英语四级作文预测:信任危机汇集20篇
导语:中国是礼仪之邦,五千年的文化传承至今,深深铭刻在中国人的心中。下面是小编整理的小升初预测作文,请大家认真阅读!
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1000高三英语作文传统文化100词
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+ 加入清单It seems we are living in the conflict between modern and traditional
cultures every day. Hearing the blaring of horns the moment you step out of your
house, seeing the so called "pop" the moment you open your eyes, you cant help
thinking, "Will the traditional culture be gradually lost?"
Many people believe so. They may put right in front of you all the
evidences they can dig out. They may argue that people are rushing to
restaurants instead of cooking at home, listening to pop music but not
traditional, wearing in a way people couldnt imagine ten years ago. Modern
people like the air of freedom, not to be restrained by traditions. They offer
this long list, only trying to confirm that this world is full of
fashion,competition and temptation and the traditional culture is fading and
will be lost at last.
Though we are now living in a world in which undeclared aggression, war,
hypocrisy, chicanery, anarchy are part of our daily life. Though this is a
skeptical age, and our faith has weakened, our confidence in some aspects of the
traditional culture should and would never be lost.
Wouldnt you agree that our traditional culture is always credited with
modesty, politeness and respectfulness, which have always been treasured for
more than five thousand years?Even in this modern world, people still admire
those with good manners, those who are polite to others or respectful to old
people.
Wouldnt you agree that our Chinese traditional music is beautiful and
artistic and our Chinese tea culture is always an appealing treasure to people
around the world?
So there may just be some changes in our lifestyle or our attitudes towards
life, but little change occurs to some fundamental aspects of our traditional
culture that people still treasure in heart.
The traditional culture will never be lost, I believe.
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篇1:读书英语作文初5
全文共 786 字
+ 加入清单Goethe said that reading a good book is like talking to a noble person, but
when I was a kid, I had a headache when I saw the book.
As I grew older, I remember that when I was in the first or second grade, I
couldn’t write because of the composition and made up a mess. I lost 5 or 6
points. My mother was also troubled by this. I was also very upset. There are
many things I don’t know, and I like to read more and more. I watched "Andersens
Fairy Tales", "Five Heroes of Langya Mountain", "Green Fairy Tales", "Twenty
Thousand Miles Under the Sea", etc. I was deeply intoxicated In the ocean of
books, my composition is getting less and less, and my parents are very happy
for me.
Once, I saw Mai Xiaoduo, who was changing, and it made me laugh, until I
heard my mother enter my room for dinner.
篇2:关于生活英语作文高2
全文共 1075 字
+ 加入清单It maybe our common desires to experience a meaning life, but when it comes
to the topic “How to live a meaningful life”, the opinions are divided. In
someone’s eyes, they agree that a meaningful life is just a comfortable life
which means they can enjoy themselves as possible as they can.
However, personally in my view, if we spend our whole life in pursuing
things only for ourselves, we will surely let ourselves down when we look back.
There’s an old saying that goes “The greatest use of life is to spend it for
something that will outlast it”. I can’t agree more. If there is a way to avoid
a disappointed life, it should be to try our best to find meaningful things
which can also make contributions to the whole society. Even a single man can
make a big difference to the world. Not to mention that everyone get together to
bring changes to the society.
It’s high time that we took measures to experience a meaning life. What’s
more, it’s never too late to start a meaning life. So be yourself, enjoy your
happiness and be helpful to others. That’s the meaning life worth living.
篇3:有关合作高一英语
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+ 加入清单I am not fond of basketball,let alone to play it.But I have seen a
wonderful basketball game between my class and postgraduate class.It is so
wonderful that I cannt help asking myself "Is it real".The answer is pretty
yes.I also learn a lot from the game.
First ,teamwork is very important.You are sure to fail if you play by
yourself.So five members must play together and well orgnized.Second ,you should
have a aim.In order to reach it,you should try your best.
Last,never give up whatever have happened.Even if you get low scores,you
shouldnt give up.If there is a will,there is a way.If there is a will ,there is
also a opportunity.And you can make failure into success.Believe yourself and
believe your team.You are the best one.
篇4:高考英语作文题端午节
全文共 1104 字
+ 加入清单Dragon Boat Festival is one the very classic traditional festivals, which
has been celebrated since the old China. Firstly, it is to in honor of the great
poet Qu Yuan, who jumped into the water and ended his life for loving the
country. Nowadays, different places have different ways to celebrate.
