn!来说明学习做家务活的积极性。再比如以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫Lin Hao的小孩救出同学的事迹，我们就能用As we all know， where there is a life， there is a hope.或者where there is a will， there is a way来赞扬Lin Hao的精神品质等等，诸如此类的命题比比皆是，只要我们用得恰当，就一定能波的阅卷老师的青睐;
第二类是励志类的，这种语句在涉及到个人成长经历内容的文章中，可以发挥很大作用;
第三类是情感类的，表现家庭生活或者个人情感的内容能用到它。
篇6：有关中考英语作文范例:毕业离校
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+ 加入清单Write a passage of at least 60 words on the following topic according to the given information.
题目：请根据下面的题目和提示信息写一篇不少于60单词的作文。
Leaving School
1 Old school life
2 Teacher and schoolmate
3 Future plan
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I dont want to leave school, because my old school life was full of fun and I had many good friends in my old school.
我不想毕业，因为我的校园生活丰富多彩，我在学校有很多好朋友。
We used to share our lunch together. We used to play ball games together. We often did some surveys during the holiday. All of my teachers and schoolmates are very friendly and helpful. Now I have to leave school, I hope I will keep in touch with them and my new school life will be more enjoyable.
我们曾一起共享午餐，也曾一起做球类运动，我们还经常在假日里一起做调查。所有的老师和同学都很友善，并给予帮助。现在我即将毕业，我希望能和他们保持联系，也希望新的学校生活能更加有趣。
篇7：必备的10句谚语中考英语作文备考资料
全文共 490 字
+ 加入清单1. Every coin has two sides.每个硬币都有两面，比喻事物的两面性。
2. The winter is coming and the spring is not far.冬天已经临近了,春天还会远吗?
3. Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。
4. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
5. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
6. A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit.吃一堑，长一智。
7. A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
8.Dont put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事，今日毕。
9.Time and tide wait for no man.时不我待。
10.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
篇8：中考英语
全文共 503 字
+ 加入清单When you were born, you need to face the ups and downs in our life. For
example, you need to learn to speak, learn to walk, learn to write, learn to
read, and so on. Whenever you learn a new thing, you will be always full of joy.
But the hardness only you know. Perhaps, you have thought about giving up, but
in the end you insist on. In this world, there is no difficult, only those who
do not adhere to. As long as you can hold on, thats not a thing. Perseverance
prevails! This is the eternal law! Come on.
篇9：中考英语作文范文我梦想的工作mydreamjob
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+ 加入清单Since i was an innocent child, i had the idea to be a doctor in the future. I always see the people died in the TV, i feels
frustrated about it. therefore, a dream to be a doctor came into my mind. I want to be the person who can save people＇s life just like God Jesus
篇10：2024中考英语作文预测：myhouse
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+ 加入清单My name is Joe.I come from England.I live in a very big house with my parents.Now let me show you my house.
我的名字是乔。我来自英国。我和我的父母住在一个大房子。现在让我告诉你我的房子。
This is the living room.I like to sit on the couch to watch TV.There are two bedrooms.One is for my parents;another is for me.My bedroom is not very big but comfortable.I like the kitchen very much，because my parents always cook delicious food for me in the kitchen.The refrigerator is in it.My father and mother put vegetables and meat in the refrigerator.Our bathroom is very beautiful.I take a shower everyday in it.I love my house.
这是起居室。我喜欢坐在沙发上看电视。有两间卧室。一个是我的父母;另一个是我。我的卧室不是很大但很舒适。我很喜欢厨房，因为我的父母总是煮好吃的食物给我在厨房的冰箱。是的。我的父亲和母亲把蔬菜和肉放在冰箱里。我们的浴室很漂亮。我每天都在它洗个澡。我爱我的家。
篇11：我的学校生活中考英语作文100字
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+ 加入清单i like my school life very much,it is very interesting.i usually reach school at half past seven.then we do morning exercises at eight oclock.we have eight lessons every day.the lesson begin at a quarter past eight.my favourite subject is english.i can get a lot of english knowledge from our teacher.our teacher are very good-natured.they are always kind to us.i also like our outdoor activities.when we have outdoor activities,everyone in the playground is active and lively.how happy we are in our beautiful school!i love the life in my school!
