中考英语作文教学视频(精品20篇)

1、A contented mind is the greatest blessing a man can enjoy in this world.

知足是人生在世最大的幸事。

——Joseph Addison(美国作家艾迪生)

2、If you would know the value of money, go and try to borrow some.

要想知道钱的价值，就想办法去借钱试试。

——Benjamin Franklin(美国总统富兰克林)

3、If you wish to succeed, you should use persistence as your good friend,

experience as your reference, prudence as your brother and hope as your sentry.

如果你希望成功，当以恒心为良友，以经验为参谋，以谨慎为兄弟，以希望为哨兵。

——Thomas Edison(美国发明家爱迪生)

4、Health is certainly more valuable than money,

because it is by health that money is procured.

健康当然比金钱更为重要，因为我们所赖以获得金钱的就是健康。

——Samuel Johnson(英国作家约翰逊)

5、That man is the richest whose pleasure are the cheapest.

能处处寻求快乐的人才是最富有的人。

——Henry David Thoreau(美国作家梭罗)

6、Sometimes one pays most for the things one gets for nothing.

有时候一个人为不花钱得到的东西付出的代价最高。

——Albert Einstein(美国科学家爱因斯坦)

7、Will, work and wait are the pyramidal cornerstones for success.

意志、工作和等待是成功的金字塔的基石。

——Louis Pasteur(法国化学家巴斯勒)

8、All the splendor in the world is not worth a good friend.

人世间所有的荣华富贵不如一个好朋友。

——Voltaire(法国思想家伏尔泰)

9、There is a great different between exposure of

the mind and that of the body.

表露思想和展露身体之间存在极大的不同。

——William Hazlitt(英国批评家散文家哈滋里特)

10、To travel hopefully is a better thing than to arrive,

and the true success is to labor.

怀着希望去旅行比抵达目的地更愉快;而真正的成功在于工作。

——Robert Louis Stevenson(英国作家史蒂文森)

11、The greater a man is, the more distasteful is praise and flattery to him.

一个人越伟大，对表扬和奉承就越反感。

——John Burroughs(美国博物学家巴勒斯)

12、I might say that success is won by three things:

first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort.

可以说成功要靠三件事才能赢得：努力，努力，再努力。

——Thomas Hardy(英国诗人小说家哈代)

13、Success often depends upon knowing how long it will take to succeed.

成功常常取决于知道需要多久才能成功。

——Charles Montesquieu(法国思想家孟德斯鸠)

14、Only those who have the patience to do simple things

perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.

只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人，才能够轻而易举的完成困难的事。

——Friedrich Schiller(德国剧作家诗人席勒)

15、You have to believe in yourself. Thats the secret of success.

你必须相信自己，这是成功的关键。

——Charles Chaplin(美国演员卓别林)

16、A man can succeed at almost anything for which

he has unlimited enthusiasm.

无论何事，只要对它有无限的热情你就能取得成功。

——C. M. Schwab(美国实业家施瓦布)

17、The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.

凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说“不可能的”。

——Bonapart Napoleon(法国皇帝拿破仑)

18、Progress is the activity of today and the assurance of tomorrow.

进步是今天的活动，明天的保证。

——Emerson(美国思想家爱默生)

20、Our destiny offers not the cup of despair,

but the chalice of opportunity.

命运给予我们的不是失望之酒，而是机会之杯。

——Richard Nixon(美国总统尼克松)

21、Miracles sometimes occur, but one has to work terribly for them.

奇迹有时候是会发生的，但是你得为之拼命的努力。

——C. Weizmann(爱尔兰总统魏茨曼)

22、It never will rain roses.

When we want to have more roses we must plant trees.

天上不会掉下玫瑰来，如果想要更多的玫瑰，必须自己种植。

——G. Eliot(英国小说家艾略特)

23、If you have great talents, industry will improve them;

if you have but moderate abilities, industry will supply their deficiency.

如果你很有天赋，勤勉会使其更加完善;如果你能力一般，勤勉会补足其缺陷。

——Joshuas Reynolds(美国散文家雷诺兹)

24、Great works are performed not by strength , but by perseverance.

完成伟大的事业不在于体力，而在于坚韧不拔的毅力。

——Samuel Johnson(英国作家和评论家约翰逊)

25、Genius only means hard-working all ones life.

