写寒假的英语作文初一(推荐20篇)

Nowadays, most people, especially those who live in the country, want to

move to the city. But is the city life perfect? Every coin has two sides.

现在很多人，特别是那些生活在农村的人，都想去都市生活。但是，都市生活真的很好吗?每面硬币都有两面，每件事都有利有弊。

Its true that things seem to be more convenient in some ways such as

finding jobs, transportation service, etc. Also places for relaxing like parks

and hotels are attractive.

事实上，有些事似乎(因为在城市生活而)变得更方便，比如找工作、交通运输服务等等。有些供人放松的地方也非常吸引人，比如公园和旅馆。

But we have to say something bad, too. The environment is awful because the

population is too large and too much rubbish make the air unfresh.We have to pay

lots of money on our life including the bad things above!

但是，我们也必须说些弊端。因为众多的人口和大量的垃圾污染了空气，所以(城市)环境是很可怕的。我们必须花费非常多的钱在(改善)生活方面，其中便包括之前提到的那些不好的事。

In my opinion, we must take a correct attitude to it. No matter where we

are, we can creat our own sky if we try our best!

在我看来，我们必须采取正确的态度去面对都市生活。无论我们在哪儿，我们都可以尽自己所能，创造出一片属于自己的天空!

I am very familiar with my hometown, I was impressed by the clarity that is the bottom of the river because it has good memories of my childhood. There are many in the riverbed of the small fish and small stones, they are often hiding in a rock, then you can rock to hold down the small fish will swim in the future while you rock hands on just after the fish swim in your Your hands

Handy to be able to fish the arrested, but sometimes you encounter the clever fish grasp it, because you rock hands on it after the tour has been a long, so we devised a method: From the store,

Lane bought firecrackers to fish, but sometimes the fish will be killed, I will be arrested and a number of friends will come to fish with Charcoal. First of all, we will pick a piece of local fish would be a good pick if there is no fire and then we have to look around a number of stone

Head circumference of a circle, to find some of the fire burning matches, take a fish in the final tool to let the fish go, then garnish salt and MSG, the delicious baked fish at once, if we caught fish will not eat From home with some of the corn

, And some sausage to grilled vegetables. Since that fish every time we come here to play.

Each year we will be in a small river in the bamboo forest to play, we will hand with two bamboo, and then turned himself in the future, no one who is more than double the victor. Sometimes we will play with stones in the river bypass the requirement is up

Solid and often beautiful I always win, although I take a slow, but I use my patience to win the game.

I love you beautiful river!.

This week I didnt do many wonderful things．

I went to learn developing film with my classmates on July 1st． It was easy and we all got good marks．

On July 4th， I went to school to learn， because I will be a junior three student soon． We would have to learn some lessons in advance． The weather was very hot． But I didnt feel that learning lessons was boring． Some teachers are new． They are good I think， although they are all looked strict． And the lessons were not too bad．

This week was the beginning of this summer holiday， but it was really typical ．

My winter holiday is very dull. I stay at home for most of time. sometimes I visit my friends and play basketball with them. sometimes we go shopping.

One day, we go to the kfc. We have hamburgers, chicken coke and french fries. We have sore throats. We go home and have a rest. then we feel better. We go and play computer games! how mad we are!

This is the only thing i can talk about in the holiday.

本文是一篇800字寒假英语作文，题目为the Bicycle ，文章表达了作者对自行车的喜爱之情，下面就让我们一起来欣赏全文吧!

As it’s known to all, China is popular for its emperor of bicycles. This is because our country is still a developing country and few people can afford private cars. The demand for a means of transport is met by making millions of bicycles available.

Riding a bicycle has a lot of advantages over driving a car. First, it is a physical exercise to ride a bicycle. In contrast, sitting in the car, one tends to gain weight. Besides, it is much more economical to ride a bike than drive a car. On the one hand, the only fee a bike-rider has to pay is the annual tax. However, the annual fees for a car are costly. On the other hand, a bike neednt be equipped with a parking lot, but a car must. Most important of all, it is beneficial to the environment to ride a bicycle because the bike doesnt consume petrol; it is a pollution-free transport. In contrast, the exhaust released by the car is harmful to the environment.

Since China is a developing country with a large population, bicycles will still be the most popular means of transport in China for quite a long time. Most people will still ride bicycles to go to work or to school. The emperor country of bicycles will remain for at least dozens of years.

