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1000学会宽容议论文高考满分
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+ 加入清单宽容是种非凡的气度,是对人的包容。宽容是芬芳的花朵,友谊是它坚实的果实。宽容是冬天里一杯暖暖的香茶……
炎热的夏日,我到朋友家里去玩儿,玩儿的时候一不小心把一个精致的小玻璃水杯给摔坏了。水杯落的时候,我眼睁睁地看着它从我手中落到地上,清脆地水杯破裂声传入我的耳中。我低下头,心中愧疚死了。朋友听到声音便跑了过来,看到地上的零心碎片,眼睛一瞪。那样子,可把我吓惨了。我连忙诚心诚意的向她道了歉,并试图把地上的玻璃碎片捡起来拼好,但是我再怎么拼也拼不好,因为它摔的“一粒一粒”的……“没关系的,不就是一个小水杯吗!没什么大不了的,你不要自责了。”她是哭是笑的对我说。当时我很震惊,难道她真的就原谅我了?没怎么容易吧。
正在我对她的“行为"”产生“怀疑”的时候,她皱起眉说道:“你呀你,我说了不怪你就是不管你嘛,天天怎么那门喜欢想些不靠谱的问题,小心“涨”坏你的脑袋!”我听了这句话才稍稍放下心来,可是还是有些内疚,毕竟是我把她的水杯摔坏了,而且那是小玻璃水杯是她生日收到的第一个礼物呢!
还有一次,那是星期五吧,下午最后一节课是英语课,我听得正入神。老师说:“同学们,把第三题笔试做了。”我一听,连忙拿起手中的钢笔,不知怎么了,可能是动作幅度太大了,手一挥,弄的我的“左邻右舍”衣服上到处都是墨水。下课后,我连忙给他们道歉,道完歉后,我低下头回到座位上去。我的脸红得像火炭一样。正在我闭起眼睛的时候,坐在我旁边的同学说:“喂,不要这样好不好!”我一听,心里一惊,心里想:不好了,不好了,恐怕他要骂我了。结果他却说:”不就是一点儿墨水吗?用的着这么内疚吗?不要因为这么一点儿墨水就破坏我们同学之间的友谊好吗?”这下我才松了口气,幸好他们没有怪我,不然我这张脸往哪儿放啊!通过这些事后,使我明白了这样一个深刻的道理:人要学会宽容,带着一颗宽容之心与别人交往。
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篇1:2024年高考英语作文框架大全
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+ 加入清单第一段一般只写三句
第一句:It is widely believed that by many people for some time that ...
第二句:One reason they think is that...
第三句:The ohter reason they hold is that...
第二段一般只写三句
第一句:While others argue that ...
第二句:They maintain that...
第三句:They also claim that...
第三段写四句
第一句:From what has been discussed above, we may come to the conclusion that ...
第二句:On the one hand, ...
第三句:On the other hand, ...
第四句:Only in this way can we ...
二、图表作文
第一段只写三句
第一句:As is shown in the graph above, we can see clearly that great changes have taken place in … from…to…
第二句:The first … years saw…
第三句:The last … years witnessed …
第二段只写四句
第一句:What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are … reasons.
第二句:Firstly, …
第三句:Secondly,…
第四句:Finally,…
第三段只写四句
第一句:How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people.
第二句:For one thing, …
第三句:For another, …
第四句:Only in this way can we successfully solve the problem.
三、现象作文
第一段只写两句
第一句:In recent years, there has been…
第二句:How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people.
第二段只写四句
第一句:What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are … reasons.
第二句:Firstly, …
第三句:Secondly,…
第四句:Finally,…
第三段只写四句
第一句:How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people.
第二句:For one thing, …
第三句:For another, …
第四句:Only in this way can we successfully solve the problem.
四、书信作文
第一段只写两句
第一句:I am writing this letter today to …
第二句:My name is … and I am …
第二段按照题目要求写:
第三段只写三句
第一句:I sincerely hope you can take my letter seriously.
第二句:Your prompt response will be highly appreciated.
第三句:Thanks a lot for your time and consideration.
五、谚语作文
第一段只写四句
第一句:It is … that …
第二句:You cannot … until you …
第三句:The more you …, the more …
第四句:If you …, you …
第二段举例写
第一句:Examples can be easily found to make a case for this proverb.
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第三句:…
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篇2:难忘的高考记忆英语作文
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+ 加入清单The Memory About College Entrance Exam
The college entrance exam is a big exam for students, they have learned so many years for the purpose of entering the college. For most person, they have the very deep impression about the big exam, it has changes so many people’s destinies. I had taken part in the exam, I remember it clearly, the situation just like happened yesterday. I studied so hard, in those days that were nearing the exam, all the students focus their attention on the study, we fought together. The paper and the books were piled up our desks, when I entered the classroom, I hardly could see my classmates’ heads. Though it was the tough days for us, we felt happy, because we fought for our future, we believe what we do will bring us a promising future. These memories will linger on my mind forever.
高考对于学生来说是一个大的考试,他们已经学了那么多年,目的是考上大学。对于大部分人来说,他们对于这个重大的考试有很深的印象,它改变了很多人的命运。我已经参加了高考,我能清楚地记得它,那情形就像发生在昨天。我很努力学习,在那些接近考试的日子,所有的学生都集中他们的精力来学习,我们一起奋斗。那些书本和试卷堆满了我们的桌子,当我今日教室时,我几乎看不到同学的头。虽然那些日子很艰苦,但是我们觉得很开心,因为我们为未来奋斗,我们相信所做的会让我们的将来更加的明朗。这些记忆将永存在我的脑海里
篇3:支教的意义英语高考作文
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+ 加入清单The benefit of volunteering
As we all know, volunteering has a meaningful and positive impact on the community you serve and the people you help. In the meanwhile, it can have many benefits for you, too. In my opinion, there are two reasons to
volunteer: feel good about yourself while helping others; build your portfolio.
On one hand, volunteering makes you feel good about yourself on a purely selfish level. There are few things more satisfying than helping people. Hammering nails on a new home while the owner beams with pride right next to you is an amazing feeling. Walking or running to raise funds for a cause close to your heart helps to give you a sense of purpose and helps you realize just how lucky you are. As a volunteer, you will gain new perspective, for it’s so easy for us all to get a little too wrapped up in our own lives. On the other hand, from a professional standpoint, volunteering is a great way to add to your portfolio. From press releases to design pieces, from public speaking to fundraising,
you will have the opportunity to build your portfolio. This is especially beneficial for students or young professionals, although all of us should continually work on building our portfolios.
Apart from the benefits of building up your confidence and making your portfolio better, there are probably many other benefits you will find in your volunteer work. So it is time for you to participate in more volunteer work to help others as well as help yourselves.
篇4:2024高考优秀议论文:坚持就是胜利
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+ 加入清单有这样一个故事:两个实力相当的拳击手,一路过关斩将,所向无敌,最后两强相遇,站在了决胜台上。俩人旗鼓相当,难分胜负,几十个回合下来,已是筋疲力尽,只能靠最后一点力量支撑着自己不倒下。于是,他们一动不动地注视着对方,时间一秒一秒地过去了,终于,其中一个倒下了,裁判员开始计时:“1、2、3……10”。话音未落,胜利的拳击手因体力不支当场昏迷。此时,倒在地上的失败者痛悔不已:“我为什么就不能再坚持那么一点点!”
