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春天,散发着阵阵芳香.春天到了,果园里四处拨撒希望,小编收集了春天的故事作文,欢迎阅读。

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新生活的初一英语作文

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a few months ago, i was a primary pupil. i had many good friends and teachers that i remember all the time.

my new life is very exciting. i’m in dongzhou middle school. it’s famous in jiangsu. it’s bigger and more beautiful than the primary school. i love it very much.

i’m in class 10, grade 7. it’s a good class. the students are clever, nice, friendly and helpful. all my classmates study hard. they want to be on the top.i get up at 5:30. sometimes i read english, sometimes i learn chinese. studying is very / interesting.i’m sure our class will get better and better. i like my new class, the new school and the new life.

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篇1:初一作文:寻找春天

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小草绿了,那是春姑娘给它染的色;柳树发芽了,那是春姑娘给它的赞许;燕子从南方飞回来了,那是春姑娘悄悄告诉它的;就连春姑娘的孩子花朵们,也偷偷的红了脸颊。

春天来了,我去公园里寻找春天,公园里绿树成荫。有许多人在喂鸟,鸟儿争先恐后的吃食物,引得路人驻足观看。走到湖边,湖面一改冬天的冰冷,取而代之的是五彩斑斓的小船和成群结队的鱼儿。我恍然大悟,原来春天在平静的湖面中。

在往前走,我看到了许多的鲜花。牡丹花不愧是花中之王,所有花中,它显得最尊贵。玫瑰花红的似火,闻上去有一股淡淡的清香。丁香花香的让人无法想像,还有芍药花、牵牛花……我明白了,春天在百花争艳的花丛中。

继续往前走,我看到去年被火烧了的草地又长出了小草,真应了那句古话”野火烧不尽,春风吹又生”瞧!它们一个个挺直了身板儿,像一个个威武的长胜大将军,不管多大的风,它都站在那屹立不倒。我明白了,春天在碧绿的草地中。

春天在平静湖面上,春天在百花争艳花丛中,春天在碧绿草地中,春天在……春天来了,让我们一起寻找春天,感受春天的美好吧!

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篇2:1我和春天初一作文

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已经不知不觉的来到了,因为疫情的原因,这个春天虽然没有像以前那么多姿多彩,但也颇有几分。

上个周末,带我去了卧牛山,本以为拆了游乐设施的卧牛山会变得十分无聊,可我爬上山顶时才看到春天的美景。

我和妈妈走到了山的深处,那儿都没有,但我确信没有人的地方一定有意想不到的惊喜,果不其然,看那是什么?原来是在下闪耀的紫叶李。看到那紫叶李,我突然脑海里浮现了一句诗句:满芳菲红叶李,疏枝密蕾遍流霞。

在阳光下的紫叶李就像穿着白色纱裙的,在阳光下摆弄着她的裙摆。在微风的吹拂下,她的裙摆微微起伏。我盯着紫叶李,眼中放着光,沉浸在紫叶李的芳香与姿态之中,好像整个世界都与我无关似的,我的眼中只有紫叶李。看见这么的紫叶李,我不禁上前闻了闻,没想到紫叶李,不仅那么好看,也那么好闻。花发出淡淡的清香,那清香香又不浓,香又不腻。

我摸了摸她的花瓣。十分柔软。里面的花心。一条一条的。时不时还有蜜蜂在她的花心上采蜜呢。毕竟我想这香味应该没有任何人会拒绝吧,即便是蜜蜂蝴蝶这些小动物们。话语刚落,又飞来了一只蜜蜂,两只蜜蜂像是找到了宝藏一样,两个人手拉手跳起了欢快的双人舞,像是在庆祝什么似的。我看到这,忍不住笑了笑,又抬头望了望,蓝天白云,这场景可真是悠哉啊。

回到,我晚上睡觉的时候,坠入了我的梦海。我的梦海中有着春天,蓝天,梨花,桃花,紫叶李,哪种花不是春天的代表作?各种各样的花争奇斗艳。蓝天白云,碧波万顷,像是仙境一样。我在那个梦里变成了一只小蝴蝶,自由自在,毫无拘束地飞翔着。

春深似海,春光无限。这一场新冠疫情并未影响春的到来,在这春日里,让我们尽情领略春之美吧!

