我的假日英文怎么写汇集20篇

今天我和哥哥在奶奶家玩，我们决定去玩打羽毛球。那时哥哥最喜欢的体育项目之一。

先由我发球，我先发了一个高吊球，因为哥哥最不爱接这种球，但哥哥这次却接到了。但却打得更高了，正因为这一下球被打上了房顶。我们害怕极了，于是赶快搬来了梯子来取球。我们互相推辞，谁也不敢上去。于是我使用了“激将法”来让哥哥上去。哥哥一时赌气，马上就上去了。但上到了半路他又后悔了，因为房子太高了，没办法，又得使用我的“激将法”。哥哥终于把球给拿下来了。于是我们又打起来了。

我们玩得正高兴，可这个球很不争气总是往房上跑。于是我们又得工作了。还没等我说话哥哥就先发言了。不知到什么时候哥哥学会了我的“激将法”让我上去去取球。这招太厉害了。我也一时赌气上去了。我也象哥哥一样后悔了，但我非常要面子，还是硬着头皮上去了。我向前看去。无限风光尽在眼底，我终于明白了那句话：“站得高看得远”

通过这次我明白了：不能光有知识，还要勇敢的去尝试，才能成功！

在一个阳光明媚的假日里，我们在吴老师作文班里学作文，吴老师说要玩一次抽奖活动，高兴地我们一蹦三尺高。

吴老师说：“今天我们要举行一次抽奖活动，规则是：一个人只能抽一次，抽到什麽是什麽。一等奖一名，二等奖二名，三等奖三名，优秀奖二名，谢谢参与奖一名。我第一个抽，哇！居然是我梦寐以求的一等奖，我兴奋不已。第二个抽奖的是吴汉民，他抽的是二等奖，他非常失望。宴昆抽了一个优秀奖，她也很失望，他们俩非常羡慕我，我很自豪，孙云浩抽了个谢谢参与奖，他最羡慕我……吴老师给我发了一个小本子，一个转笔刀，一个萨琪玛，我心里甭提多美啦！吴老师说：“孙云浩，别泄气，你也很努力，老师给你一个萨琪玛和一个本子。”孙云浩高兴地谢过了吴老师。其他同学也是一个萨琪玛和一本子。

这个事情让我记忆犹新，因为这个小小的事情告诉了我一个大道理：无论做什麽事千万不能骄傲。这就是我的假日生活，相信你也有。

20. Goals determine what you’re going to be .人生的奋斗目标决定你将来成为怎样的人。

21. An aim in life is the only fortune worth finding.生活的目标是唯一值得寻找的财富。

22. Where there is life there is hope.生命满希望，前路由我创。

23. Try not to become a man of success but rather try to become a man of value.与其做一个成功的人，还不如做一个有价值的人。

24. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success.人必须有自信，这是成功的秘密。

25. Pursue your object, be it what it will, steadily and indefatigably.不管追求什么目标，都应坚持不懈。

26. We must accept finite disappointment, but we must never lose infinite hope.我们必须接受失望，因为它是有限的；但千万不可失去希望，因为它是无穷的。

27. Energy and persistence conquer all things.能量加毅力可以征服一切。

28. Nothing seek, nothing find.无所求便无所获。

29. Cease to struggle and you cease to live.生命不止，奋斗不息。

30. Taking the first step stars thousand-mile journey.千里之行始于足下。

31. A strong man will struggle with storms of fate.强者能与命运的风暴抗争。

32. He who seizes the right moment, is the right man.谁能把握机运，谁就心想事成。

33. Victory won’t come to me unless I go to it.胜利不会向我走来，我必须自己走向胜利。

34. Do your work with your whole heart and you will succeed.全力以赴，你就会成功。

35. Man struggles upward, water flows downwards.人往高处走水往低处流。

终于放假了，天天的作业、感觉很短的课间和感觉超长的上课时间累得人腰酸背疼。在这炎炎夏日中会有什么有趣的事发生呢？

我和杨璐嘉、韦茜文住在一个小区里经常串门玩游戏。这一天，韦茜文问我：“7月5日是我生日，你能来参加我的生日会吗？”我笑了笑，答应了。并轻轻地说：“7月5日下午2点，东门见！”“Ok！”真是的，7月5日那天，我把事情忘了。1点时在洗澡，2点刚出来。结果只好随便一穿衣服，就走了。

