小学英语写作比赛（优秀20篇）

When I was five years old, my mother decided to send me to learn dance

class, at first, I was afraid, because I knew nobody there. But as when I went

there, I found there were a lot of children who were at my age, we became

friends soon. Now I like the dance class so much, I can dance with my friends,

we have great fun.

Spring

Oh! Spring in coming.

Look! All the things are reviving. The world is colorful. The trees and grass are green. Flowers are beautiful. Some are red. Some are yellow. Some are purple. The birds are flying in the blue sky. The bees are singing. They are very busy. They are making honey. The butterflies are dancing in the garden. The children are playing games.

I like spring.

拔河比赛是很传统的老项目，但在这次学校2——5年级拔河比赛时却换来了超前的效果。因种种原因学校好久没开设这种体育活动了，可以说这久违了的传统项目仍是学生的最爱。在比赛中学生和老师的助威声，比赛选手们的齐力使劲的呐喊声，无不让人激动兴奋。在那一刹那老师和同学融为一体，学校和学生融为一体，人和大自然合为一体。让人无法控制住自己的情感，让人兴奋在场景中，幸福在胜利的喜悦中。

在那一刻学生知道了什么是集体，在那一刻学生知道了什么叫为集体荣誉奋战到最后一刻。是啊，这种过程真的很必要，孩子们都特别喜欢。只有在这一刻老师喊破了嗓子不觉得疼，只有这一刻学生拽破了手流着鲜红的血还不觉得痛，也只有这一刻学生输了也是输个心服口服。孩子们释放出的实感给他们带来无限的快乐，必然能成为童年里最最美好的回忆。

开头部分:

How nice to hear from you again. Let me tell you something about the activity. I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th. I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.

结尾部分：

With best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply. I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.

Every May in Chinese lunar calendar is Dragon Boat Festival, do you know anything about it? Let me speak for you.

Once upon a time, there was a patriotic poet Qu Yuan, once he went to Beijing to go to work, see a decline of state variable, then vote Miluo River to commit suicide. Before he died, he wrote a poem. People in order to commemorate the patriotic poet, the annual Lunar New Year in May at the beginning of a dragon boat festival.

The main contents of the Dragon Boat Festival is the dragon boat racing, zongzi.

Dragon boat racing scene is very lively, crowded shore. Just listen to the sound of gunfire, paddled boat people desperately, but the river is full of cheering.

Rice dumplings wrapped in bamboo leaves, is for filling, with glutinous rice. When the package is very sticky, not professionals, but the package is not good!

According to legend, the dragon boat race is to salvage the Miluo River to die of the patriotic poet Qu Yuan. Threw rice dumplings into the river, is to let the fish and shrimp to eat, not eat Qu Yuans body.

Autumn to a field after the autumn rain, the fruit of the orchard mature. When I walked into the orchard, I was attracted to the fruit.

The first thing that catches my eyes is yellow pears. Look, that pear tree hanging a pear, like a gourd! A gust of wind blowing, pear shook his head, naughty you squeeze me touch, as if to say: "Come pick me! I am sweet and sweet "I finally could not help temptation, hand to pick one, but I did not pick, because I could not bear.

Go through the pear tree, I came to the banana tree, saw a tree banana tree sturdy tall and straight. A string of bananas hidden in the leaves, like the children of the month, like a fishermans boat, like my fathers sickle, like our children playing the "roundabout", but also like the fairy tale dwarf side by side in the cradle The I want to pick a string, but my mother said: "Only pick the banana can not eat, must go home to cover their yellow to eat."

The fruit of the orchard is so beautiful that the fruit of the orchard is too fragrant, and the feet of many children are painted, and they are sketched under the fruit trees, pick up the leaves, or eat the fruit. See all this, full of apples are laughing red face, persimmon tree also hung a red lantern.

This beautiful autumn orchard, I love you, could not bear to leave, really want to put the home here.

