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小学英语作文暑假计划

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I am in six grade now next term I am going to middle school so the coming vacation is my last summer vacation in primary school. It is so special to me. I plan to spend it with my friends we want to take part in the summer camp to have close access to the nature. I am so excited now I think we will have a good time.

我的暑假

我现在上六年级下学期我要去上中学了接下来的假期是我小学的最后一个暑假。它对我来说是如此的特别。我和我的朋友打算参加夏令营接近自然。我现在太兴奋了我认为我们将有一个美好的时光。

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篇1:小学四年级英语作文mymother

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My mother is the most beautiful in my eyes. She is not tall, plunge into a ponytail. Her little mouth, the nose is not high not low, eyes in the dark, dark, bright, seems to be god.

My mothers temper very urgent. If I have the wrong, my mother got angry. On one occasion, my math oral one fault, mother was severely criticized me. Another time, I play with my brother, dont be careful the younger brother cry, mother also criticized me, also let me apologize to him.

Mom is very concerned about me. The last time I was ill that day, while I was sleeping in the evening, mother also get up to me to take medicine, temperature. I want to use my good grades to repay my mother.

Mother is a hard life, work all day and night. At home doing the housework, kindergarten to teach children, goes to school themselves. Its busy and busy not to come. But learning is not for me to relax, to give every day I check my homework and signature.

Mother doesnt like pets, also do not watching TV. Whenever you have a second reading, every other week, will take me to the library once.

Mother likes to eat fish, I said she is a little cat; Mother likes to chew bones, I said she is a little black dog; Mother likes to eat pork, I said she is a little tiger. Mother not picky about food, I want to learn from her.

I think mom is very good. I like it very much, mom.

我的妈妈在我眼里是最漂亮的。她的个子不高,扎了一个马尾辨。她的嘴巴小小的,鼻子不高不低,眼睛黑黑的、亮亮的,看上去有神。

妈妈的脾气很急。如果我有错,妈妈就发火。有一次,我数学口算错一题,妈妈就严厉批评我。还有一次,我跟弟弟玩,不小心把弟弟弄哭了,妈妈也批评我,还让我向他道歉。

妈妈很关心我。上次我生病的那天,在晚上我睡觉的时候,妈妈还起床给我吃药,量体温。我要用我的好成绩来报答妈妈。

妈妈是个劳碌命,一天到晚都做事。家里做家务,幼儿园里教小孩,自己还要去读书。真是忙也忙不来。但对我的学习一点也不放松,每天要给我检查作业和签名。

妈妈不爱养宠物,也不爱看电视。一有空就看书,每隔一个星期,就要带我去一次图书馆。

妈妈喜欢吃鱼类,我说她属小猫咪;妈妈喜欢啃骨头,我说她是小黑狗;妈妈喜欢吃猪肉,我说她是小老虎。妈妈不挑食,我要向她学习。

我觉得妈妈很不错,我很喜欢妈妈。

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篇2:以我最喜欢的歌手为话题的小学六年级英语作文

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I like to listen to music so much, because music can smooth my mood. My favorite singer is Leehom Wang. He is not only very handsome, but also very smart. He graduated in the top school and he is a music genuis. His great talent in music attracts me a lot. I will always stand by his side, he is an excellent music artist.

喜欢听音乐,因为音乐可以平复我的心情。我最喜爱的歌手是王力宏。他不仅很帅,而且很聪明。他毕业于一流的学校,是一个音乐天才。他在音乐方面的天赋很吸引着我。我会永远支持他,他是一位很优秀的音乐艺术家。

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篇3:小学初级一封信英语

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22 March 2006

Dear Ms. Reinhart,

I am terribly sorry that I failed to arrive at BLCU last Friday. I hope that this did not mess you up completely, although I know that you had already made some special arrangements for my visit with you parents and friends. I am very sorry about all that. I am sure you will be sympathetic, however, when I tell you that my father is dangerously ill in hospital, and that I found it impossible to leave for the visit when he is in this state.