[the Bicycle 800字寒假英语作文：

导语：随着环境污染愈加严重，水资源也被破坏，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

When I was very small, I stayed in the hometown with my grandparents. I had the great time there, I liked the environment so much. There was a long river in front of my house, the water was very clean, I could see the small fish swim. My grandma usually washed her clothes along the river side. But now when I went back to my hometown, the river was very dirty, the water was light yellow and there were so many rubbish floating in the river. It made me feel that the river had lost its life. I missed the old time when I was playing in the river. It is human being that ruin the environment, if we dont take action to protect it, we will destroy ourselves.

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在我很小的时候,我和我的爷爷奶奶呆在家乡。我过的很愉快,我喜欢那里的环境。在我的房子前面有一条很长的河,水很干净,我可以看到小鱼游泳。我奶奶通常沿着河边洗她的衣服。但是现在当我回到家乡,河水很脏,水是淡黄色的,有很多垃圾漂浮在河里。我觉得这条河已经失去了它的生命。我想念在河里玩耍的旧时光。是人类破坏了环境,如果我们不采取行动来保护它,我们将毁灭自己。

My Winter Holiday` Plans Well, winter holiday is coming. So whatI am going

to do? I am going to read English books，surf the Internet，play badmintoon every

day。And first I am going to finish my homework 。In addition， I am going to leave

Shantou for Xiamen with my family and we are going to stay there for ten

days。And after we are getting there， we are going to eat delicious food，climb

the mountains in the Jin Bang Park。That must be a lot more fun and we will very

excited。How about you?What are you going to do when the Winter Holiday is

coming?

How to talk about my winter holiday, thats really enjoy them all, endless aftertaste, a big harvest!

I learned to pack book cover. Perhaps you may laugh at me, ha, is so big, also learned to pack book cover? Ha, let you to smile, anyway I was optimistic. Is my parents only daughter, always spoil me, protect me, at ordinary times is not their bag for me is to buy ready-made, I rarely do this work in teams. Only at home this time, parents work busy, I try to remember my father used to do book cover, slowly groping, meditate, after dad guidance, I finally have resulted in findings that saw the image of uncomfortable, Im happy to jump three feet high.

Common saying: "the countless tears and sweat makes call success"! Winter vacation, I special attention to mathematics, dad extract some questions from the computer do for me, I do on a per, will be happy. Especially for mom and dad are a little dont understand "cows eat grass" problem, I also did the right thing. Of course, I am careless, careless, sometimes doesnt even remember the triangle area, not only in this way, because of carelessness, many entirely wrong.

In the winter holiday, I learned to pull two songs again, father also said I bow firm than before, and tone up is much more comfortable.

In the cold winter, I gained so much "fruit", I have satisfied, dont! Less than! Maybe when I go to pick fruit.

要说起我寒假里如何感受，那真是享之不尽，回味无尽，收获不小呀!

我学会了包书壳。也许你可能笑话我，呵，都这么大了，还才学会包书壳?哈，任你去笑吧，反正我挺乐观的。我是爹妈的独生女，平时总宠着我，护着我，平时不是他们帮我包，就是买现成的，我一般很少做这种协手的活儿。这回，爹妈工作忙，我只有在家试着回忆爸爸以前做书壳的情形，慢慢摸索、琢磨，经过爸爸指导，我终于取得了成果，看见那别别扭扭的形象，我高兴得一蹦三尺高。

俗话话：“无数的泪和汗水化做的叫成功”!寒假，我特别的重视数学，爸爸从电脑上摘抄一些题目给我做，我每做对一道，就会开心一下。特别是爸爸妈妈都有点搞不懂的“牛吃草”问题，我居然也做对了。当然，我既粗心，又大意，有时连三角形面积也不记得，不止这样，因为粗心，不少全错。

在寒假里，我又学会拉两首歌了，爸爸也说我比以前弓拉得稳一些了，而且音色拉起来也舒畅多了。

在寒冷的冬天里，我收获了如此多的“果实”，我已心满意足了，不!不足!也许还有果实等我去采摘。

How time flies!The first half semester is over。Looking back,I have achieved much over the term.I have learned how to play football.I have made many good new friends in school.But my biggest gain is that I have improved my English a lot.I can get an A in the English exam now.Whats more,I can speak with others in English fluently.That makes me very happy.

But I still have some difficulties.The greatest one at present is that I am still poor at maths,I never get an A for it,though I have studied it very hard.That makes me very sad.Hower,I wont give up.Ill keep working hard.I believe that I can improve my maths soon.

Im very happy to be this winter holiday, because you can get a lot of pocket money. But very boring, because cant in my classmate chat, is really boring.

