小学生英语作文(精彩20篇)

Dear Tom,

Thanks for your letter which finally caught up with me in London. I suppose youre keen to hear how the trip has been so far. So heres a short description of whats happened.

Well, you remember we left Sydney on Monday and arrived in London 24 hours later. After such a long and exhausting flight the first thing we did was to have a good, long sleep. And after that?a good meal to make up for all that horrible airline stuff!

The first real day of our holiday was spent just walking around London to get a feel of the place. After that, however, we were more particular and planned each day carefully.

First, we looked at all the historical sights, such as the Tower of London, the Houses of Parliament, the British Museum and the National Gallery. Then we visited some other famous places, such as Kew Gardens and Hampstead Heath. Finally, we took a one-day trip to Oxford, which is really the most marvelous town. You should make sure to go there when you visit England.

After we had seen a lot of London, we flew to Paris. A t first, we didnt like the place-I suppose because it was so different from London. Later, though, we began to really love it and started to appreciate its differentness.

The final stage of our trip is a visit to Rome, after which we will be staying in Singapore for two days before returning to Australia.

Hope everyone is well. See you soon.

My school is Tailan primary school, Thats a good place,this is a beautiful school.

There are many flowers, many classrooms,many leaves, many offices, a large hall, a playground in our school, in the playground we can run and play.also there is a garden in my school, many flowers and trees in it, we often walk in the garden after lunch.

I like my school very much! Do you like my school?

Taiwan is part of our country It is the largest island in It has an area of about 36,000 square kilometers and a population of over 20 million It is separated from the mainland by the Taiwan Strait On the island the climate is mild and the resources are very rich Many, many centuries ago there were the Chinese who lived and worked in Taiwan In the 17th country the Dutch invaded Taiwan In 1661 an army under Zheng Chenggong drove out the Dutch

Hello, everyone, its my honor to stand here introducing myself.

大家好， 很高兴有机会在这里介绍我自己。

My name is xxx, from Class 2, Grade six,xxxx Primary School.

我是xxx，xx小学六年级2班的学生。

Im doing well in my study, besides Im the monitor of my class and I get on well with my classmates.

我学习成绩优秀，是班上的班长并且我和同学们相处很融洽。

Im a happy and talented girl. Im good at drawing and many of my drawings have won prizes. At the same time, I like telling stories.

我是一个开朗又多才多艺的女孩，画画是我最擅长的，曾多次或奖。同时我还很会讲故事。

Im interested in learning English very much, and I believe that I will do well in future. I wont let you down!

我很喜欢学习英语，我相信我会表现的出色，我不会让大家失望的。

Thanks for your listening.

谢谢你们的聆听。

I like autumn leaves.

Walking in the mountains, I jumped down to running in the woods, this is the world of leaves. The leaves of trees turn yellow. The leaves of trees dancing in the air. Fly ah fly ah, take away the heat in the summer, the autumn is cool and refreshing, also brought the harvest season. I love autumn the leaves of trees.

I continue to go forward, a leaf falling from my eyes, so I am curious to catch it. Leaf is the size of a slap, veins many, I dont see what it is the leaves of the tree, had to smell the smell. An apple scent rushed into the nose and Im sure this is apple leaves. I looked up. Filled with the thirsty mouth the apples on the tree. So I made a poem: "apple is sweet and sweet, hard in it."

I love autumn, I love the autumn leaves.

我喜欢秋天的叶子。

走在山中，我又蹦又跳地在树林里跑着，这真是树叶的世界。梧桐树的叶子变黄了。梧桐树的叶子在空中翩翩起舞。飞啊飞啊，带走了夏天的炎热，带来了秋天的凉爽和清凉，还带来了丰收的季节。我爱秋天梧桐树的叶子。

我继续向前走着，一片树叶从我的眼前落下，于是，我好奇地把它接住。叶子只有巴掌那么大，叶脉很多，我看不出它是什么树的叶子，只好嗅了嗅。一股苹果清香冲进鼻子里，我敢肯定这是苹果的叶子。我抬头一看。树上结满了渴口的苹果。于是我造了一句诗来：“苹果甜又甜，辛苦在其中。”

我爱秋天，我更爱秋天的叶子。

英语作文篇一：This is me

Hello, everybody! My name is Michael. Im a happy boy. Because I laugh every day. I have a big family. There are three people in my family, my mother, my father and I.