“成大事不在于力量的大小,而在于能坚持多久。”失败者之所以失败就在于少了那么一点点的坚持。“立志不坚,终不济事”,这在我们的学习生活中也是司空见惯的。
因为我的英语成绩总是处于“半瓶子水”状态,爸爸就给我买了一套《疯狂英语》教材,希望我能在英语上多下点功夫。我也计划三天熟记一张速记卡,一年完成初级教材。开始的时候我很认真,不懂的单词一一查阅注释,得空就拿出来读读背背,三天一卡轻松过关。可时间一长就把学习热情磨没了。而今,《疯狂英语》已“睡”成了过去时,英语成绩自然也是不进则退。
由此可见,有始无终是坚持的最大障碍,没有坚定的目标和坚强的毅力,坚持是很难做到的。所谓“锲而舍之,朽木不折;锲而不舍,金石可镂”,真正要做到锲而不舍,是一个艰难而漫长的过程,并非想像中的那么简单,对此,我深有体会。
自上初中以来,妈妈要求我每天放学后把一天所学的课程总结到日记本上。开始我感觉很新鲜,欣然接受,坚持一天一张纸。后来,作业多了,觉得总结既麻烦又浪费时间,就不想写了,一天,两天,三天……直到被妈逮个正着,加倍罚写。在妈妈的高压政策下,我只好应付,同时,我对每日一结的厌恶也与日俱增,心中有说不出的委屈和抗议。再后来,和妈妈一起看了一个教育讲座,那个让我佩服不已的教育专家明确提出了“不复习不作业”的观点,使我认识到妈妈的要求并不是无稽之谈,每日一结不正是专家提出的作业前的复习整理吗?!于是,我主动要求以口头复述的形式来总结,暂时抛开让我厌烦的日记本,每天放学后给妈妈复述一天的学习内容。渐渐地,我有了收获。以前是为了应付而应付,为了完成而完成,因为外在的形势而忽视了内容。现在,我在简明扼要的复述中,再次查找错误,排解难点,达到了重复学习、查漏补缺和加深巩固的目的。
如今,每日一结已陪我走过了两年的时间,虽然有过放弃,有过厌烦,有过叛逆,有过吵闹,但是,我坚持下来了。因为有了认识,我选择了坚持;因为变通了方式,我接受了坚持;因为获得了收益,我坚定了坚持。
“骐骥一跃,不能十步;驽马十驾,功在不舍。”我相信,只要有正确的坚持,就一定能到达胜利的塔尖。
篇5:2024年高考英语作文预测:吸烟的危害
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+ 加入清单The majority of people would agree that cigarette smoking has caused serious problems. But the tobacco companies insist that they contribute greatly to the world economy by paying taxes to the government and employing hundreds of workers.
Personally, I believe that cigarette production and consumption threatens to do more harm than good. Firstly, smoking is responsible for many fatal diseases such as lung cancer, heart diseases and so on. According to the survey, tobacco consumers account for about 20% of the world population, and among them, three million people die from smoking-related diseases every year. The fact that the output of tobacco production is reduced from 143.64 billion pounds in 1994 to 142 billion pounds in 1995 also suggests that people have come to realize the negative effects of smoking. Secondly, tobacco consumption is extremely wasteful of money. As is indicated in the pictures, 200 billion US dollars is lost due to smoking each year. Obviously, the total loss of money around the globe substantially exceeds the gain in the industry.
In conclusion, as the economic development aims at making our life better, we cannot sacrifice our health for short-term financial benefits. If we have to spend more and more money providing medical services for those who suffer from smoking-related illnesses, the notion of promoting economy via tobacco production is not justifiable. It is high time that we fought for the total tobacco ban.
大多数人认为吸烟引起了严重的问题。但烟草公司坚持认为,他们为世界经济带来很大的纳税,政府和雇佣数百名工人。
就我个人而言,我认为香烟生产和消费可能弊大于利。首先,吸烟是负责许多致命的疾病,如肺癌,心脏病等等。据调查,烟草消费者约占世界人口的20%,其中,每年有三百万人死于和吸烟有关的疾病。烟草生产的产量是降低1436.4亿年从1436.4亿年的1994磅到1436.4亿磅也表明,人们已经意识到吸烟的负面影响。其次,烟草消费是非常浪费钱。图片所示,2000亿美元每年损失是由于吸烟。显然,全球资金的总损失大大超过业内获得。
总之,随着经济发展旨在使我们的生活更好,我们不能为了短期的经济利益而牺牲我们的健康。如果我们花越来越多的钱为那些遭受吸烟有关的疾病提供医疗服务,促进经济的概念通过烟草生产是不合理的。是时候,我们争取总烟草禁令。
篇6:快餐高考英语作文
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+ 加入清单Fast food business has developed tremendously in the past 50 years.Nowadays people will see all kinds of fast food restaurants here and there.which clearly shows how closely it is related to our daily life.Most people believe that fast food business has become part of our life and its developement is good for both society and people.
Firstly,the best thing about fast food is being fast. Now everyone lives a busy life so time is the most valuable thing to us all.Fast food offers a most efficient way to eat.You will waste no time in waiting or choosing.Secondly,fast food restaurants provide us with a good environment for entertainment and study.Friends come here,chatting or playing cards;students come here,reading books or doing homework,and meanwhile you can enjoy a bag of chips and a bottle of cola which will bring more pleasure.Thirdly, youngsters can even find good opportunities of working practice in some fast food restaurants.Working experience help them understand the society better and improve their communicating skills.
In many ways,we benefit a lot from the fast food business.Therefore,I think it helpful and important to our life.
篇7:高考英语作文常用写作句式句型汇总
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+ 加入清单一.开头用语:
良好的开端等于成功的一半.在写作文时,通常以最简单也最常用的方式---开门见山法。也就是说, 直截了当地提出你对这个问题的看法或要求,点出文章的中心思想。
1.议论论文:
A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages.
B. Compared to/ In comparison with letters, e-mails are more convenient.
C. When it comes to computers, some people think they have brought us a lot of convenience. However,...
D. Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside.
E. As is known to all/ As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life.
F. Why do you go to university? Different people have different points of view.
2. 书信:
A. I am writing to you to apply for admission to your university as a visiting scholar.
B. I read an advertisement in today’s China Daily and I apply for the job...
C. Thank you for your letter of May 5.D. How happy I am to receive your letter of January 9.
E. How nice to hear from you again.
3. 口头通知或介绍情况:
A. Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please. I have an announcement to make.
B. Attention, please. I have something important to tell you.
C. Mr. Green, Welcome to our school. To begin with, let me introduce Mr. Wang to you.
4. 演讲稿:
A. Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very much honored to have a chance here to make a speech on the subject -- A Balance Diet and Health.
B. Good morning everyone! Allow me, first of all, on behalf of all present here, to extend our warm welcome and cordial greeting to our distinguished guest.
二.并列用语:
as well as, not only…but (also), including,
A. Not only do computers play an important part in science and technology, but also play an informative role in our daily life.
B. All of us, including the teachers / the teachers included, will attend the lecture.
C. He speaks French as well as English.=He speaks English, and French as well.=He speaks not only English but also French.
D. E-mail, as well as telephones, is playing an important part in daily communication.
三.对比用语:
on one hand ,on the other hand, on the contrary/contrary to ..., though, for one thing ;for another, nevertheless
A. I know the Internet can only be used at home or in the office, but on the other hand, it is becoming more and more popular for much information as well as clear and vivid pictures.
B. It is hard work; I enjoy it though.
C. Contrary to what I had originally thought, the trip turned out to be fun.
四. 递进用语:
even, besides, what’s more, as for, so…that…, worse still, moreover, furthermore; but for, in addition, to make matters worse
A. The house is too small for a family of four, and furthermore/besides/what’s more/moreover /in addition/worse still , it is in a bad location.
