小学英语写作比赛(最新20篇)

This is our school. There are many classrooms in it.There are eight hundred students and sixty-nine teachers in our school. There are many trees and flowers in it. All the teachers and students like our school very much.

We come to school at seven.We havefour classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.

Our classroom is big and clean. We have lessons here. We do our homework at home.

All the students study hard.

今天，我们举行了一次拔河比赛。在正式比赛之前，我们已经跟三班的同学进行了预赛，我们五战五胜。

正式比赛开始了，我们第一场比赛的对手是四年级七班，七班的同学个个精神抖擞，生龙活虎，身体比我们高大许多，但是我们也是摩拳擦掌，跃跃欲试，因为我们有必胜的信心。

裁判员一声哨响，我们就用力拉动大绳，啦啦队的同学也有节奏地喊着：“加油，加油……”同学们都紧紧地握住大绳，咬着牙，脸涨得通红。在老师的指挥下，我们一鼓作气，大绳中间的红丝带朝我们这边移过来了，我们胜利了！

第二场，我们的对手是五班，别看他们不如七班的同学强壮，但是实力非同一般，因为他们已经胜了一场。比赛开始了，我们大家一起用力拉动大绳，突然，对方一用力，眼看绳子就要被拉过去了，但是我们没有泄气，拼命向后用力，我只感到口干舌燥，两眼冒金星。啦啦队的同学也着急地喊着加油，恨不得上场来帮我们一把。结果，我们稳住了阵脚，费了九牛二虎之力终于把绳子拉了过来，获胜后，我们也一屁股坐在了地上。

第三场是决赛，我们的对手是实力非常强大的四班。因为我们比了两场的缘故，我浑身像散了架，已经没有了力气，双手勒得通红，无论我们怎么拉，也拉不过来，不知不觉绳子已经被对方拉了过去。

虽然这次拔河比赛，我们屈居第二，但是我相信，明年我们一定得冠军。

myenglishFriendname is jim.

he is ten， his family in london，he and his family member comes our china to has a cosin，he name is qianyu hi is oniy four years old，but he has a lot of he is pointing at the chopsticks to ask that my this is anything.

I and jim has become the good friend ral days later jim said that he wanted， he said that i love china .i will forget that you zhou lei， will have free time london to look at me see you you.

im of the opinion that taiwans students are pathetic because they have too much pressure in their lives. because they have to pass the joint college entrance eam, they must study hard, to meet their teachers and parents epectations, they have to study day and night. but its such a shame because most students dont know what they really want and what their goals in their future should be. so what should they strive towards? should they only want to get the best grades and pass the jcee? the answer is no. in my view, all students should calm down for a few minutes and think earnestly about what they want.

今天下午我们在小区里举行了一场激烈的拔河比赛!

比赛分为男女两组先初赛，再决赛。我们的对手是女生。我们轻松的以二比一的成绩战胜的对手。紧接着第二轮，是实力强劲的女汉子，我们个个磨掌擦拳。

决战子烧伤即将吹起，同学们摆开架势腿成弓状。脚钩着脚。哨声划破了天空，代表决赛正式开始。。刚开始我们男生的这边明显比女生的要强一些。比赛基本已达到白热化状态。20秒30秒40秒，双方选手一直僵持着，大家身体都很疲惫，但是没有一个人放弃。

我们精神抖擞，一鼓作气分离。把红苕稳稳的移到我方的阵营。我们胜利啦!经过两个多分钟的角逐，我们最终获得了本场的胜利。

我们终于胜利啦!同学们纷纷抱在了一起。轩宝自己内心的喜悦。老公呼声一浪高过一浪，在小区的上空久久回荡……

Have you ever wondered about theStars? In some ways， stars are like people. They are born， then grow old， and at last they die.

A star is born from dust and gas. Slowly the dust and gas make a ball. The ball gets very hot. Then it stars to give off light.

The young star grows into a giant. Many years go by. The older star begin to get small again. At last its light goes out. The stars life is over.

We are going to Shanghai to visit the Oriental Pearl Tower (东方明珠塔) tomorrow. It’s a beautiful and famous place. And it’s more beautiful at night. Do you know how we can get there ?

