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初中英语中考写作指导【20篇】

歌起舞动平安夜,心动情柔圣诞节;心想事成平安福,把酒问候圣诞节;甜情密语平安家。下面就由小编为您带来初中英语中考写作指导,欢迎阅读。

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初中英语作文大全

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Tomb Sweeping Day is on the April 5th every year. Its a day to show our great respect to our deceased ancestors. On that day, we usually sweep the tomb of our ancestors and offer them food and drinks. We also burn paper money to them. It is believed that our ancestors in heaven will receive the money. Besides, everything in our nature takes on a new look on that day, so its the best time for spring outing. It must be fun and relaxing.

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篇1:放松英语作文初中

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Now many students of Grade 9 are under too much pressure. They always feel

too tired to listen to the teachers carefully in class.

It’s important for students to relax. Only in this way can they study well

and be healthy. Here are some different ways to relax themselves. For example,

they can try to have enough sleep,or they can listen to their favourite music

after class. They can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often

hang out with my friends.

While you are studying, don’t forget to relax. You will study better after

a good rest.

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篇2:初中毕业典礼英语作文

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6月是毕业季,以下是小编整理的关于初中毕业典礼英语作文,欢迎阅读。

Good morning,my dear teachers and schoolmates,

It’s a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating classes.

How time flies! Our junior high school lives will come to an end.

In the past three years, we’ve had a beautiful school and it provides us with a good study place. Teachers are our friends. They’ve given us interesting lessons and we all love them.

We’ve learned a lot from them, not only knowledge but also the way to solve problems in life. Thanks for our teachers’ training, parents’ support and the help from classmates. Without them, we couldn’t have so much wonderful time.

At last, we hope our school will become better, our teachers will be healthy for ever and all our dreams will come true.

Thank you .

【译文】

早上好,我亲爱的老师和同学们,

能代表毕业班作演讲,我感到非常荣幸。

时间过得真快!我们的初中生活就要结束了。

在过去的三年中,我们有一所美丽的学校,它为我们提供了一个学习的好地方。老师是我们的朋友。他们给我们上了有趣的课,我们都很喜欢。

我们从中学到了很多东西,不仅是知识,而且是解决生活中问题的方法。感谢老师的培训、家长的支持和同学们的帮助。没有他们,我们就不会有那么多美好的时光。

最后,我们希望我们的学校会变得更好,我们的老师将永远健康,我们所有的梦想都会成真。

谢谢。

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篇3:电脑游戏初中生英语作文

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题目:李小虎沉迷于电脑游戏中,影响了学习。作为他的好朋友,你打算怎么帮他呢?

请用下面所给的提示词写一篇短文。

提示词: give up concentrate on be (become)interested in

Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good/close friend of his, I must do something to help him.

First, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, Im sure he will make great progress soon.

[电脑游戏初中英语作文

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篇4:初中英语位好朋友附中文

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迈克是我的好朋友。每当我需要帮助时,他就来到我身边。一天放学了,我不得不留下来跟3组的同学一起打扫卫生。但3组的其他人都在外边玩,他们谁都不想回来。于是迈克就过来帮我扫地。真是优秀作文 ,患难朋友才是真正的朋友。

Mike is my good friend. Any time I need help, he will come to me. One day after school, I had to stay and clean the classroom with Group Three. But they were still playing outside without any sign to go back. So Mike came and helped me clean the floor. A friend in need is a friend indeed.

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篇5:我的早期偶像初中英语作文_其他话题600字

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When I was in middle school, I heard the English song Baby One More Time. Then I saw the music record, the girl was so sweet and pretty. She danced so well in the record, she was full of energy. Since then, I fell in love with Britney Spears, every girl wanted to be her. She was not only beautiful, but also could sing and dance so well. Britney Spears was my early idol, her energetic image attracted me so much. I was so crazy about her at that time. I believe that in every teenager’s dream, they will have an idol.