篇12：中考英语作文话题：网购
全文共 853 字
+ 加入清单导语：相信大家都有在网上购物过，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Convenience is the most important advantage. You can buy anything as you like. You don’t have to queue with other shoppers. Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day.
However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.
In conclusion, we should make proper use of the internet shopping.
【参考译文】
网上购物在我们的日常生活中很受欢迎。这是一种新的购物方式。很多东西都提供了，等待你的选择。方便是最重要的优点。你可以随意买任何东西。你不必和其他购物者排队。同时，它通常每天开放24小时。
然而，网上购物有许多缺点。你真的看不到真正的产品。所以你可能很容易受骗。同时，许多人会错过与朋友相处的好机会，分享购物的乐趣。
总之，我们应该好好利用网络购物。
篇13：2024中考英语中外好句好段摘抄大全
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+ 加入清单1、A contented mind is the greatest blessing a man can enjoy in this world.
知足是人生在世最大的幸事。
——Joseph Addison(美国作家艾迪生)
2、If you would know the value of money, go and try to borrow some.
要想知道钱的价值，就想办法去借钱试试。
——Benjamin Franklin(美国总统富兰克林)
3、If you wish to succeed, you should use persistence as your good friend,
experience as your reference, prudence as your brother and hope as your sentry.
如果你希望成功，当以恒心为良友，以经验为参谋，以谨慎为兄弟，以希望为哨兵。
——Thomas Edison(美国发明家爱迪生)
4、Health is certainly more valuable than money,
because it is by health that money is procured.
健康当然比金钱更为重要，因为我们所赖以获得金钱的就是健康。
——Samuel Johnson(英国作家约翰逊)
5、That man is the richest whose pleasure are the cheapest.
能处处寻求快乐的人才是最富有的人。
——Henry David Thoreau(美国作家梭罗)
6、Sometimes one pays most for the things one gets for nothing.
有时候一个人为不花钱得到的东西付出的代价最高。
——Albert Einstein(美国科学家爱因斯坦)
7、Will, work and wait are the pyramidal cornerstones for success.
意志、工作和等待是成功的金字塔的基石。
——Louis Pasteur(法国化学家巴斯勒)
8、All the splendor in the world is not worth a good friend.
人世间所有的荣华富贵不如一个好朋友。
——Voltaire(法国思想家伏尔泰)
9、There is a great different between exposure of
the mind and that of the body.
表露思想和展露身体之间存在极大的不同。
——William Hazlitt(英国批评家散文家哈滋里特)
10、To travel hopefully is a better thing than to arrive,
and the true success is to labor.
怀着希望去旅行比抵达目的地更愉快;而真正的成功在于工作。
——Robert Louis Stevenson(英国作家史蒂文森)
11、The greater a man is, the more distasteful is praise and flattery to him.
一个人越伟大，对表扬和奉承就越反感。
——John Burroughs(美国博物学家巴勒斯)
12、I might say that success is won by three things:
first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort.
可以说成功要靠三件事才能赢得：努力，努力，再努力。
——Thomas Hardy(英国诗人小说家哈代)
13、Success often depends upon knowing how long it will take to succeed.
成功常常取决于知道需要多久才能成功。
——Charles Montesquieu(法国思想家孟德斯鸠)
14、Only those who have the patience to do simple things
perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.
只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人，才能够轻而易举的完成困难的事。
——Friedrich Schiller(德国剧作家诗人席勒)
15、You have to believe in yourself. Thats the secret of success.
你必须相信自己，这是成功的关键。
——Charles Chaplin(美国演员卓别林)
16、A man can succeed at almost anything for which
he has unlimited enthusiasm.