TheOrientalPearlToweris in the east ofShanghai. It is far from the train station (站) . So we can to there by the No. 1 subway. Get off at the People’s Park. Next go straight for ten minutes, turn left at the third crossing , then walk straight. You can find theOrientalPearlToweron the right.

今天在森林中举行了一场数学比赛，参赛者有：聪明的小兔明明，机灵的小猴灵灵，可爱的小熊可可 ，凶猛的小老虎军军，裁判是森林之王狮子。

第一场比赛开始了，狮子出了一道题：把一根木头据成4段，据一次4分钟，一共要花多少时间？明明一边听一边把题目写下来，慢慢思考。而灵灵却画了一张图，一次4分钟，一共据了3次，所以3X4=12（分钟）。可可在听题目时已经睡着了，被判为自动出局，聚聚听得头昏眼花便要自动出局。这一场比赛灵灵和明明赢了，因为在这一场比赛有两个动物退出，所以直接进入到总结赛。

最后进入总决赛了，狮子出了一道稍微难的题，在一条新马路两边都要种树，每隔5米种一棵树，从头到尾共种202棵，这条马路长多少米？明明有点骄傲，所以这题目没写，结果连先算哪个都不清楚了。灵灵灵机一动想出了办法，202-2=101（棵）101-1=100（段）100X5=500（米）这道题就这样解开了。

当然最后的冠军就是灵灵了。

After finishing my homework I went to the Tai Mountian with my friends during my holiday. When we got near the Tai Mountain by buswe were very excited. We planned to get on the top of the Tai Mountain. Next we began to walk we to the foot of the mountian. There were many visitors there. And all of us enjoyed the beautiful views beside the steps. At last we reached the top.Not only we had a picnic there but also we took several picturestoo.

Though we were very tiredwe were very happy about that trip.

【导语】英语写作是中考中检测学生语言应用能力的最重要部分。提高中考写作水平，需要有效的训练。下面关于英语作文的写作方法，一起来阅读下文吧!

学生写作时，如果语句平平，只选用一些普通的、直截了当的词，那么，这样写出来的文章根本没有可阅读行，就像是一碗没有油盐酱醋面条一样，让人提不起一点精神和看下去的欲望，呆板、单调，没有可读性。如果一篇文章要让读者有可读性、有深度，同学们更应该掌握一些高级点词和语句来装饰你的文章，突出这篇文章的彩头，使文章增添文采，给读者以不一样的感受。具体方法可以参照下面的语句：

1. 画龙点睛，一篇文章的开头很重要。

在通常情况下，英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”，即主语一般都会在谓语前面。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式，比如在文章的开始的时候写一些倒状语句或以状语为起始语句的开头，这样子的文章更具表现力和感染力。如：

(1) There stands an old temple at the top of the hill.

→ At the top of the hill there stands an old temple.

在小山顶上有一座古庙。

(2) You can do it well only in this way.

→ Only in this way can you do it well.

只有这样你才能把它做好。

(3) A young woman sat by the window.

→ By the window sat a young woman.

窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女。

2. 避免重复使用同一词语

为了使表达更生动，更富表现力，同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思，尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字，就会立刻想起like，事实上，英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多，如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。如：

I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

我喜欢看书，而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。

3. 合理使用省略句

合理恰当地使用省略句，不仅可以使文章精练、简洁，而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。如：

(1) He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?

→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?

他可能很忙，要是这样，我以后再来拜访。要是不忙，我现在可以见他吗?

(2) If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.

→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.

如果天气好，我们就去；如果天气不好，我们就不去了。

(3) She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.

→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.

她本可申请这份工作的，但她没有。

4. 适当运用非谓语结构

非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构，适当运用非谓语结构，会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。如：

(1) When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.

→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.

听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。

(2) As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

由于不知道她的地址，我没法和她联系。

(3) As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

→ Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

他出生农民家庭，只上过两年学。

5. 结合使用长句与短句

在英语写作中，过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是，根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语，使文章显得错落有致，这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。如：

At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.

→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.

中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后，我们唱的唱歌，跳的跳舞，还有的讲笑话、下棋，大家玩得很开心。

6. 适当使用短语代替单词

(1) He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.

