小学英语写作比赛推荐20篇

Be Grateful to Our Parents

Since we were born， many people help us a lot. We should be grateful to their kindness. But the ones we should show our greatest appreciation are our parents. From the first day we appear in their lives， they give us all their love and care， but never expect anything in return. As long as they are there， we do not feel any difficulties， because they are always in front of our shelter， preventing us from difficulties and danger. In order to make our lives better， learn better， they do everything they can to create the best conditions for us， but ignore their own needs. Therefore， we need to cherish parents’ love and repay their upbringing. We should treat them as they treat us.

今天就是英语外研比赛的日子了，我被安排在下午2.30那场，老妈的单位离考场比较近，上午我便跟她去单位值班。

我在老妈的办公室里，一直都在背稿，时间过得很快，稿纸在我的手中不停地抖动，说好的不紧张呢?

简单吃了点饭，老妈看我这副状态，她提议说，咱们提前溜达着去吧，就当散散步。

午后的街道有些冷清，看到不错的景致，老妈竟不忘给我拍张照片啥的，她可真有兴致。不觉中就来到了“宝睿国际未来小学”门口，我们是下午考生中来得最早的。

等了好久一些家长才陪着孩子到来，有接待老师把我们安排在家长等候区，并给选手们讲了些注意事项，接着老师又读了考场名单，我被安排在第三考场。

这是初赛，演讲的内容是自我介绍加才艺表演。我看到有的选手准备得真棒!不光自己化了淡妆，还梳了很复杂很漂亮的辫子，有的还穿了美丽的裙子。有不少同学手里拿了画板，上面是他们精心绘制的图画，他们边指着自己的画边小声念着英语，看来他们的才艺表演一定是用英语介绍自己的画了。而我的才艺显得多么的微不足道，我只打算读一首英文小诗。

上午考完的同学在群里发来信息，他们说很简单，评委主要看你的口语能力，觉得背不好的，也可以直接读，我终于有了一些安心。

马上就轮到我了，听到老师念我名字，稿子在我手中抖的更厉害了。原来考场里只有三位评委老师，但其中有一位外国人。我的心开始咚咚跳个不停，手心也开始冒汗。我刚说一句“Hello everyone.”，三位评委老师便微笑着向我点头示意。他们这一微笑，我反而不自在的很，我僵硬的站在他们面前，机械地象在用英文诵经一般，我甚至听到自己的声音就象一只大苍蝇在我周围嗡嗡着飞，它飞飞停停，停停飞飞，可恶极了。我发现三位评委老师都在低着头，记录着什么，也不知他们听清了这“嗡嗡”声没有。自我介绍环节很快就完了，我看没人看我，便拿出稿子，直接读那首“四季”的小诗。依然没人看我，平时读得一点问题都没有，此时竟卡了好几下，自己都觉得糟糕透顶。

三分钟终于结束了，我向三位评委鞠了躬说了“thank you”之后，心情才平静下来。

因为我是最后一场，所以，我来到家长区没多久，就有老师进来，当场宣布进入复赛的同学名单了。老师神采飞扬，声音洪亮，她说：“非常高兴地通知大家，祝贺以下进入复赛的同学，读到名字的同学也请家长一起上台!”

接着老师便念“张三，李四”，没有我的名字!

我沮丧极了，连为大家鼓掌的力气都没有了。

也许从我站到台上的那一刻就被评委老师“秒杀”掉了。老妈反倒安慰我说：“你在这里登过台，已经很棒了。但一定记住，台上一分钟，台下十年功啊。”

是的，通过参加这次比赛，我也找到了自己努力的方向。

路过一家烘焙店，我说：“老妈，给我买点吃的吧，我要化悲痛为力量!”

To whom it may concern,

I am one of your customers(顾客). I ordered(订购)a set of(一套) Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, thebooks were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To makematters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.

I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every rightto ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money ordeliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of theprocess of your dealing with my complaint.

Lookingforward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

My dog has a furry ears, curls on the head like waves of the sea, a pair of watery eyes, often shaking his tail cute and the.

