小学英语写作比赛通用20篇

小学元宵节英语日记lantern Festival

Today is lantern Festival. I am very happy. Lantern Festival is Chinese

festival. Every year once.

今天是元宵节。我非常快乐，元宵节是中国节日，每年一次。

In this day, people are very happy . In the steet, people is a lot

of.people see a lantern. In the evening,I eat yuan_iao together with my family.

Its very delicious.

在这一天，人们都快快乐乐的。在街上，有许多的人，人们看到一个灯笼。在晚上，我和家人一起吃元宵，很美味的元宵。

I like Lantern Festival very much.

我非常喜欢元宵节。

两个树洞

My uncle has two dogs. One is big and the other is small. He likes them very much.

One day, Mr. Smith came to visit him. When the friend saw two holes in the door, a large hole and a small hole, he was surprised and said, ;My dear friend, why are there two holes in your door?; ;Let my dogs come in and come out, of course,; Mr. Smith asked. ;But why are there two holes? One is enough!; ;But how can the big dog go through the small hole?; my uncle said.

Sometimes a clever man may make such mistakes.

我的叔叔有两条狗。一只是大的，另一只是小狗的。他很喜欢它们。

有一天，史密斯先生来看他。当这个朋友看见门口上有连个洞，一个是大洞和一个小洞时，他感到吃惊并说，;我亲爱的朋友，为什么你的门上有连个洞?;我的叔叔回答说：;当然是让我的两条狗进出了。 史密斯先生问到："为什么门上要两个洞呢?一个就足够了。"我叔叔说：;大狗怎能走小洞呢?;

The first thing I did was I made a plan for my study. I assigned my

homework equally according to the holidays so that I can finish all of them in

time. And during my winter vacation, we welcome the most important festival in

China—Spring Festival, it’s also called Chinese New Year by lots of

foreigners.

At that night, our family came together and had a big meal. Of course we

had dumplings that night, because that is our Chinese traditional. We then watch

the CCTV spring festival evening party together and watch the beautiful

fireworks. That’s the happiest time in this world! The winter vacation I had

dreamed all year around was finally coming. And I really enjoyed a lot from

it.

The first thing I did was I made a plan for my study. I assigned my

homework equally according to the holidays so that I can finish all of them in

time. I also arranged myself the books and words I need to read and recite.

Secondly, I took some extracurricular activities and read some English original

reading. My favorite book is , written by Sherlock Holmes. Among all the

classical movies, the Sound of Music was the most exciting one. During my

holidays I also made some assistance for my physical class teacher, surely I met

lots of difficulties in this stage and from which I knew what perseverance

really was. Lastly, I went to the temple fair and was lucky to taste several

Chinese traditional dishes; “Jiaohua chicken” is one of them. It is said it

originated from Hangzhou centuries ago, made by a famous beggar Hong Qi Gong,

the senior leader of Beggar Gang.Steamed with fresh lotus leaf wrapped up,it is

famous for its special aroma and taste. Now that the holiday is ending and a new

semester is coming, I need to fresh up and get started to embrace the upcoming

challenges.

今天，我们在操场上举行了拔河比赛。

张老师从我们男生的队伍选出了几个力气比较大的，也从女生的队伍里选出几个力气比较大的，让他们去参加拔河比赛。六班在比赛中非常历害，连胜三局。可是，当他们把我们班打倒时，

我们都很不服气。当我们看到四班和六班比赛的时候，他们胖子多，于是我们都给四班加油。他们班的最后一个人把绳子放在肩上，使劲往后拉。我们在操场上急的跳了起来。“加油，加油!”好!六

班终于输了一次，这令我们哈哈大笑，因为六班可能骄傲了吧!

我们虽然输了，但我们懂得了道理——做什么事都一定要认真，要谦虚，不能骄傲。

With the harsh competition in todays society, more and more people

complain about their stress in their daily life. Stress mainly comes from our

work, study and families. When we feel stressed, we often have bad moods on the

day and cant sleep well at night. Thats too bad for our health. To help ease

stress, some good ways are suggested. Firstly, we can chat with our parents and

friends. Maybe they can give us some good advice. Secondly, we ought to do some

exercise, which can help us have a nice sleep at night. Moreover, we are

supposed to balance our life with more outdoor activities, so as to make our

life more colorful and vivid.

