小学英语写作比赛（最新20篇）

Dear Sue,

I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.

We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?

How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.

All the best.

Yours，

Li Hua

With a piece of yellow leaves of the fall, cicadas away from the last call in the summer, autumn day and earth came to earth.

This weekend, autumn, the sky is high, our family ready to go to the outskirts of the orchard to pick fruit.

Autumn of the wind, with a slight coolness, gently brush in the face. Raised his head, a group of geese, a row of adult words, one will be lined up, they are and the clouds farewell, ready to warm the winter in the south. On the roadside, on the ridge, the golden wild chrysanthemums are so different that they dance gently in the autumn wind and seem to welcome us to pick.

Marching all the way to the beauty, we came to the orchard. A lively scene took the lead into the eye. You see, apples on the apple tree like drunk like, rose with a red little face, persimmon tree also hung a nice red lantern. Maple Leaves like flowers in February, ginkgo leaves are like a little fan of yellow, maybe it is, the fan is gone hot summer. Some children are busy picking leaves, and some in the careful to do specimens ... ... the most interesting is to pick the apple. Apple sweet smell hooked my feet, I hastened to mention the basket, tiptoe, spent a lot of effort, only to pick a big red apple, Apple is so attractive, I regardless of March Twenty one, bitter bitterly, my greedy like arousal father and mother laughed.

I and my little companion in the orchard picking fruit, hide and seek, but also put a kite, the wind passed our laughter very far away.

Sun sunset, I reluctantly left the orchard.

First, we have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. We have to get to school before 7:30 because we have a morning class.

Second, I like my school life because teachers and my classmates are friendly and helpful. We also have lots of after-school activies.

Third, our school environment is very beautiful, the teachers all can make their lesson interesting and instructive. So I like my school life very much.

我的学校生活是忙碌的，神奇的。首先，我们有四节课在上午和下午三。我们到学校7:30之前因为我们早上有课。其次，我喜欢我的学校生活，因为老师和我的同学都很友好，乐于助人。我们也有很多的课外活动。第三、我们的学校环境很漂亮，老师们都能使自己的课有趣又有启发性。所以我非常喜欢我的学校生活。

Its fine today. Tom and his family are at a park. The man in white is his father. He is standing by the lake and looking at the boats. The woman in blue is his mother. She is sitting on the grass. Beside his mother is Alice, his sister. She is eating cake. The park is big, and there are many trees and flowers in it. They are having a good time.

小学生入门写作主要有两大困难：一是“写什么”?（选取写作材料），二是“怎么写”?（写作方法与技巧）。作为入门应先解决第一个问题，然后才能讲究写作技巧，因为前者是基础，好比河水之源，如果没有源头，哪来涓涓细流乃至滔滔长河？三年级是小学生作文的“入门”阶段。由于刚刚开始学习写作文，往往出现这种情况：学生的组词、造句还讲得过去，但作文中的取材仅限于转抄和编造。这样发展下去是不妥的。其一，学不会观察生活、表现生活；其二，一旦养成习惯，会使思维懒惰，思路狭窄，材源枯竭，影响其思维品质、智力、心理等方面的健康发展。那么，如何引导学生写作入门解决材源问题呢？我们提出如下几点看法：

一、要引导学生写生活中的真人、真事、真情和真景。生活中的作文材料很多，但生活中的人、事、情和景，初写作文的学生往往缺少“抓”和“写”的意识，需要老师或家长的点拨、揭示加指导。如我校去年元旦前夕要召开文艺晚会，布置同学们自带小红花，可老师没教过花的做法，有一位家长教会了他的女儿做红花，当这位小学生带着红花上学时，同学们求她帮助，她帮同学们做红花。事后，有的同学表示送她小“礼物”.虽然她喜欢小“礼物”,但是没要。老师知道这件事后，就指导她把这件事写成作文《我帮同学做红花》。由于写的是自己亲身经历的事，她写成的作文，内容充实，还挺有思想的。

二、给孩子创造积累写作材料的条件。平时，学生只能天天重复着“家中——路上——学校——路上——家中”的过程，生活的范围有限，所以学校和家长应利用周末和节假日，领孩子去公园、野外等见世面，领略和感受积极的、丰富多采的社会和自然生活。但要有益于教育孩子，其中一项便是为写作文积累材料。例如，在今年暑假中，某家长带他的女儿去野外捉蝈蝈，临行前布置了写作要求，让她注意观察和记忆。回来后，她写了作文《捉蝈蝈》，较生动地写下了捉蝈蝈的过程和动作，很有情趣。

