小学英语写作比赛【实用20篇】

My school is Tailan primary school, Thats a good place,this is a beautiful school.

There are many flowers, many classrooms,many leaves, many offices, a large hall, a playground in our school, in the playground we can run and play.also there is a garden in my school, many flowers and trees in it, we often walk in the garden after lunch.

I like my school very much! Do you like my school?

“加油，加油！”，“加油，加油！”平静的走廊里充满了我们班同学激动的呐喊声。你一定会非常奇怪，我们这是在做什么呢？

原来，我们正在进行一个非常有趣的游戏——吹乒乓球比赛！

游戏的规则是：用几个杯子装满水，最后留一个空杯子，把乒乓球放在第一个杯子里，一直吹到最后一个杯子里才算结束。

我们把场地定在桌子上，刘子艺和叶战鹰上场了。老师把前几个杯子里倒满了水。这时，我看到刘子艺和叶战鹰都很紧张，全身哆嗦，脸都白了，老师拿起乒乓球，喊：“预备，开始！”只见叶战鹰飞快地一下子吹到了第四个杯子里，刘子艺吹了一桌子水，就像给桌子洗澡了一样，水在桌子上像小溪一样的流到了地上。我们都不停的喊着：“加油，加油！”最后，是叶战鹰赢了，他高兴的跳了起来。

接着，该我和吴天昊比了，老师把杯子里的水灌满，又拿起乒乓球，说：“预备，开始！”我心里很紧张，也很兴奋，我暗暗想：我一定会赢的！只见我吹的乒乓球像青蛙一样的跳，结果我用力大了，乒乓球就掉了，等我捡起球的时候，吴天昊已经赢了。但我们也都很高兴，吴天昊还兴奋的跳了起来。

这件事告诉了我，做事要沉着、冷静！

hobbies are very important to a person. without having any hobby, life wont be as colorful as it should be. i have a variety of hobbies, such as collecting stamps, playing musical instruments, reading, and doing sport activities.

when i am free, i will spend time on my hobbies. when i am in a blue mood, i will also do my hobbies to cheer myself up. hobbies can help us improve our moods. many hobbies requires devotion. for eample, when you play a musical instrument, you have to practice over and over in order to perform good music.

after a period if you still enjoy it, gradually it will become a hobby of yours. but, remember: a hobby is like gold under the ground; no hobby will come to you unless you dig it out yourself. if you can treat study as one of you hobbies, learning will be more enjoyable. i hope all of you can find your own hobbies and also have fun from them.

my holiday was very wonderful.and it was very busy. in the morning.i went to the park with my parents.im very happy. at noon.i went to the restaurant with my parents. the food was very delicious. in the evening.i was watch tv.then i did my homework.last,i went to bed at10 oclock.

oh! it was winter holiday. i was very happy. i read my favourite books. i have many wonderful books. but i could not read these books too much. i also had a lot of homework to do. i like playing computer games, too. it”s very interesting. but i could not play it too much. i wear glasses, i”m very sad. it”s not good for my eyes to play computer games too much.

oh! it was the spring festival. it”s chinese traditional festival. people were very happy. they went shopping, cleaned their houses, had supper together......i went to my grandparents” home with my parents. my grandparents were very happy to see us. they prepared many kinds of nice food, such as fish, meat, vegetables and fruit. in the evening, we watched tv and lighted fireworks. we also knocked on people”s doors and gave some presents to them. after the spring festival, we went to shanghai to go shopping. we bought clothes, shoes and some delicious food.

i had a good holiday, i think. i also have very nice school life now.

There are four people in my family， my father， my mother， my sister and me. My father likes reading. My mother likes cooking. They both work in Leliu. They always go to work by car. They work hard.

My sister and I are pupils. I study in the primary school affiliated with Shunde No.1 Middle School. My hobby is collecting coins. My sister studies in Xishan Primary School. She likes watching TV. We love our family very much.

my school is near a small lake. it is very beautiful. i like my school very much.

we have a high teaching building and it is big and clean. our classroom is on the fifth floor. the computer rooms are on the third floor. we have computer classes there. we have a big library on the second floor. there are many books in it. i like reading books there. we also have music room and art rooms in the building.

there is a big playground behind the teaching building. after class, we often play basketball there.

the teachers in my school are very kind. the students are very polite and smart. i am happy in my school.