幸好拿了伞，不然非变成落汤鸡不可！我赶紧跑到车旁，立马打开门进去。车停到卜蜂莲花下的肯德基门口，我们看到徐毅嘉已经来了。我们大家一起冲向肯德基，准备饱餐一顿。进了肯德基之后，我们被接待员带到了厨房，参观了一下。弄得我们全都饿了。我们马上坐下点餐，一人来了一份套餐，吃的我肚子都涨了。

吃了套餐之后，我们开始了重头戏：生日蛋糕。我给徐毅嘉递了一个眼色。意思是徐徐行动开始！徐徐行动就是：等韦茜文最后一个吃完蛋糕时，往她脸上抹奶油。我们偷偷的笑着，“唯恐天下不乱。”最后，倒霉的韦茜文最终一脸奶油。

我把大家带到游乐区哪里，尽情的玩耍，拾回了童真，拾回了快乐。生日会很成功，大家也很快乐。

I think smiling is as important as sunshine. Smiling is like sunshine

because it can make people happy and have a good day. If you aren’t happy, you

can smile, and then you will feel happy. Someone may say, “But I don’t feel

happy.” Then I would say, “Please smile as you do when you are happy or play

with your friends happily. You will really be happy again.”

You don’t like crying, right? So you must prefer smiling, because you know

smiling will let people forget everything unhappy. Every day, we see teachers or

students and say, “Hi/Hello! How are you?” At the same time, you are smiling,

right?

Smiling can let you have more friends. With a smile, people will know

you’re a kind person. They will talk with you, so you will have more and more

friends.

So I say, smiling is like a flower, the sunshine, warmth. It will give you

happiness.

My Favorite Holiday

我最喜欢的节日

My favorite holiday is New Year. It is a very important festival in Chinese culture. In fact, its the highlight of the year. Everyone returns home for a family reunion. We have a big feast and chat about all the things that have happened in our lives. People also visit each other. We exchange gifts and good wishes for the next year.

我最喜欢的节日是新年。在中国文化中，新年是一个非常重要的节日。事实上，它是一年中最好的（日子）。每个人都回家与家人团聚。我们有一个比较大的盛会并且（与他人）畅聊所有发生在我们生活中的事。人们总是互相拜访。我们交换礼物和来年的祝福。

New Year is especially fun for kids. Thats because we get

presents and treats, including red envelopes filled with money. But we never forget that this holiday is a time to give thanks. We feel grateful for our family and the things that we have. Finally, we think about the future and the great year ahead. 对孩子来说，新年是一个特别快乐（的日子）。因为我们可以得到礼物和乐趣，这其中就包括红包。但我们从未忘记新年是一个给予（他人）感恩的日子。我们对家人以及拥有的事物感恩。最后，我们考虑未来和美好的新一年。

Dear Mr. Brown,

Much to my regret,I was unable to keep my engagement to meet you at the

park gate. I fear you are displeased at my failing to keep my promise, but I

trust you will forgive me. Let me explain. My mother suddenly fell sick early

yesterday morning, and I had to send her to hospital.

I shall be gladif you will kindly write and tell me when and where we may

meet again. I hope to see you soon.

YoursSincerely,

Li Ming

Making friends is a skill like many other skills. it improves with practice. if you want to meet people and make friends, you must be willing to take some actions. you must first go where there are people. you won’t make friends staying home alone. join a club or a group. taking with those who like the same things as you do is much easier. or join someone in some activities. many people are nervous when talking to new people. after all meeting strangers means facing the unknown. and it’s human nature to feel a bit uncomfortable about the unknown. most of our fears about dealing with new people come from doubts about ourselves. we imagine other people are judging us of finding us too tall or to short, too this or too that. but don’t forget that they must be feeling the same way. try to accept yourself as you are and try to put the other person at ease. you’ll both feel more comfortable.

Try to be self-comfident even if you don’t feel that way. when you enter a room full of strangers, such as a new classroom, walk tall and straight, look directly at other people and smile.

If you see someone you like to speak to, say something . don’t wait for the other person to start a conversation.

Just meeting someone new does not mean that you will make friends with that person-friendship is based on mutual liking and “give and take”. it takes time and effort to develop.

