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初中英语中考写作指导【精品20篇】

歌起舞动平安夜,心动情柔圣诞节;心想事成平安福,把酒问候圣诞节;甜情密语平安家。下面就由小编为您带来初中英语中考写作指导,欢迎阅读。

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中考命题作文写作的方法技巧

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近年来中考作文大多为话题作文。相对命题作文和半命题作文而言,话题作文首先要求学生围绕话题拟一个恰当的题目。但常常见到话题作文的考卷上,或因粗心不写题目;或因懒于思考直接用原话题;或缺乏创新,拟定的题目千篇一律,毫无新意。这样,都会不同程度地对整篇文章产生不良影响。要知道,一个巧妙的题目不仅能调动阅读老师的阅读兴趣,而且能让阅卷老师很快捕捉到文章所要表达的中心,为进一步理解全文奠定基础。

当然,拟题是需要技巧的,或以题揭示中心,或以题引人深思。或借用修辞,或巧用诗句,或展开联想,例如,以“梦”、“梦想”为话题,下面这些题目都令人耳目一新。《想做英雄》《我生活在梦想的盒子里》(以题揭示中心),《现实和梦想有多远》(以题引人深思),《梦如潮水》《给心灵插上翅膀》(借用修辞),《手可摘星辰》《梦想与人生齐飞》(巧用诗句),《种子的梦想》《化作轻风》(展开联想)。

求真求深立新意。考场作文在立意上主要存在三个方面的问题:一是立意不真或空喊高调,矫揉造作;或编造悲剧,博得同情;二是立意不深。叙述生活,却不能深层次地挖掘生活中潜隐的哲理;三是立意不新。不能多角度审视生活,品味生活,尤其是不能写出自己对生活独特的心灵体验。如果同学们在考场上注意以上三点,就能在作文立意上独显风格。下面这篇习作之所以能得到认可,就是因为在立意上求真,写出了自己真实的生活,独特的心里感受,同时也挖掘出了生活背后令人深思的哲理。

“……面对这一切(指学业上所遇到的艰难痛苦),我想逃避,但看到父母眼中闪烁着期待的目光,我又不忍心这样做。无意间,看到李敖说的一句话:?不怕苦,苦半辈子;怕苦,苦一辈子,?仅仅十三个字,就彻彻底底地征服了我,让我心中树起一座标牌,上面清晰地刻着?苦?字,然后是一个前进的标志。其实,真正地习惯了苦的生活,反而变得充实起来。一天忙碌之后,感觉如同沐浴后那样舒坦、惬意。”

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篇1:关于我的目标英语作文初中

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I will be a middle school student soon. when I look back on my pass days, I

find myself don’t make a difference, I play most of the time and don’t focus on

my study. Now I make up my mind. In the future days, I must study with all my

heart and learn as more as possible. So that I can store something for the

future.

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篇2:初中英语作文:写给蒋老师的一封信

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Dear Miss Jiang,

I am writing toshare my ideas about our English class. Now, our main material in the class isthe textbook, which is reasonable. But I think we can get some other resources,such as English magazines, songs, movies and so on. We can learn the basicknowledge from out textbook, and get some more from other materials. Inaddition, those materials are more authentic and practical, which will beuseful to our learning. Besides, by doing so, we can get more fun from learningand develop our interest to English. Please take good consideration of myadvice. Thank you!

Sincerely yours

Bella

尊敬的蒋老师

您好!我写是想和你谈谈我对英语课的想法。现在我们上课用的主要材料是课本,这是合理的。但是我认为我们可以获取一些其他资源,比如英语杂志,歌曲,电影等等。我们可以从课本上学到基本的知识,同时从其他材料获取知识。另外,那些材料更真实和实用,这对于我们的学习会有好处的。此外,通过这样做我们可以从学习中获得乐趣从而培养我们对英语的兴趣。请您认真考虑我的建议,谢谢!

贝拉

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篇3:我们的国父中考英语作文

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there is no doubt that dr. sun yat-sen is the greatest man that i ever known in my whole life. he set up the republic of china, so we call him our national father.

he was devoted to the revolution about forty years. his aim was to liberate china from the hands of the manchu dynasty. he had not met with result, but he was not discouraged at all. as a result, he accomplished his end in the long run.

to sum up, his strong will and indomitable spirit are worth our worship and imitation (are worth our worshiping and imitating).

译文:

无疑的,中山先生是我一生知道的最大的人物。他建立中华民国,所以我他为我的国父

他致力革命凡四十年。他的目的是清朝手里解放中国。他曾遭遇屡次的失败,但他却一点也不灰心。那是不需说的。结果,他终于达到目的。

总而言之,他坚强的意志和不屈不挠的精神(是)值得我们的崇拜和仿效。

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篇4:寒假英语作文初中

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The winter holiday is coming. I am very excited. I want to better my

holiday plan. Now let me tell you my plan.

