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372初一英语作文:我最喜欢的运动员
全文共 1324 字
+ 加入清单There are many sports stars in the world. Do you know which is my favourite sport star? My favourite star is Yi Jianlian.
Yi Jianlian is a good basketballer. He is born in Heshan, Guangdong. He is 2.12 meters tall and 113 kilos. He is taller than many people, and he is hangsome and kind. He works hard in the match and in the training. So his coach and team friends all like him.
Yi Jianlian began his career quite early. When he was fifteen years old, he came into CBA. In 2002, he got the first gold medal——Asia Youth championship’s champion. After that, he helped Guangdong team win 3 gold medals from 2003 to 2006 CBA championships. And he von the CBA MVP from 2005 to 2006. In 2006 Asian Games, he got 16.6 points and 10.3 rebounds. He was the greatest basketball player in PRC, in 2006, I think.
On June 28th, 2007, Yi Jianlian came into NBA! All the Chinese people were excited. Because he is the fourth Chinese basketballer who came into NBA. All the people hope he can become better and better..
Yi Jianlian is good at playing basketball. And he is handsome, friendly, kind and so on. So he has a lot of basketball fans in the world. My mother and I are both his fans.
Yi Jianlian is my favourite star. I think, Yi Jianlian will be a famous basketball star in the world later. All the people on the earth will know him!
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篇1:快乐课间初一英语作文
全文共 562 字
+ 加入清单The bell rang and the class was over. The classroom became noisy. Some students went out of the classroom. I was just chatting with some of my classmates when Li Hong came to me. She smiled and said to me, "Whats four minus four? Do you know?" "Its zero. That is easy." answered I.
But Li Hong shook her head and said "Its wrong. Its eight." "Why? Thats impossible!" "You will understand if you cut down four corners of a desk." said Li Hong. "Is that a joke?" "Oh, yes." We all laughed. During the class break, we had a good rest. We often have a pleasant break.
篇2:初一关于运动的英语作文
全文共 1729 字
+ 加入清单Our school sports activities are rich and colorful, students can according to their own interest and hobby.
Look! Side of the students in playing table tennis, play is really fierce. If you were a little to disturb him, he will definitely not ignore you, if he lose the best chance to beat the opponent, he would have called you. Their meets table tennis table tennis racquet "lit up" sound, like playing music. Rival, always grasp the opportunity, look, the chance came, rival buckle the board, too handsome, this plate highlighted his personality.
Play basketball in the fashion now. Students of a class is a race against time to play basketball, especially the game the most interesting, can exercise the body, and can cultivate the spirit of teamwork, he is of great benefit to people. The school team after concentrated training, has the extraordinary skill, saw this scene I really envy for them. I also want to be a player when he grows up.
On physical education teacher ordered us to do a minute sit-ups and make record, the result of our class Huang Xu classmate, broke the record in four grade: 51 sit-ups. He once in Tian Ji games, after arduous efforts to create a miracle, won the first place.
Sports can strengthen peoples physique, as a celebrity said: "life is movement, and knowledge is gained by accumulation.
我们学校的体育活动真是丰富多彩,同学们可以根据自己的兴趣、爱好参加。
瞧!这边的同学在打乒乓球呢,打得真激烈。你要是稍微打扰他一下,他绝对会不会理睬你,如果他失去打败对手的机会,他准会骂你。他们的乒乓拍碰到乒乓的时候发出“蹦蹦蹦”响声,像奏乐似的。对手一直把握机会,看,机会终于来了,对手反扣一板,动作实在太帅了,这一板突出了他的个性。
现在流行打蓝球了。同学们一下课就争分夺秒的去打篮球,特别是比赛最有趣,既能锻炼身体,又能培养团队合作精神,他对人们大有好处。那些校队经过集中训练,有着非同一般的球技,看见这一幕我真是对他们羡慕不已。长大后我也要当一名球员。
上体育课的时候老师命令我们做一分钟的仰卧起坐并做好记录,结果我们班的黄旭同学,打破了小学四年级的最高记录:51个仰卧起坐。他曾经在田际运动会中,经过艰辛的努力创造了奇迹,获得了第一名的好成绩。
运动能增强人的体质,正如名人所说:“生命在于运动,知识在于积累。
篇3:初一年级英语作文:My weekend
全文共 956 字
+ 加入清单I think everyone will have a busy and interesting weekend. Now, let me introduce my busy weekend to you.
On Saturday morning, I am going to the bookstore. I’m going to buy some story-books and a Chinese-English and English-Chinese dictionary. I like reading story-books. I find them very interesting. Then I am going home. My home is near the bookstore. So I am going by bike. I like riding my bike. In the evening, I am going to play piano. Playing piano is my hobby.
