小学生畅想我的2017作文推荐三篇 作文英语汇编20篇
寒假到了,终于可以过上轻松自在的日子了,你们的寒假发生了什么?那么关于小学寒假生活日记要怎么写好呢?下面是小编为大家准备小学生畅想我的2017作文推荐三篇 作文英语,欢迎参阅。
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1000:秋天的果园小学生英语作文
全文共 1329 字
+ 加入清单Autumn to a field after the autumn rain, the fruit of the orchard mature. When I walked into the orchard, I was attracted to the fruit.
The first thing that catches my eyes is yellow pears. Look, that pear tree hanging a pear, like a gourd! A gust of wind blowing, pear shook his head, naughty you squeeze me touch, as if to say: "Come pick me! I am sweet and sweet "I finally could not help temptation, hand to pick one, but I did not pick, because I could not bear.
Go through the pear tree, I came to the banana tree, saw a tree banana tree sturdy tall and straight. A string of bananas hidden in the leaves, like the children of the month, like a fishermans boat, like my fathers sickle, like our children playing the "roundabout", but also like the fairy tale dwarf side by side in the cradle The I want to pick a string, but my mother said: "Only pick the banana can not eat, must go home to cover their yellow to eat."
The fruit of the orchard is so beautiful that the fruit of the orchard is too fragrant, and the feet of many children are painted, and they are sketched under the fruit trees, pick up the leaves, or eat the fruit. See all this, full of apples are laughing red face, persimmon tree also hung a red lantern.
This beautiful autumn orchard, I love you, could not bear to leave, really want to put the home here.
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篇1:我的梦想小学生优秀英语作文
全文共 1428 字
+ 加入清单I think all of them have a dream! Maybe this dream is not big, but always give yourself a decision, that is, to complete the dream.
My dream is not for me, for my family. Because in my small time total people in front of my parents always say that their sons and daughters how powerful, a long time. Gradually I in the heart under the seed is my must grew up to buy a luxury car, live in luxury real, I want to let everyone envious of my parents.
I want all the people to envy my parents and my brother, these two children. This seed has been buried in the heart of my slowly germination, I know that it is difficult to achieve this dream, but I must make a lot of money.
Maybe someone said I only care about money $$, money is worldly possessions, in my eye, for fear of parents with their own life to protect our, we care about and care for us! Every time I see parents very hard, always wanted to help, but also humiliating.
But I always want to realize this dream, I also want to let their parents when old to live an extravagant life.
For this dream, for me refueling bar!
我想所有的人都有一个梦想吧!可能这个梦想不大,但是总是给自己一个决定,就是一定要完成这个梦想。
我的梦想 不是为了我自己,是为了我的家。因为在我小的时候总有人在我父母面前总是说自己的儿女多么多么的厉害,时间久了,渐渐渐渐我在心里种下了一粒种子___就是我一定要长大买豪车,住豪房,我要让所有人都羡慕我的父母。
我要让所有的人都羡慕父母有我和哥哥这两个孩子。这颗种子一直埋在我的心里慢慢的发芽,我知道想要实现这个梦想很难实现,但我一定要赚大钱。
可能会有人说我只在乎钱$_$,钱是身外之物,在我眼里父母们用自己的一辈子去守护我们,关心我们,在乎我们!每次看到父母很辛苦,总想去帮忙,可是又拉不下脸。
但是我不仅一直想实现这个梦想,我还想等父母们老的时候让他们锦衣玉食。
为了这个梦想,为我加油吧!
篇2:DogNannan小学生英语作文
全文共 360 字
+ 加入清单Today is Friday. It’s sunny. My aunt comes to my home with her dog, Nannan. Nannan is very active. She is from Boston. She is fat. Her fur is so soft. She has two big eyes, a black nose and a big mouth. Her teeth are very sharp. Her tongue is purple. Her paws are very sharp, too. She’s very pretty and easy-going.
I like Nannan, I do hope mum buys me that dog.
