初一常见英语作文（汇总20篇）

Lunar New Years day morning, I and grandfather father they go to new years.

Many people on the road, some family dozens of people to the new year. Adults and children are wearing new clothes, a cheerful and said to each other "Happy New year".

To the elders at home, just the door loudly say: "Happy New year! To give you a pay New Years call!" The elders affectionately gave me the gift money and sugar. I took it and said: "thank you!"

Im really glad! And adults go to the new year!

My Friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Linda. She is from China.

Linda was ten years old three years ago. But she is thirteen years old now. Three years ago, she had long hair. She was short and thin. However, she has shorter hair than three years ago. She is taller now. She is still thin. She often wears glasses. She was shy and quiet three years ago. Now, she is still shy and quiet. But , she is more hard-working. Her favorite sport is basketball. She likes eating junk food . Also, she is popular .

Do you like my friend? Do you want to make friends with her.

My Friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Linda. She is from China.

Linda was ten years old three years ago. But she is thirteen years old now. Three years ago, she had long hair. She was short and thin. However, she has shorter hair than three years ago. She is taller now. She is still thin. She often wears glasses. She was shy and quiet three years ago. Now, she is still shy and quiet. But , she is more hard-working. Her favorite sport is basketball. She likes eating junk food . Also, she is popular .

Do you like my friend? Do you want to make friends with her.

My Friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Linda. She is from China.

Linda was ten years old three years ago. But she is thirteen years old now. Three years ago, she had long hair. She was short and thin. However, she has shorter hair than three years ago. She is taller now. She is still thin. She often wears glasses. She was shy and quiet three years ago. Now, she is still shy and quiet. But , she is more hard-working. Her favorite sport is basketball. She likes eating junk food . Also, she is popular .

Do you like my friend? Do you want to make friends with her.

俗话说千里之行始于足下。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

1. 审题不清

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为我最喜欢的活动，偏离了一项、课外活动这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题

误 my father and my mother is all teacher.

正 my father and my mother are both teachers.

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：我累了。这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：im tired.

误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.

正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.

误 the apples cheap. ill take some.

正 the apples are cheap. ill take some.

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

6.代词的误用

英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.

正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.

7.句子不完整

有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.

(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.

8.前后不一致

所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.

例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.

(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)

剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.

改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)

9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

误 when i get to the station the train leave.

正 when i got to the station the train had left.

10.综合性错误

综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

[中考英语作文：十大常见错误分析

We have a lot of people in the village all superstition ghosts and gods, including my grandma and grandpa. I often quarrel with them, I said there was no ghost in the world, there is no god, the old man not only not letter, also against me.

On one occasion, some monks came to our village, I thought to myself, "charlatan" is again, they have come to no good. The monk said: "we know you have a horse, to look for person to die for him. There is a very precious medicinal materials, we ate can prevent ghosts come to you, you can live for five hundred and sixty years." After the old man heard the news to the monks to buy quickly. The monk said: "this is a good medicine, value 23000 yuan, but mercy, we only sell one hundred yuan." The old man went to buy, my grandfather also to buy, others say: "give me a box." Grandpa said: "I want two boxes."

Grandpa to buy back, I a bullish on like a mushroom, I say: "is a mushroom." Grandpa said: "you know what? Its a baby." I have nothing to say, the in the mind think, I must find the evidence.

Soon, there is an eight more than ten - year - old man died, I thought to myself: "these I can find the evidence." I am grandpa said: "this bottom believe?" Grandpa said: "how am sure that if he didnt buy the medicine?" So I ask, insider said: "buy." Later, grandpa although have nothing to say, but he still didnt believe me.