Today, as I have nothing to do, my father decides to take me to the gym. There are people playing all kinds of sports. I see my father play badminton and he teaches me how to play. It is so easy for me to learn, after a while, I can play with my father. I fall in love with this sport, I will play it on the weekend.

今天,当我无事可做的时候, 爸爸决定带我去健身房。人们在玩各种各样的运动。我看到我的父亲在打羽毛球,他教我怎么玩。这对我来说很容易学习,过了一会后,我可以和父亲一起打。我爱上了这项运动,我会在周末去玩。

My favorite little animal is the neighbors puppy, it is covered with white, and furry, it is bright and bright eyes especially God, two little ears shaking, really naughty! There is a small tail Often thrown to go, as if to show off their own! The most interesting is that little nose, how a sniffing is also idle. It is also particularly alert, a see stranger, it will "barking" barking, until the stranger away, it will stop calling. Once the evening met the mouse, it will be "barking" called a non-stop, listening to the neighbors said: since it came, also caught a few mice it!

We all like the puppy very much.

今天天气格外明朗，一场别开生面的拔河比赛要开始了，我的心情就像这天气一样爽朗。我们班的“小巨人“们站在了班级前方，活动着那有力气的身体，我也进入了他们的队伍，我们望这裁判员等待着冠军向我们招手。

裁判员把我们领进了比赛场指定位置准备比赛，比赛规则是这样的：女同学10人，男同学10人，分别站在麻绳的两边，脚要对着前面同学的脚，我们要拉倒对方才行。我们班首先和四(3)班比，“预备。“我们拿起麻绳身体向后倒，随着哨声响起我们用尽吃奶的力气来拉，旁边的同学用自己的嗓门来为我们加油，“嘟“可惜我们输了。我们只好和四(4)班比赛，我们班的同学开始心灰意冷了，我走上前去给他们说：“坚持不懈，我们要团结就能胜利。“

决赛要开始了，我们站在了赛场上“预备，嘟。“我们咬紧牙关，黄豆般的汗珠直往下流，红色标记一会儿偏向我们一会儿偏向对方，周老师和同学们在一旁呐喊助威，似乎嗓子都喊哑了，我们的手红了脸涨的通红“嘟，四二班胜利。“太好了，我们连胜两局。

哎!我们只得了第三名，我们那双渴望冠军的眼睛给拔河比赛画上了一个美好的句号。

一. 肯定不如否定好

修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。

双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。

例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”，如果写成The postman comes on time every day，就不如变成双重否定，The postman never fails to come on time，就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。

“几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响”，写成双重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude towards life had not been affected by the earthquake.

应用类似的修辞会在中为同学们加分。

二. 陈述不如倒装妙

在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。

倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，就足以应对书面表达。

Having a good nights sleep at grandmas house is definitely the best time to get up in the morning. I opened my sleep mengs eyes, big had a stretch, casual to took a glance outside the window, but I felt very comfortable: see, the green fields like wool blankets, seem very soft. There are dozens of muddy paths in the field, separated by large peanut leaves.

There are several apricot trees along the edge of the field, and the yellow apricot trees are full of trees. The morning dew sticks to the apricot, which makes it look lovely and inviting. From time to time, a few fat sparrows were coming, and standing in the trees, chirping and whispering to each other; Or one or two big black birds, "woah, wow," and fly to the distance; Because of several nearby streams and ponds, also often have egrets pass by, so they are flapping wing of the white clean, gracefully and rest a while in the field, or fly directly to the side of the stream of fish to eat.

What a beautiful view! I kicked my slippers and walked slowly up to the field. The smell of incense came to me, I was intoxicated, I can not help holding a side of the MM and JJ, dancing. We whirled around in the field like a tornado, and the mud was whirling around and we were surrounded by mud...

In the afternoon, I first saw the sunset glow. Oh, that was a masterpiece of nature! The exotic glow of the glow of the earth, the cunning cloud, stole the suns gold gauze, triumphantly rode in the wind driven carriage, into the sunset clouds to show off their charm. The bright sunset clouds, like the red rose with crystal clear dew, open with enthusiasm; Like a girls bashful face, full of blush; Like a girls clothes, light and floating... It has red, yellow and purple colors, and sometimes it is a lovely red scarf, and sometimes it is a red mane horse with sprinted feet.

