如何进行演讲 英文作文【热门20篇】

A man who is careful in choosing friends will certainly derive benefit from

them. Why? Because there are more false friends than real ones in this world. To

have one real friends is better than a hundred false ones. Friends who flatter

you to your face are not true friends.

We must make friends with those who have good character and kindness of

heart. On the other hand, we should do our best to a void keeping company with

bad people.

一个小心选择朋友的人一定会从他们那里获得益处。为什么?因为在这个世界里假朋友比真朋友要多。有一个真朋友要比有一百个假朋友来得好。凡是当面奉承你的朋友不是真朋友。

我们必须和凡是具有良好品格和心地善良的人交朋友。反过来说，我们应尽力避免结交坏人。

英文作文（一）

Good morning， ladies and gentlemen， boys and girls. Now ，It‘s my turn. My name is Edgar， a high school student. I am very honored to be here to give you a speech. Also it’s a good chance for me to improve my English. I hope I can make a good performance today. The topic of my speech is “After studying here”.

Before I came here，I can never imagine that I can learn so much knowledge about other countries， which can‘t be got from my books in school. Three months ago， I took my first class. Unfortunately， I felt so embarrassed， because I even can’t speak any words， though I know I really love English .

After that， I took some of my tutor‘s advice and previewed the lesson that I’ll learn. What‘s more， In every class， I JUST try my best to say as much as possible. Now，I can only remember It’s a really hard time. What‘s worse， I had to go to my high school and went there at the same time.

After several weeks， I began to get used to the atmosphere in web .At least I’m not afraid to speak in front of my tutor and  foreign teachers.

During web‘s period，I found I had improved a lot， both physically and mentally. For example， how to be a confident person， how to plan for my future. And the most important is that I have learnt how to communicate with others， which is a necessary skill. Nowadays studying is not the only thing that we high school students should do， there are some more important things we have ignored.

First， I am grateful for my parents. They have spent so much money for me， but never ask for anything in return. I really know how hard it is to work on such living conditions.

Now It’s time to introduce my tutor sally. It was she that led me to the right studying here. It was she that helped me deal with all kinds of annoying things. Also there are some other teachers that I appreciate， especially Laura and Anita. Of course， I like to take foreign teachers‘ classes. Anyway， thanks all of you！

I know I am young； there is a long way in my life. I have to face the difficulties and solve them by myself. But i know i must keep on my dream， I agree that If you put your mind to， you can accomplish anything.

I know i’m not the best ，but i‘m the most diligent one.I hope you can remember me ，an ordinary boy.

自我介绍英文作文（二）

Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is ***， 24. I come from ******， the capital of *******Province. I graduated from the ******* department of *****University in July， 2001. In the past two years I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination while I have been teaching *****in NO. ****middle School and I was a head-teacher of a class in junior grade two. Now all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to be interviewed by you.

I am open-minded， quick in thought and very fond of history. In my spare time， I have broad interests like many other youngers.I like reading books， especially those about *******. Frequently I exchange with other people by making comments in the forum on line. In addition， during my college years， I was once a Net-bar technician. So， I have a comparative good command of network application. I am able to operate the computer well. I am skillful in searching for information on Internet. I am a football fan for years. Italian team is my favorite. Anyway， I feel great pity for our country’s team.

I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning. Of course， if I am given a chance to study ****** in this famous University， I will spare no effort to master a good command of advance ******.

自我介绍英文作文（三）

Good morning，ladies and gentlemen.I am of great hornor to stand here and introduce myself to you .My chinese name is WangHao and my english name is…I‘m14 years old .I’m a student in a very beautiful school called ……（写你的学校的名字） middle school .Introduction（自我介绍）

