人物描写英语作文范文15句【汇总20篇】

The giant panda is known as the national treasure of China. The panda was a kind of ordinary animal in China long ago. However, for some reasons, too many of them have been killed. So the number of them is falling quickly.

At present people are taking an important measure to save pandas. People want to find a home for them, and recently, they have set up a nature park for them in Sichuan Province,which is called "Pandas Home. "There pandas can enjoy their life happily. There is a bamboo forest near the Pandas Home. So the pandas can find bamboos easily which they like to eat very much.Because pandas are well protected now, the number of them is increasing every year. We hope that one day we will have enough pandas to set them free and let them live in the wild again.

Pandas are good friends of man. Man should try to protect them and ]et them live in the way they like!

大熊猫被称为中国的国宝。熊猫是一种很普通的动物在中国很久以前。然而,由于一些原因,太多的人被杀。所以它们的数量也急剧下降。

目前人们正在采取重要措施拯救大熊猫。人们想要找到一个家,最近,他们建立了一个自然公园在四川省,叫做“熊猫之家”。“在那儿,熊猫们愉快地享受着它们的生活。“熊猫之家”附近有一片竹林。所以熊猫不用费力就能找到它们爱吃的。因为熊猫受到良好的保护,他们的数量每年都在增加。我们希望有一天我们能够有足够的熊猫时,我们便还它们以自由,让他们重新生活在野外。

熊猫是人类的好朋友。人们应该努力保护他们,等他们住在他们喜欢的方式!

同学，一个多么亲切而又熟悉的字眼。自从上学那天起他们便围绕在你身边，陪伴你度过生活中的每一天。不知不觉已升入初中。

刚刚开学，彼此都不熟悉，这时一个善意的微笑，一支体贴的钢笔，不经意间拉近了我们的距离。

他是我们班普普通通的同学，但他是我在初中阶段里认识的第一个朋友。他有一双大大的眼睛，一个高高的鼻子和一头乌黑的头发。

他的史地政生成绩很好，也非常乐于助人。清晨，一般中学生都来的很早，我到时，他已经来了。他现在正在收作业，我过去向他打招呼，他微笑着点头回应。

这时，一个组员正想从他桌子上拿一本作业来抄，他却拿了回来，并严厉多大的说：“作业是在家里完成的，不是在学校时抄的，就算没写完，也应该自己思考做题，而不是抄！”

别的组员说：“作业是锻炼我们的过程，是老师，家长对我们的考查！”

一听到老师、家长那个组员就怕了，老老实实的自己写去了。

我十分佩服他的这种精神，又在想我遇到了会怎么样？

等我回过神来，看见他正在为一位同学讲解一到题目。他在我心目中的形象又上升了一个台阶。

干净是大多数人所想要的，但又不愿意打扫，因为有些人性情懒惰，可他却不同。

放学后，天气异常的热，我们学校举行大扫除，我和一些同学负责打扫教室。做了许久，许多同学都叫苦连天，停下来休息了。而他却在一旁默默无闻地打扫着，他干得大汗淋漓，挥汗如雨。他头上的电风扇时不时的掉下来一些灰尘在他的头上，尘土与汗水混在一起，他用手一抹，脸上立刻变脏了。他却不在意他继续打扫卫生。看到这一切，平时，他非常在意个人卫生，可现在却满不在乎。我被这种集体精神给打动了，情不自禁的走过去，劝他休息一下，等一下我们一起做，他却不肯，他这样我也只能和他一起打扫卫生了。最后，整个教室被我们打扫得干干净净，一尘不染。看见了我们的劳动成果，我们欣慰的笑了，笑得很开心。从此我们的友谊更加深了。

他就是这样正直、乐于助人、热爱集体、爱干净、很勤奋的人。

My grandmothers dog called "Huanhuan", its head round yo, ears particularly sensitive, his face covered with fluff. Its limbs are very strong, walking, the tail of a Alice Alice, like a spring like a very cute.

Do not look at it looks ugly, but it is housekeeping wow! Whenever you see grandfather, grandmother and me, it can not live to shake the tail, that it is affectionate to us. Especially when I came to the grandmother every weekend, it jumped and jumped to meet me. As if to say: "little master, I can look forward to you!" If there are strangers passing, he "bark" called a non-stop.

Puppy Huanhuan very much like to eat bones, it saw the bones happy to jump up. Of course, it is more like to eat meat, I just throw the meat to the air, it immediately jumped up, and in the air two laps. And then devoured the meat to eat, it is always a wonderful performance to win our laughter.

Although I rarely live with the puppy, but I am not around it, I always miss it. Ill have time to see it.

[描写小狗的英语作文集锦

A good friend of mine is Zhang Yachun. Her eyes are big and round, bright, like a black pearl, beautiful black hair, like heaven planetesimals, skin white and tender, like a small baby, likeable.

