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高考英语作文题端午节

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The Duanwu Festival, which is also called the Dragon Boat Festival, is an

ancient Chinese traditional festival, celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth

lunar month. For thousands of years, various celebrating activities are held all

around the country. Eating zongzi and racing dragon boats are the most pertinent

ones, which are said to be in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet. In some places,

people spread realgar wine on the children in the hope of protecting them from

the evil spirits. Many people consider May as an especially dangerous time for

diseases in a year, and therefore they hang moxa and calamus and things like

that around the doors to ward off evil and diseases and pray for good luck.

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篇1:2024年高考英语作文万能句子汇总

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1. It goes without saying that 。..不用说……

It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours. 不用说, 早睡早起是值得的。

2. There is no denying the fact that 。..不可否认这个事实……=No one can deny 。..谁也不可否认……

There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind. 不可否认, 成功的关键在于健康的身心。

3. I am greatly convinced (that)。..=I am greatly assured (that)。..我深信……

I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure. 我深信预防胜于治疗。

4. Among various kinds of 。..=Of all the 。..在各种……之中, ……

Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular. 在各种运动中, 我尤其喜欢慢跑。

5. In my opinion 。..=As far as I am concerned ,。..在我看来, ……

In my opinion, playing computer games not only takes up much time but also is harmful to our health. 在我看来, 打电脑游戏既花费也有害健康。

6. According to my personal experience = Based on my personal experience根据我个人经验

According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of good. 根据我个人的经验, 微笑带给我很多好处

7. Of all the people I know, perhaps none deserves my respect more than 。..在我认识的人当中, 也许没有一个人比……更值得我尊敬。

Of all the people I know, perhaps none deserves my respect more than Miss Zhang, my English teacher. 在我认识的人当中, 也许没有一个人比我的英语老师张老师更值得我尊敬。

8. In the course of my schooling, I will never forget 。..在我的求学过程中, 我忘不了……

In the course of my schooling, I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English. 在我求学的过程中, 我忘不了学习英语的巨大困难。

9. With the increase/growth of the population, 。..随着人口的增加, ……

With the advance of science and technology, 。..随着科技的进步, ……

With the rapid development of our economy ,。..随着我国经济的快速发展, ……

10. In the age of information and communication, 。..plays an important role. 在这信息年代, ……扮演重要的角色。

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篇2:2024年高考议论文写作之层进式结构

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层进式结构:按照“提出问题—分析问题—解决问题”层层推进,环环相扣。下面是小编为你带来的2017年高考议论文写作之层进式结构,欢迎阅读。

层进式结构(内容深刻美)特点:结构上,按照“提出问题—分析问题—解决问题”层层推进,环环相扣;内容上以深入深刻见长。

《让梦想在现实中起舞》

(1号文,以演绎推理展开的层进式议论文)

仰望星空,那似乎没有纤瑕的星辰在银河中闪耀,它带给我们无限的遐想,那 不染纤尘的星空里,放飞了多少人美丽的梦想!飞上星星的人知道,那里像地球一样,有灰尘也有石渣,于是他们失去了对幻想的渴望。我们虽不能一味沉溺于自己 的幻想之中,却也不能让自由飞翔的思想湮没在无情的现实里。

(第一段提出论点,即论述“是什么”)

阮籍目瞩世间的浑噩不堪和好友的身首异处,借醉酒逃避现实,他的一生一直 在逃避、逃避、逃避,却终因一篇《为郑冲对晋王笺》被人唾弃。嵇康则完全生活在现实之中,不肯向生活做出任何妥协,最终以一曲《广陵散》而成为绝响。其实 人生由阮籍的醉酒向前一步便是嵇康的《广陵散》,人生有嵇康的《广陵散》向后退一步便是阮籍的醉酒,殊途同归者的境遇竟是如此迥异。若是两人各向中间迈出 一步,将幻想与现实稍加中和,也许就不会落得生者隐入迷幻,死者融入苍穹,只留给后人无尽的怅惘。

(第二段举例,正反对比分析原因,即论述“为什么”)

我们如何才能让仰望星空的人了解现实,又如何才能让飞上星星的人保留梦想呢?

在那个人人埋怨的时代,沈从文先生目瞩现实的残酷,却依然将那个江南小城写成了山美、水美、人美的世外桃源,现实没有湮没他对人生的希望,他用一份最原始的情感和一颗赤子之心看待这个社会,看待自己的人生。他没有沉醉于自己的幻想,亦没有让现实麻木自己的心灵。

张允和先生亦是一位智慧的老人,她一生经历了大富大贵,也经历了战火纷飞,十年浩劫,而她却永远保有一副悲天悯人的情怀,一颗永不衰老的童心。她那悲天悯人的情怀使她正视现实并战胜现实,而她那颗永不衰老的童心则使她在任何艰难的情况下都不放弃幻想的权利。

川端康成浅浅的一句“凌晨四点钟,看到海棠花未眠”,瞬间感动了多少心灵,这是梦和现实最完美的结合。让那些世俗之物顷刻间土崩瓦解,让多少在现实中日渐麻木的心灵得到了温暖。

(以上三段段提出解决现实问题的办法,,即论述“怎么样”)

正视现实,但不委身于现实,保持幻想,但不沉溺于幻想,让梦想在现实中去跳一曲酣畅淋漓的舞蹈!(06山东高考作文,关于远看近看星星不同的材料话题)

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篇3:高考英语作文模板——举例说明段

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【示例一】

①There are many cases/examples to explain ________(主题句). ②Take ________ as a typical example./The first example is that ________ (阐述例子), ________(可进一步阐述). ③The second example is that/In addition/Here is a counter example./Opposite case in point is that/On the contrary ________(第二个例子的内容或举一个反面例子). ④Therefore,/Only ________can ________(总结主题句/段落总结句).

【示例二】

① ________ (观点句). It can be best/well illustrated in/explained by(例子). ② ________(阐述例子). ③________(进一步阐述例子). ④Therefore, ________(段落总结句:进一步总结观点句的必要性和重要性).

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篇4:2024高考语文优秀作文欣赏及点评议论文

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议论文写作中,既要摆出事实论据,又要有必要的理论论据,如何正确的处理好两者的关系是文章写作成败的关键。就同学们的写作实践看,许多同学常犯的毛病是重事实论据而轻理论论据,两者没有有机的结合。反观成功之作,二者总是相辅相成的。另外,写议论文还要注意对事例进行分析,将"事"与"理"有机结合起来,而不能"以摆代论"。

别让感情遮住了理智的双眼

陕西考生

有这样一个故事:宋国有个富人,由于下雨他家的墙被淋倒。他儿子和邻居的一位老者都说:不修好一定会有人来偷窃。晚上家里果然来了小偷。富人觉得他儿子很聪明,却认为老者是小偷。大概你也认同富人的说法,但若仔细一想便知不妥,亲近的感情会影响理智的认识,所以请擦亮你的理智的双眼。

听罢这则材料,我们会有这样的疑问:倘若告诉富人将有小偷来时的人和富人没有任何亲缘关系,那么富人恐怕会怀疑他俩,因为他们都和富人没任何关系。所以说富人的判断并非是理智的,而是受到世俗情感的影响,所以说生活中我们认识事物时或多或少会受到感情的影响。

然而并非所有人都会被感情遮住理智的目光。一代清官包青天,在审理自己侄儿包勉的案子时,完全排除了个人的感情,丝毫没有受到情感的影响。用他的话说就是:公堂之上无父子。就因为此,他才被后世之人连连称颂。

19世纪伟大的物理学家牛顿,是力学系统的创始人,而在当时人们正在研究光的本性,学术界有两种说法,一种是认为光具有粒子性,它是由无数看不见的微粒组成的;而另一种是说光只具有波动性。当时两派各举出了例子和实验来证明了自己的观点。但由于牛顿支持粒子说,反对波动说,所以人们也就认为光只具有粒子性。从而使光的波动说发展很缓慢,直到20世纪初才被人们所接受。{分页}

现代著名物理学家史蒂芬·霍金,在研究黑洞问题时,曾收到他的导师的信,说黑洞是不会向外辐射能量的,劝他放弃这方面的研究,但霍金并没有被感情蒙蔽,依然坚持认为黑洞会向外辐射能量。最终他因此获得了“原子物理之父”的光荣称号。

我们的世界是一个充满情感的世界,我们在认识事物的本质和探索世界的过程中都会不同程度地受到情感的干扰,因此我们要以“举世浑浊我独清,众人皆醉而我独醒”的高尚情操来拨开情感蒙蔽的双眸,用客观的、理智的、公平的态度来认识它。

“情感”犹如眼前的一片乌云,拨开它我们会发现蓝天、绿水……

解析:任何观点都需要事实的支持,但并非任何事实都能支持某些观点。本文作者所选取的作为论据的事实相当恰切精致,像三根栋梁,成功地构建起了理论的大厦:拨开感情迷雾,把握理性光彩。这三个事例也各具特色而又相互补充,包青天以理性的头脑来评判纷繁复杂的谜案,声称“公堂之上无父子”,是古之典范,也是中国伦理血缘超越的成功范例;史蒂芬·霍金坚持自己的判断而避免老师的误导从而取得巨大成就,是今之楷模,也是外国理性光彩的闪烁,牛顿的例子则从反面论证了本文的论点,这二正一反,非常具有说服力。

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篇5:高考英语作文:车祸AnAccident

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作文不仅仅是语文科目的重头戏也是英语科目的重头戏,就为考生朋友们整理了高考英语作文范文,希望对大家有帮助!

车祸(An Accident)

My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.

In the evening, he was invited to an inn. He enjoyed his dinner with his friends, drinking a lot of beers. As a result, he got drunk.He insisted on driving home after the meal, although his friends tried to persuade him not to do so.A few minutes later, he was winding his way on the street. And then his car ran into a tall tree. Fortunately, he was still alive, though seriously injured. The police came to the spot, and he was taken to the hospital. Naturally, he had to stay in the hospital for several days.Even worse, his driving license was revoked. How he regretted what he had done!