I’m going to read some books and listen to music and relax for a few days

first. On the fifth day, I’m going to do my homework. Of course, I’m also going

to do some housework. Lunar New Year’s Day, I’m going to take a trip with my

parents. I think it must be very happy. I can hardly wait! In the first six days

of February, I’m going to visit my relatives. It’s going to be fun! After a few

days, I’m going to finish my homework, because I am going back to my school on

February 16th.

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篇5:我的暑假初中英语

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The summer vacation had come round again。 I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while。 Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend it。 First, I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them。 Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as walking, running rowing, to keep me physically strong。 It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time。 I did, because I lived up to what I had planned。

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篇6:初中英语

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Its winter vacation. I went to Grandpas house with my mother and sister for

the new year.

Pay New Years call people are hurrying to and fro. Novel coronavirus will

buddy this year. In order to prevent the virus, I can only stay at home

obediently. Although I cant go out, I can listen to my grandfathers stories at

home, and listen to his stories about the interesting things that happened when

I was a child, so that I can understand that I should cherish my life now and

study hard to realize my dream.

Through the TV broadcast, I learned that the virus was transmitted to human

beings by wild animals, so I hope that everyone will take good care of the wild

animals and not prey on them. Everyone should stay at home, wash hands

frequently, drink more water and try not to go out. Wear a mask when you go out.

Hope the angel in white can control the virus as soon as possible and return to

normal. Come on, Wuhan. Come on, mother China.

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篇7:初中生中考

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芭蕾舞演员精彩的单腿飞转,那是力的旋律;健美运动员块块隆起的肌肉,那是力的线条;赛跑健将风驰电掣般的冲刺,那是力的速度。我却独爱那令人震撼的根之力。

一场大雨过后,我家后院的盆景经过雨水的洗涤,格外美丽,片片嫩叶透着爽人的绿

,隐隐约约还有几缕清香袭来,是含笑吧,我循着香味走去,低头一闻,咦,怎么没有香味?哦,原来是一旁的兰花。

真扫兴,含笑上个星期已含苞待放,为何又迟迟不肯开花呢,我默默地抚弄着绿叶,忽然发现花盆有几道裂缝,是哪个调皮鬼捣的蛋,说不定就是因为这几条裂缝,才使含笑不“笑”呢!

我找来爸爸,爸爸看到好好的花盆弄破了,也很生气,问我是不是有谁将它打破,我也讲不出个头绪。爸爸只好找来几根铁丝将花盆箍紧。

可是几天后,铁丝松了,裂缝也越来越大,爸爸无奈,只得去买了一只新花盆。

搬来含笑,爸爸像往常一样,在花盆底部的洞里一戳,怪了,盆和花却怎么也分不开。我仔细端详着这盆,除了裂缝外,花盆表面已变得凹凸不平,盆口的圆形也变成了椭圆。爸爸索性拿来铁锤,几下子把花盆锤碎了,这下,我和爸爸惊呆了,花盆里全是浅褐色的密密麻麻的根,哪里还看得见得土啊!

谁都能想到,随着枝叶的繁茂,根也在生长,可谁曾想到,当小小的花盆已容不下根的时候,根会挣扎,根会反抗,根会怒吼,花盆变形了,裂开了,这就是根的力量,一种无形的力量。

我喜欢根的力量,我钦佩根的力量,我为这不屈不挠的精神所震撼。我想,这俨然象征着中华民族喷薄而出的根之力,一定会在属于它的这片沃土上扎根、伸展……

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篇8:我爱运动初中英语作文_其他话题1500字

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我爱运动英语作文篇一

I love sports. I love all kind of sports.

I can’t stay inside the house for a long time.

When I have spare time, I will go out to play sports.

If it is convenient, anyone asks me to go out to play sports, I will say yes.

I often go hiking, running, swimming, play basketball, football, volleyball, table tennis and so on.

All of them are my favorite. And because of them, I have a good body.

我爱运动的英语作文篇二

I love sports and athletics. Sports and athletics are not just building our bodies but also refueling our spirits.

They give us energy to continue our work and studies as well as incentive and momentum to create.

They help us maintain a positive attitude towards life and stay competitive whenever facing any challenges.

Without sports and athletics, we should definitely be in a tedious world living a tedious life.

我爱运动的英语作文篇三

Taking exercise is good for our health. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

By taking exercise, we can relax our body and mind.

At the same time, we can harden our muscle and have a good figure.

If we dont take exercise for a long time, we may easily fall sick.

I enjoy several outdoor sports.

Swimming in the sea is my favorite.

Because there are too many people in a swimming pool and the water is always dirty, I prefer to swim in the sea.

Playing badminton is also fun.

I can always find a place in the park for playing badminton.

Besides, I enjoy jogging in the morning.

Sometimes, I jog with my parents in the park.

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篇9:初中考试反思400字

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今天,项老师把批改完了的期中试卷发还给了我们。我先下意识地看了看分数——“95。5”。还好,成绩比我想象中的要好一些。但那4。5分到底扣在哪里了呢?

