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719高考优秀英语作文:雾霾带来的警示
全文共 1550 字
+ 加入清单导语:雾霾问题是人们追求利润而造成的,人们曾经对环境所做的现在已经得到了报复。现在人们已经意识到了大自然的报复是多么的大,保护环境是主要的任务。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Since the development of the technology, the society gets modernized, people make use of the high technology to pursue more profit. Though the government has noticed the problem that people do to the environment, they still can’t prevent negative result that the polluted environment brings.
Many years ago, the most prominent problem of the polluted environment is that the river and the water were changed their color, some fish even died for the polluted river. Now the situation becomes ever worse, lately, in the big city, like Beijing and Shanghai, people are annoyed by the bad weather. It is not the rainy day, but the haze around the sky, there is no way for people to run away for it. The haze contains toxic elements, people breathe it and hurt their bodies.
The haze problem is the result of people’s pursuit for the profit, what people did to the environment now has been paid back by the environment. Now people have realized the revenge from the nature is so huge, protecting the environment is the main task. No matter how bad the environment is, people still need to do something to fix their mistake.
【参考翻译】
打从科技的发展,社会已经变得现代化,人们充分利用高科技来追求更多的利润。虽然政府已经注意到了人们对环境所做的事情这个问题,但是他们仍然不能阻止被污染环境的所带来的后果。
很多年前,环境污染所带来的最突出问题时河流和水的颜色被改变,一些鱼甚至死于被污染的河流。现在这样的情形变得更加的糟糕,最近,在大城市,比如北京和上海,人们受困于糟糕的天气。并不是因为雨天,而是因为雾霾包围天空,人们无处可逃。雾霾中含有有毒的元素,人们呼吸着雾霾,损害着他们的身体。
雾霾问题是人们追求利润而造成的,人们曾经对环境所做的现在已经得到了报复。现在人们已经意识到了大自然的报复是多么的大,保护环境是主要的任务。无论环境变得多坏,人们仍然要去做一些事情来弥补自己的错误。
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篇1:2024全国卷高考英语作文评分标准
全文共 2666 字
+ 加入清单1 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次 的 要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3 词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。
4 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准 确性、上下文的连贯性。
5 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程 度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。
6 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
各档次的给分范围和要求
Ⅰ. 第五档(很好);(21-25分):
完全完成了试题规定的任务
⑴ 覆盖所有内容要点
⑵ 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,
⑶ 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力,
⑷有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑 , 完全达到了预期的写作目的 Ⅱ. 第四档(好):(16-20分)
完全完成了试题规定的任务
⑴虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容
⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
⑶语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致 ⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑 达到了预期的写作目的
Ⅲ. 第三档(适当):(11-15分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务
⑴虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容
⑵应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
⑶有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解
⑷应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的Ⅳ. 第二档(较差):(6-10分)
未恰当完成试题规定的任务
⑴ 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容
⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限
⑶ 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解
⑷较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性 信息未能清楚地传达给读者
Ⅴ. 第一档(差):(1-5分)
未完成试题规定的任务
⑴明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求
⑵语法结构单调、词汇项目有限
⑶较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解 ⑷缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯 信息未能传达给读者。
Ⅵ. 不得分:(0分) ⑴ 未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要
求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
三点关键定档因素(不跑题是前提)
词汇多样性
语法复杂性
文章连贯性
书面表达的五项秘诀:
审题,遣词,造句,润色,谋篇
既然知道了这些关键因素和高分秘诀,我们要如何从这些方面入手呢审题的概念
拿到试卷后,首先浏览书面表达的题目,研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题:看文章是否要求有题目(title)或者主题(topic)能够确保你不跑题;审体裁:确能够定文章的文体,为你写作提供方向。审要点:如果英语作文中,有要求要点的,一般打分时是踩点给分的,准确把握住要点,是高分的一个诀窍。
如何审要点要做到以下两个方面:
总结归纳要点:不是所有内容都要写出来,而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!
理顺要点:将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排,这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序,流畅自然,更加容易打动评分老师,从而作文分数提升一档。
构思文章提纲:根据题目的要点,安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识,写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳),这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上,要注意突出要点。
遣词的注意点
不出现语言错误
词语和短语搭配
适度使用加分词汇
避免词语重复
注意词语和短语搭配使用
可以适度的使用加分词句:高级词、同义词、短语等替代
造句的原则
表达意思要清楚无误。
多种表达方式表达相同含义
避免句式单调(简单句,并列句,复合句等适度调整)
表达意思清楚无误:具体化,细节化
可以用形象思维来表达(什么叫形象思维比如说你朗读的“很好听”,用“抑扬顿挫”来表达就是形象思维)
谋篇的攻略
注意分段、详略搭配、注意连贯
行文时多用关联词、引导词,把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来,达到起承转合,运用自如的目的,从而获取高分。
具体的连接关系有:并列关系、递进关系、因果关系、转折关系、让步关系、列举关系、条件关系、举例关系、时间关系等。
2015年高考英语全国I卷
写作阅卷评分标准及各档次作文示例
——领会高考阅卷要求,有效指导学生高考写作备考
【作文题】假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:
1.栏目介绍;
2. 稿件内容;
3. 稿件长度:约 400 词;
4. 交稿日期:6 月 28 日前。
注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2015年普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准
评分总则:
1、本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2、评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线(15分),然后确定其所属的具体档次,以该档次的要求来衡量,最后给分。其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3、词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5、若缺少要点,分数降一档处理。
6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
7、书写较差以至于影响交际,将其分数降低一个档次。 评分细则:
优秀(22--25):紧扣主题,覆盖所有要点,内容充实;语法结构多样,词汇丰富,行文流畅,显示出较强的语言运用能力,允许有个别语言错误,但不影响意思表达。
篇2:高考后的暑假计划英语作文
全文共 1041 字
+ 加入清单导语:经历了高考后的暑假你有想过做什么吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
After the challenging College Entrance Examination, my anticipated summer holiday has begun. I will have a long winter holiday for almost three month. But I have already planned for it. Firstly, I will have a good rest at home and spend some time with my parents. I studied at school before, so I don’t have much time to company them. And then, I want to take a part-time job. I have graduated from senior school, and I think that a part-time job can help me being independent. I hope what I learn in school will be helpful to my new job. After earning some money, I want to have an after-graduation trip that I have been dreaming of for a very long time. My first choice is Xiamen, which is an attractive city. When the trip ends, it’s time for the college.