今天阳光明媚正好是五一劳动节，我和妈妈一起去了长沙生态动物园。

走进动物园，今天的人可真多啊！首先映入眼帘的是豹馆，一排玻璃房里有各类品种的豹子，其中有金钱豹它那身上的花纹真像古时候的铜钱；还有黑豹，乌黑光亮的皮毛引人注目；还有老虎，老虎头上的黑色王字告诉我们森林之王在这里呢！

与豹馆相邻的是熊猫馆，一只只憨态可掬的大熊猫躲在房子的角落里，有的正在吃着美味的竹子，有的正在玩游戏。熊猫全身都是黑白相间的绒毛，这时一只胖乎乎的小熊猫正一摇一摆地向我们走过来，大家马上拿起相机拍照，那只熊猫简直就是大明星了。

我还去了百鸟谷，百鸟谷里有各种各样的鸟，有颜色鲜艳的鹦鹉，头上没羽毛的秃鹫，雪白的孔雀女王，黑色斑点和白色斑点的野鸡等等。百鸟谷里还有一所鸟艺馆，里面有会打滚的白色鹦鹉，会跳舞的红色鹦鹉，大家看到她们的表演都哈哈大笑起来。

长沙生态动物园的动物还有很多，巨蟒、袋鼠、河马、大象、犀牛、天鹅、蜥蜴、乌龟、火烈鸟等数不胜数，我们一定要爱护我们身边的动物，让我们以后和动物交朋友。

今天不仅是有趣又快乐的一天，而且我还认识了很多很多的动物。

Today, my parents took me to mygrandfathers home. I talked with my

grandfather for a little while and then Iplayed with my brothers and sisters.

After a while, my elderly brothersuggested going to the park and having a rest.

"Thats a good idea." I said.Then we prepared for the outing. However, after

lunch, the sky turned dark andrained heavily. Therefore, our plan was an

impossible due to the bad weather.How pity it was! All the afternoon, we could

only have fun in house. We playedcards, watched TV and played computer games. We

were happy, but we still hopedthat we can go out next time.

My favourite writer—Lu Xun 我最喜欢的作者－鲁迅

Lu Xun is my favourite writer. He is one of the most famous writers in China. He wrote a lot of literary works.

He was thin and not tall. He always wore a long old coat in that time. At first, he wanted to be a doctor and save people s lives. So he learned medicine, but later he found the Chinese were in sensitive when they faced the oppression of their enemies. So he began to write articles to wake the people up.

Lu Xun wrote some famous novels, he attacked the social mores in that time, and in his works, many persons were known very well, such as Ah Q Kong Yi ji .

I like Lu Xun because I also want to be a great writer like him. I like reading and writing, and I often write some articles in my free time. Though I don t have good literary talent or a large vocabulary, I spend lots of time reading and writing to improve my writing skills.

Lu Xun is my hero, I will learn more from him. I believe I can be a great writer like him in the future.

鲁迅是我最喜欢的作家。他是中国最著名的作家之一。他写了大量的文学作品。

他很瘦，个子不高。他总是穿着旧衣服。首先，他想成为一名医生，挽救人们的生命。所以他学医，但后来他发现中国人愚昧时，他们所面对的敌人在压迫着他们时。他开始写文章来唤醒人民。

鲁迅写了一些著名的长篇小说，他抨击当时的社会习俗，在他的作品中，许多人熟知，如阿Q孔乙己。

我喜欢鲁迅，因为我也想成为一个像他这样伟大的作家。我喜欢阅读和写作，我常常在我的空闲时间里写一些文章。虽然我没有好的文学天才或大量的词汇，所以我花时间阅读和写作，来提高我的写作技能很多。