Beautiful home, beautiful green field, I - love - you.

很早很早的时候，我和她就在一起玩了。

曾经，她问我：“你说，我们会不会是姐妹呢?”我说：“不知道，可能我们真的是吧!可能我们的亲生父母把我们分散了，然后老天爷又让我们做了好朋友，哈哈哈哈……

如果真的要怪罪，就怪罪那个夏天吧!

夏天，天气闷得人直慌，而我们却有着大好的心情去逛街，虽然口袋里没有多少钱，但我们却这里看看，那里逛逛。我买了两杯奶茶，一杯给了她，一杯自己喝。接着我们又去了在她家门口前的街头。我们认识，就是在这街头，那时，我不小心撞到了她，可就是因为这样，我们才认识，从那以后，我们的关系越来越好，我惊奇的发现，她就是隔壁班的一个同学，只是她太过于文静，我没有注意到她。

虽然是街头，可并不窄，我们有时在那聊天，有时在那玩耍，好不快乐。今天，她突然问我：“羽荫，你说要是我要转学了，转到一个很远很远的地方了，不会回来这里了，你会伤心吗?”“真是的，我肯定会伤心啊!你怎么突然说这些啊?”“呃……

第二天上学的时候，她打电话给我，说我不用去叫她上学了，我也没有在意什么，就回答“哦!”，回到学校，就有一个同学交给我一封信，我拆开一看，那是她写的告别信：

羽荫：

对不起，我要转学走了，不会回来了。

请原谅我写信跟你告别，因为我实在不忍心看到你哭……

……

你怎么知道呢?我不哭，我只想见你最后一面啊!

回到街头，面对的是孤零零的自己，真的忘了怎么笑了……

I Play Guitar

I like playing guitar,so my father buys me a guitar for fun.It is very funny.Then my mother asks me to have guitar class.She thinks to learn more skill

is good for me.I start to have guitar class.It is really funny at first.But later on,I feel very tired.It is not easy to get improved.I want to giveup,but I insist at last.Now I can pay several songs.I feel proud of it.

我弹吉他

我喜欢弹吉他,所以我爸爸给我买一把吉他的乐趣。这是非常有趣的。然后我妈妈问我有吉他课。她认为学习更多的技能对我有好处。我开始上吉他课。这是非常有趣的。但是后来,我感觉非常疲劳。不容易得到改善。我想给最后,但我坚持。现在我可以支付一些歌曲。我感到自豪。

I like dogs, because they are man’s good friends. They can do many helpful thingsto us, such as guarding our houses, greeting guests, helping the police, and soon. Some trained dogs can even lead the blind people and save people’s lives.So they‘re treated as our family members. I hope someday dogs will be in greatharmony with human-beings.

我喜欢狗，因为它们是人类的好朋友。他们可以为我们做很多有用的事情，如，保护房子，问候客人，帮助警方等等。一些受过训练的狗甚至可以引导盲人、拯救人们的性命。所以他们都被当做是我们的家庭成员。我希望有一天狗能与人类和谐共处。

2、宽容能让别人愉悦，自己也快乐，刻薄让他人痛苦，让自己也痛苦。

3、保持一种平和心境，你才会在欲望的丛林中忘乎所以。

4、一个人心态要稳定，要正确对待自己，找准自己的人生坐标，不要越位也不要自卑，要对社会有种感激之心，只要做到这个，很多事情就迎刃而解。

5、人对社会有两种态度：一种人永远用乐观的、积极的态度看世界。一种人用悲观、消极的态度看世界。实际上这是划分人的心理平衡与不平衡的标准。只要你乐观积极地看世界，这世界就很美好。