紧张的高考过后,我期待已久的暑假终于开始了。我将会有一个差不多三个月之久的暑假,而我也已经做好暑期计划了。首先,我会在家好好休息,花一些时间好好陪陪我的爸爸妈妈。之前我一直在学校上学,没有很多的时间可以陪伴他们。之后,我想做一份暑期兼职。我已经高中毕业了,我想做兼职能帮助我学会独立,也希望我以前所学的能用在工作中。等赚了一些钱之后,我想要梦想已久一次毕业旅行。我的首选之地是厦门,那是一个非常吸引人的城市。旅行结束的时候,我的大学生活就要开始了。
篇3:2024年高考英语写作指导:写人篇
全文共 3281 字
+ 加入清单写人的英语作文在高考中不少见,什么样的作文更能吸引人呢?下面请看语文迷为大家带来的技巧。
写人记叙文,一般为肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写,应根据要求,灵活掌握,突出重点。
【几点注意】
1.使用正确人称和时态。
①时态:
一般现在时--描写人物外貌、性格、兴趣等
一般过去时-- 描写人物出生、教育背景、经历、事迹
②人称:第一人称或第三人称
2.介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等,包括所给的全部信息点,不能遗漏或随意添加。
3.对所给的信息进行适当重组,安排好写作顺序,突出重点信息。
4.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。
【常见词语】
①外貌特征:
pretty, beautiful, good-looking,handsome,ordinary-looking, with a big nose, with a big
smile, short, tall,thin, strong, white-haired,1.80 metres tall, …
②性格特点:
absent-minded, charming, attractive, bright, wise smart, confident, naughty,talkative, diligent,
lazy, friendly, generous, be ready to help others,kind-hearted, warm-hearted, patient, humorous,
have a good/ bad temper, independent,narrow-minded, …
③童年情况:
as a boy of 15, be born on, during his childhood, live a happy/hard life, the son of a poor family,
spend his childhood in, ...
④兴趣爱好: be delighted in doing, be good at , be interested in , be fond of , be crazy about, be pleased with, do well in, enjoy doing, have a strong desire to do, long for/long to do), take a pleasure in doing,…
⑤教育背景: be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a master’s
degree, get on well with one’s lessons, go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from,major in, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, take an active part in, …
⑥ 成就或事迹:
become a member of the team, encourage sb to do sth, give up one’s life for sth, receive the
Nobel Prize for physics, set a new world record of,win the first prize in, win a gold /silver/ bronze
medal, have a talent for, make up one’s mind to do sth., put one’s heart into, work hard at,
concentrate oneself to, devote oneself to,do sth.with great determination and perseverance, ...
⑦他人评价:
an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by , be honored as, be
considered/regarded as, be famous/known as,his hard work brought him great success, make
great contributions to our country, set a good example for , be highly spoken of for, ...
例文
你班要举办以“Ordinary but Great”为题的英语主题班会。
请根据下列信息准备一篇发言稿,介绍赵郁的成长经历。
注意: 1、词数不少于60。
2、文章的题目和开头已经给出。
3、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
提示词:首席技师 chief technician
Ordinary but Great
We are all ordinary people, but following what we are interested in and doing what we are good
at can help us make great achievements for society and go far. Here’s a convincing and inspiring example.
______________________________________
【范文】
Zhao Yu, the chief technician in the Benz Company,is regarded as a great success. However, his success is no accident. As a young boy with a sense of creativity, he was eager to learn and to make a lot of inventions. Being an ordinary worker in the Benz Company for 17 years, not only did he do well in his job, but he also made efforts to teach himself English and to learn how to use computers. Now it is easy for him to read English materials about cars. Besides, he became expert at solving various technical problems.Because of his great contribution, he has received awards many times.
Zhao Yu has set a good example that ordinary people can stand out by doing their jobs with interest and enthusiasm.
