我的影子英文诗（合集20篇）

最近读了一本书，叫《偷影子的人》。一个班里受欺负的男孩，拥有一种特殊的功能——他能“偷别人的影子”，还能看见他人的心事。听到许多别人不愿说出的秘密。

当他不小心偷了好友的影子，第一次听到了好友的梦想，他决定要帮助好友实现梦想。可当好友开始朝着梦想前进时，发现失去了自我。于是就回到了原来的地方。但好友也很感激他的帮助。他的未来与好友还是如此的友好。当他与影子交流，得知火灾中还有伊凡时，不顾一切的想要救下他，也得知他的童年遭遇。

在某年的灿烂夏天，他在海边邂逅了一位又聋又哑的女孩，他用特殊能力倾听了女孩的内心。

作为拥有这样特殊功能的人，他很幸运，他利用这功能成为了一名医生，他用他的功能，救助了一名心理有疾病的男孩，与影子进行交流倾听男孩的内心。他与苏菲的爱情，想起苏菲的伤，我只是你生活里的一个影子，你却在我的生命里占用重要地位。如果我只是单纯的过客，为何要让我闯进你的生活？我千百次想过离开你，但仅凭一己之力我做不到。

有些人只拥吻影子，于是只拥有幸福的幻影。

You know Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .It’s to celebrate the lunar calendar ‘s new year .

In the evening before the Spring Festival ,families get together and have a big meal .In many places people like to set off firecrackers .Dumplings are the most traditional food .Children like the festival very much ,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes .They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to children for good luck . People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune .

The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long .People visit relatives and friends with the words “Have all your wishes ”. People enjoy the Spring Festival ,during this time they can have a good rest .

The Spring Festival, the most important festival of our Chinese nation, heralds the coming of a New Year, and all the families are beaming with joy. On New Years eve, the sound of firecrackers rang through the sky, and people sang and danced, a scene of hot and hot air.

Although the Spring Festival is busy, do you know how Spring Festival comes? Once upon a time, there was a monster named nian, who often bullied people in the mountains in winter. Some wanted to get rid of it, and some wanted to get rid of it. One day, nian came again, and many people were attacked at home. Only a few doors hung with red curtains, and no one was hurt by the fire or knocking at the door, so people in the mountain knew about the three things. When the year came, people used these three things to drive away the monster, and they never dared to hurt people. From generation to generation, the custom of Chinese New Year is formed.

I like the Spring Festival, because some of the delicious popcorn and good drinks, and other kinds of toys.

In recent years, with the strong, our nations leaders also began at the time of the Spring Festival, speeches or articles to the festive greetings to the Chinese in their home country, the Chinese New Year is becoming more and more influential in the world.

Christmas Day is the most important festival of west. Be in that day at Christmas,people don’t work.Children don’t go to school. The whole people has all had a holiday. People indulges in a holiday together laughing and chatting.

On that day at Christmas, we need to have the Christmas tree , illumination , the star adorns our family. We invite our family and friend to our house. They are able to give me a gift, I also need to give gift for them.

We sing special songs at Christmas.Christmas songs are carols.

Christmas are fun!I love Christmas.

There is only one spring festival in a year, and this years Spring Festival has just passed. Its a little sweet with a busy time.

Because we used to live with grandma, now we have bought a new house, but we still have to spend the holiday with grandma. On the morning of thirty, we returned to grandmas home with a family of three. My father and I together the Spring Festival couplets character, "continues to be a blessing to prove. Mother and grandmother were busy cooking, grandma made my favorite food, and I was very fun to play, my grandmother made 12 dishes. I had enough to eat, and then I started playing for thirty nights to watch the Spring Festival Gala. My grandparents, Grandpa and mom all made dumplings, and I set off firecrackers outside. Until 11:30, I went out with my father and grandpa to pick up firecrackers outside, and it was bustling. After putting the firecrackers into the house and eating the dumplings, grandma took out the pigs claw, and let us all eat some to symbolize the new year to flinch some money. I didnt eat it, but I ate it this year. 12 oclock to the bell ring, give elders a new year, everyone gave me a big red bag.