我找到了扣分的地方:一处看拼音写词语、一处谚语填空、一处阅读理解题外加作文扣了两分。这都是不应该错的呀!我沉默了,静静地反思起来:

在看拼音写词语部分,我错的是“障碍”的“碍”字。把它的右边部分写成了“喝”的右边部分。这两个字字形很相近。在考试前,老师已经把这几个单元的词语都给我们听写过了。老师常说:“语文的字词像房子的地基一样重要,学不好它,就甭想学别的!”我竟犯了这种低级错误,真有些说不过去。

在谚语填空部分,“鸡迟宿,鸭欢叫,风雨不久到。”;“蚂蚁搬家蛇过道,明日必有大雨到。”平时记得很熟的句子,到考试的时候,却弄糊涂了!我感觉很惭愧,这又是一个低级错误,我都觉得自己不是王奕阳了!

作文扣了分,绝对不是因为我水平差,而是因为错别字较多。一篇作文中,一个错别字,两个用词不当,不扣分才怪呢!我实在是太浮躁了!

阅读理解题里的错题,是我整张卷子中唯一一个因不懂而错的题目。看来,以后要在阅读上花更多地精力了。

我对这次的考试成绩很不满意。在下半学期的学习中,我一定要克服浮躁,做回以前的自己。

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篇10:英语高分写作指导

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一、注意审题

小作文的审题(即审读材料)很重要,决定着文章的成败。因为一个小作文的材料中,往往隐含了若干个写作要求,如不细心审读,抓不到这些隐含的要求,就很容易出现错误。例如:

一个孩子乘母亲不在,将家里的小闹钟拆了,母亲见后……

要求;根据上面的材料,展开想象,如果你是母亲,如何处置这个事情。请写出一个200字左右的处置过程。

这个小作文便隐含四个要求:(1)〝母亲见后〞,时间上必须要从母亲看见闹钟被拆之后写起;(2)〝如果你是母亲〞,行文中写作者必须是小孩的 母亲,必须以小孩子母亲的身份出现,不能这样写:〝如果我是这位母亲,我会这样处置……〞;(3)〝200字左右〞,字数限定在200字左右;(4)〝处 置过程〞,内容只能写处置的过程,而不能写结果和其他。

二、注意语言的简洁

这一点体现在两方面。其一,小作文字数一般是100┄300字,受篇幅限制,语言要求简洁明了。其二,如果是写应用文,则语言也一定要简洁,因为语言简洁是应用文写作的最基本要求。

三、力求结构完整

小作文是片断性作文,而非篇章。虽如此,但不能一味忽略结构的完整性。一篇小作文如果能够做到结构完整,则效果会更好。例如:

在你的身边有许多可亲可爱的事物,请你任选其中一种,以《我眼里的___________》为题写一篇200字左右的短文。

有位学生在叙写完一只小猫的伶俐乖巧后,篇末一句〝我非常喜爱我家的小猫〞独句成段,这样,既抒发了情感,又收束了全文,使短文结构完整,比那些一味描写小猫的文章要好得多了。

要做到结构完整,可运用以下的结构方式:前后照应式、篇末点题式、总分总式(包括总分式和分总式)等。

四、注意表达方式的运用

受文体的制约,一篇文章总以某种表达方式为主,同时兼用其他表达方式为主。小作文也应注意这一点。如江西省2002年中考语文小作文题为二选 一,(1)通过某一情景或场面,描写你最喜欢的色彩。(2)就你最喜欢的色彩,发表议论。无论选哪一题,或描写、或议论,总得以一种表达方式为主。但如果 能兼用其他表达方式,如兼用议论和抒情,表达自己对某种色彩的某中看法和喜爱之情,则能使短文大为增色。

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篇11:家乡的变化初中英语

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One possible version:

Changes in My Hometown

Great changes have taken place in my hometown these years. There used to be old and low houses on the streets,but now you can see people live and work in tall buildings. In the past, you could always see rubbish everywhere. But now the environment is clean and tidy. Many trees are planted on both sides of the street, so the air is very fresh.There were not any buses in my hometown, so most of us used to walk to work or go to school by bike.However, life is much better now. Many people buy their own cars, so they go out by car.

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篇12:初中英语作文我爱父母

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who gives me birth? who brings me up? who dedicates his/her whole life to me? my parents。

who gives me food? who gives me clothes? who gives me care? my parents。

my parents, they don’t want to get any reward from me。 not only my parents, all the parents in the world don’t charge anything from their children。 they give us everything they can。 they spend their whole life loving me, so i love my parents, too。 since i was given birth, i’ve started to love them even if i didn’t realize it。

it will be the time for my birthday soon。 i want to say to my parents: i love you。

[初中英语作文我爱父母

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篇13:2024年中考英语作文预测:初中生活即将结束

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My three middle school life is coming to an end.

In these past three years, we all have experienced a lot.

We have many good friends who studied and played together.

Our respectable teachers has taught us so many things that how to study, how to deal with questions, how to get along with others. Thanks for my teachers education for me.

Now, Im going to try my best to complete my lessons and use the freetime to do meaningful things.

I think I will miss you who are our friends and teachers.