天才只意味着终身不懈的努力。

——Mendeleyev(俄国化学家门捷列耶夫)

26、Few things are impossible in themselves; and it is often for want of will ,

rather than of means, that man fails to succeed.

事情很少又根本做不成的;其所以做不成，与其说是条件不够，不如说是由于决心不够。

——(La Racheforcauld(法国作家罗切福考尔德)

27、Dare and the world always yields.

If it beats you sometimes, dare it again and again and it will succumb.

大胆挑战，世界总会让步。如果有时候你被它打败了，不断地挑战，它总会屈服地。

——W.M Thackeray(英国小说家萨克雷)

28、All that you do, do with your might; t

hings done by halves are never done right.

做一切事情都应尽力而为，半途而废永远不行。

——R.H. Stoddard(美国诗人斯托达德)

29、A man can fail many times,

but he isnt a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.

一个人可以失败多次，但是只要他没有开始责怪旁人，他还不是一个失败者。

——J.Burroughs(美国博物学家巴勒斯)

30、You can tell the ideals of a nation by its advertisements.

从一个国家的广告可以看出这个国家的理想。

——Norman Douglas(英国作家道格拉斯)

31、The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today.

实现明天理想的唯一障碍是今天的疑虑。

——Franklin Roosevelt(美国总统罗斯福)

32、The man with a new idea is a crank until the idea succeeds.

具有新想法的人在其想法实现之前是个怪人。

——Mark Twain(美国作家马克?吐温)

33、The important thing in life is to have a great aim,

and the determination to attain it.

人生重要的事情是确定一个伟大的目标，并决心实现它。

——Johann Wolfgang von Goethe(德国诗人、剧作家歌德)

34、Most of the trouble in the world is caused by people wanting to be important.

人世间的大多数烦恼都是由那些想成为重要人物的人惹出来的。

——George Eliot(英国小说家艾略特)

35、If you doubt yourself,

then indeed you stand on shaky ground.

如果你怀疑自己，那么你的立足点确实不稳固了。

——Ibsen(挪威剧作家易卜生)

36、Ideal is the beacon. Without ideal,

there is no secure direction; without direction ,there is no life.

理想是指路明灯。没有理想，就没有坚定的方向;

没有方向，就没有生活。 ——Leo Tolstory(俄国作家托尔斯泰)

37、Ideal are like the stars ——- we never reach them ,

but like mariners , we chart our course by them.

理想犹如天上的星星，我们犹如水手，虽不能达到天上，

但是我们的航程可凭借它指引。

——Carl Schurz(美国政治家舒尔茨)

38、Have an aim in life, or your energies will all be wasted.

人生应该树立目标，否则你的精神会白白浪费。

——R. Peters(美国法学家彼得斯)

39、Dont part with yourxxxs, When they are gone you may still exist,

but you have ceased to live.

不要放弃你的幻想。当幻想没有了以后，你还可以生存，但是你虽生犹死。

——Mark Twain(马克 吐温)

40、Do not, for one repulse,

give up the purpose that you resolved to effect.

不要只因一次失败，就放弃你原来决心想要达到的目的。

——Willian Shakespeare(莎士比亚)

41、Between the ideal and the reality,

Between the motion and the act, Fall the shadow.

理想与现实之间，动机与行为之间，总有一道阴影。

——Thomas Stearns Eliot(T.S.爱略特)

42、A man is not old as long as he is seeking something.

A man is not old until regrets take the place of dreams.

只要有一个人还有所追求，他就没有老。直到后悔取代了梦想，一个人才算老。

——J. Barrymore(巴里穆尔)

43、Change as change is mere flux and lapse; it insults intelligence. Genuinely to know is to grasp a permanent end that realises itself through changes.

如果仅仅就变化论变化，则只是变动不羁，倏忽即逝;这是低能的表现，真正了解变化在于把握住在变化中完成自身的永恒目标。

——John Dewey 约翰·杜威

44、Change is the law of life. And those who look only to the past or the present are certain to miss the future.

变化是生活的法则。只盯着过去或眼前的人注定失去未来。

——John F.Kennedy 约翰·弗·肯尼迪

45、Genius is formed in quiet, character in the stream of human life.