篇3:小学畅想梦想作文
全文共 1761 字
+ 加入清单回首“昨天”,畅谈“今天”。你做好准备吗?让我们共同装扮这个纷繁多彩的世界,背起沉重的行囊,抛弃贫苦,走向成功富裕的道路。
“昨天”的面貌是死气沉沉,,而今天的面貌是焕然一新,这两者比较起来,简直一个天上一个地下。
我,有时听奶奶讲起那个时代的故事。农民们过着贫困的生活,吃的是“窝窝头”。有一次,闹灾荒,人人饿得头晕目眩,善良的人啊!用慈悲的心想想。看!大人、孩子,只好到山沟里挖野菜来充饥。是一个坚强的母亲,她,是她,竟然用鲜血止住孩子哭声。哎!这一个个感人肺腑的事迹!让我不禁热泪盈眶。那时住的是土房,穿的衣服破烂不堪。
改革开放30年以来,国家在发展,人民在发展!看!人们热情奔放,欣慰的笑,幸福的泪珠树立起永恒不变的信____“发展才是硬道理”。如今,家家户户过上了丰衣足食的生活,经济收入逐年增长,建起一座座新房子。在领导人主席的指引下,“日复一日,年复一年”地在致富路上奋斗,播撒一粒粒希望的种子。聪明的人,大胆设想一下,“几年,几十年,几百年……”“地球村”会发展成什么形式呢?这只是每个人的心声罢了。坚信的是,“地球村”会逐步发展成为高地位,高待遇,高环保纯绿色境界。
30年的沧桑巨变,30年的光辉历程,铸就了一个民族近百年的梦想,谱写出可歌可泣的画卷。改革开放应顺应民心,顺应时代潮流,放飞梦想,抛弃顾虑,实事求是,同心同德,锐意进取,团结互助,开拓创新,营造奇迹的未来!温馨提示:口袋作文网上有更多作文和作文素材,是中小学生备考常用网站。
改革开放30年以来国家实现“上学不交费,种地不交税”的优惠政策,尤其是对残疾的孩子,更是有特殊的照顾,,而且还实现“学有所教,住有所居,老有所养医疗保障政策……”这足以体现中国如同“璀璨的明珠”照亮前方,她,是她!在拼搏,在走向富强之路,人们精神更加昂扬,更加抖擞,更加充满活力。
“今天”的幸福生活是来之不易的。如果,没有老一辈革命先烈的极力拼搏!汗水的洗礼,英勇无畏,挥洒血雨战斗在前线,不怕吃苦,哪怕献出自己宝贵的生命也在所不惜。如今,他们永远离开人间,离开我们,给华夏儿女换来这幸福温馨安定的生活,您值得青少年连声称赞,您令无数孩子可歌可泣,您们那视死如归,生命不息,奋斗不止的伟大精神使每个孩子牢记心头,感染一代代华夏炎黄子孙,传承着你我之间永常青的灵魂!同时,激励着“祖国未来的花朵”为中华之崛起而读书,相信自己,冲破一切,“有勇气,就有奇迹”,使自己成为祖国的栋梁之才。
“今天”有喜也有忧,可喜可贺的是,中国飞黄腾达了!这时,北京沸腾了!华人世界沸腾了!原来是北京申奥成功这一壮举登上“炫丽的舞台”,完成中国人民的百年梦想啊!“鸟巢”孵化中华奥运梦想!这是中华民族的荣耀,这是改革开放的雄壮赞歌。科学也飞速发展!看!“嫦娥一号”载着亿万中华儿女的心声奔向月球,这是一次探月的完美之旅,又是中华民族千年来奔月梦想,走向探索宇宙奥秘的新时代,民族迈出沉重而伟大一步,终于取得圆满成功。听!中国人民在欢呼,在呐喊,在为此助威!
“忧”的是汶川发生一次8级大地震,这给中华民族肩上压上一个无比沉重的“担子”,万幸的是,人间有爱,民族发达,经济来源充足,再加上主席的正确领导,“温家宝”总理的英明指挥,日夜奔波在救援前线,亲切的问候,唤起全国人民“万众一心,众志成城”的斗志,终于躲过这次“黑色”袭击。
但,不幸中的不幸是,谁知背后的一场“金融危机”的“黑色”风暴又席卷而来,拉开了序幕。
从此刻起,从现在起,我要插上放飞的翅膀,遨游在知识的海洋里,汲取中华文化之精华,面对着改革的今天,要在学习中迎难而上,坚持不懈,永不言败,力争一流,创造奇迹,冲向成功的彼岸。
我虽是先天性残疾的女孩子,但是从小树立“身残志坚”的精神。面对当今这个爱暖人间的大家园,我赢怀着一颗“感恩”的心,是父母留下了我,是上帝接受了我。因而,我要凭借坚定不移的毅力,越过荆棘,走向成功的大门。
作为一名中学生,我要以那些革命先烈们为榜样,让他们那崇高的精神时时刻刻激励着我。化为动力,鼓舞着我;化为文字,启迪着我;化为拐杖,支撑着我。
总之,要坚持不懈,拼搏到底,成就梦想,成就为未来。
无论是“昨天”还是“今天”,青少年都要坚持以马克思列宁主义,毛泽东思想,邓小平理论作为自己的行动指南,创造辉煌业绩。
篇4:小学英语作文我的宠物猫
全文共 680 字
+ 加入清单I have got two baby cats. They are very beautiful. One is yellow. The other is white. They are very lovely. The yellow cat is very naughty. He likes to play with people. He often runs here and there. His favourite game is playing with balls, ropes and stones. But the white cat is very gentle. She likes to wash her face. And she doesn′t like to play with people. She often jumps onto my knees. I like to give her a bath.