三、给学生讲些直接感受不到的作文材料。受生活的地点、环境等条件所限，有许多素材是学生直接看不到、得不到的，却是可写的。这类材料需老师及家长的讲述，指导课外阅读等进行积累。有一位学生家长在去某沿海城市出差回来时，给他的孩子带回来许多“礼物”,如：各种贝壳、小（海）石头、小纪念品等。女儿最喜欢那串珍珠项链，她认为很贵。其实仅几元钱，使她很惊奇。这位家长抓住时机，向她讲了珍珠的人工养殖以及我国海上育珠事业的过去和现在，鼓励她以此为材写成作文《爸爸送我的礼物》，既训练了写作，又进行了爱祖国、爱科学的教育。

四、要让学生学会剪辑原有的写作材料。固然生活中的真人、真事、真情和真景是小学生入门写作的主要材料，但不要因此束缚他们的自我发挥和想象，而是要让学生们学会将已有的材料进行合理的剪辑、必要的取舍。有一位学生游过秀水公园后，在写《我爱秀水公园的美丽风光》草稿中提到“在草丛中捡到一只死去的蜻蜓”,这是真实的，但对文中的“美丽风光”起了削弱作用。老师对此进行了指导，经过修改，学生的作文是：“我走上拱桥向东望去，湖面上是一片荷花和荷叶，交映相辉。叶面上的水珠儿在阳光照射下，如珍珠般闪闪发光。忽然一只红蜻蜓飞来，落在一支卷着的荷叶上，我想起了古诗‘小荷才露尖尖角，早有蜻蜓立上头’……”这一小小的剪辑，使作文增加了艺术性。总之，老师及家长应相互配合，共同创造条件，指导学生通过多种途径观察生活，获取并积累写作素材，让学生在入门写作时，感到“材”有源头滚滚来。

导语：小学生在写作的过程有什么样的技巧可以运用呢？以下是小编为大家分享的小学话题作文写作技巧，欢迎借鉴！

话题作文的写作

在以上三个主要特点中，最主要的是“范围宽泛”这个特点，由于“范围宽泛”，给写作者提供了更广泛的发挥空间，有利于写作者表现个性特征，有利于选拔人才。可以说，以话题作文作为高考作文主要题型之一，是高考作文命题成熟的表现。

要想写好话题作文，首先要善于“化大为小”。话题作文的写作范围那么宽泛，如果仅把话题当作一个僵死的的概念，看为“铁板一块，不可分割”的整体，笼而统之去做文章，势必内容空泛、文意散漫。所以，写好话题作文的第一个本事是“目无全牛”，善于在一个大的、宽泛的范围内，“择其一点，不及其余”，也就是只写“大范围”中的“某一方面”，给自己提供了一个充分发挥、具体表现的好舞台，这样才能在800字左右的篇幅内写出立意鲜明集中、内容具体充实好文章。注意：不求“面面俱到”，只求“一针见血”。拿2000年高考作文来说，要把“答案是丰富多彩的”这样一个大范围“化而小之”，变为一个具体的小范围，例如可以写“生活态度”方面的，也可以写“辨明是非”方面的，“意识转变”“思维方式”“教育改革”“道德修养”“人物评价”“历史反思”“职业选择”“个性发展”等等方面的都可以写，这样，“化大为小”，“化空为实”，文章才能“出彩”，才能出现题材多样、迭彩纷呈的好局面。再拿下面一个话题作文为例：请以“压力”为话题，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的作文。要善于“以问领写”：“什么可以构成压力？”“有没有压力？”“压力来自何方？”“压力带来什么？”“怎样对待压力？”等等，然后自己回答这些问题，从这些回答中选择一二来写文章，达到“化大为小”的目的。可以写压力来自过重负担，也可以写压力来自责任感；可以写压力的从无到有，也可以写压力的从有到无；可以写压力来自外界，也可以写压力来自自身；可以写在重压下喘不过气来，也可以写变压力为动力；可以写要善于自我减压，也可以写“把压力放在肩上，不要放在心上”等等。要选择其中一个来写，不要贪多，否则会造成东拉西扯，空谈漫议。

提醒注意：善于“化大为小”，还要善于“以小见大”，从小的方面表现深刻的主题。这就要求我们在选择“小的方面”的时候，注意所选方面的“现实性、针对性、典型性”。

写好话题作文的第二个本事是“独辟蹊径，表现个性”。《考试

Home is the warmest place in the world and a sweet home makes every family

member feel happy and comfortable. So, how to make a home sweet?

