小学英语写作比赛优秀20篇

小学六年级秋游英语作文1

Perhaps autumn is the most pleasant season of the year. The weather is neither too hot nor too cold. It is the best time for going on a trip.

Last Sunday we went to the countryside. There was golden wheat all over the fields/The fields were covered with golden wheat. Large and colourful apples and pears were hanging on the trees. We could see some peasants were busy getting in the crops in the fields， and others were picking fruits under the trees. All the baskets were full of lovely fruits. It was also the fruit of the peasants labour. No pains， no gains. What a magnificent/beautiful picture! It seemed as if we were wandering in a splendid/wonderful world.

I love autumn. I love the harvest time.

小学六年级秋游英语作文2

I always dream about returning to the past. As many people say, childhood is the happiest and easiest time in one’s life.

Children show you their true emotions. They know what is compassion and what is tolerance better than adults. In their world, all real thoughts are presented. They may easily have different opinions with others, but they never understand what is animosity. They enjoy making friends but they never think about making social communication net. Every child talks from the bottom of his heart without evil plans hidden and never intrigues against each other. Only in children’s way can adults make our life simple, more real and more enjoyable.

I wish everyone’s heart would keep as innocent and lovely as they ever did in their childhood. Then, the walls between our hearts can be broken down and the world would be a better place to live in.

小学六年级秋游英语作文3

Today, the teacher took us to zhongshan park. Here, everyone was so happy! In the autumn of talking and laughing on the road, like a happy little sparrow.

We went to the zhongshan park, there are two stone lions see stone road on both sides, terrible squatting at the door.

Upward along the stone path, see stone road on both sides of the yellow and green leaves, the autumn wind blows, the falling pieces of leaves, like a butterfly dancing in. We quickly climb halfway up. See below flickering skyscrapers, the car on the road is the size of a pencil case. Walk to the top of the hill, Chen teacher gave us a good team, we all sat on the bench, bathed in the warm autumn sunshine, laughing, and eating their food, and you gave me to eat, I eat for you. Really is happy!

The teacher took a photograph, we took our laughing faces, leaving the autumn the best memories.

A week ago， my best friend gave me a lovely cat. I love it very much. It is special. Its fur is black not yellow. So I call it little black. It has the same taste with me. We all like eating fish. So， after it comes to my home， nearly every meal will appear fish. I like playing with it. It always makes me laugh. Every morning， it will wake me up. It brings much happiness for me.

Im ahappyenglish name is you happy? im very happy.i have a good name is cheng xin has a pair of big eyes.i like her.

I like birthday is in november.im a goodgirl.im ten years old.im in class seven grade teachers name is yao hui is a good teacher!i like her.

what color do you like? i like pink and perple.i want a rabbit for my birthday.i like to eat hambuger.i like to go to shool.

I have a good mother.i have a good father.

oh，no!im hugry! "mumy! im hugry!"

good bye!

There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, autumn and winter.

一年有四个季节，初天、夏天、秋天和冬天

In spring, the weather gradually gets warmer and everything comes back to lfie. The peasants are busy with sowing.

春天，气候慢慢的变暖和，万物苏醒。农民们都忙于播种。

When the summer comes, the weather becomes very hot. It rains frequently and causes many floods.

夏天来时，气候慢慢变热。经常下雨而且还会引起洪水。

Autumn is the best season all the year round. The weather is neither too hot nor too cold. The sky is blue and cloudness. At night, millions of stars can be seen in th sky. It’s also a busy season for peasants to harvest.

秋天是全年中最好的季节。气候既不是太热也不是太冷。天空是蓝的和不透明的。晚上，可以看到天空上数以万计的星星。这也是一个忙碌的季节，因为农民们要收割庄稼了。

Winter is the last season of the year. Days become shorter and nights longer. The weather is cold and windy. In winter, leaves fall from trees and everything seems to fall into a deep sleep to prepare for the next spring.