天才悄无声息地诞生，性情却在生命之河里逐渐形成。

——Goethe 歌德

46、With a character both proud and timid, one never amounts to anything.

一个人既自傲又胆怯，将永远一事无成。

——Joseph Roux 约瑟夫·鲁

47、If there is anything that we wish to change the child, we should first examine it and see whether it is not something that could better be changed in ourselves.

假如我们想让孩子在某个方面有所改变，我们应首先检验一下，看看我们自己是否最好在这一方面变一变。

——Jung 荣格

48、The finest inheritance you can give to a child is to allow it to make its own way, completely on its own feet.

你能留给孩子的最好财产莫过于允许他完全独立自主地摸索自己的道路。

——Isadora Duncan 伊莎多拉·邓肯

49、Mans highest merit always is, as much as possible, to rule external circumstances and as little as possible to let himself be ruled by them.

人最大的优点是尽可能多地驾驭外部环境，尽可能少地让环境约束自己。

——Goethe 歌德

50、Dont wait for ideal circumstances, they will never come, nor for the best opportunities.

不要等候最好的条件或者最佳时机，它们永远不会降临。

——Janet Erskine Stuart 珍尼特·厄斯金·斯图亚特

As we know, our country suffered heavy ice early 2011. Everything was covered with freezing rain. Guizhou, Hunan and Sichuan suffered the most. It caused the buses, trains and planes stop service. The disaster destroyed power facilities, cutting power supplies in many areas. As a result, huge economic loss was caused. Many people could not work and live normally. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.

On Christmas morning， the children wake up very early. Some even turn on the light attwo o‘clock， and most of them are awake by six o’clock although it is not light in England for another hour or two at this time of the year.

Children look for their presents ， and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared. At about one o‘clock in the afternoon， the Christmas dinner is brought in . The turkey or chicken is quickly eaten . Children search in their Christmas pudding for new coins which are hidden in it . The rest of the day is full of games and eating until the happiest of all Christmas hollidays comes to an end.

一天很快又将过去

总得去理一理

快乐的笑容

不知飘在哪里

你要悄悄问问自己

总得要去理一理

……

这是偶尔在网上看到的某一小学勉励孩子们的一首小诗。该校的理念是：让学生学会学习，让孩子每天像整理家务一样整理自己的学业。

此次活动的时间虽然不长，为了不让我的感触悄悄溜走，我也试着去问自己，我确实需要去理一理我对本次活动的思考与反思。

此次活动的主题是文本重构。先由新联小学的莫艳芬老师上一节汇报课，内容是PEP教材五年级下册Unit 4的 What are you doing?的对话课，随后，张凝老师为我们作了点评，并就文本重构为我们作了精彩而实用的讲座。

本次教研活动，让我感叹最深的是：教师能走多远，学生就能走多远！在平时的对话教学中，我们应该为学生创设一个又一个贴近生活，真实有趣的情境。只有有效的情境创设，才能让学生有重大突破的可能，由老师逼着说转化为情境使然，乐意说。也只有基于文本基础的情境创设才是有效的，才可以优化语言的输出。在充分考虑教学各环节的设计下，让学生的语言是有意义的，让学生的语言是有情感的。由此可见，创造语境乃是英语对话教学的一大核心，如何创造有效的语言情境也是我们面临的一大难题。只重情境再造，而忽略的文本重构，往往会造成教材文本情境的浪费。而张凝老师的讲座，清晰地向我们验证了：教师有多远，学生就能走多远！

反思一：如何创设语言情境，优化语言输出

在英语教学中，要优化语言输出必定离不开优质的语言输入。这种输入必须基于教学目标，合理创设语言情境，才可以让学生更好地接受。而听了张凝老师的讲座，引发了我的诸多思考，如何创设语言情境，优化语言输出，我们需要做到以下三点：一是给学生搭建一个基于文本的语言支架。二是给学生提供基于学情得语料。可以根据学生的兴趣爱好进行补充，可以激活学生的旧知，可以参考学生的生活经验，还可以从学生的心灵体验出发……三是教师要给学生展示各色各样的范本。最简单的莫过于诵读示范了，还可以进行表演示范和体态语的示范。总之，在创设情境时，要多关注学生的心灵，倾听学生的心声，学生需要的，适合学生的才是最好的。

