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初二英语作文范文六篇 作文大全(20篇)

导语:妈妈的爱无时无刻不体现在我的学习生活之中。下面是小编整理的一些初二的作文,欢迎查阅,谢谢!

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有关压力英语初二

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Because of the high developing speed of the world, pressure has become a

serious problem in nowadays. As our students, we also have to face with much

pressure, such as the study pressure, exam pressure,relationship pressure and so

on. But how can we cope with pressure? This is the most important.

Firstly, we should face the pressure appropriately. Pressure is inevitable

in our daily life, so we cant be afraid of them and try our best to cope with

them. Secondly, tell our pressure to others. Talking is a very effective way to

ease pressure, and during the talking, we may get some suggestions and

solutions. Finally, trust ourselves. We should believe ourselves that we can

deal with any troubles by ourselves or by others help.

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篇1:保护眼睛初二暑期英语作文

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It is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? (重要的是,每个人都保持良好的视力。但是你知道如何保护你的视力?)

First, dont keep your eyes working for a long time. Youd better have a rest by looking in the long distance after you have studied an hour or so. (首先,不要让你的眼睛工作了很长时间。你最好休息一会看我国的远程学习后,您有一个多小时。)

Second, pay attention to the following: Dont read in the sun or in a poor light; dont read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. (其次,要注意以下几点:不要在阳光下阅读,或在光线不好的,不要在床上阅读或公共汽车在行驶。当你阅读这本书你应该保持你的眼睛远离约一英尺。)

And third, do eye-exercises every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. (第三,做眼每天练习。它也将帮助你保持良好的视力。)

If you obey the rules above, I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(如果你遵守上述规则,我认为,你可能会阻止你的视力成为短视。)

[保护眼睛初二暑期英语作文

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篇2:初二年级英语作文:A birthday memorable

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Yesterday was my birthday and I received a lot of presents.

These presents were packed in coloured paper and two of them were funny and interesting, which impressed me.

My sister sent a bag of present to me. The bag was big and round. I though it was a football. But when I opened it, I saw a clock. The other one was given by my brother. He left me a message, which said my present is lying in your bedroom. When I got to my bedroom, I found a laptop. Oh!Great! I jumped with joy. I know, they Want me to study hard and not to waste time.

I would never forget this birthday.

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篇3:童年英语作文初二80词

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My dad bought a computer when I was five years old. I could draw pictures

and listen to music on it.

But once, the computer was down suddenly.

My dad told me that it might be attacked by computer virus.

I was so scared that I asked dad anxiously, "Did it get a flu? Did it need

some medicine?" But dad laughed and said smilingly, "Dont be silly, son.

No medicine can cure a computer virus. Its a problem of program." I didnt

understand what my dad said at that time.

But I made up my mind to study hard and to be a computer expert in the

future.

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篇4:关于初二英语作文:ALettertoTom

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Dear Tom,

How are you?

I would like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon the school held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At the beginning we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of responsibility for our society. Next we expressed our thands to our parents who brought us up and to our teachers for their education. Then our teachers gave us cards with good wishes. Finally, we had wonderful performances. I learned a lot from the activity. I am sure the ceremony is very important for us. From then on we will know our responsibilities as grown-ups.

Yours,

Li Hua

[关于初二英语作文:ALettertoTom

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篇5:有关交通英语初二

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One way to get around in big cities like Beijing and Shanghai is to take a

taxi, but it’s too expensive. Many people like to go out by subway or light

rail. They are very fast and convenient. Now they are becoming more and more

popular. Buses are cheap, but they are very slow in rush hours.

If you want to see a city well, you can go out by bike. However, most

people prefer to get around in a downtown area on foot, because it’s good for

health.