无论何事，只要对它有无限的热情你就能取得成功。
——C. M. Schwab(美国实业家施瓦布)
17、The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.
凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说“不可能的”。
——Bonapart Napoleon(法国皇帝拿破仑)
18、Progress is the activity of today and the assurance of tomorrow.
进步是今天的活动，明天的保证。
——Emerson(美国思想家爱默生)
20、Our destiny offers not the cup of despair,
but the chalice of opportunity.
命运给予我们的不是失望之酒，而是机会之杯。
——Richard Nixon(美国总统尼克松)
21、Miracles sometimes occur, but one has to work terribly for them.
奇迹有时候是会发生的，但是你得为之拼命的努力。
——C. Weizmann(爱尔兰总统魏茨曼)
22、It never will rain roses.
When we want to have more roses we must plant trees.
天上不会掉下玫瑰来，如果想要更多的玫瑰，必须自己种植。
——G. Eliot(英国小说家艾略特)
23、If you have great talents, industry will improve them;
if you have but moderate abilities, industry will supply their deficiency.
如果你很有天赋，勤勉会使其更加完善;如果你能力一般，勤勉会补足其缺陷。
——Joshuas Reynolds(美国散文家雷诺兹)
24、Great works are performed not by strength , but by perseverance.
完成伟大的事业不在于体力，而在于坚韧不拔的毅力。
——Samuel Johnson(英国作家和评论家约翰逊)
25、Genius only means hard-working all ones life.
天才只意味着终身不懈的努力。
——Mendeleyev(俄国化学家门捷列耶夫)
26、Few things are impossible in themselves; and it is often for want of will ,
rather than of means, that man fails to succeed.
事情很少又根本做不成的;其所以做不成，与其说是条件不够，不如说是由于决心不够。
——(La Racheforcauld(法国作家罗切福考尔德)
27、Dare and the world always yields.
If it beats you sometimes, dare it again and again and it will succumb.
大胆挑战，世界总会让步。如果有时候你被它打败了，不断地挑战，它总会屈服地。
——W.M Thackeray(英国小说家萨克雷)
28、All that you do, do with your might; t
hings done by halves are never done right.
做一切事情都应尽力而为，半途而废永远不行。
——R.H. Stoddard(美国诗人斯托达德)
29、A man can fail many times,
but he isnt a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.
一个人可以失败多次，但是只要他没有开始责怪旁人，他还不是一个失败者。
——J.Burroughs(美国博物学家巴勒斯)
30、You can tell the ideals of a nation by its advertisements.
从一个国家的广告可以看出这个国家的理想。
——Norman Douglas(英国作家道格拉斯)
31、The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today.
实现明天理想的唯一障碍是今天的疑虑。
——Franklin Roosevelt(美国总统罗斯福)
32、The man with a new idea is a crank until the idea succeeds.
具有新想法的人在其想法实现之前是个怪人。
——Mark Twain(美国作家马克?吐温)
33、The important thing in life is to have a great aim,
and the determination to attain it.
人生重要的事情是确定一个伟大的目标，并决心实现它。
——Johann Wolfgang von Goethe(德国诗人、剧作家歌德)
34、Most of the trouble in the world is caused by people wanting to be important.
人世间的大多数烦恼都是由那些想成为重要人物的人惹出来的。
——George Eliot(英国小说家艾略特)
35、If you doubt yourself,
then indeed you stand on shaky ground.
如果你怀疑自己，那么你的立足点确实不稳固了。
——Ibsen(挪威剧作家易卜生)
36、Ideal is the beacon. Without ideal,
there is no secure direction; without direction ,there is no life.
理想是指路明灯。没有理想，就没有坚定的方向;
没有方向，就没有生活。 ——Leo Tolstory(俄国作家托尔斯泰)
37、Ideal are like the stars ——- we never reach them ,
but like mariners , we chart our course by them.
理想犹如天上的星星，我们犹如水手，虽不能达到天上，
但是我们的航程可凭借它指引。
——Carl Schurz(美国政治家舒尔茨)
38、Have an aim in life, or your energies will all be wasted.