In my hometown, there will be a traditional competition, that is the dragon
boat race. People make up the team and fight for the honor. Every boat looks
like the dragon and it is the most obvious feature. A lot of people will come to
visit or watch the match. Then the game begins. The audience will cheer for the
teams and the competitors try their best to make the boat go fast. It is very
lively.
Besides the competition, eating the traditional food zongzi is favored by
everyone. For me, it is very delicious. My grandma makes the best zongzi. She
has the special recipe and it fits my stomach. So every time I go back hometown,
my grandma will make it for me.
In other places, drinking the special wine and hanging the leaf are also
the tradition. The preserve of the traditional festival makes our culture
profound.
篇5:英语作文信任是相互的
全文共 755 字
+ 加入清单You really believe in yourself and others will believe you. In reality, many people say, "I believe in myself, I am the best!" Do we really believe in ourselves when were Shouting these slogans? Are we going to have some difficulty in forgetting the words we just called? Confidence is a valuable quality. Confident need to develop, we must pay attention to their psychological hint, psychological relaxation, and encourage themselves, we also want to give people confidence from the behavior of impression, you dont need to be shy or panic, you just natural. Confidence also depends on your knowledge and skills, which is the foundation of self-confidence. When you have enough power, you dont have to pretend. Confidence comes from the heart.
篇6:英语满分优秀作文
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+ 加入清单dear bob,
i’m very glad to hear that you will come here to start your chinese lesson in september. i’ve found a flat, a 25-square-meter one, which includes a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen for you with the rent 500 yuan per month. it is on the third floor. in the bedroom there is a chair, a desk, a bed and a sofa. by the way, the flat is on fangcao street, not far from jianxin chinese school. bus no.11 can take you there. what the most convenient is that it’s only one block between the school and your flat. if you come here, you will find it a good place for you to live in. what do you think of it? and it’s essential for me to know your earliest reply.
sincerely yours,
li hua
篇7:有关艺术英语作文高中
全文共 695 字
+ 加入清单What is art? When people think about this question, they will naturally
think about all kinds of musical instruments or the great paintings in the art
museums. Art seems to so far away from the ordinary people, but I don’t think
so. Art is everywhere. For example, the delicious food that is made by our
parents is the great art, and the value of the food is to bring people the great
joy when they have a taste of it. The scenery around us is the visible art, when
we appreciate it, our mood become eased. Art is something that brings people the
positive value for me, so art is around everybody. If we take time to slow down
our pace, then we can enjoy art from life and feel the comfortable
lifestyle.
篇8:2024年高考英语作文预测我的老师
全文共 1936 字
+ 加入清单A pair of jiongjiongweishen eyes flashing the light of wisdom, jet-black hair and a ponytail, cherry small mouth, his eyebrows thin and long, warm personality, of medium height. Who is she? She is the Chinese teacher of our class: miss huang.
The rooster oh oh, miss huang has come to the classroom. When we got to the classroom, teacher huang changes already done half of the work.
The class began, the teacher and the students listened attentively, while students listen with relish, suddenly, a classmate yell: "have a nosebleed!" This attracted the attention of the students. Miss huang hurriedly walked over, pulling the nosebleeds classmate, go to the infirmary to stop the bleeding. The teacher with the check up blood students to the classroom. Back to the classroom, the teacher huang has been sweating like a pig. The teacher didnt take it seriously, to continue to our class, we see in the eye, hide in the heart. Admire pleasantly surprised, by the spirit of the teacher selfless dedication.
At the end of the class, the teacher let us self-study, she also not idle, in the classroom, if we have not understand place, can always ask her. Finally, the teacher said: "the classmates, I love you, because you are all my children".
The teacher say that finish, the classroom was silent, who also didnt think the teacher would say, come over for a long time, everyone seems to be about as if, simultaneous said: "teacher, we love you, too."
We saw the teacher smiled, although it is light.