[欣赏我的学校小学生英语作文

During the winter vacation, nothing is different for my life. i wake up 11 oclock am everyday, after a washing, i have a good lunch with my parents. next i play computer games till the time to have supper. after have dinner. i go on playing till 2 oclock am, and then go to sleep with tired. this is one dull day of my winter vacation.

But i havent bored all the time. sometimes i read the books, sometime i listen to the music or the radio in the bed, because it was very cold outside and snowy all the day. and i also meat some of my good friends during the vacation, we have a very long talk about the life of each other in the past year and play table tennis tegether. and i watched the spring festival party of the cctv in the last seconds of the 2004 year! i think this is the thing most people of china doing at that time.

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主语＋谓语(不及物动词)：S+V

It will rain tomorrow.

He often runs in the morning.

They cried.

Tom exercises every day.

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主语＋谓语(及物动词)＋宾语：S+V+O

I miss my mother very much.

She wants to go home now.

The English club is going to hold an English party.

They all love her.

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主语＋系动词＋表语：S+V+P

The music sounds wonderful.

The leaves have turned red.

She is a student.

We keep silent about that.

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主语＋谓语(及物动词)＋间接宾语（人）＋直接宾语（物）：S+V+IO+DO

The teacher gave a book to him.=The teacher gave him a book.

They told me an interesting story.

The waitress offered me a bottle of wine.

My father will buy me a bike.=My father will buy a bike for me.

Miss Smith teaches us English.

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主语＋谓语(及物动词)＋宾语＋宾语补足语：                                      S+V+O+C

They call me Xiao Wang.

I saw him swimming in the river.

We elected him monitor of the class.

今天下午，我们三年级段要举行60米迎面接力跑比赛，我的心情是又紧张又兴奋的。

到了操场，我的心又怦怦的跳起来。比赛马上要开始了，我在心里暗暗地想：我们一定要加油！千万不要落后啊。激烈的“战争”开始了，们争先恐后地跑起来，旁边的啦啦队员们大声地喊叫着：“三（4）班加油！”一个、两个、三个……同学们一个接一个地跑着，终于轮到我了。我心里很紧张，不知怎样才好，忽然，我听见身后的同学叫我加油，顿时，我又充满了。我接过接力棒，马上就往男生的队伍跑去，我见别人接过接力棒，才松了一口气，我跑到队伍后面不停地叫加油。这时，我看到我们班落后了，就更大声的叫加油......

比赛结果出来了，张告诉我们得了最后一名,读后感，我好像吃了药一样苦。回到教室，我们很伤心，不由自主地哭了起来，虽然哭声很小，但是我哭得很伤心，无论张老师怎么劝我们，我们还是哭得很伤心.但张老师说：“不要灰心，还有许多比赛在等着我们呢，这次比赛输了，下次再加油。”听了张老师这句话，我终于停住了哭泣。

回家的时候，我看见陈怡如还是哭的很伤心，就劝她：“陈怡如，不要哭了，要是让别人看见就不好了。”这时，陈怡如不哭了。在回家的路上，我下定决心：下次一定争取第一名。

the weekend is coming. i will have a happy weekend.

on saturday morning, i’m going to do my homework. and then, i’m going out to play. i’m going to the bookstore and read some books. in the evening, i am going to have dinner with my parents outside.on sunday morning, i’m going to the library or do my homework. and then, i’m going to listen to music. in the afternoon, i’m going to go shopping with my mother. i like shopping very much.

this is my happy and busy weekend. do you like this weekend?

Sent away the hot summer, ushered in the cool autumn, autumn, layering make dye, stacked stream of gold, the most beautiful should be the number of orchards.