My parents are managers and Im a student. I study in Grade Seven, Class Eleven, Dongzhou Middle School. Its a nice place. There are many students in my class. I have a good teacher, Miss Jiang.

My favorite lessons are English and Maths. I like dogs very much. I have only one dog. Its name is Doudou. Its a pretty dog.

Oh, I forgot to tell you something about my old friend. His name is Tad. His hobby is playing basketball. So he is taller and stronger than I. He has two big eyes and long hair. He is my best friend.

This is me, a happy boy!

英语作文篇二：This is me

Hello! I am Zhou Xiaolin. I’m 11 years old. I study in the No.1 Primary School. I am quiet, kind and smart. I don’t like sports. But like reading books very much. My favourite dood is fish. Because it’s tasty and yummy. My favourite fruit is apples and bananas. Because they are sweet. Do you like Friday? Oh I like it very much. Because the weekend is coming. Who’s my favourite teacher? She’s Miss Zhu. She’s a unversity student. She’s young, tall and active. So her class is so much fun. On Sundays, I often do homework and play computer games. Saturday is fun for me! How about Sunday? I often read books and watch TV. It’s sweet for me! I love weekends. On weekends I often do housework, too. I can clean my bedroom, empty the trash, set the table and do the dishes. But I can’t cook the meals. This is me! Can you cook the meals? Are you helpful at home,too? Tell me, please?

英语作文篇三：This is me

Hello，My neme is Any.I am a nice girl. Im 13 years old.

Im very helpful. at home ,I can sweep the floor、wash the clothes and cook dinner.

I have a so happy family . Ther are five people. my parents , My grandma , my sister , and me. My mom is a good teacher . My dad is asupper doctor.I love my family.

My birthdy in October.On my birthday .My friends are go to my home . We are piay together .and eat biethday caek together.

My favourite season is winter . Because I can play with snow with my friends.

This is me.do you like me?

今天，天气转凉，大家都披上了大衣，来到了美丽的校园，小鸟似乎变少了，小草开始掉发了，大叔开始掉牙了，这意味着一年即将过去了，一眨眼十月已经过半，一年还有最后的三分之一，一天跟光速一般，在这光是的日子里发生了许多有趣的事情，在中学的每一节可我都听得非常认真听从老师指挥和安排，也在每一节课里紧紧抓住每一个知识点，虽然上课很死板，但有几堂课却让我记忆犹新，比如今天的英语课……

“叮铃铃”上课铃响了，我静静的坐在位子上等待老师上课，在我看来英语课有时有趣，有时却非常无聊，而今天这堂英语课让我改变了对它的看法，我相信这样有趣的课堂老师也一定发了不少心思来准备这堂课，在上课时老师突然给我们来了个对抗游戏，男生VS女生哪一方选手问题回答的多，那方就获胜。

比赛开始了，男生，女生都不甘示弱，勇于站起来回答问题，外面狂风大作，里面却是这番热闹的情景，一分钟过去了，二分钟过去了，三分钟过去了男生和女生之间出现了距离，眼看第一大题就要结束，我们男生非常着急，想挽回局面，正当我们要开始翻盘时，第一大题居然就这然结束了，不过还好，还有第二大题，谁赢谁输还不一定呢？第二大局开始了，经过一番调整的我们，又开始追逐了紧张又激烈的气氛依旧未停，男生们依然努力的追赶着分数，能追一分是一分，女生好像有点骄傲了，回答的人越来越少，我们分数渐渐多了起来，直到最后一题是我们只差女生两分了，当我们认为胜负已定时，老师突然说最后一题回答对加两分，这是我们脸上又有了笑容，因为班长把自己的手举得高高的，他是我们最后的一线希望了，你是男生唯一的靠山了，当老师在黑板上花了两个大星星后就意味着我们的努力没有白费，我们终于胜利了！

今天的这节有趣的英语课给我们打来了许多欢乐和笑声！

Our environment is getting worse and worse now. People throw their garbage here and there. Factories make more and more dirty water that has polluted the rivers and lakes. What should we do?

We must find ways to stop pollution. Waste water must be cleaned before it is poured into the river. People shouldn‘t throw away rubbish here and there. We should pick up the garbage around us. We‘d better plant more trees.

