介绍自己的英语作文及翻译汇总20篇

Christmas Day

圣诞节

Most westerners always celebrate Christmas Day as their major festival, in order to memorialize Jesus.During that time, they always have several days off, so they can enjoy this festival with all their hearts.The children often get together with their friends.The adults are busy with decorating their houses.They also send the postcards with their best wishes to each other. In the streets, there are so many Fathers Christmas sending presents to the passers-by.And everything is on a discount in the supermarkets.Thus the supermarkets are the busiest places.

为了纪念耶稣大部分西方人都庆祝圣诞节作为他们的主要节日。在这段时间里，他们总是有好几天假，所以他们可以全身心的享受这个节日。小孩们经常与他们的朋友聚在一起。大人都忙着装饰他们的房子。他们还互相赠送明信片以及他们对彼此的祝福。 在街上，有很多圣诞老人在派送礼物给路人。超市里面的所有东西都在打折。所以，超市是最忙的地方。

Weekends to people mean that people can have two days‘ rest. They can go out or get together at home.

Everybody spends weekends in his own way. Some people relax themselves by listening to music, reading in libraries or doing sports outdoors. In a word, different people have different relaxations.

I often spend weekends with my family. Sometimes my parents take me to visit our relatives. Sometimes we go swimming or go dancing and sometimes I go to read some instructive books. I often enjoy myself at weekends.

周末对人们而言意味着可以有两天的休息时间，他们能够外出或在家聚会。

每个人都以自己的方式过周末。有的人通过听音乐、到图书馆读书或在户外运动来放松自己。总之，不同的人有不同的放松方式。

我常与家人共度周末。有时我父母带我去走访亲戚，有时我们去游泳或去跳舞，有时我们去看一些有益的书。我常常在周末过得很愉快。

[周末的英语作文附翻译

The Longhu villa in my hometown Pengshui County, where the fog is floating, (.) is a magical and beautiful place.

The flag up to an altitude of about 1000 meters high, halfway up the mountain air is very sweet, very refreshing. The mountain long rows of trees under the tree is a wild profusion of vegetation, and insects and other small animal snake, so you walk can hear small animal sounds.

The most interesting, is that the top of the thick fog, one or two months a year, on the top of the mountain will have a thick layers of fog, you can put the fog blowing a "hole" in one breath, but it closed in neither fast nor slow, steep peak, have a piece of egg shaped stone. Its a good place to watch the fog, but prone to hallucinations sitting on the stone, you will feel as if you are sitting in the clouds is Sun Wukong, somersault cloud, all of a sudden to jump down! And its easy to sit on the stone and jump down! You know, this stone is surrounded by a cliff! So, its better not to sit on the stone, because its a safe one!

my plan of next year

a new year ，a new start，when i stand on the edge of a new year，i can’t help thinking about my plan of next year.

but ，what i really decide to do is that i must make good of anytime i can spare though it seems impossible. while，i will do my best to live up with what i have planned，and the result will prove it！

我明年的计划

新的一年，新的开始，当我在新的一年的边缘立场，我不禁在想我明年的计划。

正如古人云：“。好开始是成功的一半“，所以我决定，我应该是在工作，而另一些性传播疾病就会放松，然后，在开始时，我比其他人更快，我当然会得到比别人更好的结果。

但是，我真正决定做的是，我必须利用好，我可以随时备用，虽然它似乎是不可能的。虽然，我会尽我所能，用我生活已计划了，结果将证明这一点。

斜阳从天垂落入地平线的怀抱，黑幕笼罩了大地最后一个角落，孤寂与繁星一道染进了万家灯火中。

褪去白昼时的笑颜和放肆，身体里仿佛是另一个灵魂，或者说，这才是我本来的样子。

我喜欢篮球、手游和WarGame，周围的人都知道这一点，但他们很少意识到，当我开始执笔的时候,我就变成了另一个人的样子拂去了平时的桀骜不驯，也不再放浪形骸，寡言少语，总是在自己一个人思索着什么，只有冷淡的眼神，我喜欢这个时候的自己，因为这时的安静和冷漠让我有时间反思我自己或者思考别的什么东西。

一点放纵不羁，加些桀骜不驯，在某些场合显得彬彬有礼，有时又安静甚至沉默，这是我在大多数时候的样子，但不是全部，我深知自己并不完全了解自己。有一段不到十五秒钟的视频令我印象深刻，那只是一段不到普通的CQB短视频，但几次翻看，我都惊异于自己的眼神在头盔和钢丝面罩间，一双我无比熟悉的眼镜躲藏在全息瞄具之后，那种高度集中、带着丝丝寒意和杀气的眼神却是我没有见过的。所以我喜欢WarGame，它能让人更了解自己。

