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星期天，可爱的小表弟来我们家玩，他已经四岁多了，正是牙牙学语的时候。

这天他来我们家，竟然还背了个小书包，可把我乐坏了，他说要来我们家学习。这么个小不点儿，学什么习哟，话都还没学会几句，我倒真想看看他来我们家学什么！？他从书包里“哗”地抽出一本大大的彩图书，我定睛一看，原来是一本英文字母入门书呀！小表弟说：“哥哥，这是我们幼儿园发的，我要哥哥教教我！”“得了吧，你普通话都说不准，还想学什么英语呀？”小表弟一看我凶巴巴的样子，立即准备泪汪汪，一副可怜巴巴的样子。我真怕他那哇哇大哭的声响，立马连声说：“好好好！哥哥教你！哥哥教你！”小表弟立即破涕为笑。我从A一直到Z，一个一个让他跟我读，他虽然读一点都不标准，有好几个几乎是“南辕北辙”，但看他那副认认真真的样子，真叫人不忍心批评他。我又重新从头教他读，他读写读写，便开始东张西望起来，不一会儿就跑去玩玩具了。我逗他：“快过来，哥哥没教完呢！”他已经假装听不见，自顾自地玩着。

哎，这个小表弟呀，真是又可爱又调皮！

[小学作文弟弟学英语

My favorite little animal is the neighbors puppy, it is covered with white, and furry, it is bright and bright eyes especially God, two little ears shaking, really naughty! There is a small tail Often thrown to go, as if to show off their own! The most interesting is that little nose, how a sniffing is also idle. It is also particularly alert, a see stranger, it will "barking" barking, until the stranger away, it will stop calling. Once the evening met the mouse, it will be "barking" called a non-stop, listening to the neighbors said: since it came, also caught a few mice it!

We all like the puppy very much.

hello!my name is Mingming.I am a pupil.i like speaking english very much.I go to school five days every week.every day i go to school on foot. because my school is not near my home.i like my school.there are about 3500 students and 54 teachers in my school.and i study grade 4.there are 45students in my class.my english teacher is tall and handsome .i love him very much. welcome to my school.you must be very happy.

Like every young girl, I pay attention to make myself look pretty, because

if I get more attention from others, I will be very happy. So I start to follow

the models and the movies stars dressing style, then I find that compare to

their skinny bodies, I look like a fat girl. So I have made up my mind to lose

weight. As my body is in the growth period, my parents always ask me to eat

more. When they find me start to eat less, they think I am sick. I tell them

that I want to look beautiful, then my mother says that I am beautiful in her

eyes. If I dont eat, I will look old. I search the Internet. The pictures of

skinny girls scare me, so I give up losing weight. My annoyance is gone, and I

am happy again.

My Idol

My idol is Chairman Mao. I think he must be many people s idol. He is a great hero. It is him makes us live a better life. Without him, maybe we still can t satisfy our hunger nowadays. We may not live comfortable, eat delicious food and so on. All the happiness we have now maybe is due to his wise leadership. Though he made mistakes once, no one is perfet. I admire him. I think all the people should respect him.

我的偶像是毛主席。我想他一定是很多人的偶像。他是一个伟大的英雄。是他使我们过上了更好的生活。没有他，也许我们还不能解决温饱问题。我们也许不能舒适的住着，吃美味的食物等。我们现在所有的幸福生活都是源于他的英明领导。尽管他曾经也犯过错误，但是人无完人。我很敬佩他。我觉得所有人都应该尊敬他。

[我的偶像小学英语作文

英语字母教学作为英语学习的基础，是小学英语教学中重要一环，这一阶段的教学，教师应给予足够的重视，通过各种教学组织形式使这一阶段的学习得以很好的落实。学好26个字母对以后单词的学习起着至关重要的作用。因此，在学习字母阶段，我们要利用一切可利用的资源，创设情境，让学生和字母交朋友、做游戏。

一、字母读音教学

1. 注重示范发音的正确性

字母发音直接影响着学生单词的发音，而且学生错误的发音一旦形成就很难再纠正。因此教师在教学字母之前一定要多听录音，纠正好自己的发音。在课堂教学中教师要让学生听磁带跟读，观察他们的口形，并鼓励模仿得好的学生示范领读，帮助其他同学纠正发音。