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篇6:奋斗英语作文初二80词

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The dream is flying at the foot of the Great Wall. Hope will kindle in our

mind. A lamp in the darkness guides us in the direction. Remember, Socrates

said, "nothing in the world is happier than striving for dreams.". I never doubt

it, because dreams can become reality as long as they struggle. Even if no

success, we do not regret, because we have at least tried for the dream, but

also struggled. Everyone is eager to succeed, but also all his life to this

goal.

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篇7:初二关于中国梦英语作文

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Dream, is a beacon of your life; dream, is your better vision; dream, is you ideal wings; and having dreams, you will have a future.www.zhlzw.com

“Now, everybody was discussing the Chinese dream, I think, realizing the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation, is the greatest dream of the Chinese nation since the modern time.??the words are claimed by Xi Jinping. This is the general secretary of Xi jinping ?s Chinese dream. But as a contemporary college students, what is our Chinese dream? Can we dare to dream?

The answer is yes. We college students have no dare not dream, we not only need to bravely dream, but also hard to dream! As we all know, the highest honor of the nursing field is get the Nightingale prize. Each of years china had more or less people gotten this honor. Whenever I see the time that they wearing a silver medal and holding flowers standing on the podium to getting applause and glory, I couldnt help of imaging myself standing on the stage like them in future, that could be how glorious. This is my dream, my dream of Nightingale?s.

And I, a new era of college students, I am proud of my dream, proud of our motherland. When the dream into reality, in a era which let the youth realizing their ideal, I believe my dream will be realizing in the near future!www.zhlzw.com

Finally, I would like to inviting all of yours, please stretch out your hands, let us applause to achieve the dream of tomorrow!

梦想,是人生的灯塔,梦想,是你更好的远景;梦想,是你理想的翅膀,梦想,你会有一个future.www.zhlzw.com

“现在,每个人都在讨论中国梦,我认为,实现中华民族的伟大复兴,中华民族是最伟大的梦想自现代时间。? ?这句话是由习近平称。这是总书记习近平?年代的中国梦。但作为一个当代大学生,我们的中国梦是什么?我们敢于梦想吗?

答案是肯定的。我们大学生没有不敢梦想,我们不仅需要勇敢的梦想,但也很难梦想!我们都知道,护理领域的最高荣誉是南丁格尔奖。每一年中国已经或多或少的人得到这个荣誉。每当我看到他们穿着银牌和拿着鲜花站在领奖台上获得掌声和荣誉,我不禁想象自己站在舞台上就像他们在未来,这可能是光荣的。这是我的梦想,我的梦想的夜莺。

和我,一个新时代的大学生,我很自豪我的梦想,为我们的祖国感到骄傲。当梦想变成了现实,在一个时代,让青年实现自己的理想,我相信我的梦会实现在不久的将来! www.zhlzw.com

最后,我想邀请你,请伸出你的手,让我们掌声实现明天的梦想!

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篇8:初二英语作文关于机器人的英语作文

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英语作文题目要求 将来机器人将会给我们生活带来巨大的变化 未来人们的生活钟的很多事情将有机器人完成 如做一些家务 购物 做饭以及不出家门就可以看医生等 请根据 "The Life in the Future"写一篇文章 大家帮忙下 80词左右 不用太多 记住要初二读得懂的

Have you ever thought about the life with robots in the next 50 or 100 years?

We can imagine that all the housework, including washing dishes and cleaning the windows and many kinds of things like this, will be done easily and automatically. It is just because we have robots. As long as they are at home, we will not need to go shopping and cooking by ourselves any more.If any family member get ill, we can still stay in our apartment. Because the robot is the doctor.

Yes, robots may be everything except humans in the future.

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篇9:初二关于地震的英语作文

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After 5.12 earthquake struck sichuan province since 2008, we, I was so frightened by an earthquake, I felt the earthquake many houses will be apart, can let many people lost their lives, is one of the worlds most terrible disaster. Today I saw "China childrens encyclopedia, really know anything about earthquake.