First, respecting and understanding each other is the key to make a home

sweet, especially living in a big family. Everyone in the family has his or her

own opinion and has different way to deal with the matters, and it is impossible

to make family members see eye to eye with each other. Therefore, when we are

meeting different opinions, we need to give our respect and understanding to

each other.

Second, communication is another important factor to make a sweet home.

Communicating with family members is a good for us to know each other and

strengthen the relationship. Thus, no matter where we are, keeping in contact

with each other is definitely important.

Finally, humor can add more sweet to our home. Humor is a good way to

adjust the atmosphere in a family and close the relationship between family

members. Hence, if there is going to have a quarrel between family members, try

to use your humor to solve it in advance.

In a word, to make a home sweet needs the effort of every family

member.

I had a lively and lovely little white rabbit, it is very characteristic. To see what he looks like!

Its body is furry, shrink like a small pompon like, very cute! Its head round yo, red eyes, like two ruby-like, small nose, mouth is three petals. Its short tail, really the tail of the rabbit - can not grow!

It is very practical, I feed it when the pick pick, to check whether there is no vegetables, vegetables, there is no longs, or he did not eat it!

It always jumped at home, so I named it "jump".

"Jump" really cute, do you like it?

Many people will have an idol in their inner heart. There is one in my

mind. Maybe I cannot say that she is my idol, but she is truly the person has

influenced me the most. She is my mother. When I was very small, she always

telling me that I need to study hard to get more chances to be educated, though

I was a girl. It was her that I earned the chance to go to school. She liked

reading, and sometimes she would give some books for me to read. Now, reading is

one of my hobbies. She always respected my grandma, and took care of her

carefully once she was sick. From her, I know the virtue of respecting the old.

My mother influences my whole life. I love her.

振奋人心的时刻到来了!今天，我们再一次和五(7)的球员们来了一场激烈的比赛，为了洗刷上一次的耻辱，我们的球员可谓是厉兵秣马，全力以赴。一个坚定的信念在心中响起：五(9)班必胜!

比赛开始了，我们的球员们个个都生龙活虎，在球场上你追我赶，和对方的拼的不分上下，十分焦灼。然而，上一场的比赛依然历历在目，当时我们的球员也都是满怀信心，抱着必胜的信念，但最终却惜败给对方。想到这，我们的心里像压着一块大石头一样，无比沉重。就在我愣神之际，敌方突然一个猛烈的进攻，眼看球就要进入我们的球门了，在这千钧一发的时刻，我们的守门员两腿一叉，展开双臂，再用力往前一扑，耶!球接住了，真是惊心动魄，大快人心啊!

此时，再看看我们其他的球员，守的守，攻的攻，分工明确，到底是吃一堑长一智呀!记得我们上一次的比赛，就是吃了这个大亏，球员们只知道开“party”般扎堆抢球，没有团队精神。这次可大大不一样了，我们的球员各司其位，后卫传给中锋，中锋传给前锋，就这样，球在场上转了一圈又一圈。此时我们双方都僵持不下，居然打成了平手。最后裁判决定，点球决胜负，石头剪刀布，赢了的一方先发球。前锋首先出场，抬脚一记怒射，“呼——”的一声进了，接着后卫中锋也都进了，最后我们以四比一的比分赢了这场比赛。场下，我们五(9)班的全体同学欢呼着，跳跃着，齐声呐喊：“我们赢了，我们赢了……”

这真是场别开生面的足球比赛啊!它不仅丰富了我们的校园生活，更让我们懂得了团队配合的重要性，告诉我们每个人都是这个大家庭的一份子，同悲伤，共荣耀!

Happy Christmas Eve is coming, my heart is very excited, because Santa Claus comes

Its Christmas day on December 25th, and we still go to school as usual. No way, can only go to school, ah foreign friends must have a holiday, because this is their festival, why, why, China does not have a holiday!

In the evening I see Santa Claus, he and I said with a smile, Ill give you gift, I accept gifts, open on see, is a piece of paper, top write: I wish you good good study, day day up! Dont dwell on vacations!

I dont want to have a holiday when I hear that!! Thank you Santa!