鲁迅是我的英雄，我会从他身上学到更多。我相信我能成为一个伟大的作家，未来就像他一样。

[我最喜欢的作者鲁迅英文作文

假日，是多姿多彩的，有酸，有甜，有苦，有辣;有快乐的笑容，有伤心的泪水，有愤怒的呐喊……

七夕，我们这群小鬼也没闲着，一起去哥伦布广场卖我们的DIY作品。

开张后，生意很不错。你看，姐姐兴奋地挥舞着一张“毛爷爷”，激动地对我们大喊：“看!刚赚的!”我们都高兴起来，毕竟，这是我们的第一笔大收入啊。这时，爸爸却提醒我们：“你们验钞了吗?”一句话，放佛在我们头上浇了一盆冷水。大家都紧张起来，围着那张百元大钞，翻来覆去地看，议论纷纷。“这个水印一点都不清楚啊!”“这个纸质好像也不对!”“这上面的数字好像特别胖啊!”……我们跑到对面的肯德基店里一验，果然，是张如假包换的假钞!听到这个消息，空气瞬间凝固了，我们一个个都沉默不语。我一抬头，突然发现姐姐那不争气的“金豆豆”噼里啪啦地滚落下来，她哽咽道：“骗子!骗子!大骗子!连孩子的钱也骗!”我们的心头都被压了一块大石头，喘不过气来。我心中那刚刚筑起的幸福堤岸，被失落的洪水无情地冲毁了。我又仿佛刚站在快乐高山，突然被人推下了沮丧深渊……看着垂头丧气的我们，妈妈鼓励我们，大家本来就是出来体验生活，增长见识的，“吃一堑，长一智”。

我们擦干眼泪，重燃斗志，鼓起了勇气与信心，充满了干劲与力量，再次出发，在夜色、人群中穿梭，主动地推销我们的作品。打酱油的变认真了，胆小的敢吆喝了……我瞄准一个大姐姐，快步迎上去，用我甜甜的嗓音，展开了攻势，撒娇、卖萌，使出了浑身解数。“姐姐，你就买一个吧!”“姐姐，你看，买两个，放在床头柜上，一边一个，不是很好看吗?”

经过一番激战，大姐姐终于扛不住了，买了两个许愿瓶。我那个高兴劲啊，没法用语言形容。我眨巴着眼睛，眼底满是笑意：“姐姐，祝你快乐!”

时间一分一秒地过去，我们已经工作了四个半小时了，腿都不觉有点酸了。但是，看着我们的成果，一切都还是值得的。

假日，像一个五味瓶，酸甜苦辣，五味杂陈。这个别样的七夕，有清风，有欢笑，有泪水，有成功的喜悦，有被骗的无奈，更多的是自我的肯定，成长的滋味，一切是那样令人记忆犹新，谁说我们现在的孩子只会吃喝玩乐呢?

[关于七夕假日作文

Tointroducemyself

Hello，everyone!

My name is azuowen.Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.

Im an active，lovely and clever girl.In the school，my favourite subject is maths.Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well.But I like it.I belive that if you try your best，everything can be done well.

I also like sports very much.Such as，azuoweng，volleyball and so on.

Im kind-hearted. If you need help，please come to me .

I hope we can be good friends!

OK.This is me .A sunny girl.

Dear Prof Herthwell，

亲爱的Herthwell教授：

Many thanks for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during

our delegation’s recent visit to your university。 It was nice of you to

introduce me to so many famous professors and celebrated scholars at your

university。 We had a safe and sound trip home。 Now we have resumed our work。

十分感谢你的盛情款待，以及在你在我们的代表团最近访问你的大学时对我们的尊敬。多谢你把我介绍给那么多您大学里的知名教授和著名的学者。我们已经平安愉悦得回到家了。此刻，我们继续我们的工作了。

Meanwhile， I hope you will someday pay a short visit to our university and

give us some lectures on “Modern Western Economics”。

同时，我期望有一天你能够对我校进行一个短暂的访问并给我们开一些关于“现代西方经济学”的讲座。

Please have no hesitation in writing to me if you want me to do something

for you in China。

如果你要我为你在中国做些事情，请不要犹豫，写信给我。

Best wishes，

Li Dong

最好的祝愿

李东

oh god! i think i was about seven and half when my sisters and i pulled this stupid stunt. i remember watching television with them and the show on happened to be our favorite program to watch. all of a sudden we heard my brother, chris, yelling from the backyard. so we all headed out there to see what happened. when we finally located him, he was in a tree hanging from the highest tree branch. crying, he explained to us that he had climbed up the tree and couldnt get down. we thought, okay, one of us should climb up and get him off, but we couldnt manage to get him moving down.

it was then my youngest sister, ka, who was five and a half at the time had seen a similar situation. she suggested we grab a sheet, hold it under the branch chris was hanging off of, and tell him to drop so we can catch him. my other sister, yams, who is one year younger than me, peered at me to confirm the idea and i said "yeah, lets try that".so we grabbed a sheet from the closet and went to hold it beneath the tree. now mind you, the ages holding this blanket were ranging from seven and a half to five and a half, thus the sheet was probably being held up to our waist and also close to touching the ground. but we were confident it could work.