It turns out that the earthquake happened all of a sudden the vibration phenomenon, like the wind, rain, is a kind of common natural phenomena. Vibrations in the earth, in fact, very frequently, probably every 30 seconds there will be time, but most of them are very ease, people did not feel. We can feel the earthquake is due to the relative movement between earths tectonic plates, rock is squeezed, produce a huge amount of energy to make rock failure in an instant, or make originally the already existing fracture activity, suddenly release a large amount of energy, and some of the energy to the earths surface, make the earth trembling violently, causing strong earthquake. Started happening earthquake site is called the source, the source above the ground is called the epicenter, the ground of the devastating earthquake is the most strong place is called the magistoseismic area, while the magistoseismic area often is the place where the epicenter. When the earthquake occurred, the source of shock wave in the earths crust to all directions called seismic waves. Seismic waves hit the ground, the result will be a disaster.

We Chinese people are very smart, as early as the eastern han dynasty, there is a man named zhang heng scientists invented to measure the earthquake Hou Feng seismograph, and our modern scientists are generally measured the spread of seismic wave speed with the help of a seismograph, the place and time of the earthquake.

Know the earthquake knowledge, learning even before the earthquake early warning and self protection method, I think, to know that knowledge is very useful for our own.

自从2008年我们四川发生5.12大地震之后,我就特别害怕地震,我觉得地震会震垮很多房屋,会让许多人失去生命,是世界上最可怕的灾难。今天我看了《中国少年儿童百科全书》后,才真正知道地震是怎么回事。

原来,地震是突然间发生的大地震动现象,就像刮风、下雨一样,是一种很普遍的自然现象。地球上的震动实际上非常频繁,大概每30秒种就会有一次,但大多数都非常缓和,人们都没有感觉。我们能感觉到的地震是由于地球板块之间产生相对运动,岩石层受到严重挤压,产生巨大的能量使岩石在瞬间发生断裂,或者使原来已经存在的断裂突然活动,释放出大量能量,而其中一部分能量传到地球表面,使大地剧烈地颤动,从而引起强烈地震。地震开始发生的地点称为震源,震源上方的地面称为震中,破坏性地震的地面最烈处称为极震区,而极震区往往就是震中所在的地方。地震发生时,震源发出的在地壳中传向四面八方的冲击波称为地震波。地震波冲击到地面,就会引发灾难。

我们中国人非常聪明,早在东汉时期,就有一位叫张衡的科学家发明了用来观测地震的侯风地动仪,而我们现代的科学家也一般都借助地震仪来测量地震波的传播速度,判断地震发生的地点和时间。

知道了地震知识以后,还要学习地震发生前的提前预警和自我保护方法,我想,了解到这些知识对我们自己是非常有用的。

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篇10:初二年级关于教育的英语作文

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Do your teachers still use traditional techniques to teach you nowadays? A revol- ution in teaching techniques is required now. In the past, we just took it for granted that a teacher s aim was to teach the students all that he knew and solve all the problems for them. Therefore, students could mot judge things on their own under this circumstance. Thus students gradually lost the ability to learn by themselves. In addition, they were only equipped with the knowledge that were taught in class and made the same judgement upon every problem which might crop up. Of course, they would find their knowledge not enough to solve practical problems.

So it is time to change the teaching method. A teacher s goal is to help the students develop not only the ability to learn by themselves but the skills to make judgements on every aspect on their own. It s not necessary for the students to turn to teachers for help while meeting with difficulties. The first thing is to develop the students abilities to make sound judgements upon any problem and overcome difficulties.

All in all, the aim of teaching is to liberate, but mot to fetter the students innate powers of making sound judgements.