人生应该树立目标，否则你的精神会白白浪费。
——R. Peters(美国法学家彼得斯)
39、Dont part with yourxxxs, When they are gone you may still exist,
but you have ceased to live.
不要放弃你的幻想。当幻想没有了以后，你还可以生存，但是你虽生犹死。
——Mark Twain(马克 吐温)
40、Do not, for one repulse,
give up the purpose that you resolved to effect.
不要只因一次失败，就放弃你原来决心想要达到的目的。
——Willian Shakespeare(莎士比亚)
41、Between the ideal and the reality,
Between the motion and the act, Fall the shadow.
理想与现实之间，动机与行为之间，总有一道阴影。
——Thomas Stearns Eliot(T.S.爱略特)
42、A man is not old as long as he is seeking something.
A man is not old until regrets take the place of dreams.
只要有一个人还有所追求，他就没有老。直到后悔取代了梦想，一个人才算老。
——J. Barrymore(巴里穆尔)
43、Change as change is mere flux and lapse; it insults intelligence. Genuinely to know is to grasp a permanent end that realises itself through changes.
如果仅仅就变化论变化，则只是变动不羁，倏忽即逝;这是低能的表现，真正了解变化在于把握住在变化中完成自身的永恒目标。
——John Dewey 约翰·杜威
44、Change is the law of life. And those who look only to the past or the present are certain to miss the future.
变化是生活的法则。只盯着过去或眼前的人注定失去未来。
——John F.Kennedy 约翰·弗·肯尼迪
45、Genius is formed in quiet, character in the stream of human life.
天才悄无声息地诞生，性情却在生命之河里逐渐形成。
——Goethe 歌德
46、With a character both proud and timid, one never amounts to anything.
一个人既自傲又胆怯，将永远一事无成。
——Joseph Roux 约瑟夫·鲁
47、If there is anything that we wish to change the child, we should first examine it and see whether it is not something that could better be changed in ourselves.
假如我们想让孩子在某个方面有所改变，我们应首先检验一下，看看我们自己是否最好在这一方面变一变。
——Jung 荣格
48、The finest inheritance you can give to a child is to allow it to make its own way, completely on its own feet.
你能留给孩子的最好财产莫过于允许他完全独立自主地摸索自己的道路。
——Isadora Duncan 伊莎多拉·邓肯
49、Mans highest merit always is, as much as possible, to rule external circumstances and as little as possible to let himself be ruled by them.
人最大的优点是尽可能多地驾驭外部环境，尽可能少地让环境约束自己。
——Goethe 歌德
50、Dont wait for ideal circumstances, they will never come, nor for the best opportunities.
不要等候最好的条件或者最佳时机，它们永远不会降临。
——Janet Erskine Stuart 珍尼特·厄斯金·斯图亚特
篇14：2024中考英语作文写作指导汇总
全文共 2810 字
+ 加入清单英语写作是中考学生的一个盲点，缺乏对英语写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢?下面是YJBYS网作文频道为大家整理的英语写作指导。
一、写作决窍
总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;
关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;
组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;
字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。
二、写作步骤
1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。
2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。
3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。
4.先草稿，后抄写。
三、习作点评
[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.
·What exactly your hobby is;
·When and how you became interested in this hobby;
·Why you enjoy your hobby;
·About your hopes and plans for the future.
写作要求：
1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。
2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。
3.词数60-80.
[高分突破]
①文体：记叙文。
②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.
③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。
内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that，so，little by little，when，so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to，became interested in，come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。
四、培养途径
1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。
2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。
3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。
4.自己纠错，写下反思。
五、备考演练
A
缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。
写作要求：
1.词数在100左右。
2.条理清楚，语句通顺。
3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …
B
阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。
提示：
1.生活离不开水。
2.可饮用水在减少。
3.水污染严重。
4.应保护水源，再利用水。
思路点拨与参考答案
A. [思路点拨]：
①文体：记叙文。
②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。
③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago，some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish，such as plastic bags，fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees，picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily，great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins，and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.