【评析】
1.作者运用了所给出的全部信息:姓名、职务、经历。对所给的信息进行了适当重组,突出了重点信息(赵郁的经历),内容完整、详略得当,体现了话题“Ordinary but great”所表达的内容。
2. 正确使用人称(第三人称),灵活使用时态(一般过去时、一般现在时);合理使用过渡词,使文章层次分明、结构紧凑。
3. 语言规范,表达准确。文章运用了一些高级句式,如同位语、介词短语、分词短语、倒装句、同位语从句等,增加了文章的亮点。
篇4:2024高考英语冲刺作文OneThingI’mProudof
全文共 880 字
+ 加入清单One Thing I’m Proud of I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.
The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.
I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”
我很自豪的一件事我还记得我如何成为一个优秀的乒乓球运动员。
第一天我去了高中时,我看到一些同学打乒乓球。惊讶于他们是多么巧妙,我决心一样好。后来,我经常看到他们认真学习他们的技术。然后我不停地练习,直到我有足够的信心去挑战了好球员。在学期结束的时候,我成为班里最好的球员之一。
我真的骄傲的这段经历,因为它让我意识到我们都能实现我们的潜能,通过努力工作才能实现我们的目标。它也帮助我更好地理解谚语“熟能生巧”。
篇5:英语高考
全文共 909 字
+ 加入清单Dear zhuanghua ,
It’s three months since I heard from you last time . Now I want to tell you
an impressive story happening on my first lesson .
On hearing the bell students ran into the classroom as quickly as they
could. But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the
class. He stood outside the classroom silently . I smiled to him and let him
come in. After a while ,he cried on his desk . Then I walked to him and asked
what had happened . He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some
medicine for her . At the same time ,he apologized to me for his lateness .
Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song
named “mother” for the students . How time flies ! Class was over before I
realized it .
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help
them . Do you think so ? I’m looking forward to your reply .
Yours truly ,
Li Hong
篇6:高考英语作文常用短句推荐
全文共 5192 字
+ 加入清单高考英语作文中常用一些大家都知道的短句能为自己的作文加分。下面是语文迷整理的英语作文短句,供大家参考。
1. at the thought of一想到…
2. as a whole (=in general) 就整体而论
3. at will 随心所欲
4. (be) abundant in(be rich in; be wellsupplied with) 富于,富有
5. access(to) (不可数名词) 能接近,进入,了解
6. by accident(=by chance, accidentally)偶然地,意外.Without accident(=safely)安全地,
7. of one’s ownaccord(=without being asked; willingly; freely)自愿地 ,主动地
8. in accord with 与…一致 . out ofone’s accord with 同…。不一致
9. with one accord (=with everybodyagreeing)一致地
10. in accordance with (=in agreement with)依照,根据
11. on one’s own account
1) 为了某人的缘故, 为了某人自己的利益
2) (=at one’s own risk) 自行负责
3) (=by oneself)依靠自己
12. take…intoaccount(=consider)把..。考虑进去
13. give sb. an account of 说明, 解释 (理由)
14. account for (=give an explanation orreason for) 解释,说明。
15. on account of (=because of) 由于,因为。
16. on no account(=in no case, for noreason)绝不要,无论如何不要(放句首时句子要倒装)
17. accuse…of…(=charge…with; blamesb. for sth. ; blame sth. on sb. ;
complain about) 指控,控告
18. be accustomed to (=be in the habit of,be used to)习惯于。
19. be acquainted with(=to have knowledgeof) 了解; (=to have met socially)熟悉
20. act on 奉行,按照…行动; act as 扮演; act for 代理
21. adapt oneself to(=adjust oneself to) 使自己适应于
22. adapt…(for) (=make sth.Suitable for a new need) 改编,改写(以适应新的需要)
23. in addition (=besides) 此外, 又, 加之
24. in addition to(=as well as, besides,other than)除…外
25. adhere to (=abide by, conform to,comply with, cling to, insist on,
persist in, observe, opinion, belief ) 粘附; 坚持, 遵循
26. adjacent(=next to, close to) 毗邻的, 临近的
27. adjust..(to) (=change slightly)调节; 适应;
28. admit of (=be capable of, leave roomfor) …的可能,留有…的余地。
29. in advance (before in time) 预告, 事先
30. to advantage 有利的,使优点更加突出地
31. have an advantage over 胜过
have the advantage of 由于…处于有利条件
have the advantage of sb。知道某人所不知道的事
32. take advantage of (=make the best of,utilize, make use of, profit from,
harness)利用
33. agree with 赞同(某人意见) agreeto 同意
34. in agreement (with) 同意, 一致
35. ahead of 在…之前, 超过…. ahead of time 提前
36. in the air 1)不肯定, 不具体. 2)在谣传中
37. above all (=especially, most importantof all) 尤其是,最重要的
38. in all (=counting everyone oreverything, altogether) 总共,总计
39. after all 毕竟,到底; (not)at all 一点也不;
all at once(=suddenly)突然; once andfor all 只此一次; above all 最重要的; first of
all 首先; all in all 大体上说; be all in 累极了; all but 几乎
40. allow for (=take into consideration,take into account) 考虑到,估计到
41. amount to (=to be equal to) 总计, 等于。
42. answer for (undertake responsibilityfor, be liable for, take chargefor) 对…负责。
43. answer to (=conform to) 适合,符合。
44. be anxious about 为…焦急不安; 或anxious for
45. apologize to sb. for sth. 为…向…道歉
46. appeal to sb. for sth. 为某事向某人呼吁.appeal to sb. 对某人有吸引力
47. apply to sb. for sth. 为…向…申请; applyfor申请; apply to 适用。
48. apply to 与…有关;适用
49. approve of (=consent to, be in favorof, favor, agree to, consider good,
right) 赞成, approve vt. 批准
50. arise from(=be caused by) 由…引起。
51. arrange for sb./sth. to do sth. 安排…做…
52. arrive on 到达; arrive at到达某地(小地方);得出,作出; arrive in 到达某地(大地方);
53. be ashamed of (=feel shame, guilt orsorrow because of sth. done)
以…为羞耻
54. assure sb. of sth. (=try to cause tobelieve or trust in sth.)