我三年的初中生活即将结束

在过去的三年里,我们都经历了许多。

我们有许多一起学习玩耍的朋友。

我们尊敬的老师教会我们很多东西,如何学习、如何处理问题、怎么与人相处。多些我的老师对我的教育。

现在,我将会尽我所能完成我的学业,利用课余时间去做有意义的事情。

我想我将会想你们的我的朋友、我的老师!

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篇14:基础训练五作文写作指导教案

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题目:我家的一个星期天

一、教学目的、要求:

1.作文前列出提纲。

2.按一定顺序叙述。

3.把主要事情写具体些。

二、教学时间:2课时

三、教学准备:教学小黑板

四、教学过程:

㈠启发谈话,导入新课。

星期天你们家是怎样度过的?哪一个星期天你过得最愉快、最有意义?说给大家听听。

指导作文提纲。

1.这次作文的题目可以怎么定?(学生发言)

可以用“我家的一个星期天”,也可以自己另外定题目,强调题目一定要紧扣文章内容来定。

2.选好写哪一个星期天以后,再想一想用什么题目,表达什么中心思想,材料怎样安排,然后列一个作文提纲。

㈢学生各自列作文提纲,教师指导。

㈣请几个学生读自己列的提纲,教师酌情评议指导。

㈤提出具体作文要求。

1.写作时要按提纲来写,做到有顺序。

2.把主要的事重点写。

3.做到有中心,有条理,语句通顺。

㈥学生写作,教师巡视指导。

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篇15:高考英语写作谚语

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Actions speak louder than words.

事实胜於雄辩。

Adversity leads to prosperity.

逆境迎向昌盛。

A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit.

吃一堑,长一智。

A friend in need is a friend indeed.

患难朋友才是真朋友。

A friend is a second self.

朋友是另一个我。

A friend is best found in adversity.

患难见真友。

All time is no time when it is past.

光阴一去不复返。

All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy; all play and no work makes Jack a mere boy.

只工作,不玩耍,聪明孩子要变傻;尽玩耍,不学习,聪明孩子没出息。

A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.

远亲不如近邻。

An idle youth, a needy age.

少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。

Business before pleasure.

事业在先,享乐在後。

Diligence is near success.

勤奋近乎成功。

Diligence is the mother of good luck.

刻苦是成功之母。

Diligence is the mother of success.

勤奋是成功之母。

Education has for its object the formation of character.

教育的目的在於培养品德。

Every brave man is a man of his word.

勇敢的人都是信守诺言的人。

Every man is the architect of his own fortune.

每个人都是他自己命运的建诛师。

Every man is the master of his own fortune.

每个人都是他自己的命运的主宰。

Failure is the mother of success.

失败是成功之母。

Faith will move mountains.

精诚所至,金石为开。

Friendship ---- one soul in two bodies.

友谊是两人一条心。

Grasp all, lose all.

贪多必失。

He alone is poor who does not possess knowledge.

没有知识,才是贫穷。

Health is above wealth.

健康胜於财富。

Health is better than wealth.

健康胜於财富。

He who does not advance falls backward.

不进则退。

Honesty is the best policy.

诚实是上策。

Hope is life and life is hope.

希望才有人生,人生要有希望。

Idle young, needy old.

少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。

If you dont aim high you will never hit high.

不立大志,难攀高峰。

I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort.

成功之道唯三点∶努力、努力、再努力。

Improve your time and your time will improve you.

珍惜时间,时间才会珍惜你。

In doing we learn.

行而知。

Industry if fortunes right hand, and frugality her left.

勤勉是幸福的右手,节俭是幸福的左手。

In lifes earnest battle they only prevail, who daily march onward and never say fail.

在人生的搏斗中,只有日日前进不甘失败的人,才能获胜。

It is dogged (that) does it.

天下无难事,只怕有心人。

Judge not according to the appearance.

不要以貌取人。

Labour is often the father of pleasure.

勤劳常为快乐之源。

Learning without thought is labour lost; thought without learning is perilous.

学而不思则罔,思而不学则殆。

Like tree, like fruit.

有其因必有其果。

Manners make the man.

礼貌造就人。

Never neglect an opportunity for improvement.

抓住大好时机,切莫等闲错过。

Never too old (or late) to learn.

学到老,学不了。

No great loss without some small gain.

塞翁失马,安知非福。

No one can call back yesterday.

往日不复返。

No sooner said than done.

言而必行。

No sweet without some sweat.

不劳则无获。

Nothing is difficult to a man who wills.

世上无难事,只怕有心人。

Nothing is impossible to willing mind (or heart).

有志者事竟成。

Nothing is impossible (or difficult) to the man who will try.

天下无难事,只怕不努力。

Nothing is really beautiful but truth.

只有真理才是真美。

No time like the present.

只争朝夕。

One cannot put back the clock.

光阴一去不复返。

Overdone is worse than undone.

过犹不及。

Paddle your own canoe.

自立更生,自食其力。

Perseverance is vital to success.

不屈不挠是成功之本。

Second thoughts are best.