我们村子里有很多人都迷信鬼神，包括我的爷爷奶奶在内。我经常和他们争吵，我说世界上根本没有鬼，也没有神，那些老人不但不信，还反对我。

有一次，有些和尚来到我们村，我心想：肯定又是“江湖骗子”，他们来准没好事。那些和尚说：“我们知道你们这里有替死鬼，来找人替他去死。我们这里有一种药材非常珍贵，吃了可以防止鬼来找你，你还可以多活五六十年。”那些老人一听到消息后赶紧到和尚那里去买。那些和尚说：“这个是上好的药材，价值两三千元，可是我们大发慈悲，只卖一百元。”那些老人都去买了，我爷爷也去买了，别人说：“给我一盒。”爷爷说：“我要两盒。”

爷爷买回来，我一看好像是香菇，我说：“是香菇。”爷爷说：“你懂什么?这可是宝贝。”我无话可说，心里想，我一定要找到证据。

不久，有一个八十几岁的老人死了，我心里想：“这些我可找到证据了吧。”我对爷爷说：“这下相信了吧?”爷爷说：“怎么敢肯定,如果他没买那药呢?”于是我去问，知情人说：“买了的。”后来，爷爷虽然无话可说，但他还是不相信我的话。

In the future, can be high-tech, also can be ordinary, my dream is a very common, its just a small dream, is not science fiction.

I hope that the future world is a tree-lined, air pure and fresh and beautiful world, I dont want to tall buildings, everywhere is full of smoke, the blue sky "appearance" is already being thrown outside the cloud nine, then again high-tech also unable to save our earth a beautiful blue sky white clouds, and they will leave us, never... Forever...... , at that time, only the horrible plague and deadly disease could "save" the ignorant people.

So, I just want to let the world become the blue sky white clouds, flowers, birds and insects live very happy, vibrant has indescribable beautiful, is full of magnificent eagle in the sky, the freedom of flying in the sky, the earth is like a fairyland in general.

"Look, a beautiful planet!" Mars family patriarch said surprised. To start, general gawk, heads of the fathers, and some curious Mars people are ready to the beautiful dream of fantasy, just began, Mars the beauty of people was in shock, who also dont want to leave it, this time a long, between the earth and Mars are in love, live together all day, very happy.

So perfect planet, what can people do not like, other people of the planet is not exceptional also, aliens on earth everywhere, even on the sun of the residents also subsequently changed moved to here, then, in the morning and aliens say hello is also a "norm", those evil ghosts and spirits were purified, and made in heaven gods also moved to the surface, the earth vibrant, each step is laughter, the joy of living is everywhere.

未来，可以是高科技的，也可以是普普通通的，我的梦想就是一个极其普通的，它只是一个小小的梦想，一点都不科幻。

我希望：未来的世界是一个绿树成荫，空气清新的美丽世界，我不希望到处都是高楼大厦，到处都是浓烟滚滚，天空那蔚蓝色的“外衣”早已经被抛到九霄云外了，到那时，再高科技也无法挽救我们的地球和美丽的蓝天白云了，它们将离开我们，永远。。。。。。永远。。。。。。，那时，只有恐怖的瘟疫和致命的病痛可以“拯救”这些无知的人了。

所以，我只想让世界变得蓝天白云，鸟语花香，小鸟和昆虫生活非常快乐，生机盎然美得已经无法形容，天空中到处都是雄壮的鹰，在天空中自由的翱翔，地球犹如仙境一般。

“快看，一个美丽的星球!”火星族族长惊讶的说。说干就干，呆呆将军、族长和一些好奇的火星人们都已经准备好了这次美丽的梦幻之旅了，刚开始，火星人们都被眼前的美境震住了，谁也不想离开它，这时间一长，地球人与火星人也产生了感情，整天生活在一起，非常快乐。

这么完美的星球，什么人能不喜欢，别的星球的人也不例外，地球上外星人无处不在，就连太阳上的居民们也随之改迁到这里来了，到那时，早上和外星人打个招呼也是“家常便饭”，那些邪恶的鬼魂和幽灵也被净化了，天上人间的神仙也搬迁到了地面上来了，地球上生机勃勃，每一步都是欢声笑语，生活的乐趣无处不在。

A friend who is a police in Guangzhou got married yesterday.He once helped me get out of a very sticky situation without asking for any demand. I am sorry that I couldnt give my congratuation to him in pern his big day. Two years ago, a stuffy summer evening I was robbed when walking on the street with my another female friend after we left a hair salon.

