小学英语写作比赛精品20篇

The time of middle school is short and precious, but for some students,

they sit in the class and dont show any passion to learn knowledge. They like

to do something that is against what teachers tell them to do. Such as when the

teacher is presenting knowledge, they choose to read novel, or when it is the

time for them to do some exercise, they sleep. They dont care about study. It

is so negative for them to treat study. We are young and should be full of

energy. It is the best time for us to gain knowledge. What we learn today will

help us to realize our dreams, so lets fight for our goals.

小学生的写作是长期以来广大同学与语文教师既关心又感到困惑的问题。下面是小编分享的小学生写作的要点，一起来看一下吧。

【写人作文】

1、抓住人物特点，对人物外贸描写做到形神兼备。

只要善于观察，就会发现每个人的外貌都与别人不同，外貌特点，如容貌，神态，姿态，服饰等，往往反映着人物不同的个性和心理。

这些特点的描写要做到时刻为文章的中心服务，外貌描写应力求做到符合人物的年龄，身份，经历和个性，决不能出现千人一面的倾向。

２、把握人物特点，注意对人物语言的描写，要做到言为心声。

在生活中，人们的个性，职业，年龄及所出的时间，环境和地位不同，说出的话也不会完全相同。一个人的语言，就是他思想感情最直接的流露，因此，一定要注意人物的语言描写，时刻做到言为心声。

３、要选择恰当的事例。

选择事例时，不要认为能表现人物思想品质的事例一定都是惊天动地的大事，应该选择有代表性的日常生活中的平凡小事，以小事来表现主题，体现中心。

【记事作文】

此类文章，是指以写事为中心，，通过对事情的描写，反映人物思想，社会变化等问题。

１、写清楚事情发展的先后顺序，使叙事具有完整性。

写好记事作文的基本要求就是，要按事情的发展规律，把事情交待清楚。也就是交待清楚事情发生的时间，地点，人物，发生，发展和结果这六大要素。

要想文章内容完整，主题明确，六点中的事情的起因，发展和结果最为重要。

２、注意选择能突出文章中心的典型材料。

小学生写记事作文，一般都是些自己身边的熟人的平凡小事，那么，就应该越具体越好。生活中的小事很多，要从中选择最典型，最具有代表性的事例，来表达文章要求的深刻道理和闪光思想。

进行描写时，应对事件的成因，人物的行动等进行细节描写，特别是对文章的重要部分，如事情发展的关键时刻和高潮部分，应该写得越具体越好。

【写景作文】

１、要善于观察，找出景物独有的特点。

观察就是运用人的各种器官如视，听，触，嗅，味觉等来感知事物。观察时，要细致，要学习抓住景物的特点，也就是找出观察景物与其他不同类景物及同类景物之间的区别。应从不同角度入手，写准景物，写活景物。

２、注意描写表达，使景物活灵活现。

要对景物进行描写，最重要的就是对景物的顺序描写不能乱。可按景物的空间顺序来写，如左，右，前，后，东，西等方位。也可以时间顺序来写，如一天之内的早，中，晚，以年内的春，夏，秋，冬等。还可以按游览顺序来写。

３、必须真实，达到写景抒情的境界。

【状物作文】

１、对物体形态的描写要逼真。

首先应当写好物体的外形，要注意全面。每个物体都是由许多部分组成的，缺少了那一部分，就不是完整的物体，但应根据物体的外形特点，分清主次，突出重点来写。

２、要做到生动有趣，条理清楚。

３、文章结尾可以托物言志，寄予作者情感。

这一点不是文章的重心，只需在结尾点出即可。

【想象作文】

１、想象要一现实生活为基础。

想象作文把人们提前带入未来社会，但未来的发展不可能离开现代社会的基础。

２、想象要以广博的知识为基础。

想象的内容可以十分大胆，但应该建立在科学知识的基础上。

【看图作文】

１、细致全面的观察分析图画，是理解图意的前提。

观察图画可分三步：一是总观全图，按顺序依次观察，使之对画面有一个总体上的认识。二是观察分析图中的人物和背景。背景不同，人物活动的主题就不同，文章立意就会不同。三是观察分析细节，特别是人物的表情和动作。