冬天是一年当中最后的一个季节。白天变短而晚上却变长了。冬天天气很冷还刮着风。树叶从树上落下来，万物似乎都要进入冬眠来为下一个春天做准备。

I have a happy family. There are three people in my family， my father， mother and me. My father is a businessman. He is always busy with his work and he often goes to business trips. But when he is free， he stays with us. My mother is a worker. She works hard， too. She works hard to take care of our home. I love my parents

在一个天气不怎么好的下午，我听说六年级二班的向我们五年级四班的邀约拔河比赛，重要的是我们班的几大“猛将”和“大胖子程子星”答应了，他们就这样答应了?我也抱着看热闹不嫌事儿大的心态，跑到了操场。

到了操场，比赛已经开始了。我们班的猛将之首周博西，首先开始使出他全身的力气，好像用力的全身血管都要破裂了一样。可是由于人数少，我班还是有些吃力。没法，王羽泽只好双腿弯曲，脚用力的蹬着地面，身子向后斜，这才让我们班拉回一些局面。队员艾南江脸涨的通红，因为用出了吃奶的力气，脸都气得变形了。其他人个个呲牙咧嘴，表情姿势奇形怪状，令观众哭笑不得。此时我们班的同学都喊：“五四班加油!五四班加油!”突然，对方队员趁着空隙，立马用力拉向他们那方，我们输了。

由于上一局王羽泽太用力，手受伤了，所以这一局他不能参赛。就这样，我，还有其他几位同学参加了比赛，本来我是不想参加的，但想一想为了班级，我就参加了。一开始对方就用出了吃奶的力气，我们也不甘示弱，用出全身的力气，绳子终于向我们这边移动了!这时，我们班主任出来给我们鼓劲：“加油!加油!”比赛到了高潮，我们立马用尽全身力气，红点终于到了我们这边，我们赢了!同学们欢呼雀跃，我也很开心。

通过这次比赛，我明白了，团结就是力量。

今天上午是考试，下午没有上课，我和我的几个好伙伴相约到学校操场踢小足球。

我和王建澄、庹力文是红队，孙位和张正渝、李若成他们是白队。

比赛开始了，我们这一队是庹力文当守门员，我是主攻手，我很快就射进了一个球，来了一个旗开得胜，不一会儿，王建成也来了个单刀赴宴，梅开二度。他们那一队也不示弱，勇猛反击，连进两球，比赛一下子就踢成了二比二平。我心里着急起来，寻着一个机会，来了个虎底抽薪，趁对方守门员离球门较远，单脚猛射，不料，用力过猛，摔倒在地上，疼得我哇哇大叫起来，他们连忙停止比赛，把我送到医务室，我说：“你们继续去踢吧，别管我呀！还没有分出胜负呢。”王建成说：“足球比赛，友谊才是最重要的。”孙位说：“二比二就二比二吧，等你好了，下次再来比出结果吧。”

听着他们的话，我惊呆了，特别是王建成的“友谊才是最重要”的这一句话，让我脸红了，我什么时候才有这么高的思想境界呢！

[一场没有结果的比赛小学二年级作文

my name is u fangyan. you can call me betty. im a girl. im 13. im 154 centermeters tall.im in inqi primary school.im in class 1, grade 6.my classmates are very nice to me.we often help each other,and learn from each other. i have many hobbies.such as drawing,writing, singing .... i like playing badminton best.its good for my health.there are 3 people in my family. theyre my father,mother and me.we love each other.my phone number is 86889886. you can call me if you like .

今天是元旦，我们学校要举办拔河比赛，校长要我们好好准备。

到了下午，拔河比赛正式开始了。我们排好队，开始大步向草坪走去。到了我们比赛时，我们就抓紧麻绳准备比赛，

我们的对手是三（3）班，三（3）班本来都是弱小的人，可是他们从三（4）班调来了陈暴坤（他可是在三年级里响当当的），这回他们就已经变成了大老虎了。

比赛开始了，第一场比赛我们花了九牛二虎之力都战败了。第二场比赛，我们摩拳擦掌终于搬回了一场比赛。第三场比赛三（3）班不知使了什么力，刚开始拔的时候我们就输了。

休息时，我看见全班大部分同学都哭了。我一打听才知道他们是因为比赛输了才哭的。我连忙去劝他们：“你们哭什么呀！大不了明年元旦再赢回来呗！”他们立刻就不哭了，他们不哭后，我就说：“三（3）班就是‘草’，我们不可以连‘草’都拔不过，明年我们一定要赢他们；再说了胜败乃兵家常事嘛！”

