我的假日英文怎么写【精品20篇】

A man who is careful in choosing friends will certainly derive benefit from

them。 Why? Because there are more false friends than real ones in this world。 To

have one real friends is better than a hundred false ones。 Friends who flatter

you to your face are not true friends。

We must make friends with those who have good character and kindness of

heart。 On the other hand， we should do our best to a void keeping pany with bad

people。

Dear customers

All sensors is pleased to announce that we have been acquired by Amphenol

Corporation. We are very excited about this event. The daily business of our

respected customers and all sensors will not change. We will continue our

business as usual, and your dedicated sales, customer service and engineering

liaison staff will continue to work to meet your needs for pressure sensors.

Amphenol group is the worlds leading sensor technology driven company, and

the acquisition here will provide more opportunities to provide better solutions

through collaboration, and to meet your demand for pressure sensors by realizing

a larger product portfolio.

All sensors will continue to drive new product development, similar to many

new products and more complex digital products launched in recent months. All of

these low range and high precision sensing solutions continue to keep the

industry leading.

For more product details and new product information, please feel free to

contact your local regional sales staff.

四六级作文中有一类题型，是大家提到就会头疼万分的，bingo，你答对了，就是言语理解型！这类题目要求大家根据题目要求中的一句谚语来写文章，比如曾经考的：Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will；knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it。这些题目一旦出现，很多同学只能硬着头皮随便写写，甚至连放弃这次四六级考试

行动实践类

1. Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜于语言。

2. Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。

3. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行始于足下

4. Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。（mother是经典的表示“原因”的比喻，is the mother of也是一个经典句型。比如：Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。）

5. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。

6. Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。（这句话没有语法错误，只是省略了形式主语It is）

7. Seek the truth from facts. 实事求是。

思想志向类

1. Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同

2. Look before you leap. 三思而后行。

3. Where there is a will，there is a way. 有志者事竟成。

4. Nothing seek，nothing find. 没有追求，就没有收获。

个人修养类

1. All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子。

2. Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance. 无德之类犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。（类似汉语中的：金玉其外败絮其中。）

3. God helps those who help themselves. 自助者天助。

4. A small mistake will trigger huge consequences. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。

5. Nothing is difficult to the man who will try. 世上无难事，只要肯攀登。

6. Nothing is to be got without pains but poverty. 世上唯有贫穷可以不劳而获。

7. One boy is a boy，two boys half a boy，three boys no boy. 一个和尚打水吃，两个和尚抬水吃，三个和尚没水吃。（这句汉语谚语用英语竟然是这样翻译的~~~orz）

8. Take things as they come. 既来之则安之。

工作学习类

1. It’s never too old to learn. 活到老学到老。

2. More hasty，less speed. 欲速则不达。

3. All work and no play make Jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。

4. One cannot put back the clock. 时钟不能倒转。5. One hour today is worth two tomorrow. 争分夺秒效率高。

6. Please the eye and plague the heart. 贪图一时快活，必然留下隐祸。

7. Success belongs to the persevering. 坚持就是胜利。（the+a.表示一类人，在这里the persevering表示坚持的人）

8. Health is better than wealth，health is happiness. 健康胜过财富，健康就是幸福。大家背诵这些亮点提升谚语，应该进行默写哦，千万不要写错了。同时这些谚语大家也可以灵活运用到其他写作题型中，千万不要禁锢自己的思维。

Every time when I run in the playground, I always set a target for myself,

such as I need to finish 3000 meters. It is such a long distance, but if I set

the target of 500 meters and repeat the target, then I can finish my original

goal. It is the same way to realize our dreams. Though we are in middle school

now, we need to equip ourselves with knowledge. What we learn today will decide

what we will become tomorrow. The first goal for us is to enter a better high

school and then continue to fight for the college. But college is not the end to

fight, which is just the beginning. The way to realize our dreams is long.

There are a lot of my classmates, and the most helpful one of them is Xiao Zhang. Xiao Zhang has a square head, big eyes, and a tall man, a classmate who is willing to help others. He gave me the help, and I am still unforgettable.