五. 例证用语:
in one’s opinion, that is to say, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in fact, namely
A. As a matter of fact, advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.
B. There is one more topic to discuss, namely/that is ( to say ), the question of education.
六. 时序用语:
first/firstly, meanwhile, before long, ever since, while, at the same time
in the meantime, shortly after, nowadays,
A. They will be here soon. Meanwhile, let’s have coffee.
B. Firstly, let me deal with the most important difficulty.
七. 强调用语:
especially, indeed, at least, at the most, What in the world/on earth.. , not at all ,
A. Noise is unpleasant, especially when you are trying to sleep.
B What in the world/on earth are you doing?
八. 因果用语:
thanks to, because, as a result, because of/as a result of , without, with the help of..., owe ...to...
A. The company has a successful year, thanks mainly to the improvement in export sales.
B. As a result, many of us succeeded in passing the College Entrance Examinations.
九. 总结用语:
in short; briefly/ in brief ; generally speaking, in a word, as you know, as is known to all
A. Generally speaking, sending an e-mail is more convenient than sending letters.
B. In short, measures must be taken to prevent the environment being polluted.
常用句型
(一)段首句
1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to……Some people suggest that ……
2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying……Its the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, …… which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ……Second,……What makes things worse is that…….
4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays,it is common to ……. Many people like …… because …… Besides,……
5. 任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and …… is not an exception,it has both advantages
and disadvantages.
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……
People’s opinions about …… vary from person to person. Some people say that ……To them,……
7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem …… which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。
……has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
……has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that……while. Obviously,……but why?
(二)中间段落句
1. 相反,有一些人赞成……,他们相信……,而且,他们认为……。
On the contrary,there are some people in favor of……t the same time,they say……
2. 但是,我认为这不是解决……的好方法,比如……。最糟糕的是……。
But I dont think it is a very good way to solve …….For example,……Worst of all,…….
3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。首先,……。而且……,最重要的是……
……is necessary and important to our countrys development and construction. First,……Whats more, ……Most important of all,……
4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先,我们可以……。
There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can……
5. 面临……,我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……,另一方面,
Confronted with……we should take a series of effective measures to…….
For one thing,For another,
6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……,另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。
It is high time that something was done about it. For example. ……In addition.……All these measures will certainly…….
7. 为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因是……。总的来说,……的主要原因是由于……
Why…… The first reason is that ……The second reason is ……The third is…….For all this, the main cause of ……use to …….
8. 然而,正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样,……也有它的不利的一面,象……。
However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ……also has its own disadvantages, such as ……
9. 尽管如此,我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ……is more advantageous.
10. 完全同意……这种观点(陈述),主要理由如下:
I fully agree with the statement that ……because…….
(三)结尾句
1. 至于我,在某种程度上我同意后面的观点,我认为……
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ……
2. 总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来……。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ……Only in this way can ……in the future.
3. 但是,……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如,……,而……。然而,把这两者相比较,我更倾向于(喜欢)……
But ……and……have heir own advantages. For example, …… while……
Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to……
4. 就我个人而言,我相信……,因此,我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……
Personally, I believe that…… Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because……
5. 随着社会的发展,……。因此,迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量,这个社会将要变得越来越好。
With the development of society, ……So its urgent and necessary to ……If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
6. 至于我(对我来说,就我而言),我认为……更合理。只有这样,我们才能……
For my part, I think it reasonable to…… Only in this way can you……
7. 对我来说,我认为有必要……。原因如下:第一,……; 第二,……;最后……但同样重要的是……
In my opinion, I think it necessary to……The reasons are as follows. First ……second …… Last but not least,……
8. 在总体上很难说……是好还是坏,因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而,就我个人而言,我发现……。
It is difficult to say whether ……is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of…….however, from a personal point of view find……
9. 综上所述,我们可以清楚地得出结论……
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that……
10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法,就可能控制不了这种趋势,就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果,所以,我们应该做的是……
If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is
常用句型:
开头:
When it comes to ..., some think ...
There is a public debate today that ...
A is a commen way of ..., but is it a wise one?
Recentaly the problem has been brought into focus.
提出观点:
Now there is a growing awareness that...
It is time we explore the truth of ...
Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.
进一步提出观点:
... but that is only part of the history.
Another equally important aspect is ...
A is but one of the many effects. Another is ... Besides, other reasons are...
提出假想例子的方式:
Suppose that...
Just imagine what would be like if...
It is reasonable to expect...
It is not surprising that...
举普通例子:
For example(instance),...
... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)
A good case in point is...
A particular example for this is...
引用:
One of the greatest early writers said ...
"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...
"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
"......". How often we hear such words like there.
讲故事
(先说故事主体),this story is not rare.
..., such delimma we often meet in daily life.
..., the story still has a realistic significance.
提出原因:
There are many reasons for ...
Why .... , for one thing,...
The answer to this problem involves many factors.
Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...
The first reason can be obiviously seen.
Most people would agree that...
Some people may neglect that in fact ...
Others suggest that...
Part of the explanation is ...
进行对比:
The advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of...
Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...
Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.
A maybe ... , but it suffers from the disadvantage that...
承上启下:
To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see...
A study of ... will make this point clear
让步:
Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...
I do not deny that A has its own merits.
结尾:
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw
the conclusion that ...
In summary, it is wiser ...
In short...
篇8:高考英语作文写作的技巧盘点
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+ 加入清单从每年的考试情况来看,很多同学能完整地按照要求把文章写出来,但得分却较低。实际上,高考英语书面表达是一个分值颇高且易得分的题型,只是很多同学没有掌握得分技巧。下面我们一起看看怎样才能让高考作文拽起来。
一、几点重要原则
1.智者利用押题,傻子依赖押题!
2.书面表达整篇背诵绝无必要,可以以看读为主,关键是从中汲取一些常用的词汇和表达,并能得体熟练地运用。考场上应变能力很重要!
3.英文写作模仿很重要。有时也很有效。但不能过于牵强,尤其是对一些长难句的刻意模仿使用。
4.文似看山不喜平,起承转合一定要有!