My father was working very hard on his project on protecting the environment. I know the project has come to a very important stage. He and his assistants did not take regular rest for three weeks. Last night, my father had a heart attack and was soon sent to the hospital. The doctor said my father was in a very serious situation, and, he might need an operation.

24 hours have passed. Nothing has changed. I have to stay at the hospital. I will let you know if there is any good news.

I am sorry again and look forward to seeing you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Tom Williams

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篇4:忙碌的一天小学英语

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Last  Sunday,I was very busy。I got up at six o’clock。I had breakfast at seven o’clock。then I cleaned my room。I praceticed playing the guitar at eight o‘clock。After I played soccer。 I cook dinner  at eleven o’clock。Then I watched TV and did my homework。 At ninteen o’clock I ate dinner。Then I took a shower。It was cold。Then I go to bed at nine o‘colck .

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篇5:我的特征小学英语作文

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Let me tell you what I will be when I grow up. I think languages are the most important tools of communication among people. Each country's languages, which are different, are interesting. So I want to be a translator. Since I was a child, I have learned many kinds of languages. I like to make friends with people from other countries. If I can speak a lot of languages, I will have a lot of friends. I don't think being a translator is very easy. It must be very hard. But I want to try! So I'm studying English now. I want to be a translator in Japan. It's my dream and I believe I can do it.

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篇6:小学生英语年级

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Birthday

My birthday is on Sunday. My parents are going to have a birthday party at home. I invite my friends to come to the party.

At the party. They give me many small presents. Such as cards, picture books, pens.

They sing Happy Birthday to me. My mother makes a big cake for me. I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out.

We sing and dance.We have a good time at the party.

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篇7:经典小学生暑假英语作文:MySpringFestivalplan

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My Spring Festival plan

I&rsqu; ging t Shenzhen t see grandther and uncle&rsqu;s fail. I&rsqu; ging t pla with brther. And then I&rsqu; ging there t get luc ne. I&rsqu; ging t the cinea t see the fil 《Superan》with fail. And I&rsqu; ging t learn English with uncle&rsqu;s wife. I&rsqu; ging t have fun there.

I thin this will be the best Spring Festival.

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篇8:春天小学英语作文

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My last Spring Festival is exciting. I visited my grandparent and I also got lucky money .In the evening,our family sat around the table to ate dumpling and talked to others.Then we sat together to watched TV.We all had a good time!

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篇9:小学一年级英语作文:Whatwereyoudoing?

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What were you doing ?你那时正在做什么?

What were you doing ? A UFO came to that shop. What were you doing when the UFO came here. I was in front of the school library. I want to borrow some books from the school library. When I was walking back to classroom, I saw a UFO. The UFO landed on the street. And an alien got out of the UFO. The alien went to a shop. And it visited the Museum of Flight . then the alien went back to the UFO and took off.Then the alien went back to the UFO and took off.

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篇10:小学自我介绍的英语

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一、Hello, my name is Tom. I’m from JianXi. I’m 10 years old. I’m short and thin. I’m a student. I study in Class2, Grade 5 of primary school. I like English class very much. Because English class is so much fun. There are 4 people in my family. They are my mother, my father, my sister and me. I like hamburger and chicken very much. Do you like me?

二、Hello everyone,My name is xxx . I am from China, with a height of xx cm, and a weight of xx kg. ,I was born in xxxx xx xx, My favroite subject is xxx。My favorite month is February,My favorite season is spring , My favorite sprots is runningMy favorite food is hambuger,,My favorite housework is sweeping the floor, I want to be a computer engineer , You could ask me why , ha , because I like piaying computer !

三、Good morning (afternoon), teachers and students!

My name is JinYue. Beauty is my English name. Im ten years old. Im an active(活泼的) girl. I like singing 、dancing、drawing and playing Pingpang.Im a student of Class one Grade four from Affiliated Primary School of Hefei Pedagogical College.I like Chinese, Maths ,English and so on.I study very hard,I hope I can become a excellent student. I like making friends and wish to be friend with all of you.This is me. Please remember (记住)me, your good friend --JinYue. Thank you very much!