we looked up to chris and he looked down at us a bit hesitant. i dont blame him the poor guy. it was then we told him to let go and to fall on his back. chris looked at me and asked "are you sure ill land on the blanket?" now, my brother at the age of four, had a cute squeaky voice. but because of a problem at birth with his tongue being a bit attached to the mouth, it came out more like this, "ah you sho awill lan on da blanked?", "yup!", i told him, "were sure!" and he let go.now when i think about chris letting go of that branch, i think of his faith in me and my sisters and i also think how stupid he was to trust us, cause when that boy let go he was in for a big surprise. chris fell right through that sheet and landed right on his stomach. and no matter how tight we held on to the sheet, he still managed to get through.

we were shocked and a bit worried and we looked at the ground where he landed. this tiny seventy pound boy had made a hole right through the sheet and landed. he was positioned like one of those chalk drawings you find after a homicide, with one arm near the head another to the side and the knee bent a bit. we might as well have drawn an outline because he wasnt moving. so we bent down to check if he was still alive and when we asked him if he was okay he uttered these five words… "ah stee hi da flow" in other words, "i still hit the floor!" poor little man! but before you condemn us, chris is fourteen now and he still bugs us about it, any tree he climbs he gets down on his own and, strangely, he wants to be a fireman when he grows up. now he can write that he had personal experience about jumping and catching. see, no harm done…

[关于《有趣的记忆》的英文作文

Nature never deceives us; it is always us who deceive ourselves.

大自然永远不会欺骗我们，欺骗我们的往往是我们自己。——Rousseau

Death…is no more than passing from one room into another.

死亡只不过是从一个房间进入另一个房间。——Helen Keller

Important principles may and must be flexible.

重要的原则能够也必须是灵活的。——Abraham Lincoln

That is the essence of science: ask an impertinent question, and you are on the way to the pertinent answer.

科学的本质是：问一个不恰当的问题，于是走上了通往恰当答案的路。——Jacob Bronowsk

The danger of the past was that men became slaves. The danger of the future is that men may become robots.

在过去人们面临的危险是变成奴隶，而在将来危险是人类可能变成机器人。——Erich From

You can never plan the future by the past.

永远也不能依照过去来计划将来。——Burke

Time is a versatile performer. It flies, marches on, heals all wounds, runs out and will tell.

时间是个多才多艺的表演者。它能展翅飞翔，能阔步前进，能治愈创伤，能消逝而去，也能揭示真相。——Franklin P.Jones

The first in time and the first in importance of the influences upon the mind is that of nature.

在所有头脑的影响之中，大自然的影响可谓是在时间上最先，在作用上最为重要的。——Emerson

Nature never deceives us; it is always us who deceive ourselves.

大自然永远不会欺骗我们，欺骗我们的往往是我们自己。——Rousseau

Death…is no more than passing from one room into another.

死亡只不过是从一个房间进入另一个房间。——Helen Keller

Important principles may and must be flexible.

重要的原则能够也必须是灵活的。——Abraham Lincoln

That is the essence of science: ask an impertinent question, and you are on the way to the pertinent answer.

科学的本质是：问一个不恰当的问题，于是走上了通往恰当答案的路。——Jacob Bronowsk

The danger of the past was that men became slaves. The danger of the future is that men may become robots.

在过去人们面临的危险是变成奴隶，而在将来危险是人类可能变成机器人。——Erich From

[有关激励自己的英文名言警句

国庆期间，咱们一家三口来到了朱家尖的南沙玩。

下了车，穿过大道两旁成荫的绿树，不一会儿就听到远处传来“哗哗”的声响，噢，是大海在歌唱。我加快了脚步，向大海奔去。一望无垠的大海呈现在我眼前，顿时，我觉得心胸开阔。极目远望，天连着海，海连着天，分不清哪儿是海，哪儿是天。

海滩上满是晶莹、细小的沙子，像一张大大的黄色的地毯，踩上去软绵绵的，犹如踏在云彩之上，让人感觉轻松、愉快。天很热，有人在沙滩上插了大大的太阳伞，远远望去，仿佛沙滩上盛开了许多五彩缤纷的花儿，美极了!