反思三：如何做最好的自己？

课堂上，我必须有一个清晰的自我定位。如果连自己都无法认清自己在课堂上的地位，还怎么去教学生呢？如果自己都感到迷惑了，感到痛苦了，那么很有可能把学生也弄迷惑了，害惨了。教师不仅仅是教案的执行者，更要做一个明白人？

在平时，要极力做一名反思型教师。反思是一种美德，学会自我反思是一个老师的必备素质。两千多年前的孔夫子的就我们教导“吾日三醒吾身”，可见不断反思，才能逐渐进步。

最后引用李开复博士的一句话：“有勇气来改变可以改变的事情，有胸怀来接受不可改变的事情，有智慧来分辨两者的不同”，做最好的自己，做快乐的自己，相信自己一定可以成功！

There’s no doubt that my mother gives all her love to me. I do believe she is a great person who makes my life beautiful and meaningful.

She is an easygoing and kind woman with bright eyes and a lovely smile. Although she is often busy, I still feel that I am taken good care of by her. It’s a great pleasure to chat with her when I get into troubles. She always encourages me not to give up and tries to cheer me up by coming up with good solutions. In addition, I am fascinated by her cooking and writing.

With her love, I feel like a fish swimming happily in a beautiful sea. I’ll cherish her love forever.

[我的母亲英语中考作文

中考将至，想必同学们的心情一定是紧张的。小编整理了一篇关于建设和谐社会的英语作文，希望能帮到你。

中考英语作文范文 建设和谐社会500字

假设你是李晓平,是黄冈中学的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题,根据下面所给出的提示,用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。

1.人与社会:祖国、家乡、学校,热爱关心;

2.人与人:家人、师长、同学,诚信互助;

3.人与自然:能源、环境、动植物,爱惜保护;

4.你的态度:内容由考生自己拟定。

[范文]

Build a Harmonious Society

Dear fellow students,

Our government is going to build a "harmonious society". I think it is everyones duty to work hard to achieve this goal.

As high school students, what should we do ?

First of all, we should love our motherland. Lets take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our schools activities.

Secondly, lets fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. Mostimportant of all, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.

Finally, lets work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.

As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above.

Dear fellow students, lets start right now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day,every hour, and every minute!

Li Xiaoping

From Huanggang High School

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“姐姐，姐姐，跟我玩呀！”哎，弟弟老是玩也不是办法，我要给他来个“幼儿园学前启蒙教育”，当他的启蒙教师，培训一下他的英语。也许他的天资不够高，但只要他“笨鸟先飞”，说不定就会赶上别人的哦！

说起“启蒙教育”，我还真的挺自豪的，因为那些杯子、衣服之类的日常用品都是我教弟弟学会的，也算是“半个老师”。我本想教英语只要像了英语老师教我们那样，老师读一遍，学生跟着读一遍就学会了，没想到……哎，真是一波三折呀！

我拿来一块小黑板和几支彩色笔，让他坐着。“来，跟姐姐念‘A’。”“姐姐，我好渴，我要喝果汁。”“不行，你念会这个字母了，我就让你喝。”“哇……”（哭声）没办法，只好让他先喝个痛快了，喝完果汁他就会乖乖学吧，没想到他又要动我的作业本了，噼里啪啦……哎，太不乖了！

第二天，我又开始不厌其烦地教他，功夫不负有心人，终于有了进度。“来，跟姐姐念‘one’。”“one。”接着便是我的掌声了。在我的鼓励下，他学会“one”，“two”，“three”，“four”。只不过有时念“four”时会念错。（已经很不错了！）

没想到，当老师这么累，我不紧要教他知识，还得管他乖不乖，要不要喝茶。我现在终于知道老师的辛苦了。

这次我可是既教会弟弟英语又懂得老师的艰辛哟。在这里我也要奉劝各位淘气包们：不要再惹老师生气了，收敛一下吧！

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待，感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语，他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请 根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以"My English Learning"为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三个问题，并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示：

When did you start learning English? (in … /…years ago)

How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…)

What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar…)

What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well? (watch English movies, sing English songs…)

中考英语满分作文：

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

In our accommodations, many students have computers. Also we can see in the electronic reading room and the cybercafés, rows of students sit in front of the monitors. Computers play an important role in our everyday life.