四、Hello, everyone. My name is JinYue. Beauty is my English name. Im ten years old. Im a student of Class one Grade four from Affiliated Primary School of Hefei Pedagogical College. I like singing 、dancing、drawing and playing Pingpang. I like English. I hope to become your good friends. Thank you very much!

五、Goodafternoon, teachers! Today, I`m very happy to make a speech(演讲) here. Now, let me introduce (介绍)myself. My name is ZhuRuijie. My English name is Molly. I`m 12. I come from Class1 Grade 6 of TongPu No.2 Primary School. I`m an active girl. I like playing basketball. Because I think it`s very interesting. I`d like to eat potatoes. They`re tasty(好吃的). My favourite colour is green. And I like math best. It`s fun. On the weekend(在周末), I like reading books in my room. I have a happy family. My father is tall and strong(强壮).My mother is hard-working(工作努力) and tall, too. My brother is smart.(漂亮) And I`m a good student. My dream(梦想) is to be a teacher, because I want to help the poor (贫穷的)children in the future(在将来). Thank you for listening! Please remember(记住) me!

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篇11:小学四年级英语作文:AHoliday

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Its fine today. Tom and his family are at a park. The man in white is his father. He is standing by the lake and looking at the boats. The woman in blue is his mother. She is sitting on the grass. Beside his mother is Alice, his sister. She is eating cake. The park is big, and there are many trees and flowers in it. They are having a good time.

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篇12:小学六年级英语一封信

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.

I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, being independent in life and proficient in English. That’s why I apply for the position; I hope I can join the instructive activity.

My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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篇13:关于秋天英语作文小学

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It gradually turns cool. The sunlight is no longer so strong and the

cicadas have stopped crying. The hot summer went by at last. The favorite season

in the year is coming.

Everywhere we can see the scene of bumper crops: on the fields is golden

rice,on the trees are ripe fruits. The farmers faces are full of smiles. They

are now expecting a good harvest through a summers hard work.

The autumn evening is especially beautiful. When the setting sun goes

slowly down to the west, the sky over the mountains is covered with red rays of

evening sunlight, which shines upon the blue sky and floating clouds, just as

the maple leaves fall onto the sky.

It is getting cool at dusk. The wind blows, the moonlight shines on the

ground,the frogs croak and insects chirp in the fields. Such a situation will

make you forget all the unhappy things in the daytime.

I love the beautiful season.

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篇14:小学英语作文60字翻译

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I have a best friend, we know each other when we are five years old, now we talk about everything. But sometimes we will have the argument, none of us want to give in first. We make a deal that the next day we will meet in a place every time, so we become good again. I cherish our friendship so much.

我有一个最好的朋友,我们彼此认识的时候是在我们五岁的时候,现在我们无所不谈。但有时我们会有争吵,谁也不想先屈服。我们达成协议,第二天我们会在一个地方见面,这样我们再次和好。我珍惜我们的友谊。

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篇15:小学英语作文-My School Bag 我的书包

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小学英语作文:MySchoolBag我的书包

I have a good friend. Her name is school bag. She is a very beautiful girl. Look! There is a picture on her face. Its a picture of a lovely girl. She wears a red coat. There are some books, some copybooks and a pencil case in her stomach. From Monday to Friday, I go to school with her. She helps me a lot. And I like her very much.

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篇16:小学英语作文我的家乡

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My hometown is a prosperous and beautiful city, it is located in the south of the motherland, hot and cool guangxi province, it is also a small city - jingxi.

It is rich in fruit, and many of the fruits in wuhan, such as durian and shanzhu, may cost more than 50 yuan in wuhan, while in jingxi, it may be only 25 yuan.

The scenery there was beautiful too. Once, we went to a place called tongling grand canyon. When we reached our destination, the night was already deep, and we soon fell asleep.

In the morning, the veil of light mist over the city, we went out.

The scenery here really startled me. The ancient trees were so beautiful that we walked in. The flowery pavilion is gorgeous in our sight.

The grand canyon was big, and we walked for a long time to reach the waterfall. When the water comes down, it stirs a thousand waves.

We went back to the secret road. It was a natural air-conditioner!

After coming home, I had been thinking about the grand canyon for a long time, unable to sleep.