2. 把握学生的发音难点

受各地方方言的影响，学生对字母的发音往往会出错。比如：南方人容易把A读成/e/。因此，教师要把握好学生方言发音难点，预先采取各种教学方法防止错误发音的出现。

3. 强化个别字母教学

尽管许多学生对字母有了一定程度的掌握，但大多数学生都没有进行过系统的字母学习，中间难免存在着许多似是而非的现象。例如学生对GgJj两个字母的读音容易混淆，对Uu和Ii这两个字母的发音不到位。教师在教学中应针对这种情况加强这几个字母的训练。

4. 注重读音归类教学

把字母按读音进行分类是字母读音教学的一个重要任务，也是学生觉得有一定难度的一项内容。为了使学生能更好得掌握，教师可采用分家游戏的方法，按家族将26个字母进行分类记忆。首先将字母划分为七个家族，再对号入座，最终编成一首音素家族chant 帮助学生记忆：

A、H、J、K 是A 家族，A，A是族长。

E的家族有八位，BCDE，GPTV，E，E是族长。

/e/ 的家族没有族长，它的成员有七位，FLMN，SX 和Z。

U 的家族有三位，UQW，U，U是族长。

I 的家族有两位，IY，I，I是族长。(手势指着自己)

R 和O单独住，它们自己是族长。

5. 注重语音暗线的铺垫

在三年级下册学生用书中，字母读音和字母例词的安排是一条语音暗线，教师教学时要努力让学生掌握字母的正确读音，并初步感知字母在例词中的读音，为以后学习语音奠定基础。比如讲到字母Ee时，例词是egg，elepghant，教师可突出字母E的发音。英语有48个国际音标，如果学生能在学习 26个字母的同时掌握与此相关的26个音素，将会为以后的语音学习打好基础。

二、字母书写教学

字母的书写过程要一步步进行：先观察性状，再观察笔顺、占格情况，然后书空，使用活动手册进行描红，最后达到仿写。

1. 字母认读的教学

字母的书写首先要求学生能正确区分一些形近的字母。有些字母可以通过猜谜的方法让学生记住它们的形状特点。例如：弯弯的月牙(C)、一条小蛇 (S)、三叉路口(T)、1加3(B)、一座宝塔(A)、胜利的象征(V)、大号鱼钩(J)、一张弓(D)、一扇小门(n)、一棵小苗(r)、一把椅子 (h)。这些谜语既能让学生记住字母的形，又能激发学生的学习兴趣。同时，还可以让学生自编谜语学习字母，充分发挥学生的想象能力。另外，还可以将字母的一部份遮住，让学生根据漏出来部分来猜字母。

2. 字母书写的教学

字母的书写是小学生的一个薄弱环节。小学的英语书写一定要求学生做到严格遵照书写规范，教师绝对不能马虎。因为英语字母有印刷体和书写体之分，所以容易使学生在书写时发生混淆，教师在教学时应多在这方面进行强调。

(1)笔顺教学

教师要充分利用多媒体设施让学生仔细观察字母的笔画和笔顺。正确的笔顺在活动手册的描红练习中有正确的示范。但有时学生会受到汉语拼音笔顺的影响，错误书写字母，因此教师要对容易出错的笔顺进行比较细致的指导。如i和j都是后加点，t先写钩，H先两竖等。建议教师不妨采用汉语拼音的教法，使用一些形象的比喻，帮助学生理解记忆书写规则，防止笔画出错。比如：H是一双筷子拴根线，j是海豹顶皮球，i是小海狮头上顶个球，t是伞把带开关等。

(2)格式教学

字母的占格同样是字母书写教学中的一个教学难点，尤其是当字母的大小写混在一起的时候，学生很容易混淆。这样，教师要先清楚示范，提醒学生注意并总结字母占格的规律。同时，教师还可以借助儿歌帮助学生掌握字母的占格规律。如：英语书写，四线三格，大写字母一二格，上不顶线是原则;小写字母认准格，上面有 ‘辫’一二格，下面有‘尾’二三格，无‘辫’无‘尾’中间格;i，t中上一格半。在学生掌握了字母的占格规律后，还要通过活动手册上的描红来加强练习。这里要注意的是，到一定阶段的时候，教师要让学生能在没有四线格的一条线上，甚至是没有任何线的白纸上也能正确地表示出字母的书写格式。