How can I never forget this Spring Festival, which makes me unforgettable. The days are better.

Dear Father Christmas,

So my friend has asked me to write to you... I have to confess its been

hard to know what to say. Mainly because like most adults I feel preposterous

asking anything of you because our time with you is surely done. Now we get our

own presents, control our own fates, take responsibility for our own actions,

and live in the world we have created... so its not for us to turn around and

plead for your help with the environment, the migrant crisis, the NHS,

education, food banks, human rights, fundamentalism and wars. Though God knows

we need all the help we can get with all these man-made problems and more.

And its not that you arent compassionate and full of joy. Youre great.

In spite of you being changed into different colours for corporations and being

bastardised to represent materialism gone mad - despite probably originating in

some season based pagan druid ritual a million thought miles from requests for

spontaneously combusting hoverboards... Kidadults cynically pointing this out

after having their moment of belief in you are wasting everyones precious time.

Because you are not for them. You are for the children. Children who need some

magic in a world where the borders between innocence and responsibility, playful

imagination and cold, adult obstacles are continually shrinking.

This is what Id like to ask you to help with. A little more time for

children to be children. Stretch the moment of magic and playfulness. Distract

them from the realities of a world gone mad so that they can laugh with their

breath rather than sob with their tears. Especially those caring for family

members, or suffering illness, hunger or poverty. Especially those hiding in

buildings as bombs rain down, or being handed shaking with fear or cold into a

boat to escape environmental disaster or war. Please help to light up their

worlds with a moment of joy and hope.

When I think about it youve got it tough this year... And when I really

think about it Im not sure that asking you for a lightsaber and getting one

(not that I ever did by the way) is equatable with controlling the space time

continuum and making the good of childhood last a little longer.

But you do inspire wonder and awe amongst those that write you letters and

go to sleep hoping there might be a new object in their possession come dawn.

You inspire good behaviour and, at least in my memory, some desperate last

minute attempts to redeem bad behaviour so as not to be overlooked. Spare a

thought too for those millions who want to write to you but through illiteracy

cant. Hear their words and help to give them the time and chance to learn how

to read and write so they can better their lives and escape their impoverished

beginnings.

I feel a little sorry for you. And I guess Ive done exactly what I said I

wouldnt... Asked you to help with adult problems and solve some of the greatest

worries we have for our children. I promise to leave some extra port and mince

pies for you!

Lots of love

Benedict

亲爱的圣诞老人：

我的朋友叫我写信给你……我真的不知道该对你说什么。主要因为跟大部分成年人一样，我觉得跟你要东西似乎很荒谬，因为我们和你已经没有交集了。如今我们自己给自己买礼物，掌控自己的命运，为自己的行为负责，并且生活在我们自己创造的世界里……所以我们没有理由找你帮忙解决这些问题，比如环境问题、移民危机、NHS医保系统、教育、食物银行、人权、原教旨主义和战争。尽管上帝知道，我们需要各种援助去解决这些人为的危机和麻烦。

我并不是说你没有同情心或不乐观。你很伟大。尽管你被各种大公司篡改的面貌全非;被妖魔化以代表那疯狂的拜金主义——简直像异教徒的仪式那样，每到这个季节就要用礼物填满欲望，比如那种可能会自燃的悬滑板。那些童心未泯的成年人竟然生气地认为你是在浪费每个人的宝贵时间，却忘了他们自己也曾相信你。因为你不属于成年人，而是属于孩子们的。孩子们需要一些魔力，因为这个世界上，天真与责任、欢乐的想象力与冷漠以及成人障碍之间的界限正在不断的缩小。