If you come here, will you go to the grand canyon? Its so beautiful, so spectacular, I think you cant miss it.

There are many beautiful and magnificent scenery in my hometown. Welcome to visit here!

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篇17:小学生寒假英语日记50词

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The joys and sorrows of the past is no longer so important, because the New Year is coming. Today is New Years eve, no matter go to where, can feel thick sweet atmosphere.

The Spring Festival is a family day, are all my relatives were in a hurry, to grandmas house to the two old man happy New Year. Todays meal but the extravaganza! Good wine good dishes all have, what is what. While watching the Spring Festival gala, taste the delicious food, and my grandpa told us the past some of the things worth remembering. The atmosphere of family reunion, of course, and your feeling is the same. Women to pick up the table the rest out firecrackers. We held a family dinner back to home. Is divided into two group, a group of playing poker, draw another group of play. His grandpa but lucky hands, to what he wants, our money one points to grandparents pockets. Just a moment of kung fu, those whom we have lost money, but in the end all to us again.

I preached to loudly said to the adults who are not allowed to sleep, today one sleep is a big lazy pig. But it didnt take long to grasp to fall asleep, you fell asleep, just promise at all. The most unfortunately missed the tasty delicious meal of dumplings.

过去的喜怒哀乐不再那么重要了,因为新的一年即将到来。今天是除夕夜,不管走到哪儿,都可以感觉到浓浓的温馨的气氛。

春节是合家欢乐的一天,之所以我的亲戚们也都匆匆来到奶奶家里,给二位老人家拜个年。今天的饭菜可是豪门盛宴阿!好酒好菜全都有,要啥就有啥。一边收看春节晚会,一边品尝着美味佳肴,还有我的爷爷讲给我们听过去的值得记住的一些事情。这种合家团圆的气氛当然和您的感受是一样的。女人们收拾饭桌其他的都出去方鞭炮。回到家里我们举行了家宴。分成两批,一批是玩扑克,另一批玩画图。爷爷的手可是幸运手阿,他要什么就来什么,我们的钱一分一分的往爷爷奶奶的裤兜里近。就一会儿的功夫,我们这些败将的钱输光了,但最后又全分给我们了。

我口口声声地大声地向大人们说今天谁都不许睡,谁睡谁就是大懒猪。可没过多久把握给睡着了,就进入了梦乡,把刚才的诺言望的一干二净。最可惜的是错过了好吃好吃得的年夜饭———饺子。

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篇18:端午节的英语小学作文带翻译

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The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival of the han. It is a very important festival in our hometown, so every year the Dragon Boat Festival is very busy.

The Dragon Boat Festival is the most indispensable, nature is zongzi, every year the grandmother of the Dragon Boat Festival and everyone will pack hundreds of big dumplings! There are many kinds of dumplings, such as reed leaves, bamboo shoots, wild leaves and lotus leaves. But our hometown is a lot of reeds, so most of them are wrapped in reeds. First, grandma "rate the army" to pick reed leaves. When picking reed leaves, a large family listens to grandmothers labor trumpet: "come on! A zongzi three leaf! Hundreds of zongzi thousands of pieces, hey, come on!" Listen to the drum of the "general", "little soldier" more effort! After the reed leaves, just burn them. But the preparation material is not so simple, still have to go to the bazaar to buy the good red bean, the pork, the peanut, the plate millet, the jujube and the glutinous rice, also buy the red line!

Of course, the most fun time is when you make zongzi. When making zongzi, the man is responsible for cutting the meat into small pieces. Women are responsible for the washing of red beans and glutinous rice. The child was responsible for washing the basin clean, and then putting the mans work in a large basin. The older people are in charge. When everything is ready, the dumplings are started. The adults are working harder, and the kids? Is playing in a side, always when the adults do not pay attention to, to steal a couple of dates, mouth on the surface seems to be a little things didnt do, but in my heart secretly complacent - because jujube is delicious!

The final step is boiled dumplings, grandpa always keep the temperature of fire to grasp well, smell very sweet, very strong, if eating zongzi in the first, you can see the meat dumplings are always tender oil and see jujube rice dumplings are always the golden tender; The eight-treasure zongzi is always delicious, and we are cute.