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篇3:寒假初一英语日记

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The end of the year, on New Years Eve is the reunion night, every family is decorated, celebrate a peaceful year end, the new year started.

On the eve of new years Eve, all the family are busy with the Spring Festival couplets. Our family is no exception, and the couplets at home are still posted by me every year. In fact, the knowledge of this couplet is quite great. When you saw this couplet last year, you will know the hopes and intentions of the family in the new year, and you will know what happy events happen in the familys family in the past year.

In this day, the happiest of all the children, they were early to call for adults to meet the year, because after the end of the year, they can put fireworks. When the fireworks, several children are shouting, dancing in the side, that Gaoxing Jin jiubeng mention, and even adults are also infected with them. After the fireworks one family around the table to eat family reunion dinner, the most interesting thing is to eat dumplings, and it also can eat to eat dumplings, who eat the money that who will be the best in the new year of luck, so you are to eat, who also rob the rich dumplings. But whether to eat or not to eat or eating dumplings this atmosphere is the most unforgettable......

New years Eve is the most memorable night!

结语:可以说寒假是一个新的起点,正在离我们不远处等着我们全市界的小朋友们,当然,还会有我们学校的一些大同学。

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篇4:假期生活初一英语MyVacation

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Im going to the sun for my holiday. I will go there by spaceship. I will pilot a big blue spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super shirt.

In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast. At eight oclock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes.

Then I do my homework in my little red room at a small blue table. After my homework, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice.I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. All the things are red.

Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. Ill pilot the spaceship to the earth.

This is a good holiday on the sun.

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篇5:春天英语作文

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Spring has quietly come, the country is filled with thriving vitality.

I came to the summit of a mountain. Look! Mountains in the distance with a green coat, weeping willow held out a slim green shoots, peach drew the germ of pale green. Willow also quietly quietly long green small bud. Kapok tree, plum, apricot and...... The color is green and lovely.

At the foot of the mountain, the flowers are varied, who also not to be outdone. Above the primrose, the soft branches off, compose full of weeping, golden flowers; Kapok flower blooming in the tall trees, in the face of the green mountain exceptionally beautiful, like a torch that it was burning; Azalea beside zhankai smiling faces, the brilliant red, like fire, like a sunrise, dyed red at the side of a mountain stream... How beautiful!

Look! Green, like a jade ribbon river winding around the mountain, the river bottom, the bottom that sparkling, and other delectable grains of sand, lying quietly, watching the blue sky. Pebbles and the green, yellow, brown grass all magic now, all show elegance. Strips of silver fish and loach in wear to drill in alcoves, blithely playing chase, suddenly a flash, then find.

A warm spring breeze blowing, green trees and the beautiful music played the "n oise! N oise!......" The river a flush layer slightly wavy. Flowers fragrant flavor. I stand silently, as the brain in beauty, ren of emotion in the ups and downs. Ah! What a beautiful spring!

Such a beautiful spring, who dont like?

春天悄悄地来临了,乡村里充满了蓬勃的生机。

我来到了一座山的山顶上。看!远处的高山披上了一件嫩绿的大衣,垂柳伸出了纤细的绿芽,桃树抽出了嫩绿的幼芽。杨柳也静静悄悄的长出发青青的小芽。还有木棉树、李树、杏树……那颜色真绿得可爱。

山脚下,花儿们争奇斗艳,谁也不甘示弱。迎春花那柔软的枝条垂下来,上面缀满了水灵灵、金灿灿的花朵;木棉花在高高的枝头上盛开着,在绿色的高山面前格外绚丽,像是一支到正燃烧的火炬;映山红在旁边绽开了笑脸,红艳艳的,像火苗,像朝霞,染红了山旁的小河……多么美呀!