Oh, my baby cats bring me much happiness. We are very good friends. I love them.
我有两只小猫。他们非常漂亮。一个是黄色的。另一个是白色的。他们非常可爱。黄色的小猫很调皮。他喜欢和人玩。他经常到处跑。他最喜欢的游戏是玩球、绳子和石头。而白色的小猫非常温和。她喜欢洗她的脸。她也喜欢玩的人。她经常跳上我的膝盖。我喜欢给她洗澡。
噢,我的小猫为我带来了很多愉快。我们是很好的朋友。我爱他们。
篇5:我的狗狗MyDog小学四年级英语作文
全文共 421 字
+ 加入清单我的狗狗(My Dog)
I have a dog. Its name is Doggy. I like it.
Doggy has two big eyes, two small ears, a big nose and a small mouth. Its black and white. It has a short tail. Its cute and lovely.
Doggy is strong. It likes bones, rice and meat very much. My dog is lazy. It can catch a ball. I love my dog very much.
【参考翻译】
我有一只狗。它的名字叫狗狗。我喜欢它。
狗狗有两只大大的眼睛,两只小小的耳朵,一个大鼻子和小嘴巴。它是黑色和白色。它有一个短尾巴。它很可爱和可爱。
狗是强大的。它喜欢骨头,米饭和肉。我的狗很懒。它可以接球。我非常爱我的狗。
篇6:我的家庭小学英语作文Myfamily
全文共 511 字
+ 加入清单My family lives in Taiwan, but my father doesnt. He lives in China. My family name is Jian. I have one brother and one sister. My name is Jeff. My brothers name is Art. My sisters name is Sophia. My fathers name is Jian Zong-he and my mothers name is Jenny. I like to watch TV and play PC games. My brother likes them, too. My father and my mother both like to watch TV. My brother and I are both junior high school students. My father is a businessman. My mother is a businesswoman. I like my family very much.
篇7:小学英语实习日记
全文共 1089 字
+ 加入清单在小学实习的每一天都是充满意义与欢乐的,每一天每一名学生都能给我带来新的体验与感悟,我看到他们在成长,在变成一个越来越懂事的大孩子。放学后的路上,甚至不知不觉走过了头儿,又折了回去。回到寝室,我激动的心情溢于言表!但总感觉无论我用多么感人肺腑的话语,都无法比拟这一天在学校度过的令我感动的、难忘的点点滴滴!
充实的一天
今天是忙碌的,整整一个上午,都是在不断的听写英语、督促同学们学习中度过的,下课了,我就立刻找那些英语单词背不好的孩子听写,课上,便马不停蹄的批作业,并且时刻盯着宇,让她学习。我是喜欢和她一起学习的,感觉她是有那种学习的热情的,可以给我以感染力,又让我充满动力与激情。她也是听话的,只是稍微不仔细了一些,慢慢改正,应该是可以的。
让优秀坚持下去
中午批数学卷时,我分配给了几名学生,他们都欣然接受了,只有艾不想批,我对她说:你不是答应老师可以做值日班长吗?为什么又不要做了?优秀是需要坚持的,今天优秀,明天就不了那算不上优秀。艾似乎觉得有道理,便争着要批卷了。在我看来,艾是个心灵手巧、善于观察的小姑娘,只是有时候不太注意自己是在一个集体中,总做一些特立独行的事情,但这些并不影响她成为一个优秀的人,如果她能把这份优秀一直坚持下去,那真的是不可估量啊!