B. [思路点拨]：
①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。
②时态：一般现在时态。
③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。
Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.
篇15：2024年中考看图英语作文写作指导
全文共 2549 字
+ 加入清单最近几年的中考英语当中，很多省市已经摆脱了单一作文模式，采用一大一小两个作文相结合的模式。例如，去年辽宁沈阳中考英语作文就是一个小作文，应用文-写假条，加上一个大作文，汉语提示作文构成。今年，北京中考英语作文也将是两个，一个看图作文在加上一个提示作文构成。这一讲，我们先来学习一下看图作文的写法。
看图作文要求考生按照所给图画，通过合理的联想将一组画面的内容正确地表达出来。看图作文与其他类型作文的不同之处在于，它除了要求考生有英语语言表达能力，还要求考生有观察能力、分析能力和想象能力。
写好看图作文应注意的事项1、结合文字提示，正确理解图意。一般情况下，看图作文在提供图画的同时也附带有简要的文字提示，我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图意，得到要点。切忌孤立地看图而忽视文字提示。
写作从图画的细节出发。所谓细节，就是指图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等。依据图画细节，就可以把图画的内容用英语具体而生动地表达出来了。
(三)例题分析(例题)
同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形?请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。
要求：
⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。
⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确;
⒊ 词数 80 ～ 100。
参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n.
气体 gas n. 污染 pollution n.
THE POLLUTIONS
① One third of the worlds people dont have enough clean water.
② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.
④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.
这道看图作文题，主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说，虽是看图，实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点，选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面：
1、认真读题。注意，题目虽然给了四幅图，但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。
2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。
3、结合所给的提示。提示中，对每种污染都进行了阐述，考生可以这些描述进行写作。
4、注意字数，语法，拼写等，避免错误。
下面是两个例文，大家可以参考一下。
One possible version:
The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people cant live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.
I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. Wed better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.
Another possible version:
The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People cant sleep well if there is too much noise. Thats why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldnt make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isnt allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which cant make terrible noise.
The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.
下面，我们来看看这道题的评分标准。一般来说，各地的评分标准都和下面的这个标准差不多。这个最高的标准，实际上也就是我们写作的目标。
评分标准：
1. 内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分;
2. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分;
3. 内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分;
4. 只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。
看图作文不可小视。希望大家掌握答好这种题型的要点，并积累词汇。
篇16：我的家乡中考英语作文
全文共 1221 字
+ 加入清单My Hometown
My hometown is beautiful place It stands near a wide river at the foot of low GREen hills. It has many tall buildings and wide streets. There are trees and flowers everywhere.
But it has not always been like that. In the old days, it was a sad dirty little town. Landlords and merchants lived in the few good houses. For the working people there were only dark, unhealthy rooms in old buildings and huts in narrow muddy streets. Nearly everyone was poor and many had no work.
Everything has changed since liberation. The people, led by the Party, have got rid of the mud and dirt. They have put up schools, theaters, shops and flats. They have an assembly hall and a hospital. Along the river they have built offices, hotels and parks. A lot of factories have sprung up. On the river, streamers and boats come and go busily, day and night. They carry the products of our industries to all parts of the country.
I love my hometown, and I love its people. They also have changed. Healthy and happy, they are going all out to build socialism.
我的家乡
我的家乡是个美丽的地方。它座落在一座不高的绿色山脚下，一条宽阔的河流边。有许多高耸的大楼和宽阔的街道。树木和花草随处可见。
但是它并不是一直如此。在旧社会，它是一个凄凉、肮脏的小镇。地主和商人住在几栋漂亮的房子里。劳动人民只能住在破旧、黑暗、不卫生的房子里或是狭窄、泥泞街道旁的茅屋里。几乎所有人都贫困，许多人没有工作。
篇17：keephealthy中考英语作文
全文共 910 字
+ 加入清单参考范文：
Each of us should stay healthy, which is the foundation of our activities. Here are some ways to stay healthy.