Good morning，ladies and gentlemen.I am of great hornor to stand here and introduce myself to you .My chinese name is mengchuan and my english name is melvin.I‘m12 years old .I’m a student in a very beautiful school called pengcheng middle school My hometown sandu so a beautiful city.Iwas born in ……（写你出生的那年，如1994），自我介绍英文作文，作文网《自我介绍英文作文》。I‘m crazy about English .I have a family of four people.My father， mother ，brother and I.They love me，so do I .I’m very happy and I like to make friends with others. I also like singing but traveling is my favorite， I have been to many interesting places in China but I haven‘t been to other countries. What a pity！ .My favourrite song is Big big world.My geatest dream is to be an English

teacher.To come ture my dream，I must study harder from now on . Thank you for listening to my speech.That’s all，many thanks！

Class9 grade7. My hometown sandu so a beautiful city.Iwas born in 1996.I‘m crazy about English .I have a family of four people.My father， mother ，brother and I.They love me，so do I .I’m very happy and I like to make friends with others. I also like singing but traveling is my favorite， I have been to many interesting places in China but I haven‘t been to other countries. What a pity！ .My favourrite song is Big big world.My geatest dream is to be an English

teacher.To come ture my dream，I must study harder from now on . .That’s all，many thanks！

对我们来说，理想是一个动词，而我们正在路上。——题记

青春是纠结.无知.自大的甚至是被失败弄得麻木的结合体。处于青春期的少年们对自己的梦想对充满了憧憬，相信自己会成功，但年少的鲁莽常常使他们无功而返，落得一身伤。各种各样“无法战胜”的困难压力迎面而来，终使他们放弃自己的梦想。不甘和无奈中可以安慰自己的也许只是：我们至少努力过。

在那很久很久之后，我们终于发出了疑问：“我的理想在哪里？我听着书上那些豪情状语，也想象故事里的主人公那样为理想而拼播，在冲动的努力后，我又问自己：我的理想在哪里?是什么？”没有回答，只有内心深处空洞的回响。感到比那类被迫放弃梦想的人还要难过，他们至少有坚定的理想，那么我呢？我的理想在哪里？

即使如此迷茫，我们还要在路上前进，寻找自己的理想，希望有一天，寻找理想的进行时会变成为理想而努力的将来时。那是我们就可以不管坚定与迷茫，不管成功与失败，尽情地去追逐理想……

[理想的现在进行时作文350字

Old Town of Lijiang is also called Dayan Town, Dayan, may also refer to the Lijiang Naxi Autonomous County Administrative System "has been withdrawn". Old Town of Lijiang in the Southern Song Dynasty has begun to take shape, the existing eight,nine hundred years of history. Since the Ming Dynasty, Old Town of Lijiang says"Dayan car", Lijiang dam Center for their home, surrounded on all sides of Castle Peak, green water between a hover, like a jasper big inkstone, hence the name.

my name is . i am from . there are people in my family. my father works in a computer company. he is a computer engineer. my mother works in a international trade company. she is also a busy woman. i have a older sister and a younger brother. my sister is a junior in national taiwan university. she majors in english. my brother is an elementary school student. he is 8 years old.

hello,everyone. my name is giffer and im 12-year-old .i am very pleased to be admitted to the xicheng foreign language school. my favourite subject is chinese and english. my hobby is blown flute and reading. there is also a very good orchestra here. the school orchestra and this will allow me to learn a lot of knowledge in this three years. i want to study well. to give our parents and ourselves a satisfactory answer at this holiday. i took part in the training of the orchestra. participated in the torch relay task. i will learn a lot and i hope that i can learn more knowledge at this secondary school.

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大家好，我叫giffer，今年12岁。很高兴今年考上了西城外国语中学。我喜欢的科目是语文、英语、我的爱好是吹长笛、看书。在这里也有一个很好的管乐团.这个学校和这个乐团能让我学习到很多知识.在这三年里。我要好好学习，给自己和家长一个满意的答卷，在这个假期，我参加了管乐团的训练，参加了火炬传递的任务，学到了很多东西，我希望我能在这所中学学到更多的知识。

“家长会”唉，多么讨厌的三个字呀！可最让讨厌的家长会终于来临了，我只好硬着头皮把这个消息告诉了爸爸妈妈。

今天爸爸6：30就要去开家长会了，过了一会，爸爸走了。爸爸走后，我的心情也变得十分紧张，我在房间里来回走着，坐也不是，站也不是。我总想安静下来写作业，可脑子里老是浮现出那满是叉叉的试卷，心里像着了火一样那么热，那么难受。