Remember when I read the second grade, one day after school this afternoon, because just under the rain, the ground was very wet, I was carrying a heavy bag down the stairs, just want to walk to the front door, his home, only to go too fast, slipped and fell to the ground, feet also abducted to me; want to try to stand up, I can not stand up, also feel a leg pain hit, the pain I can not help but cry. At this time, Zhang just walk down the stairs, I saw the appearance of pain, she quickly came over and asked me: "Bo Zhe, how are you?" I said, "my... The legs are very... The pain. I... No, no... Its up. " Xiao Zhang listened, and immediately stretched out his hands to pull me up. But my schoolbag was too heavy. It was like a huge stone weighing on me. My buttocks were stuck to the ground. Xiao Zhang could not help me. So, he took my bag back to his own body, and called a few students to help me together, and finally helped me up. Zhang helped me and walked to the gate, walked to ask: "Bo Zhe, your legs still hurt? I went there to call your mother take you home!" Then, he asked me to sit down and rest, go to the front to call my mother. I was moved to tears and said, "thank you, Xiao Zhang!"

Xiao Zhang is such a helpful student, and I also have to learn the spirit of his help.

Every one faces the problem of choosing an occupation after graduation from college or university, which plays a vital role in his life. An appropriate occupation makes a man work with zest and vigor, as well as contribute to his country.

To make a wise choice, two important things should be taken into consideration. One is the interest, the other, the demands of people and society. Only if the two aspects are connected, can a man show his talent and ability to the best advantage. If the two conflict, the former should be under the latter, for the peoples interests are more important than the individuals.

In regard to my choice in the future, I am fond of learning foreign languages; what is more, with the implementation of the Open-Door Policy, exchange between home and abroad in economy and culture has been growing significantly, thus Im determined to be a qualified interpreter.

[以选择职业为题的英文作文

这天，我和爸爸来到了柏乐园度假区。在那里我们玩了一些不足为奇的游乐设施，但是有一件事让我永生难忘。就是那里的一个小型生态动物园：里面有黑熊、狮虎兽、珍珠马等有趣，奇怪的动物。最引人注意的是活灵活现的小海豹。

它穿着一身光滑油亮亮的深褐色外衣，长着一对机灵可爱的眼睛，头部看起来活像老鼠。海豹在水里一会儿仰泳，一会儿蛙泳，一会儿又潜水，忽沉忽浮。像一只小精灵一样灵活、聪明。

“海豹能在淡水里生存吗？”我带着疑问把头转向了爸爸。

爸爸说：“是因为海豹从小在海洋里生活，它已经适应了海水里的一切，在淡水里它的身体会渐渐衰弱到死亡，所以我们一定要保护地球，让地球上所有小动物都有一个美丽、舒适的家园。”

Nowadays, with the development of Internet, people count on the Internet to

do a lot of things. The most common thing is to follow the information they are

interested in. Most people like to write down their comments, while as there is

no law to limit the comment. I always see the negative words. Internet has

become a main way for people to attack others. So horrible it is. We should be a

wise person. The way we respect others decides what kind of person we are. It is

unwise to follow the bad comment and attack others. We need to have our own

judgment and be a nice person.

The House of 1000 Mirrors 千镜屋 Long ago in a small, faraway village, there was a place known as the House of 1000 Mirrors. A small, happy little dog learned of this place and decided to visit. 很久以前的一个很远的小村庄里，有一个以"千镜屋"而著名的地方。一个乐观的小狗听说了这个地方并决定去参观。

When he arrived, he hounced happily up the stairs to the doorway of the house. He looked through the doorway with his ears lifted high and his tail wagging as fast as it could. To his great surprise, he found himself staring at 1000 other happy little dogs with their tails wagging just as fast as his. 当来到这个地方，他蹦蹦跳欢恰快的上了台阶，来到房门口，他高高竖起耳朵，欢快地摇着尾巴，从门口口往里张望，他惊奇地看到有1000只欢乐的小狗像他一样快的摇尾巴。

He smiled a great smile, and was answered with 1000 great smiles just as warm and firendly. As he left the House, he thought to himself, "This is a wonderful place. I will come back and visit it often."他灿烂地微笑着，回报他的是1000张热情，友好的灿烂笑脸。离开时他心想："这是一个精彩的地主，我一定要经常来参观。"

In this same village, another little dog, who was not quite as happy as the first one, decided to visit the house. He slowly climbed the stairs and hung his head low as he looked into the door. When he saw the 1000 unfriendly looking dogs staring back at him, he growled at them and was horrified to see 1000 little dogs growling back at him.在这个村里还有另一只想参观"千镜屋"的小狗，他不及第一只小狗乐观，他慢吞吞地爬上台阶，然后耷拉着脑袋往屋子里看。一看到有1000只小狗不友好地盯着他，他便开始冲他们狂吠，镜中的1000只小狗也冲着他狂吠，把他给吓坏了，

As he left, he thought to himself, "That is a horrible place, and I will never go back there again."他在离开时心想："这是一个恐怖的地方，我再也不会来了。"All the faces in the world are mirrors. What kind of reflections do you see in the faces of the people you meet?世界上所有的脸都是镜子，在你所遇见的人的脸上你看到反射出来的是什么?