向…保证,使…确信。
55. attach(to) (=to fix, fasten; join) 缚, 系 ,结
56. make an attempt at doing sth. (to dosth.) 试图做…
57. attend to (=give one’s attention,care and thought)注意,照顾;attend
on(upon)(=wait upon, serve, look after) 侍候,照料
58. attitude to/ toward …对…的态度。看法
59. attribute…to…(=to believesth. to be the result of…)把.。归因于..,
认为.。是.。的结果
60. on the average (=on average, on anaverage) 平均
61. (be) aware of (=be conscious of ,having knowledge or
consciousness)意识到,知道。
62. at the back of (=behind) 在…后面
63. in the back of 在…后部(里面); on theback of 在…后部(外面); be on one’s back(=be
ill in bed) 卧病不起。
64. at one’s back(=supportingor favoring sb.) 支持,维护; have sb. at one’s back
有…支持,有…作后台
65. turn one’s back on sb. (=turnaway from sb. in an impolite way)
不理睬(某人),背弃,抛弃
66. behind one’s back 背着某人(说坏话)
67. be based on / upon 基于
68. on the basis of 根据…, 在…基础上
69. beat…at 在…运动项目上打赢
70. begin with 以…开始. tobegin with (=first of all) 首先,第一(经常用于开始语)
71. on behalf of (=as the representativeof) 以…名义
72. believe in(=have faith or trust in;consider sth./sb. to be true)
相信,依赖,信仰。
73. benefit (from) 受益,得到好处。
74. for the benefit of 为了…的利益(好处)
75. for the better 好转
76. get the better of (=defeat sb.) 打败, 胜过。
77. by birth 在出生上,论出身,按血统 at birth在出生时; give birth to 出生
78. blame sb. for sth. 因…责备某人 .blame sth. on sb. 把…推在某人身上
79. in blossom开花(指树木) be inblossom开花(强调状态) come into blossom开花(强调动作)
80. on board 到船上, 在船上, 上火车或飞机
81. boast of (or about) 吹嘘
82. out of breath 喘不过气来
83. in brief(=in as few words as possible)简言之
84. in bulk 成批地,不散装的
85. take the floor 起立发言
86. on business 出差办事。
87. be busy with sth。于某事。 be busydoing sth. 忙于做某事
88. last but one 倒数第二。
89. but for (=without) 要不是. 表示假设
90. buy sth. for…money 用多少钱买
91. be capable of 能够, 有能力
be capable of being +过去分词:是能够被…的
92. in any case(=for love or money, at anyrate, at any price, at any cost,
whatever happens; anyhow)无论如何
93. in case (=for fear that) 万一;
94. in case of (=in the event of)如果发生…万一
in the case of 至于…, 就…而言
95. in no case在任何情况下都不(放句首倒装句)
96. be cautious of 谨防
97. center one’s attentionon(=focus one’s attention on) 把某人的注意力集中在…上
98. be certain of (=be sure of) 有把握, 一定。
99. for certain of (=for sure )肯定地,有把握地
100. by chance(=accidentally, by accident)偶然
篇7:以感谢为话题的高考英语作文
全文共 769 字
+ 加入清单导语:吃水不忘挖井人,前人栽树后人乘凉。 知恩图报,善莫大焉。我们要感谢那些帮过我们的人,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Last week I saw a young man giving up his seat to a woman with a baby in her arms on a bus. To my great surprise, the woman did not thank the young man; on the contrary, she glared at him coldly, which made him embarrassed.
This incident set me thinking. If everyone acted like that woman, who would like to help others? And what would our society be like?
If anyone gives you a hand, you should express your sincere gratitude to him or her. Only in this way will everyone be ready to help others and feel satisfied with it.
【参考译文】
上周,我在公共汽车上看到一个年轻人给一个怀抱婴儿的妇女让座。让我感到奇怪的是,这位妇女没有感谢这位年轻人,反而用冷淡的目光盯着他,使他感到困窘。
这事令我深思。如果每个人都像那个妇女那样,谁还愿意帮助别人?我们这个社会将会变成什么样子?