这次运动会，我有三个项目，分别是跳高、跳远和扔铅球。跳高、跳远昨天已经比过了，可是都是只跳了三次，就被淘汰了，于是，我把得奖的希望都放在扔铅球上了。

当广播里响起了：“四年级女子铅球预赛第一次报道……”时，我和章梦蕾、林雨嫣一起来到了铅球场地。铅球场上，已经挤满了很多人，有运动员、家长、老师和裁判员，看着这么多人，再看看那我很少上手过的铅球，不免有些紧张。妈妈好像看出了我的心思，对我说：“别怕，别怕，你一定行。”于是我鼓起勇气走上了场。只听教练哨子一响，我就举起了沉甸甸的铅球，托在手上，把身子向一边侧，然后奋力一投，只见铅球从我手中飞了出去，重重地落在地上，嘿嘿，铅球落在了第二格的中间，这完全在我的预料之中。在扔第二次时，我暗暗想：一定要超得更远些，还像第一次时那样把身子向右边一侧，然后奋力一扔，突然我的身子失重了，一只脚跨了出去，铅球也被我扔出线外了，啊，犯规了，第二次竟然没有成绩。

这时，何老师告诉我们扔铅球时，力气应该用在腰上，用力时腰部会感到有点儿酸，要靠全身力气用力把球推出去。扔第三次时，我照着何老师的话去做，果然超出了第一次的成绩，球快接近三米线了。大家都扔完了，我还特意去数了数，我是第六名，“我有机会进决赛了！”我悄悄地对妈妈说。妈妈也向我竖起了大拇指。这时教练拿出卷尺，从近到远一个个量过去，然后把她们的牌子一个个拔去，量到我的了，2.80米，我心中暗喜，没拔我的牌子。谁知，半路杀出了一匹黑马，在前面拔掉的94号有2.81米，超过了我一厘米。唉，我又离奖状远去了。

虽然这次运动会，三个项目我都与奖无缘，但我还是十分快乐，这毕竟是我第一次参加运动会啊，我多么希望在明年的运动会上还有我的身影！

要写好英语作文，具体要做到以下几点：

注重英文阅读习惯的养成与坚持

坚持英语阅读的习惯，不仅可以保持对英语语感的敏感度，更重要的是它有助于培养英式思维，从而避免汉式思维句子的出现。

(1)平时多读，积累句型：读的越多，语感欲强烈，写作的时候自然而然就可以自如的运用灵活多变的句式来完整一篇小作文了，另外建议多积累名言警句、谚语等以作为高级句型运用与作文中。

(2)选出一些代表性范文精读：选出不同题材的优秀作文范文，读的时候注意文章的开头、结尾、层次结构以及所用句型等。要有目的、用学习的心态来精读优秀范文，并做到学以致用。

注重平时的写作训练

英语写作训练可以以日记、话题或仿写的形式来进行。通过坚持一个学期的英语日记，保持英语写作的习惯。所以一定要坚持每周两到三次的写作训练，正所谓习惯成自然就是这个道理。

五步写出一篇好作文

什么才是好作文呢?很多同学误认为只要像学校平时测验那样子“句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误”就应该得满分。而小升初对作文的考核并非如此简单，同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么除了以上两个方面外，我们怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文而在小升初中获取高分呢?下面就来看我们的“高分作文五步法”。

(1)认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式

时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语，时态则要遵循时间状语。

如ago，last…过去时;next，in…将来时等

人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。

例如：

Thanks to the teachers， we have improved our English.

其中we和our就是人称的统一。

格式：注意书信格式的开头和结尾。

(2)找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点

切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔标出，写完后再涂掉。根据题目，可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。

(3)成文时表述正确，文字流畅

切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾，主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。

(4)文章结构清晰，重点句型画龙点睛，可使文章在得分上提高一个档次，考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。

常用连接词：

1.表文章结构顺序：

First of all， Firstly/First，Secondly/Second…

And then， Finally， In the end，At last

2.表并列补充关系的：

What is more， Besides，Moreover，

3.表转折对比关系的：

However， On the contrary， but

On one hand… On the otherhand…Some…， while others…

4.表因果关系的：

Because， As、So， Therefore， As a result

5.表换一种方式表达：

In other words

6.表进行举例说明：

For example，句子;For instance，句子;such as + n/doing

7.表陈述事实：In fact

8.表达自己观点：

As far as I know， In myopinion

9.表总结：

In short， In a word.

文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：感叹句、宾语从句、动名词做主语等。

宾语从句举例：

I believe Tianjin will be morebeautiful and prosperous.

感叹句举例：

How I want to study in thebest middle school in Guangzhou!

动名词做主语举例：

Reading books and swimming aremy hobbies.

常用状语从句句型：

1)时间：

when， not…until(直到…才…)， as soon as(一…就…)

2)目的：

so that + clause; (为了)

3)结果：

so…that…(如此…以至于…)， too…to do(太……以至于……)

4)条件：

if， unless(除非)， as long as(只要)

5)比较：

as…as…(与…一样)， not so…as…， than

(5)认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰，短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。

检查后，将草稿誊写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。

下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误：

We livemore and more comfortable.