We use computers to cope with files and photos etc. And the internet is just a large database and we can get on the internet to search for anything we need through the computers. We can keep in touch with the others with the emails, msn and QQ etc. Enjoying ourselves in music, games and movies can loosen us after nervous classes.

Each coin has two sides. Disadvantages of the computers can also do harm to us. Most of us students use the computers more to play games and chat with strangers than searching for useful information. That’s a waste of time. There is so much rubbish on the net, which are some medium messages about crime or sex. It does harm to our minds.

From all above, we should learn to use computers in our own right ways. The computers doesn’t have no responsibility, it depends on the way we use them.

导语：现在是互联网的时代，很多人都沉迷于网络游戏中，你觉得这种现象是好是坏呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.

Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, Im sure he will make great progress soon.

【参考译文】

李华花太多时间玩电脑游戏，他落后于别人。作为他的好朋友，我必须做些事来帮助他。

首先，我认为学好功课对他很重要。他应该把大部分时间花在学习上而不是电脑游戏上。其次，我必须告诉他玩电脑游戏太多对他的健康有害，尤其是对他的眼睛。所以他必须放弃。放学后我可以和他多做运动。也许他会对体育更感兴趣而不是电脑游戏。然后我会让他更加专心学习。当然，我会尽我所能帮助他的所有科目。我认为我可以在许多有趣的方式，让他在学习中找到很多乐趣。同时，我会请他的父母和我们的老师帮助他，太。如果我尝试这些，我相信他很快就会取得很大的进步。

导语：写作练习对于英语能力的综合提高,特别是对高阶学习者而言有重要意义,不管做什么都需要技巧，写英语作文有什么技巧呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语写作指导，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

如何写好一篇60字的作文，争取18分的最大值，显然已经引起了师生极大的重视。对于中考来说这可是个了不起的数字!那么如何提高作文得高分的能力?当然可以只回答一个字“练”。目标有了，最重要的就是方法了。至少我们应该注意作文的基本要求和基本技巧。

60字的作文，非常有限的文字里要说明白说清楚一件事或一个人物或者一个观点，并不是一件很容易的事情。所以更要注意结构、要求和技巧。

60字的作文最好先从结构上练起，一般要分这样五个层次：

1)开始句

2)向主体过度句

3)主体叙述

4)向结尾过度

5)结尾。

第一层开始句起着点题的作用，60字的作文一定要开门见山。也就是第一句就能让人感觉到你将要写什么。但是往往是概括性地笼统地指出。所以往往是一句话就解决问题。第二层往往是在第一层的基础上具体指出某人或某事。第三层就这个某人或某事进行详细的叙述或议论或描写。但一般以3至4句为宜。因为中考作文的字数是60至80字之间。不足和超过都要扣分。所以应该及时向结尾过渡，完成第四层，多半以谈感觉为主。在主体叙述和结尾之间起着承上启下的作用。但也应该一句话解决问题。过渡的梯子搭好了，也就能够圆滑地圆满地结尾了。结尾的一句话往往是感慨、感想、感叹之类的句子。这样6至8句的作文，每句平均10字左右(每个句子的字数根据含义的需要调整)，最后写好的作文就应该是在60至80字之间了。

说到这里我们只解决了层次清晰、符合字数要求的问题。其次注意没有把握的句子不写，拼写要准确，叙述中没有语法错误，时态要符合背景。我们学了含不同从句的复合句。所以作文中应该适当地出现复合句。一定要注意词汇上的不必要重复和句式的单一。巧妙地插入平时积累的格言警句，使作文生辉。设法满足“词汇和句型句式运用恰当自如;文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达方式。”同时注意大小写、标点正确。

再次，一定注意作文的题内要求，往往是以问题形式出现为多，千万不可丢掉任何一个。

最后提醒大家注意的就是一定要打草稿，避免在卷面上涂抹。

以上这几点做到了，离满分作文也不远了。

My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well . He gets on well with us . Everyone in our class likes him .

导语：现如今微信成了我们生活必不可少的一部分，关于微信的利与弊你了解多少呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

In recent years,Wechat is becoming increasingly popular.Many people express themselves,exchange ideas and deliver information by Wechat.

