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十五篇英语作文初二(汇总20篇)

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初二感恩节英语日记带翻译

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Speaking of grateful parents, everyone will say parents are raising me, of course to be grateful. First of all, we would like to thank them here let us born in this beautiful world. Without them there would be no us, without them there would be no us today, without them there would be no we now good result.

Parents is we are the first teachers in life, from we began to learn to speak, walk, has been to grow up, every success, and even failed every time, parents will remember in my heart, accompany in your side, give you silently support, patient counseling, let us quickly learned how to be a useful person to society. So we have such parents, just can have happy today.

Parents also is very love us. Even the body piercing minor injuries, they will be very self-reproach, why didnt always want to watch the children of her own heart. If you are sick, they must be out in a proper meal, sleep, even cry for a little while. Remember once, I had a high fever, mother carried me to the hospital, from the anxious expression in her eyes I deeply feel the parents of my love is from the heart. Parents take care of us like to take care of the little angel, let we grew up and became a healthy and lively big boy. They pay for us, we do everything never called for the return.

The classmates, let us learn to Thanksgiving! With a grateful heart to treat their parents, with a heart sincere heart to communicate with their parents, dont take it for granted that their parents to help us to do anything, they brought us to this beautiful world, is great enough, and pull us is big, also not return, silently pay for us, Thanksgiving! Thanksgiving parents give us everything!

This again, I also wish the world says parents well-being! Happy!

说起感恩父母,大家肯定会说父母是生养我的人,当然要感恩。在这里首先我们要感谢他们让我们降生到了这个美丽的世界上。没有他们就没有我们,没有他们就没有我们的今天,没有他们就没有我们现在的好成绩。

父母是我们在人生道路的第一任老师,从我们开始学说话、走路,一直到长大成人,每一次成功,甚至是每一次失败,父母都会牢记在心头,陪在你身边,给予你默默的支持,耐心的开导,让我们很快学会了如何做一个对社会有用的人。所以我们有了这样的父母,才会有快乐的今天。

父母也是最最疼爱我们的人。哪怕是身上划破一点轻伤,他们都会很自责,心里总想为什么没有看好自己的孩子。如果你得了病,他们肯定急得吃不上饭、睡不着觉,甚至会哭上一会儿。记得有一次,我发高烧,妈妈背着我去医院,从她那焦急的神态中我深深的体会到父母对我是发自内心的爱。父母像照顾一个个小天使一样照顾着我们,让我们长成了一个健康活泼的大孩子。他们为我们付出,为我们做一切从来不要求回报。

同学们,让我们学会感恩吧!用一颗感恩的心去对待自己的父母,用一颗心真诚的心与父母交流,不要认为父母是理所当然帮我们做任何事的,他们把我们带到这个美丽的世界上,已经是足够的伟大,且将我们拉扯大,还不求回报,默默地为我们付出,感恩吧!感恩父母们给予我们的一切!

再此,我也祝愿天下的说有父母安康!快乐!

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I have some habbits, some are good, but some are bad.

I like reading very much. From reading science books, I get a lot of knowledge. From reading novels, I lose myself in the stories. I like doing sports, too. It helps me keep healthy. Also I never put todays work till tomorrow. They are all my good habbits. They help me a lot in my daily life.

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篇3:初二关于感恩节英语作文

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Some people understand the hard, some people know the filial piety, some people learned to respect, understand to cherish. If I know what an extraordinary kindness, gratitude. Western proverb: happiness, is have a thankful heart, a healthy body, a desirable job, one with your family, a bunch of reliable friends.

Gratitude for happiness, because I dont know Thanksgiving person, you cannot get happiness, the Chinese nation has a fine tradition of "Thanksgiving". "Who made the heart-inch grass, at a three chunhui." Moving verse, "dripping of grace, when animals are reported" classic lines, you whether to send you a cup of warm tea after mother overworked, handed in hers birthday, a homemade card, give a word of consolation when mother lost, mother for us to pour into the painstaking effort, energy, and we ever remember mothers birthday, feel mothers toil, and perceive that whereas silver, that the wrinkles. To feel grateful to you with my heart, and to return.

有的人懂得了勤奋,有的人懂得了孝敬,有的人懂得了尊重,懂得了珍惜。我懂得了一个与众不同的情义——感恩。西方有句谚语:幸福,是有一颗感恩的心,一个健康的身体,一份称心的工作,一位着你的家人,一帮可以信赖的朋友。

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篇6:参观花展初二英语作文

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Last week Chang Feng Park held a flower show.