→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.

他已决定长大了当老师。

(2) He doesnt like music.

→ He doesnt care much for music.

他不大喜欢音乐。

(3) He told me that the question was now under discussion.

→ He told me that the question was now being discussed.

他告诉我问题现正正在讨论中。

7. 恰当套用某些固定表达

(1) He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.

→ He was too tired to walk any farther.

他太累了，不能再往前走了。

(2) The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.

→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.

这电影很有趣，学生和老师都很喜欢。

(3) Your son is old. He can look after himself now.

→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.

你的儿子已经长大，可以自己照顾自己了。

8. 尽量使句子带点“洋味”

(1) Dont worry. Be bold and try it, and youll learn it soon.

→Dont worry. Just go for it, and youll get it soon.

别担心，大胆试一试，你很快就会学会的。

(2) Thank you for playing with us.

→Thank you for sharing the time with us.

谢谢你陪我玩。

9. 综合使用各类所谓的“高级”结构

(1) Now everyone knows the news. I think Jim must have let it out.

→ Now everyone knows the news. I think it must have been Jim who has let it out.

现在人人都知道这消息了，我想一定是吉姆把它泄露出去的。

(2) We had to stand there to catch the offender.

→ What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.

我们所能做的只是站在那儿，设法抓住违章者。

(3) If her pronunciation is not better than her teacher’s, it is at least as good as her teacher’s.

→ Her pronunciation is as good as, if not better than, her teacher’s.

如果她的语音不比她的老师好的话，至少也不会比她老师的差。

10. 适当使用名言警句点缀

在写作时根据实际情况恰当地用上一两句名言警句来点缀文章，不仅使文章显得有深度、有智慧，而且会让文章在评分中上一个“得分档次”。如：

(1) As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.

(2) There is a proverb goes like this “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is ture that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.

(3) In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”

We have a lot of puppies, but there is a puppy I always forget. It is a lively and lovely puppy, the body yellow and soft hair.

My dog is big and round, and sometimes my dogs swing is like a dance. And once again, I was going out with my mom, the puppy was in the house, and when we were gone, it was still farting, really funny! And once again my dad watched TV in the room, suddenly heard Snoring, we carefully listen to the original puppy on the blanket to sleep it! Our familys puppies like to play with children, as long as a man crouched puppy came over.

Our familys puppy is cute and I like it very much.

First, we have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. We have to get to school before 7:30 because we have a morning class.

Second, I like my school life because teachers and my classmates are friendly and helpful. We also have lots of after-school activies.

Third, our school environment is very beautiful, the teachers all can make their lesson interesting and instructive. So I like my school life very much.

我的学校生活是忙碌的，神奇的。首先，我们有四节课在上午和下午三。我们到学校7:30之前因为我们早上有课。其次，我喜欢我的学校生活，因为老师和我的同学都很友好，乐于助人。我们也有很多的课外活动。第三、我们的学校环境很漂亮，老师们都能使自己的课有趣又有启发性。所以我非常喜欢我的学校生活。

Taiwan is part of our country It is the largest island in It has an area of about 36,000 square kilometers and a population of over 20 million It is separated from the mainland by the Taiwan Strait On the island the climate is mild and the resources are very rich Many, many centuries ago there were the Chinese who lived and worked in Taiwan In the 17th country the Dutch invaded Taiwan In 1661 an army under Zheng Chenggong drove out the Dutch

星期一那天，老师对我们说：“学校将展开第一届朗读比赛，就在下一个星期五举行。”我们听了都很有信心地说：“我们是非常棒的，我们一定能赢。”可有些人迫不及待就问老师：“我们读哪一篇课文呀？”老师听了就拿起粉笔来，在黑板上写了“鼎湖山听泉”这五个大字，同学们看了就连忙拿起课文，先熟悉一下课文，再开始放声朗读。

后来的十几天里，老师一直在给我们指点我们怎么读好课文，怎么把自己的感情显现出来。

终于到了比赛那天，同学们都穿着整齐的校服，来到了比赛的阶梯教室，这时我们的心里都非常紧张，心“砰砰”乱跳，因为我们是最后一个上场比赛的班级，所以我们吸取了别的班朗读上的弊病，这样使我们班读得更好。