Two guys riding on a motorcycle behind us rushed onto the sidewalk and pulled my purse away. I fell down on the hard concrete ground and the mortorcycle was hitting by a electricity pole.They quickly shifted the direction and zipped away. We were so appalled and black-out that we forgot to dial 110.I called my friend, the police, for help with tears in my eyes. Ten minutes later, he showed up and send me to a hospital nearby. The young resident took little care of my spot where I got hurt. Misfortunes never come alone.Three days later, it became so inflaming and swollen because of the heat of summer that I couldnt walk. I vented my anger and anxiety everywhere I could and decided to change another better hospital.In order to avoid making further and worse problem then and future, I decided to let a specific doctor to diagose it. It was a bolt out of the blue to learn that I needed a surgery, whereas it was incredible to undertake a surgery without any local or gerenal anesthesia. I extremely suffered from it. It was him who held my hand tightly without any hesitation during the whole process and it was him who took me back and forth to hospital to do the daily checks. There were no sufficient words expressing my thanks for him.It took me a month back to the normal track until the Mid-Autumn day.My friend availed himself of the benefit from his job to offset the 70% of the total costs. However, what the quite unhappy thing was a hard-to-miss and hard-to-fade mark on my right leg.

[初一英语作文 An unforgettable friend

My summer vacation of this year was very enjoyable. I went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays. It is very beautiful there. There are green plants, clear rivers, lovely animals kind people. I spent two weeks helping my grandfather do some farm work there. I wrote down what happened in my diary every day.

今年的暑假生活非常愉快。我去农村过暑假。这是非常美丽的。有绿色的植物，清澈的小河，可爱的动物和善良的人们。我花了两个星期，我的祖父帮助做一些农场工作。我写下每天发生在我的日记。

Besides that, I helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons. I helped them read English improve their spoken English. Their parents thanked me for this.

另外，我帮助邻居家的孩子做功课。我帮他们读英语，提高他们的英语口语。他们的父母为此很感激我。

Im going to the sun for my holiday. I will go there by spaceship. I will pilot a big blue spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super shirt.

In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast. At eight oclock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes.

Then I do my homework in my little red room at a small blue table. After my homework, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice.I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. All the things are red.

Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. Ill pilot the spaceship to the earth.

This is a good holiday on the sun.

Our school is very beautiful. there are many trees and flowers here,so the air here is very clean. I can hear birds singing.It＇s so wonderful.On the playground,you can see the students play basketball.Sometimes our teacher play with us.We feel very happy.In each class,there are many pictures in the wall.the teachers work very hard.they love us as if we were their children.When we meet some problems,our teachers often help us.In our school,the teachers and students are like firends.I love our school.I wish our school will get more and more beautiful!

This week I mostly stayed at home and did some homework. Last Saturday HP6 had just come out. And many Harry Potter fans went to buy it. I did’t buy it because it was too expensive, but I downloaded it on the Internet. It was in English. Many people went on translating as soon as the book came out. I also took part in it and became a part of the translating group. From this group, I first realized that my English was so poor. I needed to look up in the dictionary all the time. It was really troublesome. But I withheld and withheld. I had translated many paragraphs. I was the youngest among the translators, but I didn’t feel there was much pressure. This work was hard but I really felt happy. We had already finished nearly 20 chapters

Most people has a sweet home, so have I. I think my home is sweet because it is my best place to have rest or have fun with my friends or my parents.

I can remember clearly. Once I came back home late because my teacher didnt want me leave until I finished my homework. At that time, the weather became colder and the wind became stronger. I was so hungry and cold at that time! I felt I cant take it any more, so I ran to my home quickly. When I got my home, I felt much more warmer and happiness than ever before!

Thats why I love my sweet home. Dont you think so?