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篇6:自我介绍初中英语作文

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i come from china.i am 13.i am a lively girl.my name is wang ting,and my english name is linda.i am keen on sports,because it can make me strong.i also like reading book,because i can learn some knowladge.i like reading best.i enjoy it when i was a child,i think it has many attractions.my ambition is to be a teacher in poor mountain region schools,the children there cannot go to school for theyre so poor.they are so clever and lovely,it is really a pity if they cannot go to school.so i want to help them.thank you

[自我介绍初中英语作文

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篇7:初中英语作文题目

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Many people, sometimes myself included, tend to judge a person by his

appearances.

I was afraid of my uncle who has a scared tattoo on his arm till my mother

told me a “story”. When I was a three-year-old naught boy, I always ran around

the neighborhood with my toy saber. Unfortunately, one day I hit a wild dog by

accident. The dog became crazy and tried to bite me. It was that time my uncle

appeared and protected me with his strong arm. However, this accident left a

scar on his arm. My uncle went to get a tattoo in order to cover up the scars.

From that moment, he is my hero in stead of a bad looking uncle.

So we need to go beyond peoples looks and focus on more internal spirits

in order to truly judge a person.

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篇8:高中英语写作指导:高中英语写作教学的体会

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一、勤读、多背词汇,好精句

要想写好一篇文章,没有充足的词汇量是不行的。课文中的俗语和谚语的识记是通过背诵来完成。背诵是语言学习的重要手段,也是语言学习的必经之路。

1.背词句,背诵课文中的重点句型和短语尤其是课文中的俗语、谚语和经典句子。

2.背范文,将近几年高考中的作文和课文中好的段落以及报刊上的各种各样的体裁和优秀文章让学生多背,这样学生才能在自己的脑子中形成一定的写作框架,做到心中有数。

3.多读书,用英语进行思维。为了培养学生用英语思维的定势,增加对英语国家文化、社会风俗、风土人情、思维方式的了解,扩大视野,选择课外阅读,提高学生分析、判断、猜测、推理和领悟的能力。部分学生在写作时习惯用汉语思维,然后再逐句译成英语,结果写出来的文章是汉语式的英语。要想学会用英语进行思维,就要有计划、有目的地培养学生的语感。一个重要的方法就是大量阅读,选择精彩的词句、文章和佳句,引导学生阅读,摘抄或背诵来培养语感。

二、亲自动手,自己写作

教师应注重基本功训练,严格要求学生正确,工整,熟练地书写字母,单词和句子,同时注意大小写和标点符号。进行组词造句,组句成段练习时,要学生写出最简单的短句,为以后英语作文打好扎实的基础。这种练习可以安排在刚开始的训练中,要求学生能够用最基本的时态去完成写作。另外结合高中英语基础知识的复习,对学生提出较高写作能力的要求。

1.范例引路

学生在进行短文写作训练时,教师应提供各种文体的范文,讲明各种文体的写作要求和注意事项,如日记,便条,书信,通知的格式等,并给予必要的提示,并掌握各种体裁文章的格式。在平时的教学中,教师应该指导学生应对高考中各种体裁文章。

2.限时训练

教师当场发题,限时交卷。这样能促使学生瞬间接受信息,快速理解信息,迅速表达信息,提高实际应用和应试能力。这一步是关键,也是学生的的难关。必须要求学生在写作过程中牢牢记住以下口诀:“先读提示,要点与格式要弄清;时态语态要当心,前后呼应要一致;结构搭配,莫违背;文章写好细检查,点滴小错别忽视”。学生明确目的,并掌握要领后,要严格在规定时间内完成作业。

3.多想精炼

在平时的教学中,教师要求学生多看、多听、多想,用心体验和感悟身边的人和事,然后将自己的体验和感受用英语写出来。教师可要求学生每周写两篇,有话则长,无话可短。对不同水平的学生作不同的要求。鼓励表达自己的看法和体会