车祸

我的叔叔将永远忘不掉昨天发生的事情。昨天傍晚,朋友邀请他去喝酒。他和朋友们吃得很开心,也喝了很多酒。结果,他醉了。朋友劝他留下来,但他坚持开车回去。

一会儿后,车在路上摇摇晃晃,然后就撞到一颗树上了。幸运的是,他尽管伤得很重,但没有生命危险。警察来到事故现场,然后把他送到了医院。自然,他必须在医院里呆上几天。更为糟糕的是,他被吊销了驾驶执照。他对自己所做的事感到万分后悔。

[高考英语作文:车祸(An Accident)

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篇6:高考议论文满分

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有多宽路就有多广,积极健康的心态是成就美丽人生的阳光雨露。

陶渊明不愿为五斗米折腰示乡里小儿,在黑暗的官场勾心斗角,争名夺利,违背自己的意愿让自己过的不开心。他没有“以心为形役”“惆怅而独悲”,而是毅然辞官归隐,隐居南山,采菊东篱,走出了官场这个互相倾轧、构陷的大监狱,过上了潇洒自得的田园生活,让自己获得淡然、恬静的快乐心态。

中国达人秀冠军获得者刘伟,早年因为一场意外而失去了双臂,在毁灭性的打击面前,他没有沉沦、堕落,让自己的一生在悲哀和叹息中度过,而是积极的面对,在对音乐的追求中获得对身体残疾的超越。他用流血的指头弹奏出了生命的音,创造了生命的奇迹,也震撼了碌碌无为的灵魂。积极的心态,让刘伟的生命像花儿一样绚烂绽放。

被称为本世纪最伟大的物理学家的霍金,因为帕金森病,肌肉萎缩,只能躺在轮椅上,但是霍金没有让疾病成为自己的监狱,没有就此停止自己探索的脚步。怀着对科学无比执着的追求和热爱精神,他在轮椅上思考着宇宙星体的奥秘,他的生命在仰望星空的过程中获得了升华和超越,是坚定乐观的心态让他的人生不断走向辉煌。

一个人的心态往往决定了一个人的人生轨迹,现实生活中很多人都为自己设置了一座心灵的牢笼。他们因为学业、事业、感情、生活上的不如意,要么得过且过,碌碌无为;要么怨天尤人,走向极端,这些都是不健康的心态。这些人其实都是自己给自己判了刑,给自己戴上一副沉重的思想镣铐,让自己过上了暗无天日的生活。其实,换一种心态也许会是另外一番情景,砸开镣铐、走出心灵的牢笼,我们看到的将是一番生气勃勃的景象和人生图景。

无形的监狱比有形的监狱更可怕,杀伤力更为强大,因为真正的自由是思想的自由,一个人的身体可以被限制,但是无法限制的是思想,乐观积极的心态。当你积极的心态去面对一切的时候,一切都是阳光的,灿烂的,当你以消极的、颓废的心态对面对一切的时候,一切都是晦暗、潮湿的。

以积极的心态去面对,让心灵在惬意中品味生活的香甜;以积极的心态去面对,让心灵在努力中体会工作的蔚蓝;以积极的心态去面对,让心灵在豁达中获得精神的舒展。

心态决定人生,以积极的心态面对生活,让你的生命一路鲜花一路阳光。

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篇7:责任感高考满分英语作文

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Yesterday, I broke a vase. This vase has been in myhome for several years.

昨天,我打碎了一个花瓶。那个花瓶在我们家很多年了。

I was afraid of being criticized. I didnt dare to tellmy parents. So I pretended nothing happened.

我怕被骂所以不敢告诉我父母。所以我就假装什么都没发生。

But they discovered at last. It was strange that myfather didnt blame me, but teach me a lesson.

但是最后他们还是发现了。很奇怪我爸爸不仅没有责怪我,反而给我上了一课。

He made me know that responsibility was necessary for everyone in the world.

他让我知道责任感对我这个世界上的每一个人都是必须的。

If a person was not responsible, he couldnt do anything successful and may not be popularamong the people around you.

如果一个人没有责任感,他很难取得成功,也可能会让你在你周围不怎么受欢迎。

A responsible person would have the courage to undertake everything. This was what a boyshould have.

一个有责任感的人会有勇气承担一切。这也是一个男孩所必须的。

If I have done something wrong, I should take the responsibility.

如果我做错了,我就该负起这个责任。

[责任感高考满分英语作文

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篇8:高考英语作文范文

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The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.

I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.

If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.

把梦想放大到心里,信心满满;把才华展示在考场中,尽情发挥;把智慧放逐到笔端,挥洒精彩;把心思投入到高考中,如鱼得水。

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篇9:最好的爱高考英语作文

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The Best Kind of Love

i’m young again!” she shouts euberantly.as my friend raves on about her new love, i’ve taken a good look at my old one. my husband of almost 20 years, scott, has gained 15 pounds. once a marathon runner, he now runs only down hospital halls. his hairline is receding and his body shows the signs of long working hours and too many candy bars. yet he can still give me a certain look across a restaurant table and i want to ask for the check and head home.

when my friend asked me “what will make this love last?” i ran through all the obvious reasons: commitment, shared interests, unselfishness, physical attraction, communication. yet there’s more. we still have fun. spontaneous good times. yesterday, after slipping the rubber band off the rolled up newspaper, scott flipped it playfully at me: this led to an all-out war. last saturday at the grocery, we split the list and raced each other to see who could make it to the checkout first. even washing dishes can be a blast. we enjoy simply being together.and there are surprises. one time i came home to find a note on the front door that led me to another note, then another, until i reached the walk-in closet. i opened the door to find scott holding a “pot of gold” (my cooking kettle) and the “treasure” of a gift package. sometimes i leave him notes on the mirror and little presents under his pillow.there is understanding. i understand why he must play basketball with the guys. and he understands why, once a year, i must get away from the house, the kids -and even him -to meet my sisters for a few days of nonstop talking and laughing.

there is sharing. not only do we share household worries and parental burdens - we also share ideas. scott came home from a convention last month and presented me with a thick historical novel. though he prefers thrillers and science fiction, he had read the novel on the plane. he touched my heart when he eplained it was because he wanted to be able to echange ideas about the book after i’d read it.

there is forgiveness. when i’m embarrasssingly loud and crazy at parties, scott forgives me. when he confessed losing some of our savings in the stock market, i gave him a hug and said, “it’s okay. it’s only money.”there is sensitivity. last week he walked through the door with that look that tells me it’s been a tough day. after he spent some time with the kids, i asked him what happened. he told me about a 60-year-old woman who’d had a stroke. he wept as he recalled the woman’s husband standing beside her bed, caressing her hand. how was he going to tell this husband of 40 years that his wife would probably never recover? i shed a few tears myself. because of the medical crisis. because there were still people who have been married 40 years. because my husband is still moved and concerned after years of hospital rooms and dying patients.

there is faith. last tuesday a friend came over and confessed her fear that her husband is losing his courageous battle with cancer. on wednesday i went to lunch with a friend who is struggling to reshape her life after divorce. on thursday a neighbor called to talk about the frightening effects of alzheimer’s disease on her father-in-law’s personality. on friday a childhood friend called long-distance to tell me her father had died. i hung up the phone and thought, this is too much heartache for one week. through my tears, as i went out to run some errands, i noticed the boisterous orange blossoms of the gladiolus outside my window. i heard the delighted laughter of my son and his friend as they played. i caught sight of a wedding party emerging from a neighbor’s house. the bride, dressed in satin and lace, tossed her bouquet to her cheering friends. that night, i told my husband about these events. we helped each other acknowledge the cycles of life and that the joys counter the sorrows. it was enough to keep us going.finally, there is knowing. i know scott will throw his laundry just shy of the hamper every night; he’ll be late to most appointments and eat the last chocolate in the bo. he knows that i sleep with a pillow over my head; i’ll lock us out of the house at a regular basis, and i will also eat the last chocolate.

i guess our love lasts because it is comfortable. no, the sky is not bluer: it’s just a familiar hue. we don’t feel particularly young: we’ve eperienced too much that has contributed to our growth and wisdom, taking its toll on our bodies, and created our memories.i hope we’ve got what it takes to make our love last. as a bride, i had scott’s wedding band engraved with robert browning’s line “grow old along with me!” we’re following those instructions.

“if anything is real, the heart will make it plain.”