Last year, my grandparents might have made zongzi, if they hadnt taken care of my uncle and aunt in yancheng. I was suddenly "disgusted" with my uncle, aunt, who had a good economic condition, why not find a babysitter? Take my joyful Dragon Boat Festival and zongzi all "take away", I be so angry! Or miss the delicious dumplings!

端午节是汉族的传统节日。在我们的家乡算得上是个特别重要的节日,所以每年的端午节都过得异常热闹。

端午节最不可少的,自然是粽子,每年端午节外婆和大家都会包上几百个大粽子呢!包粽子虽然有很多种,比如芦苇叶、竹笋叶、菰叶、藕叶等。但我们的家乡是芦苇比较多,所以大多都用芦苇叶包了。首先,外婆“率兵”去采芦苇叶。采芦苇叶时,一大家子听着外婆的劳动号子:“加油!一个粽子三片叶子!上百个粽子几千片,嘿哟,加油!”听了“将军”的鼓劲,“小兵”们更加卖力了!采完芦苇叶,现在只要将它们暴晒就行了。但准备材料可没有这么简单哟,还得去集市上买来上好的红豆、猪肉、花生、板粟、蜜枣与糯米,还要买红线呢!

当然,最好玩的时候还是包粽子的时候。包粽子时,男人负责把肉切成不大不小的块儿;女人负责洗红豆、糯米之类的;小孩负责把大盆洗干净,再把大人加工好的东西装在大盆里;而老人们则负责指挥。一切准备好之后,就开始包粽子了。大人们干得格外卖力,而小孩们呢?却在一旁玩着,总是在大人们不注意时,偷一两颗蜜枣往嘴里塞,表面上似乎一点儿事都没做,可心里却暗暗自喜——因为蜜枣太好吃了!

最后一步就是煮粽子,烧火的外公总是把火候把握的很好,味道很香、很浓,如果在第一时间内吃粽子,你看到的肉粽子总是嫩地流油,看到的蜜枣粽子总是金黄柔嫩;看到的八宝粽子总是很可口,我们可爱吃了。

去年,要不是为了去盐城替舅舅、舅妈照顾表哥,外公外婆可能在包粽子哩。我突然有些“厌恶”舅舅、舅妈,他们家的经济条件不错,为什么不找个保姆?把我的欢乐端午节和粽子都“夺走了”,我好生气呀!也好怀念那味香色美的粽子呀!

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篇19:寒假生活小学英语作文

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Do you know why Chinese New Year lantern hanging do? Let me tell you.

Saying that in ancient times, there is always a monster attacks a few days

before the year all the village people. Therefore, the village had one door

figuring out ways to rid of that monster, a villager said: "The better we have a

monster attack on the village during those few days we hung the red things, such

as: red lanterns. Red couplets and red tape and so on. "The villagers door speak

with one voice, said:" good, youre really clever ah, you use this method you

have it. "Upon saying this, the villagers were on their respective home-prepared

things.

The next day, it is also the spring. Gejia households entrance doors and

the room were covered with red lanterns. Red tape and covered with red couplets.

At this time, that monster ready to attack villagers, visitors have arrived to

the door, he saw Gejia households covered with red lanterns, and my heart

suddenly feel a bit scared, like a red torch to see fluttering.

Because the monsters are terrified of running with a torch so we left the

village. Villagers saw the monster left the village on the happy dancing. From

then on, people will hang red lanterns at the Chinese New Year. Labeled red

couplets.

Chinese New Year is one such hanging lanterns come.

I love the festive Chinese New Year!

