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我的父亲英语作文小学生20篇

南昌起义宣告了中国共产党独立领导武装斗争和创建人民军队的开始。下面是小编整理的建军节作文,欢迎大家参考!

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假期小学英语作文

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During those days. I enjoyed myself. At first, I went to the zoo to see lovely animals. And then. I went to the sea world to see beautiful fishes. That was very interesting.

Secondly I went for a trip with my parents, we went to Linxia to visit my grandparents and to eat minority’s foods. We rode horse on the grassland and had a fun with local children. It was very exciting. After that, I held a party and invited some of my best friends to visit my house.

My mother bought a lot of tasty foods for us, we also took many photos on the party. We played very happy. I also watched lots of carton films at home, they were wonderful.

I like the holiday. I like my May Day.

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篇1:父亲的背小学作文

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父亲弯着身子,那躬着的背是岁月的痕迹,风雨曾从哪里走过,那个背显出了父亲这几十年来的辛劳,渗透出劳累的汗水。

当我蹒跚学步的时候,父亲用有力的双臂搂起我,让我骑在他的背上,在地上爬来爬去,“骑大马啦!”父亲用他那结实的背,送来了我儿时的欢乐。

父亲受了一辈子的苦,他小时候,家里很穷,没有钱,父亲便努力干活,白天上山挖草喂猪,晚上忙着照顾家里,还要照看两个年幼的妹妹与弟弟,对奶奶也很孝顺。贫穷并不能挡住父亲那颗追求知识的心,他可以上学了,从小学到中专,虽不是什么名牌大学毕业的,但是,他却很有知识,还经常向我吹嘘自己:门门功课都考一百分。我虽然不是很相信,但我知道他是为了激励我好好学习,人穷志不穷。

父亲娶了母亲后,因关系不和,母亲一气之下撇下我和爸爸走了。父亲一个人承担起了家里的重担,白天去上班,晚上回来做饭。虽然工资很少,但父亲省吃俭用才养活了我。

我八岁了,父亲仍用他的手抱起我,背着我到处跑来跑去。十二年的光阴逝去,父亲挺直的背变弯了,但他却依然努力工作,弯下腰来干活。

时光流逝,流水无情,风雨不停地摧残着父亲的背,但父亲就是用这种韧劲生活了下来。我想用一双温暖的手,去抚平父亲的背,用亲情暖化父亲心中的积雪。

父亲的背依然弯着,在一个小屋里依然有着他瘦小的身影,依然回荡着“父爱无悔”对父亲的赞美。

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篇2:小学二年级英语作文:我可爱的父亲MyLovelyFather

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My Lovely Father

可爱父亲

I have a busy father . He works in a big office .He has a big company.He is busy every day . He has many thing to do .

He has no time to go home for lunch . He gets home at 7:00 p.m . At home he does the housework.

He cooks nice dishes for mother and me .On weekends , he often goes to the park with me .Sometimes he goes to swim with me ,too. I like to stay with my father .

He is a good father , he is also a happy business man .

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我有一个忙碌的父亲。他的作品在一个大办公室。他有一个大公司。

他每天都忙得不可开交。他有许多事情要做。他没有时间回家吃午饭。他回家在7:00万。他在家做家务。他煮给母亲和我好菜肴。

周末的时候,他经常去公园跟我,有时他陪我游泳了。我喜欢留在我的父亲。

他是一个好父亲,他也是一个快乐的商人。

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篇3:秋游的小学六年级英语作文

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小学六年级秋游英语作文1

Perhaps autumn is the most pleasant season of the year. The weather is neither too hot nor too cold. It is the best time for going on a trip.

Last Sunday we went to the countryside. There was golden wheat all over the fields/The fields were covered with golden wheat. Large and colourful apples and pears were hanging on the trees. We could see some peasants were busy getting in the crops in the fields, and others were picking fruits under the trees. All the baskets were full of lovely fruits. It was also the fruit of the peasants labour. No pains, no gains. What a magnificent/beautiful picture! It seemed as if we were wandering in a splendid/wonderful world.

I love autumn. I love the harvest time.

小学六年级秋游英语作文2

I always dream about returning to the past. As many people say, childhood is the happiest and easiest time in one’s life.