Im very happy winter vacation, you can buy my favorite clothes, trousers, shoes and I love to play with toys, and can go back to my grandmas, to travel, and go to the He Lan anping castle of the building, three hundred years ago in tainan anping road, please appreciate a lot. Now I will introduce the sites is anping castle, right in the middle have to visit the place. Have a 7th floor tower, the top we could see the beautiful scenery, there are a lot of old cannons, took a photograph. Anping old is a very good place.

Bored, Ill write winter vacation homework, or playing computer, and watching TV. My winter vacation homework pages and pages of writing and also checked for her mother, and looking forward to quick opening day of school.

我这次的寒假非常开心，因为可以领到很多的零用钱。但是又非常无聊，因为无法跟班上同学聊天，真是无聊极了。

我非常开心的寒假，可以买到我喜欢的衣服，裤子，鞋子还有我最爱玩的玩具，又可以回去外婆家，去旅行，还有去看三百年前何兰建筑的安平古堡，就在台南市安平路，请大家多多欣赏。现在我要介绍的古迹就是安平古堡，有参观的地方就在正中央。有一个七楼的塔，那座顶端可以看到美丽的美景，那里有很多以前的炮，还照了一张相。安平古保是非常好的地方。

无聊的时候，我会写着寒假功课，或打电脑，还有看着电视。我的寒假作业一页又一页的写完毕，也给妈妈检查过了，而且每天盼望着快开学快开学。

光阴似箭、日月如梭。漫长的寒假终于向我走来。在寒假的第一天，我和姑姑到“瓜果零售一条街”去买水果。

进入“一条街”后，我和姑姑来到一个水果摊前，趁姑姑和那个卖苹果的人开始讨价还价之机我就东瞧瞧、西看看。忽然，我发现旁边有一筐黄澄澄的梨，卖梨的是一个年轻的姑娘，她穿着花布棉衣，两个肥大的裤脚随风来回摆着，看来是一位朴实的农村姑娘。

这时，一位涂着口红的、抹着胭脂的中年妇女，还领着一个四五岁的小孩。她们来到摊前，那个中年妇女问道：“这梨多少钱一斤?甜不甜?”“三元一斤，很甜。”“哼!我尝尝。”那个妇女东挑西拣，最后，挑了一个又黄又大的梨，用手绢擦了擦，就吃起来。“妈妈，我也要!”小女孩仰起幼稚的小脸，伸出两只胖乎乎的小手。“小孩子能尝出什么味道?”那个妇女虽然这样说，却仍然挑出了一个大梨给了小女孩儿。

中年妇女吃完梨，把嘴擦一擦，说：“不甜，不买了!”她拉着小女孩儿正要走时，小女孩儿却喊了起来：“甜!甜!梨子真好吃，不酸，妈妈爱骗人。”那个妇女一听非常生气，顿时拉长了脸，“啪”的一巴掌打在小女孩儿的脸上，“哇……”

小女孩儿哭了起来，一边哭嘴里还一边说：“妈妈爱骗人，妈妈爱占小便宜。”那个妇女又要打小孩儿，这时，那个农村姑娘站起来，忙走上前去拦住她，从筐里拿了几个梨给小女孩儿，然后看也没看那个妇女，挑起框又走向另外一个地方去卖梨了。那个妇女一下子呆在那里不知如何是好了。

看到这一幕，我的脑海中留下了两个身影：一个是那么高大，一个却是那么渺小。

我的假期生活是丰富多彩的。

今天，我和妈妈一起来到奥帆基地，参观了各国的帆船，帆船有各种形状，有锥形、长方形、椭圆形等 。妈妈告诉我，每只帆船上面都有国旗，这就代表是哪个国家的帆船。

我们顺着基地大道来到海边，只见许多人在捉螃蟹。他们有的俯身在缝隙前，用细铁丝弯成钩子;有的蹲在沙地里，用手指挖出一个个小洞洞。我和妈妈也兴致勃勃地拿来铲子和小塑料桶，加入到捉螃蟹的队伍当中。

我观察了一下周围的地形，想找个下手的地方。这时妈妈喊道：“平平，快过来，我发现螃蟹的‘隐蔽所’啦!”我飞快地跑过去。嘿!妈妈用力把一块大石头翻了个底朝天，一窝螃蟹全都爬了出来，大的像核桃，小的像黄豆，少说也有十几只。螃蟹们无处藏身了，向四处乱爬。我赶紧伸手去捉那只最大的，哪知这家伙真机灵，猛翻一个身，用它那剪刀似的钳子，狠狠地夹住了我的手指。“哎呦——”我疼得跳了起来，用力的甩。可是怎么也甩不掉，它反而越来越紧。我咬紧牙关，狠狠地一甩，那家伙啪的一声，终于“八脚朝天”地掉在地上了。可是我的手指又红又肿，往手指上拼命地吹气，眼泪直在眼眶里打转。这时传来咔嚓一声，我那样子被妈妈用相机拍了下来。