5.见微知著,一叶知秋,几个亮点足矣:有道是:浓妆淡抹总相宜,作文写得简洁到位要比长篇大论更显功力。
6.心不为形役。不要身陷逐字逐句英汉对号式的字面翻译,要把表达的主动权始终握在自己手里。
二、善用万能句以不变应万变
历届高考,书面表达考得最多是提示作文,即提供一定的情景内容,要求考生完成100词左右的短文。
从命题方式看,有短文提示、要点提示、图画提示、情景提示以及图表提示等;体裁以应用文为主,记叙文为辅:题材为广大中学生所熟悉的日常生活。从提供要点的情景方面看,历届高考书面表达题均属供料小作文,采用文字供料或文字说明加图画(图表)的方式供料。
备考时,同学们要利用有限的时间把以前背的范文整理一下,从中选出不同体裁、不同题材的范文各一篇(范文以高考真题的高分作文为佳),把它们重新记忆,一定记牢。这样,高考时不管什么样的文章都可套用背诵好的格式。避免考场上因紧张而无章可循。
最后阶段,还要总结一下写作时常用且能出彩的固定句型、句式,比如强调句型、定语从句、名诃性从句等,牢记英语的五个基本句式,背诵平时老师总结的万能句。以不变应万变。
考场答题前,应仔细审题,研究所提供的文字和图画(图表)材料和作文要求。分析、提炼要点,理顺要点,确立基本的写作思路,不要忽略任何一个词。关键的词更不能遗漏,构思好写几个方面,缺一不可。
写作时,尽量用学过的英语句型和词组。少写长句和复杂句以免弄巧成拙、漏洞百出。但目前高考有关书面表达的评分标准要求作文中应有较多的语法结构和词汇,因此同学们在书面表达中不能都写小句、短句和单句,还要正确运用高级词汇和复杂结构。恰当运用过渡词,使写出来的文章含金量更高,更具可读性。
三、高分作文六大特性
1.条理性。指的是合理安排文章结构。首先,在文章思路、组织材料、叙述顺序等方面要有一定的条理性。其次。根据需要,安排好段落,各段之间要层次分明,也要重视每一段的开头和结尾,开头语往往是总起句,结尾语往往是总结句。
2.准确性。指要求写出语法正确的句子,包括时态、语态、用词和句法等,要准确、地道地表达。必须要牢牢掌握一些常用句型或习惯表达,避免中式英语,在实践中不断总结中英用法的差异,养成用英语思维写作的习惯。
3.流畅性。指根据整篇文章思想的需要,有效采用不同的连接手段,使文章层次清楚、行文连贯。
4.简洁多样性。简洁性就是语言简洁,不重复。多样性就是能随情景内容的变化写出句式多样的语句。这也是新课程标准对写作的评价标准。
5.思想性。新标准对写作的要求,增加了情感因素,在准确流畅表达写作要点的同时,适当增加句子的感情色彩,增加一些人情味,使文章读起来更亲切,完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。
6.美观性。指的是卷面书写规范、清楚、干净、整洁。
四、怎样才能有拽的感觉
1.高考写作的实质变相考查句型与词汇的灵活应用
英语写作不同于语文作文的写作,如果说语文作文是一个自由发挥的舞蹈,那么高考英语写作就是带着枷锁在跳舞。我之所以这样来形容,是因为高考英语写作的内容都已经通过文字、表格、图片这三种形式给定,内容方面,不需要学生进行发挥,大家所需要发挥的就是不要老去给这个不变的内容穿毫无变化的校服(简单句),而要去穿一些不一样的衣服,让它显得不那么单调,让阅卷老师能看到不同,而那些所谓的衣服也就是多变句型与词汇。
2.写作的评分标准怎么去迎合评卷老师的胃口
我了解到目前很大一部分学生的作文都处在15分左右,写作满分25分,15分也就是个及格分,那么15分和20多分的作文到底差在哪里?这个问题很容易回答。15分的作文中规中矩,该对的都对,包括内容要点的完整,语法与词形的正确,但是全都是简单句子的堆砌,没有任何亮点。而20多分的作文在句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装,它的句子穿的衣服已经不是校服,而是李宁、耐克,或者是阿迪,所以让人觉得很拽,而高考英语写作要的就是这种很拽的感觉。
3.写作提分的三要素句型。连词。高级词汇
句子是我们写作文最大的单位。有了漂亮的句子。用好的连词将其连句成段,再加上一些如星星般亮点词汇的点缀,一篇好的高考英语作文就诞生了。而这三个因素中最容易把握的是句子,最难的是高级词汇,限于大家的词汇还比较有限。一篇文章中出现那么一两个就够了。我们应该把重心放在句型上,因为这个最容易把握。
但是大家又有这样的困惑,学校里老师也给了我们很多的句型啊,动辄成五十上百句的,大家背得挺多,但是面对考试的时候,发现背的那些怎么也用不上。其实不是那些东西没有用,而是它们太干了,就好比一根干骨头,大家嚼起来很没有味。也不知道该把它们往哪里放。
在这里我给大家提供一种比较切实可行、迅速提高的练习方法,在接下来的时间里只要大家按照这个方法来,就一定会有收获。
找出历年真题,一周只需要写两篇。但是要这么来写。
1.把你要写的内容要点用九到十句的汉语表达出来。
2.逐一地进行翻译,不是用简单句。而是要刻意地去想:
(1)可以用什么样的复杂句;
(2)怎样去避开不会的表达,转义。
例如:
这本书是如此的有趣,以至于我读了一遍又一遍。
1.This book was so interest,ing that l read it again and again,
2.This was such an interest,ing book that l read it again andagain,
3.This was s0 jnteresting abook that l read it again and again
4.So interesting was thisbook that l read it again and again
这四句译文当中无疑评卷老师最欣赏的是第四句,因为它用了倒装。
4.如何备考
其实这种思维大家都有。但是没有成为一种思路,让它能在考试中起到作用,那是因为大家练得少。英语写作处在一种很尴尬的境地,一方面大家要分数。但另外一方面大家一个学期里写的作文也就是期中期末的两篇。毫不夸张地说,有的学生上了三年的高中可能只写了六篇作文,所以练习是很重要的,要是现在不练而把高考当练习。那么作文只拿14、15分也合情合理了,到那时你不要骂评卷老师不公平,而应该问问自己备考的时候为什么不多练几篇。时间都是挤出来的,希望大家可以挤出时间来练写作。
篇9:2024年高考作文万能开头和结尾范本
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+ 加入清单1.一张贺卡,就是一份温馨的友情,一份热情的祝愿。它把春的信息捎来,它把爱的种子撒播,它把美好的祝福传达,它把人间的真情传递。
2.我们做事不应该空眼其大而不屑其小,它会使我们变的好高务远,不切实际;也不应该念其粗而忘其细;而应该脚踏实地,粗中有细,完成任务。
3.我将是一架护航机,让所有的劫机者头破血流,不让“9.11”的悲剧重演;我将是一个智能法官,让冤案重洗,让罪犯束手就擒;我将是一辆无敌坦克,让所有的来犯者焦头烂额;我将是一位自由女神,让所有的人不受压迫;我将是一个纳米医生,让所有的绝病病人起死回生;我将是一只保护森林、河流、自然界的神鹰,让我们的家园更加美丽。
4.心灵是一方广袤的天空,它包容着世间的一切;心灵是一片宁静的湖水,偶尔也会泛起阵阵涟漪;心灵是一块皑皑的雪原,它辉映出一个缤纷的世界。
5.痛苦是黑暗中的摸索,前进的路途中满是坎坷;痛苦是无人理解的悲哀,无助的面对一切挫折;痛苦是心灵最深的折磨,无泪且无法直言;痛苦是天生没有的表情,是烦恼中的恶魔。
6、悲观的人,先被自己打败,然后才被生活打败;乐观的人,先战胜自己,然后才战胜生活。悲观的人,所受的痛苦有限,前途也有限;乐观的人,所受的磨难无量,前途也无量。在悲观的人眼里,原来可能的事也能变成不可能;在乐观的人眼里,原来不可能的事也能变成可能。悲观只能产生平庸,乐观才能造就卓绝。从卓绝的人那里,我们不难发现乐观的精神;从平庸的人那里,我们很容易找到阴郁的影子。
7、坚持的昨天叫立足,坚持的今天叫进取,坚持的明天叫成功。
8、如果只看到太阳的黑点,那你的生活将缺少温暖;如果你只看到月亮的阴影,那么你的生命历程将难以找到光明;如果你总是发现朋友的缺点,你么你的人生旅程将难以找到知音;同样,如果你总希望自己完美无缺,假设你的这一愿望真的能如愿以偿,那么你最大的缺点就是没有缺点。
9、喜马拉雅直冲霄汉,可上面有攀爬者的旗帜;撒哈拉沙漠一望无垠,可里面有跋涉者的脚印;阿尔卑斯山壁立千仞,可其中有探险者的身影;雅鲁藏布江湍急浩荡,可其中有勇敢者的故事。
10、流逝的日子像一片片凋零的枯叶与花瓣,渐去渐远的是青春的纯情与浪漫。不记得曾有多少雨飘在胸前风响在耳畔,只知道沧桑早已漫进了我的心爬上了我的脸。当一个人与追求同行,便坎坷是伴,磨难也是伴。
11、月有阴晴圆缺,人有悲欢离合,命有否泰变化,年有四季更替,熬过长夜,你便能见到黎明,饱受痛苦,你便能拥有快乐,耐过寒冬,你便无须蛰伏,落尽寒梅,你便能企盼新春。
12、没有蓝天的深邃,可以有白云的飘逸;没有大海的壮阔,可以有小溪的优雅;没有原野的芬芳,可以有小草的翠绿。生活中没有旁观者的席位,我们总可以找到自己的位置,自己的光源,自己的声音。
13、或许是命运的不幸注定要将自己缤纷多彩的梦撞碎;或许是天地的无情终归要将自己继日的辛勤当做泡影放飞,或许是许许多多的难以理解却又实实在在的障碍与挫折早已将意气丰发的拼搏与百折不挠的进击化为道道忧愁阵阵孤寂,那么就请在凄惨中反省我们自己吧!