There are a number of reasons for Wechat to be known.To begin with,Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication,which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call.Next,Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people.Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly.Furthermore,convenience also accounts for its popularity.It is available everywhere and at any time.

However,problems exist meanwhile.Firstly,our identity can be revealed when we use Wechat.As a result,we can be in trouble.Moreover,it may make communicating with others face to face less.To make the matter worse,relationship could break down.Last but not the least,our attention might be drawn too much to focus on study.

Thats all.There is no doubt that Wechat will improve as time goes by.

【参考译文】

近年来，微信越来越受欢迎。许多人表达自己，交流思想，传递信息，通过微信。

有一些被称为微信的原因。首先，微信是一个相对便宜的沟通方式，从而减少了大量打电话的成本。其次，微信是大多数人的口味。其精美的界面和各种功能都爱疯了。此外，方便也占其受欢迎的程度。它可以在任何地方任何时间。

然而，问题存在的同时，首先，我们的身份可以发现，当我们使用微信，作为一个结果，我们就麻烦了。而且，这可能会使与他人的交流，面对面少了。更糟糕的是，关系破裂。最后但并非最不重要的，我们的注意力会被吸引过多集中于研究。

这一切，毫无疑问的是，微信会随着时间的推移提高。

1.有关微信的英语作文

2.有关于微信的坏处英语作文

3.有关微信的利与弊英语中考作文

4.英语中考作文：谈谈对微信的看法

5.如何使用微信英语作文

6.有关微信的介绍中考英语作文

7.中考英语作文预测:微信介绍

8.中考英语作文：学生与手机

请你阅读你的加拿大网友Tommy的e-mail，根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信.

Dear Li Lei,

I havent heard from you for a long time. Im glad to tell you that Ill visit Beijing this summer vacation. It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.

Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Tommy

★ 范文

Dear Tommy,

Im glad to know you will come to Beijing.

Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world. There are many places of interest, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world. Great changes have taken place in Beijing since we successfully held the 2008 0lympic Games.

Now, people pay more attention to the environment. More trees and flowers have been planted. For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have been built. If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful. Whats more, a lot of people can speak English. Beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.

Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Lei

My name is Joe.I come from England.I live in a very big house with my parents.Now let me show you my house.

我的名字是乔。我来自英国。我和我的父母住在一个大房子。现在让我告诉你我的房子。

This is the living room.I like to sit on the couch to watch TV.There are two bedrooms.One is for my parents;another is for me.My bedroom is not very big but comfortable.I like the kitchen very much，because my parents always cook delicious food for me in the kitchen.The refrigerator is in it.My father and mother put vegetables and meat in the refrigerator.Our bathroom is very beautiful.I take a shower everyday in it.I love my house.

这是起居室。我喜欢坐在沙发上看电视。有两间卧室。一个是我的父母;另一个是我。我的卧室不是很大但很舒适。我很喜欢厨房，因为我的父母总是煮好吃的食物给我在厨房的冰箱。是的。我的父亲和母亲把蔬菜和肉放在冰箱里。我们的浴室很漂亮。我每天都在它洗个澡。我爱我的家。

一、给写作留有充分的时间

在中考英语题中， “书面表达”往往是最后一项，有的学生把最后几分钟用在写作上，匆匆了事，这是很不明智的。学生用在写作上的时间应不少于10分钟，力争不丢分，少丢分。

二、认真审题，先打草稿

写之前一定要认真阅读写作要求，切忌见题就写。中考作文主要有两种类型： “提示作文”和 “看图作文”。 “提示作文”一般已经给出要点，而 “看图作文”则需根据图画及提示在很短的时间内将要点列出。把要点列出后，在草稿纸上写提纲，打草稿，就可以看出大概有多少字。在正式往试卷上写之前，根据题目要求适当增减内容，保持卷面整洁。

三、正确使用标点

学生在初中学习阶段，对标点符号的用法极不重视，因此，考试中明显的标点错误屡有发生，在一定程度上影响学生的成绩。另外，大小写错误也常有发生。有的甚至一篇文章从头到尾没有一个大写字母，再加上标点不正确，让人看了不知所云，以致直接影响考试成绩。