改正：comfortably(副词修饰动词)

2.we can getmany informations by reading newspapers.

改正：much information (不可数名词由much修饰)

3.There willhave a football game tomorrow.

改正：There will be a football game tomorrow.(Therebe句型的将来时结构)

4.I thinkride a bike can keep our health.

改正：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(动名词作主语)

在一个阳光明媚的日子里，迎来了一年一度的拔河比赛，这是一场让全校同学都期待已久的比赛。 In a sunny day, it ushered in the annual tug of war competition, which is a long-awaited competition for students in the school.

“丁零零——”上课铃响了，我们班排着整齐的队伍，伴着欢呼声来到了操场。一条粗大的绳子压在操场当中的白线上，绳子中间扎着一块红布条。

轮到我们班上场了，同学们个个摩拳擦掌，跃跃欲试。我们班分成了左右两队，站在绳子两侧。“预备——”只听裁判员大喊一声，双方队员抓起了粗大的绳子。“嘟——”哨声响了，比赛正式开始，双方互不相让，使尽浑身力气向后拉。你看，平时笑嘻嘻的张轩浩，现在脸绷得紧紧的，全神贯注。再看胖墩墩的周帅衡，他两脚牢牢地蹬着地，好像脚上长了钉子钉在地上一样，他的脸涨得通红，牙齿咬得咯咯响，脸上流满汗水。

场下的啦啦队不断地喊着：“加油!加油!!”声音此起彼伏，震耳欲聋。

渐渐地，绳子向我方移动，只听一声哨响，裁判员宣布获胜的是我们班。同学们立刻沸腾了，脸上露出了无比灿烂的笑容。

I had finished trainning in army for 8 days.Though this trainning I can learn a lot of things without schooling.I made many new good friends as well.

I never finished a whole work myself before this trainning. Because of this, I failed the most important exam. The drillmaster taught us that we must often say "never give up"in our life.Only in this way, we can succeed. I felt bloody lonely after I graduated from school.By mean of this trainning,I have new friendiness.We often talked about our favourite things as football,basketball and so on.... I think we need some trainning.It can make us become better and better. I will remember this trainning forever!

一. 肯定不如否定好

修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。

双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。

例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”，如果写成The postman comes on time every day，就不如变成双重否定，The postman never fails to come on time，就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。

“几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响”，写成双重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude towards life had not been affected by the earthquake.

应用类似的修辞会在中为同学们加分。

二. 陈述不如倒装妙

在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。

倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，就足以应对书面表达。

Its spring. Its sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Blacks family have a picnic in a park. They bring many food there. They bring fruit, drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk very happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes flying a kite. The kite flies very well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are very happy.

“哥哥干比赛摔跤吗？你肯定打不过我，因为我是72变得美猴王。”

“哈哈，是吗？小毛猴？”哥哥把电视关了，拧起裤子，一闪身脱了衣服，甩在椅子上，摆好姿势说：“来吧！孙猴子。”

弟弟平时在家里跟哥哥摔跤，一向仗着身手敏捷。弟弟也把衣服脱了，系在腰上，怒气冲冲地说：小看别人就是小看你自己！看看我的真本事吧！”俩人猩猩似的对起阵来。起初，弟弟脸涨得通红，，眼珠子直瞪着哥哥，围着他猴儿似的转来转去，总想使巧招。可是哥哥也是个摔跤的惯手，流着汗水，鼓着眼珠子，依然摆着摔跤的姿势。弟弟跑到哥哥身后，三抓两挠，和哥哥揪在了一起。哥哥别住弟弟的脚，使劲平生力气，把弟弟从身后翻到前头。咚的一声，弟弟摔了个仰面朝天。

眼看弟弟还没输掉这场比赛。他起身，冲在哥哥身后，使劲全身力气，把哥哥压在地上说；“我还没输呢！服不服气，不服气我就这样一直压着。”哥哥狡猾的说：“我服气了。”弟弟把手松开了。没想到，弟弟这下可上了当。哥哥用手掌撑着地面，从地面翻到弟弟身后，反把弟弟压到了地上。弟弟把力气都耗光了，终于心服口服地向哥哥认输了。

五年级:林佳雨

[小学生写人作文：摔跤比赛

I woke up early this morning. I went out to play with my neighbor. We watched cartoon at his home. After I went home about 4 Oclock in the afternoon, I helped my mother to do some house work. She is very happy so I am happy too.