On Sunday morning, I am going to do my homework. Now I am in Grade Six. I want to enter a good middle school next year. So I must study hard. In the afternoon, I am going shopping with my parents and my little brother. My mom says she is going to buy a pair of sneakers for me. I love going shopping. I think all of the girls like going shopping. Am I right.
On Sunday evening, I am going back to school by school bus. I love my weekend, how about you? Tell me something about your weekend.
篇4:英语作文常见的错误有哪些
全文共 1489 字
+ 加入清单Ⅰ 词汇错误
1) 易混淆词语的误用;
例如 effect & affect, sensitive & sensible
2) 词性的误用;
例如 Concrete structures are found to be more strangely(stronger) when they subjected to 3-dimension compression.
3) 代词的误用;
例如 The myth of the city as a promised land, that(非限制性定语从句,that 应改为which) attracts immigrants from rural poverty and brings it flooding into city centers.
4) 介词的误用;
例如Chapter 1 analyses the influence of continental climate to(on) buildings in China.
5) 连词的误用;
例如 To make a living the whole family, even if(even) their 8-year old brother, had to work in a factory.
6) 冠词的误用;
例如However, the(删除,因此处的是泛指而不是特指某个讲双语的人)bilingual people rarely have equal level of competence in all aspects of the two la
7) 专业术语的误用、或是习惯用法使用错误;
① plank n. 铺板,厚木板,支架,(政党的) 政纲条款
但土木工程结构的面板一般用slab表示,而不用plank。
② Television is rapidly becoming the literature of our periods(time).
Ⅱ 语法错误
1) 主谓不一致;
例如 The whole monstrous growth rests on economic prosperity, but behind it lies(lie) two myths:………
2) 时态错误;
例如 Where tuberculosis vanished(had vanished), it came back……
3) 主/被动语态错误
4) 虚拟语气;
例如 If something have(had) been done, the accident would not have happen.
5) 非谓语动词的误用
例如 Consider(Considering) the great need for improving many aspects of the global environment, one is surely justified……
Ⅲ 逻辑关系错误
例如 Although most important factors on concrete durability have been extensively investigated, lots are still (添加not) completely understood.
Typical errors I tend to commit in my own writing:
1)介词的误用(将词组、固定搭配记错;)
2)主谓不一致(不知主语是可数名词还是不可数名词;)
3)习惯表达
篇5:初一英语作文:学会微笑
全文共 751 字
+ 加入清单smile, how warm the word is! it can make anyone happy. and this happiness is from the bottom of heart.
it’s not like enthusiastic laughter, but just warm, makes your heart warm.
mother’s smile is like a spring wind, so gentle when you are sad, it can make you happy again; when you fail, it can make you stand up and work hard again; when you give up, it can make you try your best again…
smile, so easy, but also so useful.
| so, let’s learn to smile. everyone needs others’ smile. when we give others a smile, we will feel happy, too. and maybe next time, when you need a smile, the person who received your smile will give it to you.
let’s learn to smile often, i believe it can even make the whole warm. living with a smile, every day will be sunshine.
篇6:中考英语作文:十大常见错误分析
全文共 1998 字
+ 加入清单俗话说千里之行始于足下。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功,必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起,持之以恒。
一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体,任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而,很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意,或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s,前后不一致,以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。
1. 审题不清
如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动,有些考生将作文的主题定位为我最喜欢的活动,偏离了一项、课外活动这一主题。依据作文的评分原则,若文章内容不切题,则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确,都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功,但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分,而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差,同时也直接影响内容的表达,通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题
误 my father and my mother is all teacher.
正 my father and my mother are both teachers.
4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的,但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成,如:我累了。这个句子没有动词作谓语,而用形容词,但英语形容词不能作谓语,一定要写成:im tired.
误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.
正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.
误 the apples cheap. ill take some.
正 the apples are cheap. ill take some.
5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法,不了解中英文语言习惯的不同,也会出现明显的错误,造成丢分现象。
误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.
正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.
6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多,包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分;此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词,而英语中物主代词是不可省略的,代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.
正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.
7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊,所以出现只写半句的现象,这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.
(这段文章的第二句话没有动词,他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误,修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.
8.前后不一致
所谓不一致,包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.
例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.
(人一旦有了知识,他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has ;同理,want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.
改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化,而对英语来说,这些都至关重要。例:
误 when i get to the station the train leave.
正 when i got to the station the train had left.