你们的老师仍使用传统技术,现在教你?阿revol在教学技巧ution现在需要。在过去,我们只是把它理所当然地认为一老师的目的是要教导学生,他知道,解决他们的所有问题。因此,学生可以摩托罗拉自行判断在此情况下的东西。因此,学生们逐渐失去了学习能力本身。此外,他们只配备了那些在课堂上教授时所作的每一个问题,可能会突然出现相同的判断的知识。当然,他们会发现自己的知识不足以解决实际问题。

因此,现在是改变教学方法。甲老师的目标是帮助学生发展,不仅学习的能力,但自己的技能,就在自己的每一个方面的判断。那不为学生需要寻求帮助教师在会见困难。首先是培养学生的能力作出的任何问题,正确的判断和克服困难。

总之,教学是解放的目标,但摩托罗拉束缚作出正确的判断学生的固有权力。

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篇11:初二英语作文:Theharmofsmoking

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You take notice in some places, youll see the fact that most smokers are young people and even some are middle school students. It is said that in China the number of the people smoking is about 0.3billion.

Why do so many people smoke? Some think that smoking is pleasure, some believe that they can refresh themselves by smoking. In fact, smoking is a bad habit, which has great harm to peoplehealth. The study of smoking shows that many kinds of illnesses have something to do with smoking. Smoking itself is a waster. It costs one so much money, Besides, many fires are caused by careless smokers. Today more and more people all over the world want to give up smoking. If you’re mot a smoker, don’t start.

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篇12:关于绿色生活的初二英语作文

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Low-carbon life is the lifestyle of the time to minimize energy consumption, thereby reducing carbon dioxide emissions. Low-carbon life, for those of us ordinary people is an attitude to life. It gives us is a willing and we were creating a low carbon life issues.Taomi Shui can be used to wash their hands every day, clean furniture, water the flowers and so on. Clean, natural moisture; 2. Scrap paper will pave the lowest in the closet can not only absorb moisture, can absorb the smell in the closet; 4. Drink tea residue, dry it, make a tea pillow comfortable, and help to improve sleep;Lifestyle to reduce energy consumption when, thereby reducing the carbon, especially carbon dioxide emissions. Low-carbon life, for us ordinary people, an attitude, not ability, we should actively promote and to practice the "low carbon" life, pay attention to energy saving, fuel-efficient, water saving, solar terms, starting from scratch.

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篇13:初二寒假英语日记

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How to get happyness

there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

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篇14:参观花展初二英语作文

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Last week Chang Feng Park held a flower show.

I went to visit it with my friends.I was very glad to see so many beautiful flowers in the park.I was really amazed to see a sea of colourful flowers.They told me that some rare flowers came from Taiwan.Thousands of people stopped and watched them carefully.

I took many pictures there.Taiwan has always been a part of our country.I am sure sooner or later we can go there to see many more beautiful flowers.What great fun it will be.

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篇15:初二关于寒假的英语作文

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寒假预示春节,春节代表新的一年,新的一年,有期盼,有欢乐,有嬉闹……于是,火红的春联便挂起来了。

Winter spring festival Spring Festival indicates, on behalf of the new year, new year, hope, joy, a frolic...... So, red couplets and hanging up.

我喜欢除夕,不仅因为全家人可以欢聚一堂,可以吃饺子,可以放烟花,可以看春晚,更多的是我可以贴春联。从小,每年我就牵着母亲的手,将那红红的春联齐心协力贴在大门两侧,让整个家中有了新感觉,有了新气象。不管外面的风雪再怎么严寒,袭人,我都会与母亲相视一笑,我们的心中早已装满了温暖。

I like New Years Eve, not only because the whole family can gather together, can eat dumplings, can put the fireworks, can watch the Spring Festival Gala, the more I can put up Spring Festival couplets. Since childhood, every year I took the mothers hand, the red couplets on both sides work together on the door, let the whole family has a new feeling, a new weather. No matter what the outside snow again how cold, night, I will be with the mother with a smile, had our hearts full of warmth.