Dear leaders and fellow students,

Everybody is good!

It is my great honor to stand here and participate in the election of the monitor. I would like to express my heartfelt thanks to you for your support. First of all, I would like to introduce myself to you: my name is tao league. As a freshman at the university, I am one of the leaders of the department of health.

As a child, my father once said to me: do things with your feet on the ground and do them one step at a time. Therefore, I went from a middle school student to the first year of the university to enter this sacred place, I deeply feel the opportunity is hard-won, need to cherish. It is this power that makes me feel confident when I stand here.

Of course, it is not enough to have confidence, but also to have certain ability. From childhood, I will not be able to plan activities independently. I will never come to the meeting, from bad to good, and I will complete each work with confidence and modesty.

In middle school, I served as monitor and President of the student union. At work, I consciously cultivate my ability of cooperation and coordination, can I have a sincere cooperation with others, and to coordinate the relationship between the good students, dare to bold to bad behavior management, never soft, therefore, won the praise of teachers and students. I often look at our class cadres from the perspective of my classmates. Talk with your classmates on Saturdays and Sundays. Learn about their personalities, thoughts and hobbies, listen to their voices, and listen to their Suggestions and opinions. I always try to organize activities from their point of view, so the class activities are always in full swing. But "man to err, to err is human." and I also made a mistake, but I dare to face their own errors, from the students and the teachers help humbly accept criticism, and correct the mistake, and never allowing yourself to fall for the second time in the same place.

Im running here today. I hope to become school leaders and students in our class between the bridge of the mind, as a bond between teachers and students, and become a real service for students, the students really love it, also want to exercise their abilities, give yourself a stage to show ability. Compared with others, I feel I have more self-confidence, because I am an unyielding person, I have a real sense of responsibility and enthusiasm for our class. Of course, if I am not elected, I will work as hard as I can and will do better to support the work of the new presidium. Because I love this group, because of love, I will do my best. If I am lucky enough to be elected, I will draw lessons from the previous and the experience of the presidium, further carry forward the glorious tradition of the he, seeking truth from facts of service for students, and will work with the young students, the unity cooperation, advancing with The Times, bold reform, give full play to our proper role in our class, let it become a veritable group.

Finally, I sincerely hope that you can believe me, support me and give me this opportunity to demonstrate my ability.

I will paint a beautiful blueprint for the college campus tomorrow, in which I will spend the spring sweat in our sky. Im sure our class will be better tomorrow...

Yesterday just yesterday,it gives me have a better future.I thought I haven’t had a successful person now.In fact,how is successful?Nobody will speak very clearly. I was a happy person,I have had more happy,more powerful,more yesterday momery gives me to see the future.Yesterday I don’t like talk more,I don’t like see more people,don’t warm,more time,I like staying my home,painting almost time.Painting gives me full life,but also gives me like lonely,peace.

I like now’s me,talkative,easy going guy.I hope that I will do myself,to be more easy going,gives every my friend’s happy.

在国庆假期里，我最快乐的时光就是和哥哥、姐姐一起度过的。他们一个住在杭州读高中，一个住在绍兴读大学。而我住在宁波，所以很少和他们碰面。但因为国庆放假，他们都和我一样回到了奶奶家。

哥哥个子很高，人很瘦，但力气很大，他打起羽毛球来就像个下山的猛虎，勇猛而敏捷。但和我打就变成了一个温柔的大哥哥，总是让着我。在这个假期里，让我最开心的一件事就是和哥哥一起烤番薯。

10月3日的早晨，我和哥哥约好一起烤番薯。首先，我们找来了几块平整的大石头，哥哥搬大的，我搬小的。我俩在奶奶家的院子里搭了一个灶，然后把洗好的蕃薯放进盛满水的锅里。可是有锅有灶没有火怎么行呢!所以，我和哥哥找来了柴火和打火机，顺利地点燃了灶，但没过一会儿火就熄灭了。哥哥看着我垂头丧气的样子说：“没关系，咱们再来!”这一次，我们用报纸点燃了干树枝，看着熊熊燃烧的火焰，我又放了许多柴火。水慢慢地沸了，番薯渐渐地熟了，而我和哥哥的脸也变成了“大花猫”和“小花猫”，我们互相看着对方，都哈哈大笑起来。

尝着自己做的番薯，看着哥哥的脸，我觉得有哥哥真好，真幸福!盼望着下次假期早点来!