如果有人帮了你,你应表示衷心感谢。只有这样,大家才会愿意帮助别人,并从中得到满足。
篇8:2024年高考英语作文
全文共 1128 字
+ 加入清单【构思点拨】本题属于题目、提纲式作文,给出的要点虽然不多,但要求考生根据生活中亲身经历的一件事,说明一切成功来源于凡事早做规划,不断追求,辛勤劳作这个道理。因此要注意结合自己的经历,谈出自己对此的感受即可。
俗话说:早起的鸟儿有虫吃。请根据你生活中亲身经历的一件事,说明一切成功源于干凡事早做规划,不断追求,辛勤劳作。
【参考范文】
the early bird will catch worms
an old saying "the early bird will catch worms" reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties.
for example, the chinese athletes excellent performance in xx olympic winter games in vancouver is definitely the result of their early planning and hard training. if they don t set the aim and word work, even though they have the best talents, they cant compete with others and get more medals.
another case in point is my learning experience. i was good at english, but i couldnt pass the exam, for i wasnt prepared well before the examination. i had many things to solve at that time. as i met the complex things, i was at a loss. the reason was that i had no plan and involved in many things and didnt study more hard, so i failed.
in short, the saying shows us the important of planning, working hard and constantly trying.
篇9:2024考研英语作文万能句子汇总
全文共 1317 字
+ 加入清单一、开头句型
我们常说,良好的开端等于成功的一半。做事如此,作文也是如此。所以我们颇有必要在作文的开头花一番心思。
在写议论文时,你通常以什么样的方式开头呢?最简单也最常用的可能就是开门见山法。也就是说———直截了当地提出你对这个问题的观点,点出文章的中心思想。
I....has both advantages and disadvantages.……既有利又有弊。例如:
1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages.
2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.
3.Com pared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages.
例如:
1.With the rapid increase of Chinas population,housing problem is becoming more and more serious.
随着中国人口的急剧增加,住房问题越来越突出。
2.With more and more women entering society,peoples attitude towards women is changing.
随着越来越多的妇女走入社会,人们对妇女的态度也在改变。
3.With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up,an increasing number of Chinese families can afford a car.
随着中国改革开放的深入,越来越多的中国家庭买得起车了。(“越来越多”除了常用的more and more外,还可以用an increasing number of, a growing number of,a significant number of,a great number of等来表达。)
二、结尾句型
英语议论文多以简要总结全文或对所讨论的问题提出解决办法来结尾。总结全文时除常用到in one /a word,generally speaking等外,没有固定模式。提出解决办法时却常使用下一句型。
V....take measures to do sth.例如:
1.We should take measures to control pollution in order to save the world.
2.Wed better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams.
3.The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse.
4.Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks.
篇10:2024年高考英语作文热门话题之一---雅安地震
全文共 939 字
+ 加入清单2015年4月20日,四川省雅安市芦山发生强烈地震,造成很大损失。学校号召全体师生向灾区捐款。请你拟一个发言稿,在学校捐款动员大会上使用。发言稿主要内容应包括:
1. 对灾区情况的简单介绍(包括地震发生时间、地点、造成的财产和人员损失等);
2. 捐款的意义(帮助灾区人民渡过难关、帮助灾区重建);
3. 如何捐款(自愿、多少不限、以班级为单位,收齐后交到学校红十字会) 注意:
1. 不要逐条翻译;
2. 可适当增加细节;以使文章连贯;
3. 词数至少100词。 参考范文:
Dear teachers and students,
As we all know, a terrible earthquake happened in Lushan, Sichuan Province on April 20, in which many buildings were destroyed and many people were injured. In order to help the earthquake victims to go through the hard times and rebuild their hometown, the school has called on everyone in our school, including both teachers and students, to donate money to the earthquake-stricken area. This donation is voluntary. You can give away however much you want to. The money will be collected by each class before it is handed to the Red Cross Society of our school. We hope that everyone will be kind enough to do what you can to help our fellowmen out of the difficulty. Thank you.
篇11:英语书信作文万能句型:邀请信
全文共 561 字
+ 加入清单1、I"d like ...to come to dinner
非常希望...共进晚餐
2、request the pleasure of
恭请...
3、The favor of a reply is requested
敬赐复函
4、May I have the honour of your company at dinner?
敬备菲酌,恭请光临
5、Thank you for inviting us to dinner
谢谢您邀请我们共进晚餐
6、I hope you"re not too busy to come.
我期望您会在百忙中光临
7、The reception will be held in ...,on ...
招待会定于...在...举行
8、We sincerely hope you can attend
我们期待您的光临
9、We are looking forward to ...
我们期待着....
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10、We have decided to have a party in honor of the occasion
为此我们决定举办一次晚会
11、Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience
是否参加,请早日告之
篇12:往年高考英语参考作文
全文共 1296 字
+ 加入清单【例文】
Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”.
Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Some students live a very expensive life. They have the same hairstyles as their favorable stars and wear top brand of clothes and shoes. Some use expensive mobile phones.The reasons why they do so are as follows. Firstly, they hope to look smart and special. Secondly, they want to win others’ admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool .
As far as I am concerned, we students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life because it is one of our Chinese traditional virtues. What’s more , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school to receive normal education. Last but not least, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable.
Thank you for listening!
【译文】
大家下午好!