三、操练

字母操练我们还可以采用游戏的形式。

1. What’s missing?游戏

学了几个字母以后，把字母卡片放在一起让学生认读，然后抽去其中的一张，让学生寻找：What’s missing?此时，学生注意力高度集中，急于表现自己，识记的效果就会很好。

2. 左邻右舍游戏

学生准备好已经学过的字母卡片，教师出示一个字母，让学生找出它的左邻右舍，请找到的几个学生快速把字母拿到讲台上站在相应的位置上，其余的学生一起认读这几个字母。

3. Make letters游戏

让学生用肢体动作表示不同的字母，或让学生用火柴棒拼出不同字母的形状。

My dad is not tall, black eyebrows with a pair of sharp eyes below, I do nothing to escape his eyes, because my father was a child often do housework, so the body is very strong.

My father is very amiable, but he also has a serious side, when I test the poor test, the father will become serious up, will be angry and asked me: "how do you test this is so bad, is not to I am fan you ah? "However, when I test well, my father will smile and said to me:" Son, very good Well, worthy of reward, next time make persistent efforts to test better! "

Every time my father came to my house, my family became a humorous theater, my father often lying in bed tease me, I do, sometimes often lying on my fathers stomach, suppress him, he is not angry, but also Filled with: "package adults mercy, small also did not dare to say." I have already laughing broken belly. And sometimes, I play will be a bit too far, my father will say: "play is to play, do not play too far, this is very bad, very dangerous.

This is my humorous, amiable, there is a serious side of the father, I like him!

小学六年级秋游英语作文1

Perhaps autumn is the most pleasant season of the year. The weather is neither too hot nor too cold. It is the best time for going on a trip.

Last Sunday we went to the countryside. There was golden wheat all over the fields/The fields were covered with golden wheat. Large and colourful apples and pears were hanging on the trees. We could see some peasants were busy getting in the crops in the fields， and others were picking fruits under the trees. All the baskets were full of lovely fruits. It was also the fruit of the peasants labour. No pains， no gains. What a magnificent/beautiful picture! It seemed as if we were wandering in a splendid/wonderful world.

I love autumn. I love the harvest time.

小学六年级秋游英语作文2

I always dream about returning to the past. As many people say, childhood is the happiest and easiest time in one’s life.

Children show you their true emotions. They know what is compassion and what is tolerance better than adults. In their world, all real thoughts are presented. They may easily have different opinions with others, but they never understand what is animosity. They enjoy making friends but they never think about making social communication net. Every child talks from the bottom of his heart without evil plans hidden and never intrigues against each other. Only in children’s way can adults make our life simple, more real and more enjoyable.

I wish everyone’s heart would keep as innocent and lovely as they ever did in their childhood. Then, the walls between our hearts can be broken down and the world would be a better place to live in.

小学六年级秋游英语作文3

Today, the teacher took us to zhongshan park. Here, everyone was so happy! In the autumn of talking and laughing on the road, like a happy little sparrow.

We went to the zhongshan park, there are two stone lions see stone road on both sides, terrible squatting at the door.

Upward along the stone path, see stone road on both sides of the yellow and green leaves, the autumn wind blows, the falling pieces of leaves, like a butterfly dancing in. We quickly climb halfway up. See below flickering skyscrapers, the car on the road is the size of a pencil case. Walk to the top of the hill, Chen teacher gave us a good team, we all sat on the bench, bathed in the warm autumn sunshine, laughing, and eating their food, and you gave me to eat, I eat for you. Really is happy!

The teacher took a photograph, we took our laughing faces, leaving the autumn the best memories.

Christmas is very important for a foreigner, it is equally important for Chinese people, today is Christmas Eve, is the first day of Christmas.