这才是我想求你援助的。让孩子们的童年更长久些吧。延长那充满魔力与乐趣的时刻。让孩童们忽略这疯狂又现实的世界，让他们拥有欢笑而非流泪。尤其是那些过早需要承担家庭责任或身患疾病的孩子们，又或者是那些遭受饥饿与贫穷的孩子们。尤其是那些躲在位于枪林弹雨的建筑中、或者是那些怀着恐惧与寒冷不断颤抖、被塞进船里以逃离灾难和战争的孩子们。请你用希望和欢乐照亮他们的世界。

当我想到今年你处境艰难时……当我仔细思考，我不确定这样是否合理：即找你要一把光剑(虽然我并不曾得到过)来控制时空介质，从而使得美好的童年时光再久一点。

但对于那些给你写信、期待着你会在天明前送给他们礼物而入睡的孩子们，你带给他们好奇和敬畏。你激发了善行，至少在我的记忆中，一些孩子在最后一刻试图弥补过错，以避免因此受罚。还希望你体谅一下数百万想跟你写信却不会写字的人。请你倾听他们的声音，给他们时间和机会去学习读书和写字，这样他们就可以过上更好的生活，逃离贫困的处境。

我对你感到一丝歉意。我好像做了我明明说自己不会做的事……我希望你能帮忙解决成年人造成的麻烦，缓解我们对孩子的某些担忧。我保证，我会给你留超多肉馅饼的!!

满满的爱

本尼迪克特

I like to watch movie, I had watched many movies,Jackie Chen is my favorite male actor.

When I was small, I watched Jackie Chen’s actionmovie, he can beat many guys at the same time, heis many teenagers’ hero.

In the last ten years, Jackie Chen has aimed at the foreign market, he took many movies andcooperated with foreign stars, he has achieved great success.

Jackie’s success teaches us a lesson, the secret of achieving success is hard work.

Jackie got wounded when he shot films, he has many scars on his body.

Now he is over 50, but he is going on his playing, we are happy to see Jackie Chen’s movie.

● 陈 莹

每个人都有影子，而我的影子特别独特。它如柳如竹，瘦长飘逸。

可是令我不解的是：在太阳下，我走它也走，我跳它也跳；在阴暗下，我想叫它陪我，它竟然不见了踪影；在月光下，我冷它不冷，我生气地对着它，它也生气地对着我。

我和它时而一体，时而又非一体。因为，它了解我，而我却不是很了解它，它让我捉摸不透。

它几乎无时无刻不在我的身旁陪伴着我，尾随着我。()让我猜不透的是，为什么在日光下、月光下、灯光下，在有一丁点光下的时候，它都陪伴在我的身边，而在阴暗里，在没有光时，它又不陪伴我，而消失得无影无踪了？是它怕吗？还是它有事，又或许它在，只是我感觉不到呢？我感到很疑惑。

它几乎知道我所有的秘密，可为什么它不说话？我与它的交流是心与心的交流。我的直觉告诉我，它是世界上最懂得我的，最明白我的，最了解我的。人说，知子莫如父；而我要说，知我莫如我影。我的举止，它都模仿；我的心情，它心知肚明。它虽无声，却是有爱。它的爱是无声的，是令我心疼的。尽管如此，我还是疑问多多：为什么它了解我，比我了解它还多呢？为什么我不懂得它呢？为什么……为什么……

带着诸多的疑问，我上路了。不经意间，我听到了屈老夫子的一句话：路漫漫其修远兮，吾将上下而求索。数年的长路，十年的寒窗求索，我终于开始懂我的影子了。

当别人说，学生是老师的影子，儿女是父母的影子时，我些许地懂得了，思想是我们感情的影子，行为是我们灵魂的影子。

一个具有勇敢而率真灵魂的人，能用自己的眼睛去观察，用自己的心去爱，用自己的理智去判断。不做影子，而做人。

虚伪的友谊有如你的影子，当你在阳光下时，他会紧紧地跟着，而当你一旦横越阴暗处时，它会立刻就离开你。

这世界是一面镜子，每个人都可以在里面看见自己的影子。你对它皱眉，它还给你一副尖酸的嘴脸；你对着它笑，跟着它乐，它就是个高兴和善的伴侣。

影子或许是虚幻的，但它代表着你的另一面，是另一个你。你失败时，它没离去；你抱怨时，他没嫌弃你；你嚣张时，他教导你；你孤独时，他陪着你。

影子是你永远的伴侣，与你同在的不是上帝，而是影子。

[“我的____ 是极品”半命题作文

Dear Michael,

You want to know the changes about my hometown. You know, great changes

have taken place since 60 years ago.