我躺在床上，任思绪无边无际的漫延开去……

看着窗外一片黑暗，点点星光镶嵌在茫茫夜色中，微弱的月光，显得的那么凄凉。

一个小时过去了，两个小时过去了……爸爸还没有回来。我的心情就像十五个吊水桶——七上八下，不知怎么了，我的眼前仿佛又浮现出了一张张满是鲜红的叉叉的试卷，它们就像恶魔一样，老是抓着我不放。我闭上眼睛，想甩掉它们。

时间过的好漫长，一分钟似乎比一年还长，我忐忑不安地坐在那里，就像一个囚犯，等待着爸爸从学校开完家长会回来给我的宣判。

不知不觉，一阵喇叭声响起了，应该是爸爸回来了吧，我不知怎么回事，就像热锅上的蚂蚁——急得团团转，我想，这下，我可完蛋了……指导老师：陆孝孝

The Value of Reading Books

People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world.ButI don‘t think so. In my opinion, to read books is more valuable than anything else.

The old saying "To open a book is always helpful" clearly tells us how good it is to read a book.

Books are our friends. They introduce us different kinds of knowledge. They lead us down the road to success.

Books are our teachers. They teach us troth, science, literature, and philosophy of life. Besides, they increase our knowledge, enlarge our experience,strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them.

Books tell us what is good and what is evil. And only books can tell the good from the bad.

Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students.

读书的价值

人们常说金子和银子是世界上最有价值的东西，但我不这样认为。在我看来，读书比任何其他事情更有价值。

“开卷有益”清楚地告诉了我们读书有多好。

书是我们的朋友。它们向我们介绍不同种类的知识，它指导我们沿着成功之路前行。

书是我们的老师。它们教我们真理、科学、文学和生活的哲理，同时它们增加了我们的知识，扩大了我们的视野，增强了我们的个性，使我们还做了在没有书的情况下绝不可能完成的其他事情。

书能让我们明辨是非，并且只有书才能让我们吸取反面教训。

因此，读更多的书是我们青少年学生的明智之举。

Yesterday just yesterday,it gives me have a better future.I thought I haven’t had a successful person now.In fact,how is successful?Nobody will speak very clearly. I was a happy person,I have had more happy,more powerful,more yesterday momery gives me to see the future.Yesterday I don’t like talk more,I don’t like see more people,don’t warm,more time,I like staying my home,painting almost time.Painting gives me full life,but also gives me like lonely,peace.

I like now’s me,talkative,easy going guy.I hope that I will do myself,to be more easy going,gives every my friend’s happy.

My dear:

Please allow me to call you darling for the last time, as I have always

liked to do before. Surprise! Yeah, it was me. It was me writing to you, your

ex-girlfriend. Perhaps you feel very embarrassed or very indifferent, no other

meaning, I just want to write a letter to you, break up half a year to allow me

this trivial selfishness.

I know you are very happy now, but my sudden letter made you feel

unexpected. Last night, my sister and I saw you on the way home, as before the

skin is very white and clean wearing glasses, maybe love men will pay attention

to their own image, you are more neat and clean than before. Riding a bike, you

sit behind a girl. You are very happy, I want to call you, but I dare not, I how

bashful shout, stunned in, so all the way to see you from my line of sight more

and more far. I know, this county is too small, the crowd is too crowded and we

always meet by chance, dear, I love you very much but cant change the reality,

I love you too deep or your love is too shallow love is not firm. Now, only

wish, wish you happy. She, very simple, suitable for your other half. I know

well never be the same again. All I know is that a lot of couples dont make it

and then never get back in touch. But, my dear, if we cant be husband and wife,

cant we even be friends? I remember the first time I saw you, you are very

sunny, and I happened to be depressed at that time. Such me, even friends do not

want to do with you, with a depressed mood love ignore you. But you run every

day after running with me, even if I angry to say you only sad for a while and

then began to take a smile at me. Later in our life, we caught fish, caught

rabbits, visited the beauty of large rape, cherry blossom in the park in full

bloom and fell, I sat in the back of the car and spread my arms and said to fly,

you like to eat sesame ball and I hate it to death, the first time you kissed me

was I severely slap... Honey, I cry every time we turn around. Until the last

time because of the parents of both sides, I know is, you will relentlessly will

insist, but I was too confident, you did not. And I still silly in situ waiting

for you, you left me, give up this relationship, you go, you never look

back.