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篇7:初二英语A Sad Story

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Last Monday when I stepped into my classroom, my monitor told us that our class teacher, Mr Sun, had passed away in a traffic accident. It seemed so unbelievable because he used to give us lessons on Monday morning. I couldnt accept the fact until the headmaster came to tell us the truth.

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篇8:初二英语Fishing

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My father likesFishing. He always goes fishing with his friends in Autumn.

One day, he took me to fish, too. In autumn, fish have grown up. It is the best season to fish. First, we chose a good place. Then my father helped me put an earthworm onto the fishhook. Afterwards, I threw the fishhook into the river. I waited for a long time. Suddenly, I saw the float sink. I was very happy. I pulled it out of the water but I only saw half of the earthworm. The fish played a trick on me. I was very angry. But my father said to me, “it takes time. You need to be more patient.” I tried again. A few minutes later, I caught a big fish and I showed it to my father. My father praised me, “what a good angler you are!”

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篇9:暑假初二英语日记

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It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.

In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.

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时间飞逝。我的暑假就要结束了。我的假期一般般。在假期一开始的时候,我写家庭作业。毕竟,学习是最重要的嘛。我做完作业后,几乎到了七月底了。是时候帮助家人收获了。干农活是如此的累。然而,作为家庭的一员,我不得不帮忙。虽然我只是帮了一点点,但是看着那些成果我感到很骄傲。干完农活后,我发现自己变得更黑了。不过,谁在乎呢。当我完成了所有的事情就是我的快乐时光。我几乎每天都和我的朋友出去玩。有时我们玩游戏或运动或去爬山。有时我们晚上出去购物,因为白天太阳太烈了。我们觉得难受。但现在离开学还有两天的时间。所以我必须呆在家里为学习养精蓄锐。一切都是那么的美好。现在已经十一点了。我想是该说晚安的时候了。 暑假的英语日记六

This July, I graduated from primary school. I was enrolled to a good middle school. Therefore, I had a happy and leisure summer holiday. In the middle of July, I attended to a summer camp. It’s about English. There were twenty five students in the camp. We all like English very much. Together, we studied and played. There were many activities, team work or single performance. We tried our best to put ourselves into this big family. Most of the time, we talked to each other in English. If we really don’t know how to express in English, we could ask for help. Our teachers were so great that they could help us a lot. They were so active that make us acted as they did. I am happy to attend this activity.

这个七月,我从小学毕业了。我被一所优秀的中学录取了。因此,我度过了一个开心闲暇的暑假。七月中旬,我参加了英语夏令营。营里总共有25名学生,我们都很喜欢英语。我们一起学习,一起玩耍。有很多活动,有团队和个人表演。我们尽自己最大努力融入这个大家庭。大部分的时间,我们都是用英语交谈。如果我们真的不知道怎样用英语表达的话,我们可以寻求帮助。能够帮助我们很多,我们老师觉得很棒。他们是如此活跃以至于使我们也像他们一样。我很开心能够参加这次活动。

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篇10:初二英语作文:迷信

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Though the science is highly advocated, people try to explain everything in science, there are still some people believe that something happen for some certain reasons, and the ghosts manipulate the supernature.

In the older generation, they believe in ghosts so much, my grandma is one of them. She burns joss sticks day and night, she says if she keeps doing this, and the immortal will see her sincere and will bless our family fast and sound.

As for me, I don’t believe in superstition, a ghost exists in those people who do the guilty things’ heart. But if people believe in superstition and have faith, that will be good for them, so they won’t feel empty and do the right things.

虽然科学得到了高度的提高,人们尝试着用科学解释每一件事情,但是仍然有一些人相信事出是有因的,鬼魂在背后操纵着超自然现象。

在老一辈里,他们很相信鬼怪,我的奶奶就是期中一个。她从早到晚的烧香,她说如果她坚持这样做的话,神仙就会看到她的诚意,就会保佑我们家身体健康。

对于我来说,我不相信迷信,鬼魂存在于那些做了亏心事的人心中。但是如果人们迷信并且有信仰,这样对他们来说也是好的,这样他们就不会感到空虚,也会做对的事情。

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篇11:童年英语作文初二80词

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Last weekend, On Saturday morning I got up at 6;30. After breakfast I did

my homework at home.

In the afternoon , I played football with my friends on our playgroud. In

the evening I watched TV with my parents at home.

On Sunday morning I went to visit my grandparents with my mother. In the

afternoon I went to go fishing with my grandpa. We had a good time . I went back

home with my mother in the evening. What a wonderfu weekend !