On Christmas Eve, Santa Claus is ready to gift this year, in the day but to send oh! I was just about to send mom a big apple, after school, I quickly came to a store, "boss, have a Christmas fruit?" I loudly of say, the boss looked at me and shook his head, ah! Not so soon, alas! I had to go home crestfallen, mother see me frown, said: "whats wrong?" I like sewed the mouth not to tell the truth, I turned her eyes a brainwave, then find ways to make Christmas fruit, see I like listen to the who command to lay down their bags, hide in the room not to come out, first of all, I first took a red and big apple for the main body, with my favorite ribbons to decorate the tree, suddenly a princess appeared in front of me gorgeous dresses, translucent jade bracelet, blue glass slipper, ah! How beautiful, use my card made into the shape of a Christmas tree, the above also write a words: "mom, I love you, you are the most beautiful in the world of the mother, mother Christmas to you soon!" Succeeded, I quickly ran to mom, mom was shocked, she shed a drop of tears, the tears are sweet.

The second day of Christmas morning, I received a gift, I know this is from the mother, but I still like a child, when I came to school, my drawer is filled with CARDS, mother and I am very touched, the card is the card are He Yu, only written on a card, I was very angry, because he and I played a joke on.

Christmas, someone make fun of others makes me very moved, anyhow I wish you all a merry Christmas!

圣诞节对于外国人来说非常重要，对于中国人来说也同样重要，今天就是平安夜，也是圣诞节的第一天。

平安夜到来了，圣诞老人正在准备着今年的礼物，在这一天里可是要送苹果的哦!我正准备送妈妈一个大苹果，放学后我赶忙来到小卖部，“老板，有没有圣诞果?”我大声的说，老板看了看我，摇了摇头，啊!这么快就没有了，唉!我只好垂头丧气的回家了，妈妈见我皱起眉头，便说：“怎么了?”我像针缝了嘴似的没说出真相，我转了转眼睛灵机一动，便想出法子来做圣诞果，只见我像听了谁的命令似的放下书包，躲进屋子里不出来，首先，我先拿来一个又红又大的苹果来做主体，再用我那最喜欢的彩带来装饰它，顿时一位公主出现在我面前华丽的服装，透亮的玉镯、蓝色的水晶鞋，啊!多么漂亮，用我的卡纸做成了一个圣诞树的形状，上面还写上了一句话：“妈妈，我爱你，您是世界上最漂亮的妈妈，妈妈祝你圣诞快了!”成功了，我急忙跑去送给妈妈，妈妈惊呆了，她流下了一滴眼泪，这滴眼泪很甜。

圣诞节的第二天早晨，我收到了礼物，我明知道这是妈妈送的，但我却依旧像个小孩子，当我来到学校时，我的抽屉里堆满了贺卡，和妈妈一样我非常感动，贺卡就是贺卡上面都是一些贺语，只有一张贺卡上写的，我非常生气，因为他和我开了一个玩笑。

圣诞节正是如此，有人开玩笑，也有人令我非常感动，总之祝大家圣诞节快乐!

Some students dream of being a game experts, play the best game, be the best player; Have a classmate wants to be a sports star, uncle yao Ming to win honor for our country; Some students want to become a master of racing, driving the fastest car. And my dream is to be an outstanding inventors, create world-famous super machine.

Super machine is the most advanced and most intelligent machines. This machine can do anything, can store all kinds of energy, and can be released at the right time. For example, when summer it was very hot, I can keep the heat absorption of the super machine into the machine, the outside air temperature is reduced, and when the day is cold in winter, my machine will vomit the quantity of heat inside, make my house warm. Not only can eat heat, my machine also can eat the thunder, when thunder on rainy days, I will put my machine to the outside, he can eat a lot of scary lightning, as energy storage in the inside, in the evening I let my superhero machine release electric lighting for us, for our cooking, provide we need electricity, not to mention enjoyment.

Superhero machine is not only powerful, but also very obedient. Whenever he drink enough to eat, he just like a lazy pig, drum belly slumber. Is really very cute, I want to let him like a pet with me every day, for I serve a lot of people, too. But my mother said to me, in order to realize my dream, will study hard and strive for my dream, from now on solid to learn scientific and cultural knowledge. Dont let the dream appears only in the dream, want to let my dream like a seed, germination, slowly grow, until he blossom, bruised fruit.