My dog does not like eating dog food. But like to eat chicken wings, when it is eating chicken wings, it will eat the outer skin, eat the outer Phi, will eat the meat inside to see it eat with relish, I would like to eat a little past.

I go with my dog to play, it is old to love the pee under the trees, it will first smell the tree in a couple of laps, and then lift the back, they began to pee.

It is very cute when sleeping, it will dream! It sometimes put your fingers into his mouth suck it, really funny.

The dog will not sweat, it can use the tongue to heat, sometimes with the abdomen attached to the floor, because the floor is cooler.

This is my lovely puppy ... ... you like it?

【第1篇】掰手腕比赛作文300字

今天，我们作文班举行了一场掰手腕比赛。一听到这个消息，我就慌了起来：千万别遇到大力气的胖子，不然我就输定了。听到和同桌比赛时，我立刻松了口气，因为对方也是个貌不惊人的小男孩。

老师一声令下，比赛开始了。我的对手使出了吃奶力气，脸涨得通红，想一下子把我压倒。我也毫不示弱，早就使出了全身力气，顶住了对方的进攻。用力，再用力，就要把对手掰倒了。可对手不死心，还在一点一点往回掰。我想，对手还挺顽强的。于是我拼尽我最后一点力气，终于把对手掰倒了，我立刻欢呼起来。哈哈，对手的力气也不过如此。最后的胜利一定是我的！

紧跟着开始了第二局。我想一鼓作气掰倒对手，可是他的力气好像长大了一些，我反他被压得动弹不得。看来想和我一决雌雄啊。我们僵持着，谁也奈何不了对方。最后我简直筋疲力尽，手一松动就败下阵来。我想不能骄傲轻敌了。

第三局开始了，我吸取了上一局的教训，作好了打持久战的准备，还不时察看对手的状态。僵持中，我发现对方不在意，便立刻发起大总攻，一下子掰倒了对手。三比二，我赢啦！

【第2篇】掰手腕比赛作文300字

今天阳光明媚，我兴高采烈的来到小桔灯作文班里。

上课了，李老师精神抖擞的来到教室里，对我们说:“今天我们来进行“大力士”比赛。”李老师先宣布规则，然后再点人上来比赛掰手腕。没想到的是，李老师竟然第一个点了我，我的对手是向科中。

比赛要开始了。我心里怦怦的跳个不停，有点紧张，生怕我赢不了他，然后我又想我这么胖，他比我还瘦一些，我一定能赢过他的。

比赛开始了，我们俩先做好比赛姿势，只听老师一声开始，我们俩就掰了起来，我们俩的手腕紧贴在一起，谁也舍不的谁，这时台下响起了同学们的呐喊声， “陈施羽加油！”“向科中加油！”助威中都有自己一份子，我们俩个谁也不‘照顾’谁，使出全身的力气，我们俩的手腕，好像是不稳定的气压表针晃来晃去，我 咬紧牙关，脸涨的通红，时间一分一分的过去，我坚持不住了，晃动也慢了，我被向科中掰下了。接下来的几局中他都赢了，我心里很失望，我埋怨自己，真笨，连 比我瘦的人我就掰不过，我心里很伤心，我想“向科中赢了，他心里一定比吃了蜜还甜。”

不过从这次掰手腕比赛中，我明白了坚持就是胜利，多多锻炼，下次再比的话，我一定要胜过他。

【第3篇】掰手腕比赛作文300字

上作文课的时候，大家一时想不出写作的题材。这时，老师要我们比赛掰手腕。

我们分成两大组，选其中最厉害的一个人代表本组参加比赛。我们这组，自然是我啦。第二组有一个厉害的，叫李飞天。我们俩都号称大力士，两人正虎视眈眈，老师一声令下，“有请两位大力士上场。”

哈，我们两个坐在桌子两侧，这时，只知道一个情况，那就是教室里安静极了。

“开始！”一瞬间，两只手腕较上了暗劲，眼睛死死地盯住了对方，手腕上的青筋全部暴露无遗。如果你不在现场的话，可能看不出来，其实我俩的劲早就对上了，连同全身的力气都聚集在一点。教室里全是加油的声响，而我俩的脸渐渐涨红，猛一看，紫得有点发黑了。

