小学英语写作比赛（20篇）

小学生英语日记（5） My family is a Piggy Family, bcaus my fathr, my mothr and I all lik slping and ating My mothr is a doctor. Sh is vry busy. But vry vning sh usually accompanis m for tn minuts bfor I go to slp. At this tim, w talk about vry thing. So I lov my mothr vry much. My fathr was a doctor many yars ago. Now h is an officholdr. H is vry busy too. But vry morning h snds m to school. So I think hs a good fathr.

I have a lot of troubles, such as going to school, homework, and parents’

ramble. They like the stars in the sky. I am afraid of the darkness. This is my

biggest trouble. At night, I am fear of going out alone. And when my parents

sleep, I even can’t go to the toilet. Therefore, I never drink water before

sleep. And I always turn on the light when I am sleeping. I know it’s not good

but I can’t sleep in the darkness.

一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文，是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有：故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类：以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动，而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂，所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要，安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容，使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构，即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点，然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件，因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动，也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体，即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓，可以增强文章的真实感，有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制，更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称，还是采用第二人称，都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意：句式尽量要多变，不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头，否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错，但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子，使文章略显单调乏昧，给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中，记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目，不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件，又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考，这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来，对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题，明确主题，选准素材，罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score，tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time， I thought of death， of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent，and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样，你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩，并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想，作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容，这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性，还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成，不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底，又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”，但由于时间有限，结果草草收尾，甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文， 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平，表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇，要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上，四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如，表示“重视”的词汇有stress，emphasize等，但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成，前者就平淡，后者表达意思很生动，更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配，长短句交替使用，会增强文章的节奏感，使描写更生动，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如：

(1) 名词化手段：用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分，然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分，以达到合并句子的目的。如：

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段：根据语义关系，可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等，如：

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner，hot and tired，was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚，卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟，进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”，而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构，而是留心细枝末节。

今天是四年级的校运会，比赛项目有：定点投篮、接力跑和拔河。我们班都取得了优异的成绩。其中，拔河比赛让我印象最深。

拔河比赛准备开始了，我们班第一场的对手是四(1)班。这次不会有悬念了。可是我又一想：不能骄傲呀，上次我们班的张逸荣力气很大，可这学期他没来，而其他班可能转来了一些力气大的。可是比赛了，裁判用洪亮的声音喊“一二三”“加油”“加油”每个班的拉拉队都叫了起来。我用尽全身力气，脸憋得红红的，拔了起来。对手的力气不小，我们班渐渐被拉了过去。我这时偷偷看了一眼拉拉队和老师，他们个个都拼命喊“加油”“加油”我听了，想：大家都为我们班出力，我一定要更加努力。这时，我大叫一声“啊—”随着这一声的爆发，顿时我感觉增加了无穷的力量。我把这股力量使了出来，渐渐地，我们把绳子拉到了我们班这边!“嘟”裁判吹响了哨子，说：“四(3)班赢了!”“耶!”我把绳子放下，看了看我的手，哇!都红了，不过我一定要坚持。最后，我们班击败了每一个对手，拿到了四年级拔河比赛的第一名。

啊!这场拔河比赛真是令我难忘呀!

I am glad that winter holiday is coming,I have set for itself a vacation plan,First of all I would like to seriously work to complete holiday.Then read some interesting books;Then adhere to a daily physical exercise.Last I necessary to help my parents do some housework,because they are very busy and they have to work very late.

This is my winter vacation plan

According to a recent article on Newsweek concerning children’s’ education,

there is an increasing number of parents worrying their kids to an extreme

extent, depriving them of independence and freedom by keeping them around

parents all the time.

Some people applaud this phenomenon, suggesting that kids’ safety is the

most important. Thus, they’d better not enter the hazardous society without

supervision unless they become adults. From my point of view, some of their

opinion is correct but keeping children away from independence is a completely

erroneous decision. The reasons are as follows:

First and foremost, “locking kids” may hinder their healthy growth, both

mentally and physically. The kids who are locked may have heavy reliance on

their parents, as their comprehensive skills such as communication skills or

cooperative spirit being prevented from developing.

Secondly, what these parents fail to see is the fact that the crime rate

and accidents aren’t on a rapid rise. It is the abuse of mass media that make

crimes and violence more scary. The parents, who love their kids so much, are

completely forced to live under the illusion that our society is full of riots

or threats of accidents. Thus, kids can be allowed to have more freedom such as

walking to school by himself, for instance.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that

kids should be given more freedom by parents’ effort. At the same time, parents

should take many factors into consideration such as the time restriction for

children and the evaluation to kids’ maturity and capability. Only then can they

enjoy a safe and meaningful childhood.