２、对画面展开充分的想象和联想。

例如人物情节画，可根据画面表现的主要情节，设想出事情的开始，经过，结果，再把事情串联起来，并构思出具体情节，推测人物的内心活动，想象人物的语言。

注意想象的内容千万不能离开中心任意发挥。

３、学习准确抓住图画的中心思想来描述。

【读后感作文】

１、要认真读懂原文。对原文的中心思想应进行深入的研究，这样才能领会到别人没有领会到的东西，为发表观点打好基础。

２、要精炼的简述原文。

写读后感一定要紧扣原文，交待清除感的来源，可直接摘抄原文中的重点句，然后写感想，也可以间接叙述原文内容，点出感情从哪里产生的。

注意不能大量引用原文，应做到叙述精炼。

３、要真实具体，有感而发。

要抓住体会最深的一点，联系实际，展开联想，有感而发。

a diary of my birthday

today is my nine-year-old birthday. i am very happy, because my father buys a big cake for me and my sister just comes to guangzhou . after dinner , my family celebrate my birthday .

i make a wish and blow out the candles . do you want to know my wish ? let me tell you , i wish i can study harder and harder ,then get the no.1 in our class. then i cut the cake and my family share the cake with me . how nice today!!!

今天，我约好和小明、小方、小刚、小和、小凯他们一起到楼下踢足球。

我们六个人分成两组，小方、小和跟我一组，小刚、小凯跟小明一组。为叙述方便，下面将会用一号、二号、三号代表我方球员，七号、八号、九号代表对方球员。比赛规则：连续进两球的一方获胜，输的一方每人罚做十个俯卧撑。

比赛开始了，九号将球射向我方球门，三号立即用脚给用力地踢了回去，就这样的一踢，球滚到了对方七号脚下，他飞起一脚想大脚解围，不料皮球翻转了180°——不但没踢出去，还一下子把球给踢进自家球门了!

“哈哈哈!乌龙球啊!进球啦!……”我方的球员高兴地欢呼道。

进了乌龙球的对方球员两眼好像放着光——让人看到都害怕的光，因为再失一球就要罚做俯卧撑了，对方肯定想尽力扳回一球，看来这局将会很难打!

果然不出所料，对方只用一个前锋，其余的两人加强防守。

比赛重新开始，由赢了一球的我方发球。一号的我带起球，向对方球门冲过去，七号想跑过来阻挡我，但一不小心一个趔趄把他给弄摔倒了，看到这场景，我不禁放慢了速度。而对方九号趁机冲上来将球抢了过去，并带球迅速冲向我方球门。我方二号想拦住他，但又不知道该如何拦住，就在他思考的一瞬间，九号就已经将球挑高过人，直奔球门了，我方三号神情严肃，好像在推测九号将会从哪个角度射门，九号带球到了球门前，一脚劲射，皮球直奔我方球门!

“pa”我方守门员三号成功地接住了球，然后迅速地将球抛向了离对方球门不远的我的脚下，我接球后将球一扣，摆脱了对方八号的拦截，接着一个虚晃，就在对方七号还在迷惑之际，我将球轻巧推射死角——“赢了，赢了!”第一轮我方获胜，对方每人做俯卧撑十个。

经过短暂的休息后，双方又再次热情地投入到第二轮的比赛当中…

During the winter vacation, nothing is different for my life. I wake up 11

oclock Am everyday, after a washing, I have a good lunch with my parents. Next

I play computer games till the time to have supper. After have dinner. I go on

playing till 2 oclock Am, and then go to sleep with tired. This is one dull day

of my winter vacation.

But I havent bored all the time. Sometimes I read the books, sometime I

listen to the music or the radio in the bed, because it was very cold outside

and snowy all the day. And I also meat some of my good friends during the

vacation, we have a very long talk about the life of each other in the past year

and play table tennis tegether. And I watched the spring festival party of the

CCTV in the last seconds of the 2004 year! I think this is the thing most people

of china doing at that time.

Thats all, all my dull, coldly and snowy winter vacation.