三思而行,再思可也。

Selt-trust is the essence of heroism.

自信是英雄的本色。

Self-trust is the first secret of success.

自信是成功的首要秘诀。

Success belongs to the persevering.

坚持到底必获胜利。坚持就是胜利。

Success grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties.

成功来自於克服困难的斗争。

The first element of success is the determination to succeed.

成功的首要因素是要有成功的决心。

The more a man knows, the less he knows he knows.

懂得越多,就越知道自己懂得不多。

Union is strength.

团结就是力量。

Virtue is a jewel of great price.

美德是无价之宝。

Waste of time is the most extravagant and costly of all expenses.

浪费时间是一切花费中最奢侈豪华的费用。

When there is no hope there can be no endeavour.

没有希望就不会努力。

Without a friend the world is a wilderness.

没有朋友,世界就等於一片荒野。

You cannot judge a tree by its bark.

人不可貌相。

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篇16:初中毕业英语作文

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Time flies, imperceptibly, you through the junior middle school three years of study and life. For three years, you are in the campus, left footprints, flying ideal, sweat, take away the maturity, left back memories. A few days ago, in my mind, often will save you present at work; crazy slapstick laughter; Art Festival in the song; the stadium endeavoring figure;

Time is a one-way road, you can not get the return ticket. But some of the scenery will not fade with time, some faces will not fade with time, some beliefs do not brown with time. Let all the sentimentally attached, depressed and repentant, hope and longing, become your eternal good memories!

"The blue cloud has a road to always have to have, life can have a few times to fight, at this time do not beat when to fight!" Anguish and resentment are not the main melody of youth, but struggle and struggle is the aria of life. Here, I hope that every one of you is successful in the mid-term exam.

After two days, you will go all out to accumulate steadily, ideal carrying luggage, with three years of travel over land and water, like a pilgrim, accept, dream ideal. Please remember: no matter where you are, people where the Maozhou middle school campus, there must be your teacher, your mentees, for you silently bless, pray silently, you can often come home to see more hope.

Students, youth is a too hasty book! Three years of time, more than 1000 days and nights in such a hurry to pass by, today you are proud of the school, tomorrow, you are proud of school! In the strange, I gave the students three words, as a graduation gift, and my classmates.

In the first sentence, study is regarded as a habit. A good habit is the most precious wealth of a mans life. I hope that no matter when, no matter where you are, dont forget your habits. We must start from small things, start from the side, start from scratch, pay attention to every detail, and you will have a bright future.

The second sentence, regard gratitude as a kind of gratitude responsibility. The students can grow up healthily, graduate, in addition to their own efforts, we should not forget our age, we grow up, we learn the campus, we cannot forget that behind us silently teachers and love, always worried about our parents, to the country and the school the teacher must be thankful, grateful!

The third sentence, the ideal as a goal. What kind of people have ideal, have what kind of development, in twenty-first Century as a master, you must aim high, do not linger in the past, not to dwell on today, must have ambition, ambition, to have the whole world in view in the future.

Students, graduating from junior high school is just a post station on the road of life. In the future, there will be a wider sky for students to fly. There will be better prospects for students to look forward to. Were going to say "goodbye". At the beginning of the meeting is to acquire knowledge, accumulate strength, this is goodbye in order to achieve the ideal vision exhibition! Your success starts from here! Start from a school in the alma mater!

Wide sea diving, sky. Today you are the peaches and plums fragrance, tomorrow you are the pillars of the state! I wish the students good grades in senior high school entrance examination to the stadium, Alma mater! Good news to the teachers!

Three years of groundless talk, three years of hard work, inculcate three years, three years of little concern, although I just can forget?

Junior high school, is a destination, more a starting point. I wish you more progress and better results in the coming time. For the alma mater.

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篇17:2024年中考作文指导:六个方面提高写作水平

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中考在即,各位考生复习的如何了呢?小编收集了六个方面提高写作水平,欢迎阅读。

1、审题以作文“发现”为例:题目可以用“发现”为题作文,也可以根据你要写的内容,在“发现”二字的前面、后面或前后加上适当的词语,也可以用“发现”作为话题自拟题目作文。要求:①除诗歌、戏剧外,文体不限。②文章不少于600字。