In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many

buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowded into

a small, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications

were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far

away mainly by letter or telegram.

Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent

years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are

wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people live in big new

houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. I think our lives will become

better and better because of many good policies.

Sincerely

Kang Min

Deep Mother Love-深沉的母爱

Every child is surrounded by the deep mother love. However, we often turn a blind eye to the love. One day I deeply felt the love.

One day I hurried home for lunch after school, because there would be an exam in the afternoon and I had expected to go back to school early to prepare for the exam. But when I got home, the lunch was not ready yet. I felt unhappy. When the dishes were served, I forund none I like. I ran out of my house angrily and wanderde on the street for a while,hungry. Then I walked to school.

When I got into the classroom, I saw a lunch box on my desk. One classmate told me that it was my mother ther that had brought it here.After opening the box, I found my favorite food inside. My eyes was moist with tears.

Mother gave me her love without asking for return, How deep mother love is!

每个孩子都被深沉的母爱包围着，然而我们经常对这种爱视而不见。一天我深深感受到了这种爱。

一天放学后我匆忙回家吃午饭，因为下午考试，我希望早一点回校准备考试。但是我到家时午饭还没有准备好，我很不高兴。饭菜端上来时，我发现没有一样是我喜欢的。我生气地跑出了家门，饿着肚子在街上游荡了一会，然后往学校走去。

走进教室后，我看到书桌上有一个午餐盒，一个同学告诉我那是我妈妈送来的。打开盖子，里面是我喜欢吃的。我的眼睛湿润了。

妈妈无私地把爱给了我，却不求任何回报。多么深沉的母爱啊!

谢翰庭

要说谁最爱我，那当然是生我养我的爸爸和妈妈了。他们一直像影子一样陪着我。

记得有一次，下大雨，妈妈不太舒服。我因为觉得在家里没事干，就说：“妈妈我要去游泳。”妈妈无奈地说：“好吧。”准备好东西后，我高兴地下了单元门，妈妈则显得非常疲惫，连走路都很慢。

此时，外面正下着倾盆大雨，狂风夹着闪电，像汹涌的海浪向我们扑来。妈妈用尽全力撑着伞，和大风抗衡着，有时几乎走不动，妈妈为了不让我淋着，尽量把伞往我这边靠，我身上只是湿了一点儿，而妈妈却了湿了半边身子。风太大，我们打的伞总是被吹歪。

这时，我发现妈妈说话时鼻音很重，就问道：“妈妈，你没事吧？”妈妈气喘吁吁地答到：“我⋯咳⋯没事，只要你开心好。”我心中顿时涌起一股暖流。原来妈妈是为了让我开心，所以才来陪我游泳的。想到这，我悄悄地将伞往妈妈那边挪了一点。妈妈看出我的心思高兴的说，乖儿子，你长大了，都知道体谅妈妈了。我心里想，妈妈都是为了陪我，却还说我体谅他。就这样跑跑停停，精疲力竭的我们终于来到了游泳馆。

游玩泳回家，我和妈妈并肩走着，路灯下拉出两条长长的影子，我望着一大一小的影子。心想：母亲不就像我的影子吗？她时时刻刻都陪伴着我，跟随着我。

哦，爱如影子！爱如影子！

At Christmas time, I will always bless my classmates who have walked through fifty difficult steps with me. This year I will use this composition as a special gift to express my deep blessing to him.