写作对我而言则是另一种情况了，这是一种心境，一种生活态度。曾经有朋友说过我身上有一种文艺特质，他并不知道我喜欢写东西，而且我平时并没有表露出他所说的什么文艺特质，所以我当时既没有确认也没有否认。我问朋友原因，他说不知道，只是一种感觉。也许他永远也不会知道他对了。我的确有这样的一种特质我喜欢写作，即使我没有让人满意的文笔也依然喜欢，因为我喜欢简单的东西。不同于别的事物，一篇文章，无论它是论文还是古文，写作者都会让它能够最大限度的被人理解，因此，再多的辞藻也只是陪衬，正是这份特质，使文学拥有了迷倒亿万人的魅力，而且让越来越多的人燃起对写作的渴望。

在生活中，我也尽可能追求着这种简单，高中后我甚至从来没买过那些被认为是潮流的衣服或鞋子。我将自己称为奥利奥粉，这不是指我喜欢奥利奥饼干，相反，我并不喜欢那种味道，我只是喜欢那种配色。有一句话我很喜欢：繁杂的东西看多了，才发现简单引人注目。这句话令我深有感触。

在篮球场上，最引人注目的是各种各样的鞋子，有时候同款鞋的不同配色也会被人拿来互相比较，那些为吸引眼球而构设的繁杂而奇异的颜色搭配甚至比晚霞还要艳丽。不过我算一个特例，因为我习惯于简洁的搭配，所以在球场上我总是显得比较特别在一大堆花丛一样的篮球鞋中，一双黑基白调的使节九。有朋友曾经告诉我我的鞋子是最好辨认的，记得当时我下意识的看了一下旁边一双粉色的AJ6，颜色甚至让人觉得炫目。而前不久，我下定决心脱离一下长久以来的奥利奥搭配，但在安踏、李宁、匹克等品牌的官网挑了很久都没有心仪的型号，最后我反而在詹姆斯十三中选到了一双蓝底单灰调的灰蓝款。值得一提的是买完这双鞋两周后我在篮球场看到了一双很令我满意的安踏战靴，事实上我在安踏官网看到过这双鞋，但为什么没有关注到呢?也许是安踏官网的色彩太过鲜艳，让我不自觉的心生抵触吧。

也许就该至此搁笔吧，毕竟人是一个复杂的协调体，不过也有些矛盾，就是我喜欢简单。

轻寒，高二学生，他谁都不是，同时，谁都不是他。喜欢笑和思考，喜欢篮球、wargame、写作。有些自负，有些放浪，有些懒惰。不低估自己的天赋，总高估自己的努力。梦想成为记述者，却忘了自己也是当局者。

[高二介绍自己的作文

我生长在幸福又快乐的家庭，有和蔼可亲的父母，和一个读高二的姐姐，每天一起听音乐，不会的功课，姐姐会教我。父亲在做手表的零件，母亲是家庭主妇，家庭很好，天天都很快乐，在父母天天的照顾下，我逐渐长大、懂事，天天享受着美好的生活。 我的嗜好很少：弹钢琴、吹陶笛、听音乐，我常利用晚上来弹钢琴，虽然我弹得不好，但我却很快乐，因为钢琴可以陶治我的性情，培养我的信心、耐心。 我的个性是：我常常会发脾气，但是我知道发脾气，不但对身体有极大的害处、有碍健康，还会被别人认为这人修养不到家，是位莽夫，所以想处处受到尊敬，就须 有温和的个性，人活在事上与宇宙比起来实在太短暂、太渺小，所以我们应痛痛快快的过日子，不要有不悦之感，因为知足常乐。 每一个人都会有自己的抱负，我的抱负很小，想当钢琴老师，但是又想当一位护士，救救国家的公民，我希望在社会上做个好公民，站在自己的岗位，为人类做好事、回报父母。

I am Ma Yuanhao. Now let me tell you something about my family. My family has seven people in it, my father, my mother, my brother, my sister, my uncle, my grandfather and I. My grandfather is a driver. He drives a bus. He works in Beijing. He has two kids. They are my father and my uncle.

My father and my uncle are both office workers. They are in the same office. My brother is a policeman. He is tall and strong. He works in Shenyang.I am a student. My sister is a student,too. We are in the same school, but in different grades. My mother is a nurse. She works in a hospital. We live in Beijing now with my parents.

I often have bread and milk for breakfast. I like eating hamburgers, too. And for lunch, I usually have some chicken with vegetables and rice. Jiaozi is my favorite food. I usually have Jiaozi and an apple for dinner. I think I can eat healthily.