快乐的圣诞夜就要来了，我的心情十分激动，因为圣诞老人来了

早上起来看的日历今天是12月25日圣诞节，我们还是像往常一样上学，我想，圣诞节还要上学，累死人啊!没办法，只能上学了，哎外国的朋友一定放假，因为这是他们的节日，为什么，为什么，中国不放假!

我在这天晚上看到了圣诞老人，他笑着和我说，我来给你送礼物了，我收下礼物，打开一看，是一张纸，上边写着：我愿你好好学习，天天向上!不要老是想着放假!

我听到这句话，我在也不想着放假了!!谢谢你圣诞老人!

In China, the number of college students increases every year, as more and

more students get the college education, college students are under great

pressure. We hear from the news that a lot of students can’t find jobs after

graduation, then the next year, the other students gets graduating, the two

years’ students compete for the jobs! I just can’t imagine such situation. The

pressure from college students is getting greater, they should relieve it now

and then, because too much pressure will bring bad effect, some may distort

their minds, once their emotion can’t relieve in time, some tragical things may

happen. It is said that some students suicide themselves because they have much

pressure. Everybody will have pressure, but we must know that pressure brings

motivation, at the same time, it also brings burden, we have to balance it. When

we deal with it well, we can live a better life.

During those days。 I enjoyed myself。 At first， I went to the zoo to see lovely animals。 And then。 I went to the sea world to see beautiful fishes。 That was very interesting。 Secondly I went for a trip with my parents， we went to Linxia to visit my grandparents and to eat minority’s foods。 We rode horse on the grassland and had a fun with local children。 It was very exciting。 After that， I held a party and invited some of my best friends to visit my house。 My mother bought a lot of tasty foods for us， we also took many photos on the party。 We played very happy。 I also watched lots of carton films at home， they were wonderful。

I like the holiday。 I like my May Day。

浙江省乐清市乐清市清江一小四（1）班陈秋云“加油！加油！”“不能输！”“小心。”“唉！”咦？这是哪儿传来的喊叫声，哦，原来是我们的学校——清江一小，正在举行一场激烈的踢毽子比赛，你瞧！那些各班选拔出来的小运动员们个个踢得热火朝天，安静了好几天的校园，顿时热闹非凡起来。比赛开始不久，窗外就围满了人，几十双眼睛睁得圆圆的盯着运动员们，那样子，就像是他们自己参加比赛似的。

只见那些运动员们像一只只轻盈的燕子，熟练的在场内踢着毽子，并得意得摆出各种各样的姿势，真是千姿百态，无所不有。只见我们班的戴敏，把毽子高高地踢向上方，又落下来，忽上忽下，忽左忽右，真让人心惊胆颤。突然，毽子似乎要着地了，戴敏一看，马上猛地伸出脚，一下子就接住了毽子。说完了毽子能手，再说说倒霉的章寿喜，只踢了几个，就被淘汰出局了。

我们班的邵兴虽说踢得多，可是方法不对，所以也没选中，我呢，平时不错，可比赛时，由于过分紧张，只踢了三十二个……比赛结束了，同学们有的兴高采烈，有的兴致勃勃，有的昂首挺胸，有的愁眉苦脸，还有的垂头丧气，坐在那里，一言不发。这场比赛可真激烈啊！既提高了我们的踢毽子水平，又提高了我们对体育活动的喜爱。

[踢毽子比赛小学五年级作文

Today is my long-awaited holiday - "National Day". In the morning, I put on my clothes and traveled with my father and mother.

We came to the city of Changzhi City in the city of Huang cliff, where the beautiful scenery, the lake is clear and transparent.

Into the door to see both sides cliff top together, looking up as a ray of days, there is "Kazuo Guan, Wan Fu Mo open" risk. And then went up to the mountain park, the park around the Qifeng different stone, really beautiful.

Continue to climb, we entered the weapons library site, weapons warehouse depth of 72 meters, 18 meters wide, 25 meters high, where was once made "Huang Yadong Battle" site.

Huang Yadong is a good place for adolescent patriotism education and tourism.