I‘m sure if we take care of our environment, our world will be more beautiful!

现在我们的环境越来越糟。人们把他们的垃圾这里和那里。工厂使越来越多的脏水污染了河流和湖泊。我们应该做些什么呢?

我们必须找到方法来制止污染。废水必须清洁之前倒进河里。人们不应该到处扔垃圾。我们应该捡起身边的垃圾。我们最好种植更多的树木。

我相信如果我们照顾我们的环境,我们的世界将会更美丽!

导语：一年有四个季节，春夏秋冬，各有特色，你最喜欢的季节是什么呢?为什么呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

It was snow just now, there are lots of snow in the sky. The rivers are stopping flowing. The ground is covered with a layer of snow.

The snow looks like smoke, its white. It likes a piece of paper. The snow fall from the sky. It kisses the ground. How white the snow is! How beautiful the snow is!

I like snow! I like winter!

【参考翻译】

刚才下雪了，天上有很多雪。河流停止流动。地上覆盖着一层雪。

雪看起来像烟，它是白色的。它喜欢一张纸。雪从天空坠落。它亲吻大地。雪是多么白!多么美丽的雪!

我喜欢雪!我喜欢冬天!

Good morning teachers and classmates,im glad to be here for self-introdution.My name is ** and i come from grade seven class ** .I have a family of four,my mother ,farther ,brother and me.we are getting along with each other ,i usually help my mother do house work when my farther is out of home and i am a deligted person and willing to help others while in trouble.I like watching TV and playing basketball with my partners in part time .I also need others encuragement while i dont pass eaxminaion .so i fee that we should help each other.Thank for giving me a chance of makng a speech

Everyone have their own favorite season. Someone loves the spring the most,

while other one loves winter.The one who like summer might for its hot weather

and they can enjoy the ice-cream, while the autumn fans might love the sky

floating leaves.For me, I love the four seasons equally, I cannot tell which one

i love the most, because all of them have the special reason that makes me

adored them.

Spring is a wonderful season to celebrate rebirth and new life. When it

comes to spring, everything looks so full of vigor. The grass out from the land,

the branches grow new leaves, and the colorful flowers show up everywhere, all

of this beautiful scenery makes people feel encouraged and reborn.

Summer is a magnificent season, which bring warm to us, letting us wave for

it and releasing the passion. Summer is an exuberant season that always makes

people have stirrings to do something. Also, thinks to summer that makes

swimming and surfing much funnier and the ice-cream taste more delicious.

Autumn, fruit is fragrance and fruit. Autumn is the season of harvest, fall

chrysanthemums spit release each other, and a thriving scene. Autumn is the only

season that we could see the leaves flying in the sky. And it is especially

important for Chinese; one of a day of autumn which called mid-autumn festival

brings family together and enjoys happy family reunion.

Winter is a season makes people feel sad and cold, but a warm, toasty house

may feel great in the winter, that is the only charm that other season doesnt

have. Nothing is greater on a cold day than a hearty hot bowl of soup. Moreover,

we can make a snowman and have snow high in winter.

Every season has its own lovely charm, I love them all.

People always complain time is limited, they want to have more time to do more things, but the time stops them. Actually, I once feel my time is less while others have a lot of time to do what they want. I start to think about myself, I realize that I always waste my time on playing computer games, so I decide to not to play computer games.

人们总是抱怨时间是有限的,他们想要有更多的时间做更多的事情,但时间阻碍了他们。实际上,我曾经觉得我的时间很少而其他人有很多时间去做他们想做的事情。我开始思量自己,我知道我总是把时间浪费在玩电脑游戏,所以我决定不玩电脑游戏。

Spring

Oh! Spring in coming.

Look! All the things are reviving. The world is colorful. The trees and grass are green. Flowers are beautiful. Some are red. Some are yellow. Some are purple. The birds are flying in the blue sky. The bees are singing. They are very busy. They are making honey. The butterflies are dancing in the garden. The children are playing games.

I like spring.

I am a volunteer of civilization

On Saturday morning, the mother to the street when creating civilized city volunteer, I want my mother to go with me.

In the street, my mother and I are same, chest wearing the brand of volunteers, see the Windows on both sides of the street there are disorderly stick over a small advertising let the owner to remove it; See the floor with paper scraps, pick it up in the bin.

