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2024中考英语作文题目预测:幸福

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幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家,幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光,幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶,幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题,写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。

要求:条理清晰,语言流畅,用词准确, 字迹工整,80-100词。

范文

Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it。

I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder。

I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents。

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篇1:高一期中考英语作文100字

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高一中考英语作文

Fellw student, I’ glad t tell u sething abut stud and everda life.

T be hnest, I dn’t d well in stud, but I reall wr hard t catch up with ther students. English and ath are the subect I lie st.The reasn wh I lie the is that I’ gd at the.

Getting alng well with thers is iprtant t us, which can ae us happ. Therefre, I’ willing t help thse wh’re in truble.

Besides, I’ interested in sprts. I ften pla basetball with friends tgether. In spare tie, I surf the Internet when I sta at he. Seties I d se reading carefull.

As far as I a cncerned, a gd student shuld nt nl stud well but als have an hbbies.What’s iprtant is that he r she shuld be friendl t thers.

[高一期中考英语作文100字

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篇2:中考英语作文出色善用“潜规则”的方法

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很多同学对英语书面表达的部分都感到头疼,一是因为突然拿到一个题目,脑中一片空白,写不出几个句子来,二是写好一篇文章,可是总是流于平淡,语言枯燥,不得老师喜爱,分数也一直不高不低,难以突破。建议同学们,第一类问题,是可以通过练习而补救的,第二类问题,则需要我们的积累和智慧了。

每一次考试或练习,我们的语文写作中总是时不时的会出现很多诗词,名言,他们或哲理,或抒情,或励志,或优美,总能让我们的文章读来津津有味,而且让老师觉得有文学感,甚至会因此而觉得有文采。同样是作文,我们为什么不能把这种思路搬到英文中来呢?答案当然是可以的,而且成功的例子也不少。

在英文的写作当中,运用名言警句这样的潜规则也是存在的。根据目前的要求,一篇英文作文篇幅在100词以上,这样的长度相对于语文作文来说自然是很简单了,但是对于高考水平的英语写作来说,是完全有空间在其中运用名言警句的,只要我们用的合适,就会取得意想不到的效果。

那么,我们如何善用这些名言警句呢?

第一,积累是必需的。英语是一门语言,语言是没有速成的,尤其是一些经典的词句,是需要我们一点一滴积累的。在收集名言警句的过程中,我们可以有目的性地收集。所谓目的性,是指在作文中,命题的形式和题材一般是固定的,那么针对这样的内容,我们就要尽量收集能用得上的名言警句,或者说,名言警句要对的上路子,这么做可能有一点功利,但咱们毕竟是应试,退一步说,这样收集的句子也不一定都是没有用的,所以,我们要首先找准方向,少走弯路。

第一类是哲理类的,这一类名言警句可以说是万精油,放之四海而皆准,几乎在每一篇作文中都能用到它们。比如说描写做家务活。我们就可以用上Just as the saying goes: It is never too late to learn!来说明学习做家务活的积极性。再比如以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫Lin Hao的小孩救出同学的事迹,我们就能用As we all know, where there is a life, there is a hope.或者where there is a will, there is a way来赞扬Lin Hao的精神品质等等,诸如此类的命题比比皆是,只要我们用得恰当,就一定能波的阅卷老师的青睐;

第二类是励志类的,这种语句在涉及到个人成长经历内容的文章中,可以发挥很大作用;

第三类是情感类的,表现家庭生活或者个人情感的内容能用到它。

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篇3:预测2024中考英语作文:代沟

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The 21st century, the thought of the teenagers, we and our beloved one generation, will never be able to melt together, seems to have no why, I do not know why. Adults like to impose their ideas in a new generation of us, and we, must also accept the ideology of "unreasonable", if not accept, perhaps, in the eyes of an adult, our behavior is what is called a rebellious, not sensible, wings hard, but, you never know what we carry in our hearts, can only silently bear all this, buried our own thoughts, not move to the attraction.

We are the -- the future of The Times. We have our own dreams, we have our own in the future, we have our own life to live, all this, go to our own, you can never be with us life, the way back, but also to go on our own. Please let go of your generous hand, let us fly yourself.

Times are changing, the life also is changing. Different time, different people, have their own way. Dear, father, mother, we grow up, learn to walk, bumpy road ahead, lets face it alone, raising more than ten years, we wont forget, you also should have a rest.

二十一世纪,我们这些青少年的思想,与我们所敬爱的上一辈人,永远无法融在一起,似乎没有为什么,也不知道为什么。大人们喜欢把他们的思想强加在我们新一辈人的身上,而我们,也必须接受这种“无理”的思想,如若不接受,也许,在大人的眼睛里,我们的行为就是所谓的叛逆、不懂事、翅膀硬了,可是,你们永远不会知道我们心中所想的一切,只能默默地承受这一切,埋藏我们自己的思想,不动生色。

我们是这个时代的——未来。我们有自己的梦想,我们有自己的未来,我们有我们自己的生活要过,这一切,要我们自己去承担,你们永远不能陪伴我们一生,往后的路,还要靠我们自己去走。请你们放开你们那宽厚的手,让我们自己飞翔吧。

时代在变,生活也在变。不同的时代,不同的人,有自己的路。亲爱的——爸爸,妈妈,我们长大了,学会走路了,前面坎坷的路,让我们独自面对吧,十几年的养育之恩,我们不会忘记,你们也该休息休息了。

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篇4:2024年中考英语万能作文模板

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一、解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

1. 问题现状

2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).

Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)( 这两个变换的词要记住)

Confronted with _ A, we should take a serious of effective measure

s to cope with the situation.(我们应该采取措施认真对待)

For one thing, ------(解决方法一).

For another -------(解决方法二).

Finally, ------(解决方法三).( 这三个变换的词要记住)

Personally, I believe that ---(我的解决方法). In a word , I’m confident that a bright future is a waiting us because------(带来的好处).

二、说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表

明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1. 说明事物现状

2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)

3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A(事物) because it has a signific ant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as

follows.(它很好)

First ------(A的优点之一). Besides -------(A的优点之二).

But every coin has two sides.(事物都有两面性).

The negative aspects are also apparent. On the one hand,------(A的第一个缺点).The other hand,---------(A的第二个缺点).

In a word (总之), I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the

negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).

So we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circum

stances we are in. Only by this way, it will be better(对前景的测).

三、议论文的框架

不同观点列举型( 选择型 :你会选A还是B,说说理由)

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion is different from person to person. A majority of people think (大多数人认为)that _ 观点一________.

There are 2 factors as follows: firstly, ___原因一_______.

Secondly , ___原因二_____.

however,People differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people thin

k that ___观点二_______. On the one hand, ___原因一___ __

__. On the other hand, ____原因二_____.

Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because ____(不仅因为。。还因为。。). The more _harder______, the more __better____.(越努力越好)

四、图表作文的框架

As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure inthetable (graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically steadily rising/decreasing from______to ______ . From the sharp/mared decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that(说明) ________.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand,________. On the other hand,_______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons.

But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonlyconvincing.