I love computers. Love to what extent, I saw a computer, just like a sweet

drink, as is pleased to want to jump up. I am not like other people who love

playing computer games, I love to paint on the computer.

I remember just started painting on the computer, the mouse does not always

listen to my disposal, I make it point to the document, it refers to another

document or on a roll or several far. Especially in the painting, the mouse不听使唤,

from graphics to painting especially difficult, from the painting I want much. I

repeated practice in the paper how to make the mouse and pen painting painting

painting on paper, the work pays off, and now, I have already use the mouse to

draw a beautiful painting of the painting.

Dealing with regular and computer, the most headache is encountered in a

computer virus. However, I now have to deal with them, and often kill antivirus

antivirus software on it. What if you have a better way, tell me as soon as

possible.

我的狗狗(My Dog)

I have a dog. Its name is Doggy. I like it.

Doggy has two big eyes, two small ears, a big nose and a small mouth. Its black and white. It has a short tail. Its cute and lovely.

Doggy is strong. It likes bones, rice and meat very much. My dog is lazy. It can catch a ball. I love my dog very much.

【参考翻译】

我有一只狗。它的名字叫狗狗。我喜欢它。

狗狗有两只大大的眼睛，两只小小的耳朵，一个大鼻子和小嘴巴。它是黑色和白色。它有一个短尾巴。它很可爱和可爱。

狗是强大的。它喜欢骨头，米饭和肉。我的狗很懒。它可以接球。我非常爱我的狗。

The Dragon Boat Festival ,also called the Duanwu Festival ,is celebrated on

the fifth day of the fifth month according to the

Chinese calendar.People always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat

races to celebrate it.

The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the

southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. It ís very popular.

The rice dumpling is made of glutinous rice,meat and so on. You can eat

different kinds of rice dumplings.They are very delicious.

And Dragon Boat Festival is for Qu Yuan. He is an honest minister who is

said to have committed suicide by drowning himself in a river.

Overall, the Dragon Boat Festival is very interesting!

端午节，又称端午节，是庆祝第五个月的第五天，根据中国的农历。人们总是吃粽子和赛龙舟来庆祝它。

该节是最知名的龙舟比赛，尤其是在有很多河流和湖泊的南部地区。它很受欢迎的。

粽子是由糯米饭，肉类等。你可以品尝不同种类的粽子。它们很好吃。

龙舟节是屈原。他是一个诚实的大臣已承诺在溺水自杀河。

总的来说，端午节是非常有趣的!

端午节的英语小学作文带翻译15

The Dragon Boat Festival， also called the Duanwu Festival， is celebrated on

the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. This

festival is to commemorate the death of QU Yuan， an upright and honest poet and

statesman who is said to have committed suicide by drowning himself in a

river.

The most important activity of this festival is the Dragon Boat races. It

symbolizes people‘s attempts to rescue Qu Yuan. In the current period， these

races also demonstrate the virtues of cooperation and teamwork.

Besides， the festival has also been marked by eating zong zi (glutinous

rice)。 Zong zi is made of glutinous rice stuffed with different fillings and

wrapped in bamboo or reed leaves. People who mourned the death of Qu threw Zong

zi into the river to feed his ghost every year.

With the changes of the times， the memorial turns to be a time for

protection from evil and disease for the rest of year. People will hang healthy

herbs on the front door to clear the bad luck of the house. Although the

significance of the festival might be different with the past， it still gives

the observer an opportunity to glimpse a part of the rich Chinese cultural

heritage.

端午节,又称为端午节,定在第五个月的第五天据中国日历。这个节日是为了纪念屈原的死,一个忠厚老实的诗人和政治家据说在河流溺水自杀。

这个节日最重要的活动是龙舟竞赛。它象征着人们的努力救屈原。在当前时期,这些比赛也证明合作和团队合作的优点。

此外,节日还被吃的粽子(糯米)。粽子是糯米做的塞满了不同的馅料包在竹叶或芦苇叶。人哀悼屈原的死亡把粽子扔进河里喂他的鬼魂。

随着时代的变化,纪念转向防止邪恶和疾病是一个时间的。人们会把健康的草药挂在前门清理房子的坏运气。虽然这个节日的意义可能与过去不同,它仍然使观察者看到的机会丰富的中国文化遗产的一部分。