肩负一份责任
今天,我考了很多同学英语单词,并且让她们的同桌考他们第二轮、第三轮,直到全对为止,其中就有一直很愿意帮助同学的卓,她真是个温文尔雅的好姑娘。还有一个就是让我刮目相看的达,我一直认为学习好的同学只会学习,不会帮助别人,但这一观点,将从今天起转变。我让达督促他的同桌然背单词,达尽职尽责,不仅监督然学习,还一字一句的教他。中午,我见然回到教室开始学习,虽说是在补之前欠的债,但我还是很欣喜的,不多久,达也回来了,是回来帮助然的,着实让我很受感动。在达身上,我看到了一份对同学无私奉献的爱和他那弱小的肩上支起的坚定的责任!相比之下,辛,你要加油了!今天就你没有考呀,至少该对自己负责吧,期待可以看到你主动来找我听写哦!
把机会让给他
下午上了一节令人震撼的语文公开课,不仅因为老师和同学们精彩的配合,更是因为那个多次发言的禹(同学们说他外刚内萌,感觉很有趣)。在这节课快要下课时,老师再次点到了他,但他并没有急于回答,而是说:老师,我把这个机会让给我的同桌,因为他也总举手,可是一次机会也没有得到。顿时,听课的老师们被禹的回答说笑了,包括安老师也包括我,这个笑绝对不是嘲笑,也不是搞笑,而是一种欣慰的笑,一种赞赏的笑。在大家都急于表现自己的时候,禹的这种友情、这种谦让,让所有人为他竖起大拇指,又怎能不令我感动呢?
篇8:我的学校小学三年级英语作文
全文共 276 字
+ 加入清单My school is very pretty. Look, this is the piayground. This is the canteen . Those are our teacher"s office____and garden.
In the canteen . We can eat breakfast, lunch and dinner
The library is big, ther are many story-books.
This is my favourite school!
I like school very much!
篇9:写一封信小学英语
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+ 加入清单Dear Liu Qi,
I, the undersigned, am a senior in Peking University. The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games is coming in four years. After watching the 2004 Athens Olympic Games, I can not help writing to you.
First of all, here is my suggestion for the preparation work of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. The construction work of the sports building must be completed in time according to the contract. In Athens, the swimming stadium was not accomplished in time so that the event had to be held in the open air, which has brought negative effect on the performance of athletes. In one word, to protect the international image of China and ensure the Olympic competition, we must finish our preparation work well and in time.
Last but not least important, I want to express my wish to be a volunteer. In the first place, it is the duty of every Chinese to do his bit for the 2008 Olympic Games. In the second place, I have a good command of foreign languages. I can speak English, Russian, and Japanese. Therefore I can be a qualified volunteer.
I am looking forward to your reply
Sincerely Yours
篇10:有意义的假期小学英语作文
全文共 360 字
+ 加入清单I am glad that winter holiday is coming,I have set for itself a vacation plan,First of all I would like to seriously work to complete holiday.Then read some interesting books;Then adhere to a daily physical exercise.Last I necessary to help my parents do some housework,because they are very busy and they have to work very late.
This is my winter vacation plan
篇11:小学4年级英语写一封信
全文共 947 字
+ 加入清单12 May 2006
Dear Mary,
I am sorry to trouble you, but nobody would come into my mind to help me except you.
You know, I had planned this holiday for several years. A t last, my dream came true. You could imagine how excited I was. My mind was completely occupied with the holiday. I forgot to collect my laundry. I dont know if you can help me collect my laundry. I sent the laundry to the Johns. It is the one down the corner on St. Peters Street. You cant miss it, because the house is painted green-a big green house. I have got two pairs of trousers, three shirts, one T-shirt and a blanket. Call a taxi to send you home. I will pay you back when I am home.
My first stop is London. It is raining. The streets are very clean. How I wish I could have the chance to see the famous London fog. But someone told me that was already the history. One can only read things like that about London in books.
My best wishes to you.
Yours sincerely, Peter Chen
篇12:小学生一件高兴的事英语作文
全文共 1285 字
+ 加入清单Remember that it was a Monday morning, our whole school in the rise of the flag, after the rise of the flag, the school principal announced the "civilized etiquette small star" list, which I have a, when the president read my name I was suddenly cast, and the people around me pushed me and said, "You won the prize and go to the prize!"