瞧!绿得像一条翡翠的绸带似的小河,蜿蜒曲折地绕着山村,小河清澈见底,水底那亮晶晶,、黄灿灿的沙粒,静静地躺着,注视着蓝天。鹅卵石和那青、黄、褐色的水草尽现神奇,尽显风姿。一条条银灰色的小鱼和泥鳅在石缝中穿来钻去,无忧无虑地嬉戏追逐着,忽而一闪,便觅不到踪影了。

一阵暖和的春风吹来,绿树奏起了优美的乐曲“沙沙沙!沙沙沙!……”小河泛起了一层微微的波浪。花儿的清香扑鼻而来。我默默地伫立着,任大脑在美中陶醉,任心潮在美中起伏。啊!多么美好的春天呀!

这么美丽的春天,有谁会不喜欢呢?

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篇6:初一描写春天的作文200字

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春姑娘轻轻地踏着敏捷的步伐来到了人间。

抬头,你看,那被几朵轻纱缠绕于颈间的蔚蓝的天空,时不时,有几只穿着燕尾服彬彬有礼的绅士飞过。天空下,有着一棵枝繁叶茂的绿树,绿树的嫩叶垂露,盈盈欲滴,像个准备出嫁的姑娘。旁边的桃花树上那小巧的花瓣,慢慢的舒张起来,粉红色的连衣裙披在身上,花蕊向上探出头来,像一颗晶莹的宝石。树下,嫩嫩的小草亲密地挤在一起,手拉着手,远远望去,像人工织成的纯天然的精美毛毯。

看那边的湖泊,恬静得没有一丝涟漪,在湖边照着镜子梳着头发的杨柳,不知什么时候,如毛的细雨,一滴一滴的滴在湖面上,泛起层层波纹,此时岸边的杨柳,伸出长长的枝条,享受着春雨的洗刷,时不时,有调皮的鱼儿窜出水面,跳过来,跳过去,一切都是生机勃勃。

春姑娘是美丽的,是独特的,我爱春天

[初一描写春天的作文200字

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篇7:春天的英语作文

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Be in the place that a Chun Nuanhua opens.

The brook is shedding water livelily in a flock of group small fish, still have swan, southern the bird that come back group not show one‘s feelings. Firn stealthily melt. Birdie twitters ceaseless, seem to saying: “New bud new bud grows quickly, willow mom good do up one’s hair “ spring came really.

Mom tells me the The whole year‘s work depends on a good start in spring, should cherish spring.

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篇8:初一英语FreshAir

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Poeple in villages are healthier than people in towns. That is because the air in villages is very fresh. Farmers are working all day in the fields, breathing fresh clean air. But there are too many factories in cities. They produce more and more harmful gases. At last, cities are full of smoke. And theres many dust in cities,too. It may cause a disease. So fresh air is very important to the people in cities. We need fresh air. So please dont pollute the air!

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篇9:小学六年级英语作文:春天来了

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Spring comes,some people can do what they want to do.Look at the lake,the ducks swim in there.ther are laughing.I know they are very happy.Look at the trees,begin to turn green.Lot of pepole is working hard.And everywhere are so warm.Look at the sky,swallow is flying.They are Freedom.A year moment lies in spring,and Spring is very beautiful.So, I love Spring very much.How about you?

春天来了,有些人可以做他们想做的事情。看湖上,鸭子正在那游。他们在笑,我知道他们非常快乐。看树,开始变绿。很多人正在工作努力。到处都是温暖的。看看天空,燕子在飞。他们是自由的。。一年之际在于春,春天是很美丽的。所以,我很喜欢春天。你呢?