老师与同学们把我俩围得水泄不通，大家屏住呼吸，连一根针掉在地上都能听见。这时，有声音了，是李飞天的牙齿咬得咯咯作响，眼睛恨不得要瞪出来射向我呢。哈，小子，挺不住了吧？我用尽身上的最后一点力气，而且一直在坚持着。渐渐地，李飞天也“飞”不起来了，他的那只手忽然一下就软了，像一只断了根的小树苗，往一边倒了下去。

我赢了！在一片喧闹之中，我恨不得一蹦三尺高……

Elephants are the greatest animals on land. They have strong legs and fan like ears. Although they are very strong, people feel great and powerful; but they also have a cute little eyes.

The elephants long nose is like our small hand, and doing a lot of things can be used. They use their noses to bathe, take things, contact others, and so on. The elephants thick thigh walked up the road and made a heavy sound. Standing next to them, it feels like its very powerful in a five magnitude earthquake.

People may be a little scared when they see giant elephants. In fact, the elephant is a kind and clever animal. If you dont hurt them, they wont hurt you.

The year before, I went to an elephant school in Thailand. Its an elephants paradise. Some Thailand tutors teach elephants to draw, kick, push the trunk, and so on. This kind of animal is not all called "stupid", they are both smart and sensitive. They quickly learn to learn all kinds of activities.

In the performance, every elephant behaves well. The paintings they draw are more beautiful than mine. I feel amazing. A thick and heavy nose can control fine brushes and draw a beautiful picture. The wonderful football match is even more amazing, who would think that the thick leg can kick the ball into "Longmen"!

I rode an elephant and took a bath with them. Im glad to be a good friend of the elephant!

10月3日，我们一家人去河北金融学院观看全国跳伞锦标赛的开幕式。当我们到达学校门口的时候，人们已经陆陆续续的开始检票入场了。

进入校门，我们沿着小路往里走。路的一边是大幅的宣传画，上面满是往期跳伞表演和保定周边旅游景点的照片，另一边是草坪和花坛。走了近三分钟的路，才到达体育场。

体育场内分为A、B、C、D四个区域，D区是主看台，许多嘉宾和领导都就坐在那里；B区是大学生方队，他们穿着统一的黄色T恤衫，非常整齐；A区和C区是普通的观众席。操场上是800米的塑胶红色跑道，跑道中间是一整片人工草坪。工作人员在草坪上布置了一个圆形的厚垫子，作为跳伞运动员的降落点。

开幕式的前几项是各级领导的讲话，我觉得一点也没有意思。将近二十分钟后，终于到了我盼望已久的跳伞表演节目啦！第一个节目是国旗飘扬，只见五名运动员带着国旗和队旗，围绕着操场上空表演。然后是“金龙飞舞”，你知道吗，运动员身后的那条金龙有15米长呢。在“欢庆盛典”和“直隶彩虹”等高难度花样跳伞表演之后，七名女跳伞运动员头戴凤冠，身穿七彩霞衣从800米高空翩然而下，仿佛七仙女缓缓落入草坪，也将整场表演推向了高潮。

今天的跳伞表演真是太精彩了，我真开心！

Hello, everyone.My name is Kevin.I am 12 years old.I have a good friend.He is also 12 years old.He is thin and short.He is 34 kilograms.I am heavier than him.I am 40 kilograms.He is 1.48 metres.I am taller than him.I am 1.55 metres.He likes playing basketball and playing computer games.I like reading books and watching movie.He likes sweet food.I like hot food.He wants to be a PE teacher.I want to be an English teacher.We are good friends forever.

☆定语和状语（时间、地点等）都属于附加成分，在基本句型中一般都不列出。

☆时态包含于句子中，任何句子都有时态。

1主语＋谓语(不及物动词)：S+V

It will rain tomorrow.

He often runs in the morning.

They cried.

Tom exercises every day.

2主语＋谓语(及物动词)＋宾语：S+V+O

I miss my mother very much.

She wants to go home now.

The English club is going to hold an English party.