It is neither genius nor extraordinary ability that gives us power to deal

with and overcome whatever hardship one is confronted with.2、As in the picture,

the athlete is running, with a determined spirit, towards the finishing line in

order to obtain the gold medal, considered as the symbol of success for any

sportsman.I most like the human is Liu Xiang 。 the famous athlete Liu Xiang

striding forward in the Olympics Games in Athens. Determination is universally

regarded asa highly praised quality. It is neither genius nor extraordinary

ability that gives us power to deal with and overcome whatever hardship one is

confronted with. It is this kind of spirit that enables us to endure the

difficult moments and attain our goals.

The determined spirit gives us light when we are in dark moments and

encourages when we are frustrated. With this quality, no enemy can overwhelm us,

and noobstacles can stand in our way. There are many examples of success being

achieved solely through the strong will of the spirit. As in the picture, the

athlete is running, with a determined spirit, towards the finishing line in

order to obtain the gold medal, considered as the symbol of success for any

sportsman. It is determination that leads to success. ?

It is not easy to cultivate this determined spirit. To do this, we must

establish a firm faith in our actions and be ready to devote ourselves to them.

We must boldly go through trials and hardships to train our will so as to get

rid of the weak points of our moral character. Around us, there are quite a few

people with this intense determination and spirit and set a good example for us

to follow.

今天中午，我放学时遇见了何群，我和他谈论着乒乓球的事儿，这时顾朝阳插了窜了出来，冒了一句话，“何群的乒乓球还没他的乒乓球技术好。”这一说我到没事，何群却恼了，说：“好，我今天下午和他比一场乒乓球赛，看谁厉害。”顾朝阳说：“我做裁判。”

中午回家我想了一下：都是顾朝阳，在何群面前夸什么海口，如果输了怎么办，那我太没面子了，怎么找个台阶给自己下……一大串问题围着我转。

过了一个漫长的下午，我刚回去，何群说：“这么慢，我都等你半天了。”顾朝阳又神不知鬼不觉的冒了出来说：“比赛怎能忘了我这个裁判？”何群漫不经心的说：“来比赛。”我坚定有力地说：“好。”我心里其实也挺害怕的，但就算有一丝希望，我也要从哪里钻出去。

开始比赛了，还是老规矩11个球，一人发两个球。这一次我失去了平常的节奏，我打到我5他2时才知道错在哪，我打着打着又完全乱了脚步，我默默地从新找感觉，终于感觉找到了！但那时已我9他3，我用尽全力终于扳回来了11比11。

最后一球，周围鸦雀无声，只听见风轻轻吹过的声音，我们打着打着，突然何群脚崴了一下，跌倒时的一瞬间，一面是打来的球，一面是朋友的跌倒，我不再考虑，我直奔何群，把何群扶了起来，我说：“我输了。”何群摇着头说：“不，是你赢了，我赢得的是称号，你应得的却是爱心。”说完我们俩一起笑了。

我终于明白友谊第一，比赛第二。

……

[小学生作文：友谊第一，比赛第二

校运动会的足球比赛马上就要开始了，本届进入决赛的两个队伍分别来自高年级的六(1)班和六(6)班。

双方队员进场了，只见六(1)班的队员身穿红色的运动服，个个生龙活虎;六(6)班的队员身穿蓝色运动服，人人也都身强力壮。双方队员都摩拳擦掌，火药味很浓。

随着裁判的一声哨响，比赛开始了。刚一开战，双方就展开了激烈地拼抢。两边队员有的倒地铲球，有的飞身冲抢，还有的跃起头球……足球就这样在中场传来传去，都无法迫近对方的球门。场外的拉拉队员大声呐喊着，有的在为自己班级加油助威，有的则在为精彩的传球鼓掌叫好。比赛进行到一大半的时候，僵局终于被六(6)班的3号队员打破，他在队友的帮助下带球来到六(1)班的球门前，凌空飞起一脚，六(1)班的守门员扑救不及，足球不偏不倚钻入了网窝。“进球啦!进球啦!”六(6)班的队员们兴奋极了，他们紧紧拥抱在一起，观众们也都激动地站起来为他们鼓掌喝彩。

比赛继续进行，六(1)班为了扳回比分展开了猛烈的进攻，但在六(6)班的顽强防守下都无功而返。比赛结束的哨音响起，最终六(6)班以1分险胜对手。

啊，这真是一场精彩的足球比赛啊!