Children show you their true emotions. They know what is compassion and what is tolerance better than adults. In their world, all real thoughts are presented. They may easily have different opinions with others, but they never understand what is animosity. They enjoy making friends but they never think about making social communication net. Every child talks from the bottom of his heart without evil plans hidden and never intrigues against each other. Only in children’s way can adults make our life simple, more real and more enjoyable.

I wish everyone’s heart would keep as innocent and lovely as they ever did in their childhood. Then, the walls between our hearts can be broken down and the world would be a better place to live in.

小学六年级秋游英语作文3

Today, the teacher took us to zhongshan park. Here, everyone was so happy! In the autumn of talking and laughing on the road, like a happy little sparrow.

We went to the zhongshan park, there are two stone lions see stone road on both sides, terrible squatting at the door.

Upward along the stone path, see stone road on both sides of the yellow and green leaves, the autumn wind blows, the falling pieces of leaves, like a butterfly dancing in. We quickly climb halfway up. See below flickering skyscrapers, the car on the road is the size of a pencil case. Walk to the top of the hill, Chen teacher gave us a good team, we all sat on the bench, bathed in the warm autumn sunshine, laughing, and eating their food, and you gave me to eat, I eat for you. Really is happy!

The teacher took a photograph, we took our laughing faces, leaving the autumn the best memories.

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篇4:小学的四年级英语日记

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小学四年级英语日记

Spring comes.ltsgetting warmer and warmer.Everything is dry, trees, fields and even the air. Just then, it rains. lts as soft as silk. lt washes the dirty of the earth and waters the plants and the fields. lt also waters peoples hears. Farmers stand in the spring rain and smile.

Spring rain is as dear as oil They seem to see the harvest time inautumn. Spring rain brings water to the air. It also brings hope to people.

小学四年级英语日记

Next week I would like to go to Kaifeng and parents. Kaifeng has many great snacks, such as steamed buns, sesame seed Gaul. Kaifeng also on the famous Qingming River Park, I think it has to be very beautiful. My parents will be opened to see my uncle and live in his house one night.

小学四年级英语日记

August 12,2012 Friday Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will feel happy and become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once again, I make a decision to be a good girl.

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篇5:感谢你父亲小学作文

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活就像一部电梯,此起彼伏,虽然它能带你去想要的地方,但是它始终不能在没有按键的情况下,带你重返原地。从此,我便知道——生活没有退键。

我的个性里有一种逃避,不敢面对现实,只要一到重要时刻就会慌了手脚。就拿平时的百米训练来说吧,我只跑80米,剩下20米总是交给吹鼻子瞪眼的教练去。

那考试也不例外,人小鬼大的我总是想尽一切办法来逃避,于是一场精心酝酿的诡计便开始了

哎哟哟,哎哟哟一声声撕心裂肺的吼声划破早晨的宁静。疼死我了,疼死我了。我躺在床上捂着肚子装模作样地哀叫着,还不停地来回翻滚着。爸爸闻声赶来,轻轻地问:怎么了?

我——我肚子痛。我撒谎的本领似乎越来越高超,竟然脸不红,心不跳。就在我一幅可怜兮兮的样子,心里暗自庆幸自己快要得逞的时候,爸爸居然轻描淡写地说:今天是考试的日子吧!快点起床,上学去。对了,咱们花盆里种的水仙开了。当初你说不种的时候,我坚持把它一直养着,现在它开了,你要不要去看看?

我不禁一怔:那花,我不是把它拔了吗?怎么眼前的水仙花优雅地舒展着花茎,粉红色的花朵在碧绿的叶子衬托下格外引人注目我番然醒悟,才知道花儿也不是那么轻言放弃的。既然有个春天可以为花儿绽放,为何不好好珍惜?自己在耕耘的季节辛勤播种,为何不在秋天把自己的成果采撷呢?

感谢父亲,让我在学会收获,学会面对——生活永远没有退键。

[感谢你父亲小学作文

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篇6:小学六年级英语一封信

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Dear Editor-in-Chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!

I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.

There are many advantages of Global Mirror. Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news. By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them. In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.

As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language. Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.

Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular. Thank you for your time!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

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篇7:我眼中的父亲小学

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我眼中的父亲,时而幽默,时而严厉,让人着摸不透他的脾气。

就说今天早上吧,起床时还笑着说:“我今天怎么又是懒虫啊?”说着向四处望望,当看到弟弟的时候,脸色由晴转阴,,大声说:“干什么呢?快吃饭!”说着走上前去,在弟弟背上打了一下,弟弟立刻转过去吃饭,爸爸这才露出笑脸,说:“这才像样嘛!”

还有一次,爸爸正与弟弟玩得高兴,我拿着试卷走过来,爸爸看了,说:“怎么只有这么点分数?”我认为爸爸要打我了,可谁知道,爸爸把试卷放到一边,说:“来玩吧!”我惊得目瞪口呆。

这就是我眼中的父亲。或许父亲身上有很多的缺点,但人无完人,就让我们用一颗宽容、敏感的心,去寻找、去领悟山一样厚重、还一样深沉的父爱吧!

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篇8:小学生一件高兴的事英语作文

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I started playing a small note, good things, bad things too numerous to mention, I will list a happy thing for everyone to see it.

Once, I told my buddy Xu Weiming to play with the embankment. We saw a lot of pebbles in the distance, we went together in the past, put a row of pebbles thrown into the river, the game who threw far, and later we play sweat, they sat on the cobbled puff.

I found a piece of wood in the distant stone heap. I said to Xu Weiming: "We put the board as a surfboard, how?"

"Well, and I mean." Xu Weiming happy said.

I said, "Let me try it first!"

"Well, thats all right." Xu Weiming hesitated.

So, I do a good job "skateboard" on the slope, after a long while also filament does not move. I had to ask for help Xu: "Xu Weiming, you kick me kick me down." So he told me to give me a kick. I "thundered" slipped down. That feeling really cool. The final direction did not master, planted a few big somersault, became a sand man.

I went up, down to Xu Weiming smile before leaning forward. I look at the ground of a pool of water, the whole big face, even my own laughter. Later, when he slipped my lesson in the downhill stopped the surfboard before no old tricks. So we spent a pleasant afternoon.

This is one of my happy things, you also told me to listen to it!

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篇9:体育英语作文小学80词

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People are enjoying the comfortable life of the modern civilization,

meanwhile, they are also experiencing more and more competitions and suffering

much more stress than before.With the tremendous rhythm of living imposed by

todays world, it isnt unusual for people to feel tired and to try to evade from

the daily problems and stress. I think that there is no magic way that is

appliable to every one of us, and proves itself the most efficient method of

escaping stress. Each man has his specific activities that help him regain the

joy of life. For me the best activities to reduce stress and to forget about

problems are sleeping,playing football, going on a short vacation to the

countryside, attending live performances and spending time with my friends and

with my family.

First and foremost, sufficient sleep, needless to say, is indispensable for

each person, especially those encountering difficulties and suffering enormous

stress. There is no denying that sleep could bring the body sufficient rest,

modulate the function of each organ and release the body from stressful status.

Whats more, sufficient sleep would enable the brain operate more swiftly and

efficiently, thus making us more energetic to handle difficulties. Therefore,

not only could sleep loose the fatigue of the physical body, but also release

the mental stress.

What is more, I think that family is the most important thing in a mans

life. They are always there when you need them. Family provides support when you

need it most, helps you go through the difficult moments of your life.The most

important of all, their love for you gives you confidence in yourself, and makes

your life easier and a lot more beautiful. Friends also have an important role,

because you can evade from concerns by going out with them, talking about things

that are not related to your work, and sharing with them your problems and your

acheivements.

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篇10:与父亲佳节相关的小学二年级

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六月的第三个星期日是父亲节,学校说要进行“猜猜我有多爱你”的征文比赛。一回到家,我就和妈妈一起热烈地探讨起来。妈妈问我:“宝贝儿,你觉得爸爸是个什么样的人?”