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篇10:2024年高考议论文素材积累

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“抛弃传统、丢掉根本,就等于割断了自己的精神命脉。”习近平总书记曾指出,“博大精深的中华优秀传统文化是我们在世界文化激荡中站稳脚跟的根基。”

从2016年开始,高考语文分值由150分增为180分,英语考试将推出高考历史舞台,将实行社会化考试,满分为100分。

以上两段材料,前一段摘自习近平总书记在中共中央政治局第十三次集体学习时的讲话;后一段摘自《北京市高考改革方案》(2013年10月21日)。我们知道,习书记上任以来在很多场合强调过传统文化的重要性,中华优秀传统文化是习书记十八大以来治国理念的重要来源。而《北京市高考改革方案》(2013年10月21日)中,也强调了要加强对中华民族优秀传统文化的考查,充分体现语文的基础性和作为母语学科的重要地位,2016年高考语文分值将由150分提高到180分。

国家最高领导人谈传统文化,某地区的高考改革也注重传统文化的考查,传统文化的重要性不言而喻。

阅读以上材料,写一篇作文:注意:1.角度自选,立意自定,题目自拟;2.不得脱离材料内容及含义的范围作文。3.除诗歌外,文体不限,4.不得少于800字。5不得抄袭,不得套作。

【押题理由】

之所以说2015年高考作为会考到“传统文化”,有以下几方面的理由:

一是习书记上任以来多次强调中华传统文化的历史影响和重要意义,赋予其新的时代意义,更值得一提的是,中华优秀传统文化是习书记十八大以来治国理念的重要来源。如果你关注习近平主席动态,就不会为这样的高规格感到意外。从在孔子故乡曲阜参观孔府和孔子研究院,到“五四”探望国学泰斗汤一介;从政治局集体学习纵论传统文化与国家软实力……

习书记说,一个国家、一个民族的强盛,总是以文化兴盛为支撑的。没有文明的继承和发展,没有文化的弘扬和繁荣,就没有中国梦的实现。要坚持走中国特色社会主义文化发展道路,弘扬社会主义先进文化,推动社会主义文化大发展大繁荣,不断丰富人民精神世界,增强人民精神力量,努力建设社会主义文化强国。

可见中华传统文化是中国梦的魂与根。

二是近几年的高考语文命题加大了对传统文化的考查,尤其是《北京市高考改革方案》(2013年10月21日)更引起社会各界的关注和探讨,这次北京高考改革,各科分值变化很大,足以看出市教委改革决心之大,其意义很大。2016年语文从150分增至180分,增加了30分,充分体现了语文的基础性和作为母语学科的重要地位。现在很多学生甚至家长都提笔忘字,写不好,中国的传统文化无疑在慢慢丢失,所以加强对中华民族优秀传统文化的考查实很必要的。在母语学习普遍不受重视,语文教学被边缘化的背景下,适当增加语文分值,将有利于恢复语文应有的地位,让全社会重视母语教育。另外,习近平2014年9月9日看望北师大师生时,不赞成把经典诗词从课本里去掉,他说,“去中国化”是很悲哀的,应该把这些经典嵌在学生脑子里,成为中华民族文化的基因。

母语的重要,真的像法国作家都德说的那样,母语是民族的标志和象征,一个民族的语言是一个民族的灵魂。

三是中国传统文化在世界各地“随处可见”,其传播手段日益丰富。中国是世界上最古老的国家之一,是一个历史悠久的东方文明古国。古代中国文化在亚洲曾居于中心位置,强烈影响了包括日本在内的周边各国的文化。在日本,处处能够领略到中国古代文化的痕迹,比如汉字、服饰、建筑样式、饮食等等。随着中国国际地位的提高,世界各国包括亚洲、欧洲在内的一些国家都对中国文化给予了极高的认同和重视。

毋庸置疑,中华民族优秀的传统文化对世界的和平与发展越来越发挥着重要的作用。

四是近几年高考作文命题,特别是2014年的高考作文命题,都是围绕当前最热点、最前沿的话题为试题“内核”的。如2014年的高考作文题:辽宁卷《科技改变生活?》;江西卷《课内外学习探究》;湖南卷《心在哪里风景就在哪里》;浙江卷《门与路》;广东卷《胶卷与数码时代》……

所以,紧扣热点还原生活的话题,仍将是2015年高考作文重点考查的方向之一。

【思路导航】

“传统文化”是一个很抽象的概念,其内容浩如烟海,要想在一篇文章中把所有内容都涵盖是不可能的,所以,写作文时需要注意以下几点:

1.“居高临下”探讨弘扬中华民族传统文化的重要性。写作时从传统文化对一个家庭、民族和国家的重要性的角度去展开思路。贯穿古今,例举引以为豪的传统文化以及它们对中国乃至世界的影响。同时,又对濒临流失的文化产生诸多思考:我们在走向世界的时候,却忘却了自己的民族根基,“我们走得太远,却忘记为什么而出发”。从传统文化的繁荣到传统文化的“流放”,考生可拓展思路,通过深刻、尖锐、凝练的思辨,阐述“抛弃传统,丢掉根本”对一个民族的危害。这样的文章需要考生拥有强烈的感情和张扬的个性,文章的语言需要凝练,简洁,顿挫而又富有回味。

2.“化虚为实”以“具体”诠释“抽象”。“传统文化”是较抽象的概念,写作时,化概念为万象,用具体的文化形态——诗歌、绘画、书法、文房四宝、茶艺、京剧、刺绣、民俗节日、剪纸、皮影戏等去诠释抽象概念的内涵;甚至也可以写家风。但不论怎样写都要回到作文材料内容及含义的范围,回到“传统文化”上来。

3.体裁多元、内容多维、表达多样。 这篇作文的体裁不仅限于议论文,也可以写散文,记叙文或小说。写散文,用优美、凝炼、畅达的语言去阐述对传统文化的认识和理解;写议论文,如谈传统文化的璀璨与“危机”、传统文化的世界地位与影响以及传统文化与外来文化的关系,等等;写记叙文,通过讲述传统文化经典、动听的故事,深化“传统文化代代传承的”的意义。

【优秀作文】

北京市高考改革方案向社会公布,将语文分值增值30分,宣布英语考试从此退出高考历史舞台,并实行社会化英语考试。语文是国学,是一门学习中华上下五千年文化的学科,打破语文英语两种分值相同、“地位平等”的局面,语文分数的提升,恰恰说明了国家对传统文化的重视,寓意学生要学好本国文化并传承好本国文化。

人们谈到长城,谈到丝绸之路,甚至谈到战国编钟,都满怀对自己历史文化的自信。但是能否将这些文化传播给世界呢?中国文化的优秀成果如天人合一、和谐文化等核心价值观的国际影响力还远远不够。显然,语言的贫乏是其中一个重要的障碍。很多学生研究了莎士比亚的著作,却遗忘了巴金,这是母语文化的缺失,也是传统文化的缺失。传统的文化是我们的民族之魂,是由古至今历代国人总结出的文化晶体,是作为一名中国人的根本。文化的力量,深深熔铸在民族的生命力、创造力和凝聚力之中。严峻的现实告诉我们,文化竞争正成为决定一个民族和国家命运最根本和最后的竞争。正如习主席所说“抛弃传统,丢掉根本,等于割断了自己的精神命脉”。我们如果丢掉了根本,就会单薄的同海上漂泊流浪的纸船,根基不牢,方向不定,只能随风漂流,狂风巨浪袭来之时,必定是纸船湮灭之日。一个国家如果不顾民族自身特点,只一味模仿“别人的文化”,不但不会有好的发展,势必走上灭亡的道路。传统文化的重要性不言而喻。

“己所不欲,勿施于人”这是至圣先师孔子教给我们的处世哲学。“王无罪岁”“民贵君轻”这是主张法先王,行仁政的大思想家孟子教给我们的民本思想。“天下兴亡,匹夫有责”,这是明末清初“三大儒”之一的顾炎武教我们要有责任有担当……传统文化不仅对我们有所启迪,还能够提高我们的素养,陶冶情操,教会我们治国齐家为人处世之道。不仅如此,培根也曾这样说:“印刷术、火药、指南针曾改变了整个世界事物的面貌和态……这种变化如此之大,以致没有一个帝国,没有一个教派,没有一个赫赫有名的人物,能比这三种机械发明在人类的事业中产生更大的力量和影响。”我国古代的四大发明是中国奉献给世界的伟大技术成果,对世界历史进程产生巨大的影响。传统文化的意义与价值也由此可见一斑了。

一代国学大师季羡林说过:“我认为,从世界文化的发展趋向看,中国文化包括中国道德的精华,在21世纪的将来,会在人类精神文明的发展中,发挥更重要的作用。这是我所期望的。”作为一名土生土长的中国人,我们真的不能“因为走得太远,却忘记为什么而出发”。我们应把学习认识传统文化作为责任和义务,既“放眼未来”,又要向古代贤士学习文化精髓,只有“把根留住”,才能像一艘战舰坚不可摧地驰骋在世界的大洋。

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篇11:学会宽容议论文高考满分

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在我心中善于原谅就是宽容的起步,因为有这些人从小在身边感染着我,让我学会了―以微笑去原谅,去宽容别人,才会得到更多人的宽容。

爸爸对我说过:“当别人不小心踩到你脚时,不要发怒,露出一个宽容的微笑,然后轻轻地说一声“没关系”,这是―宽容。当他人不经意弄脏了你新的衬衫,不要发怒,露出一个温暖的微笑,然后轻轻地说一声“没关系”,这是―宽容。当别人因失误而拿错了你的东西时,不要发怒,请你露出一个灿烂的微笑,然后语重心长地说一声“下次记得注意点”,这是―宽容。

当别人心直口快地说出一些伤害到你的话时,不要发怒,冷静下来,多分析别人说的话。不要敌视别人,不要把别人的话一直挂在心上。这是―宽容。当别人做了一些对不起你的事时,不要发怒,冷静思考,想办法补救。请你不要责备他们,而是原谅他们。这也是―宽容。当别人无心伤害到你身边的人时,不要发怒,想办法让他们认识到自己的错误,然后尽力去帮助受伤害的人。请你不要责怪他们,而是帮助他们改正错误,把他们引入正途。这是―宽容。”“宽容是什么?宽容就是大度的去原谅别人,在别人做错事时不怪责他们,而是以平常心对待。

小学1年级的一次体育课上,我和几位女同学玩着跳皮筋,那位同学跑来捣乱,我们嫌他烦并把他推走。“啊!”他后脚踩空摔倒了,耳朵摔在了花坛的尖角,流出了鲜红的血来。我害怕地捂住了嘴,恐惧地畏缩着,周围的一切仿佛都要把我吞噬掉,迎面是无尽的黑暗。我大脑一片空白,什么都是恐怖的,只想离开这个让我害怕的地方。老师带着那位同学到了校医室,他的妈妈来了,老师面无表情的把我叫了出来。我害怕极了,双腿发软,就连平时看来很温暖的东西现在好像也变成了魔鬼,狞笑着。“阿……姨,……真对不起。”我结巴的开了口。