The past always keeps me fresh. The student is very tall. He always looks serious, but he always smiles on his face when he helps others. We have always been a very good playing partner. Remember, thats my Christmas day in grade two. Its a bit slippery on the ground under the drizzle. When we took turns shooting, I sprained my feet after landing, but I couldnt even stand up. After he saw it, he put down the ball immediately, gently lifted me up, and slowly helped me into the teaching building. From his eyes, I could see a bit of worry. I knew he was worried about whether I could walk up to the four floor classroom.

There are fifty steps to go up to the four floor classroom, because our speed is very slow, so that we just walked to the two floor, and the bell rang. I asked him to go quickly, but he said, "after I leave, how do you get there? Id like to stay. " Looking at his solemn expression, listening to his firm words and feeling his powerful arm, suddenly a warm current came to his heart, and the pain seemed to ease a lot. With his support, one step and one stop, we strolled fifty steps hard. These fifty steps left me with the love of my classmates. This is the special Christmas gift that I got that year!

I switched to school in XX, but I can never forget the story of that Christmas. This years Christmas is coming. Today is drizzle. Im here to bless him and I together to a good middle school, and hope we can play basketball happily together.

法国文学家马克、李维曾在书中说过这样一句话；你偷走了我的影子，无论你走到那里，我都会想着你。

是的，宛如一个神偷，在岁月的不断流逝和年华的蹉跎中，我们偷走了一个人的影子，那是最爱我们的人。是的，那就是母亲。所以，无论我们走到哪里，何时何地，欢乐或悲伤，激动或喜悦，我们的一言一行，一举一动都在牵动着她的心。那根弦根据心情或低回婉转或慷慨激昂。唯一不变的，就是一直在想着你。

被偷了影子的人，是辛苦而忙碌的。我们自私地操控着手中的影子，让她们为我们奔走于白昼与黑夜之间。太阳下的影子是忙碌的，为了生活，她们穿梭于办公室或厨房卧室。可为了偷影子的人的乐享其成，她们情愿付出而不求回报。灯光下的影子是辛苦的，奔波了一整天，顾不上休息，一边准备我们爱吃的菜肴，一边叮嘱着生活中的小事。一言一语，似滴滴清泉，叩击着心田，不觉泛起一圈涟漪。

被偷了影子的人，是孤独的。或许，被偷了影子的人，都会感到孤独吧。尤其是在夜晚来领的时候。当我们渐渐长大，外出求学。归来时，总能发现一脸欣喜却仍然掩盖不了疲倦的脸，以及那挥舞着的粗糙却充满温暖的手，在无数个我们不再身旁的日子。她们又是怎样的呢？再孤独地人在黑夜来临之际都可以有影子为伴。他们却没有。她们的影子早已幻化成月光，洒在了熟睡孩子的脸庞。

被偷了影子的人，是宽容的。我们偷了母亲的影子，但她却从来没有嗔怪过她的孩子。即使，有的时候，叛逆与出言不逊深深地刺痛了她身体里最柔软的那一部分。但，她会把失望的泪水藏在上扬的嘴角里。当你低着头推开家门的那一霎那，看到的，永远是世界上最动人、最明媚、最慈爱的笑容。

你偷走了我的影子，无论你走到哪里，我都会想着你。多么质朴而深刻的一句话。我们都是偷了母亲影子的人。

我偷走了你的影子，让你在阳光下独自前行，奔波中忘记了一身的疲倦；

我偷走了你的影子，让你在漫漫黑夜中独自承受着黑暗与孤独；

我偷走了你的影子，让你的影子逐渐被侵噬，一天天弯下去。

但是，妈妈，在将来的日子里，我愿意把自己的影子送给你，让你不再有孤单，忙碌与彷徨。

李小旦和她的影子是一对形影不离的好伙伴，可最近却闹了矛盾。原来，李小旦胆很小，总不敢大方表现自己。这个星期老师通知全班同学踊跃参加周五下午的班会活动，影子可高兴了，让李小旦准备一个节目。可不管怎么劝说，李小旦就是不敢参加。影子叹了一口气，默默地离开了李小旦。