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yours,

li hua

In the future,I hope I can be a reporter.As a reporter,in order to find many good news, I will travel in different cities everyday.And i will meet a lot ofstars .First,i will study hard,as a reporter,i should have a good command of Chinese,if i have to report in English,i also need to study English very hard.

From now on,i will read everyday,and i will try to write diary to practice my writing skill.Anyway,to be a reporter is my goal in the future,I will study hard to achieve it!

Last weekend ,I didn’t want to do homework all day .I wanted to go to somewhere. That was fun. I went to the zoo with my friend JingWen . I bought two tickets .One is for JingWen ,the other is for me .Then we took a bus to the zoo.

The zoo is very big .There are many kinds of animals at the zoo.What animal did we see.We saw tiger,momkey,panada,lion,elephant,and so on .I like monkey and panada best .Because momkey and panada are pretty and they can make me happy .I didn’t feed any animals .Because I don’t what kind of animals eat to make strong and I didn’t eat any snacks . I wanted to keep the zoo clean .Finally ,we feel tired and we leave the zoo. I think the zoo is good for animals ,why? Because the zoo can help people to stop animals from going extinct.and I think zoos are bad for animals.Because the zoo make animals feel lonely and animals will misses they family.

That was a ggod day!

[中学生英文作文：我的快乐周末(My happy weekend)

假日，是多姿多彩的，有酸，有甜，有苦，有辣;有快乐的笑容，有伤心的泪水，有愤怒的呐喊……

七夕，我们这群小鬼也没闲着，一起去哥伦布广场卖我们的DIY作品。

开张后，生意很不错。你看，姐姐兴奋地挥舞着一张“毛爷爷”，激动地对我们大喊：“看!刚赚的!”我们都高兴起来，毕竟，这是我们的第一笔大收入啊。这时，爸爸却提醒我们：“你们验钞了吗?”一句话，放佛在我们头上浇了一盆冷水。大家都紧张起来，围着那张百元大钞，翻来覆去地看，议论纷纷。“这个水印一点都不清楚啊!”“这个纸质好像也不对!”“这上面的数字好像特别胖啊!”……我们跑到对面的肯德基店里一验，果然，是张如假包换的假钞!听到这个消息，空气瞬间凝固了，我们一个个都沉默不语。我一抬头，突然发现姐姐那不争气的“金豆豆”噼里啪啦地滚落下来，她哽咽道：“骗子!骗子!大骗子!连孩子的钱也骗!”我们的心头都被压了一块大石头，喘不过气来。我心中那刚刚筑起的幸福堤岸，被失落的洪水无情地冲毁了。我又仿佛刚站在快乐高山，突然被人推下了沮丧深渊……看着垂头丧气的我们，妈妈鼓励我们，大家本来就是出来体验生活，增长见识的，“吃一堑，长一智”。

我们擦干眼泪，重燃斗志，鼓起了勇气与信心，充满了干劲与力量，再次出发，在夜色、人群中穿梭，主动地推销我们的作品。打酱油的变认真了，胆小的敢吆喝了……我瞄准一个大姐姐，快步迎上去，用我甜甜的嗓音，展开了攻势，撒娇、卖萌，使出了浑身解数。“姐姐，你就买一个吧!”“姐姐，你看，买两个，放在床头柜上，一边一个，不是很好看吗?”

经过一番激战，大姐姐终于扛不住了，买了两个许愿瓶。我那个高兴劲啊，没法用语言形容。我眨巴着眼睛，眼底满是笑意：“姐姐，祝你快乐!”

时间一分一秒地过去，我们已经工作了四个半小时了，腿都不觉有点酸了。但是，看着我们的成果，一切都还是值得的。

假日，像一个五味瓶，酸甜苦辣，五味杂陈。这个别样的七夕，有清风，有欢笑，有泪水，有成功的喜悦，有被骗的无奈，更多的是自我的肯定，成长的滋味，一切是那样令人记忆犹新，谁说我们现在的孩子只会吃喝玩乐呢?

[关于七夕假日作文

It is known to all that today the environment has been badly polluted.