今天，是我盼望已久的节日——“国庆节”。早上，我穿上衣服，和爸爸、妈妈一起旅游。

我们来到了位于长治市黎城县的黄崖洞，这里的风景美丽极了，湖水清澈透明。

进入大门，看到两侧崖顶欲合，仰视如一线天，有“一夫当关，万夫莫开”之险。再往上走来到了高山公园，公园四周奇峰异石，真是美不胜收。

继续攀登，我们步入兵器库遗址，兵器库洞深72米，宽18米，高25米，这里曾经是著明的“黄崖洞保卫战”遗址。

黄崖洞真是一个进行青少年爱国主义教育及旅游的好地方。

为了提高我们的生活能力，学校开展了劳动小能手打比拼活动。这不，我们年级积极响应，通过十个老师的商议，我们比赛的项目是---包饺子。

比赛的前一周，老师就给我们安排了比赛用品：每组有一个人带本组用的饺子馅，一个人带案板，老师给我们准备饺子皮。上周二一上课，老师就把六张桌子竖着放在每组前面，然后把案板、饺子馅什么的放在上面。准备工作做好了，我们等待比赛开始。

“三、二、一，比赛开始！”一声令下，我们组李之行就以最快的速度在饺子皮最外围抹上一点水，然后用筷子夹着少得几乎没有的陷放到皮带正中间，最后快速地捏紧。我们组 的同学非常惊讶，因为他包的不是饺子而是面饼呀！同学们观赛时很激动，有的恨不得站起来观看这妙趣横生的比赛。

终于轮到我上场了。十秒、九秒……我的心越跳越快，越绷越紧，“开始！”我拿起皮，用妈妈准备的好工具---一把塑料小刀舀一下陷往皮上一抹。然后抹水，双手一捏，一个饺子就包好了。虽然我自认为包的很快，结果却并不令人满意，三分钟才包了八个。冯思特两分钟竟包了九个！下次努力吧。

老师把我们亲手包的二百多个饺子煮了，我们尝到了自己亲手包的香喷喷的饺子，高兴极了。

When the summer comes, the weather is so hot, it is rarely to see the rain.

Today, when I wake up, I find the weather is chilly, it is going to rain. I am

so happy, I miss the rain so much. Suddenly, the rain drops from the sky, I ran

out of the house, looking at the sky, dancing with the rain. I feel so cool,

then all my weariness has gone.

一、小学暑假英语日记带翻译

第一篇：Today and friends of foreign travel,outside air is very good,people feel very comfortable.We all appreciate the fine girls bicycles.We enjoyed the beautiful nature brought.We happily spent a happy day.今天和朋友一起出外交游,外面的空气很好,人感觉很舒服.我们骑着自行车一路欣赏鸟语花香.享受着大自然带给我们的无限美好.大家开开心心地度过了愉快的一天.

第二篇：Today is a boring day, because my dad and mom went to work, home I alone, I play a computer I soon feel dizzy, and then I go to visit my classmate but they are traveling, I can only one on the road, really boring!

今天是一个无聊的一天，因为我爸爸妈妈都出去上班了，家了只有我一个人，我玩了一会儿电脑不一会我就感到头晕，然后我出去拜访我的同学可是他们都去旅游了，我只能一个人在路上闲逛，真是无聊啊!先写到这儿，明天在来写

第三篇：This evening I went for a walk out of the stadium, found near my home, they have many people running, some people are playing basketball, others are playing football. I saw them in the movement to join them, I play very happy.

今天晚上我出门去散步，发现我家旁边的体育场人很多，他们有的人在跑步，有的人在打篮球，还有人在踢足球。我看见他们在运动也加入到他们的队伍里，我玩地很开心。

二、英语日记100字

篇一：the day after yesterday i received 200yuan from my relatives as my pocket money. i was so happy but my father and mother said that i should give a half to them and the rest would be my pocket money in one year. “what!” i shouted.

前天我收到了200元作为零用钱来自于我的亲戚，我很高兴，但是爸爸妈妈说要上交一半而且另一半要做为我一年里的零用钱。“什么！”我大叫到。

篇二： july 22, cloudy today i got up early in order to wait for the legend of the total solar eclipse was visible. why is the legends? because not seen.but from 7:30 a.m. start raining, i was depressed. ok just online see the news experts say yinyutian look more like shock, total solar eclipse was visible because originally clouds and thick, plus the dark sky will total solar eclipse was visible.

7月22日 阴天 我今天起的很早，为了等待那传说中的日全食。为什么是传说中呢？因为没亲眼见过嘛。不过从早上7：30就开始下雨，害我郁闷了半天。还好刚刚在网上看了新闻专家说阴雨天看日 全食会更震撼，好像是因为本来云层很厚，再加上日全食天空会更加的黑暗

三：多篇暑假英语日记作文带翻译

篇1、Today my parents took me to my grandfather’s house. I played with my cousin. Suddenly my cousin suggested going to the park and having a rest. “that’s a good idea.” I said. Then we prepared for the traveling. After lunch, the sky turned dark. After that , it rained heavily. It meant our plan is impossible. What a pity day!