You see, the fruit of the orchard started a game of beauty. The first one is talking orange, it said: "You see, we are all wearing a yellow robe, more prestige Yeah." "Well! We are the most beautiful, we are all purple Yingying, crystal clear in the sun , The more beautiful! "The grape went on. Pomegranate grinned and said with a smile: "My mouth is hidden, but the beautiful ruby Oh!" "We are the most beautiful, wearing red cheongsam." Apple does not convinced, "my pulp with boiled A boiled, but also good for people with diarrhea! We are the most useful. "" My flesh sweet and delicious, many varieties. "Grapefruit bravely said. "Hey, do not leave me, my shape is beautiful, some round, some like a gourd, the fruit is also very good, you can eat directly, you can also and rock sugar stew to eat, cough. I was the most useful "Pear proudly said ... ... fruit in the orchard you squeeze me touch, to show off their own beauty, their own use, calling the fruit growers as soon as possible to pick.

Autumn is a colorful season, I love autumn, more love autumn orchard.

Christmas Day is on December 25th. It was originated in the western

country, but today, this festival has been celebrated by the world. For the

manufacturers, they are very happy to make this day as a shopping day. I enjoy

the great atmosphere.

I had a very special Christmas day last year. I experienced the western

style festival. There was a new foreign teacher taught us the lesson. She was

about 50 years old and she was very kind and we all liked her. On Christmas Day,

she brought us the desserts she made early in the morning. We enjoyed the

home-made cakes. Whats more, she invited us to came to her house and spent the

day with her. Then for the first time, I ate big turkey, which was so delicious.

The turkey was filled with many stuffs and the flavor was so good. After dinner,

we sang songs and danced.

Thanks to my foreign teacher, I experienced the American style festival. It

was such funny for me. Though today many people enjoy shopping in all kinds of

festivals, the meaning of these festival should be remembered.

一会儿，我们都从班里拿出凳子，在操场上排了一个大大的方阵，台下许多同学都坐了下来。一会儿，每班都选一个代表去捏纸蛋来排顺序，我们班第四。可同学们还是说：“要是第七多好啊！”“不对，应该是第六，六六大顺嘛！”“不赖了，第四知足吧！”又过了一会儿，还不到一节课，就都唱完了。中间轮到我们时，我十分紧张，心里像揣了一只小兔子一样，“嘭嘭”的直跳，开始唱时，也就没那么紧张了。我们很顺利的唱完了两首歌，而且每一个动作，每一首歌，我都觉得非常完美了。可是得出来的分却不尽人意，9点31分，我们老师并没有参加。所以我们非常遗憾得了最后一名，其他班只是老师参加了而已，所以都加了一分。并不是靠他们自己的实力的来的，并不光荣。

在比赛结束后，老师语重心长的说：“这次失败并不遗憾，我不会指挥，也不会唱歌，是我让大家与奖状擦肩而过，我向大家道歉。”说完深深的鞠了一躬，又眼含热泪地说：“我们以后一定会拿到一个好名次，这次并没有失败，只是成功的起点……”大家都沉默了起来。

我想：这次失败并不怎么可怕，可怕的是我们不团结。只要我们团结，团结就像一把利剑，披荆斩棘，斩断所有的困难。

愿这次失败让大家永远铭记在心里。

[小学生红歌比赛作文

老师宣布，现在开始一场掰手劲比赛。

首先，杨超和张正午上来表演，他们分为蓝队和黄队。现在，裁判罗玉海宣布：“比赛开

始！”我们顿时沸腾起来。比赛争斗得非常激烈。杨超使了吃奶的劲用力往右边扳。张正午满头大汗，脸红得很，用尽了全身的力气，用手往左边扳。他俩争斗得不可开交！这时，我们四、五组的同学都为杨超紧张起来，高喊：“杨超，加油！”可是，最后还是黄队张正午胜利了。

这次，老师要女同学来玩。吴昊上来了，她跟段佳欣比赛。比赛开始了，吴昊不仅用了大劲，而且还咬紧了牙关。段佳欣看样子坚持不下了。这时，段佳欣的啦啦队都不敢看了，眼睛盯着她给她打气。结果是吴昊赢了。后面两局也一样，段佳欣大败而归。

又上来个选手--张君上来上场挑战。吴昊一开始就坚持不住了。同学们着急了，都给她打气。这下，吴昊又充满了劲，用力往右边扳。张君捏了一把汗，毫不留情地往左边使劲扳。最后，吴昊反败为胜。第二局开始了。随着一声令下，张君马上使足了劲，一转眼就把吴昊扳倒了桌边，吴昊又支持不住了。就在一刹啦，吴昊的手被扳到了。第三局开始。张君又满头大汗，吴昊使了一把劲。像前面一样，吴昊还是坚持不住，被张君扳倒了。最后，红队获胜。