First, we should spend one to two hours a day in regular exercise; try to walk instead of ride. Second, we should eat some healthy foods such as vegetables, fruits and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body. When we are in trouble, try to relax our mood, listen to the soft music. It also enables us to maintain a good health. Finally there is a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. If we can do follow these advice, I believe we can have a healthy body, a better life.
参考译文：
我们每个人都应该保持健康,这是我们活动的基础。这里有一些方法来保持健康。
首先,我们应该每天花一两个小时在经常锻炼;尽量步行而不是骑。第二,我们应该吃一些健康的食物比如蔬菜、水果等等。他们可以帮助我们保持健康的身体。当我们陷入困境,试图放松我们的心情,听轻柔的音乐。它还能使我们保持身体健康。最后有一个好的睡眠也能保证我们一个健康的身体。我们应该每天睡7到8小时,保持充足的睡眠。如果我们可以遵循这些建议,我相信我们可以有一个健康的身体,更好的生活。
篇18：一场足球比赛中考英语作文
全文共 1108 字
+ 加入清单Yesterday was the ninth day of the World Cup. There was a football match between China and Brazil. We know Brazilian Team is the top one of the world. Though the players of the Chinese Team tried their best, they still lost the game. The result of the game was 4:0. I think they did better than the first game.I believe they can learn a lot from Brazilian Team.
I hope the team of China will be a strong team one day.
昨天是世界杯赛的第九天。中国队对巴西队。我们都知道巴西队是世界上最好的足球队。虽然中国队队员竭尽了全力，但是还是输了。比赛结果四比零。我觉得中国队表现比第一场要好多了。我相信，他们能从巴西队那里学到很多东西。
我希望中国足球队终有一天成为强队。
Yesterday evening the team of China played against the team of Brazil. The game started at 7: 30. It was an exciting game.Brazilian Team is the best one in the world. Everyone in the team of China tried his best, but the team of Brazil was too strong.Chinese Team couldn＇t stop them. They kicked four goals, and our team lost the game.
We hope the players in Chinese Team can make great progress, and it will be a strong team one day.
昨天晚上，中国足球对迎战巴西足球队。比赛在7：30开始。那是一场令人激动的比赛。巴西队是世界上最好的足球队，中国队的每个队员都尽了最大努力，但是巴西队太强大了。中国队根本抵御不住他们的进攻，最终以零比四输了这场比赛。
我们希望中国足球队队员能取得较大的进步，将来能成为一个强队。
篇19：2024中考英语作文：英语励志名言
全文共 2887 字
+ 加入清单好的句子运用得到可以为作文提高分值。下面是语文迷为大家整理的英语励志名言，希望对你写作有帮助。
1、When all else is lost the future still remains.就是失去了一切别的，也还有未来。
2、Sow nothing, reap nothing.春不播，秋不收。
3、Keep on going never give up.勇往直前， 决不放弃!
4、The wealth of the mind is the only wealth.精神的财富是唯一的财富。
5、Never say die.永不气馁!
6、Nurture passes nature.教养胜过天性。
7、There is no garden without its weeds.没有不长杂草的花园。
8、The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.对明天做好的准备就是今天做到最好!
9、The reason why a great man is great is that he resolves to be a great man.伟人之所以伟大，是因为他立志要成为伟大的人。
10、The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.
对明天做好的准备就是今天做到最好!
11、You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted.
你不能改变你的过去，但你可以让你的未来变得更美好。一旦时间浪费了，生命就浪费了。
12、Knowlegde can change your fate and English can accomplish your future.
知识改变命运，英语成就未来。
13、Dont aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.
如果你想要成功，不要去追求成功;尽管做你自己热爱的事情并且相信它，成功自然到来。
14、Jack of all trades and master of none.
门门精通，样样稀松。
15、Judge not from appearances.