“呵呵呵……”阿姨和老师笑了起来,我感到莫名其妙。“其实他伤的不重,你不用担心,回去上课吧。”阿姨率先开了口。“可是……”“好了,快回去吧。”老师微笑道。我走进了教室,下课后便找了我的好朋友问了他的情况,原来那位同学的耳膜以前有做过手术这次只是流血,不是很严重。孩子都是父母的心头肉,阿姨却原谅了我。让我也学会了―原谅。

以微笑去原谅别人,宽容别人就是宽容自己因为有你们在我的成长中我才懂得拥有一颗宽容,善于原谅的心是最宝贵的。

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篇12:2024年高考议论文的基本结构

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一、写作指导:

鉴于议论文高考写作的一种常见的文体,今天介绍一种适合高考的议论文模式:五段三分四环节。

“五段三分四环节”可以简单的诠释为,议论文全文共安排五段,三个分论点,每个分论点共四个环节。具体阐释如下:

“五段”的结构安排依据议论文引论、本论、结论结论的文体特征。引论是提出中心论点部分,观点要明确,应该简洁精练,所以用一段来完成;本论部分是论证中心论点部分,是议论文的主体部分,安排用三段围绕中心论点展开议论;结论部分是归结论述的部分,归结忌讳拖泥带水,所以应干净利落总结得出结论、提出希望等,这些内容安排一段。

“三分”,即三个分论点。作为议论文的主体部分应该做到内容充实,根据应试时间限制的特点、规定字数的特点,同时还根据中国传统文化给“三”赋予的“众多”的含义,三个分论点的安排既能在规定时间规定字数完成写作,又能体现议论文论据充分的基本要求,使得文体特征展示清晰,同时还能使议论文在结构安排上得以合理分配。

“四环节”,即每个分论点都要经过四个环节的内容,完成一个完整的论证过程。遵循论述规律,论述中心论点时,首先要提出分论点,这是第一个环节,它要从某个角度具体阐释观点;在提出一个概括性很强、抽象性很强的观点后,一定要对这个分论点进行扣题性的解说,这就是第二个环节:引语;第三个环节是述例,就是使用事实论据阐述前面提出的分论点;第四个环节是引申挖掘,就是将前面三个环节归结起来,引申到抽象的规律性,挖掘出事物的普遍性。

这个四环节的具体要点:

(一)分论点:

扣住话题、扣住题目、扣住中心论点将题目或话题的关键词嵌在分论点的句式中,概括性要强

(二)引语:

1、能概括话题、题目

2、能诠释分论点

3、能选准例子扣到话题的切入点

4、引出话题牵涉到事例的范围:利用话题中关键词的同义词、近义词、诠释语等达到扣题符合题意的要求,要少而精

(三)述例:

1、使用那些准确概括事例的词语

2、这些词语必须是扣住话题

3、切入点的关键词

4、概括性要强

5、指向性要强:利用同关键词的同义词、近义词、诠释词,所有词语的指向都是话题、题目、论点、观点,形成一条清晰的思路线,层次要分明、合情合理、符合事实。

(四)引申挖掘:

脱开个例,引到同一类例子的共性上去总结共同的规律和事物的普遍性起到依次类推的作用不要重复引语中的语言,不要重复概述事例的语言。

二、范文示例

做人的规则

有人说“人生如棋”,那么做人就应该遵守下棋的规则,否则就将满盘皆输;有人说“人生如戏”,那么做人就应该遵守唱戏的规则,否则就将无人欣赏;有人说“人生如茶”,那么做人就应该懂得品茶的规则,否则再好的香茗也与枯叶无异。不同的人生有不同的规则,遵守做人的规则,才能走出精彩纷呈的人生之路。(采用类比的方法提出中心论点,引论部分)

把勤奋作为规则,做人就会更充实。(分论点)“天道酬勤”这句古训,已经潜移默化的成为无数成功人士做人的规则。(引语)鲁迅自小便于三味书屋一起演绎着勤奋的故事,正是他的勤奋,让他在人生的道路上游刃有余,即使面临的是人生的大转折---弃医从文,他也没有遇到转行带来的难处,这正是他以勤奋为人生规则的收获,他由此积累了知识的力量,精神的毅力,更让他在中国现代文学史上写下了光辉的篇章。(述例)所以,把勤奋作为人生行动的规则,在勤奋中充实自我,即使遇到突然的转变也不会惊慌失措,反而会让你在与人生对弈时得心应手,使自己的人生更加丰富,成为你这盘棋最终的王者。(引申挖掘)

把责任作为规则,做人就会更踏实。每个人都有自己的角色,完成角色赋予的任务是每个人的责任,为人君就应以仁为责,为人臣就应以忠为责,为人子就应以孝为责。汉高祖以仁为责,实行休养生息政策,让百姓摆脱了饥饿和战乱之苦;诸葛亮以忠为责,一生追随刘备建立蜀汉事业,鞠躬尽瘁,死而后已,为后世所传颂;李密以孝为责,弃官不做,侍奉在祖母的身边,成为孝之楷模。由此看来,把责任作为自己的做人规则,踏踏实实地走好人生的路,必然会无愧于人无愧于心更无愧于世。相信这样的人生才更加精彩。

把美德作为规则,做人就会更加真实。美德是一种境界,像一杯香茗,不懂得品茗的人认为是苦的,而真正懂得美德的人才能体会其中的香甜。范仲淹以:“先天下之忧而忧,后天下之乐而乐”的牺牲精神作为做人的规则,让后人敬仰;雷锋以“助人为乐”的奉献精神作为做人的规则,让人感到无比的温暖;朱自清以民族自尊心作为自己的做人规则,让人佩服不已。这些把美德作为人生遵循的规则的人,人生的路走的真实而美好,正像一杯纯正的香茗,清香四溢。(以上三段为本论部分)

在如棋的人生中,遵守做人的规则,驰骋你的人生;在如戏的人生中,遵守做人的规则,精彩你的人生;在如茶的人生中,遵守做人的规则,品味你的人生。遵守做人的规则,走出完美的人生!(结论部分,用排比的手法结束全文,提出希望)

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篇13:2024高考满分作文议论文:变则通

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《周易》告知:“穷则变,变则通。”当我们陷入人生的困境时,我们应该学会变通,只要能够适时变通,人生的道路上我们才能风雨无阻。我们要做蓝天上搏击的雄鹰,面对风雨,唯有懂得变通,才能谱写出与众不同的人生故事;我们要做那在艰险中敢于攀登峰顶的勇士,面对险境,唯有懂得变通,才会描绘出“山高人为峰”的人生精彩!

面对人生的追求,变通是一种求新的思维,它能够帮助我们打破真理的禁锢。尚为学生的亚里士多德经过深思熟虑后发现自己的思考与老师柏拉图的观点不同时,他不因崇拜老师而否定自己的思考,而是坚持不为贤者讳,毅然提出自己的观点否定柏拉图的错误,他为我们留下追求真理的名言:“我爱老师,更爱真理。”当手持铁球的加利略用“铁球实验”推翻了亚里斯多德2000多年来被人们奉为真理的定论时,这是一种勇敢的智慧,它打破了常人常常盲从的思维禁锢,实现了对于真理追求的变通。歌德说过:“真正有才能的人会摸索出自己的道路。”唯有懂得改变自己的思维方式,学会变通,我们才能摆脱盲从的困境。

面对人生的梦想,学会变通彰显的是审时度势时的精明。曾经风光无限的体操王子李宁在汉城遭遇失意,跌入人生的困境。但他在遭遇人生困难时,能够冷静思考,勇敢地改变自己的追求,毅然闯入商界。只是因为懂得变通,李宁开创了“李宁”体育品牌,让自己的人生实现另一个辉煌。懂得审时度势,懂得变通,它可以让陷入困境的我们找回自我,继续书写人生华丽的篇章。

仰望历史的星空,我们能发现许多人因为懂得如何变通,因而能于绝境迎来重生彰显一世英明。心怀救国救民理想的鲁迅,曾经认为,中国落后是由于体弱多病,日本富强是由于医学发达,便到日本苦心钻研医学。然而中国人健壮却麻木的现状让他认识到:必须从精神上拯救中国人,才能真正解救中国国民。于是,鲁迅毅然弃医从文,成为中国新文化运动的旗手。鲁迅的变通,给绝境中的中国带来了曙光,若是没有这些穷时变通的英明,中华民族岂能浴火重生。

王安石曾说:祖宗不足法。清朝末年,落后的封建专制制度已与当时的世界形式不相吻合,可是清政府的官员依然顽固不化。面对此种情景,康有为愤然说:“祖宗的规矩是用来保全祖宗领土的,现在祖宗领土保不住了,还要祖宗规矩何用?”面对困境,不知变通,这种愚蠢的做法和《韩非子》寓言中那个守株待兔的农夫有何区别?

敢于变通是一种勇于创新的态度,彰显的是面对困难时的从容自信。同学们,穷时变通,这是我们人人都能做到的,当我们身处“山穷水尽疑无路”时,蓦然回首的适时变通,我们收获的必然是“柳暗花明又一村”的惊喜。

学会变通,人生之路才能海阔天空!

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篇14:2024高考英语作文素材:拯救大兵瑞恩双语台词

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"Let me not be ashamed.Let not my enemies triumph over me.

别让我蒙羞,别让敌人在我身上奏响凯歌

Blessed be the Lord my strength,which teaches my hands to war

主是我的力量,他教会我的手战争

and my fingers to fight

他教会我的手指战斗

My goodness and my fortress.My high tower and deliverer.

我的善良和避难所.是我的高塔和解脱者

My shield and He in whom I trust.

他是我的盾牌,我所依靠的"

My Dear Mrs. Ryan

Its with the most profound sense of joy

That I write to inform you your son ,

Private James Ryan ,

Is well and , at this very moment ,

On his way home from European battlefields .

Reports from the front indicate James did his duty in combat

With great courage and steadfast dedication

Even after he was informed of the tragic loss

Your family has suffered in this great campaign

To rid the world of tyranny and oppression .