6、最好的医生是自己，保持良好的心态，就是最成功的健康。

7、强者性格决定了他的命运，弱者的命运决定了他的性格。

8、心理工作很重要，各级领导重视高。干群拥护急需要，科学开展重实效。心理不适把医找，心理治疗是妙药。

9、好的心理是一剂良药，能催人奋进，反之它就是枷锁，使人灭亡。

10、经常疏通河床，不致溃堤，适时疏导心理，才能保持健康。

11、人生就像一张磁盘，烦恼可以删除，快乐可以拷贝。

12、雄心出胆略，恒心出意志，信心出勇气，决心出力量。

13、我们应该学习“王婆卖瓜”，首先她有自己种的瓜，其次她先有瓜才自夸，三是夸瓜不夸自己。

14、悲观者横向比人生，乐观者纵向攀人生。

15、失去了昨日的繁星并不可怕，可怕的是你又错过了今天的朝阳。

16、所谓知足，并非不思进取，而是在努力耕耘中不奢望、贪求。

17、人生如鲜花，令人赞赏;如美酒，使人陶醉;如希望，令人奋发;如动力，催人奋进。

18、快乐是一种思想。思想快乐，你就是一个快乐的人。思想不快乐，你就快乐不起来。

19、教育民警树立正确的人生观、价值观，培养高尚的道德情操，是做好心理工作的基础。

20、不是烦恼太多，而是心胸不够开阔。

21、发怒容易使人失去理智，给我们的身体乃至学习、工作和生活造成危害。所以我们应加强自身修养，做到克已制怒。

22、健康，来源于健全的心理状态。保持良好的心理状态则不会患病。

23、有了积极的心态，便有了战胜一切困难取得成功的信心。我们对生活态度决定了我们的人生。24、人生在世，应该对事业热情，对生活热情，对他人热情。谁能保持这三方面的热情，谁将会有意义地度过一生。

25、只有对前途乐观的人，才能不怕黑暗，才能有力量去创造光明。乐观不是目的，而是人生旅途中的一种态度。

26、经得起各种诱惑和烦恼的考验，才是达到最完善的心理健康。

[小学生作文写作素材心理名言

有序观察是写好状物类作文的基础。下面小编来给大家介绍小学状物作文的写作方法，希望对大家有帮助!

一、语言要有趣

如习作《蚂蚁》。作者在写蚂蚊的独特功能时，是这样写的：“除了四周的景物能帮助蚂蚁辨别方向外，它们还有一个自身的‘法宝’，这就是在蚂蚁走过的地方都会留下一种特殊的气味，掉队的蚂蚁根据这种气味就能确定方向。倘若用樟脑丸一类的怪气味弥散在蚂蚁走过的路径上，那么后来的蚂蚁就会因找不到那种特殊的气味而迷失方向。”这是作者知识的积累与生活的积累相互融合的结果。

又如，习作《姥姥家的小黑狗》。作者在介绍小黑狗的外形特点时如是说：“(它)一身乌黑发亮的皮毛，就像黑缎子一样油亮光滑;雪白的小爪儿，俨如四朵梅花;那条翘着的小尾巴总是不停地摇摆着;特别是那对黑白分明的小眼睛，总是四处张望，充满着兴奋和好奇。”这里，作者用了生动的比喻，写出了小黑狗皮毛的油亮和爪子的厚实;又用“不停地摇”写出了小黑狗对熟人的媚态;还用“四处张望”来写小黑狗的警觉与好奇。语言富有生活的情趣，突出了小黑狗的漂亮与可爱。

因此，语言的理趣是知识性的体现，情趣是情感性的体现。只有结合为一体，方能显示状物类作文语言的知识性与趣味性。

二、观察要有序

有序观察是写好状物类作文的基础。一要按顺序观察，二要抓住特点进行观察，只有进行有序观察，才能写出条理清晰的文章。

如，苏教版六年级(上册)《麋鹿》。在介绍其外形时这样写道：“它的外形很奇特：角似鹿，面似马，蹄似牛，尾似驴，所以又被称为‘四不像’。”这里的观察顺序是：由上而下，由前而后。作者抓住麋鹿角、面、蹄、尾的特点，寥寥数语，却勾画得栩栩如生。

又如，苏教版五年级(上)“练习册”上有一段对熊猫的描写，形象逼真，凸现熊猫的生活习性。“熊猫睡觉时，腹部朝天。有时，它用前爪轻轻地拍着肚子;有时，它两腿一蹬，便翻了个身。”“它睡醒了就翻身起来，用手揉了揉腥忪的眼睛，好奇地望望人们。然后迈着蹒跚的步子走到栏杆的另一边，坐了下来，好像想清醒一下头脑似的。”这里，作者抓住熊猫嗜睡的特点，写得饶有趣味。

三、结构要有“形”