Spring

Oh! Spring in coming.

Look! All the things are reviving. The world is colorful. The trees and grass are green. Flowers are beautiful. Some are red. Some are yellow. Some are purple. The birds are flying in the blue sky. The bees are singing. They are very busy. They are making honey. The butterflies are dancing in the garden. The children are playing games.

I like spring.

那天，同学们挥汗如雨;那天。同学们团结一心;那天，同学们使出吃奶的劲;那天，同学们的嗓子都喊哑了;那天，此起彼伏、震耳欲聋;那天，惊心动魄，震耳欲聋;那天，我永远忘不了。

那天，举行了一场精彩的拔河比赛。

盼星星，盼月亮，终于比赛了。六4班对六5班。于是大家纷纷走上前去，拉住绳子，排成“柳条”形。我的朋友赵思佳紧张极了，心“扑通通”地跳，我在旁边好像看出了我的心思，就对他说：“没事，别紧张，放松点……”

“嘟”，哨声响了，大家身体一齐向后仰，一个个涨红了脸。同学们的手像一把大钳子一样，紧紧地抓住绳子不放。我班使出了九牛二虎之力，脚一步一步吃力地向后退。可谁知六5班的劲也很大，两边这样一拉，我好像要飘起来一样。再向右看看，只见赵思佳把眼瞪得圆圆的，咬着牙，汗从头发上“跳”下来。哎哟!麻绳上有一根刺扎在了他的手里，他把手换了一下，右手在前，谁知一换手，同学们的手就把绳占满了，他的另一只手不知道放在哪了，我在焦急之时赶忙给他指了个位置才得以放手，我老师和啦啦队一直对他们喊“加油，加油!”，最后裁判员“嘟”地一声，结束了第一场比赛。1：0，“哈，我们赢了。”

“第二场比赛开始了，快准备。”老师喊道。“嘟”哨子响了，他们便一齐向后拉。我和一旁的啦啦队大声的喊：“六4加—油，六4加油。”此起彼伏，震耳欲聋。拔河的同学更加用力了，但对手太厉害了……渐渐地红布条儿离我们越来越远了……

通过拔河比赛，我明白了，一个小水滴只有融入大海里才不会被蒸发，一朵花儿只有开在花园里才不会被埋没，一个人只有在集体中才能发挥更大的作用，因为—团结力量大，虽然我们没赢但我们努力了。

My aunt has a cute puppy named Lele. It is versatile, is a very great puppy.

Lele is a bitch, a shiny golden hair on the body, the ear tip of the very spirit, and a pair of black grapes like the eyes flash in the face flash, the tail in the back dangling. Very cute!

My aunt s music is not only lovely but also very loving.

It does not have to solve the corner when the urine, directly to the bathroom solution. Stool when the door clutching the door called, my aunt saw it will take it downstairs in the grass stool solution.

Sometimes Lele heard the sound of water will run over. Always want to play water!

My aunt put the national anthem song will be heard a burst of sweet songs, you will certainly ask who is singing it you can not think of music is singing!

Lele is like a prayer for China! Its a patriotic dog.

This is my aunt cute little dog happy music!

Dear Wei Fang,

I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I’m writing to give my sincere congratulations.

You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. As your best friend, I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression. It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest. Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.

I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

哦！我的风筝飞起来了！”操场上回荡着孩子们欢乐的笑声。原来，同学们正在那放风筝呢。

我们带着早已准备好的风筝来到操场，组装好以后，老师一声下令：“放！”我们一个人拿线轴，其它的人两手托住风筝，在操场上没命地飞跑着，谁都希望风筝放得更高一点，风在耳边呼呼地刮着，我们也越跑越凶。这时，拿线轴的人大喊一声：“放手！”其余的人都松开手，眼巴巴地看着天上的风筝。可风筝却一会儿上，一会儿下，乱飞个不停。我们跟在后面跑着，用手在天上接着，可这时顽皮的风娃娃也不知道跑到哪里去了。风筝直直地掉在地上，线也缠了，同学们像泄了气的皮球，一个个坐在地上，大口大口地喘着粗气。这时，老师走了过来，语重心长地说：“做事情要讲究方法，记住团结就是力量！”听了老师的话，同学们信心增倍，一起左一下右一下把线轴的线解开了。