They all love her.

3主语＋系动词＋表语：S+V+P

The music sounds wonderful.

The leaves have turned red.

She is a student.

We keep silent about that.

4主语＋谓语(及物动词)＋间接宾语（人）＋直接宾语（物）：S+V+IO+DO

The teacher gave a book to him.=The teacher gave him a book.

They told me an interesting story.

The waitress offered me a bottle of wine.

My father will buy me a bike.=My father will buy a bike for me.

Miss Smith teaches us English.

5主语＋谓语(及物动词)＋宾语＋宾语补足语：                                      S+V+O+C

They call me Xiao Wang.

I saw him swimming in the river.

We elected him monitor of the class.

Is the beginning of the eight month, the weather suddenly cold, not for a long time, durian snow drop from the clouds. After a while, the snow is big, like someone with feather million pots from heaven.

The snowflakes are hexagonal, and the speed of falling is very fast. Soon, Linyi City snow, trees, houses, the earth seemed covered with snow, like covered with a white blanket, covered with white cotton. All of a sudden, the voice of a cloud aunt was heard from the sky, "Hey, hey! You have a little mischievous struggle, do not go down together, otherwise, it will be a disaster! Look, the cars are all skid and crawling like snail. Look at the river, the people did not go boating!"

I came to the Riverside Avenue station, enjoy the beauty of the Yihe River Trail in the woods. Snow sprint like Olympic athletes like Liu Xiang, rushed into the river, along the Yi River south to travel. Looking at it, the beauty of nature in the snow has come into my eyes, and it is in my heart. The original paved with red brick trail, has now been completely covered with thick snow, like a white carpet, step up soft, also creaked! Look at the Yellow alfalfa, has been formed by the snow "quilt" pressure to breathe out of breath. The bare trunk of the tree also fell on the snow, the wind blew and the little trees shook their bodies, and the snow babies were able to join the brothers on the ground. I raised my head and saw a lot of lovely little snowflakes in the sky rushing to meet my brother. Yes, how happy it is to have a family reunion. At this time, I thought of Taiwan. The dear motherland is a chicken mother lying in the nest. She has two babies, one is Hainan, and the other is Taiwan. Now, Taiwan slips out of the nest, and the mother and Hainan are anxious to come back to Taiwan...

I crouched down, with the hand group made a big snowball, at high altitude, it descends at full speed, open floor million lotus.

The snow has brought a lot of fun to the children.

The snow was neither fast nor slow underground, I left the snow Riverside Avenue, leaving a trail of footprints on the snow.

i have a beautiful school.

in the spring,the weather become warmer and warmer.and the trees become green.some birds are singing on the trees.the flowers are open.some butterflies are fly over the flowers.in the fall,the weather is windy.the leaves of trees like butterflies are in the sky.

英语作文在小学英语考试中占的分值比例较大，如何写好英语作文，成为小学师生和家长关注的重点。小编整理了小学阶段各年级的英语作文，供大家参考，希望对大家有所帮助！

I am a girl of ten, and I live in a small mountain village far from Taiyuan. The only person that lives with me is my mother, because my father is away for eight years, working in a city.

During the Spring Festival, my father came back home. He looked thin and tired. He gave my mother two thousand yuan, and told her that he would work even harder, earn more money, and then he could take us to the city He stayed at home for only ten days.We are living a poor life now. But what I want most is not money, but my father. I miss him very much!

In our common home - the earth, life with a lot of animal, which animal do

you like? Anyway, my favorite animal is our most loyal friend - a dog.My

favorite is my neighbors dog that Beijing BaGou yuan yuan and collie handsome.