掰手劲多么地好玩啊！

暑假，正是炎热之时，爸爸决定带我和妈妈去西湖划船并一览西湖的风姿。

我们到了西湖后，准备划船。因为是清晨到那儿，所以没有多少人，只是看到了清晨的太阳和湖上的帆影。随着船桨的划动微波的荡漾起的涟漪，我们来到了西湖的中央。我们看到了断桥，断桥的桥身呈灰色，白堤犹如一条黑色的绸缎。

太阳渐渐升起来了，阳光也逐渐变强了。我有点热了，就对西湖的水打起主意来，我弯下身子，用手呈上一点水，然后擦在脸上。顿时，我感到神清气爽、精神抖擞。接着，爸爸说：“现在的水质真是大为改观呀!以前的西湖水质差，放眼望去，没有鱼，没有鸭子，更没有荷花，只望到了一池污水。可是，后来沟通了西湖与钱塘江，使水质大为改观。”不错，现在的西湖真如美景一般，不仅水质好，而且湖中那些鱼儿少说也有三四斤，更难得可贵的是，这西湖成了鸭子栖息的“风水宝地”。

“妈，这香气从哪儿传来的?咱们快划去看看吧!”原来这是荷花发出的气味，荷花迷人的姿态，再加上荷叶地摆动，露珠的闪亮，三者构成了一幅荷花美景图，我陶醉了，完全陶醉在这片充满生气，充满香气，充满画意的美景里了。

快到正午了，人渐渐多了，渐渐热闹起来了，唯有美丽的西湖正保持着它独有的平静。我要回家了，西湖，虽然我无法天天看到你，但你却在我的暑假点上了最灿烂的一笔。

下次假期我还要来这里玩!

重阳节，又称登高节，为农历九月初九。在重阳节这天，传统的饮食是重阳糕、菊花(chrysanthemum)酒、菊花茶。登高、插茱萸(cornel)和赏菊是重阳节的重要习俗。

这些活动不仅增加了重阳节的节日气氛，而且据说通过这些活动，还可以避祸免灾。如今，重阳节已经无法见到插茱萸的风俗了，但是很多人仍然习惯在这一天登高赏菊，观赏秋天的美景。在中国的一些地方，重阳节还有祭拜祖先之墓的风俗。具有悠久历史的重阳节已经被列入第一批国家级非物质(in切rngible)文化遗产名录。

Chongyang Festival, also known as Heights Ascending Festival, falls on the ninth day of the ninth month in the Chinese lunar calendar. Chongyang cake, chrysanthemum wine and chrysanthemum tea are traditional diet of the festival. Ascending heights, wearing cornel and appreciating chrysanthemums are important customs of that day. These activities not only add to the festive atmosphere, but allegedly help people avoid misfortune and prevent disasters.

Although one can no longer see anyone wearing cornel on the day of Chongyang Festival now,many people still have the habit of climbing a mountain to appreciate chrysanthemums and enjoy the beautiful scenery in autumn. In some places of China, people also visit the graves of their ancestors to pay their respects. The long-standing Chongyang Festival has been listed in the first group of national intangible cultural heritages.

[重阳节小学英语作文

今天，我们班进行了激烈的七巧板比赛。

首先，我们开始在班里进行了选拔赛。拼到鱼苗的时候，我左思右想就想不出答案，幸好我们班谁都没有拼出这个图形。李老师又宣布，谁拼牛拼的最快谁就去参加比赛。结果，我拼的最快，而且还全对，所以我去参加了比赛。