I take great pleasure in joining the secretary of war ,

The men and women of the United States Army ,

And the citizens of a grateful nation

In wishing you good health and many years of happiness

with James at your side .

Nothing ,

Not even the safe return of a beloved son ,

Can compensate you

Or the thousands of other American families

Who have suffered great loss in this tragic war .

And I might share with you some words

Which have sustained me

Through long , dark nights

Of peril , loss and heartache .

And I quote ,

I pray that our Heavenly Father

May assuage the anguish of your bereavement

And leave you only the cherished memory

Of the loved and lost

And the solemn pride that must be yours

To have laid so costly a sacrifice

Upon the altar of freedom

Abraham Lincoln

Yours very sincerely and respectfully ,

George C . Marshall , General , Chief Of Staff.

亲爱的瑞恩太太:

我满怀欣喜之情通知您,您的儿子,列兵詹姆斯.瑞恩平安无事。

此刻,他正在从欧洲战场返乡的途中。

来自前线的报告表明,

在他得知三个哥哥在这场为铲除独裁和压迫的世界大战中,不幸牺牲的消息后,仍以非凡的勇气和赤诚之心履行了他的职责。

我很荣幸的,以最高统帅和全军将士,以及对您充满感激之情的全国人民的名义

祝您,在詹姆斯瑞恩的陪伴下,幸福,安康。

任何事情,包括您的爱子归来,都无法弥补您以及千百万美国家庭在这场灾难性战争中所饱受的巨大损失。

我,恳求上帝抚平您失去爱子的哀伤,心中留下对英烈们的珍贵记忆,以及您当之无愧的为自由而奉献的神圣的自豪感

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篇15:思考食品安全的高考英语作文

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小编导语:高中生思考食品安全高考英语作文是小编为你准备的高中生思考食品安全的高考英语作文。食品安全问题一直是我们比较关注的一个社会问题。以下就是小编为你准备的高中生思考食品安全的高考英语作文,供你学习参考。

Not long ago. Sanlu milk powder incident once again draw the attention of food safety issues. Why food safety is always at risk? I think there are probably two reasons. For onr thing, the illegal business add a number of unsafe things into the food driven by the interests. For another thing, the countrys regulatory regime is inadequate, so that criminals can take advantage of the opportunity.

Food safety is very important. If you eat unsafe food, the consequences would be unthinkable. Therefore, we should take some measures to prevent unsafe food.

First of all, the government should strengthen supervision and improve the law to punish illegal food manufacturers. furthermore, when consumers buy food should depends on its production date and shelf-life. In short, to solve the food security issues need a long way to go, it needs the joint efforts of all sides.

[思考食品安全的高考英语作文

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篇16:2024高考英语个热门话题

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2015年高考英语作文热门话题之一---雅安地震

2015年4月20日,四川省雅安市芦山发生强烈地震,造成很大损失。学校号召全体师生向灾区捐款。请你拟一个发言稿,在学校捐款动员大会上使用。发言稿主要内容应包括:

1. 对灾区情况的简单介绍(包括地震发生时间、地点、造成的财产和人员损失等);

2. 捐款的意义(帮助灾区人民渡过难关、帮助灾区重建);

3. 如何捐款(自愿、多少不限、以班级为单位,收齐后交到学校红十字会) 注意:

1. 不要逐条翻译;

2. 可适当增加细节;以使文章连贯;

3. 词数至少100词。 参考范文:

Dear teachers and students,

As we all know, a terrible earthquake happened in Lushan, Sichuan Province on April 20, in which many buildings were destroyed and many people were injured. In order to help the earthquake victims to go through the hard times and rebuild their hometown, the school has called on everyone in our school, including both teachers and students, to donate money to the earthquake-stricken area. This donation is voluntary. You can give away however much you want to. The money will be collected by each class before it is handed to the Red Cross Society of our school. We hope that everyone will be kind enough to do what you can to help our fellowmen out of the difficulty. Thank you.

2015年高考英语作文热门话题之二---“中国梦”

最近,你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动。请写一篇日记,记述班会情况及自己的感受。内容要点如下:

1.每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解;

2.你谈到了自己的梦想;

3.如何实现自己的梦想。

注意:

1.总词数不少于100。 2.不可逐条翻译。

3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。

April 8 Monday Fine

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream....

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April 8 Monday Fine

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.

2015年高考英语作文热门话题之三---中学生使用iPad

假如你是李华,是一名高中生。随着科技的发展,iPad已成为中学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐,阅读纯文本电子书,又可玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一封信,谈谈中学生使用iPad的情况。信的内容必须包括以下几点:

1、使用iPad对学习的好处:

2、对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响:

3、提出自己的建议并说明理由。

注意:开头已经给出,不计入总数。词数120字左右

Dear Editor,

Im a senior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think its a fashion to use them.

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Dear Editor,

Im a senior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think its a fashion to use them. U sing an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, its helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.

Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.

In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success. The classroom is a place for students to study, and thereforeconcentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way. Yours sincerely, Li Hua

2015年高考英语作文热门话题之四---H7N9流感

假设你是李华,从电视上看到H7N9流感仍然在上海流行,并有少部分人因此而丧生,你为你正在上海上学的笔友Anderson的健康与安全担心。请你给他写一封信询问他的情况,并给他提出防护建议。

要点:

1、询问(他的健康状况;人们对流行疾病的反应:是否感到恐惧等) 2、建议(至少三点)

注意:词数:120左右;

Dear Anderson,

_________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 参考范文:

Dear Anderson,

From TV I know there are still many H7N9 flu cases reported recently in Shanghai and some people are even killed as a result. I’m so worried about you. So I’m writing to get to know some information about you. Are you all right ? Are there any H7N9 flu cases

in your school ? Are you still afraid of this widespread disease ? To stay away from the disease, I strongly suggest you doing the following things. Firstly, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Then it would be a good idea to wash your hands more often to keep them clean. Besides, open the window to have more fresh air in the room. And last but not least, eat more fruits and vegetables to keep yourself fit and strong. So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease ! Take care and you’ll be OK. Yours, Li Hua

2015年高考英语作文热门话题之五---雾霾 假如你是李华,你的笔友Mike从电视上得知前段时间北京多个地方出现雾霾(haze),非常担心,写E-mail询问有关情况,请回复。回复应包括以下要点: 1.实况描述;

2.对生活造成的影响;

3.成因简析与教训;

4.你个人的情况。

要求:

1.词数100-120;

2.email的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Mike,

Thank you very much for your concern. ______________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ Regards! Yours, Li Hua

参考范文:

Dear Mike,

Thank you very much for your concern. Last months several places in Beijing were blanketed with thick yellow fog. Everything around disappeared from our sight. Some highways were closed. Traffic jams were commonly seen in the streets. Many people, especially children and seniors, even found it difficult to breathe. As a result, local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with their noses and lungs. Part of the cause was the dry weather, but the severely damaged environment contributed a lot to this nightmare. Personally I didn’t get any health problems in the haze because I stayed mostly indoors. But to make a significant change we really have to do more to protect our environment. To live a better life we have to push on with the economy, but it wound be meaningless if we have to achieve it at the cost of our breathing air. Regards!

Yours, Li Hua

2015年高考英语作文热门话题之五---中国式过马路

前不久,中央电视台“焦点访谈”栏目曾就“中国式过马路”现象进行了不少采访和评论。请用英语写一篇100-120 词的短文,结合自己的所见所闻或亲身经历描述“行人闯红灯”(pedestrians run the red light)引发的若干问题,并就此提出一些解决措施。 注意;短文的开头已给出(不计词数)。

Not long ago, CCTV “Focus Talk” carried out many interviews and made some relevant comments on the phenomena---“Crossing roads in the Chinese style”.______________________

参考范文:

Not long ago, CCTV “Focus Talk” carried out many interviews and made some relevant comments on the phenomena---“Crossing roads in the Chinese style”.

There is a very common phenomenon around us that people just run the light totally ignoring the running vehicles, which can lead to serious consequences. Last week a traffic accident happened near our school, a rushing car knocked down a student who was running the red light. And because of the car’s sudden stop, several cars behind crashed into each other. Of course this caused a terrible traffic jam.

In my opinion, effective measures should be taken to solve the problem. First, we can make good use of the media, such as TV, newspaper, magazine, to raise people’s awareness of obeying the traffic rules and road safety. Second, government must make severe laws to punish people who dare to break the law and run the red light.

优秀作文:

Not long ago, CCTV “Focus Talk” carried out many interviews and made some relevant comments on the phenomena---“Crossing roads in the Chinese style”.

Take one of my experiences for example. It was a Tuesday and it rained cat and dog. There was only a few minutes left for me to go to school on time. I was so hurried that I ignored the red light. It was so dangerous for me that the car hardly hit me seriouly. From then on, I never dare to run the red light. I think it can lead to many problems. There is no doubt that it will not only make the traffic heavier but also lose your own life.

As far as I am concerned, it has profound significance to take actions. For the government, they should make laws and appeal to the importance of safety. For the other people, we should cherish our lives and obey the traffic rules.

2015年高考英语作文热门话题之六---光盘行动

节约是中华人民的传统美德,然而,当前国人的浪费现象却十分严重,尤其是餐桌上的浪费。请用英语写一篇100-120词的短文,描述你的一次“餐桌浪费”经历,并结合当前的“光盘行动”(Clear Your Plate Campaign)略加评论。

参考范文:

With large amounts of food thrown away each year, the problem of food waste is widespread in China. Last Spring Festival, my father invited several friends to dinner in a restaurant. My father ordered a lot to show respect and display generosity.

What surprised me was he ordered an extra dish before we could finish all! When we stood up to leave, there were many dishes unfinished. Out of embarrassment, my father was reluctant to take the leftovers home. Later, we all shared the opinion that it was a great waste.