没有熟悉的影子跟随，李小旦很失落。其实，她也很想参加集体活动，可实在鼓不起勇气。

班会活动开始了，大家有的唱歌，有的弹琴，还有的跳舞……只有李小旦木讷地坐着。当大家伴着音乐跳起集体舞时，李小旦的耳边传来了两个声音：“去吧，上去和大家一起跳！”“不要去，多难为情！”她抬头望了望，大家一边轻盈地跳着舞，一边向她投来邀请的目光。李小旦咬了咬嘴唇，终于鼓足勇气，站起来向大家走过去，怯生生地问：“我……可以加入你们吗？”“当然可以，我们都在等着你呢！”大家异口同声地说。她们拉起李小旦的手，围成一个圈又唱又跳，洒下一片片欢快的笑声。李小旦被大家的真诚和热情感染，她感受到了同学们的友爱，更感受到了前所未有的自信。

放学的路上，李小旦还沉浸在欢乐的回味中，突然发现，路灯下的自己又有了影子。“是你吗？影子，你回来了？”影子一蹦一跳地说：“看到你变得勇敢、自信，我太高兴了，所以就回来啦！”李小旦激动地和影子紧紧拥抱在一起。

后来，在影子的陪伴下，李小旦变得越来越活泼、开朗，她参加了许多次集体活动，还自愿加入了小记者的队伍。

Hong Kong is one of the two special administrative regions (SARs) of the Peoples Republic of China, along with Macau. Comprising more than 260 islands, the territory is located on the eastern side of the Pearl River Delta, bordering Guangdong province in the north and facing the South China Sea in the east, west and south.

Hong Kong was a Crown colony of the United Kingdom from 1842 until the transfer of sovereignty to the Peoples Republic of China in 1997. The Sino-British Joint Declaration and the Basic Law of Hong Kong stipulate that Hong Kong will operate with a high degree of autonomy until at least 2047, fifty years after the transfer. Under the policy of "one country, two systems", the Central Peoples Government is responsible for the territorys defence and foreign affairs, while Hong Kong maintains its own legal system, police force, monetary system, customs policy, immigration policy, and delegates to international organizations and events.

Hong Kong is frequently described as a city where East meets West, a meeting reflected in its economic infrastructure, education, legal system and street culture. On one street corner, there may be traditional Chinese shops selling Chinese herbal medicine, Buddhist paraphernalia or bowls of synthetic shark fin soup. But around the next, one may find theatres showing the latest Hollywood blockbuster, a British-style pub, a Catholic Church or Ronald McDonald inviting passer-bys to a Big Mac. The territorys official language is Chinese and English; signs in both languages are omnipresent throughout Hong Kong. The government, police and most workplaces and stores conduct business bilingually. British rule may have ended a decade ago but Western culture is deeply ingrained in Hong Kong and coexists seamlessly with traditional philosophy and practices of the Orient.

Hong Kong has an active nightlife centred on two major entertainment districts, Lan Kwai Fong (Central) and Wan Chai. Both areas are frequented by expatriates and locals alike. For a more quiet evening, a trip to Victoria Peak offers a spectacular view of the city. There is also a promenade along the Tsim Sha Tsui waterfront, which is popular among young Chinese couples. Shopping, a form of entertainment for the people of Hong Kong, is even done at nighttime as evident in the Temple Street Night Market where one can also catch free performances of Peking opera.

The citys cosmopolitan flavour can also be seen in the wide variety of cuisines available. While different varieties of Chinese selections, especially seafood, are most popular, there are also many European, American, Japanese, Korean, and other restaurants. Ethnic dishes served in cha chaan teng and dai pai dong are also popular. The people of Hong Kong take their food seriously and many top chefs make their way to the city to show off their talents to these discerning diners.