作文题解析。作文题为“发现”,并允许你在题目的前边或后边任意加词语,形成新的题目。该作文题目落实了培养创新精神的要求,并确实达到了“写作不设审题障碍,要淡化文体要求,鼓励学生写真情实感”的目的。乍一看该题目,你可能一时会感到无素材可写,似乎自己并没有什么新的发现,但如果拓展一下思路,便会发现可写的新的题目及内容很多。可写成记叙文。从父母、师长的爱考虑。很多同学写了这一方面,题目也丰富多彩。如:《我发现读懂父亲很难》;《我发现幸福就在身边》;《我发现了妈妈(老师)的白发》;《那个雨夜,我发现失去了爱》;《我发现妈妈很疼我》;《爱心的发现》,等等,题目的多样性赋予了内容的多样性,同学们可写出很多感人的文章。从思想行为方面考虑。如:《发现做好人真难》;《我发现我好穷(思想上)》;《良心的发现》;《我发现能战胜自己》,等等。从学习方面考虑。如:《我发现了读书的奥秘》;《我发现高三生活真累》;《考场上的发现》,等等。从时间、地点考虑命题。如:《17岁的发现》;《最近的发现》;《雨中的发现》;《前天晚上,我发现了彗星》,等等。从校园生活考虑命题。如:《我发现了校园生活的美》;《发现落叶》;《有花有刺——生活中的发现》,等等。从别人角度考虑。如:《妈妈发现了我的日记》;《他的新发现》,等等。从其他方面考虑。可写:《缺少发现》;《逆境中的发现》;《小小的发现》;《艰难的发现》;《发现得太晚了》,等等。可写成议论文。拟定新的论文题目可以开拓议论的视野。如:《要善于发现问题》;《发现是成功的必要前提》;《发现自我》;《重在发现》;《有感于发现》;《发现——创新》;《发现和奋斗》等等。

2、把握作文立意立意,就是确定文章的中心思想。它是文章的灵魂,直接决定着文章的思想性。它贯穿全文,全文都是围绕中心来写。文章的立意应做到:正确、鲜明、深刻、新意、集中。正确就是符合题意,不离题,不偏题;鲜明就是明确,不含糊不清,模棱两可;深刻就是对题意要深入分析,给人以深刻的印象,新意就是要有新鲜感和现实感,没有空话、套话,没有陈词老调,有的是自己的真切感受和见解,集中,就是说在一篇文章里,只能提出一个问题,解决一个问题,否则会杂乱无章。

具体地说,可以从如下几方面人手:

(1)、有些题目,命题者故意设置迷惑,藏头去尾。审题时只要在原题上适当添加新的条件,题目就会显露出来。如“歌声”,如果用此法,在原题目前加上“我的”、“老师的”、“校园里的”、等新条件,使题目成为“我的歌声”、“老师的歌声”、“校园里的歌声”。这样,文章就容易写得具体形象了。像这类的题目还有“心事”、“温暖”、“镜子”、“灯光”、“尝试”等。但要注意不能改变原题,补充的位置可前可后,只可在草纸上或心中填补。

(2)、遇到难以着笔的大题目时,可用大题小做法,从小处人手,化小写作的题材和范围。如“求索”就是一个大题目,面对这样一个大题,可以用大题小做法,截取人生的某一个阶段,选取熟悉的、感受深的、发生在自己身边的事来写,这样就可摆脱无法取材、难以下笔的困惑境地。如在正题“求索”下加副题“美好的童年”,写童年时代的求索;加副题“中学生活的剪影”,写中学时代的求索;加副题“深山探宝记”,写向大自然的求索;加副题“图书馆中的欢乐”,写在浩瀚书海中的求索。大题小做,从小处人手,从小处写起,这样思路就开阔了。

(3)、虚题实写。有些题目,由于概念抽象,不好把握和驾驭,这时则可用虚题实写法来启开思路。如“追求”这个题目,看起来很大、很虚,但是如果把它落实到某一具体的人和事上,就容易下笔了。此题可以写一个老师的追求,一个学生的追求,一个科技工作者的追求,总之,各行各业的人的追求都可以写。

(4)、实题虚作。有些常指实物的题目,小而具体实在。如“秋叶”、“春雨”、“窗口”等,这类题目在写作时,不应就实物而实物,而应着重找出它的比喻义、象征义,歌颂具有这一类精神、品质、风格的人和事。确立正确的立意,不是轻而易举的事情,这与作者的思想认识、政治水平、生活阅历的体现,作文的好坏关键在于立意。