10.综合性错误
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等,以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累,所以考生应该从平时练习出发,每天坚持写英语日记,多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作,提高自己的英语素养。
[中考英语作文:十大常见错误分析
篇7:初一年级英语作文friendship
全文共 1150 字
+ 加入清单When I was a child,Friendshipis a box of watercolors, graffiti with tender hands out the smiling faces of the innocent colorful, inadvertently wet the paste, oh, its ok to draw a better, more real. Childhood friendship is like a warm fire, are unscrupulous argue, is each other in anger pursed lips, plunder the parcel together sweet popcorn... Friendship is a big candied fruit, whenever taste, are gay. Thats childhood friendship, is one of the crown, naive for jewelry, do tassel romance - so beautiful so pure. This is only the blue sky belongs to the childhood friendship, friendship forever.
Grow up, friendship is a piece of transparent glass, light the lonely heart failure. Broken, is hard to together, can only hide in a corner crying silently, quietly wake up... Where fall where it on their own strong to climb up, thats our footprints of growing up.
小时候,友谊是一盒水彩笔,用稚嫩的手涂鸦出一张张五彩缤纷天真无邪的笑脸,一不小心湿了糊了,哦,没关系再画一张更好更真切的。儿时的友谊像一团热烈的火,是肆无忌惮的争辩,是互相赌气撅起的嘴,是共同哄抢的那一大包甜甜的爆米花……友谊是个大大的蜜饯,无论何时尝起,都是美滋滋的。那是童年时的友谊,是一项皇冠,天真为珠宝,烂漫做流苏——那么美丽那么纯真。这是只属于童年那片蔚蓝色天空的友谊——友谊地久天长。
长大了,友谊是一块透明的玻璃,照亮着失败落寞的心。打破了,就很难再拼凑起来,只能躲在一个角落默默地哭泣,默默地醒悟……在哪里跌倒的就在哪里靠自己坚强地爬起来,那是我们成长的足迹。
篇8:初一英语作文大全:mydream
全文共 841 字
+ 加入清单Everyone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact, a big dream is made up of many small dreams.
My name’s Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up, I must get it over.
I’m sure it’s very important to dream. Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.
每个人都有梦想。作为青年学生,我们的梦想多姿多彩。它们构成了伟大的中国梦。梦想可以是远大的,也可以是微小的。实际上,远大的梦想是从实现许多微小的梦想开始的。
我叫李红。我也有一个梦想:我希望成为一名伟大的科学家。从现在起,我必须好好学习,为实现梦想而努力。不管遇到怎样的困难,我都要克服它,决不会放弃。
我相信梦想的力量。有些梦想是比较现实的,有些梦想可能并不那么现实。不管我们的梦想是什么,我们都应该为了梦想而坚持,总有一天它们会实现的。
篇9:端午节的初一英语
全文共 1820 字
+ 加入清单Today is the Dragon Boat Festival in the 5th day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar. Every year, aunt will pack lots of delicious food. Sweet sweet jujube dumplings for us, especially my mother and I like it best. You can also eat with your elders and sisters at your grandmothers house, and enjoy the Dragon Boat Festival, but this year, it is not so lively. Uncle and aunt went out to earn money. Uncle went out with his sister. There were only three family members and grandparents. It looks very cold.
Early this morning, I have the mother will give me to eat dumplings package dates, who knows but mother was busy with housework. At noon, dad cooked a good meal and cooked food, called grandpa and grandma to come to dinner, but not a bit of a cheerful atmosphere. In the afternoon, in order not to let the festival have a little meaning, my mother and I went out for a stroll with my grandmother. We went to the market, but did not see the shadow of half of the dumplings, to buy dumplings but no jujube. I was disappointed. My mother comforted me and said, "next time you see the decision to sell the zongzi, you can eat it." Its a little better to hear that. Mom visited the clothing store and took us to the home supermarket, and bought some delicious food on the way. From the supermarket out, we have been fruitful.
Back home, I wanted my uncle and aunt, and my four year old sister, so I went online to chat with them, and the little aunt laughed and told me that a lot of jujube zongzi was given to me at the Dragon Boat Festival next year, so I could eat enough. Though we have not been together for Dragon Boat Festival this year, we can also enjoy seeing them online. Uncle and aunt also have an appointment with me. Next year, Dragon Boat Festival will definitely come back for the holidays.
篇10:英语初一
全文共 543 字
+ 加入清单Do you have any hobbies? If not ,what do you do in the holidays ? I have
many hobbies .On weekdays ,when I study in school ,I play with my classmates
.Sometimes I play volleyball with them,sometimes I play football with them .I
think playing football is very interesting and exciting .But when I get home ,I
like listening to music alone .Also I like reading story books.When I am not
happy about something ,I usually draw some pictures though I am not good at
drawing .On weekends ,there is no class ,I like shopping with my friends and my
parents .