你知道为什么中国新年灯笼挂吗?让我来告诉你。

说,在远古时代,总有一个怪物攻击前几天今年所有的村人。因此,村里有一个门想出办法来摆脱怪物,一个村民说:“更好的我们有一个怪物攻击村庄在这几天我们挂红色的东西,如:红色的灯笼。红色的对联和繁文缛节等等。”村民门以一个声音说话,说:“好,你真聪明啊,你使用这种方法。”说这,村民们在各自home-prepared东西。

第二天,也是春天。革家家庭入口门,房间里满是红色的灯笼。繁文缛节和覆盖着红色的对联。这时,怪物准备攻击村民,客人到门口,他看见革家家庭满了红色的灯笼,我的心突然感到有点害怕,就像一个红色火炬看到飘扬。

因为运行与火炬的怪物害怕所以我们就离开了村子。村民看到了怪物离开了村子上快乐的跳舞。从那以后,人们会挂红灯笼在中国新年。贴上红色的对联。

中国新年就是这样一个挂灯笼。

我喜欢中国新年节日!

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篇20:小学英语写作方法和技巧

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要写好英语作文,具体要做到以下几点:

注重英文阅读习惯的养成与坚持

坚持英语阅读的习惯,不仅可以保持对英语语感的敏感度,更重要的是它有助于培养英式思维,从而避免汉式思维句子的出现。

(1)平时多读,积累句型:读的越多,语感欲强烈,写作的时候自然而然就可以自如的运用灵活多变的句式来完整一篇小作文了,另外建议多积累名言警句、谚语等以作为高级句型运用与作文中。

(2)选出一些代表性范文精读:选出不同题材的优秀作文范文,读的时候注意文章的开头、结尾、层次结构以及所用句型等。要有目的、用学习的心态来精读优秀范文,并做到学以致用。

注重平时的写作训练

英语写作训练可以以日记、话题或仿写的形式来进行。通过坚持一个学期的英语日记,保持英语写作的习惯。所以一定要坚持每周两到三次的写作训练,正所谓习惯成自然就是这个道理。

五步写出一篇好作文

什么才是好作文呢?很多同学误认为只要像学校平时测验那样子“句子结构正确,无单词拼写错误”就应该得满分。而小升初对作文的考核并非如此简单,同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么除了以上两个方面外,我们怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文而在小升初中获取高分呢?下面就来看我们的“高分作文五步法”。

(1)认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式

时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。

如ago,last…过去时;next,in…将来时等

人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。

例如:

Thanks to the teachers, we have improved our English.

其中we和our就是人称的统一。

格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。

(2)找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点

切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再涂掉。根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。

(3)成文时表述正确,文字流畅

切忌与汉语提示的一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾,主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。

(4)文章结构清晰,重点句型画龙点睛,可使文章在得分上提高一个档次,考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连接短语,使文章结构紧凑。

常用连接词:

1.表文章结构顺序:

First of all, Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…

And then, Finally, In the end,At last

2.表并列补充关系的:

What is more, Besides,Moreover,

3.表转折对比关系的:

However, On the contrary, but

On one hand… On the otherhand…Some…, while others…

4.表因果关系的:

Because, As、So, Therefore, As a result

5.表换一种方式表达:

In other words

6.表进行举例说明:

For example,句子;For instance,句子;such as + n/doing

7.表陈述事实:In fact

8.表达自己观点:

As far as I know, In myopinion

9.表总结:

In short, In a word.

文中正确使用两三个好的句型,如:感叹句、宾语从句、动名词做主语等。

宾语从句举例:

I believe Tianjin will be morebeautiful and prosperous.

感叹句举例:

How I want to study in thebest middle school in Guangzhou!

动名词做主语举例:

Reading books and swimming aremy hobbies.

常用状语从句句型:

1)时间:

when, not…until(直到…才…), as soon as(一…就…)

2)目的:

so that + clause; (为了)

3)结果:

so…that…(如此…以至于…), too…to do(太……以至于……)

4)条件:

if, unless(除非), as long as(只要)

5)比较:

as…as…(与…一样), not so…as…, than

(5)认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。

检查后,将草稿誊写在纸上,请注意按结构分段,书写清晰。

下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误:

We livemore and more comfortable.

改正:comfortably(副词修饰动词)

2.we can getmany informations by reading newspapers.

改正:much information (不可数名词由much修饰)

3.There willhave a football game tomorrow.

改正:There will be a football game tomorrow.(Therebe句型的将来时结构)

4.I thinkride a bike can keep our health.

改正:I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(动名词作主语)

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