此外,有时根据所学单元知识布置一篇作文,或给学生提供一些与时事或与学生学习活动和生活有关的材料。此类话题的现实性能诱发学生的写作兴趣,使其有话可写,有感而发;还能增强其信心,使其写作能力、技巧得到充分的锻炼和提高。对于有待进步的学生要及时励,激发其写作热情,增强其自信心。

4.自改互改

对照范文,学生先对已查出的表达有误的地方进行初改。范文不可能把各种表达方式都包括进去,况且学生作业中的错误也不尽相同,因此,还可安排学生互改。以同桌两人为宜,这样同时进行了改错训练。

三、培养学生良好的写作习惯

写作教学是一项“由简单到复杂,循环往复不断上升的”过程。不是一蹴而就的,需要教师在教学中由浅入深、由简入繁、由易到难、循序渐进。起始阶段,培养学生良好的写作习惯是非常重要的。要求学生做到以下几点:

1.认真审题。要求学生认真审读图表或提纲,领会意图,捕捉信息,确定文章时态及体裁。

2.写提纲。教师引导学生构思文章要点,写出每个段落主题句、关键词,然后确定细节和内容要点。

3.写初稿。经过审题和列提纲后,学生开始写作,教师指导学有意识地使用固定句型,使用关联词,把段落按逻辑顺序连成一体,形成基本连贯的初稿。

4.检查错误。检查是书面表达不可缺少的环节,学生完成初稿后,老师指导学生从以下六个方面进行修改和查错:(1)看要点是否齐全,有无遗漏;(2)体裁是否恰当,有无偏题;(3)内容是否连贯,有无缺词;(4)语法是否正确,人称、时态、语态、冠词及名词单复数等有无错误;(5)用词是否得当,有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误(6)最后注意句与句、段与段之间有无合适的连接及过渡,经过有效的训练,学生犯的错误会逐渐减少,同时学生的书面表达能力会逐步提高。

总之,教学有法,教无定法。教师面对的教育对象是多样化的,因此在教学中一定要关注学生的个体差异,采取相应的措施,激发学生写作的兴趣。让学生参与实践,体验成功的快乐,循序引导,学生点滴积累,不断磨练,这样能达到理想的效果。

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篇9:我的学校初中英语作文

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1.你的学校位于什么地方

2.校园景色如何

3.你对同学和老师们的感受如何

4.请谈谈你对你学校的感觉等..

(在哪自己写吧).First here is our favourite place our beautifui garden many trees and many flowers in it. then you can go into it .Now,you know why we love it right .we can write red and chat in it.(tell you a secret:I like it because it is cool in summer and warm in winter

Now,I will tell you more about my friends &teachers. Over here teachers are friendly to us,so we never say a bad word about them.Because of these,students can get good grades at my school.(Would you like to come?)

I think my school is one of the best schools in the world.Because we have good teachers good students and everything is beautiful. I like it, every at it likes it.

[我的学校初中英语作文

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篇10:初中英语

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Promise is very important, I hate people who break their promise, the one

who can’t keep his promise is not reliable. Once, my friend asked me to his

company him, because he was alone at home, his parents were busy with their

work. At first, I said yes to him, but at that day, I had a lot of things to do,

when I finished all the things, I found it was dark. I started to hesitated, I

wanted to give up to company my friend, thinking about his disappointed face,

finally, I decided to keep my words. When my friend saw me, he was very happy.

He said she believed me would come, I never let him down.