许多人拥有一个甜蜜的家，我也有。我认为我的家是甜蜜的，因为它是我休息、与父母、朋友一起玩乐的地方。

我可以清楚地记着。有一次，直到我完成作业，老师才肯放我回家，所以我就回来晚了。那时候，天气更冷了，风也变得更大了。在那时，我又冷又饿。我觉得自己无法承受了，所以我迅速地跑回家。当我到家的时候，我感到从未有过的温暖和幸福。

这就是为什么我爱自己的甜蜜之家。难道你不是这么认为的么?

The Importance of Electricity

When you go to work in the morning and find that traffic lights dont work, the traffic jam will certainly happen. A patient needs to be operated on at once. What will happen if the operation cannot be made because of the electricity. Without electricity, we can neither watch TV, listen to the tape, nor chat on line. Electricity is closely related to our daily life.

How terrible it would be if there were no electricity!

关于电力的重要性的初中英语作文

当你早上去上班，发现交通灯不工作，交通堵塞，肯定会发生的。一个病人需要立刻动手术。如果操作不能因为电力会发生什么。没有电，我们不能看电视，听磁带，也不能在网上聊天。电在我们的日常生活密切相关的。

如果没有电将会多么可怕

Bus: This is the most common transporting means, because its so cheap and

efficient. You can go to other cities by bus, but its very slow in rush hours.

And sometimes its dangerous to take the bus, because the traffic accidents may

happen at any time on high ways.

Train: Its suitable for the long trip. Not only it is fast and convenient,

but also its so economical. Most people can afford it. Whats more, its more

pleasant than taking any other means of transportation. You can walk around and

open the windows on the train. Besides, you can have a rest when you feel tired.

And then youll get to your destination the next day.

Plane: Air travel is very fast and enjoyable. It seems that our world is a

small place to live in, but its too expensive for many people.

Ship: Even though ship voyage is slow, its still exciting, for one can

enjoy the beautiful scenery on the sea and feel the soft sea wind.

Subway: It can be easily seen in big cities like Beijing and Shanghai. Its

so comfortable, convenient and always on time. You can take it to every part of

the city. As its built underground, you neednt care about the traffic jams.

Now it becomes more and more popular.

How to protect the environment has become one of thebiggest problems in the

world .

It’s our duty to protect our environment . No matterwhere we live , we

should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy. We can collect

waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We shouldplant more trees and

we should prevent those factories from pouring waste waterinto rivers, lakes and

fields. Weshouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . We

mustn’t pickthe flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his

best toprotect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and

ourlife will be better and better .

My dream home is very big and nice.I have a house and it has at least three floors.On the first floor,there is a big dining room and we can have dinner together.There is also a nice kitchen and a big sitting room.On the second floor,there are all the bedrooms,so all my friends can stay in my house.There are computers,TVs and videos in each bedroom,so everyone can have fun.My own room is on the third floor.I can put the dolls,the posters and other things in it.I also have a balcony and I can see the whole city from it.

What a wonderful home!I hope I can live in it someday.

There is no doubt that traffic congestion becomes a growing worry for the

residents of most urban areas. Some major roads are regularly choked with

traffic in rush hours. The limited transport capacity contributes largely to the

vexing problem. How to solve the headache?

The existing solutions to traffic jam mainly aim at creating metro bus

systems and broadening major roads. Widening the existing roads can solve

traffic snarls on some level. Soaring car ownership compounds the chronic

annoying problem, so we must sharply reduce the heavy reliance on cars and drive

a shift to the mass transportation. It is a cheap and good way. We can create a

system of customized bus routes and highlight the development of subways,

trolleys and light rail. The effective combination of these solutions will

enable the urban areas to possess a smooth traffic.

Ⅰ 词汇错误

1) 易混淆词语的误用;

例如 effect & affect, sensitive & sensible

2) 词性的误用;

例如 Concrete structures are found to be more strangely(stronger) when they subjected to 3-dimension compression.

3) 代词的误用;

例如 The myth of the city as a promised land, that(非限制性定语从句，that 应改为which) attracts immigrants from rural poverty and brings it flooding into city centers.