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篇10:美丽的春天英语作文

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春姑娘提着花篮,穿着彩色连衣裙,悄悄地来到了人间。春天像一位魔术师,它给了太阳火热的力量。春天像一只小闹钟,它唤醒了熟睡的小草和鲜花,让大自然充满了活力。

Spring girl carrying a basket of flowers, wearing a colorful dress, quietly came to the world. Spring is like a magician. It gives the sun the power to shine. Spring is like a small alarm clock, it awakens the sleeping grass and flowers, and makes the nature full of vitality.

春天,好多野花醒了,只见它们伸伸懒腰,挥挥手,像在欢迎春天的到来。花儿们争先恐后地开放着,有红的,黄的,白的,粉的……各种各样,把大地装扮成五颜六色的,虽然不是名贵的花,但也给大地带来欢声笑语。

A lot of wild flowers in spring, woke up and saw them stretch, waved, like to welcome the arrival of spring. The flowers vie with each other and are open, red, yellow, white and pink...... All kinds of land disguised as colorful, although not expensive flowers, but also brought laughter to the earth.

春天的风是和煦的,如妈妈的手抚摸着我的发绡;春天的雨是香甜的,如妈妈呵护着我幼小的心田;春天的阳光是温暖的,如妈妈的爱让我茁壮成长。

The spring wind is warm, such as mothers hand and stroked my hair silk; spring rain is sweet, like mothers caress my young heart; the spring sunshine is warm, like a mothers love let me grow up.

贵如油的春雨依然连绵不断地下着,它落在小树上,像给小树披上了一层美丽的纱裙;它浮在水里,像许多小虫在蠕动;它飞到田野里,给庄稼浇起了水。它滋润了世间万物,滋润了小草,滋润了庄稼……

The spring rain is as precious as oil without stop underground, it fell on a small tree, like a tree covered with a layer of beautiful veil; it floating in the water, like many insects in peristalsis; it flew into the fields, pouring the water to the crops. It moistens all things in the world, nourishing the grass, nourishing the crops......

春天是美好的季节,让我们去探索大自然的美景吧!

Spring is a beautiful season. Lets explore the beauty of nature!

[美丽的春天英语作文

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篇11:MyBirthday初一英语作文

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March 5th is my birthday.

It’s also a special day to memorize a great person -- Lei Feng. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the morning, I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school, I helped my desk-mates to repair their broken chairs.

After school, I took my birthday cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All of them hoped that I would be back again.

What a joyful birthday it was!

[My Birthday初一英语作文

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篇12:初一英语作文教学

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初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

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篇13:春天英语作文

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Unconsciously, the spring comes.

Look! Park, flowers, spring yan. There are red, blue, white, yellow, purple, black, is really beautiful. The passerby unconsciously said: "the flowers are beautiful!" Ah! Soles of the feet of the little green together as a piece of grass green, like a piece of flannel, pock, thick coating a layer of carpet. See here, I think of a word "wildfires burn born again when the spring breeze blows." Quick see! Willow green, blasting her braids hanging down the long, green, began to comb my hair. On the bottom of the stream flow, going, going to sing songs. With various kinds of fish in the river. They are some swimming; Some whisper; And in bed. Under the river also lay asleep, colorful lumps. The park is very busy, some are playing tai chi; Some are happily chatting; Some children in the chase scenes; Some in the slide; And play chess together happily. Look over the park baiyun sometimes gather together, from time to time. They are like a flock of white, the tame goats; As a power and prestige eight the tiger; Like a fairy is float to fall away, and dancing.

Look! Green fields, the farmer uncle at work - planting. Because they know that spring all the year round. So they are diligently sowing. Slowly, the sky get dark, suddenly covered with dark clouds, followed by a shower falling down. Spring rain moisturize the fertile land, moisten the seeds, the seeds of break out, the farmers saw, clap hands, and repeatedly cheered: "spring rain your such as oil!"

Ah! Beautiful spring, you full of vitality, your fragrance 4 excessive, you hope, I would like to loudly praise you!