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篇11:中考语文作文写作六要素之布好局

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布局,也就是文章的结构。它是在作者掌握了材料,明确了主题后,对整个文章的构架作一个整体上的安排。

布好局对于中考(微博)作文,以往出现过很多新颖的结构形式,如日记、对话体、剧本、童话,还有高考(微博)作文中的处方等等,这些东西有些很不好把握,对初中生来说难度比较大,比如剧本,不是一般的初中生都能写的,虽然初中课本中有过一点训练,但,要达到一个比较优秀的水平是很难的,一旦写得不怎么样,那就很容易给人一种不伦不类的感觉。再者,那些容易掌握的,别人作过了,你再作,新颖度也就不是太大了。当然常规性作文形式的生命性还是要强得多。重要的还是要把内容与形式结合得完美一些,才是真正的作文之道。

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篇12:初中日记和写作教案

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第一次作文训练

训练内容:

合理交代记叙的要素

训练目标:

1、全面掌握记叙的六个要素

2、学会交代记叙要素的基本方法

3、初步学会写人记事的方法

训练重点:

1、 全面掌握记叙的六个要素

2、 初步学会写人记事的方法

训练难点:

怎样掌握写人记事的方法

训练时数:三课时

第一课时

教学内容:

作文指导

教学步骤:

一、知识讲解:

(一)什么是记叙的要素

记叙文就是以记叙为主要表达方式的记人叙事的文章。一篇完整的记叙文一般应包括时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果这“六要素”。

那么为何称之为“要素”?

我们知道,记叙文主要是记人叙事的,这“人”和“事”自然包括在要素中,而这“人”和“事”又必须是特定时间、特定地点的“人”和“事”。如英雄刘胡兰是革命战争年代在山西从事革命工作的女共产党员;铁人王进喜是新中国成立不久奋战在大庆油田的劳模。没有时间、地点,也就无法记人与叙事。很显然,时间、地点是记叙文不可缺少的要素。要写人必定要写事,让人物在事件中凸现,在事件中丰满;写事件就必须交待清楚事件发生的原因和结果,没有原因和结果,人们就不知道它的来龙去脉,也就不是一篇完整的记叙文,显然,原因与结果也是记叙的要素。

(二)怎样合理地交待时间与地点

交待时间与地点,大致有以下几种方式:

1.开头交待。

这是人们叙述时时常采用的方法。例如,《竞选》的开头:

五月的天气有点阴。

龟峰乡石坳村的村民选举即将开始,321位选民端坐在会场上。

开头把竞选的时间、地点交待清楚了,为下面叙述竟选场面作了必要的交待。

2.连续交待。

有的记叙文,因事件的发生、发展时间跨度大,地点在不断转移,需要连续交待。如《驿路梨花》中的几处交待:

(1)一弯新月升起来了,我们借助淡淡的月光,在忽明忽暗的梨花林里走着。山间的夜风吹得人脸上凉凉的,梨花的白色花瓣轻轻飘落在我们身上。

(2)第二天早上,我们没有立即上路。老人也没有离开,我们决定把小茅屋修葺一下,给屋顶加点草,把房前屋后的排水沟再挖深一些。

(3)接着,小姑娘向我们讲述了房子的来历。十多年前,有一队解放军路过这里,在树林里过夜,半夜淋了大雨。他们说,这里要有一间给过路人避风雨的小屋就好了,第二天早晨就砍树割草盖起了房子。

(1)段交待的时间是夜晚,地点是梨树林;(2)段交待的时间是第二天早上,地点是(梨树林)茅屋旁;(3)段是补充交待,时间是十多年前,地点是树林。这样连续交待,所叙述的事情就显得脉络分明。

3.间接交待。

对于时间和地点的表示,不一定直接写某年某月某日,某省某市某区,如“桃花开了”“枫叶红了”“天空出现鱼肚白”“几颗寒星还在泛着冷光”,它们分别间接表示“春天”“秋天”“早晨”“夜晚”等时间概念,还有如“雪域高原”“春城”“板栗之乡”,分别间接表达了“西藏”“昆明”“罗田”等地点概念。

(三)怎样合理交待人物与事件

1.人物的正面描写与侧面描写。

(1)正面描写。外貌(肖像)、行动、语言、心理描写属正面描写。

A外貌描写。《背影》为例。

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篇13:初中英语

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The teacher set up the summer homework. Good guy, that damned language

teacher actually call us to the 4th grade the old poem famous quote to copy 8

times! By this time, the roof of the classroom was "overturned". The students

were Shouting at each other. I myself comfort myself: nothing, dont copy 8

times, the big deal I make quick, still do not change plan.