Recently, the Clear Your Plate Campaign started nationwide. I firmly believe that if everyone does his bit, the food waste will be significantly reduced.

2015年高考英语作文热门话题之八---食品安全

我们的身体健康与食品安全息息相关,但现在我们却面临越来越多的食品问题如染色馒头、毒奶粉。请用英语写一篇100-120词的短文,简要分析食品问题形成的原因并提出相应的解决措施。

染色馒头the industrial dye of steamed bun 毒奶粉the notorious milk powder

It is universally acknowledged that the safety of food is closely related to our health. As the famous saying goes, “we are what we eat.” However, things often go contrary to our wishes since we are faced with a series of food safety problems at present, ranging from the industrial dye of steamed bun to the notorious milk powder.

There are several reasons for this severe problem. First and foremost, many manufactures produce fake food of poor quality in order to get higher profits. In addition, the relevant laws and regulations are imperfect and even ineffective. Last but not least, the public especially customers from poor families, are not alert enough to the safety of food.

In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken to improve the situation. Firstly, it is essential that relevant laws and regulations on food safety should be enforced. Secondly, the relevant department should attach more importance to supervising监督 the manufacturers. Also, the public should be trained to be alert to food quality, believing our efforts will make an enormous difference. Only by taking these actions can the problem be coped with successfully in the nearest future.

2015年高考英语作文热门话题之七--校园生活

假如你是诸暨二中高三(1)的李华,今年即将高中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对高三生活的看法。 (1)对获得的帮助表示感谢;(2)消除与 同学之间的误会;(3)努力学习,实现人生梦想;(4)对学弟、学妹的建议。 注意:(1)可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;(2)词数:100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数) 。 High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a senior 3 student, it wont take long before I graduate.___________________________________________________

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High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a senior three student, it wont take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my

fellow students.

Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, its high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, Ive made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."

Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.

2015年高考英语作文热门话题之八---人际关系

有些高中生有时与同学发生这样或那样的矛盾或冲突,这些问题会给大家带来烦恼甚至影响大家的学习。请你用英语写一篇120词左右的短文,分析一下产生矛盾或冲突的原因,并谈谈应如何正确地与同学相处。

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Classmate conflicts among senior middle school students are often heard on campus over recent years. These conflicts make the excitement of campus life grow grey and have bad effects on both their living and learning.

Classmate conflicts often rise from daily tiny things such as space where to store books or notes. When personalities don’t mix, the specifics can tear classmates apart and sometimes even lead to serious conflicts. Besides, the fact that classmates hold different attitudes towards certain issues is another factor causing these conflicts.

Classmate conflicts are harmful and need to be settled. Though many people think that school discipline can soften the conflicts, I believe learning to be tolerant with each other can play a more constructive role because it teaches students flexibility and the art of compromise. Meanwhile, communication contributes to the solution to this problem since many of these conflicts result from misunderstanding.

2015年高考英语作文热门话题之九---友谊

请根据以下的提示,并结合自己的交友经历,表达你对朋友的理解。

Without friends, life is not worth living. But what kind of person can be accepted as friend? Lots of people are classmates and arent friends. Lots of people are lovers but arent friends. You can appreciate or admire someone, but that doesnt make them a friend. If their attitude is "for better or worse," if they stick with you through thick and thin, thats when you can tell its friendship. 注意:1、120字数左右。

2、不要过多引用上述提示。

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The term, friend, covers a wide range of meanings. It can be a nodding acquaintance, a comrade, a partner, a playmate, a brother, etc. As life is full of obstacles and conflicts, we need friends to give us supports to get through tough times, we also need friends to give us warnings to go against danger. True friends share not only joy but, more often than not, they share sorrow and difficulties.

With friendship, life is happy and harmonious. Without friendship, life is hostile and unfortunate. I have friends in the rank and file. Some are rich and in power. Some are low and common. Some are like myself, working as an ordinary teacher, reading and writing and content with the simple life. To many of my friends, I know what to treasure, what to tolerate and what to share, I will never forget my old friends and keep making new friends. I will not be cold and indifferent to the poor friends and will show concern for them, even if it is only a comforting word.

2015年高考英语作文热门话题之十——网络用语

目前,一些诸如GG、MM、 Xia Mi 等网络语言在青少年中极为盛行,并且出现在家庭作业报告,甚至全国入学考试的作文中。请你以 “Should Internet Slang Be Prohibited (禁止)?”为题,根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文,并谈谈你自己的看法。

注意:

1. 短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数; 2. 词数:100-120左右

【参考范文】

Should Internet Slang Be Prohibited?

At present, Internet Slang, such as “GG, MM, Xia Mi”, has become popular among the teenagers.

There are different opinions on Internet Slang. Some students think Internet Slang is vivid, fashionable and full of humor and intelligence. Besides, it makes chatting on the Internet quicker.

However, some other students think Internet Slang lacks depth of thought and is too simple. Also, it is hard to understand and not accepted by most people. The words sometimes might make people confused, even resulting in misunderstanding.

Every coin has two sides. In my opinion, living in the Information Age, if we don’t know the Internet Slang, we seem to fall behind the times. It will be OK as long as these terms are used correctly in proper situations.

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篇17:分享英语作文万能19句

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(一)说说下面19句万能句的重要性吧:熟练(背N遍,写N遍,熟练到……反正就是超级熟练,想到第一个词可以不加思索的背出整个一句话)这19句,你大概可以写出任何一篇你想写的作文。

(二)用法:作文的第一段套用下面的某一句,本人习惯as we can see form the picture ……第一段不宜过长20-30个单词吧。第二段的第一句话套用,第一句话尽可能得要长,之后的能套用则套用,不能的自己写,第三段的套用!不商量。(下文中小括号里德数字表示一般在第几段套用)

(三)再说说套用的作用,1、首先大家不要担心这样写阅卷老师会怎么想,只要你对这20句特别熟悉,你就会用的很灵活,写出来会没有棱角,就是你的。2、每句套用的一定要珍惜,字数一定不要少!20个以上吧!一般可以套用4到5句,至少套用的就100个词了,这篇作文的大框架也就起来了。3、套用的一般换原句中的名词,千万防止语法错误,套用的地方都是作为最关键的地方,也是阅卷老师看的地方,所以一定要防止低级错误(尤其是语法不是很好的人)。4、书写用可擦中性笔,一定要工整,只要书写足够好,可以覆盖个别错误。让阅卷老师看着舒服点吧!

(四)这些来自黄皮书和新东方100篇模板,已经是本人删减到最少了,本人认为每句都很重要,希望对大家能够有所帮助!

1、(1).it is apparent that the author of the drawing tries to reveal to us: a finishing line always leads to another starting point.

2、(1).Such stimulating stories are not rare in our daily life . the most persuasive example is madam curies ,a world-reknowned female scientist. She was awarded twice the nobel prize for physics and for chemistry, within less than 10years. It is rather a uniquething in history of science in the whole world.

3、(2). this picture does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon .

4、(3). the phenomenon reflected in the picture is both immoral and illegal . it is well known that caring the old is not only a traditional virtue cherished by Chinese ,but also a duty laid down in the constitution .in order to prevent such mistreatment typified in the picture, we should make efforts to promote moral education , and at the same time strengthen the regulations and laws.

5、(3).the situation is rather depressing because intellectuals in fact contribute greatly to our country’s development, and it is largely owing to their painstaking efforts that pave the way for advancement and prosperity . to solve this problem , I think there should be a thieving social trend of showing respect to knowledge and intellects.

6、(2). the message conveyed in the picture seems to be that people tend to underestimate their abilities and magnify difficulties when confronted with challenges. But in fact , it is not the case.

7、(1).the harm caused by tobacco consumption is experiencing a similar upwardtrend-statistics indicates that 3000000 people die of smoking and related diseases every year.

8、(2). nevertheless, given the pessimistic statistics at the present, we can still predict optimistically that tobacco consumption will decline based on several emerging tendencies . in the first place , there is an extensive public awareness of the negative impact of smoking, and as a result ,more people resist the temptation of cigarettes. In the second place, governments are setting more regulations to limit tobacco production . the effectiveness of such policy was testified by the prompt drop of the tobacco production from A to B ,as see in the picture.

9、(2). as a result , the integration of poor living conditions and work pressure leads naturally to their poor health and short life-span ,just as the picture shows us.

10、(2). the picture is thought-provoking in that it endeavors to convince its audience that we can actually exercise anywhere , as long as wu have the awareness of preserving heath by exercise.

11、(3). I reckon that the consciousness of maintaining health is significant for both individuals and the whole society. On the individual level, it is vividly evidenced by the man in the picture that his wxercise improves his health and mood as well. On the social level, the improvement in quality of life contributes vastly to a harmonious society.

12、(2). the artist uses this unique metaphor in order to endow us with the concept that to habitually exercise is like to deposit money bit by bit in the bank.

13、(1). what the drawing is trying to express is very conspicuous ,it shows people who are ……,moreover ,at the bottom of the picture are four huge characters, meaning “sports” and “health” ,which targets reminding us that sorts and health are intrinsically connected.

14(3). all in all , I firmly believe that sports are not the business of a small group of athletes, but a life-long pursuit that every person should bear in mind and endeavor to put it into practice . not only do sports benefit individuals , the improvement of nation’s health would be a huge contribution to our country’s development .

15(1). the picture describes the scene of a very typical family workshop which we might find in every neighborhood in china .

16、(2). the sanitation problem of family workshops in the food industry has existed for a long time . it can be mainly attributed to two factors . the first and perhaps key factor is ignorance toward sanitation . the other reason lies on some businessmen’s short of occupational disciplines .

17、(3). judging form the analysis above , we may safely come to the conclusion that the daunting problem demands effective countermeasures. Most importantly, the government needs to implement inspection. In addition,……

18、(3). I maintain that effective measures must be taken to put an end to this phenomenon . firstly, we need to advocate social responsibility and professional ethics in each field . secondly, strict regulations should be enacted and enforced to create a harmonious and orderly society .only through the combined efforts of government and society can we forcefully and completely climinate this “tumor”.