Chuns personality is optimistic, have a happy thing, can share with me, not happy mood, I will share with her. Her body is very soft, you can easily when they are cheating on low back, let everybody envy very much, on the expression of sports subject always let people sit up and take notice, not only that, even comity people daily life, everywhere for others, as a kind of angel, won everyones favorite.

Remember when we first read the kindergarten, she always took me by the hand tightly, walk around with me, at that time, I think each other like blood sisters, Im impressed. Every time I go to her home to play with barbie dolls, she is the most beautiful for me, I admire her spirit of comity, because I cant do that, I think she is a thoughtful, considerate and sensible man.

Im very glad to have such a good friend, I hope we always keep a warm friendship, becoming the best childhood memories.

我的好朋友是张雅淳。她的眼睛又大又圆、明亮有神，就像黑珍珠，头发乌黑亮丽，好似天上的星子，皮肤又白又嫩，有如小婴儿，令人喜爱。

雅淳的个性很乐观，有快乐的事时，就会和我分享，心情不愉快时，我也会和她一起分忧。她的身体很柔软，劈腿时很容易就可以下腰，让大家非常羡慕，在体育科目的表现上总是让人刮目相看，不仅如此，连日常生活都礼让别人，处处为别人着想，犹如一位和蔼可亲的小天使，赢得大家的喜爱。

记得我们第一次读幼儿园时，她总是紧紧牵着我的手，带着我到处走来走去，那时候，我觉得彼此好像亲姐妹，我留下深刻的印象。每一次我去她家玩芭比娃娃，她都把最漂亮的留给我，我好佩服她的礼让精神，因为我做不到，我觉得她是一个善解人意、体贴懂事的人。

我很高兴有这么好的朋友，我希望我们永远保持温馨的友谊，成为童年最好的回忆。

New Years Day is one of important days for many people in the world during the year. Most people spend the New Years Day in hotels. January 1st is considered as the New Years Day. Most companies, shops, school, and government offices are closed during that time. People prepare for New Years Day from late December. First, people spend a few days to clean their houses completely. Some families then put up some new painting from November to be sent in January. The New Years meal is also prepared from the end of December. During the New Years Day, people usually do not cook and relax at home. On New Years Eve, it is common to have a bag dinner with family members or friends at home or in hotels and hear bells which informs us of the coming New Year. On New Years Day, people greet each other. Some people wear new coats and visit temples to pray for happiness and health through out the New Year. Children are busy with getting the gifts from their parents and relatives.

[描写元旦的英语作文

The Mid-Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn is a very important Chinese festival. It falls on the 15th day of August. A few days before the festival, everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful. Lanterns will be hung in front of the house.

On the evening there will be a big family dinner. People who work far away from their homes will try to come back for the union. After dinner, people will light the lanterns which are usually red and round. Children will play with their own toy lanterns happily.

At night the moon is usually round and bright. People can enjoy the moon while eating moon-cakes which are the special food for this festival. They can look back on the past and look forward to the future together. It is said that there was a dragon in the sky. The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon. To protect the frighten the dragon away.

我有一个特别可爱的妹妹，一双水灵灵的大眼睛，一个马尾辫绑在后面。满头的卡子，让人看的眼花缭乱，你说她是不是一个“爱臭美鬼”

记得有一次，我们一家去上街，我跟姑姑去买饰品，妹妹跟妈妈吃东西，但她一听到我们要去买饰品这个“重大的消息”,“哭死哭活”的要跟我们去，所以妈妈只好一个人去吃东西喽！！我们到了首饰店，她一眼就看中了一个粉红的链子，上面挂着一些小星星和小月亮，嚷嚷着让我们给她买，姑姑一看价格吓了一大跳“19元！太贵了，太贵了，糖糖（妹妹的小名）我们不买好不好？”妹妹一看姑姑不给她买，又要发哭功了！姑姑一看大势不好，立马同意了，看着妹妹那张脸笑跟一朵花似得的，姑姑叹了一句：“真是太臭美了！！”妹妹又是连拉带扯的拉着姑姑去买卡子，一进那个店，就买哪个买这个。看着妹妹又要进另一家，姑姑转身就跑，看着姑姑那落荒而逃的背影我哈哈大笑起来。

妹妹的衣服“多如山”,可每天还在挑，“我不穿这个裤子！这个裤子不好看！我要穿那个裙子——”衣服穿好了面临的又是写的危机。婆婆要她穿那双黑色的皮鞋，可她——“我不穿这个！我要穿新买的鞋子！”唉——这是太麻烦了！ 你说我这个妹妹是不是很臭美

[四年级人物描写作文

Spring, I never had strong feeling to spring before last year. Some people said spring should be a happy season. But I never sensed that. I always liked the autumn because I thought autumn was a romantic season. I liked summer when I was very young for I loved my skirt with lace.Now, I still like autumn and summer,while I like spring and winter. Before I disliked the various colors of the flowers,and I thought they are flighty and superficial. I thought only only the blue ocean is deep, the golden autumn is elegant. However, now I have a different idea that I find spring wonderful. I like the blossom in the field and in the moutain. From them I am spirited with life.