4) 介词的误用;

例如Chapter 1 analyses the influence of continental climate to(on) buildings in China.

5) 连词的误用;

例如 To make a living the whole family, even if(even) their 8-year old brother, had to work in a factory.

6) 冠词的误用;

例如However, the(删除,因此处的是泛指而不是特指某个讲双语的人)bilingual people rarely have equal level of competence in all aspects of the two la

7) 专业术语的误用、或是习惯用法使用错误;

① plank n. 铺板，厚木板，支架，(政党的) 政纲条款

但土木工程结构的面板一般用slab表示，而不用plank。

② Television is rapidly becoming the literature of our periods(time).

Ⅱ 语法错误

1) 主谓不一致;

例如 The whole monstrous growth rests on economic prosperity, but behind it lies(lie) two myths：………

2) 时态错误;

例如 Where tuberculosis vanished(had vanished), it came back……

3) 主/被动语态错误

4) 虚拟语气;

例如 If something have(had) been done, the accident would not have happen.

5) 非谓语动词的误用

例如 Consider(Considering) the great need for improving many aspects of the global environment, one is surely justified……

Ⅲ 逻辑关系错误

例如 Although most important factors on concrete durability have been extensively investigated, lots are still (添加not) completely understood.

Typical errors I tend to commit in my own writing:

1)介词的误用(将词组、固定搭配记错;)

2)主谓不一致(不知主语是可数名词还是不可数名词;)

3)习惯表达

[英语作文常见的错误有哪些

写给好朋友的一封信篇一

Dear John,

亲爱的约翰：

Long time no see, how is your summer vacation? I’m really sorry for writing so late. I have been too busy at this moment. I am happy to hear that you have traveled to Tibet at this summer holiday. How I wish I could go there with you!

好久不见，你的暑假过得还好吗?很抱歉那么晚才写信给你。这段时间我真的太忙了。我很高兴听说暑假你去了西藏旅游。我真希望我也和你一起去。

Let me tell you something about my summer holiday. My summer holiday is rich and colorful. My parents take me to Hong Kong. That’s a beautiful place. I buy a lot of funny things at there. Such as pretty dresses, cute dolls and the snacks I never eat before. I really want to stay there and never come back! In a word, I really appreciate the life there.

让我告诉你我的暑假趣事吧。我的暑假过得丰富多彩。我父母带我去了香港。那是个美丽的地方。我在香港买了很多新奇的玩意。比如漂亮的裙子，可爱的娃娃和一些从来没有吃过的零食。我真想待在那里再也不回来了。一句话，我喜欢那里的生活。

I’m really looking forward to your reply!

我很期待你的回复!

Truly yours,

Zoey

你忠实的朋友

写给好朋友的一封信篇二

Dear Friend,

亲爱的朋友，

How have you been recently? I miss you very much. Do you still remember me?

最近过得怎么样?我很想你。你还记得我吗?

To be honest, Im honored to make friends with you. I still remember the days when we were together. As far as I know, you are the kindest person in the world. Once we were together, you always treated me as if I were your dear brother, so I was grateful to you in my heart. After you leaving, I always thought of you. Next time we have a chance to see each other, I will say "thank you" to you. Thank you for your kindness. Now I have got the meaning of my life.

老实说，我很荣幸成为你的朋友。我还记得我们在一起的日子。我觉得你是世界上最善良的人。我们在一起的时候，我们总是亲如兄弟，所以在我的心里我很感激你。你离开后，我总是想起你。下一次如果我们有机会见到对方，我会对你说“谢谢你”。谢谢你的善良。让我现在的人生有了意义。

Although we are in two different places now, we are still together, because we are always heart to heart. I believe we can see each other again. Since we are always close friends as well as dear brothers. Because of you, my life is always so significant. Wherever I am, I will pray good luck for you.