下午回来，看到妈妈闭着眼睛很累的躺在沙发上，我决定自己做饭给妈妈吃，做什么呢?“对，炸土豆丝吧!妈妈最爱吃的!”我穿好围裙。把土豆洗干净。然后学着外婆的样子，一手拿土豆，一手拿水果刀，小心翼翼地慢慢削皮。削好后我又把它们擦成丝，完成后，我非常高兴自己第一次使用刀时竟然没有伤到自己。下面是最重要的了——炸土豆丝。当油冒小泡泡时，我把土豆丝放入锅中，因为在油烧热后，遇见了水就会跳出来。我猫着腰，一手拿铲子，一手拿着锅盖，随时要和“油星”战斗。我翻炒着，它很滑，我让它往左它偏往右，我让它往右，它又偏往左。我努力翻炒着，终于把它们拍均匀了。不一会，这些土豆饼变得黄澄澄的了，真让人馋涎欲滴。我迫不及待地拿了一块放进嘴里，哇塞!味道味道太好了!我把炸得香喷喷的土豆丝盛了出来。这时，外婆回来了，妈妈也休息过来了，她们望着桌上的炸土豆丝，一边微笑着一边品尝我美味可口的炸土豆丝。外婆对我说：“你长大了，会自己做饭了。”。我笑了。为今天的游玩，也为自己的劳动成果让外婆和妈妈感到高兴。

晚上，当我坐在电脑前写下这一天的生活时，我也不由自主地笑了，为这一天的丰富生活而笑。

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At dusk，the weather became colder while the sky was gray，and the cold wind was blowing strongly.It seemed that it was going to snow soon. A moment later，the snowflakes began to fall quietly.Soon the land before my eyes was all white，like a beautiful blanket.Then it snowed more and more heavily.The trees were all covered with white quilts.The whole city became a silver world. The next morning，it stopped snowing and cleared up.I went into the yard.Looking far away，I saw a beautiful silver white world.A group of children were playing happily.Some were throwing snowballs to each other，others were making a snowman.Snow seemed to bring us warm and wishes.Cold as it was，nobaby felt cold in the white world. I love snow，because it is pure white.It brings us hope and vigour.

雪黄昏，天气变冷，天空变成灰色，冷风强劲地吹着。似乎很快就要下雪了。

一会儿，雪花儿静静地飘落下来。很快眼前的大地变白了，像个美丽的毯子。然后，雪越下越大。树儿披上了厚厚的棉被。整个城市变成了银色的世界。

第二天早晨，雪停了，天气晴朗了。我走进院子里，远远望去，我看见了一个美丽的银白色的世界，一群孩子正在快活地做游戏。一些在互相掷雪球，其他的在堆雪人。雪似乎给我们带来了温暖和祝福。尽管天气很冷，但是没有人在这白色的世界中感觉到寒冷。

我喜爱雪，因为它的纯净。它带给我们希望和活力。

[关于寒假的八年级英语日记

Today was the vacation last day，I reorganized own went to school with the thing in the home，this vacation might be really quick，made me extremely not to give up，tomorrow also will be the new semester.

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

今天，我做了一个决定，有的时候我会不自信。所以我要每天早上起床后对着镜子说一遍加油。因为我认为那样会使我变得自信。那样，我就可以大胆的去做一些我想要做却会紧张的事。现在，我要说一句：加油！

i made a decision today. becuase i often lose my confidence, i decide tell myself ‘go’ in front of mirror after getting up every day. i believe this will make me confident. thus, i can do things i want bravely. now, i will say, ‘keep going’.

结束了紧张的大考，开始了愉快的寒假。妈妈为了让我放松一下，带我去菜市场逛逛，顺便让我长长见识。我一听到这个消息，高兴得一蹦三尺高。

早晨，刚刚揭开浓浓的晨雾，菜场里早已喧闹开了。卖主的叫卖声、自行车的车铃声/人们讨价还价的争论声……它们仿佛一个个在跳动的音符，凑成了一首动听的交响曲。

市场里的东西琳琅满目，应有尽有。你看：蔬菜区里的东西真新鲜，有红红的萝卜、绿绿的菠菜、白白的莲藕，西红柿羞红了脸，真像个害羞的小姑娘……

水产区的海鲜更多了，有活蹦乱跳的虾和虾狗弹，刚捞上来的鱼，肥厚的章鱼……看了让人直流口水唉!