回想起六年级，我最喜欢的就是那场拔河比赛......

那天，我们被老师带去了操场。操场上，一条大粗绳子压在了操场当中的两条白线上，绳子中间扎着一条红领巾儿。谁能把绳子中的红领巾拉向自己一边的白线，谁就赢了。老师把我们全班分成两队，一对是拉拉队，一对是拔河运动员。这些运动员个个摩拳擦掌，跃跃欲试。想试试自己的力气。

“预备”裁判员大喊一声。双方都抓紧了绳子。

“嘟——”哨声响了，比赛正式开始。

比赛开始了，大家互不相让，刚开始就来了个硬碰硬，绳子绷得紧紧的，红领巾停在中间不动了。就在这时，我们为拔河运动员加油，一下子又鼓起了他们吃奶的力气。红领巾一会儿向他们那边移，一会儿又向我们这边移，我们双方互不相让。你看，我们队的队员一个个脸胀得红红的，咬牙切齿，憋着气，向身后仰。而对方与动员的汗也

“吧嗒、吧嗒”的往下淌，但都顾不上擦，大家只想取得这次胜利。

渐渐地，渐渐地，绳子向对方那边移动，我们怎么也拉不过来，最后，我们输了。

我们吸取了失败的教训，因为我们动作不一致，配合不默契，所以才失败了。

交换场地再战。这次我们吸取了失败的教训，终于赢了。同学们也欢呼，跳跃着，享受这次胜利的喜悦。

对方不服，要求再战，老师说：“这项比赛体力消耗很大，不能再战了，过几天你们再战吧。”

通过这次拔河比赛，我明白了一个道理，无论做生么事，只要齐心协力，就一定能战胜困难。团结就是力量。

Mid-autumn Festival is a popular and important lunar harvest festival

celebrated by Chinese people. The festival is held on the 15thday of the eighth

month in the Chinese calendar. There are some traditions in this holiday. For

example, people would have a big dinner with their families. After dinner, they

often enjoy the full moon which is round and bright. The other tradition of

mid-autumn festival is eating moon cake. Moon cake is the essential of that day,

which means reunion. As time goes by, there are various kinds of moon cakes, but

they are much more expensive than before. I like mid-autumn festival because my

families will get together and have a big dinner on that day.

After finishing my homework I went to the Tai Mountian with my friends during my holiday. When we got near the Tai Mountain by buswe were very excited. We planned to get on the top of the Tai Mountain. Next we began to walk we to the foot of the mountian. There were many visitors there. And all of us enjoyed the beautiful views beside the steps. At last we reached the top.Not only we had a picnic there but also we took several picturestoo.

Though we were very tiredwe were very happy about that trip.

A pair of flexible eyes, long under the crooked eyebrows, a high nose, a red mouth, showing two neat teeth, and a long hair and medium height. This is me, I have a characteristic, rectifies it.

Once, my uncle went to my home and bought a lot of things, including my favorite fruit, drink, summer bar... Wait for the fruit and snack. Mother knew that the uncle came to our house and went to the small shop to buy some things to entertain the guests. My mother and uncle talked happily. In the face of these delicious things, I secretly took them to eat, eat and eat when they didnt pay attention to them. I had eaten them, but I didnt think they had eaten a lot. Still have to be criticized by the mother, the uncles are not stop to help me, really humiliated. Ever since I learned that lesson, it will never happen again.

I have a lot of hobbies, such as badminton, chess, playing cards, Internet, chat... And so on is my hobby. I have a lot of talent, want to jump rubber band, once took fourth place, as well as writing, writing "Yiyanqianjin" won 2 prize.

Like my character, I like to love a lot of fun.

This is me.

I hope everyone likes me.