My mother cooks very well. She often cooks nice food for us.

I love my family!

我的同学都说我是个自私且非常自恋的人，我不明白，你们给我评评理。

我叫小怡，今年大一，因为成绩不理想，所以去了一所专科学校。但是我觉得我考不上好学校这根本不是我的错，高中时上课老师总是喜欢和我对着干，没事就爱找我回答问题，我觉得她就是看我不顺眼，以至于高三的时候，我直接就不去学校了。

今天是我开学的第一天，我美美的打扮一番，踏进大学校门，当然，我知道自己天生丽质根本不用打扮，但是我要的就是艳压群芳，我喜欢被万众瞩目，受人追捧的感觉。

走进宿舍，看清我的舍友，深深地觉得我的打扮多余了，我根本不用打扮，就比她们好看。

我收拾好自己的东西，把垃圾扔在地上，准备躺在床上休息一会儿，但是舍友们却要我大扫除，开玩笑，我在家可是从来没有干过活的，竟然让我扫地?凭什么?还说我把垃圾扔在地上的最多，就跟她们没扔一样，真的是生气。

对了，忘了跟大家说，我唱歌很好听的，身边的朋友都这么说，大学迎新会，我准备一展歌喉，让她们都听听，省的宿舍的人都是一帮高高在上的嘴脸。

终于到了晚上，世界都安静了，这么宁静的夜晚，不练练歌简直可惜了，所以我开始唱歌了，谁知道刚刚唱了一会儿，舍友又开始来说我了，说什么我扰民，打扰别人睡觉，我很委屈，我就唱个歌怎么了?凭什么不让我练?

而且她们都合起伙来欺负我，总是让我值日，还说每个人轮一回，该到我了，我就不明白了，她们帮我值个日怎么了?我不想干活怎么了?她们难道不应该帮我值日吗?

你们说，瘫上这样的舍友，我该怎么办?她们一点都不团结同学，也从来不帮我，到头来还说我自私，我自私吗?

我，一个性格开朗的小女孩，一个喜欢与别人交往的小女孩，一个大家公认的完美女孩。我一个生于20xx年2月5日的小女孩，一个大方的小女孩，一个不爱管闲事的漂亮女孩。如果你想和我交朋友，请来看看我，记住，我叫静静，在阳光小学读二年级。

我喜爱跳舞，喜爱看书，喜爱游泳，但最喜爱的还是看书。所以，我有了一个外号——“书虫”。只要书柜有一本我没看过的书，马上就会被动我“啃”得一干二净。有时，家里的书看完了，马上就去邻居家借一本来“啃”。邻居家的书被我“洗劫一空”，没办法了，只得让爸爸带我去书店看书。有时，我在书店看书，看着看着，不知不觉时间就过去了。有时，爸爸喊：“静静，吃饭了！”我还边看边说：“哦，来了。”结果，常常是一出门就撞了爸爸个满怀。怎样，我是不是个名副其实的“书虫”呢？

对了，刚才为什么说我是个漂亮女孩呢？因为我有一头乌黑发亮的头发，既雪白又光滑的皮肤，细长的眉毛长在一双水灵灵的大眼睛上面，一个略扁的却十分可爱的鼻子，我的樱桃小嘴特别不爱说废话，理所当然，我的耳朵也不喜欢听废话。我拥有一双修长笔直的手，又细又长的脚非常非常的白皙……每当别人问我为什么长得那么出众的时候，我总是这样回答：“这也许是因为我从儿时就开始练跳舞的缘故吧。”别人又会问：“这两件事有什么关系呢？”我又会回答：“因为跳舞可以保持形体啊。”

我还非常大方。有一次，一个朋友来我家写作业，我知道她特别喜欢吃甜点，于是，我想了一个绝妙的办法。对她说：“我家有你喜欢吃的甜点，而我现在又不想吃，也不喜欢吃。你现在吃得下吗？”她一听到我家有甜点，马上回答我：“吃得下，只要有甜点，再多我也吃得下。”听了她的话，我才可以放心的把甜点拿出来给她吃。看到她吃得津津有味，我打算生日的时候请她吃蛋糕。

怎样，现在你也承认我是一个完美、漂亮、大方的小女孩了吧？记得来和我交朋友，我热情欢迎你！

我是下棋高手我的脸方方的，长着不算很大的眼睛，大大的招风耳，不算大的鼻子和嘴巴。这就是我，一个独一无二的我。

我有许多爱好：唱歌、下棋、看书、游泳……在这些爱好中，我最喜欢下棋，下棋能让我多思考，我也渐渐把思考变成一项爱好了。

在一次学校棋王争霸赛中，我获得了一枚铜牌，是我冷静思考的结果。有几次，我和同学对弈中国象棋的时候，他被我的一颗小兵骗走了他的一颗车。他的车没了，我的胜算就变大了。我就这样慢慢成了我们班里的象棋高手。