紧接着，我们又开始了。同样，还是像刚才那样在操场上跑着，但是，这次我们却是有规律的跑着，还有一个人当总指挥。终于，风筝在全力配合下飘飘悠悠地飞上了天，我们笑了，跟在后面开心地跑着，心中又重复着老师的那句话：团结就是力量！

我们仰起头，现在，蔚蓝的天空变成了风筝的海洋，它们像是在比美，又像是在赛高，更像是在玩耍。操场上又响起那童真的笑声。

伴着孩子们清脆的笑声，下课铃声响了，我们的心中也重复着那句话，就是力量！

[放风筝比赛小学作文

I have a best friend, we know each other when we are five years old, now we talk about everything. But sometimes we will have the argument, none of us want to give in first. We make a deal that the next day we will meet in a place every time, so we become good again. I cherish our friendship so much.

我有一个最好的朋友,我们彼此认识的时候是在我们五岁的时候,现在我们无所不谈。但有时我们会有争吵,谁也不想先屈服。我们达成协议,第二天我们会在一个地方见面,这样我们再次和好。我珍惜我们的友谊。

Last week, when I passed a clothes shop, I was attracted by the beautiful

dress, so I asked my mother to give me money to buy one. But she refused me and

said that I could collect some money by helping her to do little work. I agreed.

So I started to clean the house and the dishes. Sometimes washed my father’s

car. Finally I got enough money.

【参考范文】

Summer holiday is coming . I want to go to Beijing . I go to Beijing with my father , my mother and my brother . We want to go there by plane because it takes less time . We can see many things in it .

First we can visit the Great Wall , it is very famous for the world ,so I like it very much . Second we can go to the zoo because I like to see animals . There are many foreigners in this city ,too . I want to talk with them in English . I want to learn English from them . I think we can have a good time then . I hope it is coming soon .

【参考译文】

暑假即将来临。我想去北京。我去北京和我的父亲,我的母亲和我的兄弟。我们想乘飞机去那里,因为它花费更少的时间。我们可以看到许多东西。

首先,我们可以去长城,它是非常著名的世界,所以我很喜欢它。第二,我们可以去动物园,因为我喜欢看动物。也有很多外国人在这个城市。我想用英语与他们交谈。我想向他们学习英语。我想我们可以度过一段美好的时光。我希望它快到了。

我们都知道，想在小升初英语写作拿高分，就要摸透老师的喜好，引起“读者”的注意。而在写作中句子偏长恰恰会适得其反，很容易让人漏听一、两个单词，影响对整个句子的理解，所以我们要教大家一些化繁为简的技巧——

1、巧用单个词：即用一个单词代替一组意义相同的单词。比如：

用forget(忘记)代替do not remember(没有记住)

用ignore(忽视)代替do not pay attention to(不注意)

用now(现在)代替at this point in time(此时此刻)

用because(由于)代替due to the fact that(鉴于下列事实)

2、省略同义词或近义词。比如在下面例句中，形容词important(重要的)和significant(有重要意义的)，就是两个同义词(也可以说是近义词)，我们可以省略important，只保留significant。

The government project is important and significant.(这项政府计划是重要的，有重要意义。)

The government project is significant.(这项政府计划有重要意义。)

3、在不改变句子含义的前提下，省略所有可以省略的单词。比如在下面例句中，the cover of the book(书的封面)可以省略成the book cover，is red in color(是红色的)可以省略成is red。

The cover of the book is red in color.(书的封面是红色的)

The book cover is red.(书的封面是红色的)

现在我们把这三种方法结合起来，将一个冗长、绕嘴的句子，改写成一个简短、易懂的句子。

University malls must be accessible and free from congestion in order that students, faculty and employees may have unobstructed passage through those areas of the campus.(校内道路必须是便于通行的，不拥堵的，以便让学生、教师和职员能够无阻碍地通过，到达校园的各处。)

University malls must be free enough from congestion to allow people to walk through easily.(校内道路不应当拥堵，以便人们顺利通行。)

4、用介词短语替代从句。比如：

原句：While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.

修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.

原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.

修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.