Another day after that, my classmate xiao sheng called me to study

taekwondo with her. After the family discussed, I decided to let me go to

school. Then the cousin called again and said, "hello, yueyue, stay for a few

days during the summer vacation! I will teach you to draw pictures, by the way!"

"Really? Thats great! I must come!" By this time, I had forgotten to plan and

threw it out of the clouds.

When I look at the schedule, I have found that I am completely filled with

the schedule and time is not enough. How to do? Only a little bit of time... But

in comparison, none of them are free. That how to do? Can only be changed. What

better? Well, I only had a three-hour nap to learn taekwondo... That way, my

summer vacation will be "ample". What a bad summer!

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篇14:关于我的目标英语作文初中

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I remember once upon a time, when I was running 800meters, I felt there

seemed to be the impossible mission for me, I wanted to give up, then my teacher

told me that I should not think about the 800meters, I should set up 100meters

for myself, then I wouldn’t be so tired. I did as he told me, indeed, every time

when I finished the small goal, I was happy, in the end, I finished the running.

I learn the lesson that we need to set up the best goal, it means we can make

the small goals, which are so easy for us to realize. Then every time we finish

the small goal, we will close to our final destination.

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篇15:描写风景的初中英语

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It was early in the morning. The sun was just creeping(爬) out of the eastern horizon(地平线)and golden red was penetrating (穿透) through the white clouds and across the sky. The lakes,the trees and the bamboos looked as if they were all gilded. The ground was covered withtender grass, on whose blades some dew drops were glistening(晶莹剔透) under the sunshine.

Birds flew around the woods singing cheerfully and restlessly. Some boys were quietly joggingalong the path, while a couple of girls were reading aloud under the trees lining the bank of thelake.

A gentle breeze came up, wrinkling(使…起皱) the surface of the lake. It was really a beautiful andlively morning.

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篇16:日记写作方法指导

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日记一般分成生活日记、观察日记和随感日记三种。

1、生活日记。

生活日记,就是把自己每天的生活、学习、工作情况有选择地记录下来。要写好生活日记必须注意以下几个问题:

(1)内容要真实。生活日记是自己经历的实在记录,而且要给自己看的,内容真实才有查考的价值。

生活是七彩的,它多姿多采地呈现在我们每个人的面前。学校、家庭、社会,都会有时代的浪花飞溅,只要我们能自觉地去观察生活,观察周围的人和事,你就会发现一个“宝藏”,就会有源源而来、取之不尽的真实材料。

(2)事情要有意义。有的同学说,日记就是把自己一天中亲身经历的,或所见所闻所感的东西记下来,记得越多越详越好。如有个同学写 正月初一的日记,把这一天当中所有的事都记下来:早晨起床吃饺子,而后给陈老师拜年,到学校游园活动,中午到外婆家吃饭,下午和表弟一起上街,晚上回家看电视,临睡前写日记……简直是眉毛胡子一把抓,成了典型的流水帐。日记的篇幅毕竟是有限的,同学们不可能把一天中的大事小事芝麻事件件都写进去。一般要选择印象深刻的,有意义的一两件事记下来,其他的不写或略写。

(3)语言要简明、通顺。写生活日记,内容可长可短,但语言必须通顺明白。

2、观察日记,即观察记录。就是把日常生活中的某一侧面,通过有目的的,细致的观察,把它记下来。可以写零碎的片断,不必讲究文章结构;也可以写得比较完整,类似一篇记叙文。经常写观察日记,可以提高观察能力,养成观察习惯,还可以积累写作素材,提高语言表达能力,这种日记最适宜我们小学生记。

要写好观察日记,必须注意以下几点:

(1)观察目的要明确。观察,有多种多样的目的,或为了积累写作素材;或为了进行科学实验;或为了弄清楚某种“奥秘”……只有目的明确,观察才有方向,才有重点。就是观察同一对象,由于目的的不同,方法和角度就不同,结果也就不一样。