Though many action have been taken to protect our environment, it still has a

long way to go. Two years ago, I went to middle school, and the first moment I

saw the environment, I found that trees were very small, and many workers were

busy planting trees. Now, when I looked around our school, the trees were taller

than people and they grew so fast. People always talk about planting trees but

less of them can take action. If they plant trees immediately, then there would

be more green scenery. Protecting the environment is not just words. We should

take action right now.

Fathers Day is here, and my heart is full of mixed feelings. Because I

think of my dad. At the same time, I also remembered a song "Grateful Heart", I

believe everyone has heard it. Grateful heart, accompany you. Grateful heart,

reminds me of my father. This song expresses my fathers love for us. He raised

us. We must know how to love. In the future, I will repay his kindness of

upbringing.

The word "father" has two words. It is so familiar to us, so kind.

My father wakes up early and goes to bed late every day so that our two

brothers and sisters can live a happy life. Once, when I was sick, it was in the

middle of the night and I developed a high fever. I felt hot all over and my

hands and feet were cold, which made me very uncomfortable. At this time, Dad

seemed to have noticed something unusual about me. So he asked me, "Son, whats

wrong with you?" I said sadly: "Im very uncomfortable, very uncomfortable." Dad

touched my forehead and said, "Son, you have a fever, but, now...now is

Midnight." After a while.

Dad is carrying a basin of water. Then, put a wet hand towel on my

forehead. My forehead suddenly became a lot cooler. Thats it, my dad keeps

changing my handkerchiefs like this. Not as hot as before, but still hot.

When I woke up, I was lying in the hospital bed on an IV. I found that my

grandmother was beside me. I asked: "Grandma, where is Dad?" Grandma kindly said

to me: "Your dad just went out. Your dad has been by your side to take care of

you most of the night. You have to be grateful!" I nodded.

I know that my father has been very busy in recent years, but no matter how

busy he is, he still finds time to take care of me and care about me. These left

a deep impression on my memory.

Finally, I want to wish Dad, and to all fathers in the world, a Happy

Fathers Day.

What is April Fools Day and how did it begin? Well, that is a very good question. The origin of this holiday is rather uncertain. However, the common belief holds that during the reformation of the calendar the date for the New Year was moved from April 1st to January 1st. During that time in history there was no television and no radio so word spread slowly. There were also those who chose to simply ignore the change and those who merely forgot. These people were considered "fools" and invitations to non-existent parties and other practical jokes were played on them. "All Fools‘ Day" is practiced in many parts of the world with practical jokes and sending people on a fool‘s errand.

Another thought is that the origin began with the celebrations of the Spring Equinox. While some believe it has to do the a Roman festival known as Hilaria, the end of the Celtic new year.

In Scotland, April Fools Day lasts 48 hours, day two is know as Taily Day and pranks involving the posterior are played. The victim of the practical joke is referred to as "hunting the gowk"; the gowk is an extinct cuckoo bird.

In France, he is the "poisson d‘Avril" or "fish of April." The fish in April are newly hatched and easily caught. French children enjoy taping a picture of a fish on their friends back and yelling out "Poisson dAvril!" when it is found.

Da de los Santos Inocentes is held in Spain on December 28th. This is The Feast of the Holy Innocents. It‘s celebrated similarly to April Fools‘ Day with practical jokes.

In the United States, pranks are played on just about everybody. Pranks range from the standard "Your shoe is untied", to some very creative and elaborate ideas. The only "rule" is that no one should be harmed. The best jokes are when everybody including the victim laughs.

Not until I arrived at home after watching the movie ”Peddington Bear” with my family when a feeling of warmth and strength suddenly came to me. It’s about love, it’s about family.

The plot of the movie is really simple, even predictable and a little bit cliche. However, it’s so rare for me to meet such a snug film. Maybe there’s some resonance between the core topic ---- family and myself, or, it’s just relaxing and touching, depending on how you look at it.

The film has little input and obvious theme (dream, kindness, tolerance, trust, and love... Americans love that!), and you can even see it as an advertising video made by the U.K. Government! But, things always act like that---- the simpler the emotion is, the easier we forget. The film has it’s meaning to arouse something ignored by us. And treasure everyone, everything you have.

You can either imagine family as a gasoline station, or the safest harbor. Family won’t mind your lose, your excuse, your fault, it will give you a hand, and ask you to have a rest. Family is the most supportive one behind you, forever and always.

Good luck to everyone!

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。