今年,我与母亲又开始了这欢乐的行动,三下五除二,我搬来了凳子,拿出了早已买好的一大卷粗胶带,剪刀。把那抱有对新年期盼的春联小心翼翼的拿了出来,便一切妥当了。我们很快便做好了准备,开始做起了这忙碌而又欢乐的活动。

This year, my mother and I began this fun action, neat and quick, I moved to a stool, took out a large thick adhesive tape already bought, scissors. Put the New Year couplets with great care to look forward to have taken it out, then everything is in order. We soon ready, start this busy and happy activities.

寒风一点儿也不怜香惜玉,如一头迅猛的狮子,嚎叫着,翻滚着。把那如尖刀般的风打在了我和母亲的脸颊上,怪疼的。我与母亲就跺跺脚,,搓搓手,便不去管它,真弄了寒风一个自讨没趣。春联在妈妈手中服服帖贴地挺直了它的腰肢,妈妈拿笤帚一扫,崭新靓丽的春联展现在眼前。我便拿起胶带,小心翼翼的把它粘好,生怕不小心弄扯它的衣裳。那一刻,我好像可以听到我与母亲的呼吸声,外面人们的嘈杂声。“贴完了!”可额头上早已滴下了紧张的汗珠,呼吸也早已急促起来。

The wind is not a little tenderness toward woman, such as a rapid lion, howling, tumbling. The wind like a knife like playing in I and mother on the cheek, strange pain. I and my mother would stomp,, rubbed his hands, then let it go, really got wind of a bring contempt upon oneself. Spring Festival couplets in my mothers hands docile and affixed to erect its waist, mother took the broom sweep, brand-new beautiful Spring Festival couplets displayed in front of us. I will pick up the tape, carefully pasted it, for fear of accidentally pull his clothes. At that moment, I seem to can hear my mother and I breath, people outside noise. "Paste finished!" Can the forehead already dropping the nervous sweat, breath has also quickened.

经过我与母亲天衣无缝的配合,这副春联总算贴完了。看着新的气象,我不由得在心中又升腾起了那种难得的满足感,站得远远的,我好像又听到了欢笑声,听到了嬉闹声,听到了新的一年人们难得的期盼声。

After I and the mother of seamless, this pair of couplets finally end. Looking at the new weather, I couldnt help in the heart and rising up the kind of rare satisfaction, standing afar off, I seemed to hear the sound of laughter, heard playing sound, heard the new year people rarely expect sound.

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篇16:工作与娱乐初二英语作文

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Work and play do not contradict each other; in fact, they complement each other. As the saying goes, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." A life burdened with work leads you nowhere, for you would get tired and bored with your daily routine work. On the other hand, proper recreation will relieve the tension and discomfort of our monotonous life because it offers you various ways to let out your pent-up emotions.

What I usually do to relax after school is jogging and seeing movies. Usually I dont spare time for exercise, but I value the physical education class at school. Jogging several rounds in the field certainly relieves the days pressure. On weekends, Ill catch the morning movie for my visual enjoyment. I feel revived and energetic for another weeks work-load.

工作与娱乐并不互相冲突,事实上,它们之间的关系还相辅相成。有句格言说:整日工作而没有休闲娱乐,会令人变得沉闷乏味。」被工作重担压得喘不过气来的生活,将使你一事无成,因为你将对一成不变的例行公事感到厌烦。由另一方面来说,适度的娱乐活动能提供各种管道,来渲泄你被压抑的情绪,减轻单调生活中的紧张与不悦。

放学之后,我最常做的休闲活动,便是慢跑与看电影。通常我并不特地拨出时间来做运动,但是我很重视学校的体育课。在操场上慢跑几圈,无疑地可以减轻一天的压力。在周末时,我都去看早场电影,享受视觉飨宴。如此一来,我将有如再生般的充沛活力,去面对下一星期的工作量。

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篇17:初二英语Fishing

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My father likesFishing. He always goes fishing with his friends in Autumn.