篇11:初一英语作文Mydreamhome
全文共 537 字
+ 加入清单My dream home
My dream home is not very large.Its a wooden house. it is near the sea.Id like to have 5 rooms in my home.I have a kitchen ,a bathroom, a sitting room,a studyand my own bedroom. I like living near the sea because it is very quiet there. I can watch the sea and can always play on the beach.
The furniture in my house is all made of wooden.
It is good for our health. I like having a rest in my bedroom.I like listening to music of JJ while Im reading books in my room.I always ask my friends to come here.
篇12:介绍动物园的初一英语作文
全文共 552 字
+ 加入清单Today is Sunday.Its sunny today.I go to the zoo with my mother.I can see many animals.There are tigers,lions,pandas,snakes and many more.Look!The pandas are over there.Theyre from China.Look at the baby panda!Its climbing trees. How cute it is!I love pandas.
Next,we go to see the lions.The lions are so strong.Their mouths are too big.The tigers ae next to them.They are from Asia.They are yellow.At last,we go to see the monkeys.Some are climbing moutains,some are eating bananas.THeyre so much fun!
I see many animals at the zoo and Im so happy today!
篇13:初一年级英语作文:Weekend
全文共 579 字
+ 加入清单The Jacksons spend their happy time on Sundays. They get up early in the morning. After breakfast, they go to church. There they meet a lot of people. They like to talk with them.
After they leave the church, the Jacksons go to the park. They go boating happily. Then it is time to have lunch. They have a picnic under the tree. After lunch the children begin to fly kites while the couples are fishing by the lake.
In the afternoon the children play on the lawn while Mr. and Mrs. Jockson are walking in the park. They enjoy themselves.
They spend almost the whole day in the park.
篇14:初一寒假英语周记
全文共 743 字
+ 加入清单This week I mostly stayed at home and did some homework. Last Saturday HP6 had just come out. And many Harry Potter fans went to buy it. I did’t buy it because it was too expensive, but I downloaded it on the Internet. It was in English. Many people went on translating as soon as the book came out. I also took part in it and became a part of the translating group. From this group, I first realized that my English was so poor. I needed to look up in the dictionary all the time. It was really troublesome. But I withheld and withheld. I had translated many paragraphs. I was the youngest among the translators, but I didn’t feel there was much pressure. This work was hard but I really felt happy. We had already finished nearly 20 chapters
篇15:初一关于端午节英语作文带翻译
全文共 843 字
+ 加入清单The Dragon Boat Festival ,also called the Duanwu Festival ,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.People always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat races to celebrate it.
端午节,又称端午节,是庆祝第五个月的第五天,根据中国日历。人们总是吃粽子和观看龙舟比赛庆祝。
The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. Its very popular.
该节是最知名的龙舟比赛,特别是在那里有许多河流和湖泊的南部地区。它很受欢迎。
The rice dumpling is made of glutinous rice,meat and so on. You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.They are very delicious.And Dragon Boat Festival is for Qu Yuan. He is an honest minister who is said to have committed suicide by drowning himself in a river.
粽子是用糯米饭,肉类等。你可以品尝不同种类的粽子。它们都是十分美味的。端午节是为屈原。他是一个诚实的部长谁是说已投江自杀了。
Overall, the Dragon Boat Festival is very interesting!
总的来说,端午节是非常有趣的!
篇16:初一英语作文:干净的水
全文共 897 字
+ 加入清单导语:随着环境污染愈加严重,水资源也被破坏,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
When I was very small, I stayed in the hometown with my grandparents. I had the great time there, I liked the environment so much. There was a long river in front of my house, the water was very clean, I could see the small fish swim. My grandma usually washed her clothes along the river side. But now when I went back to my hometown, the river was very dirty, the water was light yellow and there were so many rubbish floating in the river. It made me feel that the river had lost its life. I missed the old time when I was playing in the river. It is human being that ruin the environment, if we dont take action to protect it, we will destroy ourselves.
【参考译文】
在我很小的时候,我和我的爷爷奶奶呆在家乡。我过的很愉快,我喜欢那里的环境。在我的房子前面有一条很长的河,水很干净,我可以看到小鱼游泳。我奶奶通常沿着河边洗她的衣服。但是现在当我回到家乡,河水很脏,水是淡黄色的,有很多垃圾漂浮在河里。我觉得这条河已经失去了它的生命。我想念在河里玩耍的旧时光。是人类破坏了环境,如果我们不采取行动来保护它,我们将毁灭自己。
篇17:初一英语作文之如何学习英语
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+ 加入清单How to study English?