四、写好简单句，慎用长句

考生要根据所列要点，运用相应的提示词及正确的动词形式在稿纸上写出简单句。考生应熟悉简单句的五种基本句型，尽量使用简单句。在简单句的基础上，根据各句之间的关系适当加上一些连词，使得整篇文章结构紧凑，行文流畅。套用句型，能显示考生的英语基础扎实，提高作文档次。慎用长句是因为其成分多，结构复杂，所以出错的机会也多。考生在没有十足的把握时最好少用或不用长句，以免给自己的作文带来不必要的损失。

五、熟悉各种时态，灵活运用

时态是学习英语语言的难点。考生务必系统地学习初中出现的各种时态，做到灵活运用。在同一篇作文当中，时态要保持一致。

六、切忌中式英语，避免生搬硬套

一些学生因缺乏写作技巧，往往在写英语作文时，根据中文意思堆积英文单词，编造出许多中式英语，结果错误百出，意思表达不清楚，直接影响考试成绩。

七、认真检查和修改，减少错误

做完写作题后要从头至尾读一遍，检查一下文章是否通顺，有无逻辑错误，标点符号、单词拼写和时态运用是否正确，避免笔误。

What Can We Do for the Environment

our environment is becoming worse and worse，what can we do for the environment?I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem。

The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. Whats more，it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste。

In fact，even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

1、有效指导。缺乏精心指导，再多的训练也是徒劳的。这几乎是常识。说到底，一在于科学序列的建构，作文教学中仅复习过程就可精心设计诸如：读题训练、材料训练、构思训练、成文训练、修改训练、应变训练。如此细密的规划，匠心独运，更有利于大大提高学生的写作能力，终身受益。二在于有效的训练指导的落实。诸如审题、立意、谋篇等写作知识在新课改的“淡化”要求之下，教学实际中已经被忽略了，作文教学更显随意和无序。读懂文题是立意谋篇的第一步。审题不到位造成作文失败的例子并不鲜见。主题不鲜明、思路不清等等问题，与作文有效的规范训练不足有很大的关系。

2、善于选择。学生的作文缺乏生气，缺乏真情，缺乏典型的实例，是因为少了一份智慧的选择。智慧的选择需要教师智慧的引领。教师引领学生去梳理、归类属于自己的生活，引领学生去回味属于自己的那一瞬间的“怦然心动的感觉”，把这些生活细节、心灵感悟形成单元形成系列。我想，学生在整理归类中、在回味感悟中也是一种情感的升华意趣的提升。让学生用个人独特的视角去看自我，去看世界，作文自然有“真意”;学生对自己的生活有了深刻的感受，作文自然有“真情”。

3、真情实感。一定要用真实实例，使作文有血有肉。基于这些反思，我一直把作文教学引导当成了重头戏，也因为自己对写作的爱好吧。所以我看了许多作文教学的资料，也尝试了一些作文教学的方法。因为我觉得让学生写好作文，第一步先是让学生敢写作文，而要写的生动感人，就必须有真情实感，要有真实的生活实例，要有自己的真实感受，不是编造。基于这些思考，因此我的作文教学是从记叙文开始的，我列了几个专题训练学生如何能把身边的小事写细写得生动感人。这当然要借助一些方法，诸如语言、动作、心理、细节等描写方法。所以我的专题就是从这些开始的。

语言教师的长处就应该拥有教育引领学生学习和动手写作的智慧，使学生的作文做到凤头、猪肚、豹尾。为今后的人生道路走得更加宽广打下坚实的基础。

英语写作是中考学生的一个盲点，缺乏对英语写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢?下面是YJBYS网作文频道为大家整理的英语写作指导。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、习作点评

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that，so，little by little，when，so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to，became interested in，come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago，some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish，such as plastic bags，fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees，picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily，great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins，and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

拯救地球

地球是我们人类共同的家园，人类只有一个地球。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救)our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文参评。

1。重要性：只有一个地球

2。主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难

3。措施：停止污染、保护大自然

参考词汇：disaster n。灾难 protect V。 保护

注意：(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名;

(2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数;

(3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

★ 范文

Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment

It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China。 A lot of fishes died。 The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land。 The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather。

So everyone should do something to save our environment。 First， we should save every drop of water， such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water。 For example， we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water。 Second， we should save energy， such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave;Do more walking， more bicycling and less driving and so on。 Third， we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories。

Let’s act now from everything to save our environment。 Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!

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