14、“成功的花,人们只惊羡它现时的明艳;而当初的芽,却浸透了奋斗的泪泉,洒满了牺牲的血雨。”(冰心语)我们每个人都渴望成功,那么我们就应该在刚刚起步的时候,用我们无悔的付出,去浇灌隔那刚刚萌芽的种子。
15、每一滴水都折射出一个多彩的世界,每一双眼睛都嵌进一个多彩的世界,每一条泛着清丽的旋律的小溪都闪烁着美的光辉。不要空叹人世的无奈,且用美丽的心情来看待人世的繁华多彩,细细品味那无处不在的美吧!
16、也许你只是一株稚嫩的幼苗,然而只要坚忍不拔。终会成为参天大树;
也许你只是一条涓涓小溪,然而只要锲而不舍,。终会拥抱大海;
也许你只是一只雏鹰,然而只要心存高远,跌几个跟头,终会翱翔蓝天。
17、当雏鹰尚嗷嗷待哺于巢穴之中,观望蓝天白云之时,它已有了梦想,那就是振翅九霄,与蓝天搏击,与白云共舞;当骏马休憩于栅栏之中,昂首长嘶之时,它也已有了梦想,那就是奋蹄原野,驰骋天下。
18、冰雪覆盖的时候,我们需要一团火来取暖;暗夜无边的时候,我们需要点点星光来取暖;前途茫茫时,我们需要一盏航灯来取暖……四季轮回,心里滤不去的是烦恼和忧愁,脚下略不去的是艰辛和伤痛。寒天冷日,让我们用什么来温暖迎风而立的自己?留些真诚给自己取暖吧!
19、大海如果失去巨浪的翻滚,也就失去了雄浑;沙漠如果失去了飞沙的狂舞,也就失去了壮美;人生如果失去了真实的历程,也就失去了意义。
20、一条幽径,曲折迂回中总会激起心旷神怡的向往;一波巨澜,潮起潮落时更能叠出惊心动魄的鸣响;一个故事,遗憾悲婉里才有肝肠寸段的凄凉;一种人生,跌宕困顿中方显惊世骇俗的豪壮。
21、年轻人,来生要记住,在迷津渡口千万别选错。诚信是人生幸福的源泉,不可丢。仅以此诗作结:
迷津渡口诚信抛,
一生苦恨悔难消。
且将虚伪付江澜,
斩闯红尘任逍遥。
25、陆游曾说:“谁能养气塞天地,吐出自足成虹霓。”即使你没有博大的思想,但你有意识,也就拥有了发言权,站起来吧,像王朔叫板金庸一样,舞出自我生命的亮点。
篇10:高考满分英语作文:是否该重建圆明园
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Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?
Yuanmingyuan, “Garden of all gardens”, was burnt and fell into ruins in 1860. Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.
Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization. And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history.
Those who disagree think it more reasonable to keep the garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past. We should never forget the history. Other buildings like Palace Museum and Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isn’t necessary to rebuild this garden. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district.
Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan , which will add beauty to the city . What’s more , the new scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development of the local.
【译文】
圆明园,“所有园林花园”,被烧毁成废墟1860年下降。最近我的同学们进行了关于是否应该重建与否的讨论。
重建的花园支持者说,只有这样,我们才能看到花园的,它反映了中国文明的原始景象。这将是一个供游客感兴趣的地方。如果部分重建,它将提供一个比较和帮助我们记住历史。
谁不同意那些认为较合理的保持这样的花园。该遗址将提醒过我们。我们决不能忘记历史。如故宫博物院,颐和园等其他建筑物也可以是中华文化的象征,所以没有必要重建此园。有些人还担心会破坏环境建设的推移,当在此区。
个人而言,这是明智的重建圆明园,这将增加美丽的城市。更重要的是,新的景区,无疑会促进地方经济发展。
篇11:关于中秋节高考英语作文
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+ 加入清单August 15 is one of the most important festivals of the Chinese nation -- the Mid-Autumn festival. On that day, people ate moon cakes, the moon, some places and lanterns, very lively.
The reason for the Mid-Autumn festival is that August is the second month of the autumn, the ancient time is called midautumn, because it is in the autumn and the middle of August, the folk are called Mid-Autumn festival.
On the eve of the Mid-Autumn festival, relatives and friends give gifts to each other, because moon cakes symbolize reunion. The styles of mooncakes are also full of beautiful fruit, such as pineapple, red dates, orange, and my favorite ice moon cakes...
On the day of the Mid-Autumn festival, people bought all kinds of things except moon cakes. Most of them were eaten. In the evening, the family ate reunion dinner, looking forward to the dark sky, hoping the moon would come out earlier.
At night, the moon came out, like a large disk. At this time, the family moved the tables and chairs and tea sets to the balcony, and all kinds of mooncakes were taken together. They looked at the moon, and remembered their loved ones who could not go home. Some people raise a cup in the moonlight, the hope is good; Fireworks rise and bloom in the night sky!
The Mid-Autumn festival is a joyous occasion for our family. It is a time for us to miss our loved ones. It is an indelible day.
篇12:2024高考议论文论据素材:细节见风骨
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+ 加入清单一屋不扫,何以扫天下?古人云:细节决定成败。以下是小编带来的2017高考议论文论据素材:细节见风骨,希望对你有帮助。
明朝朱棣发动靖难一役时,解缙与方孝孺、胡广、周是修、王艮等七位名士相约要为建文皇帝死节,以标忠贞不二的千古风骨。各自回到家后,解缙变让家人悄悄去打探胡广有什么动静。家人回来说:“没什么动静,只听胡大人问‘猪喂了没有?’解缙一听,心里一下子轻松了,说:“一猪尚不肯舍,况肯舍生命乎?”于是他也心安理得地选择了活。只有方孝孺壮烈殉国,周是修被杀,王艮服毒自尽,而其他四人,老实老实地做了贰臣。
明末的洪承畴,兵败被俘后,不吃不喝不言不动,好像真的要宁死不屈一样。老友范文程去看他,回来对多尔衮说:“他肯定不是一个死节之臣,我和他闲聊时,房梁上掉下一点灰尘落在衣服上,他赶忙掸掉了,一件衣服都舍不得,他肯舍掉性命吗?”果不其然,找了个美人去劝降,洪承畴就当了大清朝的“开国元勋”。
细节可见操守,细节可见精神。国家的兴亡,事业的成败,人格的高下,都可以通过一个小小的细节传递出丰富的信息。善于透过细节识人,知事,洞见未来;善于把握细节,可以认真地经营生命,赢得成功。
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篇13:2024年12月英语四六级作文万能模板:感谢信
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+ 加入清单Dear_________,
I am writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude for___________.Had it not been for your assistance in ___________,I fear that ___________may not have____________.I’d like you to know that your help __________.It not only____________,but also__________.I shall always remember__________.