Dear, I hear that there are five hundred people suitable for me in ones

life. Among them, I am no longer the only one for you. I know, I often say to

myself that it will be ok, as time goes by, our relationship will slowly fade

away. Maybe one day I will be as happy as you are now, dear, but this time is

very long, long trance in my life I think I will never meet the person I love

again, like love you. During the half year of separation, I learned to be used

to loneliness, to look at clouds and clouds, to look at the stars in the sky on

the windowsill at night, and in my spare time, I would hold my friends pet and

walk in the big temple behind your house... Darling, Im looking forward to

meeting you, but Im afraid. I am afraid that your happiness will make my eyes

blindfolded and can not see the world clearly, dear, I know you are very happy,

love a person is to make each other happy, you choose, I respect.

Happy Christmas Eve!

Bless you!

My hometown is in Lianyungang. There are lots of beautiful places here. Our winter in Lianyungang has changed, too!

Winter came, and the snowflakes, which looked like white flowers. Like a butterfly dancing in the air, everything is so fascinating.

The snow stopped, the children all came out to play, you see, some of them have some snowball fights, snowmen, snowball, as if they do not feel cold. Adults are out to enjoy the beauty of the snow.

I love Lianyungang and love the snow in Lianyungang!

Last winter holiday, I went to shanghai with my mother.

It＇s very cold in winter. There is snow and ice everywhere and you are always in a white world. You must wear warm clothes. The most exciting thing is playing with snow. Skating is also very interesting there.

I will＇ always remember shanghai, for the snow, the ice and all the beautiful things. I love shanghai.

With the general standard of living improving and the working week becoming shorter， more and more people are able to make a holiday trip to places of interest. While many like to join package tours fro convenience， I prefer to travel on my own.

I like travelling on may own not only because it costs much less but because it gives a great degree of independence and freedom. Travelling on my own， I’m my own boss； and can decide when to start on my way， where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot. I can always adjust my plan. On the contrary， in a package tour you‘re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base. At the sound of the whistle， you have to jump up from a sound sleep and， with heavy-lidded eyes， hurry to the gathering place where you are collected and counted to board a coach. At the sight of the little flag waving， you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to him strict schedule， regardless of the weather or your health condition.

True，you may encounter inconveniences if you travel inpidually，for instance， getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals. But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to escape from constraints of his routine life.

去年寒假，我和妈妈去了上海。

冬天很冷的。世界上到处都是雪和冰，你总是在一个白色的世界里。你必须穿暖和的衣服。最令人兴奋的事情是玩雪。滑冰也很有趣。

我将永远记住上海，因为雪，冰和所有美好的事物。我爱上海

随着人们生活水平的提高和工作时间的缩短，越来越多的人能够去旅游景点度假旅行。而许多想参加旅行团摇来摇去方便，我喜欢在我自己的旅行。我喜欢旅行，可以自己不仅因为它的价格要便宜得多，因为它给了很大程度的独立和自由。我独自去旅游，我是自己的老板；可以决定什么时候出发上路，在那里逗留久一点，哪一点可以跳过了一个景点节省精力和时间。我可以随时调整我的计划。相反，在包价旅游你剥夺尽可能自由的一个军事基地。在口哨的声音，你要跳起来从睡，沉重的眼皮，赶去聚会的地方，你正在收集和统计上的教练。在小国旗飘扬的景象，你必须立即把自己远离你希奇的场景和跟踪指导的唯一的兴趣是根据他走过所有风景点严格的时间表，无论天气或你的健康状况。真的，你可能会遇到麻烦如果你单独旅行，比如，得到住宿过夜，找地方吃饭。但没有什么可以是一个人度假旅行主要是为了逃避他的日常生活的约束自由比较重要。