【第1篇】

今天下午，我和几个小伙伴约好去踢足球。我们玩得正开心，忽然来了几个女孩子，说要和我们比赛，来一场“男女对抗赛”。这可是破天荒第一次，我们觉得挺有趣，就答应了。

各队派上了５名队员，一场男子对女子的足球比赛开始了。一开始我们可放松了，几个女孩子怕什么。所以４个队员都争当“前锋”，没有一个愿意当“后卫”。守门员以为对方是女孩子，是不可能把球踢过来的，也就在一旁玩。我们几个上去和对方抢球，周旋了好一阵子，对方的一名队员忽然重重地往前踢了一下，我方前面有个队员没拦住。糟了，快回防，但是已经来不及了，守门员也玩得忘乎所以，被对方踢进了球。

这时候，我们这些“男子汉”才从梦中清醒过来，全力以赴，积极配合，传球失误也减少了。最后，我方终于攻入两球，反败为胜。

【第2篇】

四月一日下午三点半，我们班和三（6）班进行了一场激烈的足球比赛。

同学们激动万分，有的挥舞着小红旗，有的摇摆着鲜艳的手摇花，有的举着亲手制作的精美标牌。大家都争着为我们班的选手加油。

比赛就要开始了，选手们个个摩拳擦掌，生龙活虎，洪老师也在旁边给他们打劲，助威。

比赛一开始，我们就踢得难舍难分，眼看时间就要过一半了，比分还是0：0，队员们更加卖力，场外的拉拉队也争着为自己班加油。这时三（6）班得到了球，一位三（6）班的女队员抓住了我们班的一个空挡，一脚把球踢进了我们的球门！三（6）班立刻欢呼了起来，我们班的同学虽然很伤心，但是仍然在给我们的队员鼓劲加油。没过多久，他们又进了一球，我们班的队员和同学们的情绪都很低落。洪老师看到这种场景，立马调整我们的情绪。果然，陈阳不负众望为我们班扳回一球！我们都欢呼起来。可惜，比赛很快就结束了，我们带着遗憾离开了操场。

虽然我们输了这场比赛，但是我们很团结，没有输掉我们的气势，以后我们一定要加强体育锻炼，提高我们的能力，赛出我们的风采。

【第3篇】

上午，老师告诉我们一个好消息：下午我们要和五（5）班进行一场足球比赛。听到了这个消息，全班立即沸腾起来，我高兴得差点儿没吃午饭。

好不容易熬到了下午，老师选吴枫、李俊杰、胡传运、孟孜宽、沈德仕去参加比赛。其中，沈德仕是当守门员。

又熬了两节课，终于，比赛就要开始了。我们陆陆续续地到了操场，在跑道上坐下。过了不久，五（5）班也到了操场。我们班每一个人都在心里仇视着对方。

“预备，嘟——”比赛开始了。我方所有观赛人员都开始拼命地喊道：“五（8）班，必胜！”席天顺和杨文豪展开“五（8）班，必胜”的条幅。后来，孟孜宽一脚把球踢到了球门里，耶！球进了！不过，由于我方队员的疏忽，五（5）班一名队员又把球踢进了我们的球门里。随即，上半场结束了。

下半场开始了，我们一齐大喊道：“五（8）班，必胜！五（5）班，必败！”哎呀！胡传运摔到了。只见他咬了咬牙，豆大的汗珠，看来一定很疼。不过，他很快又站了起来，继续战斗。随即，他又摔倒了。这一次，我仿佛听着他心中的呐喊声“加油！加油！”然后，他又开始了战斗。沈德仕守住了门，好险啊！球差一点点就进了！然后，他又踢了一球，这一球直接射进了对方的球门里，不过这不记分。