(2)观察要全面细致。全面,就是要对事情发展的全过程,事物构成的各部分,以及事物之间的相互联系,观察清楚;细致,就是要求观察深入、彻底,抓俗语事物的特点,规律和本质。

(3)观察要持之以恒。观察事物难于一次完成,需要反复进行。这就要同学们有恒心。

(4)观察日记的语言要准确。观察日记有很强的科学性。因此要求使用语言要准确,不能用“大概、差不多”这类似是而非的词语。

3、随感日记。

这种日记主要是就一篇文章、一本书、一部电影或生活中的某一件事情,抒发自己的感想。日记中以议论为主,叙述是为了议论,有时整篇日记都是写自己的感受。

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篇17:小学升初中作文掌握的写作技巧

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小升初是小学当中非常关键的一年,那么我们在小升初的时候怎么去把写作搞好呢,那么我们现在必须要掌握好一些作文技巧,我们在小升初需要掌握那个写作技巧呢?

一、审题

这是写作文首先要做好的事,否则,就会直接导致“文不对题”,“下笔千言,离题万里”。怎样才能审好题呢?根据通常的作文题目的形式来看,一般可分为命题作文和材料作文两大类。对命题作文的审题,就是要审查给定的文章题目确定的具体要求,审清文题意图,明晰题外要求,确定“题眼”。通过审题,明确作文的内容范围、时间范围、数量范围、人称范围、处所范围等。不能超出给定的范围。对材料作文的审题,主要从两个方面去把握:一是与材料的思想内容要“形影不离”,二是与作文形式的要求“丝丝入扣”。

1。命题作文

我们先重点谈一下关于命题作文的审题,要注意做好哪些事情。

确定内容范围

有的题目,对写作内容做出规定。所以,审题时,要确定题目规定的内容范围:记人的,要记什么人;叙事的,要叙什么事;写景的,要写什么景;状物的,要状什么物,等等。

精彩习作-----童年趣事

童年,是一方没有莠草、污秽的净土,是一片无遮无拦明朗的天空。这里流淌的纯真与甜美,总会使人产生难以忘怀的回忆。

记得我4岁那年,迷信的奶奶告诉我:“要是剪掉了胳膊上的毛,会变成疯子。”幼稚而好奇的我听了以后,半信半疑,手痒痒的,老是想试试看,但又怕家人和亲戚为我担心。可是没试,就老是惦记着,越惦记,就越是想试。

于是,我准备马上试。我拿出那可怕的剪刀,用颤抖的右手慢慢地靠近左手胳膊上的一根毫毛。刚要剪,我又停了下来。心想:“我要是真的变成一个疯子,会不会像老鼠过街一样人人喊打?爸爸、妈妈和奶奶会不会不再疼爱这个傻孩子了?”我越想越害怕。我犹豫了许久,才把胳膊上的毛剪掉了。一剪完,我什么都不顾地钻进被窝里,不知不觉就睡着了。醒来时,我发现,我还是原来的我,一个正常的小女孩。于是,我不顾一切,高兴地蹦到奶奶身边,撒娇地说:“奶奶呀,奶奶!我今天剪了胳膊上的一根毫毛,可没变成疯子啊!”奶奶听了以后,笑了笑,摸着我的小脑袋,没说什么。

这件童年趣事已留在我记忆的闸门里。但随着年龄的增长,我懂得了:凡事要相信科学,不能相信迷信。

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篇18:初中英语作文之我的家人

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I am a chinese girl and i study in wuyilu primary school. i get up very  early in the morning and then help my mother cook breakfast. after breakfast, i  walk to school, because its not far from my house.

I have many friends at school. we often help each other with our lessons.my  mother is forty-six years old, and she works in meet all supermarket. its near  my school. the supermarket is very big, and it sells all kinds of things. the  students in my school often buy school things there.

my father is two years younger than my mother. he is in the same  supermarket, but he doesnt sell things. hes a driver.

my family is a happy one.