我今天演讲的题目是“我的态度在学校工作,追求时尚”。
现在在我们学校有一个追求时尚热点。有些学生生活非常昂贵的生活。他们有他们的有利星级相同的发型,穿的衣服和鞋第一品牌。有些使用昂贵的移动电话。究其原因,他们这样做如下。首先,他们希望看起来聪明和特别。其次,他们想赢得别人的钦佩和尊敬。此外,它使他们感到凉爽。
据我所知,我们的学生应持正确的价值观念意识。我们应该在日常生活中实践节约,因为它是我们中华民族的传统美德之一。更重要的是,这是值得我们捐些零用钱给希望工程,使农村地区的贫困儿童能重返学校,接受正常的教育。最后但并非最不重要的,它是内在美,而不是我们的外表,使我们尊敬的。
谢谢你的关注!
篇13:2024高考英语作文:网购
全文共 1952 字
+ 加入清单导语:现如今越来越多人网购,网购是由于网上购物很便捷,人们不用出门,只要轻轻点击鼠标,就能买到自己想要的商品。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Recently, we often show that shopping online is better than in store, but is this really the case? Actually, there is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of shopping online is better than traditional shopping. Some people consider that online shopping will replace the mall shopping, stores will disappear in the future, while others argue that stores would unlikely to be disappeared, it has its own advantages.
Most people shopping online because it is very convenient, there is no need to go out, just click the mouse gently, they can buy the goods they want. In addition, goods online are cheaper than entity shop that buyers can save a lot of money. But even the coin has two sides. Online shopping also has advantages and disadvantages. In recent years, we see a lot of news about online cheating, and many buyers complain about poor quality of the goods, which is different with the description.
However, the situation above is rare in traditional shopping store, because the guest can communicate with the seller face to face. Buyers can also see goods intuitively. But the traditional shopping does not convenience as well as online shopping, for example, if people meet a traffic jam on the way to the shopping which will affect the happy mood of shopping.
To sum up, online shopping and traditional shopping has their own advantages and disadvantages. They can exist together, in recent period of time, online shopping will not replace traditional shopping.
【参考译文】
近来,我们经常听说网上买东西比在实体店更好,但情况真的如此吗?事实上,人们并未就这个观点达成一致意见,一些人认为网购将会代替商场购物,商场未来会消失,而另一些人则争辩说商场不可能会消失,它有自己的优势。
大部分人网购是由于网上购物很便捷,人们不用出门,只要轻轻点击鼠标,就能买到自己想要的商品。另外,网上的东西比实体店的便宜很多,买家可以节约很多钱。不过硬币都有正反面,网购也存在利弊。近年来,我们看到很多关于网购欺骗的新闻,以及很多买家抱怨商品的质量很差,跟网上描述的不相同。
但这样的情况在传统购物就很少发生。因为客人与店主可以面对面交流,买家也可以直观的看到商品。但是传统购物却没有网购方便,比如在去购物的路上遇到堵车等情况,就会影响愉快的购物心情。
综上所述,网购和传统的购物都有各自的优势和劣势,两者可以共同存在,在近段时间,网购不会取代传统购物
篇14:2024高考英语作文预测:调查反馈
全文共 1159 字
+ 加入清单下表是某校关于中学生双休日活动现状的一份调查,请结合表格内容,用英语写一篇120—150单词的短文,就中学生应如何过双休日发表你的看法。
学习情况
几乎都在学习 16%
半天学习半天活动 24%
几乎都在做其他事情 60%
娱乐休闲
体育活动 20%
游玩和购物 40%
上网看电视 40%
去图书馆
经常 5%
偶尔 23%
几乎没有 72%
课外兴趣小组
经常 10%
偶尔 20%
不参加 70%
范文 (One possible version)
This form displays the result of a survey on how to spend students’ weekend. It says that few students are glued to their schoolwork any more. Instead, they prefer to surf on the internet, watch TV, go shopping rather than involve in sports games. Library and interest groups are available but not favourable.
Personally I think, students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged. They are expected to spend some time on what they learn instead of hanging out. More time should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally. Besides, more interest groups should be established for students to widen their horizon and sharpen their brains so that they can become more creative eventually. All these will contributes a lot to a well-informed and highly qualified teenager.
In conclusion, students should be more scheduled with colorful and fruitful activities.
篇15:志愿者申请VolunteerApplication高考英语满分作文
全文共 753 字
+ 加入清单书面表达: 假设你的名字是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现招募志愿者。你希望成为志愿者。申请信的格式已经写好了,你直接写内容就可以。你的个人情况:年龄性别学历,个人条件。英语好,爱好体育,擅长交际,乐于助人。承诺提供最佳服务。字数100左右。
范文:
I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one. Thanks. Li Hua
当我听说冬季奥运会将在我的城市里举行,我感到非常兴奋。我的名字是李华。我是一个高中学生,一个18岁的男孩。我想做一名志愿者。我非常喜欢英语和体育。我喜欢交朋友,我随时准备帮助别人。我可以做一个好的翻译,在每一个体育的时间。希望奥运会取得巨大的成功。希望我会被选为一个。谢谢李华
篇16:2024高考英语作文常用句型大全
全文共 3989 字
+ 加入清单导语:近年来高考书面表达的要求不断提高,高分文章要有较多的词汇,较高级的词汇用法。有了固定的作文句型就再也不用发愁了。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的万能句子,希望对您有所帮助。
一.开头用语:
良好的开端等于成功的一半.在写作文时,通常以最简单也最常用的方式---开门见山法。也就是说, 直截了当地提出你对这个问题的看法或要求,点出文章的中心思想。
1.议论论文:
A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages.