根据表达的需要，文章有纵式结构与横式结构之别。初学状物类作文，以纵式结构为主，以纵横交错式结构为辅。如“总分”或“总分总”结构。

例，习作《银杏》。可以先介绍它的外形特征，再写出它的价值或用途，诸如营养价值和药有价值等。从总体上看，全文为纵式结构。而在介绍其价值或用途中，又采用横式(并列式)结构。这样，介绍的内容尽管较多，但由于结构清晰，也就显得有条不紊。

又如，习作《猪》。作者从对猪这种动物的偏爱入手，开篇破题：“其实，猪是一种聪明可爱的动物。”接着，文章分别从猪的智力、嗅觉、起居、饮食等方面展现它的聪明可爱。这种“总分式”结构条分缕析，学生容易模仿。有的同学为了进一步突出家养猪的可爱，还简约地将野猪与家养猪作对比。这样，不仅丰富了写作的内容，而且凸现了文章的中心。

四、方法要有变

状物类作文的写作方法也不是一成不变的。仅就叙述的人称而言，就有第一人称与第三人称之异。当然，各有各的妙处。例《钢笔和原珠笔》，叙述时采用第一人称，既显得亲切，又便于介绍。为了行文需要，人称也可以转换。如，《铺路石》。从整体上说，用的是第三人称，“它来自大山之中，它是大山的儿子。为了人类的需要，它离开了母亲的怀抱，来到了繁华的闹市，来到了宁静的村庄……”而在文章的结尾，为了礼赞的需要，转为第二人称。“铺路石，你是山的精灵，你是大山的忠实儿子!你默默无闻，但大地没有忘记你，高山没有忘记你。看，高山顶上的巨石，不正是大地母亲为你树立的丰碑吗?”这种第三人称与第二人称的交替作用，使知识性和情感性得以和谐统一，叙的是“铺路石”，颂的是“劳动者”。

现代写作学认为，写作是一种观念形态的活动，是客观外界事物在头脑中加工制作的过程。从这一意义上来说，状物类作文的指导要以有序观察为基础，情趣表达为载体，有形结构为借鉴，行文有变为方法，经典引路，以读促写。实践证明，这是一条行之有效的写作途径。

One day, my father bought a white puppy from the field. I like this lovely puppy, give it a name called "toot".

Toot the fur slippery, body fat, eyes round yo, nose next to a few beard, how lovely ah!

Every day when I go to school, it has been following me, I call it back and go back. No school home from school, I saw toot at the door looked, as if waiting for my home and I play together. We came to the lawn, beep happy to say: "bark, bark!" I ran it also run, I go it also go, I stop it also stop, it shook hands with me, nod it!

I like this white and fat puppy too!

My English friend name is Jim.

HE is ten years old, his family in london,he and his family member comes our china to play.He has a cosin,he name is qianyu hi is oniy four years old,but he has a lot of questions.look he is pointing at the chopsticks to ask that my this is anything.

I and jim has become the good friend .Several days later Jim said that he wanted, he said that i love China .I will forget that you zhou lei, will have free time london to look at me .Ok see you Jim.see you.

一、总分式结构

文章层次之间是总说和分说的关系。这种关系，有三种基本形式：

1.先总后分，文章开头部分总括提出所要叙述事件的整体面貌、基本特征或中心观点；以下分别从若干方面列举事例具体详细地加以描写或从不同的角度提出分论点具体加以阐述。

2.先分后总；

3.先总说，后分说，再总说。

无论使用哪一种形式，都应注意，分总之间必须有紧密的内在联系，分述部分要围绕总述的中心进行，总述部分应是分述的总纲或水到渠成的总结。

生命如风

在风、雨、雷、电中，我偏爱风。

喜爱风，是因为风的来无影、去无踪；喜爱风，是因为风的温馨，风的热烈，风的潇洒，风的狂暴。

有人问我：“四季之风，你最偏爱哪种？”对我来说，这个问题的答案又怎能惟一？春、夏、秋、冬，每一个季节的风都有一种人生境界。

春风，太温柔太温柔，宛如婴儿的小手，亲抚你的脸。她默默送来梅的清香，捎来春的绿意。“吹面不寒杨柳风”，不寒是假的，微寒总有吧？正是这丝丝微寒，使人不至于在这阳光灿烂的春日陶然睡去，而忘了“一年之计在于春”。哦，春风，你拂去冬的寒意，吹来了满眼的勃勃生机。这样美好的春风，教我怎能不爱？