As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my

opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(我的理由合情合理)

五、说明原因型

(一件事情或事物产生影响的原因)

Currently, A has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than A .It is clear that ( 1 ). if you ( 2 ), as a result ,your dreams will come true . On the contrary(相反), if you ( 3).Failure will be following with you .It turns out that(总结的话) .

No one can deny another fact (没有人会否认事实)that ( 4) .You dont have to lookvery far to find out the truth 。 We all know (5) .It will have a profound influence upon ( 6) For me ,I think (总结全文:题目中观点——某个原因很重要 ).

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篇5:中考英语应用文作文模板

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邀请信

Class 1,Grade 7

Beijing Sunshine Secondary School

Sunshine Town

Beijing

April 20

Dear__

We are happy to invite you to________________________________ We’ll hold___________from…to… (time). We will meet at________ _________(place) and have it at _________(place). We’ll do_______ (activities). We’d like everyone _____________(reminding).

Please complete the note on the next page to tell us if you can come. We hope you can come. We look forward to seeing you at out party. Yours faithfully ∕ sincerely,

(Signature) (打印)

Amy (手写)

Monitor of Class 1, Grade 7

注意:邀请信的关键是要体现出邀请的主旨,反映出邀请人的盛情,并明确表示活动的时间、地点及相应的安排。这些都是邀请信不可缺少的内容。

实用套语

1.Will you do us a favor of joining our party?您能光临我们的聚会吗?

2.May I take this opportunity to invite you to our university to give a lecture?我可以借此机会邀请您到我们大学给我们演讲吗?

3.If you have no other plans for Monday, May 15th, will you come to our party at my home?如果本周五,即五月15号,您没有其他安排的话,可以来我家参加我们的聚会吗?

4.Shall we have the pleasure to invite you to our party this weekend?我们可以荣幸地邀请您参加我们本周末的聚会吗?

经典用语

1. If you haven’t made any definite plan for the coming weekend, I’d love to invite you to come to our school and join us in the party.如果您本周末尚无安排,我想邀请您来参加我们的晚会。

2. If you haven’t promised to join your friends elsewhere, we shall be delighted to have you with us.如果您还没有答应别的朋友的邀请,我们将十分高兴地邀请您到我们这儿来。

3. With your presence on this occasion, we are sure to have a most delightful evening.您的到来一定会让我们的晚会增色不少。

4. All of us here are longing for the pleasure of seeing you.您这儿的所有朋友都在盼望着能见到您。

推荐信

Address of sender

Date

Name (Title)of receiver

Address of receiver

Dear _________(Greeting)

I’m writing to recommend sb. To become/be ______(Subject)

Para1: abilities

Para2: personalities

Para3: examples of details

Para4: Ending: We all think … should… Para1--- Para4: Message Yours sincerely,_____ (Closing)

(Signature) (打印)

(Signature of sender) ((手写)

Monitor of Class 1, Grade 7(Title of sender)

注意:

写推荐信的关键在于:

1. 在新的主体部分的首尾各用一句话明确表示写此信的目的,如:

篇首:I’d like to recommend sb. to be/do…

篇尾:We all think sb. should be…/should get the reward

2. 文中所写的这个人的性格特点与能力要与所推荐的任务或职位相关。

3. 在用事例说明这个人的某个优点时,事例要与该优点相吻合。

实用套语

1. I would like to recommend sb. to be /become….我愿意推荐某人成为/当/做….

2. It’s my pleasure to recommend sb. to be /become….我乐意推荐某人成为/当/做….

经典用语

1. I am writing to recommend Mary to become the new chairperson of the Students’ Union.我写此信的目的是推荐玛丽当学生会的主席。

2. May is a hard-working and helpful student.梅是个努力且乐于助人的学生。

3. I think John is good enough to be the chairperson. I hope you will agree.我认为约翰很适合主席这个职务。希望您能同意我的想法。

感谢信

Date of writing

Name(Title)of receiver

Dear______(Greeting)

I am writing the letter to say thank you for______(Subject)

Para1: reasons for writing the letter

Para2: examples or details

Para3: Ending: Thank you for… Para1--- Para3: Message

Yours sincerely,_____ (Closing)

(Signature) (打印)

(Signature of sender) (手写)

注意:

写感谢信应注意以下几点:

1. 在新的开头,第一节中明确表示感谢,即“开头言谢”;

2. 信的主体部分要写出感谢的原因。如果原因不止一个,要分段写。每段写一个主题句,表明一个原因,再辅以具体的事例进行说明,使感谢落到实处,不让人产生客套或做作的感觉;

3. 在信的结尾,还要把感谢的话再说一遍,并加上对对方的祝福。

实用套语

1. With many thanks to you for entertaining me so generously.非常感谢您如此慷慨大方的招待。

2. Indeed I do not know how to express my appreciation for your valuable services.对您优质的服务我无以言谢。

3. We express our sincere and hearty thanks for the favors you have done for us.衷心感谢您为我们所做的一切。

4. It will give me much pleasure to do whatever I can in return for your favor.若能对您的好意有所回报,我将不胜荣幸。

5. Please accept our warmest thanks for what you have done for us.您如此帮忙,请接受我们最热忱的谢意。

经典用语

1. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, for your letter and for your kindness to me during my long illness.衷心地感谢您在我漫长的卧床期间给我来信,给我关心。

2. I am grateful for your kind wishes for my success.感谢您对我成功的祝福。

3. Thank you very much for the letter of congratulation and the nice gift you sent to me.感谢您寄来的祝贺信及礼物。

4. I’d like to thank you for always being by my side on Thanksgiving Day. 值此感恩节来临之际,感谢您一直以来陪伴在我身边。

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篇6:2024中考英语作文:MyClassmate

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导语:你有什么印象深刻的同学吗?他做了什么事呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

请以My Classmate为标题写一篇记叙文

要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。 2、字数在100字以内。

思路点拨

写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。

这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。

参考范文

My Classmate

Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.

One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.

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我的同学

刘凯是我的同学。他是个好学生,总是乐于助人。

有一天,在上学的路上,他看见一个小女孩正在过马路。一辆汽车飞快地向她驶来,女孩吓得不敢动了。汽车差点撞到她。这时刘凯冲到她面前,抓住了她的胳膊。小女孩得救了。她告诉他她住在哪里,他带她回家。当刘凯i赶到教室时,老师已经开始上课了。他告诉老师他为什么迟到了。他被称赞为他所做的。

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篇7:中考英语作文万能开头汇总

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1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言

2.It goes without saying that… 不言而喻,…

3.It can be said with certainty that… 可以肯定地说……

4.As the proverb says, 正如谚语所说的,

5.It has to be noticed that… 它必须注意到,…

6.Its generally recognized that… 它普遍认为…

7.Its likely that … 这可能是因为…

8.Its hardly that… 这是很难的……

9.Its hardly too much to say that… 它几乎没有太多的说…

10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是

11.Theres no denying the fact that…毫无疑问,无可否认

12.Nothing is more important than the fact that… 没有什么比这更重要的是…

13.whats far more important is that… 更重要的是…

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篇8:孔子中考英语作文

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twenty-five hundred years ago life in china was very hard. most of the people were hopelessly poor. into these times one of china’s great leaders was born. he was confucius. confucius came from a noble family, but his parents were poor. his father died when confucius was only three years old. the boy was a good and obedient son to his mother.

he grew up to be quiet, thoughtful, and studious. as confucius watched the people around him, he became eager to help them. at last he left his family and started out his students to be honest and kind, and to honor their parents. he taught them that a good man never lets himself get angry. many of his savings were gathered together and written down. one of his famous savings is “do not do to others what you do not wish others to do to you. “ for years he wandered from province to province spreading his ideas to all who would listen to him.