我歪着头,眼珠骨碌骨碌地转动着,仔细地想了想,认真地回答:“我觉得爸爸很聪明、很可爱、很幽默,还很帅。”“那你觉得爸爸最大的优点到底是哪样呢?”妈妈开始刨根究底了。

“对了,爸爸最大的优点是勤快、能干!”我觉得自己终于想出了一个最棒的答案。

每天早上六点半,爸爸早早地就起了床为我买来早餐,还会大声地表扬我自己刷牙洗脸穿衣服。七点钟,就会风雨无阻的开车送我上学。一路上,我啃着早餐,最喜欢和爸爸一起讲讲在班上和同学玩的各种趣事,大家有说有笑可高兴啦。

爸爸做得一手好菜,最好吃的要数糖醋排骨。为了让我吃到最好的排骨,爸爸会一大早带我去菜市场买来漂亮的排骨,回家洗干净、切好、蒸熟,最后放到锅里面炒,做得可认真可辛苦了。糖醋排骨是用番茄酱炒出来的,红红的甜甜的香香的,馋得我直流口水,我还给这道菜取了个有趣的名字——番茄酱炒肉。每次看到我把饭菜吃得光光的,爸爸就会心满意足地笑了。

晚上下班回家了,不管多晚,爸爸进门后的第一件事就是帮我检查作业。遇到我不会做的题目,爸爸会认真地举例子,不厌其烦地帮我讲解,一直到我会了为止。

爸爸还很关心我,碰到我和小朋友玩吵架打架了,爸爸就会像一头雄壮的大狮子,冲出来把那些讨厌的小孩赶走,保护着我这只弱小的小狮子。

我要大声地对爸爸说:“老爸,您辛苦了!您是最能干的!宝贝永远爱你!”

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篇11:我的毛衣小学英语作文

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My mother buys me a lot of clothes, among these clothes, I like the sweater which is knitted by my mother best. My mother is good at knitting sweater, she knits the sweater for me in the winter, I feel so warm when I put on it. I am so thankful to my mother, for she taking care of me all the time, I will return her love when I grow up.

我的妈妈给我买了很多的衣服,在这些衣服当中,我最喜欢妈妈给我织的那件毛衣。我的妈妈很擅长织毛衣,她在冬天给我织了那件毛衣,当我穿上那件毛衣的时候,会感觉到很暖和。我很感激我的妈妈,她一直在照顾着我,等我长大了,我要回报她的爱。

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篇12:快乐的英语课小学一年级优秀作文

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星期四上午,一位来自加拿大的老师给我们上了一节快乐英语课。

上课铃响了,这位长着满头金发的外籍老师走进了我们班的教室。同学兴奋极不已,热情地向老师问好,教室里热闹极了!

课堂上,同学们聚精会神,老师教的每一个字母,我们都认真地读,老师说的每一句话,我们都认真地听。这节课,老师教了我们“笑”、“哭”、“想”等很多英语动词,还教我们给单词配上了有趣的动作,我们很感兴趣,每个人都学得津津有味。

不知不觉,下课的时间到了。老师动情地大声对全班同学说:“I love you!”可同学们都舍不得这位英语老师,簇拥着老师离开教室。

我希望下个星期快点到来,再一次见到这位漂亮的外国老师,再上那快乐的英语课。

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篇13:春天小学英语作文

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My last Spring Festival is exciting. I visited my grandparent and I also got lucky money .In the evening,our family sat around the table to ate dumpling and talked to others.Then we sat together to watched TV.We all had a good time!

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篇14:小学生感谢父母的英语作文

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Parents is one day, a day of rain, parents is a tree, protect us grow, their selfless dedication of his own life, let the children grow up safe protection. Their pay is not anything in return, they comforted for the growth of children, for their own pay without regret. In the world because of their love, break through the layers of obstacles in the world changes in temperature to have a letter true zhi scenery... The children have mushroomed generally lively up, but also like a weed is uneven.

Good family can cultivate harmonious personality, make a good man. Because of the parents, it would not have been lost in faith; Rush of starlight, just had moments of light. Every child happy childhood has your escort. When tears, silently blessing you, waiting for you; Sad, you softly comforted; When you lose, you teach earnestly. How many unforgettable time, every day can hear you tender words, every day can feel the strength of your powerful support.