They play together every day, it is a good friend of a stick dozen not

scattered, I also like them, they saw I was shaking his tail towards

me.Handsome shape tiger is big, the body is about more than 60 centimeters

long. Two leg, capable to my shoulders, his eyes, nose, mouth, ears are much

older than yuan yuan, I most like to see him running figure - curly float in the

sky, like a nice horse. I often and yuan yuan, running with the handsome, every

time is handsome first, second, I am the third round. Can literally, handsome

running faster than thoroughbred horse. Average dog ran up, send out "clicking"

sound, but handsome rans voice is very small, not carefully is inaudible. The

appearance of the handsome run is also very handsome, curly, bow shaped body. If

you want to use a word to describe talent, that is: handsome. If you use a word

that was impeccable.Compared with the handsome, round shape is much smaller,

only 30 centimeters in length and a half smaller than talent. The meaning of his

name from his eyes, it is too round. Like a shiny black stones. And his legs are

very round and round this is name. And his legs are very short, so even if he

runs, casting its foot also run fast, but I still like him very much the kind of

simple and lovely.This is what I like animals, do you like?

奥运开幕已经四天了，我国已经夺得了9枚金牌，昨天女子三米双人跳水又夺金牌，人们欢呼雀跃。

我国选手郭晶晶、吴敏霞双双搭对，站在三米跳板上，场内观众用热烈的掌声欢迎他们两人的出场。她们凭着多年经验，第一跳，沉着像银燕跳入水中，得到了52。80分。第二跳，她们两人活如海豚，完美落入水中，得到了57。60分的好成绩。第三跳，向内翻腾两周半，像雄鹰俯冲向下并落入水中，得到75。60分。第四跳反身翻腾两周半，像翠鸟捉鱼，干净利落的入水，得了81。90分的好成绩，最后一跳郭晶晶、吴敏霞轻如鸿毛，缓缓落入水中得了75。60分，总分343。50分，轻松夺冠，俄罗斯居二，德国居三，我国两名选手为国争光，再创辉煌。当记者采访时，她们热泪盈眶对记者说：“感谢祖国的培养，教练热心教导，全国人民的支持，再加上自己的坚持、努力、拼搏两人互相合作，才能夺得今天的这枚宝贵金牌。

别看这枚小小的金牌，她们付出了多少的汗水，这是来之不易的，真是“台上一分种，台下十年功”，艰苦的锻炼迎来今天的荣誉。

[看女子跳水比赛小学作文

Last week,one of classmates said,"do you want a bet?" I asked,"what for?" the classmate replied,"do you dare to had a running race with Tony." I answered,"Why not?" Unfortunately,I lost the running race,because I dint know he was a good runner,and Tony ran so fast.Before running race,I bet him $$200.00 that I would win for the running race.In fact,I not only lost the competition,but also lost $$200.00.

今年的“六一”节，我们学校举行了盛大的跳绳比赛，要求全校师生参加。我怀着无比激动的心情等到了这个令人难忘的日子。

下午，阳光格外明媚，跳绳比赛开始了。比赛分为跳大绳、跳花绳、单人跳等等。先是单人跳绳比赛，同学们手执跳绳站在了场地上，随着裁判一声令下，只见同学们各自拿出自己的看家本事，用力地跳着，豆大的汗珠“吧嗒吧嗒”滴下来，拉拉队在一旁不停地喊着，“加油！加油！”的助威声此起彼伏，参赛的同学听了更加卖力地跳，个个就像奥运会上的运动健儿一样。

比赛一轮轮过去了，终于轮到我了，我拿着跳绳站在自己的位置上，整装待发。只听一声哨响，一分钟计时开始了。要知道，我根本就不会跳，但是为了集体的荣誉，我还是尽自己最大努力，再加上我的同学不停地给我加油，使我精神倍增，信心十足，更加努力地跳。很快，我就出汗了，觉得胳膊发酸，腿部疼痛，但我还是坚持地跳着，终于，裁判说了一声：“停！时间到！”我才长长地舒了一口气。后来一问老师才知道，自己只跳了16下。虽然成绩不高，但也为班级争得了荣誉。我暗暗下定决心：下次跳绳比赛我一定会做的更好。

下面的比赛更加精彩，一个同学在跳大绳时，一不小心差点摔着，好险啊！大家都为他捏了一把汗。跳花绳比赛十分激烈，各班同学花样百出，真是八仙过海，各显神通。有单腿跳、跑步跳、倒着跳、、、、观众的呼声一浪高过一浪.