Study English,You do need to use English with speakers who are not teachers of English. This isnt easy, since everyone feels constrained speaking English with friends with whom it would be natural to use a shared mother tongue. Joining an English Club is a good idea and joining a club with an international membership (where English is in use at least some of the time) is, for many people, even better. If nothing like this is accessible, you might consider what would be involved in getting something going.
篇18:初一英语作文:英语自我介绍
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+ 加入清单Hello, everyone!My name is Winnie. Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Beihai.
你好,每个人!我的名字是温妮。我是一个15岁的女孩。我住在美丽的城市北海。
Im an active, lovely, and clever girl. In the school my favorite subject is math. Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well. But I like it. I believe that if you try your best, everything can be done well.
我是一个活跃的,可爱的,聪明的女孩。在学校我最喜欢的科目是数学。也许有人认为很难学好。但我喜欢它。我相信如果你尽你最大的努力,一切都可以做得很好。
also like sports very much. Such as, running, volleyball and so on. Im kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me.I hope we can be good friends!
也很喜欢运动。例如,跑步、排球等等。我是善良的。如果你需要帮助,请到我这里来。我希望我们能成为好朋友!
OK. This is me. A sunny girl.
好吧。这就是我。一个阳光明媚的女孩。
篇19:初一英语自我介绍作文
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+ 加入清单导语:来到新班级遇到新朋友,我们都会进行一次自我介绍,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Hello, my name is Lin Fan, the first day of school I know our class have a classmate, also called Lin Fan, how have the fate ah, the teacher in charge teacher sun because my age small call me "xiao Lin sails". I believe you to me you are not familiar with, let me introduce myself.
I am 13 years old and I am an honest, cheerful, lively and steady boy. My advantage is that every time on learning seriously complete the teacher the assignment, my grades are ok. The disadvantage is that, cant take the initiative to answer questions in class did not dare to speak out, some careless in the exam, sometimes simple question is wrong. Due to primary school didnt cram English, so English learning not enough system, the result has been not so good. I very like painting, also like Internet, love to play games.
While, as Ive become a middle school student, in the new semester, I want to get rid of the defects in learning, with a new attitude to meet new learning, also hope that teachers and students to guide me, help me, believe we can become good friends.
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大家好,我的名字叫林帆,开学的第一天我就知道我们班级还有一个同学,也叫林帆,多么有缘份呀,班主任孙老师因为我年龄小一点叫我"小林帆"。相信大家对我还不熟悉,下面我做一下自我介绍。
我今年13岁,我是一个诚实、开朗、活泼又稳重的男生。在学习上我的优点是每次都认真完成老师布置的作业,我的学习成绩还行。缺点是课堂上不能主动回答问题,不敢大声发言,考试时有些马虎,有时简单的问题也会答错。由于小学阶段没有补习英语,所以英语学习的不够系统,成绩一直不太好。我非常喜欢画画,也喜欢网络,爱玩游戏。 一转眼,我已经成为一名中学生了,在新的学期里,我要改掉学习上的缺点,用一种崭新在学习态度迎接新的知识,也希望老师和同学们多指导我、多帮助我,相信我们也能成为好朋友
篇20:初一英语作文:一次恐怖的经历
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+ 加入清单I used to be fond of skating. But now things have changed because of a horrible experience.
One winter, the weather was so cold that water turned into ice. One day on my way home, when seeing a frozen lake, I thought that the ice must be thick enough to support me. Being so interested in skating, I couldnt help going down and sliding on the ice. Suddenly, I heard a sound of crack. Looking down, I saw the crack on the ice surface. I was frightened out of my life and didnt dare to move. But nobody could help me. I had to move toward the bank carefully.
As soon as I got onto the bank, the ice broke. How horrible it was! Even ifit has been a long time since then, I can still feel the fear. And I no longer like skating since then.
我曾经非常喜欢滑冰。但现在事情发生了变化,因为一次可怕的经历。
一年冬天,天气太冷,水变成冰。有一天在我回家的路上,看到一个冻湖的时候,我认为必须冰厚度足以支持我。因为喜欢滑冰,我忍不住跑下来,在冰上滑行。突然,我听到一个裂缝的声音。向下一看,我看到冰面上的裂缝。我吓坏了,不敢移动。但是没有人能帮助我。我不得不小心翼翼地向岸边挪动。
我一到银行,冰了。这一切是多么的可怕!即使过去了很久,我仍然可以感觉到恐惧。从那时起,我不再喜欢滑冰了。