3、构思文章的构思,就是想一想怎样根据立意并有机地组织、连接字、词、句成文的全过程。古人写文章讲究“有序”。“序”就是文章的框架结构,先写什么,后写什么,一题当前,须认真构想。古人写文章讲究“凤头、猪肚、豹尾”,就是文章的开头像风头,小巧玲珑,精美好看:中间如猪肚,内容丰富,充实饱满;结尾如豹尾,收束有力,短小精悍。这就为文章提出了基本构架——三段式结构。这样的结构,要求开头要简明、点题,中间部分可以分为几个段落,如果是写记叙文,以三件事为宜,或一详两略,或两详一略。如果是议论文,本论部分可用三种论证方法,如例证法、对比法、比喻法等,如用例证法,可举一两个事例,即可论证清楚。如果是说明文,则中间部分运用三两种说明方法,按一定顺序串起,即可将事物说明白。结尾要简短,扣题或照应开头。虽然各种文体结构都有规可循,都有许多可记、可证、可说明的事物可写,可是如果把一件件事物依次写下来,也难免会显得呆板和单调,这就需要进行巧妙构思。如写《家乡新貌》,很多都习惯写山、水的变化,居住条件及生活用品的变化,人们精神面貌的变化,以此歌颂党的十一届三中全会以来的路线方针政策。主题不能说不鲜明,但这却是人们久已习惯了的路子。有的却别出心裁,以家乡的路为突破口,从“小泥路——土大路一沙石路——柏油路”的步步发展,写了《越走越宽的家乡路》一文,深刻反映了家乡日新月异、翻天覆地的变化。文章滴水见阳,微中显大,构思精巧,妙趣横生。构思如何,关系着文章的成败优劣。一篇好的文章,不仅立意准确、鲜明,选材精美,语言流畅,而且构思也一定要巧妙、新颖。记叙文构思,除了以上几种结构形式外,还可以运用:①以小见大法,如《七根火柴》,以一火柴小事,反映红军战士一心为党,为革命事业的伟大精神的大主题。②夹叙夹议法,即一面叙述事情经过,一面进行分析和评论。如《谁是最可爱的人》,着重写了三个典型事例,在每个事例记叙结束的时候,都有一段抒情和议论。通过抒情和议论,不仅使得记叙文字更为感人,记叙的中心更为突出,而且以强烈的感情使读者产生了共鸣。③欲扬先抑法,“抑扬”指控制和放纵感情,运用这种方法需要在结构上层层铺垫,“抑”为“扬”蓄足气势。如《荔枝蜜》一文,作者本意是赞扬蜜蜂,但开头却写对蜜蜂“总不大喜欢”,压抑感情,然后对蜜蜂逐渐了解认识,最后说“梦见自己变成了一只小蜜蜂”,直接赞扬。④设置悬念法,即为增强艺术感染力,有意设置“包袱”,以此吸引读者关心表述内容的方法。如《驿路梨花》,开头写夜行人见屋不见主人,瑶族老人的出现使夜行人发生了一次误会,从而引起读者急欲了解小屋主人的兴趣;接着写哈尼族小姑娘出现,又发生了一次误会,使读者再生疑惑;最后引出哈尼族小姑娘讲的一段故事,从而解开“包袱”。运用这种方法,能使悬念迭出,环环相扣,引人人胜。⑤当然,构思方法还不止于此,如对话描写法、虚实结合法、点面结合法等等。只要认真琢磨,精心构想,定能结构出好文章来的。变异式构思。循规蹈矩”、一一对应地照题目的要求构思,难免人云亦云、千篇一律。机智的考生善于从题目中寻找“变异”点,在题目允许的范围内展示思维的个性。2002年陕西省中考作文题的“提示语”中有一句是“优美动听的校园歌曲使人心旷神怡”,在备选的三个题目中有一题是:“听我真”。不少考生在前一横线上填上具体的歌曲名,思维流向单一,雷同卷甚多。有位考生将“校园歌曲”作为变异点,说那“飘洒缠绵”的春雨是一首没有乐谱的“校园歌曲”,于是拟出“听雨,我真陶醉”这样的佳题,令人耳目一新。文中,作者说春雨“轻唱着挖空你的心思,道出你的惆怅,注释你的疑惑……使你觉得自己仿佛已变成一滴雨,一棵树,一棵草,一束花,一撮泥土”,“我成长中的错误会在这柔和的歌唱中变得美丽”,“太多心思……太多哀怨能在这春雨的浅吟中将它们逐一放飞”。由于作者通过变异式构思找到了适合自己抒情个性的切人口,所以能把听雨的陶醉说得入丝人扣,不同凡响。反向式构思。反弹琵琶,逆向思维,往往会别有洞天,使你的文章独辟蹊径,熠熠生辉。2002年湖南省益阳市的中考作文题是:“以‘关心”为题,结合自己的切身感受”,写一篇有真情实感的文章。很多考生都跳不出“叙写‘关心’者之美德,抒发被‘关心者之感激”这一类窠臼,总是从正面落笔,给人千人一面之感。有位考生别出心裁,由众人对一个百日小孩子起名的关心,引出一位被人漠视、歧视的老人(即小孩的爷爷)的悲惨故事,家人对待小孩与老人的不同态度对比鲜明,反映了具有社会意义的深刻主题。文章的构思以“反”为主,以“正”衬“反”,以“反”写“正”,以老人的不被“关心”呼唤全社会对老人的关心,这种构思赋予了题目“关心”以更深广的内容,发人思考,新人耳目。