最后平均分出来了，我们班得了120分，虽然分数不高，但重在参与。我们迫切希望以后多举办一些这类健康、开发智力，有助于锻炼身体的益智性比赛，让我们在紧张的学习之余多一些参与，多一些竞争、快乐，多一些体现团结、合作的集体精神。

美好的一天

June 13thFriday

It is a fine day today. There are some clouds in the sky， but the sun is

shining. Mr Jones is with his family. They are walking on the bridge. There are

some boats on the river. Mr Jones and his wife are looking at them. Sally is

looking at a big ship. The ship is going under the bridge. Tim is looking at an

aeroplane. The aeroplane is flying over the river.

今天，天气晴朗，空中有少许云朵，天阳在照耀着。琼斯先生和他的家人在一起。她们在桥上走着，河面上有几艘小船，琼斯先生和他的夫人正看着它们，莎莉正看着一艘大船。它正从桥下经过。蒂姆在看着一架飞机，这架飞机正从河上空飞过。

Everybody will meet all kinds of difficulties during their lives, of

course, they are willing to accept success, but the fact is that no one can win

all the time, they will meet failure now and then. Fail is an unpleasant thing

to face, people treat fail a bad thing. While for me, I think we can learn from

failure and be a better man.

Everyone is afraid of facing failure, because failure brings them the sense

of frustration. When facing failure, people choose to avoiding talking about it,

they feel that they will be looked down upon by others. Indeed, no one likes to

failure anything, they want to be successful all the time.

If people change their idea about failure, they can see the positive side.

There is an old saying that failure is the mother of success, which means that

people will learn from failure and make preparation for the success. So failure

is not that hard to face, if people take right attitude towards it, they will

gain success soon.

In a word, failure is not a bad something, it can bring success, only if

people treat it right.

This is Lin. She is from Beijing. She studies very hard.In class she can answer theteachers questions very quickly. Lin loves her classmates and often helps them with their lessons. Everybody says she is a very good monitor.

星期天，可爱的小表弟来我们家玩，他已经四岁多了，正是牙牙学语的时候。

这天他来我们家，竟然还背了个小书包，可把我乐坏了，他说要来我们家学习。这么个小不点儿，学什么习哟，话都还没学会几句，我倒真想看看他来我们家学什么！？他从书包里“哗”地抽出一本大大的彩图书，我定睛一看，原来是一本英文字母入门书呀！小表弟说：“哥哥，这是我们幼儿园发的，我要哥哥教教我！”“得了吧，你普通话都说不准，还想学什么英语呀？”小表弟一看我凶巴巴的样子，立即准备泪汪汪，一副可怜巴巴的样子。我真怕他那哇哇大哭的声响，立马连声说：“好好好！哥哥教你！哥哥教你！”小表弟立即破涕为笑。我从A一直到Z，一个一个让他跟我读，他虽然读一点都不标准，有好几个几乎是“南辕北辙”，但看他那副认认真真的样子，真叫人不忍心批评他。我又重新从头教他读，他读写读写，便开始东张西望起来，不一会儿就跑去玩玩具了。我逗他：“快过来，哥哥没教完呢！”他已经假装听不见，自顾自地玩着。

哎，这个小表弟呀，真是又可爱又调皮！

[小学作文弟弟学英语

打好写作基础，练好写句子的基本功，要从把句子写完整、具体、通顺、连贯这几方面做起。下面是小学生写作基础，为大家提供参考。

一、把句子写完整

怎样的句子才算是完整的呢？读读下面的句子：

1.我们劳动。(谁，干什么)

2.小蚂蚁运送食物。(什么，干什么)

3.哥哥是一名少先队员。(谁，是什么)

不难看出：在一般情况下，句子是由两部分组成的，前半部分交代“谁”或“什么”，后半部分交代“做什么”“怎么样”或者“是什么”。前后两部分说全了，句子才算是一句完整的话。

需要强调说明的是：知道什么是完整句，怎样的句子才算完整，这只是一个知识性的问题;落实在行动上，即平日在说每一句话，在写每一句话时，都要认真思考，反复斟酌，提高“完整”意识，不写残缺不全的句子，这才是最重要的。