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篇9:提高中考英语写作水平的方法

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一、纵观近年各地中考英语写作题,题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说,不同的写作题材,它的人物,时间,写作的重点也是不尽相同的。下面结合一些常见的题型介绍一下写作的注意事项以及写作技巧。

1、以图表提供情景的作文要以“读”为主,首先要读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码、序号以及相互间的变化关系,对所给的信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括、去粗取精;在写作时目的要明确,要注意内容的准确性和严肃性,尤其是图表中的数据、时间等不得有误。

2、以图画提供情景的作文应以“看”为主,通过细心观察图中的人物、景物、文字、环境、数字等,弄清写作的意图,通过分析思考把握逻辑联系,找出主题并借助所给的文字,把图中的信息转化成文章,但要注意,文章不能停留在图画的浅表,而要表达出提供情景的意图和内涵。

3、以提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确,重点也很突出,只要把各个提纲加以发挥,注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性,就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题,但要注意,文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。

4、以书信格式提供情景的作文。首先要了解书信的格式,英文书信格式与中文有所不同,(1)、一般在信纸的右上角写上写信人的地址和日期,地址应按从小到大的顺序排列;(2)、左边顶格写上收信人的姓名;(3)、正文部分;(4)、祝愿的话;(5)、写信人签名。信的内容一定要按所给的要求写,不要漏写。

二、各地的评分标准略有差异,但是都包括以下几个方面:整体印象、语言表达、词数规定等几方面内容。我们在写作中要尽量避免扣分,争取有加分点。当然用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手,常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制,只要同学们平时注意两种语言的异同性,抓住写作要点,也可妙笔生花。

1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚,要把时间固定下来,如:记叙一件事要用过去时;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写,要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致,首尾呼应,不要随意改动,以免造成误解。

2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生冷的词汇,对这些一知半解的词你不会用,不知道如何搭配,结果可能适得其反,使文章显的生硬、不协调,甚至错误百出,所以要使用有把握的词,避免不必要的失分。比如说发生了一起意外事件,我们通常用“have an accident”来表示,不要错误的使用“have an incident”。

3、注意不同语言的表达习惯,也是写好英语作文的重要环节,如“我的理想是做一名歌手”,很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make a singer,”“to do”表示“做”或者“干”,“to make”表示“制作”,而“做一名歌手”则表示“成为一名歌手”应该用“be/become a singer”;又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”,而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此,平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯,切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。

4、有些同学因怕出错而只写短句或简单句,写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去,如:定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型,关键时用上一、二个,就能使文章不同凡响,更有文采,特别是对关联词的使用,如“so that”、“not…but”“not only。。。but also”等,会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚,更能显示出你的英文功底,但要做到这些并非一日之功,要靠平时的不断训练和积累。

5、最简单的增分点就是认真的书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象,在扣分时自然会“手下留情”,而且很多地区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫,得到这一分并不难。

三、最后将中考写作的基本步骤和技巧归纳为以下几个环节:

1、细心审题细读题目中每一项提示或观察所给的每一幅画,明确文章的中心思想,弄清题意,确定写作体裁,掌握所要表达的要点做到心中有数,避免随心所欲,文不对题。

2、理顺要点在所给提示或图上标出要点,然后按事件先后的顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序,分出层次。如果是看图作文,则要按图构思,这样做既可避免要点遗漏,又可使表达内容条理清楚。

3、构成框架将理顺的要点或每幅图画的含义加以连贯,构成写作的整体框架,进一步定人称、定时态语态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾。基本框架构成后,写作就有了把握。4、组织句子用自己最熟悉的短语或句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来,多用简单句,用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短,避难就易。若遇到表达障碍,可换一种说法,将一句变成两、三句,只求达意。

5、串句成篇将写好的句子连贯地组织起来,注意上下句的逻辑关系,适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语,使短文浑然一体,层次分明,过渡自然。6、检查修改文章草成后,默读1~2遍,检查修改,尤其要注意人称、大小写、拼写、习惯用语、格式有无错误,要点有无遗漏,文句有无语病,词数是否恰当,行文是否连贯。

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篇10:2024中考英语作文预测:交通安全

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Life is unique, is precious, the world because of had the best and become life. Your life, you cherish? If you want to secure life, please obey the traffic rules.

From the ancient to the now, not just the changes in the dynasty, science is becoming more and more developed in transportation. In the economic prosperity of society, the vehicles in the street, maybe at this time, because of your negligence or violation, will bring inconvenience to traffic, also may let your mind overshadowed.

According to incomplete statistics, in 2006 21922 traffic accidents occurred in fujian province, 3871 people were killed and 25000 injured, lost more than 8000 ten thousand yuan. The traffic accident death toll in recent 10 years in our country is located in the worlds first. Because the car accident, how many family bereavement and destruction; How many families in debt due to traffic accident compensation liability shall not turn...

Last weekend, my mother and I in passing through the square, suddenly heard a scream behind. I looked back, "the..." With sharp brakes, a van has stopped in front of a little girl fell to the ground. At the same time, a group of people to come to there, my mother and I are crowded in the past. See the girl in shock, his face pale, after a long time, just "wow" to a loud cry. The girls mother leaned over and lifted the girls trousers and sleeves, that bloody hands and feet, really let a person love dearly. The woman did emergency processing for the child, she called the van driver to send their child to the hospital. Crowd buzzing around: "ah, this girl is really of, also do not obey the traffic rules, do like this, fortunately, no big deal." the traffic accident, make me feel the seriousness of the do not obey the traffic rules. Because at that time careless, spirit will bring irreparable damage.

Here, I to every student, every one of my friends call: "traffic safety is created by all of us. We should establish the starts from me, starts from the minor matter, starts from now, all to be good citizens obey the traffic rules. I believe that with the joint efforts of us all, traffic accidents will be far from us, tomorrow will be more happy, happy!

生命是唯一的,是宝贵的,世界因为有了生命而变得精彩.您的生命,您珍惜吗?要想生命得到保障,请您遵守交通规则.

从远古世纪到现在,不仅仅是朝代在变,科学在交通工具上也越来越发达.在经济繁荣的社会中,街上的车辆逐渐增多,也许就在这时,因为您的疏忽或违规,会给交通带来不便,也可能会让您的心灵蒙上一层阴影.

据不完全统计,福建省2006年发生交通事故21922起,3871人死亡,25000人受伤,损失8000多万元人民币.我国的交通事故死亡人数近10年来始终是位于世界第一位的.由于车祸,有多少家庭痛失亲人,家家破人亡;又有多少家庭因负车祸赔偿责任而债台高筑不得翻身......