今天我父母带我去了外公家，我和唐/表，兄/弟/姐/妹一起玩。突然，我我和唐/表，兄/弟/姐/妹建议去公园玩，顺便休息一下。“那是一个好主意”我说到。然后我们为旅行准备着。午饭后，天变得昏暗，接着下起了大雨。那意味着我们的计划不可能实行了，多遗憾的一天哪！

篇2、Tomorrow is New Year’s Day, my family have had a completely cleaning for two days. Then my father and I decorated our flat and my mother cooked delicious food for our meal. After supper we watched TV program. How happy we were!

明天是春节，我家里以近在两天前做了彻底的大扫除。然后我和爸爸一起装饰家里，妈妈则在烧好吃的东西。晚饭以后，我们一起看电视节目，我们多高兴呀！

篇3、The day after yesterday I received 200yuan from my relatives as my pocket money. I was so happy but my father and mother said that I should give a half to them and the rest would be my pocket money in one year. “what!” I shouted.

前天我收到了200元作为零用钱来自于我的亲戚，我很高兴，但是爸爸妈妈说要上交一半而且另一半要做为我一年里的零用钱。“什么！”我大叫到。

篇4、On July 20, sunny Get up early today is very hot, hot feeling uncomfortable. Breakfast mother let me accompany her to go shopping and I didnt go. Because it is too hot, move feeling on the finger to sweat.The city library to read a book this afternoon. Because the library have air conditioning can blow, but also more than books at home too. Conveniently checked total solar eclipse was visible material.

7月20日 晴 今天非常炎热，一大早起床就感觉闷热的难受。吃完早饭妈妈让我陪同她去买菜我也没去。因为实在是太热了，感觉动一下手指头身上都在向外冒汗。下午到市图书馆看了一下午的书。因为图书馆有空调可以吹，而且书也比家里的多太多了。顺便查了一下日全食的资料。

篇5、On July 21, rainy days The weather of today is very comfortable, though the weather forecast said it is cloudy, but just a little bit rain, very cool.The weather forecast said it is cloudy, and friends about to play basketball, but unfortunately, in the rain can play. Afternoon after the rain stopped to help my mother to buy food supermarket. Generally bad mood today.

7月21日 雨天 今天天气很舒适，虽然天气预报说今天是阴天，可是下了点小雨，很凉爽。天气预报说今天是阴天，本来都和朋友们约好要去打篮球的，可是很遗憾，在下雨没法去玩。下午雨停了之后有去超市帮妈妈买菜。总的来说今天心情不算太坏。

篇6、July 22, cloudy Today I got up early in order to wait for the legend of the total solar eclipse was visible. Why is the legends? Because not seen.But from 7:30 a.m. start raining, I was depressed. Ok just online see the news experts say YinYuTian look more like shock, total solar eclipse was visible because originally clouds and thick, plus the dark sky will total solar eclipse was visible.

7月22日 阴天 我今天起的很早，为了等待那传说中的日全食。为什么是传说中呢？因为没亲眼见过嘛。不过从早上7：30就开始下雨，害我郁闷了半天。还好刚刚在网上看了新闻专家说阴雨天看日 全食会更震撼，好像是因为本来云层很厚，再加上日全食天空会更加的黑暗

篇8、Today I found time was a cruel thing.Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won’t stay to wait for somebody. Youcan’t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although youhave a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won’t leave them more.Today I found I hadn’t enough time. Although I have more than a-month holiday,but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I amessential to complete the homework as soon as I have time.

今天，我发现时间是一个残忍的东西。无论人们怎样，时间总在流逝。它不会留下来等待某人。你不能使用任何东西去交换时间。时间也是一个公平的东西。虽然你有很多钱，或者你享有很高的声誉，时间不会离开他们更多。今天，我发现我已经没有足够的时间。虽然我有超过一个月假期，但我发现我有很多事情要做。我有很多功课要做，我要，只要我有时间完成的功课。

篇9、I have rested for 10 days. In these days, Ifelt very bored. I didn’t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things todo, I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the hot weather. I was tired,sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, itdidn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in alow temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me.Atlast, I was ill.