B. Compared to/ In comparison with letters, e-mails are more convenient.
C. When it comes to computers, some people think they have brought us a lot of convenience. However,...
D. Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside.
E. As is known to all/ As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life.
F. Why do you go to university? Different people have different points of view.
2. 书信:
A. I am writing to you to apply for admission to your university as a visiting scholar.
B. I read an advertisement in today’s China Daily and I apply for the job...
C. Thank you for your letter of May 5.D. How happy I am to receive your letter of January 9.
E. How nice to hear from you again.
3. 口头通知或介绍情况:
A. Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please. I have an announcement to make.
B. Attention, please. I have something important to tell you.
C. Mr. Green, Welcome to our school. To begin with, let me introduce Mr. Wang to you.
4. 演讲稿:
A. Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very much honored to have a chance here to make a speech on the subject -- A Balance Diet and Health.
B. Good morning everyone! Allow me, first of all, on behalf of all present here, to extend our warm welcome and cordial greeting to our distinguished guest.
二.并列用语:
as well as, not only…but (also), including,
A. Not only do computers play an important part in science and technology, but also play an informative role in our daily life.
B. All of us, including the teachers / the teachers included, will attend the lecture.
C. He speaks French as well as English.=He speaks English, and French as well.=He speaks not only English but also French.
D. E-mail, as well as telephones, is playing an important part in daily communication.
三.对比用语:
on one hand ,on the other hand, on the contrary/contrary to ..., though, for one thing ;for another, nevertheless
A. I know the Internet can only be used at home or in the office, but on the other hand, it is becoming more and more popular for much information as well as clear and vivid pictures.
B. It is hard work; I enjoy it though.
C. Contrary to what I had originally thought, the trip turned out to be fun.
四. 递进用语:
even, besides, what’s more, as for, so…that…, worse still, moreover, furthermore; but for, in addition, to make matters worse
A. The house is too small for a family of four, and furthermore/besides/what’s more/moreover /in addition/worse still , it is in a bad location.
五. 例证用语:
in one’s opinion, that is to say, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in fact, namely
A. As a matter of fact, advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.
B. There is one more topic to discuss, namely/that is ( to say ), the question of education.
六. 时序用语:
first/firstly, meanwhile, before long, ever since, while, at the same time
in the meantime, shortly after, nowadays,
A. They will be here soon. Meanwhile, let’s have coffee.
B. Firstly, let me deal with the most important difficulty.
七. 强调用语:
especially, indeed, at least, at the most, What in the world/on earth.. , not at all ,
A. Noise is unpleasant, especially when you are trying to sleep.
B What in the world/on earth are you doing?
八. 因果用语:
thanks to, because, as a result, because of/as a result of , without, with the help of..., owe ...to...
A. The company has a successful year, thanks mainly to the improvement in export sales.
B. As a result, many of us succeeded in passing the College Entrance Examinations.
九. 总结用语:
in short; briefly/ in brief ; generally speaking, in a word, as you know, as is known to all
A. Generally speaking, sending an e-mail is more convenient than sending letters.
B. In short, measures must be taken to prevent the environment being polluted.
篇17:2024高考英语作文素材:常用英语谚语
全文共 2056 字
+ 加入清单1.破釜沉舟 cut off all means of retreat;burn one‘s own way of retreat and be determined to fight to the end
2.瑞雪兆丰年 A timely snow promises a good harvest.
3.比上不足比下有余 worse off than some, better off than many; to fall short of the best, but be better than the worst.
4.笨鸟先飞 A slow sparrow make an early start.
5.不眠之夜 whe night
6.不以物喜不以己悲 not pleased by external gains, not saddened by personnal losses
7.不遗余力 spare no effort; go all out; do ones best
8.不打不成交 No discord, no concord.
9.拆东墙补西墙 rob Peter to pay Paul
10.辞旧迎新 bid farewell to the old and usher in the new; ring out the old year and ring in the new
11.大事化小小事化了 try first to make their mistake sound less serious and then to reduce it to nothing at all
12.大开眼界 open ones eyes; broaden ones horizon; be an eye-opener
13.国泰民安 The country flourishes and people live in peace
14.过犹不及 going too far is as bad as not going far enough; beyond is as wrong as falling short; too much is as bad as too little
15.功夫不负有心人 Everything comes to him who waits.
16.好了伤疤忘了疼 once on shore, one prays no more
17.好事不出门恶事传千里 Good news never goes beyond the gate, while bad news spread far and wide.
18.和气生财 Harmony brings wealth.
19.活到老学到老 One is never too old to learn.
20.既往不咎 let bygones be bygones
21.金无足赤人无完人 Gold cant be pure and man cant be perfect.
22.金玉满堂 Treasures fill the home.
23.脚踏实地 be down-to-earth
24.脚踩两只船 sit on the fence
25.君子之交淡如水 the friendship between gentlemen is as pure as crystal; a hedge between keeps friendship green
26.老生常谈陈词滥调 cut and dried, cliché
27.礼尚往来 Courtesy calls for reciprocity.