小学六年级秋游英语作文1

Perhaps autumn is the most pleasant season of the year. The weather is neither too hot nor too cold. It is the best time for going on a trip.

Last Sunday we went to the countryside. There was golden wheat all over the fields/The fields were covered with golden wheat. Large and colourful apples and pears were hanging on the trees. We could see some peasants were busy getting in the crops in the fields， and others were picking fruits under the trees. All the baskets were full of lovely fruits. It was also the fruit of the peasants labour. No pains， no gains. What a magnificent/beautiful picture! It seemed as if we were wandering in a splendid/wonderful world.

I love autumn. I love the harvest time.

小学六年级秋游英语作文2

I always dream about returning to the past. As many people say, childhood is the happiest and easiest time in one’s life.

Children show you their true emotions. They know what is compassion and what is tolerance better than adults. In their world, all real thoughts are presented. They may easily have different opinions with others, but they never understand what is animosity. They enjoy making friends but they never think about making social communication net. Every child talks from the bottom of his heart without evil plans hidden and never intrigues against each other. Only in children’s way can adults make our life simple, more real and more enjoyable.

I wish everyone’s heart would keep as innocent and lovely as they ever did in their childhood. Then, the walls between our hearts can be broken down and the world would be a better place to live in.

小学六年级秋游英语作文3

Today, the teacher took us to zhongshan park. Here, everyone was so happy! In the autumn of talking and laughing on the road, like a happy little sparrow.

We went to the zhongshan park, there are two stone lions see stone road on both sides, terrible squatting at the door.

Upward along the stone path, see stone road on both sides of the yellow and green leaves, the autumn wind blows, the falling pieces of leaves, like a butterfly dancing in. We quickly climb halfway up. See below flickering skyscrapers, the car on the road is the size of a pencil case. Walk to the top of the hill, Chen teacher gave us a good team, we all sat on the bench, bathed in the warm autumn sunshine, laughing, and eating their food, and you gave me to eat, I eat for you. Really is happy!

The teacher took a photograph, we took our laughing faces, leaving the autumn the best memories.

the longing summer vacation is approaching, it is the best part of the school year for me. i cannot let the holidays elapse (逝去) meaninglessly, my vacation should be a phase (时期、阶段) of harvest. the events in my plan should give me a sense of infinite potential.

the following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work and study in this vacation. in the first few days i want to climb mount hua shan with several friends to refresh ourselves. then i tend to visit relatives, senior school teachers and former classmates(老同学). besides, to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, i will find a part time job and conduct some social investigation.

in short, i want to do interesting things in the summer vacation. whatever i do, the goal is the same: to get necessary experience, acquire knowledge and broaden my horizons. though the six week vacation will pass away at lightning speed, its influence is bound to last long.

今天，我们在快乐作文课堂上玩了一个非常有趣的游戏——贴鼻子比赛。

游戏规则是：同学手握鼻子，蒙着眼睛转三圈，然后走向黑板，把手中的鼻子贴在娃娃的脸上。每轮按准确程度排名加分。

游戏开始了，第一轮上场的是我和李睿桐。我和他心里都有点紧张不安，但还是笑容满面。我和李睿桐石头剪刀布，我赢了，所以我先来。老师用布把我的眼睛蒙着，又转了三圈。我小心翼翼地向前走，先撞到了桌子，又摸到墙，之后摸到门，最后摸到黑板，将鼻子贴到娃娃的脸上了。

第二个上场的是李睿桐，老师蒙上他的眼睛，转了三圈。他有点晕头转向，他走着走着撞到了桌子，然后才摸到黑板，将鼻子贴到娃娃的脸上了。

我又上去第二次，我这次的心情比上一次轻松一些。老师蒙上我的眼睛，我向前走去。同学们在下面七嘴八舌地喊，有的喊往左，有的喊往右。结果我像进入了迷宫一样，最后将鼻子贴到了窗帘上了，同学们哄堂大笑。

今天，我真开心。因为和同学们一起玩了一个最有趣的“贴鼻子"游戏。

说明文是阐述事物的特征、本质、性能、结构、用途或科学原理的一种文体。其说明的对象可以是具体的，如：自然环境，仪表设备等；也可以是抽象的，如概念定律等。以下是小编整理的初中英语说明文写作要点，欢迎阅读！