二、把句子写具体

句子要完整，这是首要的。但在许多时候，句子只做到“完整”是不能准确表达意思的，还要做到“具体”。怎样的句子才算是具体的呢?读读下面这几组句子，体会一下：

第一组：

1、爸爸做工。

2.爸爸在工厂里做工。

分析：第二句写清了爸爸在哪儿做工。

第二组：

1.小蜜蜂飞来。

2.夏日，一只金色的小蜜蜂从远处嗡嗡地飞来。

分析：第二句写清什么时候，有多少，什么样，从哪儿，怎么样。

由上面这两组句子可以看出：在句子主要成分的前面或后面，写清什么时候(时间)、有多少(数量)、在什么地方或从哪儿(地点)、什么样(形状或颜色)、怎么样(态势)、达到什么程度(情境)等，就写清了事物外形特点、活动特点，就把自己要准确表达的意思写出来了，这就叫做把句子写具体。这样的句子就算是完整、具体的句子。

学习把句子写具体，这是一项极为重要的技能，需要同学们抓住人物或事物的特点，准确运用词语，进行持久练习。

三、把句子写通顺

句子通顺，就是句意明白，读得顺口。具体来说，句子通顺包括以下几个方面：

1.用词要准确，经得起推敲。例如：我们把门口的泥土消除掉了。句中，“泥土”不能“消除”，只能“清除”掉。

2.句中词语排列的顺序要合理。例如：正在花上，有几只漂亮的蝴蝶翩翩起舞。这句话改成“有几只漂亮的蝴蝶，正在花上翩翩起舞”,句子就通顺了。

3.词语使用搭配要得当。例如：公园里生长着各种树木和五颜六色的鲜花。句中“生长”和“鲜花”两词搭配不当，应改为“公园里生长着各种树木，盛开着五颜六色的鲜花”。

4.句中各词语的意思不能自相矛盾。例如：我断定他大概是王小刚的哥哥。句中“断定”与“大概”矛盾，应删掉“大概”。

5.关联词语的使用恰到好处。例如：只有天下雨，地才会湿。“下雨”不是“地湿”的唯一条件，因此，第一句应改为：只要天下雨，地就会湿。

6.句意明白，合乎实际，符合情理。例如：博物馆里展出了五千多年前新出土的文物。说“五千多年前新出土的文物”不合实际，应改为：博物馆里展出了新出土的五千多年前的文物。

四、把句子写连贯

连贯，即句子之间连接贯通。显然，把句子写连贯，这是指写几句话(又叫“句群”)来说的。

翻开某些同学的作文本，段落中上下句不连贯的现象比比皆是，主要表现在：句子之间无顺序，承接不紧密，跨度大;上下句之间，被描述的对象(即“主语”)重复出现，不会运用“他(她)”或者“它”这些人称代词。怎样才能做到把句子写连贯呢?

1.合理安排顺序，使句子连贯。

有顺序，这是写几句意思连贯的话的最基本的要求。这就要求我们，在写几句话时，一定不能东一句、西一句，想到哪儿就写到哪儿;总要围绕既定的中心意思，按照一定的顺序，把相关的句子组织在一起，使句子前后连贯。

2.学会运用“他(她)”或“它”这些人称代词，使句子连贯。

读读下面这段话，想一想，有什么毛病，怎样说才好：

妈妈的衣袖破了。妈妈赶忙从抽屉里拿出一个小布包。妈妈先从布包里拿出一根针，一根青线，用牙咬了咬线头，把线头穿过针眼。妈妈又从布包里找出一小块布，贴在破了的地方，然后一针一线地缝起来。

读后，大家一定会发现：这几句话写的对象是妈妈，主要写的是妈妈缝补衣服时所作的准备工作，是按事情经过的先后顺序排列的。只是由于这四句话的开头重复出现“妈妈”一词，因此读起来显得很拗口。如果把后面三句开头中的“妈妈”改成“她”字，这几句话就连贯多了。

这就告诉我们：在几个句子里，如果写的是同一个人物(或事物)，后面再指这个人物(或事物)时，就可以用“他(她)”或“它”来代替。