虽然现在我们在两个不同的地方，但我们依然在一起，因为我们总是心连心。我相信我们还能再次见面。 因为我们是亲密的朋友，亲爱的兄弟。因为你，我的人生总是那么的有意义。无论我在哪里，我都会为你祈祷好运。

Last but not the least, I hope you can make it and have a bright future.

最后但并非最不重要的是我希望你能有一个光明的未来。

Sincerely yours,

Jason

詹森

I like dogs, because they are man s good friends. They can do many helpful things to us, such as guarding our houses, greeting guests, helping the police, and so on. Some trained dogs can even lead the blind people and save people s lives. So they re treated as our family members. I hope someday dogs will be in great harmony with human-beings.

我喜欢狗，因为它们是人类的好朋友。他们可以为我们做很多有用的事情，如，保护房子，问候客人，帮助警方等等。一些受过训练的狗甚至可以引导盲人、拯救人们的性命。所以他们都被当做是我们的家庭成员。我希望有一天狗能与人类和谐共处。

上次，我的英语月考成绩低得可怜，因为我没复习阅读的部分。所以这次我决定一雪前耻。考试的前几天，我每天回到家，就打开书，不断的重复阅读那几段要考的故事，希望可以有好成绩。

终于等到了考试的这一天，我的神经不停的抽搐着，不时的绷着，我留了一身冷汗，看着老师发着考卷，我吞了口口水，看着考卷传了下来，我颤抖着双手，拿着考卷，笔拿了起来，那枝笔似乎比平常来得要重，我用那只沉重的笔，开始了这场令人神经紧绷的考试。

每写完一大题，我的情绪就越紧张，因为那阅读的部分在我写完一大题，就会离我越近。危机逼近，我的皮随着也紧了起来。我在心里不断的念念有词：“要来啦！要来啦！它要来啦！”但是当我望向时钟，心里疑惑着：“怪了！过了这么久，考卷也即将要写完了，怎么还不见噩梦来袭呢？”

“叮─当─叮─咚”，洪亮的钟声刚好响起，我即时写完了！但是我的天敌却始终没有出现，难道说这次月考没有“阅读”这一大题？看来我真是白紧张了！不过，往好的方面想，这次的考试简单多了，也就是说，拿满分的机率很高。我放下了心中的大石，心想着：“这就是塞翁失马，焉知非福”吧！

一、充分准备，打好基础。

为了提高初一英语作文写作水平，平时应加强阅读，多背诵一些句形、段落甚至短文。俗话说：“读书破万卷，下笔如有神”，只有多读，多记，多背诵，才能出口成章，下笔成文。此外，写好初一英语作文还要掌握一些应用文体的写作方法，如书信、日记、通知等，它们大多有固定的格式。

二、认真审题，明确要求

在写初一英语作文的时候仔细看清写作要求和提示，分清材料的主次，接着确定体裁、格式和人物、地点等要素;最后确定时态，同时考虑相关的语态搭配用法。

三、遣词造句、表达规范

初一英语作文用词要恰当，不可逐句把提示翻译成英语。写作时，应尽量选用你最熟悉、最有把握的词和句型来表达思想。如果有些单词不会些，有些句型不会表达，可以设法绕开，用熟悉的同义词、同义短语或同义句来代替。要学会善于运用适当的关联词，如and, or, but, so，because, since等，以使初一英语作文行文逻辑紧密，自然流畅。

四、认真撰写，卷面整洁

初一英语考试中也会有初一英语作文题，如果时间允许，书面表达一定要先写草稿。在抄写入答题卷前，要先进行检查修改。首先检查所写内容是否切题;之后检查主题是否明确，表达方式是否恰当;最后检查所用时态、语态、人称是否符合要求，前后是否一致。

中考复习研讨会指导课件，极具价值。

关联词

1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and,

not only…but also, neither…nor;

2.表示选择: or, either…or;

3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all,

4.表示因果: because, so, therefore

5.表示条件: if , unless

6.表示对比: instead, not…but,

on the one hand…on the other hand;

7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,

that is to say, in other words;

8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next,

later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;

9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually,

in fact,

10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,generally speaking。