5、删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词，变从句为短语。比如：

原句：The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

注：把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。

【第1篇】

今天，我起了个大早。七点没到，我就冲出家门，兴致勃勃地赶往学校。你问我干啥去呀？呵呵！学校组织大家去看残运会，你说我能不兴奋吗？我很想亲眼看看我曾经采访过的那些运动员会在赛场上又怎样的表现。

一路上，残运会吉祥物“悦悦”的身影无处不在，金色的小脑袋，碧绿的身子，好似一朵盛开的向日葵在奔跑。这些可爱的悦悦仿佛在同我说：“今天的比赛一定很精彩！”

“快看啊！圣火！”来到黄龙体育中心，我们的目光立刻转移到了残运会主火炬上。一只巨大的机械“手”里捧着一团熊熊燃烧的圣火。圣火在风中不停地舞动，既像在欢迎我们，又像在为即将比赛的运动员加油。

这是我见过场面最宏大，争夺最激烈的比赛。田径场上，运动员正在你追我赶；观众席上，大家不惜体力地摇旗呐喊。

你看，又有一队运动员们入场参加比赛了！咦？怎么还有一群大学生跟在运动员后面？噢，他们是志愿者。他们帮腿脚不便的运动员拿着运动用具，正在尽心尽力地为他们服务呢。有了他们的帮助，运动员才会取得好成绩。

你瞧，轮椅跑步比赛开始了！运动员用双手使劲地驱动着轮椅，不断地向前、向前。观众们挥舞着手中的吉祥物——悦悦，扯着嗓子，为运动员们加油。结束比赛了，运动员顾不得劳累，他们向观众微笑、拍手，时不时还送来几个飞吻，他们是在感谢观众呢。

你再看，又是一轮比赛开始了！运动员都像一支支离弦之箭冲出了起点，可是一位身患小儿麻痹症的运动员却落在了后面。尽管他跑步的动作很不协调，姿势甚至有些滑稽，但是，他没有气馁，依旧坚持跑到了终点。我们给了他比冠军更多的掌声。在他跑到终点后，获得第一名的运动员走到他身边，拍拍他的肩膀，两个人开心地说着什么。我想也许他们会说：“兄弟，我们都是好样的！不泄气，坚持跑到终点，就是胜利者！”

回到家，残运会的主题歌一直在我耳边回荡。就像歌词中唱到的那样，只要我们都真心付出爱，我们就不会有障碍，因为“我们都一样”。

【第2篇】

今天，我们全校三至六年级去西湖体育馆观看残运会的一个比赛项目——坐式排球。

在路上，我一直在想：坐式排球？坐着怎么打呢？坐在哪里打呢？一到现场，我就恍然大悟了，原来运动员都是腿部有残疾的，他们坐在地上打球，我心想：难度一定非常大，这样打球一定很累！我就迫不及待地想看个明白了。

我们一共观看了两场比赛，第一场是辽宁VS甘肃，第二场是云南VS江苏，其中，令我印象最深刻的是第二场。

比赛开始了！只见江苏队的运动员把球往上一抛，然后用力地把球打过网，只听见“嘭”的一声，这位队员来了个重重的扣球，我心想：他们力气真大，简直跟正常运动员一样！然后，云南队的队员看球飞过来了，马上挪到前面，反其道而行之，轻轻地打过去，以柔克刚，江苏队前排的队员也轻轻地将球打过来。这个来回两队不相上下。突然，云南队的队员来了个扣杀，江苏队没接住，耶！云南得了1分！我们全班欢呼起来。该云南队发球了，他们轻轻地将球拍过去，江苏队也轻轻地将球拍过来，这时，云南队的一个队员为了抢球，把手伸到了网面上，触网了！犯规了！江苏队得了1分。唉，心急吃不了热豆腐啊！接下来，场上的比分越来越紧张，1：1，2：1，2：2，3：2，3：3……我们支持云南队，所以我们就放声为他们加油，在我们的加油声中，云南队终于夺得了冠军，我们兴奋地挥舞着手里的旗子，我也不例外，因为云南队也是我支持的队伍。

我想：虽然他们残疾了，但是他们跟我们一样坚强，一样生生不息，一样青春飞扬！

What day is it?

今天星期几?

Its Wednesday.

今天星期三。

What do you have on Wednesdays?

星期三你们都有什么课?

We have English, computer and P.E.

我们有英语，计算机和体育。

I like Wednesdays.

我喜欢星期三。

Tomorrow is Friday.

明天星期五。

What do you do on Saturdays?

星期六你都干什么?

I watch TV.

我看电视。

I love Saturdays.

我喜欢星期六。

What about you?

你呢?

I do my homework.