说明文的写作相对于论说文来说，有一定的套路可循，因此不是十分复杂。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分类法、因果法等；说明自然环境方面的内容常用时间次序法、分类法等。当然，随着对象的不同，具体应该采用的方法也会有所不同。

说明文的写作应该注意的事项有下面几点：

1.语言简明扼要，通俗易懂，避免夸张华丽的辞藻，要把真实的一面展现在读者面前。

2.说明时一定要把握一个中心主题。说明文中细枝末节较多，但不能喧宾夺主。

3.说明的次序非常重要。合理的次序会使文章条理清楚，脉络明晰。因此，练习时可以尝试不同的次序进行写作，找出最合理的一种。

4.由于说明文写实性较强，有时难免会让人感到没有生气。因此，可以适当使用一些比喻、拟人等修辞手段，来增加文章的色彩。

下面是一篇说明一所医院布局的文章。文章虽短，但需要说明的内容却达11处之多。平均一句话就要描写一处，如果组织得不好，便会给人凌乱的感觉。

为了避免这一点，文章把整个布局图分三部分来写：

贯彻医院的是main road，第一部分以大门为参照物，介绍了靠大门且通过main road东西相对的急诊楼和门诊楼。

第二部分以湖为参照物，中心线还是main road，介绍其他分诊楼、实验室、放射室等。

第三部分写main road尽头的建筑物。

这样，繁多的细节显得井井有条。因此，选择好主线及参照物是决定文章成功的关键。

Directions：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition about“THE LAYOUT OF A HOSPITAL”. Locate some important departments in the hospital based on the information given below.Your composition should be no less than 120 words.

（1）the Emergency Department

（2）the Out-patient Department

（3）the Surgery Department

（4）the Dispensary

（5）the Physician Department

（6）the Eye，Ear，and Throat Department

（7）the Dental Department

（8）the Laboratory

（9）the X-ray Department

（10）the Administrative Building

（11）the Ward

例文：

The Layout of a Hospital Near the gate，on the westside of the road is the Emergency Department. Opposite the Emergency Department across the Main Road is the Out-patient Department. The building to the southwest of the lake is the Dispensary，which face the Surgery Department lying on the other side of the road.Along the west wall，from south to north，stand three buildings：the Physician Department，the Eye，Ear，and Throat Department，and the Dental Department.

The Laboratory is to the northwest of the round about，and beside the Laboratory，the X-ray Department is located on the same side of the road. A winding road by the lake leads to the Ward.

Near the end of the Main Road，the Administrative Building is situated on the east side.The hospital is nicely and conveniently laid out.

Computer has considered to be one of the most important inventions in 20

century. It has brought many changes in this world. With the rapid development

of science and technology, more and more people have their own personal

computer. It’s not only can do the calculations at a very high speed, but also

can access to the Internet to get information from the outside world.

Computers play an very vital role in our daily life. They can do a lot of

things. Access to the Internet, you can find the answers to your questions, you

can do on line shopping without going outside. Computer has provided us lots of

convenience. There is no doubt that people can have a better life with

computer.

Some people worry about that someday computers may replace human beings.

Then most people will have no jobs. However, in my opinion, computers are not

replacing us. Even though computers can take over some difficult tasks that we

can not do. They are nothing but machines. They work for us. They will never

take the place of man.

Valentine’s Day is coming soon, it is on February14. The day is a big day

for the couple, they need to spend the special day with romance, the boys are

always buying gifts to their girls, the most common thing is to buy flowers and

have dinner, maybe they could do something more interesting. The boys can

surprise their girlfriends, they can take the girls to the place where they get

to know each other, wondering around for a while and remembering those beautiful

days, just like they know for the first day, how romantic! This will give the

love relationship something new, which can enhance their relationship. The girls

can surprise their boys with some gifts they make by themselves. Girls are good

at hand making, so they can make out some gifts instead of buying, because the

boys will be moved by your heart. Valentine’s Day is romantic, are you

ready?