随着这场比赛的结束，老师公布了结果：五（5）班和五（8）班以1比1平终场。

好期待下一次这样激烈的比赛啊！

【第4篇】

今天我们要和五(5)班展开一场激烈的足球比赛。

我们班的阵容如下:前锋两名，分别是胡传运和吴枫，后卫两名，是孟孜宽和我。而门将是沈德仕。比赛开始了!队员们个个都热血澎湃，巴不得一口吃下个大胖子。突然，响亮的助威声传进了我们五个人的耳中。“五(8)班，必胜! 五(8)班，必胜!”这喊声此起彼伏，也许是这喊声起了作用，后卫孟孜宽直奔对方球门全力跑去。虽然五(5)班奋起直追，但怎么也追不上孟孜宽，他低平射门，球进了!我们立刻沸腾起来。

五(5)班急起直追，对方的其中一名前锋趁我不注意跑到孟孜宽前面，我往后传球，正好被对方给抢断了，他劲射得分。1:1暂时平局，随后进入了短暂的中场休息。

休息过后，双方交换场地，再战。第19分钟，胡传运挑射击中横梁，对手松了一口气。第25分钟，我方获得任意球，由吴枫主罚，直接射门但打中门柱，对手再次虎口脱险。最终，裁判吹响了全场比赛结束的哨声，比分1:1平。

经过这次比赛的教训，我们吸取了经验，决心下次踢胜五(6)班。

小学四年级英语日记

Spring comes.ltsgetting warmer and warmer.Everything is dry, trees, fields and even the air. Just then, it rains. lts as soft as silk. lt washes the dirty of the earth and waters the plants and the fields. lt also waters peoples hears. Farmers stand in the spring rain and smile.

Spring rain is as dear as oil They seem to see the harvest time inautumn. Spring rain brings water to the air. It also brings hope to people.

小学四年级英语日记

Next week I would like to go to Kaifeng and parents. Kaifeng has many great snacks, such as steamed buns, sesame seed Gaul. Kaifeng also on the famous Qingming River Park, I think it has to be very beautiful. My parents will be opened to see my uncle and live in his house one night.

小学四年级英语日记

August 12,2012 Friday Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will feel happy and become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once again, I make a decision to be a good girl.

校运会结束了，我感受最深的是拔河比赛，白云飘过来为我们喝彩，小鸟飞过来为我们加油。

上午，在学校操场上，同学们三五成群地围在一起议论纷纷。我也跟过去，问：“议论什么呢?”“下午有场拔河比赛，我们班和四(2)班。”我心想：四(2)班很牛的。于是心里既高兴又紧张。

果然，中午的时候，老师们忙得团团转。一会儿划线;一会儿找来绳子，中间系上红布;一会儿组织参赛选手，给他们讲比赛规则。操场上人声鼎沸。

下午，参加拔河比赛的选手个个精神抖擞、昂首挺胸。比赛还未开始，操场上充满了浓浓的火药味，双方的啦啦队开始为各班的选手们加油助威了。但是我觉得胜利一定属于我们班，因为我们班那么团结向上，我们一定会为班级增光添彩的!

“嘟——”随着裁判的一声哨响，紧张的拔河比赛开始了。选手们的腿站成弓形，脚顶着脚，身体向后倾，双手紧握着绳子，使出了吃奶的力气向后拉。有的气喘吁吁，张大着嘴;有的咬着牙，较着劲。

绳子中间的红布一会儿向左，一会儿向右，看得人眼花缭乱。红布靠近我们这边的白线了，眼看胜利就快属于我们班了，加油!我拼尽全力拉，在这千钧一发的时候，我脚一滑，摔了一跤，这时，啦啦队的“加油”声一阵高过一阵，仿佛在鼓励我，我想：不能因为我一个人让全班输。于是，我忍住痛站了起来!此时，同学们配合得更加密切了，所有队员的的力量都凝聚到了绳子上，红布又慢慢地移过来了。最后，我们班又一使劲，那块红布终于在大家的欢呼声中过线了，对方败下阵来。