雅思阅读考试文章来源于国外原版的期刊或杂志，话题覆盖面广，科技，自然，环保，社会，文化，工作，生物，地理等无不涉及，所以遇到生词在情理之中。但一部分烤鸭遇到生词后就信心全失，慌乱至极，打破了自己原有的阅读节奏和速度，做题时也因为生词被卡壳，结果题目不仅没有解出，还影响了后面的做题速度和时间，可谓“一发动而迁全身”。对此，专家认为，生词的出现在所难免，只要大家有基本的词汇量，完全可以将生词的问题逐一击破。

A. 有时候生词属于比较专业的词汇，它们的出现不是为了考察考生的词汇量，更多的是检阅大家的应变和判断能力。尤其在题目中出现的所谓生词，更是可以坏事变好事，成为考生定位答案的线索词。比如：在剑桥7 “Why pagodas dont fall

down”一文，5-10题的分类题中第6题“tiles on eaves”，很可能考生在三个单词中有两个都不认识，这时候如何是好呢?首先，先观察这两个生词的词性。在介词“on”的前后，且分别加了“s”, 可以判断是名词。在这篇建筑类的文章中论及我们不认识的名词，想必不是日常词汇，所以完全可以把“tiles”和“eaves”作为定位词去原文寻找答案。

B. 有时候生词的含义可以在上下文中直接得到。在雅思阅读文章时遇到的生词，有相当一部分的含义可以通过多种猜测单词的方法得到，所以，在生词的周围或上下文寻找其解释不失为有效途径。

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例如，剑桥4的文章“How much higher? How much

faster?”中，有这样一个句子：“One of the most important newmethodologies is biomechanics, the study of the body in

motion.” “biomechanics”这个单词从构词法上看，我们只能够知道其和生物有关，此时，看后面的同位语部分就能很好的帮我们解释这个词的意思，直接且易懂，即对身体在运动状态下的研究。

20XX this summer vacation in the past month,this month i and my parents went to Vancouver to visit my friends.

We lodged at a friendss house.

Arrived in Vancouver on the first day,is already in the afternoon, so good friends mother decided to let our two people together to do a dinner .His mother cook the pizza. Hanburger, my mother and i do . In addition, the father is responsible for to buy drinks.

My brother and sister are in charge of eating.

After dinner, i and my friends and his younger brother ang sister to the courtyard behind the big swimming pool, especially fun.

Well, Im waiting for my second days diary.

As we all know, Beijing is facing the air pollution, a kind of environment pollution. Now Beijing is also famous of hazy weather, which is harmful to people’s health because of PM2.5 and PM10.

Why is our capital suffering the hazy weatherIn my view, Beijing is a center of economy, culture and politics, so she has a heavy traffic. As a result, there are a lot of cars here, then the exhaust of them become a part of reason of the air pollution. Besides, in order to have a good economy development, there are many factories around Beijing, the exhaust of the factories become another part of reason of the air pollution. The most import, our country is a developing one, and do not have enough ability to solve the pollution well while focusing on developing, just like UK was called The City of Fog before.

Now, Beijing has taken a lot of actions to deal with the hazy weather. Firstly, setting up the Bicycle exclusive channel, people are

encouraged to ride but not to drive, in this way, the exhaust of cars is decline. Secondly, many factories are forced to move to Hebei Provence, thus, they can continue to make a contribution to Beijing’s economy development and the air pollution is controlled. Finally, the buses and subway have a lower price than other cities, so that people prefer to go on work by bus or subway. And the limit line caused by tail number is effect, too.

I persist that the air pollution of Beijing can be controlled someday later.

The moon has no water and no air.Because it has no atmosphere and no weather,the moon also has no life.It is covered with rocks and dust.The moon`s different shapes:new Moon crescent first quarter gibbous full MoonThere are 29.5 days from one new Moon to the next.

This is my room.