过了一会儿，该我们班朗读了，我们大家都鼓起勇气上台站好队形，我们用最洪亮的声音、浓厚的感情朗读了起来，特别是我们班的黄晓琨同学领读的部分读得非常帅，当我们朗读完毕的时候，得到了全场的热烈掌声，我们心里那块沉重的“大石头”完全放了下来，这时同学们的脸上浮起了笑容。

这次朗读的成功，是同学们集体努力的结果，但也有我们祝老师的一份功劳啊！

I am a middle school student. I have many new classmates now. One of them is my best friend. Now, let me introduce my classmate to you.

This is my classmate .His name is Lin Peng. He is 12 years old. We are the same age .And he is a little taller than me. He is very kind to me .He likes math most and he is good at it. He always helps me with math .He also likes playing basketball .We often play basketball together after school.

I am happy to be classmate and friend with him. I hope we can be friends forever.

“请四年级同学作好拔河比赛准备!”那天，是四年级秋季的拔河比赛的日子，听到广播后，我班的同学去排队准备了。作为一个观众，我默然决定，自己的心要与运动员一起飞，一同取得胜利。

同学们在操场上排成整齐的队伍，像一条环环相扣的铁链。一根粗大的绳子就卧在男女队伍中央。一声哨响，他们拿起了绳，脚靠着脚，盯住对方，眼里喷发出战斗的火焰。

又是一声哨响，拔河比赛开始了!双方实力相当，毫不示弱，谁也不让谁。你看!我班第一个同学-----谭传仁的脸胀得通红，咬紧了牙关，眼睛死死地瞪着对方，身体努力向后倾斜，对方也不会认输，充足马力，一使蛮劲，红绳似乎心甘情愿，偏向了那头。我班的同学们皱紧了眉头，手也搓得通红，仰起头，仿佛要大吼一声。再看看押后的代云鑫，也在拼命使劲，他把粗大的绳子扛在肩头，身子朝后，像拉车一样把背弓得老高，他一埋头，脚卖力向前一迈，汗水打湿了他的头发。通过九牛二虎之力，我班好不容易把红绳夺回了中央。我破嗓呐喊，声音喊哑了，手也拍麻了，还不忘看看手表，差不多过去一分半，时间艰涩地流动着，像沙漏坠入我忐忑不安的心房。不知同学还能坚持多久。再看看操场，双方体力大大减弱，正是拼体力和耐力的时候，老师也在拼命呐喊助威，仿佛想帮同学一把，但又不行。终于，同学们燃起斗志，又一次鼓足气，准备将胜利夺到手中。一刹那，全场屏住呼吸，同学们一起向后一顷，虽然都摔到在地，但红绳被夺了过来，虽然还有些不情愿。顿时，天空，大地充满了欢笑，天变得格外晴朗，绿茵操场也变得格外浊绿，操场变成了欢乐的海洋。同学们蹦着，跳着，像凯旋的将军一样归来。

此时的阳光格外灿烂，我们火一样的热情已把操场点燃!

英语是一种语言，从语言学角度来看，学生在掌握一定数量的词汇与语法知识后，就要用来表达自己的思想、见解，这些落实到纸面上就是英语写作。为提高大家的英语写作能力和技巧，下面小编为大家带来英语六级写作方法技巧，欢迎大家学习!

英语六级写作方法技巧：

方法一：叙述法

叙述法发展段落主要是按照事物本身的时间或空间的排列顺序，通过对一些特有过渡连接词的使用，有层次分步骤地表达主题句的一种写作手段。用这种方法展开段落，作者能够清楚连贯地交待事物的本末，从而可以使读者可以清晰、完整地理解文章的含义，例如：，

In the flat opposite, a woman heard the noise outside. When she looked out through the window, she discovered that her neighbor was threatened by someone. She immediately called the police station. In answer to the call, a patrol police car arrived at the scene of the crime quickly. Three policemen went inside the flat at once, and others guarded outside the building to prevent anyone from escaping.，

这段是按照事物发展的先后顺序，叙述从发现案情、报警、到警察赶到、包围现场的过程。全文脉络清晰，叙述的层次感强，结构紧凑。

常用于叙述法中的过渡连接词有：first, an the beginning, to start with, after that, later, then, afterwards, in the end, finally等。