我们班赢了，大家伙高兴得一蹦三尺高，有的跳起舞来，有的抱成一团。输了的学生垂头丧气，像泄了气的皮球。

这次比赛，比出了水平，赛出了团结，告诉了我们“团结力量大”“坚持就是胜利”的道理。

题目：请以“My Class Teacher”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。

My Class Teacher我的班主任

My class teacher is Mr. Wang. He is strict but kind. He has taught us Chinese for two years.我的班主任是王老师，他是一个要求严格而亲切的老师。他已经教了我们两年语文。

He always tells us to study hard but not all the time. Sometimes he plays with us. He says, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." I think he is a good class teacher.他总是告诉我们要好好学习，但不是时时刻刻学习。有时他会和我们一起玩。他说：“只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。” 我觉得他是个很好的班主任。

点评：这篇文章取材的是身边熟悉的人，作者也有东西可写，更具有可读性。另外，写人时把主语稍作调整，读起来轻松多了。

I am a 15-year-old girl. My name is [ename]Cherry[/ename]. Now I am studying in the middle school. I want to be an actress because I think it is a funny and exciting job...

写人的常见句式如：

This is my friend, Mary.

She is... years old.

She is a teacher/ an artist/ a singer...

She/ He gets up at 6/5... / early/ late.

She/ He has sports at school.

She/ He likes...

She/ He is strong/ fat/ slim/ kind/ thin/...

She/ He looks like...

She/ He is good at English/ maths/ Chinese/ physics...

我的学校小学英语作文一：My School

Now, I am studying in Tiantao Primary School. I am a student of Grade six. The campus is beautiful. There are many tress, flowers and grass in my school. Tiantao Primary School is famous in my city. It is very good. There are two teaching buildings and a office building. There are about 600 hundred students and 40 teachers in my school. I like going to school. I can study and play games in school.

我的学校小学英语作文二：My School

My school is near a small lake. It is very beautiful. I like my school very much.

We have a high teaching building and it is big and clean. Our classroom is on the fifth floor. The computer rooms are on the third floor. We have computer classes there. We have a big library on the second floor. There are many books in it. I like reading books there. We also have music room and art rooms in the building.

There is a big playground behind the teaching building. After class, we often play basketball there.

The teachers in my school are very kind. The students are very polite and smart. I am happy in my school.

【参考译文】

我的学校在一个小湖附近。它很漂亮。我非常喜欢我的学校。

我们有一座教学楼，它又大又干净。我们的教室在第五层。电脑室在第三层。我们有电脑课。我们在二楼有一个大图书馆。里面有许多书。我喜欢在那里看书。我们也有音乐室和艺术室的建设。

教学楼后面有一个大操场。下课后，我们经常在那里打篮球。

我们学校的老师都很和蔼。学生们很有礼貌和聪明。我在学校很快乐。

Last week, my parents told me the good news that my family would go camping

with my uncle’s family. I felt so excited about it, because I could spend the

whole night outside, which never happened before. When the day came, we brought

the equipment and bought some food. In the afternoon, the two families settled

down, then we started to walked around. My cousins and I rushed to the forest

and went to the highest point, where we can appreciate the whole sight. Standing

on the highest place, I felt so great. The world was in front of my eyes and I

thought of the old poets’ description. At night, we set the the fire and talked

happily. The parents were talking about the family chores and the kids were

playing games. It was such a happy moment for me.

八月五号，我怀着既激动又紧张的心情来到了成都市信息工程学院体育馆参加成都市跆拳道的比赛。

我们进了体育馆，看台上坐满了观众，人声鼎佛，拉拉队高喊着：“加油！加油！”真是热闹非凡的。我看见了体育馆里有四个比赛场地同时进行着比赛，还可以看见电子计分器显示着运动员的成绩。我的几个队友在比赛中，他们都取得了很好的成绩。

马上就要该我了，按照跆拳道的比赛要求，首先要称体重，我参加的是23公斤至25公斤级的比赛，我的体重符合要求。我穿上护具，经过检录，我进入了比赛场地。比赛开始了，我的对手是一个比我的级别高的蓝带，但是我并不怕他。我找准了机会，一个双飞领先得了两分，我听见了我的教练在我身后鼓掌。我的对手也不示弱，他冲上来踢我，我左挡右挡，我们拼搏的十分激烈，上半场结束时，我是二比一领先。下半场开始了，我们都防御的很紧，没想到在最后几秒，对手来了一个后转踢抢走了两分，最后我还是输了这次比赛。我遗憾的离开了比赛场。