Experienced how many cold sun, how many day night, the great parents, how much you pay? Looked at the child growing up bit by bit, bit by bit mature, the shadow of your face already is full of ravines, hair become white hair. You remember our hours of joy, and cultivate the beautiful future, you are concerned about ZhaoEr female of food and clothing, you back caring ZhaoEr woman. Are you open of the road of life, embrace of love are you, you are leading the people see the future.

Because of you, ignorant children understand the life of truth, good habits achievements in our life.

Because of you, the world has hope; Because of you, the world is full of love.

Because of you, the world become so beautiful!

父母是一片天,是一片遮风挡雨的天,父母是一颗树,保护我们成长,他们无私的奉献着自己的生命,让孩子在成长中得到安全的保护。他们的付出是不要任何回报的,他们为儿女的成长感到欣慰,为自己的付出无悔。世上因为有了他们的爱,突破了层层阻碍,在冷暖人间有了一方真情挚信的风景……孩子们如雨后春笋一般活泼向上,但也如野草般参差不齐。

好的家庭可以培养和谐的性格,造就一个好人。因为有了父母,迷茫中才有了坚定的信念;催擦的星光,才有了瞬间的点亮。每一个儿童快乐童年都有您保驾护航。流泪时,您默默祝福、守候;悲伤时,您轻声安慰;失败时,你谆谆开导。多少个难忘的时光,每天可以听到您温柔的话语,每天可以感受到您强大的支撑的力量。

经历过多少严寒骄阳,多少白昼黑夜,伟大的父母,你们付出了多大的代价呀?看着一点一点长大的孩子,一点一点成熟的影子,您脸上已布满沟壑,青丝变成白发。您回忆我们小时欢乐身影,培育着美丽的未来,您关心着儿女的温饱,您惦记着儿女的归来。您是开启孩子人生之路的人,您是怀抱爱的人,您是引领看到未来的人。

因为有了您,无知孩童明白了做人的道理,良好习惯成就了我们一生。

因为有了您,世界有了希望;因为有了您,世界充满了爱;

因为有了您,世界变得如此美丽无比!

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篇15:我的父亲英语

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My father is an ordinary people. He is a driver. He doesn’t receive too much education. But he is kind-hearted. He always ask me to be down-to-earth and keep an optimistic mind. Everyone likes him because of his good personality. He is always ready to help others if he can. Sometimes when he drives the old, he will not take monet frome them. He is so great. He has set a very good example for me. He is my idol. I will love him forever.

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篇16:描写父亲的小学生

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爸爸,一个既平凡又不平凡的人。 爸爸不像妈妈那么伟大,全世界几乎每个国家叫妈 妈开头都以M开头,如美国的Mum。而爸爸呢?开头拼音都是各式各样的,美国开头是:F。更好笑的是,日本叫爸爸是:haha……可是,爸爸是比妈妈更付出爱的人,只是,他是默默无闻的……

爸爸是一家之主,家里的生计全由他一个人工作而来的。所以,他很少在家吃饭,有时连周六周日都见不到他的身影。回家了,也带着一身疲劳回家,但他,却时时逗我们笑…… 我每天都给他检查作业,因为他的知识水平还不错,虽然普通话说不准。 有一天,我写完数学作业,并自己检查完时,爸爸还没回家。此时,已临近九点,我也不得以上床。我把作业轻轻地放在他的写字桌上。那天,他很晚才回家……第二天,一起床,便醒目地看见,在桌子上,有我的数学作业,上面有一题错了,爸爸用铅笔圈出来,旁边有一张大纸,上面是那道题的正确答案……

其实,在我们身边,有许许多多的爱,他们有的爱在表面,有的爱在心里。想起爸爸这种爱,是冷在外表,爱在心里。有些人总抱怨自己的父亲,说他很冷漠,总是不关心别人。其实,只要你细细的感受一下,就会发现,其实爸爸也有给予你爱。

父亲与母亲的爱不同,母亲爱在表面,父亲爱在心里。 细细的品味一下吧,父亲的爱。

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篇17:关于告别校园的小学英语作文

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I study in grade six and I will be a middle school student soon. I need to leave my campus and go to another city. Leaving the place that I have stayed for six years is a little sad. But thinking about the new life and the new challenges, I feel excited. it is hard to say goodbye sometimes, but it means growing up.