一双炯炯有神的眼睛中闪着智慧的光芒,乌黑发亮的头发,扎着马尾辫,樱桃小嘴,眉毛又细又长,性格温和,中等身材。她是谁?她就是我们班的语文老师:黄老师。
公鸡喔喔叫,黄老师已经到了教室里了。我们到教室里的时候,黄老师已经改好了一半的作业。
开始上课了,老师讲课,同学们全神贯注地听着,正当同学听得津津有味的时候,突然,一个同学大喊:“有人流鼻血了!”这引起了同学们的注意。黄老师连忙走过去,拉着这位流鼻血的同学,去医务室止血。老师带着那位止好了血的同学直奔教室。回到教室,黄老师已经汗流浃背了。老师没把这件事当一回事,继续为我们上课,我们看在眼里,藏在心里。被老师的精神佩服的五体投地,无私奉献。
快下课的时候,老师让我们自习,她也不闲着,在教室里走来走去,假如我们有不懂的地方,可以随时问她。最后,老师说:“同学们,我爱你们,因为你们都是我的孩子”。
老师说完,教室一片寂静,谁也没想到老师会这么说,过来好久,大家好像约好似的,同声回答说:“老师,我们也爱你。”
我们看见老师露出了笑容,虽然是淡淡的。
篇9:放松英语作文初中
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+ 加入清单What does it mean to relax?Despite hearing this term thousands of times
during the course of our lives, very few people have deeply considered what it’s
really about.
When you ask people (which I have done many times) what it means to relax,
most will answer in a way that suggests that relaxing is something you plan to
do lateryou do it on vacation, in a hammock, when you retire, or when you get
everything else done. This implies, of course, that most other times should be
spent nervous, agitated, rushed, and frenzied. Very few actually come out and
say so, but this is the obvious implication.Could this explain why so many of us
operate as if life were one great big emergency?
It is useful to think of relaxation as a quality of heart that you can
access on a regular basis rather than something reserved for some later time.
You can relax now. It’s helpful to remember that relaxed people can still be
superachievers and, in fact, that relaxation and creativity go hand in hand.When
I’m feeling uptight, for example, I don’t even try to write. But when I feel
relaxed, my writing flows quickly and easily.
篇10:保护动物的英语
全文共 552 字
+ 加入清单The animal is the friend of our human beings. We live in the same earth.
Animals and human beings can’t be separated from each other. But some animals
are getting less and less. So it’s necessary for us to protect animals,
especially wild animals. Some people kill wild animal because of money. It’s
illegal. Beside, because of the development of society, human needs more space
to live in, so we explore the forest. Animals have less space to live in. The
number of wild animals decreases year by year. It’s high time to take actions to
protect wild animals.
篇11:2024高考英语作文预测俗语写作
全文共 1283 字
+ 加入清单根据下面中文提示写一篇150词左右的短文。
俗话说:早起的鸟儿有虫吃。请根据你生活中亲身经历的一件事,说明一切成功源于干凡事早做规划,不断追求,辛勤劳作。
The early bird will catch worms
【猜题理由】2010年高考写作题应该是学生较为熟悉的、身边的与他们生活、学习和当今的教育密切相关的话题。一些俗语具有教育意义。2010年有些省份可能对考生进行人生规范、立志等方面有关的俗语进行考查。
【构思点拨】本题属于题目、提纲式作文,给出的要点虽然不多,但要求考生根据生活中亲身经历的一件事,说明一切成功来源于凡事早做规划,不断追求,辛勤劳作这个道理。因此要注意结合自己的经历,谈出自己对此的感受即可。
【参考范文】
The early bird will catch worms
An old saying The early bird will catch worms reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties.
For example, the Chinese athletes excellent performance in 2010 Olympic Winter Games in Vancouver is definitely the result of their early planning and hard training. If they don t set the aim and word work, even though they have the best talents, they cant compete with others and get more medals.
Another case in point is my learning experience. I was good at English, but I couldnt pass the exam, for I wasnt prepared well before the examination. I had many things to solve at that time. As I met the complex things, I was at a loss. The reason was that I had no plan and involved in many things and didnt study more hard, so I failed.
In short, the saying shows us the important of planning, working hard and constantly trying.
篇12:以诚信为主题高一英语
全文共 1994 字
+ 加入清单My grandparents believed you were either honest or you werent. There was
no in between. They had a simple motto hanging on their living-room wall: "Life
is like a field of newly fallen snow; where I choose to walk every step will
show. "They didnt have to talk about it--they demonstratedthe motto by the way
they lived. They understood instinctively that integrity means having a personal
standard of morality and ethics that does not sell out to expediency and that is
not relative to the situation at hand. Integrity is an inner standard for
judging your behavior.Unfortunately, integrity is in short supply today--and
getting scarcer. But it is the real bottom line in every area of society.And it
is something we must demand of ourselves.