A computer, a pencil case and some books are on the desk. The baseball is under the desk. My backpack is on the bed. look! Here is my watch. Its on the dresser. Where is my notebook?

Oh,Its under the bed.

各位老师，各位同学：

大家好！

在茫茫宇宙中，有一颗美丽的星球——地球。可现在，这美丽的星球上却出现了大面积的旱灾！！为了地球，我们是否想过要保护地球，珍惜水资源呢？

大家别看地球上的水储量有138.6亿亿立方米，可其中咸水就占了97.5%，淡水却只有2.5%。然而，在这些淡水之中又有近69%被冻在地球的两极地带，3%储存在地下含水层和永久的冻土之中。另外，湖泊、河流、土壤中所容纳的淡水只占淡水储量的0.33%。也就是说，地球上仅有100万亿立方米的水来维系生命循环与代谢的地球总水量！

目前，世界上已经有100多个国家和地区缺水，我们中国也在其中。全国600多座城市中，有300多座城市缺水，严重的有108座！

请大家珍惜水资源！不要让人类的眼泪成为地球上最后一滴水！

Today is mothers day, the students are preparing exquisite gift for mother. Xiao Ming want to give mom a carnation, can touch the empty pockets, hovering at the entrance to the flower shop...

Xiao Ming think: "I have no money to buy flowers, how to do? Borrow money from classmates? Bad! To grandma? It seems wrong!..." Ideas have been denied. Florists to see a child looking outside, walk past kindly asked xiao Ming: "kid, what do you want to buy flowers?" Xiao Ming nao nao head shyly said: "want to, but no money..." Florists a listen to can not help but laugh, at an early age like flowers! So funny, he asked: "do you want to send to who? Children?" "Today is mothers day, I want to buy a carnation to mother!" Think of mother after receiving the flowers that surprise appearance, xiao Mings little cheeks glow!

Florists heard suddenly paused, a flash, he thought of himself in his hometown of the 80 - year - old mother... Because of busy business, as a son of almost three years didnt go back to see her! Today is mothers day, he did not liuxue86.com even play a phone call! Florists immediately warm in my heart, very sour, he thought of his old mother put up, and she is not as good as a child... He slapped hard head, took xiao Mings hand, said: "kid, uncle to send you a, you go to pick." Xiao Ming shook her head and said: "no, uncle, I cant flowers white to you." Watching children stubborn little face, florists brainwave asked: "so, you help uncle do half an hours work, task is to put the guests to take to them is ok, then use your salary to buy my flower head office?" Xiao Ming cried excitedly, "uncle well, thank you!!" ......

Bright Ming finally holding is about to drip of carnation away happily. Florists looked at xiao Mings back, eyes moist. He walked into the store picking up the receiver to call home, phone call, the phone is 80 - year - old mother. Florists, said: "mom, happy mothers day! I will go back to see you in a couple of days..."

今天是母亲节，同学们都为母亲准备精致的礼物。小明想送给妈妈一枝康乃馨，可摸着空空的口袋，徘徊在花店门口……

小明想：“我没有钱去买花，怎么办?向同学借钱?不好吧!向奶奶要?好像也不妥!……”想法都被否认了。花店老板看到一个孩子在店外张望，就走过去亲切地问小明：“小朋友，你想买花吗?”小明挠挠头羞涩地说：“想，但没钱……”花店老板一听不禁笑了，小小年纪就想送花!于是逗他问：”你想送给谁呢?小朋友?”“今天是母亲节，我想买一枝康乃馨送给妈妈!”想到妈妈收到花后那惊喜的样子，小明的小脸蛋都发光了!