一个周末，在义安区有个长跑比赛，妈妈帮我报了名，可是我自己却不是很想参加，心里暗暗埋怨妈妈，为什么要给我报名长跑呢，我本来身体瘦弱，短跑都不行，怎么能长跑呢？我心里始终在纠结。这时爸爸鼓励我说要和我一起去长跑，挑战一下自己，妈妈也在给我鼓劲，我想了想，还是去参与一下吧。

下午4点半我和爸爸到达了活动现场，哇！人好多啊，我看到现场有许多和我差不多大的孩子，还有许多比我小的小朋友，心里顿时平静了下来。我赶紧去领了参赛号码牌，然后和大家一起集合好，就准备开始跑了。

刚开始的时候我和爸爸跑得很快，一下子甩掉许多人，但跑到铜文化园广场的时候，我就渐渐体力不支了，爸爸和我放慢了步伐，到中途的“加油站”取了水，小小地喝了几口，又开始跑了起来，不过速度比之前慢了许多，很快被后面的人反超了，我跑得越来越慢，心里就开始着急了，因为妈妈来电话说已经有人到终点了。爸爸安慰我说，即使是最后一名也没有关系，重在参与。这时，我想起龟兔赛跑的故事，兔子因为骄傲自大在比赛中途睡觉，最后输了比赛；乌龟虽然爬得慢，但通过坚持不懈赢得了比赛。我想我也一定可以跑到终点。跑着跑着我惊奇地发现，我竟然绕天井湖跑了这么大一圈，不知不觉就跑了这么远，我顿时对自己充满了自信和力量。眼看着就快要到终点了，我使出了最后的力气，奋力跑向终点。爸爸鼓励我说：“你能跑下整个路段就很好了。”我沮丧地说：“可是我没跑到第一名。”爸爸说：“你要挑战的不是别人，而是你自己，今天你跑完全程就是战胜了自己啊！”我突然明白了参加这次长跑比赛的意义了，很多事情并不像想象的那么难，只要自己努力坚持下去，总会有不同的收获。

这次长跑比赛给我留下的印象十分深刻，往后的日子我要加强锻炼，让自己有个好的体魄，争取有机会下次再参赛。

It gradually turns cool. The sunlight is no longer so strong and the

cicadas have stopped crying. The hot summer went by at last. The favorite season

in the year is coming.

Everywhere we can see the scene of bumper crops: on the fields is golden

rice,on the trees are ripe fruits. The farmers faces are full of smiles. They

are now expecting a good harvest through a summers hard work.

The autumn evening is especially beautiful. When the setting sun goes

slowly down to the west, the sky over the mountains is covered with red rays of

evening sunlight, which shines upon the blue sky and floating clouds, just as

the maple leaves fall onto the sky.

It is getting cool at dusk. The wind blows, the moonlight shines on the

ground,the frogs croak and insects chirp in the fields. Such a situation will

make you forget all the unhappy things in the daytime.

I love the beautiful season.

Music is part of our life, nearly everybody will listen to the music, no

matter what nation they are from. Music is divided into many types, such as the

blues, the country music, the rock and roll. Once blues belonged to the black

people, but as time went by, music is accepted by all classes. People always

share the hottest songs together, just like they can communicate. Once in the

foreign country, I had dinner in a restaurant, where there had the singers.

People enjoyed the music when they were eating. At this moment, it was music

that brought people together, and they share the same emotion.

12 September 2006

Dear Mr. Wang,

I am pleased to invite you to a luncheon, to be held by the Monterey Institute of International Studies on October 12, 2006 at noon, commemorating the 75th anniversary of the death of General Stilwell and in honor of his daughter, Mrs. Nancy Stilwell Easterbrook. Mrs. Easterbrook was a member of the Board of Trustees of the Monterey Institute and founder of the Stilwell Scholarship, which is dedicated to supporting students from China.

For many years until she passed away, Nancy had served as a goodwill ambassador of the American people who made unremitting efforts to promote exchanges between the United States and China. The Stilwell Scholarship she founded helps support deserving students from China who have come to the Monterey Institute to pursue professional degrees in translation and interpretation, international policy studies, language teaching and business management.

I hope you will be able to join us. Mr. Chuanyun Boo, Dean of the Graduate School of Translation and Interpretation, will be calling you soon to discuss this event further.

Yours sincerely,

Tom Burton