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篇12:初二英语作文:Homework

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When the bell rings around 1:40 p.m. thousands of students spill into streets. Notebooks and textbooks remain stored in lockers for the next day. Because of a desades-long practice of promoting failing students, some teens know they will advance to the next grade even if they don’t do theHomework.

Meanwhile, teachers say they are faced with the daily dilemma of whether to move ahead in a lesson when often only five or ten students out of around 30 have done the homework assignment. Very few kids do homework, and those who do it, cheat. Said a ninth English teacher, It is hard to base a lesson on homework if the work isn’t being done

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篇13:初二英语作文写给朋友的一封信

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Dear Chris:

It rained here last Sunday. I was happy last Sunday.

First, I finished my homework. Then, I cleaned my room. Next, I play I played chess. After that, I played the computer games.

How about you? What did you do on last Sunday? Did it rain?

Write soon

Atms

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篇14:初二关于地震的英语作文

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After 5.12 earthquake struck sichuan province since 2008, we, I was so frightened by an earthquake, I felt the earthquake many houses will be apart, can let many people lost their lives, is one of the worlds most terrible disaster. Today I saw "China childrens encyclopedia, really know anything about earthquake.

It turns out that the earthquake happened all of a sudden the vibration phenomenon, like the wind, rain, is a kind of common natural phenomena. Vibrations in the earth, in fact, very frequently, probably every 30 seconds there will be time, but most of them are very ease, people did not feel. We can feel the earthquake is due to the relative movement between earths tectonic plates, rock is squeezed, produce a huge amount of energy to make rock failure in an instant, or make originally the already existing fracture activity, suddenly release a large amount of energy, and some of the energy to the earths surface, make the earth trembling violently, causing strong earthquake. Started happening earthquake site is called the source, the source above the ground is called the epicenter, the ground of the devastating earthquake is the most strong place is called the magistoseismic area, while the magistoseismic area often is the place where the epicenter. When the earthquake occurred, the source of shock wave in the earths crust to all directions called seismic waves. Seismic waves hit the ground, the result will be a disaster.

We Chinese people are very smart, as early as the eastern han dynasty, there is a man named zhang heng scientists invented to measure the earthquake Hou Feng seismograph, and our modern scientists are generally measured the spread of seismic wave speed with the help of a seismograph, the place and time of the earthquake.

Know the earthquake knowledge, learning even before the earthquake early warning and self protection method, I think, to know that knowledge is very useful for our own.

自从2008年我们四川发生5.12大地震之后,我就特别害怕地震,我觉得地震会震垮很多房屋,会让许多人失去生命,是世界上最可怕的灾难。今天我看了《中国少年儿童百科全书》后,才真正知道地震是怎么回事。

原来,地震是突然间发生的大地震动现象,就像刮风、下雨一样,是一种很普遍的自然现象。地球上的震动实际上非常频繁,大概每30秒种就会有一次,但大多数都非常缓和,人们都没有感觉。我们能感觉到的地震是由于地球板块之间产生相对运动,岩石层受到严重挤压,产生巨大的能量使岩石在瞬间发生断裂,或者使原来已经存在的断裂突然活动,释放出大量能量,而其中一部分能量传到地球表面,使大地剧烈地颤动,从而引起强烈地震。地震开始发生的地点称为震源,震源上方的地面称为震中,破坏性地震的地面最烈处称为极震区,而极震区往往就是震中所在的地方。地震发生时,震源发出的在地壳中传向四面八方的冲击波称为地震波。地震波冲击到地面,就会引发灾难。

我们中国人非常聪明,早在东汉时期,就有一位叫张衡的科学家发明了用来观测地震的侯风地动仪,而我们现代的科学家也一般都借助地震仪来测量地震波的传播速度,判断地震发生的地点和时间。

知道了地震知识以后,还要学习地震发生前的提前预警和自我保护方法,我想,了解到这些知识对我们自己是非常有用的。

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篇15:保护眼睛初二暑期英语作文

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It is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? (重要的是,每个人都保持良好的视力。但是你知道如何保护你的视力?)