姥姥在门口接我时，说：“别难过，你这次已经很努力了，这次虽然输了，希望你总结教训，争取下次取得成功。”我一定要刻苦训练，争取在以后的比赛中取得好的成绩。

my school is near a small lake. it is very beautiful. i like my school very much.

we have a high teaching building and it is big and clean. our classroom is on the fifth floor. the computer rooms are on the third floor. we have computer classes there. we have a big library on the second floor. there are many books in it. i like reading books there. we also have music room and art rooms in the building.

there is a big playground behind the teaching building. after class, we often play basketball there.

the teachers in my school are very kind. the students are very polite and smart. i am happy in my school.

[欣赏我的学校小学生英语作文

Many years ago there lived in Hangzhou a girl called Aqiao. One winter morning she walked into a valley. To her surprise， she found herself in a different world.

There were rows of white houses with mulbery trees in front of them. Many ladies in white were singing and picking the leaves from the trees. They fed the leaves to little silkworms. Aqiao learned how to reel silk and how to dye it.

When she returned home， she began to raise silkworms and taught her neighbours how to do it. It was said that this was how people started to raise silkworms in China.

“1——2——3——拉!”激烈的拔河比赛在操场进行着，正是我们六年级二班和六年一班的拔河比赛。

赛场上加油助威声连成一片，我在赛场上拿着绳子，将绳子在我手上缠了一圈，开始向后发力，我的脸憋得通红，仿佛身在战场，丝毫不敢放松。

比赛到了白热化阶段，对方猛然加力正是重要时刻，我的鞋底却像抹了油一般，一滑，我摔倒了。一瞬间，我方少了一个人的力量，对方看准时机猛然发力，我们立刻如割韭菜一般倒下——我们输了。

我知道这一次是因为我的错，也许是我的姿势不对，也许是我鞋的原因，也许是没睡好……我知道我们败了，是因为我输了，输得很严重，我不敢看他们的眼神，可能那眼神如千年寒冰，如狼的眼神般尖锐……我逃到一个角落，轻轻地抽泣，天上阴云密布，寒风潇潇。

也许是他们才反应过来，少了一个人，开始满操场找我，他们找到我了。

“没事的，不就是一场比赛吗?下午还有一场，扳回来不就好了!”他们轻轻地安慰我，此时我觉得阴云散去，阳光又回到了我的心田。

“我有一种新方法!”我说：“我们将一个胖子放到最后，用绳子缠腰向后坐，这样便可以将重量化为力量。”出于羞愧的我提出了这个想法。“诶，这个想法不错，就这么干!”他们接纳了我的意见，我开心极了，可以帮到大家，我非常开心。

下午，比赛马上开始，我站到队伍的前列，严阵以待，转头一看，后面八个胖子正在——吃饭?对，为了增重，必须这样。

比赛开始了，我尽力地向后拉，我发现对方力气很小，原来后面可还有一“吨”的重量呢，这次绳子如一根箭般飞到了我们身旁，我们胜利了!

直到现在我才发现，我败了，败于愧疚，也胜了，胜于自己与同学们的友情。

体育文化节的比赛日程进行到了第二天,今天比赛的项目是五十米接力赛、拔河、滚轮胎。

最激烈的要数我们和五班之间的拔河比赛了。先看看五班的选手个个都是大胖子,犹如弥勒佛下凡;再看看我们班的队员,个个都是精兵强将,恰似花和尚鲁智深转世,大有火星撞地球之势。