I hope that I will have the opportunity of returning your hospitality by inviting you to ______.Will you kindly let me know whether you____________?I am looking forward to seeing you soon!
Again,I would like to express my thanks to .Please accept my appreciatin and pass my best wishes on to ____________.I hope to hear from you soon.
篇14:高考英语作文:机器人的影响
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+ 加入清单导语:几个世纪以来,人们就幻想,有一天也有智慧的机器能像人类工作和忠实的仆人。今天,这个梦想已经在许多领域由于研究人工智能的迅速发展成真。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Intelligent machines such as robots are increasingly being used.They can do many things that used to be done by human.Discuss the benefits and dangers.
For centuriespeople have fantasized that someday machines could have intelligence like mankind and work as faithful servants.Today this dream has come true in many fields thanks to rapid development in artificial intelligence research.Wonderful as this seemsmachines have problems.
To begin withpeople lose jobs when machines take their placesespecially in the mass production industry such as automobile business.In factories of the famous car company Fordalmost every step of car making is done by giant robots that work faster with higher reliability and precision than human labor.Because of the adoption of robotsthousands of workers are put out of their old jobs and forced to make changes in their work.Even such changes create job opportunities because robots need people to take care of and operatethe number of new jobs is much smaller than that of lostthus causing huge pressure on the labor market and government.
People become less smart because of the wide use of machines in their life.Nowadays people need to use their brain less than they did in the past.Everything is programmed and the only thing we need to do is to push a button or throw on a switch.This has given us great convenience but made us lazier and less smart.Everyone has the awkward moment troubling with the spelling of a simple word when writing with a pen.But with a computerit will automatically proofread the spelling and grammar of your writing.So people become less concerned with learning things right.This is not a progress but a regress of our intelligence and culture.
But machines have many benefits that nobody can deny such as great work efficiency and low cost of mass production.The workload that could take months to finish by manual labor could be done flawlessly by robots in minutes.We have more purchasing power to enjoy a wider variety of goods and services because of the reduction of production costs with factories using machines.Other benefits include that machines could do dangerous jobs for people in high risk businesses like mining and construction.
To concludemachines have many merits that make our life easier and more convenientbut they have caused many problems such as undercutting our job opportunities and overdependence on machines.
【参考译文】
机器人等智能机器正越来越多地被使用,他们可以做许多人类以前做过的事情,讨论它的好处和危险.。
几个世纪以来,人们就幻想,有一天也有智慧的机器能像人类工作和忠实的仆人。今天,这个梦想已经在许多领域由于研究人工智能的迅速发展成真。这似乎是最棒的,机器有问题。
首先,人们失去工作的机器取代他们的位置的时候,特别是在大规模生产汽车行业等业务。在著名的福特汽车公司的汽车制造工厂,几乎每一步都是由巨型机器人工作速度比人力更高的可靠性和精度。由于采用机器人,把从他们的旧的工作和被迫改变他们的工作是成千上万的工人。即使这样的变化创造就业机会,因为机器人需要人照顾和操作,新增工作岗位的数量要小得多的流失,造成巨大的压力对劳动力市场和政府。
聪明的人越来越少,因为机器在他们的生活中广泛使用。现在人们需要使用他们的大脑比他们在过去所做的,一切都是程序,我们唯一需要做的就是按下一个按钮或扔在一个开关。这给了我们很大的便利,却使我们越来越不聪明的。每个人都有尴尬的时刻困扰的一个简单的单词拼写时用钢笔写。但有一个计算机,它会自动检查拼写和语法的写作。这样的人越来越少,学习有关的事情。这不是进步而是倒退了我们的智力和文化。
但是机器有许多好处,没有人可以否认大工作效率和低成本大批量生产。工作量可能需要几个月时间才能完成的体力劳动可以完美无缺的机器人以分钟完成。我们有了更多的购买力来享受更多种类的商品和服务的生产成本和工厂使用机器减少。其他的福利包括机器可以做高风险业务如采矿和建筑的人危险的工作。
最后,机器有许多优点,使我们的生活更轻松、更方便,但会引起如削弱我们的工作机会和过度依赖机器的许多问题。
篇15:常用议论文万能素材:追求
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+ 加入清单左宗棠抬棺出征1876年,65岁的左宗棠抬棺出征,誓与故人决一死战,一举收复天山南北,粉碎了英、俄侵略新疆的阴谋。他的居室有一副对联:“身无半亩地,心怀天下,读破万卷书,神交古人。”表现了将军的忘我追求。
孙冶方不改追求著名经济学家孙冶方文革期间遭受39次批斗,入狱7年,仍不改追求,至力于社会主义经济的研究,他撰写《社会主义经济论》,已写好的文章常常不翼而飞,前后共写了85遍,这种追求真理的精神令人钦佩。
篇16:高考语文作文万能开头结尾原则二:自然收束
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+ 加入清单例:(开头)人生,其实就是一次过程,很多事,很多人,失败过,经历过才会懂,才会成熟。当失败来临的时候,不要伤悲,而应该看作是一次成长的机会,一次锻炼的机会。冲过去,会更美好、更灿烂的生活等着你,更会有一番成就感;如果退而不前,那只能迎来更多的失败,更多人生的遗憾。
(结尾)当我们快要走完人生路时,回首这一生,特别是那些困难和失败时,会觉得,或许正是由于这些,丰富了我们的人生,战胜、克服了它们,才让我们的人生更加完美无瑕。
篇17:2024年高考英语写作指导:写人篇
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+ 加入清单写人的英语作文在高考中不少见,什么样的作文更能吸引人呢?下面请看语文迷为大家带来的技巧。
写人记叙文,一般为肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写,应根据要求,灵活掌握,突出重点。
【几点注意】
1.使用正确人称和时态。
①时态:
一般现在时--描写人物外貌、性格、兴趣等
一般过去时-- 描写人物出生、教育背景、经历、事迹
②人称:第一人称或第三人称
2.介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等,包括所给的全部信息点,不能遗漏或随意添加。
3.对所给的信息进行适当重组,安排好写作顺序,突出重点信息。
4.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。
【常见词语】
①外貌特征:
pretty, beautiful, good-looking,handsome,ordinary-looking, with a big nose, with a big
smile, short, tall,thin, strong, white-haired,1.80 metres tall, …
②性格特点:
absent-minded, charming, attractive, bright, wise smart, confident, naughty,talkative, diligent,
lazy, friendly, generous, be ready to help others,kind-hearted, warm-hearted, patient, humorous,
have a good/ bad temper, independent,narrow-minded, …
③童年情况:
as a boy of 15, be born on, during his childhood, live a happy/hard life, the son of a poor family,
spend his childhood in, ...