我现在在上六年级,我很快就会成为一名中学生了。我不得不离开校园,去另一个城市。离开我已经呆了六年的地方会有点难过。但是想到新的生活和新的挑战,我感到兴奋。有时很难说再见,但这意味着成长。

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篇18:小学生英语优秀日记

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Zhang Ying is my good frind. Shs in Class1, Grad4 of Tianjiao Primary School. Shs a modl studnt. Shs clvr and shs hlpful, too. Sh oftn hlps tachrs and young studnts at school. Sh is good at Chins, maths, nglish, arts and crafts, music and so on. Sh has a lot of hobbis. Sh liks painting and drawing. And sh liks listning to music, having picnics with hr parnts. Oh yah, sh liks fishing, too. But sh dosnt lik playing basktball, football, tabl tnnis or vollyball. Zhang Ying is th bst frind of min. I lik playing with hr. W always work togthr and hlp ach othr.

[小学英语优秀日记

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篇19:小学作文拥抱爸爸优秀600字父亲的爱作文600字

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人们常说:母爱如山,可我觉得父爱也不可磨灭。在我心中,母爱是慈祥的,而父爱则是严厉的。哈哈!一阵阵欢笑声响彻云霄,原来是我又在看《喜羊羊与灰太狼》。快去做作业!唉哟,真是的,老爸老妈都拥有狮吼神功的本领,我可倒八辈子大霉了!我忿忿不平地想。

老爸,再让我看一会儿吧,就一小会儿。哎呀,我求求你了!我老爸最好了&&我软磨硬泡地说了一大堆,嘴皮都快磨破了,可老爸不为所动,还是斩钉截铁地说不行!计划失败,我只得灰溜溜地回到书房。嘿嘿!上策不行,我还有下策呢!我拿起书房钥匙,把门锁好。我脚一踮,腰一弯,手一缩,准备偷偷地溜出去。我刚准备骑上自行车开溜,身后突然多了个影子,是爸爸?我心里直哆嗦。一回头,更是让我心惊胆颤。只见爸爸双手插腰,凶神恶煞般地盯着我。爸爸二话不说,抡起手掌就往我脸上抽了一记耳光,我顿时眼冒金星,疼得嚎啕大哭。快去做作业!我深知胳膊拧不过大腿,在爸爸的一声令下,便好汉不吃眼前亏,连忙跑去书房做作业。爸爸喃喃自语:这孩子&&我清楚地记得,后来爸爸对我说:你们老师发来短信,让你们在当天必须把作业全部做完。老师这样做的目的,一是让你们有时间检查;二是怕你们时间来不及,乱做作业。

要知道,我是为你好!啊,我明白了,爸爸的每一字每一句以及那一巴掌,都包含着无数的爱。那爱连大海也盛不下,父爱无边啊!富阳东洲中心小学四年级:许煜桢

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篇20:2024小学英语作文写作技巧解析

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一:用介词短语替代从句,例:

原句:While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.

修改后:During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.

原句:When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.

修改后:At the second traffic light turn left.

二:删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词,变从句为短语,例:

句:The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

修改后:The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

注:把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达,节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉,这只会引起最少的变动。

三:剔除你不需要的单词,例:

Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.

写完这样的句子后,你自己再读一遍,挑出单词"joint"和"telephone",注意删去不必要的词。

英语写作注意两点

一、先审题,弄清写作要求审题是写好作文的前提,也是书面表达的基础。如果写偏了题,语言表达再好也很难得高分。审题时要注意两个方面:

1.认真地看两遍题目,包括提示,全面了解写作要求。

2.理清思路,确定体裁、框架结构和内容。

二、用英语进行思维英语写作时必须排除汉语思维的干扰。

从现在起应逐渐加大阅读量和听的输入量,将阅读、听力训练与书面表达有机地结合起来。经常体会和领悟作者传递信息和表达思想的方式。在话题讨论和写作中经常运用所学到的表达方式就会有所创造。还要尽量做到“五多”:多看、多听、多思考、多用心体验和感悟身边的人和事、多用英语说和写自己的体验和感受。

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