我已经休息了10天。在这些日子里，我觉得很无聊。我不知道做什么。虽然我有很多事情要做，我觉得不舒服。我是因为炎热的天气而生病。我累了，困了，没有力气。我的父母担心我的健康。事实上，这并不重要。我总是在有空调的房间里，并在开了低温。所以，当我走了出去，高温不适宜我.在最后，我生病了。

篇10、It was sunny today. I was excited. I got upat a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o’clock. After Ihad my breakfast, I went to the Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When Iarrived, my friends didn’t arrive. I waited for him infront of the KFC’s door.I haven’t seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn’t come into contact withothers frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. Afterwe greeted,we went to play basketball in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last fortow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today!

这是阳光明媚的一天。我很兴奋。我起床时四十五分。我制定了一个九点钟见面的约会。吃完我的早餐后，我去了万家市场。外面很热。当我到达时，我的朋友并没有到。我在肯德基的大门外面等他。我有一年没有看到他们了。并且在一年内，我们没有与对方频繁接触。大约十分钟过去，我的朋友们一个接一个地打来。在我们打招呼后，我们去荔湾体育馆打篮球。这场比赛持续了两个小时。哦！我觉得我今天很开心！

篇11、I live very happily today! In the morning,it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountainis very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremelybeautiful. Coming back home in the evening, family and I sat and watched TVtogether, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the wholefamily is happy and harmonious!

今天我过得非常开心！在早上，天气非常好！然后，我与家人爬上山，山上的空气非常清新，山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。回来晚上回家，我与家人坐在一起看电视，我们还吃着水果，一边聊天，全家其乐融融！

篇12 、The weather of today is very comfortable, thoughthe weather forecast said it is cloudy, but just a little bit rain, very cool.Theweather forecast said it is cloudy, and friends are planning to play basketball,but unfortunately, in the rain we can not play it. In the afternoon, the rain stopped,I have to help my mother to buy food in the supermarket. Generally it was not bad mood today.

今天的天气很舒适，虽然天气预报说今天是阴天，但只是下了一点点的雨，非常凉爽.天气预报说今天是阴天，和朋友计划打篮球，但不幸的是，在雨中我们不能打球。在下午，雨停了，我要帮妈妈买菜的超市。大体说今天心情还不错。

篇13、It was the second day of our summerholiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things Ilike. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. ButI didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote anEnglishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am veryhungry.

这是我们暑假的第二天。我感觉很好。我觉得我是自由的。我有很多时间做我喜欢的事情。我的父母都在中山。所以，我独自生活，但我并不感到孤独。但我没有做一些特别的东西。我住在家里看电视。哦！我写了英语日记作文。这是我的功课。今天，我睡了14小时。我认为我很疲惫。这是去吃晚饭的时间。我必须去！我非常饿。

上个星期，也就是10月29日，坪地街道办在坪地中学举行小学生田径比赛，我的第一次田径比赛。我们学校选了十几个同学去参加比赛。

早晨，我七点来到学校集合。一到学校的球场上，教练叫我们换好比赛服，然后到球场上热身。热完身，我们去准备钉鞋，唐老师把钉鞋，唐老师把旧钉鞋换上新钉，最后，我们信心十足去坪地中学参加比赛，小学五年级作文《我的第一次田径比赛》。来到中学，看到其他学校的选手也不怎么样。我想，看来取胜的机会更大了。

比赛开始了，第一项是八百米。我们学校的代表陈芳已经在跑道上热身了。裁判拿起发令枪，“各就各位！”“叭！”比赛开始了。我们紧张得心都跳出了胸口。队员代们像箭一样一个个冲出起跑线。一圈，二圈，冲刺了，我悬着的心终于像石头一样着了地。我校的选着得了第一名，可以说是开门红吧！我们和教练都喜出望外。

可是，接下来的比赛，我们的队员都败下阵来。有的是因为技不如人，有的是因为接棒失手，有的是因为看比赛忘了自己的比赛……一言难尽！

颁奖台了，只有陈芳一个人的影子。团体总分出来了，我们拿了最后一名，大家都很伤心，谁见了谁也不愿意讲话。我觉得很对不起教练，他每天早上六点就带领大家训练，辛辛苦苦、一心一意来教我们。可是大家都不争气，给教练，给学样丢脸了。

通过这次比赛，我们都知道以后怎么做了！

今天的课堂上，王老师让我们大家来一个课堂比赛，比赛的名字叫“斗牛”，同学们听到后立刻欢呼起来。王老师说“今天的斗牛不是真的“斗牛”，而是找两个同学装扮成牛，我在他们的背上贴一个字，两头牛可以利用各种战术，只要看到对方的字就算获胜。”