不只是我们班的人说我是象棋高手。有一次在兴趣班里，我和当时最厉害的人下了一盘，虽然我输了棋，但是我还是很高兴，因为很多人都是被他秒杀的，我却和他下了很久才败下阵来。

这就是我，一个被很多人称为象棋高手的我。

Luo Xiao Cheng

I have a lot of good friends. But I have only one best friend. He is Luo Xiao Cheng.Luo Xiao Cheng sitting in front of me. He has an "eye" long in the forehead. He is very thin, almost fragile. He does not jump high. But he quickly ran. His math is not ideal. However, his very good English.

……

[有关向朋友介绍我的好朋友的英语作文

Hello ,everybody .

My name is xxx .I‘m 14 years old . Im a girl. I have long/ short hair and big/small eyes.

I used to study in XX Primary School. Now I am studying in ~~ Middle School. I did a class in the primary school . Im crazy about English. Now English teacher surnamed ~~ . And I hope we will get along.

Every year on the fourth ThursDayof November is Thanksgiving Day. It’s a festival for American and Canadian with the purpose of thanks for harvest. While canadians celebrate on the second Monday of October. I have a penfriend in America. He wrote to me his Thanksgiving Day last year. He told me that it was a time for family reunion. Families would come back home to celebrate the festival together. Most of the time it was his mother who prepared the dinner. Turkey is must for the festival. It looks like huge chicken. His mother also made pumpkin pie and many other delicious food for them. After the dinner, they talked with each other with the old thing or the future plan. He said sometimes they would invite some friends to share the happiness of Thanksgiving Day. In a word, he had a great time on Thanksgiving Day.

每年十一月的第四个星期四是感恩节。这是美国和加拿大为了感谢丰收的节日。但是加拿大人却是在十月的第二个星期一庆祝。我在美国有一个笔友。他写信告诉我他去年感恩节的情况。他告诉我那是家庭团聚的时间。家人们都会回家庆祝节日。大多数时候，是他的母亲准备晚餐。火鸡是节日的必需品。它看起来像一只巨型鸡。他的母亲也做了南瓜派和许多其他美味的食物给他们。晚饭过后，他们会互相谈论过去的事或未来计划。他说有时候他们也会邀请一些朋友来一起分享感恩节快乐。总之，他在感恩节过得很开心。

我叫王栋石，今年6岁了，是高新一小一年级七班上的一名小学生。我是一个活泼可爱的小男孩。我小眼睛、单眼皮，皮肤稍微有些黑，笑起来很可爱。

爸爸妈妈都叫我小石头，他们非常喜欢我，非常爱我。我在家里，经常帮助妈妈扫地、擦桌子、晾衣服、洗碗；帮爸爸洗车、倒垃圾，爸爸妈妈夸我是一个能干的小帅哥。

我喜欢画国画，爱踢足球，并加入了兴趣班。我喜欢上语文课，爱读"日有所诵"，因为葛老师喜欢我，经常夸我。我也喜欢葛老师、李老师、杨老师、卢老师等老师，因为他们教我知识、关心我。我是一个聪明勇敢、眼睛眯眯笑的小男孩，喜欢交朋友，请大家记住我。希望大家和我做好朋友，我喜欢一七班的小朋友们，我们要一起快乐成长。

My classroom is nice and big . There are fort desks and chairs in the classroom. There are two black boards on the walls. And there are two pictures, too. My classroom has eleven lights and twelve fans. What colour are the fans ? They are blue. At the coner, there is a shelf , many books are in the shelf. I like the books very much.

This is my classroom , it is very nice. I like m classroom very much . Do you have a nice classroom, too ?

我的教室是非常大。堡有课桌和椅子在教室里。有两块黑板在墙上。有两张图片。我的教室有11盏灯和12个风扇。风扇是什么颜色的?他们是蓝色的。锥形筒子络筒机,有一个书架,许多书在书架上。我非常喜欢那些书。

这是我的教室,它很漂亮。我非常喜欢m教室。你有一个漂亮的教室吗?

[英语作文我的教室翻译

Dear Miss Wang:

I am writing to express my sinceregratitude for your help in my study. Without your help , my study would not bethe top three in my class. It was you who always standed by me when I am fall.You pointed my mistakes and told me how to make them right. You always workedtirelessly to train my patience.Your continuous encouragement is my greatestmotivation.