A good test for this value is to look at what I call the Integrity Trial,
which consists of three key principles: Stand firmly for your convictions in the
face of personal pressure.
When you know youre right, you cant back down. Always give others credit
that is rightfully theirs. Dont be afraid of those who might have a better idea
or who might even be smarter than you are. Be honest and open about who you
really are. People who lack genuine core values rely on external factors--their
looks or status---in order to feel good about themselves. Inevitably they will
do everything they can to preserve this facade,but they will do very little to
develop their inner value and personal growth.
So be yourself. Dont engage in a personal cover-up of areas that are
unpleasing in your life. When its tough, do it tough. In other words, face
reality and be adult in your responses to lifes challenges.
Self-respect and a clear conscience are powerful components of integrity
and are the basis for enriching your relationships with others.
Integrity means you do what you do because its right and not just
fashionable or politically correct. A life of principle, of not succumbing to
the seductive sirens of an easy morality,will always win the day. My
grandparents taught me that.
篇13:适用话题:诚信、信任危机、自私自利、唯利是图、诚信买卖
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+ 加入清单日前,有成都市民反映称,在水果批发市场购买水果,大多数整件售卖的水果包装箱里,都塞着重量不等的纸张,这些纸也并非常见的水果外包装纸。其中,最夸张的水果品种是芒果——一箱25斤的芒果,商家塞进去的纸就有9斤多。商家称,里面的纸他们叫“皮重”,赚的就是“皮重”,“这是我们的规矩,8到10斤是市场普遍规则,个别商家还有可能多达12斤。”(5月19日 《成都商报》)
买一箱芒果,居然被整箱水果的三分之一的包装纸“揩油”,消费者不满,经营者却不屑。两个群体的不同表情和感受,却反映出市场两端不同主体的利益诉求该怎样正确表达,进而追问,“一半水果一半箱”的虚假之举,在市场发展的当下该如何破解?
一箱水果的重量,包括包装箱和水果本身的重量。倘若水果重量不变,还想多卖钱,最省事的途径,就是在包装上做手脚。多加些包装纸,把包装盒做大,这样,包装盒越大,或包装纸越多,整箱水果重量就多出来了,消费者就得按照水果本身的价钱掏腰包。
这些年来,我们可以从很多的市场交易中找到如出一辙的案例来,从最开始的缺斤少两,到在天平上做手脚,抑或是注水猪肉、牛肉,或者在包装箱里注入水泥……总之,买的不如卖的精,卖家之算计,可以说到了斤两必争的地步,唯一的目的就是少掏产品多赚钱,说到底,还是唯利是图这四个字的错误出发点所致。
商家求利润无可厚非,但看怎样求利润博彩头。薄利多销是一条路,品质出众市场口碑颇高买者趋之若鹜也是一条路,偏偏在斤两上做文章,耍耍小聪明。骗得了一时骗不了一世,消费者吃一回亏,肯定不会再在一个坑上摔倒,对于卖者而言,一半水果一半箱,就是自己砸自己的饭碗。
然而,事情或许并没有这样简单。倘若一两个经营者如此也就罢了。25斤水果9斤包装纸是普遍现象,一半水果一半箱也不稀奇,这或许更能反映出以虚假得利者众的事实,背后则是违法者难受惩处的事实,以至于成为一种行业的潜规则。这个潜规则,就围绕着卖家少付出、多收益展开。
缺斤短两不是一天两天的问题,暴露不讲诚信、违背市场经济的积弊。一箱被过分装了包装纸的水果,看似对消费者的影响小之又小,但推而广之,一个行业如此,还能希望有讲诚信的水果销售业吗?再推而广之,还能期待一个讲诚信的卖方市场吗?
市场经济向来视平等交易为圭臬,缺乏这个基础,缺斤短两的短视行为,终究会害了水果销售业。然而,我们不能等到水果销售业到了无人问津的时候再伸出援手。这些年来,假奶粉、名牌,还不足够唤起虚假交易对市场不信任的痛楚吗?
对一半水果一半箱的不诚信行为,还是需要从根子上祛除不当利益的欲望。实现这个愿望,只有两条再平常不过的路径,一个是不断深化的市场意识,用市场意识束缚不羁的欲望,另一个则是有法必依的法治秩序,让违法者感受到缺斤短两的痛才行。
篇14:关于成功的因素的英语
全文共 2036 字
+ 加入清单When doing the same thing, some people success but some fail. There must be
many factors leading that result. In my view, the most important factor is the
difference of confidence, determination and sociability are the foundation and
condition of success.