28.留得青山在不怕没柴烧 Where there is life, there is hope.
29.马到成功 achieve immediate victory; win instant success
30.名利双收 gain in both fame and wealth
31.茅塞顿开 be suddenly enlightened
32.没有规矩不成方圆 Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards. 33.每逢佳节倍思亲 On festive occasions more than ever one thinks of ones dear ones far away.It is on the festival occasions when one misses his dear most.
34.谋事在人成事在天 The planning lies with man, the outcome with Heaven. Man proposes, God disposes.
35.弄巧成拙 be too smart by half; Cunning outwits itself
篇18:高考英语作文预测邀请函
全文共 1352 字
+ 加入清单假定你是李华,你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年,即将回国。现在由你给她发E-mail,邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会,要点如下:
(1)祝贺她顺利通过考试,她的学习进步很大,为她骄傲;
(2)感谢她帮助你们学习英语;
(3)时间:星期六晚六点;
(4)地点:阳光俱乐部(The Sun Club)302房间;
(5)路线:在你所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。
注意:
(1)须包括以上主要内容,可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯;
(2)词数:100左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)参考词汇:欢送会 farewell party
Dear Jane,Congratulations on your passing all the exams.
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【猜题理由】该素材围绕与学生的日常生活相关的话题,体现"生活化"的特点。本篇写作要求写一篇邀请函,能够充分体现生活实际和语言的交际功能。
【构思点拨】写邀请函时一方面需要说明邀请理由,另 一方面要把活动的时间、地点、乘车路线等细节问题一定要交代清楚。
【参考范文】
Dear Jane,
Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China. All you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English Well always remember the wonderful time we spent together.
Its pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 p.m.? Well have dinner together. By the way,you may take Bus No. 332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
篇19:2024高考英语作文必备词汇大全
全文共 2071 字
+ 加入清单导语:2016年高考正在紧张的复习当中,英语作文是其中不可或缺的一部分。下面是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的英语词汇,希望对您有所帮助。
1.不可否认It is undeniablethat./There is no denying that.
2.采取措施 take effectivemeasures to do sth./something effective must be done to.
3.充分利用 make full use of/take advantage of
4.大有裨益 do good to/be beneficial to
5.导致引起 lead to/give rise to/contribute to
6.对……有害 do harm to/be harmful to
7.奉献社会 make contributions to society
8.毫无疑问 Undoubtedly/There ia no doubt that
9.交流思想 exchange ideas/emotions/information
10.交流情感 exchange emotions
11.解压减负 relieve stress/burden
12.经济负担 financial burden
13.开阔眼界 widen ones horizen/broaden ones vision
14.课业负担 too much homework/heavy burden of homework
15.普遍认为 It is commonly believed /recognized that
16.恰恰相反 in contrast/on the contrary
17.热烈讨论 have a heated discussion/debate
18.投身于 be devoted to
20.扬长避短 adopt ones good pionts and avoid the shortcomings
21.引起关注 draw public attention
22.与某相比 compared with/in comparison with
23.与时俱进 keep pace with times
24.自然资源 valuable natural resources
25.综合素质 comprehensivequality
26.遵守秩序 observe public order/observe discipline
27.把时间精力放在……上 focus ones time and energy on
28.不可推卸的义务 unshakableduty
29.产生有利影响 have positive effects on
30.产生不利影响 have negative effects on
31.持不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
32.考虑到多方面因素 take many factors into account/consideration
33.扩大知识面 expand ones scope of knowledge
34.切实减轻我们的课业负担 effectively reduce our heavy homework assignments
35.身心两方面 both physically and mentally
36.我们生活的各方面 in all aspects of human life
37.因特网方便快捷 Its convenientand efficientto use computer and the Internet.
38.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
39.致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to…
40. 应当承认 Admittedly,
41.不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty
42. 满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of…
43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information
44.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources
45.因特网 the Internet (一定要由冠词,字母I 大写)
46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient
47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life
48.环保(的) environmental protection / environmentally friendly
49.社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress
50.科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology
篇20:酒驾高考英语满分作文
全文共 1555 字
+ 加入清单Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that drunken driving has been a grave problem with which we are confronted. Generally speaking, there are several reasons accounting for /behind this phenomenon. Firstly, recent decades have witnessed the rapid development of people’s living standards. As a result, cars gained ever-increasing popularity and have found their way into our everyday life. Secondly, people participate in more activities or banquets than ever before, where they will drink liquor/strong wine. Then, they may get drunk but continue to drive.
Drunken driving is bound to generate severe consequence if we keep turning a blind eye to it. Firs and foremost, this behavior will directly threaten the safety of drivers, passengers and pedestrians/goers, resulting in traffic accidents, injuries and even deaths. Besides, treating the injured and repairing broken cars mean a grievous waste of money, time and resources. Last but not least, this irresponsible driving will make the road a nightmare, and thus, it will causes serious losses of faith in governments and the society.
In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures must be taken before things gget worse. First, it is essential that the supervisory role of laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drunken driving. Secondly, the public, especially drivers, should enhance their awareness of public safety. With stringent laws and alert public, it will only a matter of time for drunken driving to become things of past.