不知不觉,春天来临们了。

看!公园内,百花齐放,争春夺艳。有红的、蓝的、白的、黄的、紫的、黑的、真是美不胜收。过路人都情不自禁地说:“这些花儿真美呀!”啊!脚底的小草绿绿地连成一片,像一块法兰绒似的,密密麻麻地,厚厚地铺了一层地毯。看到这儿,我想起一句话“野火烧不尽,春风吹又生。”快看啊!柳树爆青了,只见她垂下那又长又绿的辫子,开始为自己梳头。清澈见底的小河流动着,哗啦啦,哗啦啦地唱起歌。河里生长着各种各样的鱼。它们有的游来游去;有的窃窃私语;还有的在睡觉。小河底下还躺着一块块睡熟的、五颜六色的石头。看公园里头热闹非凡,有的在打太极;有的正开心地聊天;有的孩子在追逐打闹;有的在滑滑梯;还有的聚在一起兴高采烈地下棋。看公园上空的白云时而聚在一块儿,时而分散。它们像一群雪白的、温顺的山羊;像一只威风八面的老虎;像一个仙女正一边飘来飘去,一边翩翩起舞。

瞧!绿油油的田野内,农民伯伯在干活—播种。因为他们知道一年四季在于春。所以他们辛勤地播种施肥。慢慢地,天空逐渐变黑,顿时乌云密布,紧接着,一场淅淅沥沥的春雨居高临下。春雨滋润了肥沃的土地,滋润了种子,使种子破土而出,农民们看了,拍起手来,并且连连叫好:“真是春雨贵如油!”

啊!美丽的春天,你生机勃勃,你芳香四溢,你充满希望,我要高声地赞美你!

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篇14:春天的英语作文

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Spring has come, the road of snow and ice have disappeared off the people Not the least trace was found., thick cotton padded jacket, put on a thin clothes.

Spring has come and everything has come back. Yellow winter jasmine flowers, many trees also grow a small bud, bud rose seemed to split like the willow river; filled with green hair, gently brushed from the shoulders of the people; the grass from the earth out of the small head of green.

There are also many people in the parks and squares, some walking, some dancing, and some other games. Spring brings infinite vitality and new hope to people.

I love spring and love everything in spring!

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篇15:春天的英语作文带翻译

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This is a good start, the world for her coming lit up all the lights in between heaven and earth, she picked up the breeze of the pen, draw the mind carpet of flowers of the earth. In this world, the spring is coming.

Start from now, the world is like open space, after she started her unique prosperous. All things recovery, the creatures of the world have started to busy to complete the mission of nature gives them, to life hard for the prosperity in the world, the flowers grass grow hard, that used to sorrow, now taken on a new look! The cold night, be light cut, deported from warm, everything begins to exclamation busy!

Arrogance arrogance was away, instead, the tenderness of spring, gentle hand to comfort the frightened animals, leading them go out of his house; Spring breeze gently calling underground) awoken elf, they go up from the soil, eventually turned into a small animals like to eat fruit, to appease these lovely children of nature.

The small pool in the distance, the duck mother followed by many cute little duck, the happy fish swimming in the water, the water unconsciously become very warm. Nearby, in the warm sunshine, the petals flying in the sunshine, full of the flower branches near the grass. Those beautiful flowers, as long as gently touch will have dropped.

Then under the sky began to rain, accompanied by more and more rapid "tick tick" melody, rain, and the fairies began to scour the chill of evil, for you weave with air of filar silk cool and refreshing, this is the beginning of spring.

这是一个美好的开始,世界因她的来临点亮了天地之间所有的灯,她拿起微风的笔,画出心目中繁花似锦的大地。在这个世界里,春天来临了。

从此刻开始,世界就像初开的宇宙,开始了她独特的繁华。万物复苏,世界的生灵们开始忙碌的完成大自然给予它们的使命,为了世间的繁华努力生活,花儿草儿拼命生长,那曾经凄清之地,现在焕然一新!那寒冷的夜,被光芒划破,被温暖驱逐,万物开始感叹繁华!