我和李天程、韩蒋骏兴冲冲的来到了阶梯教室，已经有四十几个同学坐好了，我们比赛的年级有三、四年级。随着老师一声令下，我们开始飞快的拼起了小狐狸，因为小狐狸我们没有拼过，所以我们拼的慢了，。本来李天程是过不了关的，但是我提醒了他一下，他拼的狐狸头拼反了，他就对了我们都顺利的过了关。第二关拼的是长颈鸭，我前面那三（1）班的同学，他十秒就拼完了，他在那边自言自语的说：“我们长颈鸭都拼过了。”怪不得他拼的那么快，原来他们都拼过了长颈鸭，时间不等人，我不再听他说话了，我只用了一分钟就把长颈鸭拼了出来。我把拼完的图打乱了，可李天程和韩蒋骏没有拼出来，时间到了，李天程和韩蒋骏被淘汰了。他们在出口看了我一会，就依依不舍的离开了。接下来老师宣布了一句话让我万分高兴，现在，你们都是三等奖，因为我可以得到名次了。接着开始拼蝙蝠了，我原先是左思右想也想不出答案，但是我把三角一转就出来蝙蝠了。

接下来，就要宣布成绩了，我是一等奖，我心里万分激动，因为我一年级获得了二等奖，二年级本来也是一等奖，三年级获得了我有史以来最好的一次成绩。我心理激动万分！

[七巧板比赛小学作文

Today is my long-awaited holiday - "National Day". In the morning, I put on my clothes and traveled with my father and mother.

We came to the city of Changzhi City in the city of Huang cliff, where the beautiful scenery, the lake is clear and transparent.

Into the door to see both sides cliff top together, looking up as a ray of days, there is "Kazuo Guan, Wan Fu Mo open" risk. And then went up to the mountain park, the park around the Qifeng different stone, really beautiful.

Continue to climb, we entered the weapons library site, weapons warehouse depth of 72 meters, 18 meters wide, 25 meters high, where was once made "Huang Yadong Battle" site.

Huang Yadong is a good place for adolescent patriotism education and tourism.

今天，是我盼望已久的节日——“国庆节”。早上，我穿上衣服，和爸爸、妈妈一起旅游。

我们来到了位于长治市黎城县的黄崖洞，这里的风景美丽极了，湖水清澈透明。

进入大门，看到两侧崖顶欲合，仰视如一线天，有“一夫当关，万夫莫开”之险。再往上走来到了高山公园，公园四周奇峰异石，真是美不胜收。

继续攀登，我们步入兵器库遗址，兵器库洞深72米，宽18米，高25米，这里曾经是著明的“黄崖洞保卫战”遗址。

黄崖洞真是一个进行青少年爱国主义教育及旅游的好地方。

My Home

My home is on the first floor. There are two bedrooms， a kitchen and a living room. I’m a child. I have a nice bedroom. In my bedroom， there is bedroom， a closet， an air- conditioner and so on. My closet is green. My bed is blue. I love my bedroom very much.

今年暑假的一天下午，我们全家人在家里进行了一次别开生面的书法比赛。一切准备就绪后，我清了清嗓子宣布：“本次写字比赛是由小动物来完成，人是幕后指挥，能让小动物写出一个字或画出一幅画为及格，谁最有创意谁就是赢家。”说完，我们都各自秘密准备了一番，然后我们三个人互相看看，都是一副胸有成竹的样子。

比赛开始了，妈妈首先登场，只见她在干净的地板上铺了一张大白纸，在纸上零零散散地撒了小米，又在一个浅盘子里倒上绿色的颜料水，她要干什么？我和爸爸对视着，心里直纳闷。妈妈却朝我们神秘一笑，然后拿出一只小鸡，在颜料盘里把小鸡的爪子蘸湿，放在白纸上。小鸡在纸上啄米，一会儿，纸上便“画”满了绿色的叶片。我和爸爸为妈妈的奇思妙想拍手叫绝，妈妈得意地说：“怎么样，这叫‘雪地翠竹图’。”就在妈妈为她的杰作陶醉时，小鸡一下子坐在了白纸上面，把颜料弄得模模糊糊，再也看不清了。妈妈沮丧极了。

爸爸出场了，要我和妈妈还有他一起下楼，我们三人来到了蚂蚁窝旁。只见爸爸用饼干屑在洞口拼了一个“胜”字，片刻之间，一群蚂蚁爬了上去，地上形成了一个黑黑的“胜”字，爸爸正兴高采烈地欣赏着自己的作品，眨眼间，地上已经一片空白，蚂蚁们把饼干屑运回了洞里，爸爸败了。