I sincerely hope that you can have a goodhealth and stay happy. In addition, I wonder if you can pay a lot of attentionto your health, get more rest.

Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!

Yours

Lily

亲爱的王老师：

我写信是想诚挚的感谢你在我学习上的帮助。没有你的帮助，我的成绩就不会排在班级前三名。是你在我失败的时候一直支持我。我帮我指出错误并告诉我怎样改正它们。你总是不知疲倦地训练我的耐心。你不断的鼓励是我最大的动力。

我真心祝愿您身体健康，永远快乐。另外，我希望你能多注意你的健康，多多休息。

再次感谢你的帮助!

你的学生

李丽

Dear Tony ，

Chongyang, the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly,即将来临

is coming around.

We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day,

我们想邀请来自你们学校的同学们加入我们。

and we wound like to invite students from your school to join us.

我们计划数个活动We have planned several activities . When we get there , we will

visit the elderly in their rooms in groups, 向他们送花和自制的卡片，为了表达我们的尊敬和热爱。presenting

them with flowers and self--?made cards to show our respect and love. Then we

will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses.

As some old people feel lonely .We may chat with them about their old days,

changes of our city, or anything they are interested in

.我们会给他们一些表演，例如：唱歌，舞蹈等等。

We may also give them some performances, such as singing, dancing and so

on.

我确定我们都会都中国的老人拥有更好的理解。I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of

the elderly inChina. If you have any suggestions, please let us know.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year.Playing

basketball is always my favourite,so some of my classmates and I will form a

small team and play basketball together.Sometimes we may have a match against

some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.

我计划今年的暑假要花费在运动上.打篮球一直是我最热爱的,所以我的一些同学和我将会组建一个小队并且互相打比赛.有时我们可以和其他球队进行对抗比赛,我很享受当我们赢得比赛时的感觉.

中招考试即将到来，许多学生感到压力很大，为此很烦恼。你校的校刊特意进行了课后放松方式的调查。请你以”Learn to relax yourself “为题写一篇80词左右的短文。要点提示：

1)学生压力大及其表现

2)学会放松很重要

3)常见的放松方式

4)最适合的自我放松方式

5)我的建议

Learn to relax yourself

Now many students of Grade 9 are under too much pressure. They always feel too tired to listen to the teachers carefully in class.

It’s important for students to relax. Only in this way can they study well and be healthy. Here are some different ways to relax themselves. For example, they can try to have enough sleep,or they can listen to their favourite music after class. They can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends.

While you are studying, don’t forget to relax. You will study better after a good rest.

参考译文

学会放松自己

现在许多9年级的学生压力太大。上课时他们总是觉得太累了以至于不能认真听老师讲课。

对学生来说放松是很重要的。只有这样他们才能学习健康。这里有一些不同的方法来放松自己。例如，他们可以尝试有足够的睡眠，或者他们可以听他们喜欢的音乐课后。他们也可以读一些书或做一些运动。对我来说，我经常和朋友们出去玩。

当你在学习的时候，不要忘记放松。好好休息后你会学得更好。

Hello everyone！ Im - Wang Jie.

I grow high, fat, a pair of small eyes always from time to time, I have a pair of big ears, usually seldom laugh, even if the smile is just a smile. My clothes generally wear white or red, my character is a little introverted, few friends, usually taciturn, my learning is general. My advantage is that I can take notes in class and record the truth and meaning of it. The shortcoming is recalcitrant character and refusing to listen to advice. Of course, I have tried several times to correct it, but I cant do it. My greatest determination is to correct the problems and strive to be the front spear!

Well, Im finished. Please make a lot of changes! Show me your introduction!

The experience of painting

Im a girl who loves painting. Actually. Listen to my mother, when I was young cursive are reluctant to get it! Later, why did I like to take a stroke? This is the first thing to say: listen to mom, when she was a kid, she held my hand and taught me to write. I was sleepy, writing and dozing. My mother had no choice but to force me. Later my mother taught me to read the chant, in order to improve my interest in every song beside the mother with a nice painting (mother love painting) did not think, I am very interested in these pictures, often with a pen in drawing, my mother found my interest, teach me how to learn to draw.

Mom started to buy a first in the body of the red, I treasure every day, according to draw pictures. Then I do not trace will be able to draw simple pictures. My mother once drew a circle, and I followed a circle. With the pattern, into a small cat. Mother was surprised, and she didnt think I could draw such a beautiful cat when I had just learned to paint. She felt that I should be trained more systematically and sent me to the art training class. Under the guidance of the teacher, my painting techniques continue to improve, I have to draw more and more interest in the!

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。