有的同学梦想成为游戏专家，玩最好的游戏，做最棒的高手;有同学想成为姚明叔叔一样的体育明星，为我们国家赢得荣誉;有的同学想成为赛车高手，驾驶最快的汽车。而我的梦想却是当一名杰出的发明家，制造出举世闻名的超极机器。

超极机器是最先进、最智能的机器。这种机器无所不能，能储存各种能量，并且能够在合适的时候释放出来。例如当夏天，天很热时，我的超级机器就能把热量吸进机器，把外面的气温降低了，而冬天天冷时，我的机器就把吃进去的热量吐出来，让我的屋子暖暖和和的。不仅能吃热量，我的机器还能吃雷电呢，每当下雨天打雷时，我就把我的机器放到外面，他能吃掉很多吓人的闪电，作为能源储存在里面，晚上我就让我的超能机器放出电来为我们照明，为我们做饭，为我们提供需要的电，别提多方便了。

超能机器不仅功能强大，而且还很听话。每当他吃饱喝足以后，他就像个懒惰的小猪一样，鼓着肚子打盹。真是可爱极了，我要让他每天像个宠物一样陪着我，为我也为很多人服务。 不过妈妈对我说，要实现我的梦想，就要好好学习，从现在开始为我的梦想而努力，扎扎实实的学习科学文化知识。不要让梦想只出现在梦里，要让我的梦想像一粒种子，慢慢发芽，茁壮成长，直到他开花，结出累累的果实。

下雨天

Its raining again today。And its raining hard。It was dark from morning

till night。 It was still dark at half past eight。 Even if I do my homework， I

can only see it with the light on。As soon as it rains， it stays down until about

twelve oclock。After the rain stopped， I went to the restaurant downstairs to

buy some food。

今天又下雨了，雨下得很大，天黑了从早上到晚上，它还是黑的八岁半。即使我做我的功课，我只能开着灯看。一旦下雨，它停留下来直到十二点雨停了，我去楼下餐厅买一些食物。

小学英语作文:My parents 我的父母

My parents

I have a busy father and a kind mother.

My father is a businessman. He is 42 years old. He is short. He likes reading newspapers after meals. He watches TV in the evening. He goes to work by car. He has got a nice black car. He often plays golf with his friends on the weekend. He does not often eat dinner with us.

My mother is a housewife. She doesnt work. She stays at home. She is beautiful. She has long hair. She does housework in the morning. She often goes shopping in the afternoon. She is kind, but she is strict to my study. She likes reading. She watches TV at night, too.

I love my parents. And they love me too.

September 15, 2009

Dear David,

Im glad youll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. Im sure youll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

Hello,today is May Day.I and My father,mother and sister went shopping.We bought,lollipops,ice creams,cornflakes,toasts,butter,orange,milk and rolls.And my mother bought toys for me.Such as:train,ball,balloon,car,doll,plane and skateboard.After that we went to zoo.I saw rabbit,tigers,snails,and lions,hamsters,budgies and zebras.My sister asked me“what do your like?”I answered“I like skipping rope.That’s very nice.”She said“Here is you prize,Sunny!”“Oh,thank you!I love it!”I shouted.We sat under a tree.After lunch we drank some milk.

Today I am very happy!

Do you like animal？ What’s your favorite animal？ My favorite animal is monkey. It is lovely and clever. People always say that our human beings are evolved from monkeys. In the other word， monkey looks a little like human being， which close the distance between it and me. It has a long tail. It can make different shapes by it. It likes eating bananas. It will peel off the skin just like human being. It is funny！ I love it.

Good afternoon, teachers! My name is YangXiaodan. I`m 11

now. I`m from Class2 Grade 5 of TongPu No.2 Primary School. My English teacher is Miss Sun. She`s quiet and kind. She`s short and young. My good friend is ZhangBingbing. She`s 12. She`s tall and pretty. We`re in the same class. We both like English very much. I like painting , listening to music, playing computer games and

reading books. My favourite food is chicken. It`s tasty and yummy. I often do my homework and read books on Saturdays. This is me. Please remember YangXiaodan. Thank you very much!