最后该我出场了，我吸取了爸爸的教训，心想：蚂蚁能把饼干屑搬走，我就给它来个搬不走的。我先用胶水在地上写了一个“奇”字，又在上面撒了白糖。蚂蚁哨兵一会儿就引来了一群同伴，立刻，地上形成了一个“奇”字，它们也想把糖搬走，可脚却被粘在胶水上了。

爸爸妈妈傻了眼，异口同声地说：“还是亮亮最有创意，我们认输。”

比赛结束了，不仅我们全家人收获了快乐，想必小鸡和小蚂蚁也感到了新奇、高兴吧！

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小学生作文写作技巧——写人的作文怎么写

来源：太原奥数网整理 2011-10-20 10:15:39

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怎样写好写人作文

以写人为主的记叙文主要是通过对人物外貌、语言、动作、心理活动的描写和典型事例的叙述来反映人物的思想、性格、品质、作风等特点。

要写好写人为主的记叙文，应当从以下几方面入手：

1、写好人物的形象。人物的形象，一般指人物的外貌、语言、动作、心理活动等。人物的外貌，就是人物的外形特征，包括容貌、衣着、姿态、神情等等。外貌描写首先必须从文章中心思想的需要出发，要求抓住人物的本质特征，有选择、有重点地描写。人物的语言包括人物的独白，对话，交谈以及语气。“言为心声”。人物的语言是人物内心世界的直接表现。因此成功的语言描写能恰当地表现人物的身份、年龄、思想、品质、作风和个性特点。描写人物语言时，要注意符合人物的身份，表现人物的思想感情，反映人物相互间的关系。描写人物的动作时，不仅要写出人物“做什么”，还要写出“怎么做”。心理活动是无声的语言，是直接表现人物精神面貌，思想活动的手段。描写人物的心理活动时，要注意把心理活动产生的原因叙述清楚，还要注意与外貌、动作、语言描写结合起来。外貌、语言、动作、心理活动写好了，人物的形象就突出、鲜明了。

2、抓住人物的特点。每个人都有自己的特点，这个特点可以从人物的年龄、外貌、语言、动作、兴趣、个性、生活习惯等诸方面去考虑。一个人的特点是多方面的，作文时，我们应根据中心思想有所选择地写。

3、选用典型事例。人与事是分不开的。一个人做的事很多，在作文时我们应选择那些最能表现人物思想、性格和文章中心思想的典型事件。

4、运用细节描写。细节描写就是对能充分表现文章中心思想的人物外貌，语言、动作、表情等细小环节作具体、细致的描写。

小学阶段以写人为主的记叙文，一般分为三种类型；写一个人、写两个人、写几个人。其中应以写一个人为主。

一、写一个人。

记一个人的写人记叙文，大致有以下三种情况：

（一）通过写一件事写一个人。有的文章写人只写了一件事，写这一类的作文要注意以下几点：

1、要选择有代表性的生动事例画写。反映一个人的精神面貌的事例是很多的，通过一件事写人就要选取最有代表性的生动事例来写。

2、要写出事情的发展过程，使人物的形象逐步完整。

3、要把事情写具体。用一个典型事例记叙一个人，应该把这一事例写具体，这样人物形象才能丰满。

4、为了使读者对人物了解得更全面，使重点记叙的这件事有充分的依据和坚实的思想基础，使人物的形象更加丰富，文章的开头可以对人物作简要的介绍。

（二）通过几件事写一个人。

我们在生活中会接触到各种各样的人，有时使用一件事来反映一个人就显得比较单簿，不足以充分反映人物的特点及其品质，因此，必须用两三件事才可能说的明白，再现得充分。

通过几件事写一个人，要注意以下几点：

1、几件事不能相互矛盾，，人物的性格在几件事中要和谐、统一。

2、概括交代和具体描写相结合。在一篇简短的作文中要用几件事写一个人，不可能将每一件事详细叙述，因此一般可以彩杨交代和具体描写相结合的方法。即先概括交代一些事例，再具体记叙一两件事。