, in front of a small shop has a hurried walk uncle just throw of the finished cigarette butts on the ground, was I saw a pair of "critical", I hurriedly ran to say to him: "uncle, would you please pick up the cigarette butts? We want to be a civilized citizen". Uncle smile at me, al Jefferson said: "good, good, good," and bent down to throw cigarette butts picked up in the bin. At that time, my in the mind to mention how happy. In addition, I also stopped a lot on the side of the road is not according to the parking space vehicles.

After a busy morning, I found I have jurisdiction over the road, road clean, neat, orderly vehicle parking, I am very happy, because I also can contribute to create civilized city.

我是一名文明的志愿者

星期六上午，妈妈要到街上当创建文明城市志愿者，我要妈妈带我一起去。

在街上，我和妈妈一样，胸前佩戴着志愿者的牌子，见到街道两旁的橱窗上有乱贴乱画的小广告就让店主把它撤掉;见到地上有纸屑，就把它捡起来送进垃圾箱。

在一家小商店门前，有一位急匆匆走路的叔叔刚刚把抽完的烟头丢在地上，就被我的一双“火眼金睛”看到了，我连忙跑过去对他说：“叔叔，请您把烟头捡起来好吗?我们要做文明市民”。叔叔冲我笑了笑，连声说：“好、好、好”，并弯腰把烟头捡了起来丢进了垃圾箱。当时，我心里甭提有多高兴了。另外，我还制止了好多起在路边不按停车位停车的车辆。

经过一上午的忙碌，我发现经我管辖的路段，路面干净、整洁，车辆停放有序，我开心极了，因为我也能为创建文明城市做贡献了。

22 May 2006

Dear Sir,

I understand your well-respected college offers a number of places to overseas students every year, and I am writing to enquire about the application procedure.

I am at present a student at Mary High School, Hong Kong, where I have been studying for the past five years. I passed the Hong Kong Certificate of Education Examination last year with distinctions in English and History, and credits in Economics and English Literature. My advanced-level subjects are History, Economics and English Literature. In addition to these subjects, "Use of English" is also a compulsory subject because a pass in English is a minimum requirement for admission to most faculties of the University of Hong Kong.

Apart from academic work, I have been actively involved in extra-curricular activities. I am Chairman of the English Club and I have represented my school in many inter-school contests.

On the advice of my friends, I have decided to further my studies in England because I wish to widen my horizons and benefit from the scholarly heritage of your country.

I wish to continue to study the above-mentioned subjects at your college in the 2006/7 academic year before I sit the Advanced-level Examinations in England.

As regards my character, Mrs. Chen, my Principal, and Mr. Huang, my English master, have agreed to act as my references.

As I come from a family of fairly limited means, I would like to know if there is any financial assistance available for overseas students.

Attached is a summary of my qualifications for your reference.

I should be grateful if you would kindly consider my application and notify me of the result at your earliest convenience.

Should you require any further information, please feel free to contact me or my references.

Yours faithfully,

Lily Chen

My dad is an ordinary cable worker, he is running out every day. In the summer, Daddys skin was as dark as the Africans.

He is very trustworthy. Once, Mom and Dad took me to visit my grandmother. We just stepped into the grandmothers threshold, my fathers phone rang, he picked up the phone to listen to: "Hey, who?" Like a middle-aged man is like: "I am Xiao Li, my house power outages, Please take a quick look at whats going on. "" Well, yes, Ill come right now. "Daddy put his cell phone and was ready to go.

At this time the sky thunder, and then began to pour down the rain. My mother seeing his father said: "My husband, outside the rain was so big, you do not go, if afraid of him waiting for you, you return to a phone to explain to him the situation is not it?" "Yes, Under such a big rain, you do not go out. You have not come to see me for a long time, how to get it? "Grandma also said so. But my father smiled and shook his head: "No, ah, promised how people can be dishonesty? Moreover, people are not very urgent, it will not be so tight, I can keep the credit ah!" Finished, my father wear raincoat , Riding a battery car, rushed into the rain. I stood at the door watching my fathers figure gradually disappeared in the rain, it seems to understand what ... ...