我站在海水较浅的地方，望着在海里像鱼儿一样穿梭的人们。这时，一个浪退去，海水轻轻抚过我的脚面，凉快舒适极了。怎么脚下的那片沙滩在向右移动?哦，原来是海水把脚下的沙子带走了。

这时，我发现地上有一个个小洞，是螃蟹洞!我二话不说，蹲下身子就挖了起来，不一会儿，就挖出一只老迈的螃蟹，乐得我手舞足蹈，但乐极生悲，手被蟹钳子夹住了，还出了血。

四六级作文中有一类题型，是大家提到就会头疼万分的，bingo，你答对了，就是言语理解型！这类题目要求大家根据题目要求中的一句谚语来写文章，比如曾经考的：Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will；knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it。这些题目一旦出现，很多同学只能硬着头皮随便写写，甚至连放弃这次四六级考试

行动实践类

1. Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜于语言。

2. Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。

3. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行始于足下

4. Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。（mother是经典的表示“原因”的比喻，is the mother of也是一个经典句型。比如：Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。）

5. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。

6. Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。（这句话没有语法错误，只是省略了形式主语It is）

7. Seek the truth from facts. 实事求是。

思想志向类

1. Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同

2. Look before you leap. 三思而后行。

3. Where there is a will，there is a way. 有志者事竟成。

4. Nothing seek，nothing find. 没有追求，就没有收获。

个人修养类

1. All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子。

2. Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance. 无德之类犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。（类似汉语中的：金玉其外败絮其中。）

3. God helps those who help themselves. 自助者天助。

4. A small mistake will trigger huge consequences. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。

5. Nothing is difficult to the man who will try. 世上无难事，只要肯攀登。

6. Nothing is to be got without pains but poverty. 世上唯有贫穷可以不劳而获。

7. One boy is a boy，two boys half a boy，three boys no boy. 一个和尚打水吃，两个和尚抬水吃，三个和尚没水吃。（这句汉语谚语用英语竟然是这样翻译的~~~orz）

8. Take things as they come. 既来之则安之。

工作学习类

1. It’s never too old to learn. 活到老学到老。

2. More hasty，less speed. 欲速则不达。

3. All work and no play make Jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。

4. One cannot put back the clock. 时钟不能倒转。5. One hour today is worth two tomorrow. 争分夺秒效率高。

6. Please the eye and plague the heart. 贪图一时快活，必然留下隐祸。

7. Success belongs to the persevering. 坚持就是胜利。（the+a.表示一类人，在这里the persevering表示坚持的人）

8. Health is better than wealth，health is happiness. 健康胜过财富，健康就是幸福。大家背诵这些亮点提升谚语，应该进行默写哦，千万不要写错了。同时这些谚语大家也可以灵活运用到其他写作题型中，千万不要禁锢自己的思维。

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Apr4, 2010

I was so careless that l lost a blcak mobil phone on the way to our canteen at noon. There is much important information in my phone. Will the finder please return it to Xiao Ming at Class6, Senior3? Thank you very mach!

Xiao Ming

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。

Childhood is like a cup of strong coffee, warm to your heart or;Childhood is like a cup of light tea, let you every aftertaste.Childhood is like the rainbow after the storm, colorful;Flowery and clinking, childhood is like a corner after sunset, so miss;Also like the curved path, let you continue to thrive.The wind is not possible to the warm memories to blow away;Rain is falling all it impossible to get this one moving melody.Only a lovely, gentle sunshine would it have been preserved.

Memories and ordinary things, things may be small, but the memories is so moved, because had these memories!Can continue to progress, the pursuit, in this way can we grow up,

That year, is a heavy snow season.At that time, I was only 7 years old!

That day, in the morning, I just wake up, opened the eyes, and saw there was a haze of light snow, a short time later, the wind settle, snow slowly stopped.And IThe elder brotherOpened the door and a white light made me feel dazzling, so I gave inThe elder brotherSnow shovel, pushing up the snowman in the yard, the snowman is really beautiful around, the body of white, round head, made it a pair of big, black pebbles of big eyes, a carrot nose, I again with red paint for white snow man drew a cherry small mouth.

Snowman heap is ready, then ushered in a "snow battle parade" and my brothers brother first prepared a snowball, throwing up to me, I am clever turned around, snowball and broke up on the wall.While my brother still dont respond to come over, I use a light snow ball and throw the past to elder brother!My brother had no time to escape."Yes, yes, yes"!Hee hee, in the middle of his brothers "big head" snowball on his head "opened a white flower" can put my belly laugh pain is dead!After again and again to compete.The laughter in the yard is more and more loud and clear.

The fun of childhood, both are like a colorful shells, hold up my colorful childhood.