3、通过对比的方法写一个人。

通过对比方法写一个人，一般有三种：第一种是同一个人前后相比，说明这个人变化；第二种是对一个人的认识前后相比，说明这个人的品质；第三种是一个人同另一个人比，突出歌颂其中一个人。

通过对比的方法写一个人要注意：

（1）要突出主要人物及其主要特点。

（2）要写出人物的真实表现，不要捏造事实，采用拔高或贬低的方法。

二、写两个人

写两个人，一般是写《我和**》，**应包括亲人、同学、朋友、老师等熟悉的人，要写好这一类型的作文必须注意：

（一）要写好人物之间的联系。《我和**》，题目中突出了一个“和”字，这就要求从双方写起，通过具体的事例，写出“我”和**之间的联系。在叙事过程中，要写出彼此之间都想了些什么，说了些什么，做了些什么。只有从双方落笔，才能把握住题目要求写的重点。

（二）用对话展开情节。写《我和**》作文时，由于要写出两个人之间的关系，所以一定要写好两个人之间的对话。要用对话展开情节，用对话表现文章的中心。

三、写几个人。

写几个人是比较复杂的以写人为主的记叙文，可以写“一家子”、“这一班”，也可以写“几个小伙伴”。总之，不论是家庭的，学校的、社会的，只要是自己熟悉的几人都行。

这类作文有以下几种写法。

（一）列人物表似的介绍。

（二）有代表性的介绍。

（三）以一件事为线索写几个人。

（四）通过几件事写几个人。

小学生作文写作技巧——写人的作文怎么写(2)

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怎样写好写人作文2

写人的作文，就是通过记叙人物的具体活动，来表现人物特点、性格、道德品质、精

神风貌及思想感情。要想写好写人的作文,必须学会以下几个方面的技巧、方法。

一、抓住特点。

有的同学爱学习、有的同学爱帮助别人，有的同学爱做小手工，有的同学爱吃零食，等等。这“爱学习”“爱帮助别人”“爱做小手工”“爱吃零食”就是这些人的主要特点。写人的作文就是要抓住这些特点，通过特点反映出这个人是什么样的人，有什么样的思想品质，等等。这些特点抓得越准确，事例写得越具体，给读者留下的印象就越深刻。如《胆小的我》，就是抓住了“我”胆小的事，写出了“我”胆小的性格特点。

二、选好事例。

写人的文章，也要写事例，通过一个或几个事例来表现出这个人的特点（最好用两、三件事来写一个人）。选择事例时，要选那些能打动人、影响人、感染人，给人印象深刻的事例，也就是要选择典型、新颖的事例。作文时，你第一个想到的事例不要用，第二个想到的事例也不要用，第三个甚至是第四、第五个想到的事例，你用在作文中一般容易吸引人、给人留下深刻的印象。这是因为你容易想到，别人也容易想到，大家都把这样的事写在作文中，作文就成了人云亦云的“大路货”，得不到高分或老师的好评。所选的事例要能充分表现人物的性格和品质。当你读完《胆小的我》后，你对“我”就有了深刻的印象了，作文就成功了。

三、运用描写。

要想把人物写得栩栩如生、活灵活现，就要运用动作、语言、心理、神态、肖像等多种描写方法。如《胆小的我》中“吓得我大叫一声，赶忙把眼睛蒙住，心‘怦怦’地跳个不停。”这句动作描写，把“我”胆小的性格写得惟妙惟肖。描写要符合人物的年龄、身份和职业。对同一个事物，一个小学生说的话肯定同大学教授说的话不一样。

四、写出细节。

要把人物细微的动作及其变化，写具体，写生动。如《胆小的我》中“把礼物放在了一个明显的地方”，第二天“故意给‘忘了’”。一“放”一“忘”，把“我”胆小的性格特征，给写活了。

五、善用对比。

对比是写人作文经常用到的写作方法。可以拿自己的某一方面特点、爱好、特长和他人的对比，即横向对比；也可以写自己现在在某一方面怎么样和过去自己在某一方面如何进

行对比，即纵向对比。通过横、纵对比，能把一个人的思想品质、精神风貌、主要特点给突出形象地表现出来。运用对比描写，不应该勉强凑合，适合采用对比写法就用，不适合采用对比写法的就不要用。

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