嚣张的气焰被赶走,取而代之的是春天的温柔,温和的手安慰着受惊的动物们,引领它们放心大胆走出自己的家;春风轻声呼唤着地下沉眠的小精灵,它们从土壤中奋发向上,最终变成了小动物们爱吃的果实,来安抚这些大自然的可爱的孩子们。

远处的小池边,鸭子妈妈后面跟着许多乖巧可爱的小鸭子,水中的鱼儿欢快的游着,池水在不知不觉中变得十分温暖。近处,在温暖的阳光照耀下,花瓣在阳光下飞舞,开满花的树枝几乎垂到青草上。那些美丽的花儿,只要轻轻一碰就会纷纷落下。

这时的天空开始下微雨,伴随着越来越急促的“嘀嗒嘀嗒”的旋律声时,雨,这个小精灵开始冲刷罪恶的寒气,换来用空气织出的丝丝清凉,这就是春天的开始。

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篇16:春天的英语作文

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Connect dont know when to step into our world, winter elder sister also dont know what time out of our world, their arrival and departure, make the world a big change.

The earth, and the voice gave it a green quilted jacket, and see the grass out in succession, shake your body, stretch, bleary-eyed looked at the new world, connect back to the earth with colorful patterns, biltong flowers come out from the earth, one, two, one, two do morning exercises. Red, yellow, purple, colorful, full, as long as the endless woven brocades, as bright as sky glow, as gorgeous as high altitude of the rainbow.

Banks of the river, connect to give it a few soldiers, to the growth of the willow hits the ground, swinging its beautiful long hair, long hair on the small bud out slowly, watching the new world, that the green color, bright, shining our eyes, seems to have a new life on every leaf in fibrillation. With strength of roots, branches, holding a bud, insist teeth.

Streams, connect to give it a cheerful melody, drumming ding-ding, can listen, a stream of throat singing loudly, and streams on the bottom, you can see the bottom of gravel, the sand and underwater called sweet songs on the rhythm of a standard. , here is very steep, as to the mountain streams, sometimes wide, sometimes narrow, sometimes slow, sometimes nasty, creek is sometimes transform tone.

Spring is beautiful, is a vibrant, flowers, what a season of a year the four seasons can be comparable to the full of spring?

春姑娘不知什么时候步入我们的世界,冬姐姐也不知什么时候走出我们的世界,它们的到来与离去,让这个世界有了很大的改变。

大地,春姑娘给了它一件绿棉袄,看小草纷纷探出头来,摇摇身体,伸个懒腰,睡眼朦胧地看着新世界,春姑娘还给大地绣了五彩缤纷的花纹,斑斑点点的小花从泥土里冒出来,一、二、一、二的做早操。红的、黄的、紫的,五彩斑斓,万紫千红,像织不完的锦缎那么延绵,像天边的霞光那么耀眼,像高空的彩虹那么绚烂。

河岸,春姑娘给它了几个成长的士兵,一棵棵柳树拔地而起,甩着它美丽的长发,长发上的小芽缓缓的透出头来,观看新世界的事物,那翠绿的颜色,明亮的照耀着我们的眼睛,似乎每一片叶子上都有新的生命在颤动。树根力大无穷,背着树杈,举着新芽,咬牙坚持着。

溪流,春姑娘给它一首欢快的乐曲,叮叮咚咚,可好听了,小溪放开喉咙大声唱着,溪流清澈见底,可以看见水底的沙石,水底的沙石给悦耳的歌曲打上了一个标准的节奏。这里非常陡峭,随着山势,溪流时而宽,时而窄,时而缓,时而急,溪声也时而变换调子。

春天是美丽的,是生机勃勃的,是百花齐放的,一年四季之中有哪一个季节能比得上春天的万紫千红呢?

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篇17:春天英语作文

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As the saying goes: "only hour in the morning is worth two in the spring, a day, but we say spring is beautiful, beautiful where?" Is near, near, I heard the footsteps of spring, she is coming to us step step. All this report the coming of spring, my whole soul to float out, float to the promise of flowers, to the clumps of grass.