方法二：列举法

作者运用列举法，是通过列举一系列的论据对topic sentence中摆出的论点进行广泛、全面地陈述或解释，列举的顺序可以按照所列各点内容的相对重要性、时间、空间等进行。，

Yesterday was one of those awful days for me when everything I did went wrong. First, I didnt hear my alarm clock and arrived late for work. Then, I didnt read my diary properly and forgot to get to an important meeting with my boss. During the coffee break, I dropped my coffee cup and spoilt my new skirt. At lunch time, I left my purse on a bus and lost all the money that was in it. After lunch, my boss was angry because I hadnt gone to the meeting. Then I didnt notice a sign on a door that said "Wet Paint" and so I spoilt my jacket too. When I got home I couldnt get into my flat because I had left my key in my office. So I broke a window to get in and cut my hand.

根据本段主题句中的关键词组everything I did went wrong，作者列举了8点内容，分别由first, then, during the coffee break, after lunch time等连接词语引出，使得该文条理清楚、脉络分明、内容连贯。

常用于列举法的过渡连接词有：for one thing , for another, finally, besides, moreover, one another , still another, first, second, also等。

方法三：重复法

句子的一部分反复出现在段落中，这就是重复法。它往往造成一种步步紧逼的气氛，使文章结构紧凑，有感染力。比如：

Since that time, which is far enough away from now, I have often thought that few people know what secrecy there is in the young, under terror. I was in mortal terror of the young man who wanted my heart and liver; I was in mortal terror of my interlocutor with the iron leg; I was in mortal terror of myself, from whom an awful promise had been extracted; --

该段中反复应用了I was in mortal terror of …我经常处于恐怖之中。

以上， 我们结合具体文章讨论了展开段落的几种方法。在实际写作中，我们往往不必拘泥于一种写作方法，而是将若干方法穿插在一起，使文章有声有色。

方法四：因果分析法

在阐述某一现象的段落中，常采用因果分析法。例如：

The role of women in todays society is changing. One reason is that women have begun to assert themselves as independent people through the womens movement. Also, women are aware of the alternatives to staying at home. Another reason is that increasing numbers of women who enter new fields and interests serve as role models for other women. Moreover, men are becoming more conscious of the abilities of women and have begun to view their independence positively.

本段中，主题句提出了一种社会现象，推展句则对产生这种现象的原因作出各种解释。 常用于因果分析法的连接词有：because, so, as a result等。

方法五：对比法

将同类的事物按照某种特定的规则进行比较分析是一种常用的思维方法。通过对比，更容易阐述所述对象之间的异同和优缺点，例如：

The heart of an electronic computer lies in its vacuum tubes, or transistors. Its electronic circuits work a thousand times faster than the nicer cells in the human brain. A problem that might take a human being a long time to solve can be solved by a computer in one minute.

在这段文字上， 作者为了突出电子计算机运行速度之快，首先将它与人脑进行了比较， "-- a thousand times faster than --" ;而后，又将这一概念具体到了 "a problem"上，通过对比使读者从 "-- a long time -- in one minute"上有更加直观的认识。

常用于对本法或比较法上的过渡连接词有：than, compared with等。

我又迟到了 I Am Late Again

I opened my eyes in the morning and looked at the clock. "Oh, dear! Its

half past seven already. Ill be late again," I thought. Without breakfast, I

hurried to school. But it began to rain hard.

早晨我睁开眼睛，看看钟表，“天啊!已经七点半了。我又要迟到了，”我想。没有吃早饭，我就匆匆朝学校赶去，可是天又下起雨来。

When I got to the classroom, the maths teacher had already begun his

lesson. It was Mr wang. All of us were afraid of him. I didnt like him, or his

lessons. I opened the door. " Im late again, Mr Wang."

当我到教室时，数学老师已经开始讲课了。是王老师，所有的学生都怕他。我不喜欢他，也不喜欢他的课。我打开门，“王老师，我又迟到了。”

"Ive told you not to be late, but you ..." he said angrily. But suddenly

he stopped, and looked at my clothes. He quickly took off his own jacket and

handed it to me. "Now take off your wet coat and put wet one on." he said

kindly.