我做我的家庭作业。

Dear Sales Manager,

I, the undersigned, am a senior in the Computer Science Department of Tsinghua University. I ordered a book which is entitled Practical Writing and Reading for NETEM by Wang Li on December 20th, 2004.

However after reading the book on January 10th, 2005, I found that it is a pirated one so that I write to you for complaint.

The book has brought me some negative effects. To begin with, much of my valuable time and energy have been wasted in reading the book since it is quite hard to identify many words in the book. What’s more, I have not benefited from reading the book since some of keys to the exercises are misprinted.

I would like to be informed whether you can refund me the money or change another book for me. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely Yours

考研英语应用文写作范文之感谢信感谢信

结构要点感谢信是就某事向收信人表示感谢的信件，分为三个部分：

1． 指出对方帮助自己的事情，表示感谢；

2． 展开叙述这件事；

3． 再次感谢，并可表示希望回报对方。

Suppose your were recommended by Professor Sun to get further education in Yale University last June and now you have been admitted by that university. Write a letter to Professor Sun to express your gratitude in about 100 words. Do not sign your own name, using “Li Ming” instead.Dear Professor Sun,

I am writing to extend my gratitude to you—without your help I would not have been a postgraduate student of Applied Mechanics Department of Yale University.

Last June, you helped me with no reservation when I applied for Yale University. You wrote a recommendation letter for me to Professor W, the dean of the department. You gave me instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters. Whats more, you also taught me how to take care of myself and get along with others, which I believe are lifes great lessons.

Your help enabled me to fulfill my dream to pursue my studies in a great university. In the following days I will remember what you have told me and work and study hard to be a capable, conscientious and responsible person.

Yours truly,

Li Ming

感谢信

语言注意点感谢信应充分表达自己的谢意，切不可给对方草率的印象。可借助谈对方的帮助来进一步表达感激之情。言辞应真挚、得体。

Suppose you were taken good care of by Aunt Sun when you pursued your studies in Los Angels where Sun lived. Write a letter in about 100 words to extend your appreciation. Do not

sign your own name, using “Li Ming” instead.Dear Aunt Sun,

It is a great pleasure to extend my sincere gratitude to you for your hospitality and consideration while I pursue my bachelors degree at University of California.

As soon as I arrived in Los Angeles, you found me an apartment near my university. When I met with difficulties you often sent your daughter to help me and when I felt homesick you often talked to me patiently. You told me how to improve my efficiency in both work and study and how to get on well with teachers and schoolmates. Furthermore, you invited me to dinner on nearly every weekend.

Without your help, I would not have graduated with honors and found a satisfactory job back here in China. I know I can never repay you for everything you have done for me in the past four years, but you can be sure that I

Best regards.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming ll never forget it.

I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents last month and we stayed there for a week.

To my surprise, Beijing is such a modern city that my parents and I all admire the development of it these years. We visited many wonderful places there, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. What impressed me most was that people there were all very friendly and some of them could even speak Enlish. But still I think that there are some problems of this city, which I dislike. Those are too many people there and the heavy traffic. If there were fewer people and less traffic, it would be better.

前天是我校的科技节，3，4年级同学表演赛车。

只见范嘉琳拿着像方向盘一样的遥控器和一辆橙色兰博基尼赛车，满脸微笑地上了赛场，看上去信心十足。“范嘉琳你一定要为我们班争光啊！”我心里默默地想着。比赛开始了，范嘉琳紧紧地跟在车子后面，可是到了拐弯处车子就停在原地不走了，范嘉琳慌张地拼命按动手中的遥控器，车子动了，可惜它没有听话地往左拐，而是奋力往右冲，其他班同学哈哈大笑起来，范嘉琳的脸刷的一下红了，她无可奈何，只好拿起赛车，绕过拐角，再把调皮的车子放下继续开，我们班的同学们齐声大喊：“范嘉琳加油！范嘉琳加油！” 可是时间到了，才绕弯一圈的范嘉琳垂头丧气地走出赛场，大家都为她感到惋惜，范嘉琳生气地嘟囔道：“宋文杰，你的车子真不听话！”说完，气呼呼地把车子递给了宋文杰。宋文杰很委屈，一把接过车子，不高兴地说：“不要怪我的兰博基尼，要怪只怪你自己不会操作！”范嘉琳不好意思地低下了头。

虽然我们班没有胜利，但是让我们明白了一个道理：做任何事都要有充分的准备！