上周末,我和妈妈在路过广场时,猛然听见身后一片尖叫.我向后看去,"支......"随着刺耳的刹车声,一辆面包车已经停在了一个摔倒在地的小女孩面前.同时,一群人向那边涌去,我和妈妈也挤了过去。只见那女孩惊魂未定,脸色惨白,过了好一会儿,才"哇"地一声哭了。女孩的妈妈俯下身,撩起女孩的裤管和衣袖,那血肉模糊的手脚,真让人心疼。那妇女为孩子做了紧急处理,便赶快叫面包车司机把孩子送到医院。周围的群众议论纷纷:"哎,这女孩也真是的,不遵守交通规则,弄成这样,幸亏没什么大碍."这起车祸,让我感受到不遵守交通规则的严重性.因为一时的粗心大意,会给人带来无法弥补的精神伤害.

在此,我向每一位同学、每一位朋友呼吁:"交通安全靠我们大家来创造。我们应该确立从我做起,从小事做起,从现在做起的观念,人人争当遵守交通规则的好公民。我相信,有了我们大家的共同努力,交通事故一定会远离我们,明天将会更加幸福、美好!

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篇11:中考英语作文:网上购物

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中考英语作文:Shopping on the Internet

With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.

Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People dont have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.

However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers cant see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.

中考英语作文:网上购物

随着互联网的发展和电脑的普及,网上购物已成为我们生活中司空见惯的事情了。消费者在这里几乎可以买到所有他们需要的东西。

网上购物有很多优点,其中最重要的也许是它的方便。人们不必浪费了很多精力和宝贵的时间去从一个商店到另一个选择,他们喜欢的商品。这是可取的是老人,病人和忙碌的人们谁不能亲自去商店。商品的形状,大小和颜色在互联网上。所有他们需要做的是坐在电脑前,点击鼠标。他们的商品订单将交付给他们及时。

但是,网上购物也有其缺点。第一个不利因素是,消费者不能看到商品或亲自试穿他们。有时候,真正的货物不同他们所看到的电脑上得。第二个缺点是,一些商店在互联网上没有登记。一旦骗了,你会发现,你已经无处可去抱怨。

中考英语作文带翻译:网上购物(Shopping on the Internet),以供各位同学们呢参考,在学习英语作文的时候,也多注意网上购物的利弊!

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篇12:2024年中考英语写作素材:端午节的资料

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中国民间的传统节日,在夏历五月初五,也叫“端阳”、“蒲节”、“天中节”、“大长节”、“沐兰节”、“女儿节”、“小儿节”。它是汉族的传统节日之一此外,端午节还有许多别称,如:午日节、重五节,五月节、浴兰节、女儿节,天中节、地腊、诗人节、龙日、艾节、端五、夏节、重午、午日等等。虽然名称不同,但总体上说,各地人民过节的习俗还是同多于异的。 时至今日,端午节仍是中国人民中一个十分盛行的隆重节日。

A traditional Chinese Folk Festival, in the fifth day of the fifth lunar month lunar calendar in May, also called the "Dragon Boat Festival", "Dragon Boat Festival", "day day", "long day", "Mu Lan day", "daughter Festival", "childrens day". It is one of the Chinese traditional festival the Dragon Boat Festival and many another name, such as: Good afternoon, section, section five, May Festival, bath Festival, daughter of festival, festival days, to LA, poet Festival, dragon day, AI Festival, at the end of five, the summer festival, afternoon, afternoon and so on. Although the names are different, but generally speaking, people around the custom of the feast or more than the same. Today, the Dragon Boat Festival is the Chinese people is still a very popular in the grand festival.

端午节是全年四大节之一。五月是毒月,五日是毒日,五日的中午又是毒时,居三毒之端。端午节又叫“五月端”。五月是整个热天的开端,五毒蛇开始活跃,鬼魅魍魉也会猖獗,这些都会给人特别是会给无所顾忌又无抵抗能力的孩子带来灾难,必须在五月端这天集中地为孩子消灾防毒,因此,人们又把五月端午节说成是“小孩节”或“娃娃节”。

The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the four major festivals throughout the year. May is the month of five days is poison, poison, five noon is poison, poison ranks three in the end. The Dragon Boat Festival is also called "the end of the May". May is the beginning of summer, the beginning of the five active snakes, ghosts and monsters are rampant, these will give people in particular will give no children and no resistance to bring disaster, must focus on that day in May at the end of anti disaster for the children, therefore, the people and the Dragon Boat Festival in May as a "childrens Day" or "doll festival".

过端午节,是中国人二千多年来的传统习惯,由于地域广大,民族众多,部分蒙古、回、藏、苗、彝、壮、布依、朝鲜、侗、瑶、白、土家、哈尼、畲、拉祜、水、纳西族、达斡尔、仫佬、羌、仡佬、锡伯族、普米、鄂温克、裕固、鄂伦春等少数民族也过此节,加上许多故事传说,于是不仅产生了众多相异的节名,而且各地也有着不尽相同的习俗。其内容主要有:女儿回娘家,挂钟馗像,迎鬼船、躲午,帖午叶符,悬挂菖蒲、艾草,游百病,佩香囊,备牲醴,赛龙舟,比武,击球,荡秋千,给小孩涂雄黄,饮用雄黄酒、菖蒲酒,吃五毒饼、咸蛋、粽子和时令鲜果等,除了有迷信色彩的活动渐已消失外,其余至今流传中国各地及邻近诸国。有些活动,如赛龙舟等,已得到新的发展,突破了时间、地域界线,成为了国际性的体育赛事。

The Dragon Boat Festival, is a traditional Chinese habits of more than two thousand years, because of the vast territory, numerous nationalities, part of Mongolia, Hui and Tibetan, Miao, Yi, Zhuang, Buyi, Dong, Yao, Bai, North Korea, Tujia, Hani, Yu, Lahu, water, Naxi, Daur, Mulao, Qiang, Gelao, Xibe, Pumi, Ewenki, Yugur, E Lunchun and other ethnic minorities also have this day, plus many stories, not only have so many different section, but also has the same throughout. The main contents are: his daughter back home, the clock up like, welcome the ghost ship, hide afternoon, with midday leaf character, hang calamus, wormwood, travel sickness, Sachet, prepared sweet wine offerings, dragon boat race, tournament, batting, swing, give the child Tu Xionghuang, drinking realgar wine, sweet wine, eat a cake, salted eggs, dumplings and seasonal fruits, in addition to a superstitious activities have gradually disappear, the other has spread throughout China and neighboring countries. Some activities, such as dragon boat racing, has been the development of new, breakthrough time and geographical boundaries, become an international sporting event.

端午祭正式被韩国申请为非物质文化遗产,并已获得成功,这对我们中国人本国文化遗产的保护也是一次深刻的教训。

The Dragon Boat Festival was officially apply for non-material cultural heritage of Korea, and has been successful, which is the Chinese people to protect their cultural heritage is also a profound lesson.