I jumped up and ran to the podium, the principal gave me a small red books, the school then gave me a pencil case, I hit the little books, there is a certificate, I looked very excited Because it was my first prize.
On the last lesson, I think the time is too slow, slower than the snail crawl, I looked out the window, the birds twitter, as if for my award and happy!
The bell finally rang, my first out of the classroom flew home, on the way home, I see the certificate of merit, laughing from ear to ear, so all the way to Xiaohehe.
I came home, my first thing is to give the certificate to the father and mother to see, my parents can be happy, my mother said to reward my table delicious, I am very happy.
Afternoon to the class, the students are envious of me, that I am awesome, the teacher also boasted me!
Come home at night, my mother fulfilled her promise, I looked at the certificate, my heart was beautiful.
This is my pleasure, you have it?
篇13:介绍舞蹈英语作文80字小学
全文共 339 字
+ 加入清单When the summer comes, the weather is so hot, it is rarely to see the rain.
Today, when I wake up, I find the weather is chilly, it is going to rain. I am
so happy, I miss the rain so much. Suddenly, the rain drops from the sky, I ran
out of the house, looking at the sky, dancing with the rain. I feel so cool,
then all my weariness has gone.
篇14:上网做英语假期作业小学作文
全文共 375 字
+ 加入清单今天我上网做英语假期作业,我下定决心一定要得个满分给妈妈和爸爸看。
首先点击假期作业,开始玩“疯狂游戏机”啦,它的图案是一个马蜂,我想要是写错了肯定有一些马蜂来顶我吧!再点击一下,哦!原来游戏规则是:我们要按照电脑报出来的句子来按顺序点击它给你的单词。我心想这玩意儿可真难玩:有好几个重复的,而且还不好点击。后来我发现重复的当中,原来还有字首大小写的区别。掌握了这一点就很好玩了。几分钟,我就将它们一举攻下!最后数据给我了一个出人意料的成绩:114分。满分耶!呵呵!其实英语也不是那么难学,这种玩中学的方法我喜欢。你看,上面还有全班大爆料游戏,不用学,我就玩会了,但是同学已经把我爆料了77下啦!
网上作业就是好,同学最近状态,还有在班上你的成绩排第几,都能知道。而且不像其他的英语作业,枯燥无味,一点儿新鲜感都没有,还难把单词给记住。
我喜欢做网上作业!
篇15:小学4年级英语写一封信
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+ 加入清单22 March 2006
Dear Mr. Wang,
Thank you for a rapid response to our invitation. Enclosed you will find an outline of events to take place during International Week here at the University of Montana. I will also list a number of possible speaking engagements so that you can choose those things in which you are most interested. As far as topics are concerned, the topics for classroom visits are generally determined by the professor, but most professors are very flexible. We have approximately thirty-five faculty members that teach courses in Asian Studies, ranging from language and culture to history and economics.
Here is a tentative schedule:
Sunday, April 8th
10 am - Cultural Exhibition opens
12 am - International Festival begins with a speech by the university president and an introduction of visiting dignitaries
1-5 pm - Opportunity to visit festival, interact with student performers, taste foods
6 pm - Dinner with Director of Mansfield Center Phil West, Ambassador Mark Johnson, and staff of Mansfield Center
As you can see, there is tremendous interest in China here at the University of Montana. Please let me know if this outline suits your purpose, and if not, please dont hesitate to offer any suggestions for changes. We can arrange as many or as few speaking engagements as you have time for.
Thank you for your attention and enthusiasm.
Yours sincerely,
Lily Ma
篇16:小学英语日记:属于我们的生活
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+ 加入清单导语:写日记可以提高文学素养,完善文学功底,帮助写一手好文章。希望同学们以后也养成用英语写日记的习惯。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语日记作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
I have rested for a week. I began to feel bored. So I went out with my friends. They are my best friends in the middle school. We didn’t go to someplace special. We just saw the other. We had lunch together. While we were having lunch, we were still talking about the new school and new friends. Yes! A year later, we have grown riper. And we learned much more things and got new life. We haven’t enough time to play, to waste and to lose the way. We only have two years. Two years to go, we will get the real life which belongs to us.