When my father came back, the whole body was soaked, even the shoes are covered with mud, but his face is full of smile. Dad with their own practical action told me: a person must have integrity, promised someone elses things must be said to do.

Today is October 1st, the annual National Day again.

National Day seven days off, some people traveling to some rest at home, they are also in a shu Lin, it is difficult to come out. Early in the morning I and my mother went shopping, I saw on the street is crowded, people as the tide came from all directions on the street, many places with flags, flags fluttering with the wind, beautiful. Everywhere showing a festival atmosphere.

Every time my birthday, mom and dad wish I could grow up healthy, happy. Today is mothers birthday, I wish the motherland prosperous, more and more powerful.

I also want to remind you: a festival when many cars, more must pay attention to safety when crossing the street, but also to do the red light stop, green line.

今天是十月一日，一年一度的国庆节又到了。

国庆节放七天长假，有的人外出旅游去了，有的人在家里休息，有的人则还在一片书林中，难以走出来。一大早我就和妈妈去逛街了，只见马路上是人山人海，人们如潮水般地从四面八方来到了大街上，许多地方插着彩旗，彩旗随风飘动着，漂亮极了。到处呈现出节日里热闹的气氛。

每次我过生日的时候，爸爸、妈妈都祝愿我能健康、快乐的成长。今天是祖国母亲的生日，我祝愿祖国繁荣昌盛，越来越强大。

我还要提醒大家：过节日的时候人多车也多，过马路的时候一定要注意安全，而且还要做到红灯停，绿灯行。

I like animals very much. I have a dog, It’s my favourite animal. It’s white, It looks like a snow ball. It has two big eyes and ears. But its nose and mouth are very small. It’s very naughty.

It often stares at my food when I have a meal. When I’m home it follows me all the time.

When I do my homework, it often sits beside quietly, but sometimes runs around me and shouts: wom wom.

I like my dog very much.

我的周末

201_年_月_日 星期_ 晴

I have planned a happy weekend.Saturday morning, I must go to see me

aunt.In the afternoon, I must go to the shopping center to go shopping.Evening,

I planned makes the homework.Sunday in the morning, I watch the television, the

television program is e_tremely interesting.In the afternoon, I planned listens

to music and paints pictures.I thought this weekend I can be very weary, but is

certainly very joyful.

我打算过一个愉快的周末。周六的上午，我要去看望我的阿姨。下午，我要去购物中心买东西。晚上，我打算做家庭作业。周日上午，我看电视，电视节目非常有趣。下午，我打算听音乐和画画。我想这个周末我会很疲劳，但一定很快乐。

一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文，是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有：故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类：以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动，而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂，所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要，安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容，使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构，即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点，然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件，因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动，也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体，即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓，可以增强文章的真实感，有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制，更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称，还是采用第二人称，都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意：句式尽量要多变，不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头，否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错，但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子，使文章略显单调乏昧，给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中，记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目，不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件，又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考，这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来，对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题，明确主题，选准素材，罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score，tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time， I thought of death， of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent，and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样，你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩，并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想，作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容，这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性，还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成，不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底，又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”，但由于时间有限，结果草草收尾，甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文， 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平，表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇，要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上，四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如，表示“重视”的词汇有stress，emphasize等，但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成，前者就平淡，后者表达意思很生动，更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配，长短句交替使用，会增强文章的节奏感，使描写更生动，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如：

(1) 名词化手段：用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分，然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分，以达到合并句子的目的。如：

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段：根据语义关系，可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等，如：

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner，hot and tired，was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚，卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟，进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”，而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构，而是留心细枝末节。

i have a good friend. her name is emily. we are very friendly. yesterday was her thirteenth birthday. her friend and her parents held a party for her.

in the evening, all her friends came to emily’s home. each had a very nice present for her. at the moment, emily felt very happy. and so were her parents and her friends. look! the meal was on the table. how delicious they were! there were all kinds of food: eggs, fish, fried chicken, dumplings, pork, beef and some fruits.

after supper, emily sang a song“ happy birthday to you!” she has a nice voice. everybody said that she was a good singer. then we celebrated emily, “happy birthday to you! ” she said, “thank you! ” after this, emily’s mother took a birthday cake to the table. we gave presents to emily and emily began to blow candles. everybody was very delighter.

at last, we watched cartoon. what a good, nice birthday party.