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篇13:2024中考英语写作优美句子精选

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1 人活着 总是要得罪一些人的 就要看那些人是否值得得罪

When alive ,we may probably offend some people.However, we must think about whether they are deserved offended。

2 命里有时终需有 命里无时莫强求

You will have it if it belongs to you,whereas you dont kveth for it if it doesnt appear in your life。

3 没有谁对不起谁,只有谁不懂得珍惜谁。

No one indebted for others,while many people dont know how to cherish others。

4 永远不是一种距离,而是一种决定。

Eternity is not a distance but a decision。

5 在回忆里继续梦幻不如在地狱里等待天堂

Dreaming in the memory is not as good as waiting for the paradise in the hell。

6 哪里有真爱存在,哪里就有奇迹

Where there is great love, there are always miracles。

7 爱情就像一只蝴蝶,它喜欢飞到哪里,就把欢乐带到哪里。

Love is like a butterfly. It goes where it pleases and it pleases where it goes。

8 假如每次想起你我都会得到一朵鲜花,那么我将永远在花丛中徜徉。

If I had a single flower for every time I think about you, I could walk forever in my garden。

9 有了你,我迷失了自我;失去你,我多么希望自己再度迷失。

Within you I lose myself, without you I find myself wanting to be lost again。

10 每一个沐浴在爱河中的人都是诗人

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet。

11 看看我的眼睛,你会发现你对我而言意味着什么。

Look into my eyes you will see what you mean to me。

12 距离使两颗心靠得更近。

Distance makes the hearts grow fonder。

13 如果没有相等的爱,那就让我爱多一些吧。

If equal affection cannot be, let the more loving be me。

14 爱是长在我们心里的藤蔓。

Love is a vine that grows into our hearts。

15 因为你,我懂得了爱。

If I know what love is, it is because of you。

16 爱情是生活最好的提神剂。

Love is the greatest refreshment in life。

17 有了你,黑暗不再是黑暗。

The darkness is no darkness with thee。

18 如果没有人爱我们,我们也就不会再爱自己了。

We cease loving ourselves if no one loves us。

18 治疗爱的创伤唯有加倍地去爱。

There is no remedy for love but to love more。

20 如果爱不疯狂就不是爱了。

When love is not madness, it is not love。

21 有爱的心永远年轻。

A heart that loves is always young。

22 爱情就像月亮,不增则减。

Love is like the moon, when it does not increase, it decreases。

23 灵魂不能没有爱而存在。

The soul cannot live without love。

24 生命虽短,爱却绵长。

Brief is life, but love is long。

25 爱比大衣更能驱走寒冷。

Love keeps the cold out better than a cloak。

26 没有了爱,地球便成了坟墓。

Take away love, and our earth is a tomb。

27 我的爱与你同在。

My heart is with you。

28 尽管还不曾离开,我已对你朝思暮想!

I miss you so much already and I havent even left yet!

29 我会想你,在漫漫长路的每一步。

Ill think of you every step of the way。

30 无论你身在何处,无论你为何忙碌,我都会在此守候

Wherever you go, whatever you do, I will be right here waiting for you。

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篇14:2024年中考关于代沟英语作文

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Nowadays, there is often a lack of understanding between parents and children. Children always complain that their parents are out of date, while parents can’t approve of what their children say and do. Thus, a big generation gap is formed.

如今,往往是缺乏了解父母与子女之间。孩子们总是抱怨他们的父母都是过时的,而父母并不赞同他们的孩子说的和做的。因此,形成一个大的代沟

The gap remains wide for many reasons. Children want to be free to choose their own friends, select their own classes in school, plan their own future, earn and spend their own money, and generally run their own life in a more independent way than many parents allow. Also, young children wish to be understood by their parents, but most parents don’t quite understand their children. They regard it as their responsibility to teach their offspring traditional beliefs. They want them to be obedient and do well in school. Therefore, misunderstanding often arise from parents’ tendency to interfere in children’s daily activities.

产生代沟的原因有很多。孩子们想要自由的选择自己的朋友,选择在学校自己的班级,规划自己的未来,自己挣钱自己花,和一般运行自己的更独立的生活方式比父母允许的。同时,年轻的孩子们希望能够得到父母的,但大多数父母不太了解他们的孩子。他们认为这是他们教他们的后代的传统信仰的责任。他们想让他们听话,在学校做得很好。因此,误解往往从父母倾向于干涉孩子的日常活动。

In my opinion, most problems between parents and children could be solved by joint efforts of both sides to enhance mutual understanding.

在我看来,父母和子女间的代沟问题可以通过双方的共同努力,增进相互理解的解决。

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篇15:中考英语作文命题预测

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掌握好的学习方法非常重要,下面内容2019中考英语作文命题预测如何拿高分?,希望能给您带来一定帮助。

2019中考英语作文命题预测 如何拿高分?

随着中考逼近,考生都进入了紧张的备考状态,初三老师们也一直与同学们并肩作战。在最后不到60天的时间里,如何让考生更有针对性的复习,如何让考生尽可能多得分是我们老师一直在思考的问题。

中考英语的基础部分只要学生基础扎实,一般拿分没多大问题。如今,令大部分学生头疼的问题是作文。为了让学生对中考英语作文更有信心,老师为学生们解析历年的中考英语作文题目,并作出预测,为同学们指点迷津。

首先让我们一起来看看历年的中考英语作文真题。

2006年作文题目:

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I Have a Dream”。

2007年作文题目:

Write at least 60 words about the topic “Things I Hate to Do”。

2008年作文题目:

Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Story about My Parent(s)&rdquo,周记;。

2009年作文题目:

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”

2010年作文题目:

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I‘m proud of myself”

2011年作文题目:

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I‘m a member of… ”

我们可以发现,中考的英语作文其实难度并不大。命题都是与学生自身相关,为的是让学生有话可说。但是学生往往得不到高分,到底我们该如何去拿分呢?从以上题目可以看出,中考作文的写作思路通常为:what—why—how.评卷主要从内容、结构、文采三个角度给予评分。学生在写作文时,最好能够根据提示进行书写以得内容分,另外,注意连接词的使用以得结构分,同时注意遣词造句以得文采分。现在我们一起来分析2009年真题的优秀作文,让同学们更能感受到如何去写一篇优秀作文。

If you ask me what I want to do for my school, my answer is to plant trees in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. After I plant trees there, maybe more and more students will do as me.Moreover, students can read under the trees. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. I hope our school will be a nicer place to study.

此文分三层,先提出自己的观点,然后写出为什么这么做,最后写出我会怎么做。

全文立意好,贴近实际,可行性强。从语法来看,没犯语法错误;从结构来看,用了so、after、moreover等连接词使行文更加流畅;从文采上看,文章多处用了从句,用到了形容词的比较级等。整篇文章简洁、让人读起朗朗上口,是一篇很值得借鉴的文章。

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篇16:杭州中考英语作文

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i live in hangzhou.it is a beautigul city.it s my hometown.every year it attracts large number of tourists come here all over the world.

we have xihu here and many places of interest.i think you will love it when you see it oneday.i want to grow up quickly.andj i will try my best to protect our city and make a contribution to it.i think if everyone protects it ,my city will becone much more beautiful.i love my city!

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篇17:中考英语写作素材积累:必备句子

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下面是语文迷网为大家整理提供的中考英语写作经常用到的句子,希望对你有帮助。

1. According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。

2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.