First, dont keep your eyes working for a long time. Youd better have a rest by looking in the long distance after you have studied an hour or so. (首先,不要让你的眼睛工作了很长时间。你最好休息一会看我国的远程学习后,您有一个多小时。)

Second, pay attention to the following: Dont read in the sun or in a poor light; dont read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. (其次,要注意以下几点:不要在阳光下阅读,或在光线不好的,不要在床上阅读或公共汽车在行驶。当你阅读这本书你应该保持你的眼睛远离约一英尺。)

And third, do eye-exercises every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. (第三,做眼每天练习。它也将帮助你保持良好的视力。)

If you obey the rules above, I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(如果你遵守上述规则,我认为,你可能会阻止你的视力成为短视。)

[保护眼睛初二暑期英语作文

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篇16:暑假英语作文初二80词

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My holiday was good. I stayed at home for sometime. I went to Tianyi Square

and bought same games. But one day, my monther, my younger brother and I went to

Tianyi digital square to buy games. And I bought a new uniform in the evening.

Id like to have a glass of apple juice my monther bought it for me. I says, "

Thanks a lot. " I bought some shoes. I want a pair of sports shoes. In the shop,

the wonderful song added tour pleasure. I see the black shoes. my monther says,

" There are beautiful !"

I was happy that day, because I went to Tianyi Square and had a lot of

fum.

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篇17:关于绿色生活的初二英语作文

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Low-carbon life is the lifestyle of the time to minimize energy consumption, thereby reducing carbon dioxide emissions. Low-carbon life, for those of us ordinary people is an attitude to life. It gives us is a willing and we were creating a low carbon life issues.Taomi Shui can be used to wash their hands every day, clean furniture, water the flowers and so on. Clean, natural moisture; 2. Scrap paper will pave the lowest in the closet can not only absorb moisture, can absorb the smell in the closet; 4. Drink tea residue, dry it, make a tea pillow comfortable, and help to improve sleep;Lifestyle to reduce energy consumption when, thereby reducing the carbon, especially carbon dioxide emissions. Low-carbon life, for us ordinary people, an attitude, not ability, we should actively promote and to practice the "low carbon" life, pay attention to energy saving, fuel-efficient, water saving, solar terms, starting from scratch.

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篇18:工作与娱乐初二英语作文

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Work and play do not contradict each other; in fact, they complement each other. As the saying goes, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." A life burdened with work leads you nowhere, for you would get tired and bored with your daily routine work. On the other hand, proper recreation will relieve the tension and discomfort of our monotonous life because it offers you various ways to let out your pent-up emotions.

What I usually do to relax after school is jogging and seeing movies. Usually I dont spare time for exercise, but I value the physical education class at school. Jogging several rounds in the field certainly relieves the days pressure. On weekends, Ill catch the morning movie for my visual enjoyment. I feel revived and energetic for another weeks work-load.

工作与娱乐并不互相冲突,事实上,它们之间的关系还相辅相成。有句格言说:整日工作而没有休闲娱乐,会令人变得沉闷乏味。」被工作重担压得喘不过气来的生活,将使你一事无成,因为你将对一成不变的例行公事感到厌烦。由另一方面来说,适度的娱乐活动能提供各种管道,来渲泄你被压抑的情绪,减轻单调生活中的紧张与不悦。

放学之后,我最常做的休闲活动,便是慢跑与看电影。通常我并不特地拨出时间来做运动,但是我很重视学校的体育课。在操场上慢跑几圈,无疑地可以减轻一天的压力。在周末时,我都去看早场电影,享受视觉飨宴。如此一来,我将有如再生般的充沛活力,去面对下一星期的工作量。

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篇19:初二年级英语作文:我看到的彩虹

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Before I was 10, I lived in my hometown, it was a small and beautiful village, I love my hometown so much.

I remembered when it rained with the sunshine, there would be the rainbow in the sky. As the sky was so blue, the rainbow was very big, just like I was in front of the rainbow, it was so amazing. After I moved to the city, I never see the rainbow as beautiful as what I saw in my hometown. In the city, there are so many building that they cover people’s eyesight, what’s more, the environment is polluted so heavy that the sky is grey. I wish to see the beautiful rainbow again.

在我十岁以前,我住在我的家乡,那是一个小和美丽的村庄,我很爱我的家乡。

我记得当天上下了雨,并且伴随着太阳的时候,天空中会出现彩虹。由于天空是如此的蔚蓝,彩虹很大,就好像我站在彩虹的前面,那是如此的神奇。在我搬到城市了以后,我从来都没有看到过和我在家乡看到的那样美的彩虹。在城市里,到处都是高楼大厦,挡住了人们的视线,而且,环境被严重污染以至于天空都是灰色的。我希望能够再看到美丽的彩虹。

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篇20:初二期中考试备考:高分英语作文技巧

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下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧,欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点:实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。

结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。

第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。

亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

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