夏天亮丽而生动的色彩造就了夏风的热烈。这热烈的夏风使人觉得胸襟开阔，使人想起遥远的海边踏浪，想去险峻的高峰歌唱，想在月明风清的夏夜里乘风揽月。朋友，闭上双眼，静静地感受夏风赠给你的这份清爽吧！

“一叶落而知天下秋”。叶落的时候，秋风早来了。“秋风秋雨愁煞人”，可见秋风并不为人们所青睐，况且它还曾大胆地吹破过杜甫的茅屋，怎能不叫人记恨？但不管怎样，我爱秋风，而且偏偏是爱了那伤人而人避犹不及的萧瑟。萧瑟之于我，竟然是一种生命的绝荚。我喜欢在秋日的黄昏，看秋风吹落满枝的枯叶，感受那份叶落归根的留恋。也喜欢在静静的秋夜独自爱步，自由地呼吸凉爽的空气。让秋风拂去我一身的疲惫，还我原来的靖醒。白天难得有放松的时候，但这寂寂黑夜瑟瑟秋风，却让我的心胸开阔而澄清。我爱秋风！

我曾担心过冬风，担心刺骨的冬风会残酷地扼杀一切生命的绿色，担心狂暴的冬风会无情地吹熄萌发生命的灯。可我现在才知道，这种担心是多余的，冬风只是在履行它应尽的责任。试想，如果没有经过刺骨、狂暴的冬风的考验，如果没有经过冬天的洗礼，那生机勃勃的春风又何以出生？

四季之风，给了我太多对生命的感情：春风带给我生命的希冀；夏风告诉我生命的美好；秋风教会我冷静；冬风促使我拼搏。所以，要问我最喜欢哪一种风，我的答案有四种，随便哪一种，都是我的喜爱。正是因为四季之风，我才懂得了生活的道理，得到了生命的许多启示。

生命如风，我爱生命！我爱风！ [page]

[结构点评]

总一分一总：本文结构明晰，呈总一分一总式。开篇总写“我”偏爱风的类型，主体部分依次分别写春风的温馨、夏风的热烈、秋风的潇洒、冬风的狂暴，结尾又总束全文，水到渠成。

二、并列式结构

是从若干方面入笔，不分主次、并列平行地叙述事件、说明事物，或以几个并列的层次论证中心论点的结构方式。其特点是将事件、事物或论题分成几个方面来叙写、说明和议论，每个部分都是独立完整的部分，与其他部分是并列平行关系。

运用并列式结构注意点：

1.并列的几个内容各自独立，又紧紧围绕一个中心。

2.并列的各个部分必须是平行的，要防止各个方面交叉或从属。

小标题式结构也属于其中的一种，在高考中常有佳作。

给感情一把尺

无论何时，月光都会将皎洁的亮色洒向大地，不管它是高是低；无论何地，蒲公英都会把种子撒向大地，不管它是贫瘠还是肥沃；身处“非典”病房的白衣天使们，更是在每个人心里种上了一棵“爱心”树，不管他是敌是友；那么，我们是不是也该给心灵、给情感一把尺，别让感情的亲疏迷乱了你我的良知。

（一）给感情一把尺，给理智一条路；

生活给了我们无数路口，让我们用心去选择，当面临亲与疏的判断之时，该给心灵一把尺，去警示自己凭正义作出选择；该给感情一把尺，别让亲切阻断了我们认识世界和改造世界的长途，让理智的感情伴你人生长途，才会使心更轻松，才会使世界更加美好。

是什么让唐太宗不认亲疏让洱海的风，回纥的幔帐，靺鞨的大风雪吹成民族的团结！

是什么让伽利略不以旧的理论为纲，让真理之步迈进了人类文明的史册！

是什么让贝多芬不成为传统者的奴隶，开创了充满生命豪情的《第九交响乐》！

是感情这把尺，是它让人们不以感情的亲疏，让人类向着迈进；是它让人们不以感情的远近，让人类向着认识真理奔跑；是它让我们给理智一条路，给智慧一条路，给文明一个永恒！

（二）给感情一把尺，给民族一个振兴；

林则徐给感情一把尺，在“中学为体，西学为用”的思想背景下，发起了爱国思想运动，使中华民族的认知向世界迈进；邓小平给感情一把尺，在“一国两制”的伟大构想中，提出了祖国统一的新思路，让中国社会的发展选择了理智；战争中一位位母亲给感情一把尺，为了全民族的胜利，毅然献出了孩儿们的生命，让苦难的民族在鲜血的力量下奋起！