最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。

3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。

4. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.

人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。

5. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.

越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。

6. When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。

7. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness.

许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。

8. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.

应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量,努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。

9. An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.

越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而,越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题,像犯罪和**.

10. Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.

许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少,以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车,而车上可能已满载乘客。

11. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

无可否认,空气污染是一个极其严重的问题:城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。

12. An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.

一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。

13. A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻。

14. Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.

任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。

15.Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

当前,一提到即将开始的学校生活,许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而,对多数年轻人来说,校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。

16. In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

考虑到问题的严重性,在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施。

17. The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。

18. It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.

无可争辩,现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。

19. Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.

尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。

20. No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.

没有人能否认:教育是人生最重要的一方面。

21. People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.

人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。

22. In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.

在过去的几十年,先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。

23. In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.

事实上,我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。

24. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。

25. People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.

人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。

26. The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.

从这几年我搜集的信息来看,这些知识并没有人们想象的那么有用。

27. Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.

现在,人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教给学生所有的知识。

28. This is a matter of life and death——a matter no country can afford to ignore.

这是一个关系到生死的问题,任何国家都不能忽视。

29. For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:

我同意后者,有如下理由:

30. Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.

在给出我的观点之前,我想看看双方的观点是重要的。

31. This view is now being questioned by more and more people.

这一观点正受到越来越多人的质疑。

32. Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information Ive collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.

尽管许多人认为随着经济的高速发展,用自行车的人数会减少,自行车可能会消亡, 然而,这几年我收集的一些信息让我相信自行车仍然会继续在现代社会发挥极其重要的作用。

33. Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.

环境学家指出:持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题,而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。

34. In view of such serious situation, environmental tools of transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before.

考虑到这些严重的状况,我们比以往任何时候更需要像自行车这样的环保型交通工具。

35. Using bicycle contributes greatly to peoples physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.

使用自行车有助于人们的身体健康,并极大地缓解了交通阻塞。

36. Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.

尽管自行车有许多明显的优点,但是它也存在它的问题。

37. Bicycle cant be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.

在速度和舒适度方面,自行车是无法和汽车、火车这样的交通工具相比的。

38. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.

通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论:自行车的优点远大于缺点,并且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用。

39. There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes. One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.

当前在高校和研究机构对教育存在着大量争论,其中一个问题就是教育是否是个终身学习的过程。

40. This issue has caused wide public concern.

这个问题已经引起了广泛关注。

41. It must be noted that learning must be done by a person himself.

必须指出学习只能靠自己。

42. A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that they had completed their education when they finished their schooling. Obviously, they seem to fail to take into account the basic fact that a persons education is a most important aspect of his life.

许多人存在这样的误解,认为离开学校就意味着结束了他们的教育。显然,他们忽视了教育是人生重要部分这一基本事实。

43. As for me, Im in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation, for the following reasons:

就我而言,我同意教育不应该随着毕业而结束的观点,有以下原因:

44. It is commonly accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate.

人们普遍认为高校是不可能在毕业的时候教会他们的学生所有知识的。 45. Even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.

即使最优秀的毕业生,要想成为一个博学的人也要不断地学习。

46. It is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology, and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.

人们普遍认为我们的现代科技使我们的社会发生了巨大的变化,近几十年人类在科技方面取得了惊人的进步。

47. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.

现在越来越多的人开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮助他们获得工作就会或提升的机会。

48. An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.

一项调查显示许多老人都有到大学继续学习的愿望。

49. For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment after their retirement.

对大多数人来讲,退休以后,阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们生活的中心和快乐的来源。

50. For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.

对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说,找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的,正如那句老话:活到老,学到老。

51. There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students doing a part-time job.

对于大学或高中生打工这一现象,校园里进行着广泛的争论。

52. By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.

通过做一份和专业相关的工作,学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力,而且能获得从课本上得不到的经验。

53. Although people‘s lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades, it must be admitted that, shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day.

近几十年,尽管人们的生活有了惊人的改变,但必须承认,由于学费和书费日益飞涨,资金短缺仍然是学生们面临的最大问题之一。

54. Consequently, the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.

因此,业余工作挣来的钱将强有力地支持学生们继续他们的求学生活。

55. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job, which will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole.

通过上面的讨论,我们不难得出结论:业余工作对学生们会产生深远的影响,我们应鼓励学生从事业余工作,这将有利于学生和他们的家庭,甚至整个社会。

56. These days, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. Many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.

现在,越来越多的人们开始抱怨工作比以前更有压力。许多专家指出这是现代社会发展必然的结果,无法避免。

57. It is widely acknowledged that computer and other machines have become an indispensable part of our society, which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious.

人们普遍认为计算机和其他机器已经成为我们社会必不可少的一部分。 它们使我们的生活更舒适,减少了大量劳动。

58. At the same time, along with the benefits of such machines, employees must study knowledge involved in such machines so that they are able to control them.

同时,随着这些机器带给我们的好处,员工们也必须要学习与之相关的知识以便使用它们。

59. No one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for average workers to master those high-technology skills easily.

没有人能否认这一基本事实:对于一般工人来讲,轻松掌握这些技术是不可能的。

60. In the second place, there seem to be too many people without job and not enough job position.

第二方面,失业的人似乎太多而又没有足够的工作岗位。

61. Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in job market.

成千上万的人们不得不花费更多的精力和时间学习新的技术和知识,使得他们在就业市场能保持优势。

62. According to a recent survey, a growing number of people express a strong desire to take another job or spend more time on their job in order to get more money to support their family.

根据最近的一项调查,越来越多的人表达了想从事另外的工作或加班以赚取更多的钱来补贴家用的强烈愿望。

63. From what has been discussed above, I am fully convinced that the leisure life-style is undergoing a decline with the progress of modern society, it is not necessary a bad thing.

通过以上讨论,我完全相信,随着现代社会的进步,幽闲的生活方式正在消失并不是件坏事。

64. The problem of international tourism has caused wide public concern over the recent years.

近些年,国际旅游的问题引起了广泛关注。

65. Many people believe that international tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote international tourism.

许多人认为国际旅游对经济发展有积极作用,应鼓励地方政府发展国际旅游。

66. But what these people fail to see is that international tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment and local history.

但是这些人忽视了国际旅游可能会给当地环境和历史造成的灾难性的影响。

67. As for me, Im firmly convinced that the number of foreign tourists should be limited, for the following reasons:

就我而言,我坚定地认为国外旅游者的数量应得到限制,理由如下:

68. In addition, in order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment.

另外,为了吸引旅游者,大量人工设施被修建,这对环境是不利的。

69. For lack of distinct culture, some places will not attract tourists any more. Consequently, the fast rise in number of foreign tourists may eventually lead to the decline of local tourism.

由于缺乏独特的文化,一些地方不再吸引旅游者。因此,国外旅游者数量的快速增加可能最终会导致当地旅游业的衰败。

70. There is a growing tendency for parents to ask their children to accept extra educational programs over the recent years.

近些年,父母要求他们的孩子接受额外的教育呈增长的势头。

71. This phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of world.

这一现象在全世界许多地方已引起了广泛关注。

72. Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies, they maintain, their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up.