First of all, no matter who want to success, they must have confidence, as
confidence is the basic need for success. If someone always thinks he can’t do
this or that well, then he can’t finish it well. For example, when a person is
being interviewed, if he doesn’t believe he can do that job well, how can he act
believable, so how can the interviewers trust his ability? Therefore, the
interview is obviously a failure. However, if a person is confident, he can
receive the opportunity to prepare for every challenge easily, which makes
success become closer.
In addition, confidence just the door for success, if someone wants to get
into the house of success, determination is necessary. The determined meet
difficulties always overcome it and insist to the end. On the other hand, if
someone is not determined, he would give up when facing difficulty. For
instance, when doing homework, the person who is not determined always can’t
finish perfectly and even copy from others when he thinks that homework is hard
to finish. However, the person who is determined always can finish it well,
because he know what he really wants and he is able to carry on.
The last but not least is that no one can do anything well by themselves,
so they need help. At that time, sociable is helpful. It is well-known that
success is hard to reach. Therefore, people need others to help them. A sociable
person can get help easily, as he has so many friends. On the other side, a
person is not good at communication, when he gets in trouble, maybe no one helps
him. So we can see the importance of sociability to success.
In a word, there maybe not only confidence, determination, and sociability
are essential to success, but I think they are the most important ones, for they
are the foundation and condition of success.
篇15:我的母亲英语作文高一100词
全文共 421 字
+ 加入清单My mother is a woman of the old school. She is too conservative to keep up
with the times. However, she is goodnatured and treats others sincerely. For
this reason, all her neighbors are only too glad (pleased) to make friends with
her.
They consider her a model woman.She is a typical housewife. She keeps the
(her) house neat and clean and looks after us with extreme care . She often says
to us, “You cannot study too hard.”
篇16:端午节的由来的英语作文700字
全文共 891 字
+ 加入清单Tomorrow is dragon boat festival, I and father mother go together Woerma goes buying a zhongzi.
Arrive Woerma, I run to look for a zhongzi with respect to rapid ground. Wow! Here huge crowd of people, really lively. Well? How is that place person special much? Taking away doubt I looked in the past after all. Oh! Buy a zhongzi so, the zhongzi breed here is really too much: Of beef stuffing, of red jujube stuffing, of chop stuffing, of earthnut stuffing... my what look saliva should flow. Took a bag rapidly, say to mom: "Mom, I like to eat fresh chopped meat, I should be bought more a few. " mom nods express to agree, then I bought the zhongzi of a lot of fresh chopped meat.
Buy a zhongzi, we bought a lot of things again, have a meal in hall of Xiang Shang coffee next, had eaten a meal, we came home cheerfully, really happy today!
Look! This is the zhongzi that I buy, but delicious!
篇17:关于努力英语作文高中
全文共 719 字
+ 加入清单The moment I go to high school, I have made up my mind to study hard. It is
known to all that the period of high school is the turning point of people’s
life, which may decide my future career. So I know the importance of striving
for my future. The reason why I study so hard are various. First, I want my
parents to be proud of me. When my mothers’ friends come to visit her, they
always brag about how excellent their children are, but my mother would never
take me as the topic, because she does not want me to have the pressure. I
appreciate what my mother does to me and really want her to be proud of me.
Second, If I enter a good university, I can have the promising future. It is
time for me to return my parents’ love.
篇18:我的大学生活英语
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+ 加入清单As we know, many people favor the idea that the college life is free and
comfortable, but I’d like to say it’s not true. As a matter of fact, my life in
university is so busy that I wonder if my energy is enough. As to my college
life, I divide it into four parts, including study, student activities, library
and the others.
Firstly, I want to talk about the study. In my opinion, study is the
priority in college. When I received the letter of admission in summer, I knew
clearly that what I should do. So I make up my mind to study hard and pursue
learning as much as possible. I’m greatly convinced that knowledge can change my
life. Therefore, I often go to the quiet study room where many people study
there. By working so hard, I get good grades in the exams.