While Hong Kong is a global centre of trade, perhaps the citys most famous export is its entertainment industry, particularly in the martial arts genre. Several top-notch Hollywood performers originate from Hong Kong cinema -- Bruce Lee, Chow Yun-Fat, Jackie Chan, Michelle Yeoh, Jet Li and Leslie Cheung, to name a few. Behind the camera, Hong Kong filmmakers have also struck fortune in Hollywood such as John Woo, Wong Kar-wai, Tsui Hark and martial arts choreographers who have designed fight scenes in the Matrix trilogy, Kill Bill and Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon. Back in Hong Kong, several homegrown films have also gained international recognition such as Chungking Express, Infernal Affairs, Shaolin Soccer, Rumble in the Bronx and In the Mood for Love. Acclaimed filmmaker Quentin Tarantino has said hes strongly influenced by Hong Kong action cinema.

The Hong Kong government also supports cultural institutions such as the Hong Kong Heritage Museum, Hong Kong Museum of Art, the Hong Kong Academy for Performing Arts and the Hong Kong Philharmonic Orchestra. Furthermore, the governments Leisure and Cultural Services Department also subsidizes and sponsors the bringing of international performers to Hong Kong.

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。

My father is a gentle man.My father has small eyes,wears a pair of glasses,looking more gently,the daddys hair are not many, he said "the intelligent head does not grow hair".He usually educates me that the person must to be honestly,friendly to other,and working diligently. This is my father, I love him forever. My family has 5 people: father, mother, grandparents, and I. My father works as an engineer in a company. My mother is a primary school math teacher.My grandmother used to be a good student in college. And after she graduated, she became an account.

My grandfather used to be a worker in wood factory. He always worked a lot with those woods. Mother is 35 years old. My father is 5 years older than her. Grandparents are both 60 years old. We just celebrated their 60th birthday for them. To talk about their hobby. Mother likes dancing. Father loves singing. Grandparents prefer Chinese writing. And I love chess.

Hello, my friends, My name is Cherie. I come from BeiHai, a city of GuangXi

province. Now I want to tell you something about me hometown. BeiHai is a

beautiful city near the sea. There are several places worth visiting.

The most famous place is the Silver Beach. You can take the no.2 bus and

take no.3bus to the Silver Beach. You can get off the bus at the Beach hotel

stop and set the luggage or have s rest at the hotel. Then go back the road

which the bus have come. The beach is not far from the hotel, you can’t miss it.

The seafood is very delicious, you can have some for supper after swimming. The

world under the sea is a fantasy place. When you go into it, you will feel that

you are really under the sea. There are so many kinds of fish swimming around

you.

The most exciting program is “dancing with the shark” .that is some girls

who dress as the fish dive into the water and play.

How to Make Friends

It’s hard to makefriends if you stay alone all the time. It’s easier to

make friends whenyou have similar interests. Look at people in the eyes when you

talk to them. Don’t be afraid to show people whatyou are really good at. Talk

about the things you like and do best. Be a goodlistener. Let people talk about

themselves before talking about yourself. Be friendly to a lot of people. Try to

help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a

friendindeed. That way you’ll have a bigger group to choose from and havemore

chances to make friends.

Its a big years night. My parents and I had a good meal early and waited in front of the TV to watch the Spring Festival Gala. What a lot of programs! There are sketches, crosstalk, dance, acrobatics, magic, song … …

And Zhao Benshans "no money" made us laugh. The small article "underwater New Years Eve" is deeply moved by us. My most profound impression is Louis Lius magic show, first used a rubber band to wear out cattle in another root rubber band in cattle and then show, write coins two glasses off in a small glass cover on the inside, and finally show host ring transferred to chicken eggs, the exquisite let me see the show all eyes … …

XX the Spring Festival Gala is really wonderful!

one possible version:

june 8, 20xx dear sir, im sorrto tell you that i cant go to school today, ive caught a cold because i swam in the schoolswimming pool yesterday. thimorning i had a headache. after taking mtemperature, mmother found that i had a high fever, immediatelshe took me to see a doctor, who advised me to stain bed for 2 days. now i am writing to you to ask for 2 days sick leave. with best wishes.

your student,

tom