许多家长相信额外的教育活动有许多优点,通过学习,他们的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识,当他们长大后,这些对他们就业是大有好处的。

73. In the first place, extra studies bring about unhealthy impacts on physical growth of children. Educational experts point out that, it is equally important to take some sport activities instead of extra studies when children have spent the whole day in a boring classroom.

首先,额外的学习对孩子们的身体发育是不利的。教育专家指出,孩子们在枯燥的教室里呆了一整天后,从事一些体育活动,而不是额外的学习,是非常重要的。

74. Children are undergoing fast physical development; lack of physical exercise may produce disastrous influence on their later life.

孩子们正处于身体快速发育时期,缺乏体育锻炼可能会对他们未来的生活造成严重的影响。

75. In the second place, from psychological aspect, the majority of children seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward additional educational activities.

第二,从心理上讲,大部分孩子似乎对额外的学习没有什么好感。

76. It is hard to imagine a student focusing their energy on textbook while other children are playing.

当别的孩子在玩耍的时候,很难想象一个学生能集中精力在课本上。

77. Moreover, children will have less time to play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop and cultivate their character and interpersonal skills. They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness.

而且,由于要额外地学习,孩子们没有多少时间和同龄的孩子玩耍和交流,很难培养他们的个性和交际能力。他们可能变得孤僻甚至产生某些心理疾病。

78. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldnt be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after school.

通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论:尽管额外学习的确有很多优点,但它的缺点不可忽视,且远大于它的优点。因此,放学后强迫孩子额外学习是不明智的。

79. Any parents should place considerable emphasis on their children to keep the balance between play and study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

任何家长都应非常重视保持孩子在学习与玩耍的平衡,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻。

80. There is a growing tendency for parent these days to stay at home to look after their children instead of returning to work earlier.

现在,父亲或母亲留在家里照顾他们的孩子而不愿过早返回工作岗位正成为增加的趋势。

81. Parents are firmly convinced that, to send their child to kindergartens or nursery schools will have an unfavorable influence on the growth of children.

父母们坚定地相信把孩子送到幼儿园对他们的成长不利。

82. However, this idea is now being questioned by more and more experts, who point out that it is unhealthy for children who always stay with their parents at home.

然而,这一想法正遭受越来越多的专家的质疑,他们指出,孩子总是呆在家里,和父母在一起,是不健康的。

83. Although parent would be able to devote much more time and energy to their children, it must be admitted that, parent has less experience and knowledge about how to educate and supervise children, when compared with professional teachers working in kindergartens or nursery schools.

尽管父母能在他们孩子身上投入更多时间和精力,但是必须承认,与工作在幼儿园的专职教师相比,他们在如何管理教育孩子方面缺乏知识和经验。

84. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that, although the parents desire to look after children by themselves is understandable, its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.

通过以上讨论,我们可以得出如下结论:尽管家长想亲自照看孩子的愿望是可以理解的,但是这样做的缺点远大于优点。

85. Parents should be encouraged to send their children to nursery schools, which will bring about profound impacts on children and families, and even the society as a whole.

应该鼓励父母将他们的孩子送到幼儿园,这将对孩子,家庭,甚至整个社会产生深远的影响。

86. Many leaders of government always go into raptures at the mere mention of artistic and cultural projects. They are forever talking about the nice parks, the smart sculptures in central city and the art galleries with various valuable rarities. Nothing, they maintain, is more essential than such projects in the economic growth.

只要一提起艺术和文化项目,一些政府领导就会兴奋不已,他们滔滔不绝地说着美丽的公园,城市中心漂亮的雕塑,还有满是稀世珍宝的艺术展览馆。他们认为在经济发展中,没有什么比这些艺术项目更重要了。

87. But is it really the case? The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that artistic and cultural projects may be less useful than many governments think. In fact, basic infrastructure projects are playing extremely important role and should be given priority.

这是真的吗?这些年我收集的信息让我相信这些文化、艺术项目并没有许多政府想象的那么重要。事实上,基础设施建设非常重要,应该放在首位。

88. Those who are in favor of artistic and cultural projects advocate that cultural environment will attract more tourists, which will bring huge profits to local residents. Some people even equate the build of such projects with the improving of economic construction.

那些赞成建设文化艺术项目的人认为文化环境会吸引更多的游客,这将给当地居民带来巨大的利益。一些人甚至把建设文化艺术项目与发展经济建设等同起来。

89. Unfortunately, there is very few evidence that big companies are willing to invest a huge sums of money in a place without sufficient basic projects, such as supplies of electricity and water.

然而,很少有证据表明大公司愿意把巨额的资金投到一个连水电这些基础设施都不完善的地方去。

90. From what has been discussed above, it would be reasonable to believe that basic projects play far more important role than artistic and cultural projects in peoples life and economic growth.

通过以上讨论,我们有理由相信在人们的生活和经济发展方面,基础建设比艺术文化项目发挥更大的作用。

91. Those urban planners who are blind to this point will pay a heavy price, which they cannot afford it.

那些城市的规划者们如果忽视这一点,将会付出他们无法承受的代价。

92. There is a growing tendency these days for many people who live in rural areas to come into and work in city. This problem has caused wide public concern in most cities all over the world.

农民进城打工正成为增长的趋势,这一问题在世界上大部分城市已引起普遍关注。

93. An investigation shows that many emigrants think that working at city provide them with not only a higher salary but also the opportunity of learning new skills.

一项调查显示许多民工认为在城市打工不仅有较高的收入,而且能学到一些新技术。

94. It must be noted that improvement in agriculture seems to not be able to catch up with the increase in population of rural areas and there are millions of peasants who still live a miserable life and have to face the dangers of exposure and starvation.

必须指出,农业的发展似乎赶不上农村人口的增加,并且仍有成千上万的农民过着缺衣挨饿的贫寒生活。

95. Although rural emigrants contribute greatly to the economic growth of the cities, they may inevitably bring about many negative impacts.

尽管民工对城市的经济发展做出了巨大贡献,然而他们也不可避免的带来了一些负面影响。

96. Many sociologists point out that rural emigrants are putting pressure on population control and social order; that they are threatening to take already scarce city jobs; and that they have worsened traffic and public health problems.

许多社会学家指出民工正给人口控制和社会治安带来压力。他们正在威胁着本已萧条的工作市场,他们恶化了交通和公共卫生状况。

97. It is suggested that governments ought to make efforts to reduce the increasing gap between cities and countryside. They ought to set aside an appropriate fund for improvement of the standard of peasants lives. They ought to invite some experts in agriculture to share their experiences, information and knowledge with peasants, which will contribute directly to the economic growth of rural areas.

建议政府应该努力减少正在拉大的城乡差距。应该划拨适当的资金提高农民的生活水平;应该邀请农业专家向农民介绍他们的经验,知识和信息,这些将有助于发展农村经济。

98. In conclusion, we must take into account this problem rationally and place more emphases on peasants lives. Any government that is blind to this point will pay a heavy price.

总之,我们应理智考虑这一问题,重视农民的生活。任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。

99. Although many experts from universities and institutes consistently maintain that it is an inevitable part of an independent life, parents in growing numbers are starting to realize that people, including teachers and experts in education, should pay considerable attention to this problem.