人不可貌相，海不可斗量。
16、Justice has long arms.
天网恢恢，疏而不漏。
17、Keep good men company and you shall be of the number.
近朱者赤，近墨者黑。
18、Kill two birds with one stone.
一箭双雕。
19、Kings go mad, and the people suffer for it.
君王发狂，百姓遭殃。
20、Kings have long arms.
普天之下，莫非王土。
21、Knowledge is power.
知识就是力量。
21、Knowledge makes humble, ignorance makes proud.
博学使人谦逊，无知使人骄傲。
22、Learn and live.
活着，为了学习。
23、Learning makes a good man better and ill man worse.
好人越学越好，坏人越学越坏。
24、Learn not and know not.
不学无术。
25、Learn to walk before you run.
先学走，再学跑。
26、Let bygones be bygones.
过去的就让它过去吧。
27、Let sleeping dogs lie.
别惹麻烦。
28、Let the cat out of the bag.
泄漏天机。
29、Lies can never changes fact.
谎言终究是谎言。
30、Lies have short legs.
谎言站不长。
31、While there is life there is hope.一息若存，希望不灭。
32、I am a slow walker,but I never walk backwards.我走得很慢，但是我从来不会后退。
33、Cease to struggle and you cease to live. 生命不止，奋斗不息。
34、Never underestimate your power to change yourself!永远不要低估你改变自我的能力!
35、Nothing is impossible!没有什么不可能!
36、Do what you say,say what you do.做你说过的，说你能做的。
37、The man who has made up his mind to win will never say "impossible ".凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说“不可能的”。
38、Live a noble and honest life. Reviving past times in your old age will help you to enjoy your life again.过一种高尚而诚实的生活。当你年老时回想起过去，你就能再一次享受人生。
39、You have to believe in yourself . Thats the secret of success.人必须相信自己，这是成功的秘诀。
40、If you fail, dont forget to learn your lesson.如果你失败了，千万别忘了汲取教训。
41、You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted.你不能改变你的过去，但你可以让你的未来变得更美好。一旦时间浪费了，生命就浪费了。
42、There is but one secret to sucess---never give up!成功只有一个秘诀--永不放弃!
43、For man is man and master of his fate.人就是人，是自己命运的主人。
44、What makes life dreary is the want of motive.没有了目的，生活便郁闷无光。
45、Difficult circumstances serve as a textbook of life for people.困难坎坷是人们的生活教科书。
46、Gods determine what youre going to be.人生的奋斗目标决定你将成为怎样的人。
篇20：中考英语作文：关于国庆节的英语作文NationalDay
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National Day is coming,and we can have a seven-day.My family are going to Hainan.Its a good seaside city.We are staying there for a week. We are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.Were visiting Tianya Haijiao,Wanquan River and many other beautiful places.I think well have a good time there.
国庆节来了，我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩，还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”，菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。
例2：
National Day Holidays
I went to my cousins house on the first day of the holidays and got a piece of good news that his wife was pregnant;She said shes worrying about getting fat,but on her face there was a unconcealable pleasure of conceiving a baby.My cousin told me that hell educate his child in a severe way,with a future fathers matureness.Im happy for them.:)
Yesterday,our research schools soccer team had a match with the graduate students from the department of international business.It was almost a close game in the first half,but we seemed lacking of vigor in the second half,so,we lost the game.
Half of the National Day holidays have passed by...life still goes with good and bad times.
国庆假期
我去表哥家在第一天的假期和有一条好消息，他的妻子怀孕了；她说她的担心发胖，但她脸上有掩饰不住的怀孕的喜悦。我表哥告诉我他将教育他的孩子在一场严重的方式，用未来的父亲的口吻。我为他们高兴。：）
昨天，我们的研究学校的足球队有比赛与国际商务系的研究生。这几乎是一场势均力敌的比赛的上半场，但我们似乎缺乏活力，在下半年，但是，我们失去了游戏。
有一半的国庆假期已经过了……生活仍然持续好与不好的时光。