④兴趣爱好: be delighted in doing, be good at , be interested in , be fond of , be crazy about, be pleased with, do well in, enjoy doing, have a strong desire to do, long for/long to do), take a pleasure in doing,…
⑤教育背景: be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a master’s
degree, get on well with one’s lessons, go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from,major in, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, take an active part in, …
⑥ 成就或事迹:
become a member of the team, encourage sb to do sth, give up one’s life for sth, receive the
Nobel Prize for physics, set a new world record of,win the first prize in, win a gold /silver/ bronze
medal, have a talent for, make up one’s mind to do sth., put one’s heart into, work hard at,
concentrate oneself to, devote oneself to,do sth.with great determination and perseverance, ...
⑦他人评价:
an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by , be honored as, be
considered/regarded as, be famous/known as,his hard work brought him great success, make
great contributions to our country, set a good example for , be highly spoken of for, ...
例文
你班要举办以“Ordinary but Great”为题的英语主题班会。
请根据下列信息准备一篇发言稿,介绍赵郁的成长经历。
注意: 1、词数不少于60。
2、文章的题目和开头已经给出。
3、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
提示词:首席技师 chief technician
Ordinary but Great
We are all ordinary people, but following what we are interested in and doing what we are good
at can help us make great achievements for society and go far. Here’s a convincing and inspiring example.
______________________________________
【范文】
Zhao Yu, the chief technician in the Benz Company,is regarded as a great success. However, his success is no accident. As a young boy with a sense of creativity, he was eager to learn and to make a lot of inventions. Being an ordinary worker in the Benz Company for 17 years, not only did he do well in his job, but he also made efforts to teach himself English and to learn how to use computers. Now it is easy for him to read English materials about cars. Besides, he became expert at solving various technical problems.Because of his great contribution, he has received awards many times.
Zhao Yu has set a good example that ordinary people can stand out by doing their jobs with interest and enthusiasm.
【评析】
1.作者运用了所给出的全部信息:姓名、职务、经历。对所给的信息进行了适当重组,突出了重点信息(赵郁的经历),内容完整、详略得当,体现了话题“Ordinary but great”所表达的内容。
2. 正确使用人称(第三人称),灵活使用时态(一般过去时、一般现在时);合理使用过渡词,使文章层次分明、结构紧凑。
3. 语言规范,表达准确。文章运用了一些高级句式,如同位语、介词短语、分词短语、倒装句、同位语从句等,增加了文章的亮点。
篇18:中考英语作文万能开头汇总
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+ 加入清单1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言
2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻,…
3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说……
4.As the proverb says, 正如谚语所说的,
5.It has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到,…
6.Its generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…
7.Its likely that … 这可能是因为…
8.Its hardly that… 这是很难的……
9.Its hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说…
10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是
11.Theres no denying the fact that…毫无疑问,无可否认
12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是…
13.whats far more important is that… 更重要的是…
篇19:2024年高考议论文素材:科技
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+ 加入清单导语:下面是小编整理的一些关于高考议论文的素材,供您参考,希望能帮助到您。
议论文素材:科技
(1)引言
“科学技术是第一生产力”,邓小平同志准确地概括出科学技术在人类社会发展中的作用。当今世界面临各种竞争,关键是科学技术的竞争。因此,只有大力实施党中央提出的“科教兴国”的战略方针,我们才有可能在世界范围的各种竞争中立于不败之地。
(2)事实论据
世界杂交水稻之父
水稻是主要农作物,它产量的高低,直接与人类生活,生存密切相关。杂交水稻专家袁隆平,1964年提出利用水稻杂交优势的观点,并开始水稻杂交研究,1973年,袁隆平在与他人合作突破制种难关,研究出一套籼型杂交水稻生产技术,成为世界上第一个培育成功籼型杂交水稻的人。他研究成功的籼型杂交水稻平均每亩产量比其他良种增加50公斤以上,现已被推广、引种到世界二十多个国家和地区。袁隆平被国际同行誉为“世界杂交水稻之父”。
人类历史上的飞跃
人类历史发展到近现代,经济飞跃发展,社会空前进步人类发展史上的又一次飞跃。这要归功于四次工业革命:第一,二次主要是以蒸汽机、纺织、冶炼技术的工业进步;第三次工业革命是在20世纪初,主要是化学、电力和内燃机技术的发展;当代依靠电子、信息等新兴技术发明兴起,信息产业推动了第四次工业进步。
每一次的工业革命都是由于科学技术的新发展推动的,足以证明“科技是第一生产力”。
电磁波的发现
19世纪德国物理学家亨利希•赫兹首先发现并研究了电磁波,所以电磁波又叫赫兹波。
赫兹在研究中发现:电路中产生的电振荡会形成波幅射。通过进一步研究,产生出电磁驻波;他测出两个相邻节间的距离,从而测出了波长,实验证明电磁波具有光波的大部分特性,验证了所有光学定律。赫兹的发现,开僻了通信技术的新纪元,为后来信息技术的进一步发展奠定了基础。
(3)理论论据
中国必须受科学的洗礼,方能适于生存。 陶行知《陶行知文集》
科学技术是第一生产力。 邓小平
必须培养科学的幼苗,撒播科学的种子。 陶行知
不要放开科学,一味钻在文学里。 鲁迅《致颜黎民》
惟科学足以生实业。 鲁迅《科学史教篇》
科学实为科国之第一事。 康有为《物质救国论》
振作其国人者何人?震怖其外敌者又何人?曰,科学也。 鲁迅《科学史教篇》
靠实事求是吃饭,靠科学吃饭。 毛泽东《反对党八股》
科学,你是国力的灵魂;同时又是社会发展的标志。 徐特立
篇20:2024高考议论文写作指导:过渡的六种技巧
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+ 加入清单同学们写议论文时,有的文章却脉络不明,似断似连,甚至出现裂痕,缺乏过渡这个段与段、层与层之间的桥梁纽带。不妨回顾一下,我们读过的许多文章,学过的不少课文,之所以如行云流水般通畅自然,没有人工斧凿的痕迹,是与恰当安排过渡分不开的。那么议论文中的 过渡主要包括哪些方面呢?
一、材料与观点的过渡,常用的表述方式:
(1)这则材料告诉我们这样一个道理……(得到了这样的启示……)
(2)这虽是一则寓言,但却形象地说明了……(这则材料的寓意是……)
(3)由此观之……
(4)为什么会这样呢?