4、精心选材、组材写文章必须有材料,好比盖房子要有砖瓦木料一样,否则就写不成文章。但是,并不是什么材料都可以写进一篇文章里,一定要经过选择。围绕中心选择材料是作文的墓本要求。文章的中心就像一根红线,贯穿着所有材料,为写好文章奠定基础。围绕中心选择材料主要有以下几方面:(1)要选择和中心一致的材料。材料必须从各方面说明中心,突出中心,为文章的中心服务,做到观点和材料的统一。如《榜样,就在我身边》,一是要选的人和事,必须是能够成为榜样的,不是任何的人和事;二是尽管是榜样,但必须是“我身边”的,而不能是别处的。(2)选择的材料要具体生动。让事实说话,“事实”就是具体材料,有具体的材料才能写得血肉饱满,能感动人,说服人;生动,就是选择比较新鲜的材料,即富有生活气息和时代特点的材料,才能表现新人物,新事物,新气象,新风尚,才能使读者感到有趣,喜欢读。(3)要选择典型材料。有时候材料很多,又都能表达中心,这就要选择最深刻,最全面地揭示事物本质,又具有广泛代表性的典型材料。(4)还要注意材料的真实性。只有真实的材料才有说服力。“真实”包括生活的真实,即真有其人其事,不是虚构的;艺术的真实,即文艺作品中塑造的典型环境中的典型人物。组织材料选好材料后,就要组织安排材料。即对所选材料进行分析比较,决定其主次详略。哪些先写,哪些后写,哪些放在一起写,哪些分开写,要有次序地安排好,绝不能“拣到篮里就是菜”,让人读起来感到杂乱,无中心。只有组织好材料,才能使文章中心鲜明,详略得当。组织材料应注意两点:(1)根据文章中心的需要。一般地说,与文章的中心论点,或者主要人物、主要事件有直接关系的材料,也就是能够突出中心的材料,就是主要材料,就是构成文章的主体部分,因而需要详细地记叙、描写或议论、说明;只起陪衬辅助作用的材料,则要略写。详写是为了突出重点,使文章中心更鲜明,略写是为了照顾全局,使中心更完整。如《枣核》一文,中心是表达美籍华人思乡爱国之情,根据这一中心,作者选用了“捎枣核”、“得枣核”、“种枣核”三个主要材料,生动细致地表现了美籍华人的内心世界。(2)根据文章体裁的需要。记叙文是以记人记事为主,因此,记叙部分要详写,其中议论、说明或抒情都不能作为重点详写,只能略写。说明文主要是说明事物的性质、状态、特点、成因、功能等,这些地方要详写。议论文的说理部分要详写,论据是人所共知韵事例,要略写,列举事实,有的可以概述,有的可以详述,但不可罗列过程,以能阐明道理为限。要做到详略得当,还要掌握详写和略写的方法。详写,就是把材料写得具体、细致,用的文字多一些,略写,就是写得概括、粗略,用的文字少一些。如《社戏》一文,作者详细地写了行船、看戏和归航,情节生动活泼,文句细腻优美;略写了乡间生活和看社的原因,显得简明扼要。这样详与略的结合,真实而恰当地描绘了乡村少年善良淳朴、天真可爱的形象。

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篇18:初中英语作文有翻译

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As a middle school student, I learn many subjects, I study so hard every day. When I get home, I will do my homework and then go over the book. But when holiday comes, I feel a little confused, because I don’t want to study and do something new. Then I don’t know what to do, my mind get blank. I decide to develop my interest. Some day, I happened to see a tennis match and I couldn’t stop watching, then I fell in love with tennis. So I started to learn playing tennis, I felt so happy. Now tennis is my favorite sport, I find a way to relax myself.

作为一个中学生,我学许多科目,我每天那么努力学习。当我回家时,我会做作业,然后复习书本。但当假期来临的时候,我感到有点困惑,因为我不想学习,想做一些新的事情。我就不知道要做什么,我的头脑一片空白。我决定培养我的兴趣。有一天,我碰巧看到一场网球比赛,我无法停止下来看,然后我爱上了网球。因此我开始学习打网球,我感到很高兴。现在网球是我最喜欢的运动,我找到一个方法来放松自己。

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篇19:初中英语作文大全

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Im a Middle Schools student.I am busy.Next summer, I have a long vacation

and I have a very good plan for this vacation.

I think about going to the Beijing. I heard Beijing is beautiful and there

are many peopie there who are friendly.

I am going to the Tianan Men Square, going to the Palace Museum ,going to

the Great Wall and going to the Beijing Hutong.These famous places can make me

to have fun.For something else , I can go shopping, go sightseeing, go having a

lot foods. At night, maybe renting videos and sleeping a lot……

A great vacation! I cant wait!

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篇20:校园英语作文初中

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The protection of the border is not a new problem for us, and our

government has long proposed clear targets for governance. As every ordinary

person in real life, although it is impossible to work directly in environmental

protection, we can start from small things and start from me. Can you raise your

hand when you see the tap in the bathroom? When the battery runs out, can you

classify it instead of throwing it away? How about when shopping doesnt use

ultra-thin plastic bags? ...... Small things are small, but they reflect how

much environmental awareness we have.

Recycling one ton of waste paper can regenerate 800 kg of paper, can save

17 tree. 20 waste recycling boxes can create a beautiful pen container.

Recycling one glass bottle to save the energy, can make the bulb light for four

hours. Recycling one aluminum can is to save the half oil cans. So we should

place the garbage classification, reproduction by the relevant department after

recycling reuse!

As long as we start from oneself, starts from the minor matter, everybody

joint efforts, perseverance, we will be for the society, also a piece of clear

water, blue sky for yourself, I hope everybody can voluntarily protect the

environment, to make our environment more beautiful life.

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