Look! Voice coming, its really long hair is beautiful! This is a spring back to the earth, a season for revival, like a snake, frog, such as cold-blooded animals stopped east, climb to the earth surface to appreciate spring, little birds in the spring of flowers bloom, the swallow nest is not back, make the atmosphere of the earth to restore the full spring. Even the spring rain, the heart also continuously harbinger for us, can be noisy! Its a good season for sowing in spring, farmers uncle took advantage of the good season began to sow, will have a good harvest in the fall, a good harvest. Spring is not as dry as next summer, hot, unlike autumn that cold and cheerless, also not as cold as winter, and spring is a vibrant, dynamic spring, which makes me think of my comprehensive mother, mother is like the earth, mother gave birth to us, we have lives, spring back to the earth, is to start all over again, everything all over again.

People can like spring, because the beautiful spring, give a person with a new start, new results, new life, new hope...

俗话说:“一年之计在于春,一日只计在于晨,但是我们说春天美,美在哪里?” 近了,近了,我听到春天的脚步声了,她正在步大步地向我们走来。这一切报告着春天的来临,我整个心都飘了出去,飘到那下去诺言的花儿声,飘到那油绿的草地上。

瞧!春姑娘来了,披真长发真美啊!这是个大地春回、万物复苏的季节,像蛇,青蛙之类的冷血动物都停止了东面,爬到大地面上欣赏春天,小鸟鸣春,百花争艳,燕子也非回来搭窝了,春天使大地恢复了万紫千红的气氛。连春雨,春雷也连绵不断地来为我们报春,可热闹了!春天正是播种的好季节,农民伯伯趁这个好季节开始播种了,到了秋天就有好的收成,好的收获。春天不像下夏天那样干枯,炎热,不像秋天那样冷清,也不像冬天那样寒冷,而春天是一个生机勃勃,充满活力的春天,这使得我想起了全面的母亲 ,母亲就像大地,母亲生下了我们,我们就有了生民,大地春回了,就等于一切都要重新开始了,所有的生命都重新来过。

人们可喜欢春天了,因为这美丽的春天,给人以新的开始,新的收获,新的生命,新的希望……

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篇18:假期生活初一英语Myholiday

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This holiday is my best busy holiday for I am learning English, computer and word and I fall in the weekend exam. Many times I want to take today off, but my mother said to me:“go on, you must belive that you can do it.” So I have to try. Now my English is better than 2months ago. I must thanks my mother, she is good for me. Practices makes perfect.

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篇19:初一英语

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These are lots of books in our daily life. Some are about history, some are

novels, and some are even about the dream in the future. I think its useful to

read stories, because it can be used sometimes. Once, there was a very difficult

question in an important history exam history, which wasnt mentioned in our

history books, even our teacher has never told us about it. But I remembered

clearly that I had read it in a history story, so I answered the question

without difficulty and became the only student in our class who answered the

question correctly. In my view, its useful to read stories.

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篇20:初一年级英语作文自我介绍

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Hello!My name is Liu Ya Min.I am a Chinese girl.I am fourteen.I am a middle school student.Frankly speaking,Irene is not beautiful.I like autumn,the ground is covered with fallen leaves.I like basketball,but I dislikes sports.I very love sit in the sun.I like sduty,sing and shopping,too.I think I am a happy girl.My family is not big.There are my parents,my two brother and I.Being the eldest,I must look after my brothers.My desire was to become a writer.

你好!我的名字是刘丫Min.I是个中国女孩。我十四岁。我是一名中学学生。坦率地说,艾琳不是美丽的。我喜欢秋天,地面被落叶覆盖着。我喜欢篮球,但我不喜欢运动。我非常喜欢坐在太阳底下。我喜欢sduty,唱歌和购物。我认为我是一个快乐的女孩。我的家人并不大。有我的父母,我的两个哥哥和我。老大,我必须照顾我的兄弟。我的愿望是成为一名作家。

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