花店老板听了顿时愣住了，一瞬间，他想到自己一个人在家乡的80岁的老母亲……因为忙于生意，作儿子的几乎三年没回去看她了!而今天是母亲节，自己竟然连一个电话都没打!花店老板心里顿时暖暖的，酸酸的，他想起了老母亲的含辛茹苦，而自己还不如一个小孩呢……他狠狠拍了一下脑袋，牵起小明的手说：“小朋友，叔叔送你一枝，你去挑吧。”小明摇摇头说：“不行，叔叔，我不能白要你的花。”看着孩子倔强的小脸，花店老板灵机一动问：“这样吧，你帮叔叔干半个小时的活，任务是把客人要的花拿给他们就可以了，然后用你的工资买我的花总行吧?”小明兴奋地大声说：“好，谢谢叔叔!开始吧!”……

小明终于捧着鲜艳欲滴的康乃馨兴高采烈地走了。花店老板看着小明的背影，眼眶湿润了。他走进花店拿起话筒打家乡电话，电话打通了，接电话的是80岁的老母亲。花店老板说：“妈妈，母亲节快乐!过两天我就要回去看您……

It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt Im free.

I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live

alone but I dont feel lonely. But I didnt do something special. I stayed at

home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my

homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It was

time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.

1.格式是否正确

刚开始，使学生感到写作文，批作文都不难，作文指导《小学作文批改要求》。随随便便地写，老师只要求同学们作文的格式正确，批改作文时只写一条关于格式的批语。批作文的时候要抽签，谁都有可能抽到全班任何一个人的。抽到人家的作文本，打开作文一看，格式没锗，便拿出红笔，写上批语：1.格式正确。批文用减分法，此项倘不减分，此文则为满分，然后签上批改人的尊姓大名。

2.卷面是否整洁

显然这一条又是大家都能看得出来的。后进学生批改别人作文，指出卷面不整洁时，下次自己写作文也注意卷面了。

3.错别字几个

发现错字，要将错字在原文处打上标记，并且写到批语处，再在后面写上正字。发现错别字，每两个扣1分，最多扣5分。10个以上也不再多扣，但要一一给予指正。

4.有几处病句

挑出一篇作文中的病句，凡病句，都要在下面划上横线，写出病在何处，再在文后批语中，写清病句几处。每处病句减1分，减至5分，不再多减。

5.标点符号有几处明显错误

强调句号、引号、叹号、问号的使用。发现明显错误的地方，有一处扣一分，有五处扣五分，超过五处，不再多扣。

以上五条，都是写文章最低的要求，学生经过三、四篇文章的批改实践，就能够掌握。再批改两三篇，掌握得比较熟练了，再一条一条地增加新的要求。

6.看文章的中心是否鲜明、集中

这两点在作文指导时，就具体举例，告诉学生什么叫鲜明、集中。学生批改之前，老师先大致看几篇文章，在进行批改指导时，又简介两篇好的文章，再举两篇中心不突出，不集中的例文，学生从老师举的正反两方面的例文，举一反三，就能批得符合实际。

7.看文章的选材

这条批语提三点要求：①是否围绕中心。②是否符合生活实际。③是否具有典型性。这三点中最要紧的是第一点，随着作文水平的提高，才提出选材具有典型性的要求。

8. 看文章的结构

就结构而言，也要写清三点批语：①层次段落是否清晰。②过渡是否自然。③开头和结尾是否照应。

9.看表达方式

主要看其是否符合文章体裁的要求，记叙文以记叙为主，说明文以说明为主，议论文当然以议论为主。除此之外，还要看其是否符合作文指导的要求。

10.看语言是否简练、通顺、准确

语言不简练，重复、罗嗦者酌情扣分，此项不超过二分。语言不通顺，不是指有病句，而是指句与句之间衔接不连贯者，扣分也不超过二分。

后五条要求，每条5分，不做太具体的减分规定，由批改人酌情处理。每个人都要在作文本上写出十个方面的批语，一般情况一篇作文的批语都在200字以上。

July 18

I have rested for a week. I began to feel bored. So I went out with my

friends. They are my best friends in the middle school. We didn’t go to

someplace special. We just saw the other. We had lunch together. While we were

having lunch, we were still talking about the new school and new friends.

7月18日

我已经休息了一个星期。我开始觉得无聊。所以我与朋友出去。他们是我最好的朋友在中学。我们没去在某处特别。我们看见了其他。我们共进午餐。虽然我们吃午饭，我们仍然谈论新学校和新朋友。