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篇19:中考英语书面表达专项练习10中考英语作文

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提示:

1 教会如何生活 过分溺爱

2 指出缺点,指明方向 强加兴趣、价值观

3 教会富有爱心 希望值过高

要求:

1、根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文通顺连贯;

2、词数110左右;

3、开头已给出,不计入单词总数。

Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students……

参考范文:

Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life. What’s more, parents’ love helps to teach them how to love others. So parents are their most important teachers.

However, not all of us hold the same views. Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. Moreover, their parents sometimes expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.

In my opinion, parents are our important teachers. But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the generation gap.

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篇20:初中英语作文写作方法技巧

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英语作文怎么写?写不好作文是很多初中生存在的问题。而作文是初中英语考试的重要内容,怎么才能写一篇高分英语作文呢?下面是星火小编给大家总结的一些英语写作经验,大家可以看看。

要写好作文,首先要写好开头,怎么写开头呢?下面是一些不同的开头表达方式,大家可以参考看看。

“开门见山”式开头

即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。

①.对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。

如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头就可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.

②.对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。

如“The Time and the Money(时间和金钱)”的开头可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back,but?

这样就将自己想要谈到的话题表达清楚了,接下来再继续论述就可以了。

回忆性开头

在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如never forget (永远无法忘记), remember (记得),unforgettable (难以忘怀的), exciting(令人激动的),surprising(令人惊讶的), sad (难过的)……如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还可以这样写:I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.

疑问性开头

在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。

如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……

再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?

倒叙式开头

在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程。

如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a … story.

倒叙式的写法有一些难写,并且在写作过程中很有可能出现时态混淆的问题,在此建议大家在写作过程中尽量不要倒叙式的方式,避免犯错。

开了一个好头之后,当然要开始写文章的主体部分了,那就是文章的正文。

文章的正文应以文章的开头为线索,具体地叙述、说明或论证文章的主题。文章不论长短,每个段落都必须为主题服务。像说明文和议论文这一类的文章,一个主题还常分成几个小主题,每个小主题要用一个段落处理,另起一段时,应是一层新的意思。每一段的开头,要放一个表示段落小主题的主题句,这样可使文章条理化,易于阅读,便于读者抓住主题。段内的所有句子应围绕主题句的意义加以阐述或论证,为中心思想服务。句子之间应衔结自然,有条不紊,而且还要合乎逻辑,段落中不能出现任何与主题无关的句子;英语写作比较重视主题句的作用,缺少它段落意义就会含糊不清。主题句也可放在段落的中间和末尾等部位,但对初学者来说,以放在段首为好。

在记叙文中,段的结构有时可以很简单,不需要有主题句,叙事一气呵成,中途没有停顿。段与段之所以分开,只是为了起修辞作用,以便把某一细节置于显著的地位。

分段是文章组织上重要的一步,在写一篇文章的时候,一般都会将文章分为3段,第一段也就是文章的开头,第二段是主体部分,第三段自然就是结尾了。当然也可以分成4段等,不管怎么分段,都请大家要记住,在写一篇作文的时候,一定不可以不分段。

接下来就是文章的结尾了,以下是一些写好结尾的方法

1.自然结尾,点明主题。随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。

如“Helping the Policeman(帮助警察)”的结尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.

再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)”的结尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。

2.首尾呼应,升华主题。在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题,深化主题,起到“画龙点睛”的效果。

如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.

3.反问结尾,引起深思。这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,而且具有一定的强调作用,可引起他人的深思。

如 “Learning English can Give us a Lot of Pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是:If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun?

4.表达祝愿,阐述愿望

这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中,表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。

如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是:I hope the farmers’life will be better and better. 另外,书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语:Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。

第四种方法在中考作文中并不会太常用到,中考作文一般都不会要求写关于书信方面的文章,大家可以只是稍加了解。

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