妈妈挑了些芹菜、剪豆和豆腐，又买了虾和章鱼还有肉。

我问妈妈为什么每个种类都买。妈妈告诉我，今天买的这些菜营养各不同，都是人体所需要的，吃菜也要荤素搭配，缺一不可，这样，身体才会吃得壮壮的。

我明白了，原来买菜也有这么多讲究。今天让我增长了见识。

Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will feel happy and become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once again, I make a decision to be a good girl.

My mother of medium height, white skin, not very beautiful but dignified and easy, her dress is just like people, not fashionable but very elegant. My mothers character is bad, often lose his temper. Strengths, weaknesses, you want to know? My mother is a man of ingenuity, will do a lot of exquisite handicrafts. Fengling is very good-looking, she will do what all have, in the shape of different colors, hung in the window, my home is very beautiful, especially under the wind chimes look gorgeous in that some of small ornament, whenever there is a wind blowing, they will send melodious bell, it sounds like the wings, can fly far away.

Do you know? My mother a bath just half an hour. Her do the housework is also very clean. 5 o clock in the morning get up to do breakfast for the family to eat, at 9 o clock in the morning will go to the market to buy food, come back and then do a housework. Cook a meal at 11 o clock. Wash his clothes, and 2 PM 3 PM to do the housework. Shes housework: sweeping, washing clothes, sweep the floor, washing the dishes, and so on household chores, few are also countless. The evening she often said: "oh ~ today the housework so much do I waist sour backache." Father and sister, I have no words to say. In fact, we want to help her, but we help her. She said: "go away, you do not clean."

You say my mother is very love clean and industrious again?

我的妈妈中等身材，皮肤白白的，不十分漂亮但端庄大方，她的穿衣打扮也跟人一样，不时髦但很高雅。妈妈的性格不好，常发脾气。优点很多，缺点也不少，你们想知道吗? 妈妈是个心灵手巧的人，会做许多精巧的手工艺品。她做的风铃很好看，什么形状的都有，颜色各异，挂在我家窗前，非常漂亮，特别是风铃下的有些小装饰好看极了，每当有风吹起的时候，它们就会发出悦耳的铃声，那声音像是长了翅膀，能飞得很远很远。

你知道吗?我妈妈一洗澡就半个钟头。她做家务也非常干净。早上5点起床做早餐给一家人吃，早上9点就去市场买菜，回来后就做一做家务。到了11点就做饭。下午2点洗衣服，3点做家务。她的家务范围是：扫地，洗衣服，拖地，洗碗，等等家务，数也数不清。晚上她常常说：“唉~今天家务好多做得我腰酸背痛。”爸爸和姐姐，我都没话可说。其实我们想帮她，不过我们一帮她。她就说：“走开走开，你们做得不干净。”

你说我的妈妈是不是很又爱干净和勤劳?

The first thing I did was I made a plan for my study. I assigned my

homework equally according to the holidays so that I can finish all of them in

time. And during my winter vacation, we welcome the most important festival in

China—Spring Festival, it’s also called Chinese New Year by lots of

foreigners.

At that night, our family came together and had a big meal. Of course we

had dumplings that night, because that is our Chinese traditional. We then watch

the CCTV spring festival evening party together and watch the beautiful

fireworks. That’s the happiest time in this world! The winter vacation I had

dreamed all year around was finally coming. And I really enjoyed a lot from

it.

The first thing I did was I made a plan for my study. I assigned my

homework equally according to the holidays so that I can finish all of them in

time. I also arranged myself the books and words I need to read and recite.

Secondly, I took some extracurricular activities and read some English original

reading. My favorite book is , written by Sherlock Holmes. Among all the

classical movies, the Sound of Music was the most exciting one. During my

holidays I also made some assistance for my physical class teacher, surely I met

lots of difficulties in this stage and from which I knew what perseverance

really was. Lastly, I went to the temple fair and was lucky to taste several

Chinese traditional dishes; “Jiaohua chicken” is one of them. It is said it

originated from Hangzhou centuries ago, made by a famous beggar Hong Qi Gong,

the senior leader of Beggar Gang.Steamed with fresh lotus leaf wrapped up,it is

famous for its special aroma and taste. Now that the holiday is ending and a new

semester is coming, I need to fresh up and get started to embrace the upcoming

challenges.