拔河比赛开始了,双方选手先一齐后仰,一齐发力,九牛二虎之争,个个精神振奋,斗志昂扬,汗流夹背,不顾形象,使出了吃奶的劲儿。场外的拉拉队也不甘示弱,“加油——加油!”那加油声犹如山呼海啸,响彻云天不断提高。绳中间的小红领巾,一会儿向左,一会儿向右,真是棋逢对手,将遇良才,输赢难分。我们班的王灿可是名副其实的大力士,脸涨得通红,嘴闭得紧紧,身体紧紧地靠住绳子,拼命往后拉。红领巾眼看要到我们这里了,可是不知怎么的,五班来了一大股劲,红领巾移到了他们,我们输了。

第二局易边再战,双方不甘示弱。拔呀,拽呀!绳子慢慢的移到我们这边了,可是大力士们稍一松气,五班使劲一拉,功亏一篑我们又输了。

拔河比赛结束了,我们虽然输了,却一点也不灰心,因为“失败乃成功之母”嘛,我坚信,下一届拔河比赛的冠军一定是我们的!

许多同学都想把作文写得好一点，但总觉得学好作文不容易，有什么办法使作文的水平提高快一些呢?许多文章写得好的人都有这样一点经验：写作文要三“多”。

首先是：多阅读。就是要大量地广泛地阅读。阅读愈多愈广、愈认真，就愈有助于写作能力的提高。阅读可以开阔眼界，扩大知识面，阅读可以增加自己的知识和丰富自己的材料仓库。多阅读可以使我们学习如何选材立意、布局谋篇、选词炼句和不同的表现方法。汉代杨雄说：“能读千赋则善赋。”唐代大诗人杜甫曾说：“读书破万卷，下笔如有神。”清代大小说家蒲松龄在《聊斋志异·阿宝》曾说：“书痴者文必工。”意思说，沉迷阅读的人他的文章必定会写得好。《唐诗三百首》的编者也曾说：“熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟。”我们阅读犹如蚕吃桑叶，蚕不吃桑叶，就吐不出丝，人不阅读，也写不好作文。博读广览对于丰富写作题材也是极有帮助的。俄国作家高尔基说：“我觉得，当书本给我讲到闻所未闻、见所未见的物、感情、思想和态度的时候，似乎是每一本书都在我面前打开了一扇窗户，让我到一个不可思议的新世界。”读得多了，积累必然丰富，思想也就开阔。有些学生作文语言枯燥、词汇贫乏，初看似乎是语法修辞的毛病，实际上是读得太少，腹中空空是一个重要的原因。

第二个是：多观察。多观察是很有好处的，一是可以培养自己认识外界事物的能力;二是可以积累许许多多真实的写作素材。有经验的猎手，看一看地上的脚印，他就能推测出是什么野兽;老中医看一看病人的脸与舌，他就能大体知道你的病情。这是什么原因?因为他们在长期观察中积累了许多经验，已经找出了规律。我们与作文也一样，要细致观察，才能看到看清看懂外界的事物，这样写起作文既有具体又能真实生动。比如唐代诗人王维写过一首《出至塞上》的诗，诗中有“大漠孤烟直，长河落日圆”两句。后来有些读者认为用“直”字描写“孤烟”似不真实。如《红楼梦》中香菱说：“想烟如何直，日自然是圆的。这‘直’字似无理，‘圆’字似太欲。”宋陆佃《埤雅》中说：“古之烽火用狼粪，取其烟直而聚，虽风吹之不斜。”赵殿臣注解说：“边外多回风，其风迅急，袅烟沙而直上，亲见其景者，始知直字之佳。”可见这诗句中用“直”字是王维细致观察边塞生活得来的真实的奇观异景。我们平时要留心观察，如观察人时，应观察人物的行为、对话、外貌等方面的特点;观察物时，要观察它的形状、颜、质地、构造和用途等方面的特点。大作家巴金说：“不管熟悉或者不熟悉的，我开始写小说以来就不曾停止观察人……我养成了观察人的习惯。”我们若也能养成观察人的习惯就好了。