(5)由此,我明白了一个深刻而又平凡的道理……
【例1】
我曾读过一本书,是说美国人的消费,美国人都是花未来的钱,而享受现在,‘举债度日’,我想一旦出现无赖不肯还钱,怎么办?原来美国有个信用局,若某君出现信用违规,即通知各大银行,封杀他的所有借款,此招足以使其无立身之地。这让我想起了中国的诚信,诚信是国人引以为傲的美德,‘人无信而不立’。”
二、论点与论述之间的过渡
话题作文,学生从话题包含的内容,生发开去,阐述见解。一部分学生写议论文,提出中心论点,然后结合生活和社会现象对论点进行论证,但缺乏必要的语言过渡,使观点与材料分离。写作中,由提出论点到联系现实进行分析论证,学生常常使用“现实生活也有同类者”“我不禁想到现实生活中的同类现象”等句子进行过渡,形成观点与论述之间的自然转换,文气贯通。
1、由此,我联想到我们人类社会……
2、物性如此,我们人类何尝不是这样……
3、……这给我们一个深刻的启示……
4、物犹如此,人亦然。
【例2】
马卡连柯的话令人深思。对花赞赏之余,为什么要手里拿起铁铲、剪刀和巴黎绿呢?为什么不考虑花是否愿意接受呢?这是因为花虽美,但美中也会有不足之处,美中会有隐患。如果不及时清除那些杂枝、病枝、虫害,再美的鲜花也会衰败、凋零。物性如此,人类何尝不是这样,我们的师长在表扬肯定我们的优点和成绩的同时,更要指出我们存在的缺点和不足,也就是说,要想“爱之深”,就得“责之切”。
三、理论论证与事实论证之间的过渡。
论辩时理论论证为使论述变得深刻,事实论证为使论证显得具体,分析说理时联系生活实际,避免泛泛而谈,内容空洞,两者结合使用就应注意由此及彼的恰当过渡。
(一)事实到理论
1、“就拿……来说吧”或“例如……”来过渡;
2、纵观古今,凡是……无不是……
3、古往今来,无数成功者的业绩都……
4、纵观古今中外名人学者的成功历程,不难发现,他们的成功的秘诀在于……
5、放眼寰球,纵观古今,大凡有……无不是……
【例3】
古往今来,情感高于理性的事情屡见不鲜,而理性控制情感的例子也不少。
【例4】
历览古来圣贤人,无不对事物做出客观公正的评价,在处理事情上力求做到公正不偏私。
【例5】
举目四望,古今中外,有多少英雄豪杰因内心之好恶而惨遭滑铁卢?古代如此,今天亦如此,或许,将来也如此。
【例6】
历史上的教训,足以使我们对此有更为清醒的认识!
【例7】
其实,古往今来,不少人都调准了自己感情的"焦距",为自己展现出了清晰的世界。
(二)理论到事实
若先事实论证再理论论证,过渡文字一般则是对事实包含道理的分析、总括。
1、有位哲人曾这样说过:“……”
“这正如……所说……”等词语或句子进行过渡。
2、在生活中广为传颂着这样一句名言:“……”它告诉我们这样一个深刻而又平凡的道理……
3、“……”,不正是……精神的真实写照吗?可见……
4、“……”这妇孺皆知的俗语告诉我们一个平凡而又深刻的道理:……
5、“……”这句话曾鼓舞了多少仁人志士,然而今天……
四、正面论证与反面论证之间的过渡。
1、正面分析与反面分析之间的过渡,一般借助“反之”“相反”“否则”“如果不这样”等关联性词语完成;
2、正面举例与反面举例之间的过渡则一般采用“也有与此相反的情况”“相反的事例如……”等句式过渡。
而现实生活中我们又是如何呢?
而现实生活中总有那么一小部分人……
【例8】
古人尚能如此理性面对问题,可如今的世界却有很多人,无法理性地面对自己的实际和考虑别人的情况。如果"非典"在发现初期就被重视而不隐报,也午今天的"非典"就不会如此猖撅。如果美国理性面对伊拉克的核危机,试着用卜交手段解决,也许美伊战争就不会爆发,也就不会有那么多人死伤了。
五、层与层的过渡。
为了使论述充分、深入,写议论文必须讲究说理的层次性。说理时各层次之间的关系,以并列关系和递进关系为主,具有并列关系的层次之间的过渡一般借助“同时”“还要”等关联词语过渡衔接;具有递进关系的层次之间的过渡则往往借助“不仅如此……而且”“更进一步说”以及“当然”等词句进行过渡衔接。
1、无独有偶
2、前事不忘,后事之师
3、个人如此,国家民族又何尝不是这样?
4、那么我们该怎样做呢?
【例9】
不论是故去的古人,还是现存的今人,只有做到公正无私,才能在对事物的认识上得到真理,才能在对事物的处理上得到赞美。
【例10】
在现代,有没有韩非子笔下的"富人"呢?有!譬如在干部的任用问题上就出现了"任人唯亲"的弊端,一些领导在任用下属时,不是视其是否有才能,而是看其与自己远近、使一一些无德无能的人混人干部队伍,正所谓"一人得道,鸡犬升天"。而真正有志有才之士被拒之门外。
六、辩证过渡
(一)欲进先退
在对某问题阐述自己观点见解时,先要承认与此相反的观点见解存在的合理性,然后指出其道理存在的不足之处,接着语意一转,话题转入对此观点见解的主要论述。“退”是通过承认反面的观点见解以防论证疏漏,“进”是论证文章论点的主体。
【例11】
的确,外在环境的感染作用是不可忽视的。尤其青少年思想单纯,阅历浅,经验少,辨别是非的能力还不强,世界观还未形成,触于墨者即黑,染于朱者即赤。多少青少年受坏人拉拢,看黄色书刊、录像,赌博、酗酒、偷盗、抢劫,逐渐走向犯罪的深渊。难怪昔有“孟母三迁”之举,这是促进孟子成为一代儒圣不可否认的外因条件。甚至多少知识名人、革命志士、人民功臣、劳动模范,也经受不了环境的熏染,荣华富贵的诱惑,最终沦为历史的罪人。
然而(转入论题),事物不可一概而论,不可以事物的一般规律抹杀事物的特殊性存在。
【例12】
诚然,正是由于有了人类之间曼妙的情感,全社会乃至全世界才不至于陷入一种盲目的、机械性的单调之中就如同电影《摩登时代》和《城市之光》中描绘的那样,人的言行似乎在工业革命的浪潮中变得毫无生气,如同机器人一般。缺乏感情的社会是僵硬的,是脆弱的。然而这并不意味着仅仅凭借情感就可以主导全世界,就可以来评判事物认知的正误深浅这还需要客观的评价标准,诸如法律、法规等等而这些则又需要认知与进一步的探索。否则,理性的天平就难以使得整个世界在一种相对稳定的状态之下继续发展。
3、理性固然在认识事物中不可缺少,但我们能因此完全排除了感情因素吗?难道感情在认知过程中永远起着反面的作用吗?
其它如:诚然、固然、毋庸置疑
(二)主论先行,后堵偏漏。
当然 ; ……不是……而是;然而,凡事都有度,过犹不及
1、当然,在历史上尽管也有“近墨而不黑”、昭著史册的人物,如出污泥而不染的屈原、陶渊明;执法惩恶,廉洁自律的包拯、海瑞;屡触权贵洁身自好的郑板桥、刘镛;但毕竟凤毛麟角,为数不多。这些事物特殊现象怎能掩盖外因能促进事物量变向质变转化的一般规律呢。怎能忽视“白沙在涅,与之俱黑;蓬生麻中,不扶自直”、“近朱者赤,近墨者黑”的哲理名言呢?
2、当然,不要轻易说“不”,并不是不能说“不”。如果你面对一潭死水的生活,波澜不起,生命的冲劲早已缺席,人生的斗志也了无踪影,你应该对这样的生存现状勇敢地说“不”。1999年,高燃以一个中专毕业生的身份只身来到广州打工,又毅然抛弃月薪5000多元稳定工作,多方联系进入一家高考补习班,次年以优异的成绩考入清华大学,后来创办市值上亿元的MYSEE公司。央视记者李小萌采访他,他说,我不想过那种一眼就可以望到头的人生。高燃勇敢地跟平庸的生存状态说“不”,高燃超越了自己,他成功了。
3、我们不要轻易说“不”,并不是去做一个逆来顺受毫无原则的人,面对沉沦的陷阱和惰性的挑衅,我们要勇敢地说“不”;面对厄运的打击、失败的考验和种种执著人生的坚守,我们不要轻易说“不”。改变能改变的,接受不能改变的,坚守早就认定了的。人生的过程是一个超越自己的过程,人生的过程也是一个坚守的过程。
议论文中的过渡衔接没有固定的格式或词句,可有常用的方法。