Secondly, student activities play an important role in our college life. To
be honest, the student Union is a good place where one can develop social
skills, get his abilities trained. I take part in many student activities. For
example, I’ m a volunteer, teaching the kids to learn to dance and write. I
think it’s meaningful for everyone to give a hand to others. I can also do some
jobs in the Student Union, including receiving and sending fast mail, selling
papers and magazines. I think they’re unforgettable and worthwhile experiences
for me.
Thirdly, I also visit the library constantly. It’s said that “shelves of
books, oceans of knowledge”, so I read books that I’m interested in. In this
way, I can share stories with my new friends and it also changes my horizons
.When I’m sad, lost or in trouble, staying the library makes me quiet and
comfortable. After all, every life has bad moments as well as good ones, and the
library for me is a support in bad moments. So it’s wise choice for me to stay
in the library.
Finally, I often do other things in my spare time. In order to alleviate
parents’ burden, I often do some part-time jobs and write some articles to earn
money. It helps me to be independent and improve my social skills.
In short, my life in university is busy but valuable. You can see that
study brings me knowledge, student activities improve myself, library changes my
horizons, the others things make me independent. They get all my abilities
trained. And I see that the chance will come only if you have a prepared mind,
so I’m sure that I can achieve my dreams in college life.
篇19:食品安全英语
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+ 加入清单Fast food has flooded in our lives nowadays. Concerning fast food,
different people have different attitudes.Some hold that fast food is necessary
in our society while others argue that fast food is harmful to our health. As
far as I am concerned, fast food is necessary but not a must in our lives.
On the one hand, fast food is necessary in our today’s society. Although
fast food is not as nutritious as home-made food, it is a good replacement when
we are in hurry and have no enough time to prepare food by ourselves. It can
help us to save much time. In addition, fast food is cheaper but various and we
can taste different kinds of food by using less money.
On the other hand, however, fast food is not a must. Fast food can be used
to replace our home-made food sometimes, but we should not eat it very often.
Compared with home-made food, the nutrition provided by fast food is far less.
Therefore, eating fast food only can not provide enough nutrition for our
growth. Besides, the problem of food security is another factor we should
consider when eating fast food.
In a word, fast food is necessary sometimes in our lives, but we can not
eat it very often. At the same time, to fit for the need of people, fast food
restaurants should develop and provide more and more nutritious food and
strengthen the supervision of food making.
篇20:中考英语作文命题预测
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+ 加入清单掌握好的学习方法非常重要,下面内容2019中考英语作文命题预测如何拿高分?,希望能给您带来一定帮助。
2019中考英语作文命题预测 如何拿高分?
随着中考逼近,考生都进入了紧张的备考状态,初三老师们也一直与同学们并肩作战。在最后不到60天的时间里,如何让考生更有针对性的复习,如何让考生尽可能多得分是我们老师一直在思考的问题。
中考英语的基础部分只要学生基础扎实,一般拿分没多大问题。如今,令大部分学生头疼的问题是作文。为了让学生对中考英语作文更有信心,老师为学生们解析历年的中考英语作文题目,并作出预测,为同学们指点迷津。
首先让我们一起来看看历年的中考英语作文真题。
2006年作文题目:
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I Have a Dream”。
2007年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Things I Hate to Do”。
2008年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Story about My Parent(s)&rdquo,周记;。
2009年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”
2010年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I‘m proud of myself”
2011年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I‘m a member of… ”
我们可以发现,中考的英语作文其实难度并不大。命题都是与学生自身相关,为的是让学生有话可说。但是学生往往得不到高分,到底我们该如何去拿分呢?从以上题目可以看出,中考作文的写作思路通常为:what—why—how.评卷主要从内容、结构、文采三个角度给予评分。学生在写作文时,最好能够根据提示进行书写以得内容分,另外,注意连接词的使用以得结构分,同时注意遣词造句以得文采分。现在我们一起来分析2009年真题的优秀作文,让同学们更能感受到如何去写一篇优秀作文。
If you ask me what I want to do for my school, my answer is to plant trees in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. After I plant trees there, maybe more and more students will do as me.Moreover, students can read under the trees. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. I hope our school will be a nicer place to study.
此文分三层,先提出自己的观点,然后写出为什么这么做,最后写出我会怎么做。
全文立意好,贴近实际,可行性强。从语法来看,没犯语法错误;从结构来看,用了so、after、moreover等连接词使行文更加流畅;从文采上看,文章多处用了从句,用到了形容词的比较级等。整篇文章简洁、让人读起朗朗上口,是一篇很值得借鉴的文章。