“我早就告诉你不要迟到，可是你……”他生气地说。可是他突然停下来，看了看我的湿衣服。他很快脱下自己的上衣递给我。“把你的湿衣服脱下来，套上这件。”他和蔼地说。

It was a bit large for me, but I felt warm in it.

衣服套我身上有点大，可是穿上感觉很温暖。

下上午第二节课，同学们“哗”的一声跑出教室，冲到操场上。大家都很兴奋，因为马上要跟三5班进行拔河比赛了。大家摩拳擦掌，很想取得最后的胜利，又怕输了比赛，我有点紧张不安，突然想到了不屈不挠的杜伦多派特利，“我们班一定会赢的!”我不停给自己打气。

比赛开始了，选手们站在绳子两端，拽着又长又粗的绳子。我们班的队员个个脸涨得像红苹果，咬牙切齿使劲往后拉呀拉，我们班拉拉队员用自己吃奶的劲大喊大叫：“三1班加油!三1班必胜!三1班最棒!”有的用手势指挥着同学往后拉，有的直眉瞪眼呼喊比赛队员加把劲，还有的居然用跳绳在肩上比划着拖牛的动作，队员们听到了我们的呼唤，好像知道了我们的一片苦心，更用劲拉了，有人都滑坐到地上了，还是死死不松手，坚忍不拔地拉着。经过大家齐心协力，绳子一点点往我们这边移，眼看我们就要胜利了，可在最后一刻，不知道队员们骄傲了，还是已经筋疲力尽，就有点松劲，三5班趁机把绳子扯过去了。

虽然我们很失望，但还是有收获。因为我们学到了拔河的技巧，还吃一堑长一智，明白了不到最后胜利就决不能松劲!

今天下午，我们的虞老师对我们说：“今天啊，我们与五1，五2，五3，五5班举行拔河比赛。”这一句话没什么，可说出来就不得了了，同学们个个跃跃欲试，都想去拔河，给班里拿一个好成绩。

我们来到了宽阔的草坪上，虞老师来选参加比赛的人了，同学们一个个都举起手，就怕自己“落选”了，最后老师选中了我和其他男生，还有的人做拉拉队。虞老师让我们摩拳擦掌，做热身运动。比赛开始了，规则是３局两胜制。第一局我们和五1班比，我们用出了九牛二虎之力，拼命地拉，我们的脸，一个个都憋得通红，汗珠不时地从脸上落下，由于我们有点轻敌，第一局我们输了。可是我们第二局、第三局连扳两局，这一次我们赢了。

之后我们班过五关，斩六将进入了决赛。我们的对手还是五１班，他們好不容易挺過來和我們再次較量。比赛开始了，双方同学脸涨得通红通红的，一滴滴豆大的汗珠从额头上流下来。有的咬緊牙关，有的紧闭双眼，使出吃奶的力气，拼命向后拉，身体向后倾斜，仿佛要一口气把绳子拉过来似的。由于他们是我们预赛的“手下败将”，因为在精神上我们班就有优势，所以第一局我们赢了。但是在后面的几局就不太理想了，我们都输了，以至我们得到了亚军。回了教室，我们班的哭声此起彼伏。遗憾﹑可惜，这两个词来形容我们再合适不过了。

“好了，大家别哭了，虽然这次我们屈居亚军，但是我已经很满足了：一，我们拿到亚军，已完全出乎我的预料。二，我为我们这班有这么好的团结精神感到骄傲。同学们，这次我们虽败犹荣，下次如果再举行比赛的话，我们一定能拿第一，是不是？”老师安慰我们。“是！”我们班的声音回应在校园的每一处。五１班，以后再舉行比賽我們決賽場上見，走着瞧。

一. 肯定不如否定好

修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。

双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。

例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”，如果写成The postman comes on time every day，就不如变成双重否定，The postman never fails to come on time，就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。

“几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响”，写成双重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude towards life had not been affected by the earthquake.

应用类似的修辞会在中为同学们加分。

二. 陈述不如倒装妙

在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。

倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，就足以应对书面表达。