老师的话语刚落下，同学们就迫不及待地举起手，争先恐后要扮牛。立刻，老师的面前变成了一片小手组成树林，我也在其中。当老师看到我的时候，我的心太激动了，老师一定叫我了；可是，老师又将目光转向其他的同学；霎那间，我就像在空中自由的飞翔天使，突然翅膀断了似的，掉进了万丈深渊。老师最后找到了两个女同学扮作一头“白牛”和一头“花牛”。

老师在两头牛的背后贴上了字后，两头牛就像两只螃蟹似的走上了讲台。“开始！”老师一声令下，两头牛就向两头愤怒的狮子，非要看到对方的字不可。白牛先发制人，猛地向花牛进攻，大家给各方加油，教室沸腾了起来，喊声大得听不见两头牛的脚步声，白牛灵活地钻来钻去，想方设法地看见花牛的字，观众大声地给白牛加油。但是，花牛比白牛胖，她防守得严严实实的，而且还用她的大辫子挡住字，白牛的几次突击都没有看清字，有些同学还给白牛出招。我大声喊

“白牛……突击……很好。用拖累计！”它们的持久战太长了，白牛还向花牛瞪眼，想吓唬她一下，趁机看见字。白牛太阴险了，她想用舌头假装去舔花牛，花牛要是一躲开，那么就可以借机看见字了。只剩下最后几秒钟了，我真紧张啊！最后到底是谁赢呢？真让人期待啊！我们大声倒计时。白牛发起了总攻，花牛也拼尽全身力气发起了总攻。两头牛做着殊死搏斗，但是，最后还是打成了平局。两头牛回到座位上，花牛累得气喘吁吁，喝了许多水；白牛显得更累，她用手扇着风，一口气把水喝个精光。

这次的“斗牛”真是又刺激又好玩啊！它和西班牙的斗牛比起来，它更好玩呢！

我校九年级学生，有80%完全不会写作文，即除了“My name is XXX.”“I will. do，” 一个正确的句子都写不出来，剩下的5%也在以下方面存在一些常见的错误：

1、没有理解英语的基本句子成分是“主语”+“谓语”

学生经常出现主语跟谓语不一致，包括句子的谓语用得不恰当，谓语用词跟主语不搭配，一个句子没有主语，或多个句子杂在一起。

比如：学生想说“我母亲总是不让我看电视”，写出来的是“my mother always not be allowed I watch TV.”根本就是直接从汉语逐字翻译成英文的。

出现这样的问题，显然是由于句子的基本结构没有弄清楚。看来在今后教学中还要继续强调，并配合造例句练习。

2、动词短语搭配不准确

比如：“I’m not allowed watch TV.”正确的短语“被允许做某事”应该是“be allowed to do…”。

3、丛句语序和连接词问题

很不理解，为什么强调了那么多次，学生在写作文时，丛句语序还会写错？后者连接词和引导词也老师出错。对于连接词，我在讲的时候也感觉到学生没有理解。我讲解的方法就是把课文里面的丛句拿出来分析其语序和联系词，然后再讲相关语法点，最后举例子让学生造句。语序问题，我还会在将来碰到一次强调一次，相信会有效果。但是联系词我就不知道该怎么让孩子听懂了。

比如：“I don’t know that what should I do”“Could you please tell me should I do?”正确的句子应该是“I don’t know what I should do.”“ Could you please tell me what I should do?”.

以上这些问题让我对如何增强学生作文表达能力有了一个不全面的思考。我觉得，提高学生作文能力必须从七年级入手（小学重点在听说，只需知道what 和 how,不需求甚解；到中学阶段就必须知道why了）。

4、句子使用的句型单一

例如；在一次模拟考试当中英语的考试题目就是如果我当选了班长我会怎么做，做哪些事情，九年级五班的英语课代表张雅就一直用一个句型来写“I will do”，虽然全文当中没有一个错误，但因为句型单一所以值得8分，因此在老师教课的过程中还要不断的给学生讲 作文序加以变换句型且需对语句加以润色。

针对以上问题我以后在讲课文和精读篇阅读理解试题时，要注意以下两点：

1、利用课文逐句帮助学生分析理解英文句子的基本结构，即“主语+谓语”；

2、要求学生把有用的动词短语、名词短语以及插入语记牢记清楚。

3、每单元的语言目标，一定要理解并记忆。

4、是学生学会句子的变换使用，有必要时做些句型转换练习。