19、(2). the tremendous contrast presented by the drawing alarmingly reminds us of the detrimental deterioration of oceanic ecosystem by the greediness of mankind.

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篇18:2024年高考作文指导:议论文

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议论文又叫说理文,它是一种剖析事物、论述事理、发表意见、提出主张的文体。小编收集了2017年议论文写作指导,欢迎阅读。

议论文的三要素

(一)论点

古人云:“文以意为先,意犹帅也;无帅之兵,谓之乌合。”无论写什么文章都必须立论。立论就是针对客观事物或问题,直接提出自己的见解和主张,阐明其理由,表明自己的态度。

举例:1、如针对和英国首相撒切尔夫人商谈香港回归问题,有人提出香港可以暂时不驻军,邓小平则掷地有声说:主权问题不是一个可以商量的问题!

2、“五四青年节”,各地都在举行庆祝活动,各级党委、政府部门主要领导悉数参加会议,足见领导对青年的重视。有媒体用这样观点做题目:关注青年就是关注祖国的未来。

(二)论据

论据,是支撑论点的材料,是作者用来证明论点的理由和根据。通俗说,就是文章中“摆事实、讲道理”,所以,论据主要有事实论据和理论论据。事实论据包括代表性事例(名人故事等),确凿的数据,可靠的史实等;理论论据主要是指文中使用的名言警句、谚语格言以及作者的说理分析等。

论据使用注意事项:

1、论据必须为论点服务,即观点和材料要统一,能证明论点。

2、论据要典型,不能用诸如“我同学就是一个这样的人”,同时论据更要丰富(多积累、勤积累才能做到)

3、论据要新颖。新颖方能吸引人。选择新鲜的别人尚未用过的论据是金子,别人已用的论据你能变换角度用是银子,别人经常用的而你又照搬照用的是石子。记住:写作文时,如果你能一下子想到的事例,别人也会一下子想到,所以就注定你的论据不够新颖了。

4、论据丰富时,事例排列的顺序应当这样:古今中外。

(三)论证

论证是运用论据来证明论点的过程和方法,是论点和论据之间的逻辑关系纽带。论点是解决“需要证明什么”,论据是解决“用什么来证明”,论证是解决“怎样证明”。

中学阶段常用的论证方法有:引用(引言)论证、事例(名人、时代人物)论证、正反对比论证、类比论证、因果论证以及比喻论证。举例:

一、揭示实质法

这种方法,就是在列举出属性相同相关的几个事例之后,对其进行归纳升华,点明论据所包含的道理,揭示出论据与论点之间的逻辑联系,回扣深化论点。如:

史学家司马光写《资治通鉴》花了19年;相声艺术宗师侯宝林为学谐语手抄一部10多万字的《谐浪》;俄国大作家托尔斯泰写《战争与和平》花了27年;德国著名医生欧立稀连续试验914次,终于研制成治疗人体内锤虫和抗螺旋体病菌的新药——新坤凡纳明。这些事例充分证明了古今中外无数有成就的人之所以取得事业的成功,秘诀就在于他们有恒心和毅力。(考场优秀作文《恒心和毅力是成功之本》)

这段文字中,作者在列举古今中外成功者的四个事例之后,点明了其中包含的道理,从而使中心论点“恒心和毅力是成功之本”得到了有力的论证。论据与论点联系紧密。

二、正反对比法

这种方法,就是列举正反两种事例形成对照,然后加以分析,论证观点。如:

黑格尔曾经自夸德国人天生就是哲学家。然而就是这样一个天生严谨自律的民族,却在一个狂人的引诱下,使世界陷入了战争的深渊。60年前的那幕惨剧:生灵涂炭、妻离子散、血流成河……生者在对往者的审视中找到了道德的标杆,也找到了纪念的理由。德国人用尽一切方法阻止时间淡褪那血色、稀薄那呼声:修建集中营纪念馆,全力处理战后的善后问题,还有那德国总理在犹太人纪念碑前的惊世一跪!德国人在60年里不断地反思,不停地纪念,终于完成了灵魂的自我救赎。德意志民族向世界展示了理性的力量,也赢得了世人的尊敬!

但纪念一旦脱离理性的制约,就会变成不可控制的魔鬼。日本在60年前那幕惨剧中同样扮演了不光彩的角色,作为亚洲地区的主要刽子手,日本犯下的罪行罄竹难书。往者已矣,大和民族的纪念却是如此这般:右翼势力大肆鼓吹“中国威胁论”,还妄图为二战罪行翻案;不顾史实修订历史教科书,文过饰非,美化侵略罪行;更有首相一年一度的靖国神社“拜鬼”……日本这种偏离理性范畴的“纪念”活动,自然得到各国人民的一致谴责。有句话说得好:“跪着的德国人比站着的日本人更高大!”可见理性的纪念才是正确的纪念,理性让纪念闪耀出人性的光辉。(考场优秀作文《让纪念闪耀理性光芒》)

以上两个论据,一正一反,对照鲜明,有力地论证了“理性的纪念才是正确的纪念,理性让纪念闪耀出人性的光辉”这一中心论点。

三、反向假设法

这种方法,就是列举事实论据后,从正面或反面假设分析,从而揭示论据和论点之间的内在联系。如:

学习借鉴会助你成功,但一味模仿则必将导致失败。

赵人邯郸觉得楚人走路好看,便盲目模仿,落得最后忘记了自己的步伐只得爬回赵国的下场。东施羡慕西施的美丽,觉得她一肌一容,尽态极妍,便学习她的姿态,照搬她的动作,可她终究不是西施,在别人看来她不但不美丽,反而成为做作的典范。真是偷鸡不成反蚀米,她的一腔苦水只能硬生生地吞进肚里。

倘使邯郸能在学步之时,融自己的步伐特点,在借鉴的同时取长补短走出自己的一步,形成独特的步伐特点,可能他就不至于爬回赵国了,说不定还会走出他人推崇的步伐;假若东施能充分认识自身的特点,发挥自身优势而不是盲目模仿,或许也会成为一种新形式的“美”的代表,使欣赏她的人在她的石榴裙下拜倒。(考场优秀作文《走出属于自己的一步》)

上面文字所举的是两个反面论据,接着用“倘使……会……”“假若……会……”两个复句从正面假设分析,从而很好地论证了“走出属于自己的一步,才会彰显个性,取得成功”这一中心论点。

四、正面推理法

这种方法,就是通过对所举事例的正面剖析,以小见大,从而推论出其具有的普遍意义,强化论点。如:

史载:晋平公让大夫祁黄羊推荐南阳县县令,祁黄羊毫不迟疑地推荐解狐。晋平公惊讶地反问道:“解狐不是你的仇敌吗?”祁黄羊笑了笑说:“您让我推荐的是县令,并没有问谁是我的仇敌呀!”果然,解狐很有才干,成为百姓拥护的好县令。又一次,晋平公让祁黄羊推荐一位法官,祁黄羊推荐了祁午,晋平公听后又很震惊,说:“祁午不是你的儿子吗?你推荐他不怕别人说闲话吗?”祁黄羊认真地回答说:“我是把最能胜任的人推荐给您,并没有考虑他是谁的儿子。”事实上,祁午正如他父亲所言,办案精细果断,政绩显著。孔子闻此曾赞叹道:“善哉,祁黄羊之论也!外举不避仇,内举不避亲。”是啊,祁黄羊两次推荐人,虽然都直涉感情,但他的认知、判断却完全不受感情的左右。可见,认知之“理”是“情”外之物,它因人而异,并非总受“情”的束缚。(考场优秀作文《怎一个“情”字了得》)

这段文字通过对祁黄羊推荐人才事例的剖析,从正面推论出了“感情左右理性并不能一概而论,应因人而异”的道理。

五、引申类比法

这种方法,就是把所列举的事例加以引申或类比,联系实际,从而突出其观点的现实意义。如:

英国数学家多番维尔倾注了30多年的精力,把圆周率值推算到小数点后800多位。可是后人发现,他在第300多位时就出了错误,也就是说,他后面二十几年的努力都是白费。科学是容不得半点马虎的,多番维尔如果能在推算过程中经常客观地审查自己的步骤和数据,就可能不会留下这个遗憾了。科学如此,人生又何尝不是?常常听人后悔自己做得不好,什么不该做;事后再多的悔恨也于事无补,我们应该从中吸取教训,对“出”的意义有一个更好的认识。(考场优秀作文《人生的“出”与“入”》)

这段话由英国数学家多番维尔的事例,引申出一个人做人、处事或认识社会应“出乎其外”,审察反观,这样才会少犯错误。

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篇19:英语议论文的写作方法与技巧指导

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议论文写作是几种常见文体中要求较高的一种。下面语文迷网整理了一些写作方法,希望对你有帮助。

一、议论文的文体特点和写作要求

英语议论文同中文议论文一样也是以议论的方式,通过摆事实、讲道理来阐述自己观点的一种文体。高中英语议论文是一种限制性的写作, 其论点、论据、论证都必须十分明确,学生必须结合题目要求来阐述相关观点。

议论文的结构可分为三个部分:1、引言段引出一个令人关注的问题或明白地亮出自己的观点,如提倡什么,支持什么,反对什么。 2、主体段对提出的问题进行分析、推论、并运用归纳法、演绎法和类比法等进行论证,取得以理服人的效果。3、结论段可以用两三句话来结束文章,同时要注意重申论点,与引言段呼应,但不能照搬原话。务必做到论点明确、要点齐全、论证严密、结构严谨、层次分明、首尾呼应。