而今啊！战斗在抗“非典”一线的白衣天使们也给心灵一把尺，这把尺需要的不仅仅是奉献与理智，更需要英明果敢的大智，生死相许的大勇，勇于奉献的大义和这悲天悯人的大爱，他们不仅给理智一条路，更给民族精神一个完美的展现，他们无论感情的亲疏，为每一个病人送去了同样的爱！

目光可以忘却感情之尺

蒲公英也可以忘却这把尺

但你千万别忘了用感情之尺去衡量你的心，因为中国民族的振兴需要你用理智思维开辟一条成功之路！

[结构点评]

主体部分以（一）（二）列小标题，从两个方面论述，全文浑然一体。

以上就是小学生学习写作中需要我们了解的写作结构，掌握这些要点内容，我们就一定能够在小学生学习写作时得到更好发挥。所以，希望大家能够认真掌握这些要点知识。

[小学生学习写作需了解作文结构介绍

今天上午，老师告诉我们了一个激动人心的消息：“下午要举行拔河比赛!”我们一听到这个消息，顿时教室里沸腾了起来，同学们你一句，我一句，热火朝天的讨论起下午如何夺冠的事。

盼天盼地，终于盼到了下午。同学们一个个摩拳擦掌，准备和别的班的同学比试比试，看看到底哪班的实力最强。

开始比赛了，一二场我们屡战屡胜，每盘的规则都是三局两胜，而我们都是比赛前两局就赢了，不用再比第三局，直接进入总决赛。而给我印象最深的是第三场决赛。

决赛是，我心里暗暗为自己鼓劲：马绎淳，别紧张，发挥出自己真正的实力，就一定能赢，加油!第一局，不知怎么，很轻松地就拔了过来，不知道对方葫芦里到底卖的什么药?但我们丝毫不敢骄傲和放松警惕，生怕别人钻空子把我们比下去。第二局，我终于知道了他们葫芦里卖的是什么药了，因为他们第一局节省了许多体力，所以我军遭受了拼命的抵抗，是一场持久张。但是，七厘米、六厘米、五厘米……在啦啦队的加油声中，红领巾像一位老爷爷一样缓缓向我们走来。耶!我们赢了!我们成功夺冠了!我们成功了!一声大喊后，我们就像疯子一样，又蹦又跳、又吵又闹，以这种方式来欢庆夺冠。

这一次拔河让我懂得了越是在艰难的时候，越不能放弃，只要不放弃，就能取得最后的成功和胜利。

Jack is a good boy but he doesnt like to use his head. He often says something withou thinking.It makes others unhappy.

Mr. Black teaches math in a school. Hes old now and he likes children.On the Friday Mr. Black doesnt go to work, because hes ill in a hospital. And Jacks mother will see him after dinner. "I want to be there with you." says Jack. "Youre a rude boy. I cant take you there. says his mother. "Dont worry, mum. I wont do that again. Please believe me. " says Jack. In the hospital, Jack says nothing at first. When theyre leaving , he says to Mr. Black, "You look fine. The doctor says youre going to die, but I dont think so. "

The environment has been polluted badly today and the nature punishes the

human being by all kinds of disasters, such as the heavy haze in Beijing, which

damages people’s health. World Environment Day is on June 5th. It pays attention

to call for the public to make an effort to bring the world a clean

environment.

Look at the pollution around us, which exists everywhere. The cars release

the gas which pollutes the air and the rubbish can be found in every corner of

the street. All of these daily incidents hurts the world we live. Especially the

factories, they release the heavy smoke and make the sky becomes dark. What’s

more, the wasted water flows to the clean river.

Though the government has made some action to punish the businessmen for

releasing the polluted sources, they still dare to take the risk of earning the

biggest profit. If we hurt the environment, it will hurt ourselves, because we

live together. The polluted environment threatens our health. If we want to live

the comfortable life, then the only way is to be nice to the environment.