第三个是：多动笔。我刚才说了多观察。我们会发现每个人的外表、性格、思想等都是不相同的。我们要把观察到的及时记到笔记本里，也可以说写点观察日记吧。勤练多写，刻苦实践，这可以说是学好作文的诀窍之一。犹如学游泳，不多下水游泳是学不起来的，学作文也要多动笔，才能笔下生辉。如蒲松龄，就是多动笔的典型。他“每峨冠博带，日游于田野间，遇乡人则扯之谈鬼为乐。乡人谈甫终，而先生已下笔如风，记载一悉矣。”乡人刚刚讲好，他已很快地把故事全记在本子上了。俄国作家果戈理也是多动笔的人，他会把所见所闻一一记入随身带的笔记本里。甚至到菜馆里吃饭，他也会急忙把菜单抄到笔记本里。后来那张菜单就被用到他写的小说里了。所以你能不怕苦不怕烦，能多动笔，经常写点，日积月累，你的笔头就“灵活”起来。同学们，你们若能保持一股热情，努力做到多阅读、多观察、多动笔，你们的作文水平就会在不知不觉中提高起来。

Freedom is an important right of people. It usually refers that you can do

want you want and live the life you want. Of course, it must be on the basis

that you can’t affect others’ freedom. Otherwise, it does not belong to your

freedom anymore. In my opinion, freedom is not you can do whatever you want, but

you don’t have to do what you don’t want to. We live in the same society, which

there are many rules constraining our behaviors. Therefore, we can’t do whatever

we want. But we are not forced to do what we don’t want to is freedom.

Spring festival Spring festival is coming春节到了. we are very happy我们都很高兴，because we can play a few fireworks因为我们可以放很多鞭炮. the parente will buy new clothes for us父母亲给我们买新衣服, and prapare many goods for Spring festival和准备了好多的年货. we visit grandparents and friends我们去拜访爷爷奶奶姥爷姥姥和朋友们 .we get some money,and we call it yasuiqian我们得到一些钱，我们叫它压岁钱. when we get the yasuiqian， we are vey happy当我们得到压岁钱的时候，我们很高兴.we like Spring festival very much我们很喜欢春节.

我们都知道，想在小升初英语写作拿高分，就要摸透老师的喜好，引起“读者”的注意。而在写作中句子偏长恰恰会适得其反，很容易让人漏听一、两个单词，影响对整个句子的理解，所以我们要教大家一些化繁为简的技巧——

1、巧用单个词：即用一个单词代替一组意义相同的单词。比如：

用forget(忘记)代替do not remember(没有记住)

用ignore(忽视)代替do not pay attention to(不注意)

用now(现在)代替at this point in time(此时此刻)

用because(由于)代替due to the fact that(鉴于下列事实)

2、省略同义词或近义词。比如在下面例句中，形容词important(重要的)和significant(有重要意义的)，就是两个同义词(也可以说是近义词)，我们可以省略important，只保留significant。

The government project is important and significant.(这项政府计划是重要的，有重要意义。)

The government project is significant.(这项政府计划有重要意义。)

3、在不改变句子含义的前提下，省略所有可以省略的单词。比如在下面例句中，the cover of the book(书的封面)可以省略成the book cover，is red in color(是红色的)可以省略成is red。

The cover of the book is red in color.(书的封面是红色的)

The book cover is red.(书的封面是红色的)

现在我们把这三种方法结合起来，将一个冗长、绕嘴的句子，改写成一个简短、易懂的句子。

University malls must be accessible and free from congestion in order that students, faculty and employees may have unobstructed passage through those areas of the campus.(校内道路必须是便于通行的，不拥堵的，以便让学生、教师和职员能够无阻碍地通过，到达校园的各处。)

University malls must be free enough from congestion to allow people to walk through easily.(校内道路不应当拥堵，以便人们顺利通行。)

4、用介词短语替代从句。比如：

原句：While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.

修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.

原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.

修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.

5、删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词，变从句为短语。比如：

原句：The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

注：把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。