二、议论文的写作方法与技巧

一)、审好题

人们常说:“磨刀不误砍柴功”。审题是写作的开始,是写好作文的前提条件,“好的开始是成功的一半”,议论文写作也不例外。只有明确题目要求,确立观点,确定论证方法及全文段落安排,才可能成功写出一篇好的议论文。如果写偏了题,再精心的构思、再好的语言表达也是枉然。审题主要包括六个方面:一是判断议论文所属类型。英语议论文根据命题特点,从形式上来看可分为如下类型: ①“一分为二”的观点。如:“轿车大量进入家庭后,对家庭、环境、经济可能产生的影响”。②“两者选一”的观点。如:“乘火车还是乘飞机”。③“我认为……”型,如:“你对课外阅读的看法”。④“怎样……(how to)”型,如:“怎样克服学习中碰到的困难”。⑤ 图表作文,通过阅读图表中的数字与项目得出一个结论或形成一种看法(杨家贵,2005)。二是确立该文的论点或作者须持的观点,以及支撑论点的道理和事实。三是确定全文所包括的要点。四是确定段落数及每段适用的连接词、过渡句,使文章连接紧凑、过渡自然、层次分明。五是选择全文主要时态及各段适用的其它时态。六是判断该文的格式,是书信还是短文。审题完毕,随即列出提纲。

二)、注重主题句的设置

主题句又叫中心句(topic sentence),是段落的论点,限制段落中议论的范围,是整个段落的纲领。主题句必须要正确,要明确表明作者赞成什么,反对什么。主题句在一篇百来字的议论文中好比“画龙点睛”,帮助作者分层次阐述自己的观点,让读者快速了解作者的观点。

1、确定主题句的位置

英语议论文的主题句宜设在段首第一句,这是由以下两个因素决定的。1)、主题句出现的位置有三种情况:①在段首,以便读者浏览主题句就可掌握文章的概要,这个位置适用于写提供信息或解释观点的段落;②在段末;③段中(高长梅,2000)。2)、英语民族的思维特点是常采用路标式(直线式)篇章结构,即主题句在段首。

2、写出好的主题句

好的主题句具有以下特点:①有一定的概括性,普遍性而不是罗列具体事实。②句意明确而不是模糊不着边际。③让人有话可写而不是给出无可辩驳的事实。④不以问题的方式出现,也不要同时表达两个以上的观点。笔者要求学生写了以下的主题句:

1)Staying up late is bad for our health.

2)The more cars, the better?

3)There are two reasons why some people are fascinated by Super Girls and two reasons why some dislike them.

4)Beijing is famous for the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Imperial Palace and other places of interest.

5)a. Tom is a middle school student.

b. Tom is a hard-working middle school student.

6)Living in small cities is better than living in big cities.

然后让学生对照主题句的特点,他们一致认为1)、5)b、6)为好的主题句。在实践和对比中,学生学会了如何写好的主题句,并且运用到议论文写作中,收到较好效果,见以下实例(下段黑体部分是主题句)。

Everyone lives by selling something. For example, teachers live by selling knowledge, philosophers by selling wisdom and priests by selling spiritual comfort. Though it may be possible to measure the value of material goods in terms of money, it is extremely difficult to calculate the true value of services which people perform for us. The conditions of society are such that skills have to be paid for in the same way that goods are paid for at a shop. Everyone has something to sell.

由此可见,好的主题句能帮助作者阐明观点,起到提纲挈领的作用。作者围绕段落的中心论点,运用多种方法展开论证,达到以理服人的效果。

三)、用好连接词和过渡句

从行文需要出发选用恰当的连接词、过渡句可使整篇文章文句流畅,句意转换自然,同时使表达合乎逻辑,文章结构严谨。倘若一篇议论文的段落里不乏高级词汇和复杂语法结构,但缺少了连接词、过渡句的润色而不能从一个观点自然地过渡到另一个观点,或段落里的各论据(supporting sentence)连接松散,势必削弱论证的效果,就算不上一篇好的议论文。下面分别说明如何有效运用连接词与过渡句。

1、句与句的连接词

连接词通常由连词、副词、介词短语和插入语等充当。如何有效使用连接词,使句意连贯、紧凑,以体现文章良好的严密的论证逻辑?

2.段与段的过渡句

过渡句帮助作者展示文章的条理和层次。恰当运用过渡句能使表达锦上添花。当文章从一个层次转换到另一个层次,或由一段内容转入另一段内容时需要用过渡句。恰当有效的运用过渡句,效果明显(见下文,题目及要求略,黑体部分为过渡句)。

Wearing school uniform every day spreads an order over many schools. Is it good or bad for students? Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter.

Some people say that it has a bad effect on developing students’ personal character. According to them, students are tired of wearing the same clothes every day, which is hard to tell who’s who. Furthermore, the cost of the school uniform is not low as many people think. With the bad quality, it’s not well worth the money.

However, as a popular saying goes: “Every coin has two sides.” Others argue that it is good for students. In their opinion, wearing school uniform will prevent students from wasting so much money on clothes and the time on catching up with the fashion. In addition, it’s easy for the teachers to recognize the students. There is no doubt that wearing school uniform every day is good for students.

In short, I firmly support the view that we should wear school uniform.(康珍,2005)

上文黑体部分综合体现了恰当、有效运用连接词和过渡句的最佳效果。全文行文流畅、衔接自然、条理清楚,浑然不觉作者是在套用各种连接词和过渡句。因此,非常有必要熟记一些常用典型的议论文过渡句,使议论文结构严谨,论点清楚,行文流畅。

1)引言段的常用过渡句

Recently we had a heated discussion on…, Opinions are various among different people.

Different people have different opinions on the question of …

They differ greatly in their attitudes towards …

Different people hold different views/opinions on this matter.

Although most people think… I believe…

此类过渡句能迅速引起读者注意,自然而然地引出全文要讨论的话题,或者开门见山地阐明文章的论点。

2)主体段的常用过渡句

Some may hold the view that… because… But others have a negative attitude. From their point of view…

Some people think that… While others believe…

Some people are for the idea of… because… But some people are against the idea of… because …

本文所指议论文的主体段可以是一段也可以是两段。通过正确使用过渡句,文章思路清晰,结构清楚,显示作者严谨思维,增强表达效果。

3)结论段的常用过渡句

As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with the statement that…

Therefore, it’s easy to draw the conclusion that…

As a consequence/result, I firmly support the view that…

Taking all these factors into consideration, we may reach the conclusion that…

To sum up/in a word/in conclusion/in short/above all/in general/ generally speaking, I still hold the view that…

运用过渡句的提示作用进入结论段,作者或是重申论点,或是强调论点,以便加深读者对全文的了解和深刻认识。

英语议论文范文:

Should Examination Be Abolished (取消)?

The examination system has come to be the main theme (主题)of modern education. One should take an examination andsucceed in passing it before he could be admitted, promoted or graduated. As it plays so important a role in the realm of education (教育的领域) it is under much criticism (评论) as to its validity (有效性) . People who are in favour of it try to develop this system more; those who are against it believe that such a system should be abolished. Should examination be abolished? In my opinion it should be.

Many people think that an examination is the only means to test knowledge, but, in fact, that is not true. A few questions given in an examination could by no means cover the whole field of the subject. Thus those who are able to answer them may be the poorest of the students and yet happen to know just a few points about that subject.

Id like to say that, because of the existence of the examination system, students pay so much attention to gaining high marks, that they often forget the chief purpose of education. The so-called clever students devote (贡献) themselves to the study of textbooks only. They, of course, know nothing but the skeleton (梗概) of knowledge. The end and aim of education, however, is to enable students to learn how to live. To do this, students must get themselves to do all kinds of training, physicalas well as mental. The present examination system has discouraged students from making such an attempt.

Moreover, since the students try so hard to put their lessons into memory in as short a time as possible, psychologically (心理上来看), they soon forget the whole subject as soon as the examination is over. Surely this is one of the greatest wastes ever made in the history of civilization.

Lastly, in order to get high marks, there is a great temptation (诱惑) for students to cheat (作弊) in an examination. Indeed, such a practice becomes the means to the end. They cheat their teachers, their parents and also themselves. Such a tendency would impair (损害) our moral standards (道德标准) .

Therefore, I am of the opinion, in conclusion, that the examination system should be abolished.

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你的朋友首次来该城镇。仔细观察下图,用英语写一篇短文,向他介绍城里最热闹的街道并告诉他从火车站怎样到达这条街(第一句话已给出)。

I would like to make some recommendations to make your first visit to our town a pleasant one.

Our City

I would like to make some recommendations to make your first visit to our town a pleasant one. The busiest street in our town is Prospect Avenue. There are many things to do and see in this street.First, you could visit the Art Museum, where an art show is going on.Directly across the street from the Art Museum is the library. If you would like to buy some books you could cross Third Street and go to the book store. It is on the south side of Prospect Avenue. From there, if you would like a snack, you have several choices. Continuing west on Prospect Avenue you could visit the ice-cream shop, the bakery, or the candy store. Finally, cross Second Street and enjoy all the unusual animals at the pet store.

To find Prospect Avenue from the train station,turn left on Fourth Street and head south. It is just two blocks to the entrance of the Art Museum. I hope you will enjoy your visit!

我们的城市

为了让您愉快轻松地参观我们的城市,现在我向您简要介绍一下我们的城市。在我们城市里最繁华的街道是Prospect Avenue,这条街上你可以看到许多景致,随意买到你喜欢的东西。首先,你可以参观艺术馆,那里即将举行艺术展。从这里穿过这条街有一座图书馆,如果你想购书的话,你可以穿过第三条街到书店里买,这家书店位于Prospect Avenue的南侧;如果你想就餐,你有好几种选择,沿着这条街继续西行,你就会发现一家冰淇淋店、一家面包店和一家糖果店。最后穿过第二条街,到一家宠物店你可以欣赏到许多与众不同的动物。

从火车站出来,在第四条街向左转,然后向南直行,即可到达ProsPect AVenue。仅仅通过两个街区,你就会找到艺术馆。希望你玩得开心!

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