One day, he took me to fish, too. In autumn, fish have grown up. It is the best season to fish. First, we chose a good place. Then my father helped me put an earthworm onto the fishhook. Afterwards, I threw the fishhook into the river. I waited for a long time. Suddenly, I saw the float sink. I was very happy. I pulled it out of the water but I only saw half of the earthworm. The fish played a trick on me. I was very angry. But my father said to me, “it takes time. You need to be more patient.” I tried again. A few minutes later, I caught a big fish and I showed it to my father. My father praised me, “what a good angler you are!”

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篇18:初二保护熊猫英语

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The giant panda (Ailuropoda melanoleuca) ("black-and-white cat-foot") is a mammal classified in the bear family, Ursidae, native to central-western and southwestern China. It is easily recognized by its large, distinctive black patches around the eyes, ears and on its rotund body. Though technically a carnivore, the panda has a diet which is 98% bamboo. However, they may eat other foods such as honey, eggs, fish, and yams.

The Giant Panda is an endangered animal; an estimated 3,000 pandas live in the wild and over 180 were reported to live in captivity by August 2006 in mainland China.another source by the end of 2006 put the figure for China at 221, with twenty pandas living outside of China.citation needed] However, reports show that the numbers of wild panda are on the rise.

The giant panda has long been a favorite of the public, at least partly on account of the fact that the species has an appealing baby-like cuteness that makes it seem to resemble a living teddy bear. The fact that it is usually depicted reclining peacefully eating bamboo, as opposed to hunting, also adds to its image of innocence. Though the giant panda is often assumed docile because of their cuteness, they have been known to attack humans, usually assumed to be out of irritation rather than predatory behavior.

The Giant Panda has a very distinctive black-and-white coat. Adults measure around 1.5 m long and around 75 cm tall at the shoulder. Males can weigh up to 115 kg (253 pounds). Females are generally smaller than males, and can occasionally weigh up to 100 kg (220 pounds). Giant Pandas live in mountainous regions, such as Sichuan, Gansu, Shaanxi, and Tibet. While the Chinese dragon has been historically a national emblem for China, since the latter half of the 20th century the Giant Panda has also become an informal national emblem for China. Its image appears on a large number of modern Chinese commemorative silver, gold, and platinum coins.

The Giant Panda has an unusual paw, with a "thumb" and five fingers; the "thumb" is actually a modified sesamoid bone, which helps the panda to hold the bamboo while eating. Stephen Jay Gould wrote an essay about this, then used the title The Pandas Thumb for a book of essays concerned with evolution and intelligent design. The Giant Panda has a short tail, approximately 15 cm long. Giant Pandas can usually live to be 20-30 years old while living in captivity.

Until recently, scientists thought giant pandas spent most of their lives alone, with males and females meeting only during the breeding season. Recent studies paint a different picture, in which small groups of pandas share a large territory and sometimes meet outside the breeding season.

Like most subtropical mammals, but unlike most bears, the giant panda does not hibernate.

Pandas eating bamboo at the National Zoo in Washington, D.C.Despite its taxonomic classification as a carnivore, the panda has a diet that is primarily herbivorous, which consists almost exclusively of bamboo. This is an evolutionarily recent adaptation. Pandas lack the proper enzymes to digest bamboo efficiently, and thus derive little energy and little protein from it.

While primarily herbivorous, the panda still retains decidedly ursine teeth, and will eat meat, fish, and eggs when available. In captivity, zoos typically maintain the pandas bamboo diet, though some will provide specially formulated biscuits or other dietary supplements.

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篇19:中国人春节初二英语作文

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The Spring Festival is one of the most important and traditional festivals in China.Our familiy members gather to celebrate the festival.We eat dumplings,were new clothes,playing firecrackers and send a greeting to frends and so on.Parents will give there children money for the new year coming.

Then we go to our frends or relatives home and says "happy new year!" .

In a word,the Sping Festival is very interesting very important festival.

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篇20:初二期中考试备考:高分英语作文技巧

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下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧,欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点:实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。

结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。

第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。

亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

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