尽管来自高校和研究院的许多专家坚持认为这是独立生活不可避免的一部分,然而越来越多的家长开始意识到包括教师和教育专家在内的人们应该认真对待这一问题。

100. As for me, it is essential to know, at first, what kind of problems young students possible would encounter on campus.

我认为,首先应看看学生们在校园可能遇到哪些问题。

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篇18:2024年中考英语作文怎么拿高分

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下面是语文迷网为大家整理提供的中考英语作文高分指导,希望对你有帮助。

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分,必须了解高分作文具有的特点,才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点:

1、书写工整,书面整洁,很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段,让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全,不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应,自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般,自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅,不啰嗦,不偏题,迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间,自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间,有恰当的连接词,使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思,基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等,说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累,巧准备

要想作文得高分,除了了解以上的特点外,还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面:

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的,这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此,牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分,有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习,掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如,对于assoonas、stopsomebodyfromdoingsomething、other、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是:让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量,你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中,逐步积累起来的。比如:今年的中考作文,谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”,假如你就用一个动词“help”,岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式,用help、givesomebodyahand、giveahandtosomebody、beinneedof等以表达“帮助”同一个意思,岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多,比如:大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有:MynameisJim.I’mJim.I’mcalled/namedJim.I’maboycalled/named/withthenameofJim.等等。

表达年龄的方式有:Sheis12.Sheis12yearsold.Sheisaged12.Sheisagirlof12(yearsold)。Sheisagirlaged12.等等。

很显然,使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习,积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用,作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分,必须经常练习,才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然,他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先,我们先不要看文章,自己先思考一下:假如你来写,你会怎么去写,会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较,勾出其中的好词佳句,并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外,背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句,会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题,沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后,下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句,涂改后书面又不整洁,影响得分。

其实,会写作文的同学都知道,审题非常的重要,可以防止很多毛病,提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情:

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时,要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称,什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误:全文皆错。例如,如果一篇文章,本来应该一般过去时,你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想,那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点,则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求,把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型,确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好,将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面,首段、尾段打算写哪些?

四、耐心修改,提炼句子

很多同学写完作文后就感觉大事已毕,高兴地放下笔就了事了。其实,这时候,不妨从以下方面去修改,相信会让你受益匪浅的。

1、巧妙选择使用高级词汇、短语、句型等

当我们掌握了一定量的同意表达法之后,在写作时有时不会让你都运用到的。这时为了展示你与众不同的能力,你务必要选择高级的。例如,就以今年中考的英语作文为例,它就要求写“帮助老人的感受”。至于“老人”的表达法,有oldpeople和theold。使用后者的同学自然能力比前者强。同样的道理,作文中的“病人”的表达法有sickpeople,patients,thesick,你认为使用哪个更能显示你的高水平呢?当然是thesick了。

2、巧妙使用低级表达法代替自己的难点

我们写作时难免会遇到一些难以用英语表达的东西。怎么办呢?换为最简单的表达法吧。例如:我市今年中考作文题,就要求学生表达一个意思:帮助同学,可以增进友谊。很多学生翻译不来“增进”,面对这样的问题怎么办呢?怎么不换个说法呢?你看,Ifwehelpourclassmateswiththeirstudyandotherthings,wecanmakeourfriendshiplonger。不就达到目的了吗?

3、大胆改变句型,使之生辉

例如,我们将一些句子改为感叹句,复合句、强调句、反意疑问句、将句子改得更能显示你的高水平和能力。何乐而不为呢?

4、高度关注句与句、段与段之间的衔接问题。务必做到过渡自然,衔接紧凑。

5、适当引用个别谚语或警句,来提高作文档次。

五、一丝不苟抄誊作文

一篇好的作文,经过审题、修改之后,务必要一丝不苟地抄誊在答题卷上,再认真地仔细检查一遍,那才是大公告成了。

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篇19:英语期中考试反思500字

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这次期中考试,学生英语成绩很不理想,两极分化十分明显,部分语法知识的掌握不够牢固,尤其是个别题 反复做过几次也没能把握好,阅读理解能力和书面表达能力比较弱。具体有以下几点:

1.部分学生的基础知识不够扎实,学生遗忘知识快,过去滚瓜烂熟的东西一段时间不用就忘了。

2.学生的应变能力有待提高,不能正确写出单词的正确形式。

3.理解能力不强,阅读理解失分较多,不能理解通篇大意。

4.不能熟练运用学过的句型。

造成这种结果的原因是多方面的,但最重要的有下面几方面:

1.对学生要求不够严格;部分学生偷懒。

2.没能充分调动学生的积极性;提高课堂教学效率。

3. 典型题讲解不够,训练不到位。

4.平时检查督促力度不够。

在今后的教学中,

1、继续抓好双基知识的训练,打牢基本功。

2、引导学生梳理知识,掌握语法规则,逐步引导学生灵活运用英语知识的能力。

3、培养学生上课时的听课习惯,要求学生全神贯注,要和老师同步思考出现的问题。

4、讲课时,尽量使用简明、准确、形象、生动的语言,坚持用英语教学,让学生用英语来想英语。

5、在平时要通过阅读,培养学生阅读多种文体的能力,如何从文章中获取信息的能力和运用英语解决实际问题的能力。在训练中要注意方法的多样化和灵活性,同时,启发他们学会运用多种不同的方法来表达同样的思想,逐步培养良好的英语语感。

6、设计全面、高校的课外作业,并进一步培养学生良好的书写习惯,做到整洁、规范,正确地书写;每周写一篇作文。

7、在教学过程中, 还需加大学习力度,积极研究探索教学方法并及时改变,就一定能提高整体英语水平。

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篇20:中考高分英语作文指导

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想要写好英语作文都有哪些技巧呢?下面是语文迷网为大家提供的英语写作技巧,欢迎阅读参考。

一、写作决窍

总体把握,要点齐全;人称时态,逻辑清楚;

关键词汇,动词第一;组词成句,结构完整;

组句成文,连词增色;此路不通,绕道迂回;

字迹工整,留好印象;从句适量,高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后,根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点,但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿,后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求:

1.根据所提供的内容,适当拓展想象空间,灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚,语句通顺,书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books,动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]:档次9-11分。

①要点不全,漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误,能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅,句子与句子之间过渡不自然,给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露,理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当,使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]:档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的,要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样,字里行间流露出真情实感,文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句,语言流畅,且无错误,是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体:记叙文。

②要点:what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态:一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性,但它也是“控制性”的写作试题,因此不能随意发挥,要善于抓信息,写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作,一是因为他们选材相同,二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等,恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等,使内容丰富,读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会,只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评,同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容,独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作,交流自己的写作,通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子,合作创造一篇新的文章,供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评,请求老师指点,尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错,写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地,每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道,说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求:

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚,语句通顺。

3.开头已写好,但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词:“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示,写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示:

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源,再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]:

①文体:记叙文。

②时态:一般过去时态,一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法,增加感染力。

③写作目的:告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]:

①夹叙夹议(说明现状,谈谈感想)。

②时态:一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要,应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

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