一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文，是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有：故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类：以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动，而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂，所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要，安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容，使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构，即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点，然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件，因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动，也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体，即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓，可以增强文章的真实感，有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制，更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称，还是采用第二人称，都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意：句式尽量要多变，不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头，否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错，但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子，使文章略显单调乏昧，给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中，记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目，不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件，又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考，这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来，对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题，明确主题，选准素材，罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score，tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time， I thought of death， of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent，and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样，你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩，并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想，作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容，这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性，还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成，不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底，又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”，但由于时间有限，结果草草收尾，甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文， 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平，表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇，要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上，四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如，表示“重视”的词汇有stress，emphasize等，但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成，前者就平淡，后者表达意思很生动，更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配，长短句交替使用，会增强文章的节奏感，使描写更生动，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如：

(1) 名词化手段：用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分，然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分，以达到合并句子的目的。如：

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段：根据语义关系，可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等，如：

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner，hot and tired，was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚，卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟，进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”，而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构，而是留心细枝末节。

导语：你的假期有什么安排吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship.

Then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.

At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.

This is a good holiday on the sun.

【参考译文】

假期我要去晒太阳。我将乘宇宙飞船去那儿。我要一艘蓝色的宇宙飞船。

然后我会驾驶宇宙飞船去太阳。太阳很热。所以我穿上了超级衬衫。早上，我要吃些太阳汉堡当早餐。

八点，我将和我的朋友们在那里玩。他们是超级狗和超级女孩。超级狗是黑白的。超级女生很聪明。超级女孩和超级狗喜欢和我玩。所以我和他们玩了四十分钟。然后我在一个蓝色小桌子上的红色小房间里做功课。下班后，我要吃午饭。我要吃太阳沙拉。我要给太阳宝宝做一些红色玩具熊。我要红汁、红鱼和红米饭。所有的东西都是红色的。然后我需要大量的水在太阳上，因为太阳太热了。所以我要步行去宇宙飞船。我会驾驶宇宙飞船到地球上去。

这是一个阳光灿烂的假日。

导语：你觉得你的校园漂亮吗?快跟我们介绍一下你的学校吧!下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Our school is very beautiful. There are many trees and flowers here,so the air here is very clean. I can hear birds singing.Its so wonderful.On the playground,you can see the students play basketball.Sometimes our teacher play with us.We feel very happy.In each class,there are many pictures in the wall.The teachers work very hard.They love us as if we were their children.When we meet some problems,our teachers often help us.In our school,the teachers and students are like firends.I love our school.I wish our school will get more and more beautiful!

【参考译文】

我们的学校很漂亮。这里有许多树和花，所以这里的空气很清新。我能听到鸟儿唱歌。那真是太美妙了。操场上，你可以看到学生们打篮球，有时老师会和我们一起玩，我们感到非常高兴。每个班级，墙上有许多画。老师工作非常辛苦，他们就像我们自己的孩子的时候，爱我们。我们遇到了一些问题，老师总是帮助我们。在我们学校，老师和学生就像朋友一样。我爱我们的学校，我希望我们的学校会越来越漂亮!

As is known to us all, teachers play an important role in our process of

growing up. As far as I am concerned, an ideal teacher should be responsible,

impartial and wise.

First of all, a qualified teacher should be responsible. For one thing, he

should try his best to make his class interesting and try to understand what his

students need. For another, he needs to keep enthusiastic with his job of spread

knowledge all the time and act as an example for others everywhere he goes

to.

Second, be impartial is another requirement. As a teacher, he should not

divide students into good ones and bad ones since each student has unique

characteristic and value. Therefore, no matter what kind of students he

encounters, he should treat them impartially, without any bias.

Finally, my ideal teacher is one who does not only teach students his

specialized knowledge but also can give students some guidance about life and

about how to act as human beings. This guidance has a great effect on students’

outlook on life and sense of worth.

To sum up, an ideal teacher should not only pay attention to the

achievements his students get, but also put emphasis on developing students’

correct views on life and sense of worth.

another new term comes again,so i should have a study plan to promot myself.

firstly,i descide to finish my homework more carefully than before.and pay more attention to the knowledge which i didnt know it clearly.

secondly,i will do a lot of read to widen the range of my knowledge.and try to combine thoery to practice.

finally,i will learn to adjust, to be more positive and more helpful.

thats what i plant to do in a new term.