【参考翻译】
我已经休息了一个星期。我开始觉得无聊。所以,我和我的朋友一起出去。他们是我中学最好的朋友。我们没有去的地方特别。我们刚才看到的。我们共进午餐。虽然我们吃午饭,我们仍然谈论新学校和新朋友。是!一年后,我们已经发展成熟。我们学到了很多东西,得到更多的新生活。我们还没有足够的时间来浪费。我们只有两年。两年来的时候,我们将得到真正的属于我们的生活。
篇17:以生日为主题英语作文小学
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+ 加入清单March 5th is my birthday.Its also a special day to memorize a great person
-- Lei Feng. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the
morning, I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school, I helped
my desk-mates to repair their broken chairs.After school, I took my birthday
cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All o~ them
hoped that I would be back again.What a joyful birthday it was!
篇18:小学英语笑话范文
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+ 加入清单A crowd of student was gathered on the campus of Oxford University. “You can have no doubt,” shouted a young man excitedly, “that if the Dean does not take back what he said to me this morning, I’ll leave Oxford this very evening!”
A buzzing noise followed. “What a man of actions!” one said in admiration. “How should we support him and learn from him!” said another.
Suddenly, a girl asked, “What did the Dean say to you, Hob?”
He bent and whispered to her, “Well,er•••er•••Miss Rose, er•••he told me to get clean away from Oxford this very evening!”
篇19:感恩父母英语小学
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+ 加入清单Some people know how hard, some people know how to honor, some people know how to respect, know how to cherish. I know a different kind of friendship - thanksgiving. When I was toddler, my parents were leaning on the side; when my life was rugged. Is the parents to help me through the ups and downs; when I study the pressure when the parents gave me a cup of hot tea; when I was bullied, the parents for me to fight injustice ... ... parents paid so much for us, do not we Should you learn to be grateful?
I remember once, school sooner or later, I said to my mother: "Mom, why do not you call me to get up early? I should be late!" I complained. "Well, you hurry, Ill wait for you downstairs." Mother said, while walking out the door. I dawdle to finish the teeth, casually grilled a few mouthfuls of rice, dressed, rushed to the downstairs. Mom has long been waiting downstairs. Breath of the north wind, I was shivering coldly. Mother took his big coat and put it on. Im still talking about it: "You are so late to call me up, will be late, late criticized!" Mom opened the car faster. Cold wind "wind" from my ear blowing, scraping my ear sore. Im late.
Back home, my father said more, "your mother because the morning too little wear, cold cold, is resting, you do not argue to him." Tears like a broken line of pearls, fell down. All this is because of me, all because of love! I went to the mothers bed, guilty to say "mother, sorry".
Is that experience, let me understand the love of parents. Let me learn a more care, less complain. More than a Thanksgiving, less a bit disgusted!
篇20:小学生英语记叙文的写作方法
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+ 加入清单一.概念
记叙文也称叙述文,是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有:故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类:以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动,而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。
二.六大要素
记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素,即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。
由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂,所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要,安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。
记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容,使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构,即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点,然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。
三.时态
记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件,因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动,也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。
四.人称
记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体,即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓,可以增强文章的真实感,有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制,更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。
无论采用第一人称,还是采用第二人称,都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意:句式尽量要多变,不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头,否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.
这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错,但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子,使文章略显单调乏昧,给读者的印象大打折扣。
五.措辞与表达
在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中,记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目,不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件,又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考,这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来,对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。
六.记叙文写作技巧
1. 仔细审题,明确主题,选准素材,罗列提纲。
2. 写好第一段
最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。
我们来看这样一段文章的开头:
The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score,tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time, I thought of death, of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent,and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.
怎么样,你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩,并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?
3. 结构要清晰
下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想,作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容,这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性,还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成,不会有凑字数的烦恼。
4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词
如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底,又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。
5. 文章不要写得太长
有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”,但由于时间有限,结果草草收尾,甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文, 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平,表述出所规定的内容就可以了。
6. 要多用四级词汇,要使句式多样化
没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上,四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如,表示“重视”的词汇有stress,emphasize等,但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成,前者就平淡,后者表达意思很生动,更能引起阅卷老师的注意。
简单句和复合句合理搭配,长短句交替使用,会增强文章的节奏感,使描写更生动,给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如:
(1) 名词化手段:用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分,然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分,以达到合并句子的目的。如:
We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.
We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.
(2) 定语化手段:根据语义关系,可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等,如:
The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.
Thewinner,hot and tired,was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚,卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟,进行修改检查。
检查的内容不是“大处着眼”,而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构,而是留心细枝末节。