Spring is a wonderful season.Its getting warmer and warmer.People take off their heavy coat.The flowers begin to open .They are very beautiful and lovey.THe trees begin to turn green.The birds begin to sing here and there.Its often windy.So many people with their child to go to th park .THey like to fly kites.Look th grasses are grow up.The butterflies and the bees are flying.They are very happy too.

I like spring very much.Because it is very interesting and fun.What a beautiful spring!

一双水灵灵的大眼睛，一张胖乎乎的圆脸蛋儿，皮肤又白又嫩，笑的时候会露出一对儿小酒窝，这就是我--廖明杰，一个过着平凡而又快乐生活的男孩。

我的爱好很多，但最爱的是英语、唱歌和朗诵。在朗诵方面也很出色，在闽侯县朗诵比赛中获得了三等奖，我还是语文老师的秘密武器呢！我最得意的方面是英语，()在刚刚结束的第八届海淀区英语风采大赛中，我获得了一等奖！

我上学快两年了，交了很多好朋友，有机灵古怪的杜洋、活泼可爱的乐天惠、刻苦学习的孙际童、团结友爱的刘河沐、淘气惹事的綦家桢……我的人气可旺了，大家都叫我“小可爱。”

这就是我，你们喜欢我吗？

My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak. With her eyes,she observed my mood, gave me courage and made me strong. Therefore, I could face difficulties.

When I was a baby learning to walk, my mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to get up while I fell down. As I finally threw myself into her arms, her eyes smiled with praise. Later as I grew up, I met with more difficulties. But whenever I was frustrated, my mothers eyes always

gave me hope and encouragement. Once I failed in exams, my mother encouraged me to find out the reasons. Instead of blaming me she pushed me to do better. At last I overcame the difficulty. Now I have grown up and become more independent, but whenever I come across setbacks, my mothers eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.

我母亲有一双敏锐的、会说话的眼睛.那双眼睛能洞察我的心情,给我鼓励,促我坚强,因此我能面对一切困难.

孩提学步时,妈妈总是帮助我,鼓励我摔倒了就爬起来.最后我晃晃悠悠地扑进她怀抱时,她的双眼充满了赞扬之情.成长过程中,我遇到了很多困难,但灰心失望时,妈妈的双眼总给我以希望和鼓励.一次我考试不及格,妈妈没有责备我,而是鼓励我找出原因,提高我的成绩.最后我终于度过了难关.现在,我长大了,不用再让她操心了.但每当遇到挫折时,妈妈的眼睛总是伴随着我,给我鼓励

I have a few small goldfish, they are lively and lovely, I like them very much. Small goldfish small and exquisite, there is a pair of grapes like big eyes, maple-shaped tail, the back of the fin fins to it that gold body fitted with a beautiful big fan.

Little goldfish eat very special. Once, I put a few fish food thrown into the water, a few fish met, quickly swim up to compete for fish food. I thought they would swallow up immediately, but their actions surprised me: grab the food of the fish first in the food in his mouth, and then spit out the food, and then swim up to catch it with the mouth, and finally The food completely swallowed it in the stomach. Where is the food, it is clear in the game it!

Little goldfish sleep more interesting! One night on the night I secretly got out of bed, by the outside of the faint light to see the small goldfish, found that small goldfish motionless, eyes also greatly open. I thought: they will not die! So knocked on the fish tank, a few small goldfish but quickly wandered. I suddenly realized, remembered the previous mother told me: "fish is no eyelids."

One morning, when I had breakfast, I went to see them. There are many small goldfish feces floating in the fish tank, the water has been turbid, and that they change the water. I carefully put the fish tank to the pool side, want to catch the fish ready to clean the basin. I was about to reach into the fish tank, my mother immediately stopped me: "Go and wash your hands, your hands have the taste of hand cream, will kill the fish!" I quickly wash your hands, and then stroked the sleeves, Began to catch fish. Hey! Fish really flexible, while fled to the east, while the channeling west, but how can not escape my palm. I was proud of it, "rip" it slipped away, I spent a lot of effort, and finally all the fish into the basin of water. And then the fish tank in the dirty water drained, and rinse, and finally the pot of fish and water poured into the fish tank.

Small goldfish really interesting! I think, as long as careful observation, after their own will find the little goldfish more special.

我的外婆今年69岁了，她既勤劳又善良。有着一双饱经沧桑的大手。手指间的关节布满深深的血丝，手心里非常粗糙，长满了密密麻麻的茧子，手背上表皮结成了块状。这是我外婆非常勤劳的结果。我外婆的眼睛小而炯炯有神，心灵还是那么善良，手还是那么巧。瞧，外婆正在包清明团子呢！我们赶快过去看看吧！

外婆先拿出必备用品——源自山上的纯正野菜干，米粉、糖汁、模具。一切准备就绪之后，外婆用清水洗干净手，开始忙活了。看着外婆忙碌地很，我们也跃跃欲试想要来干一干。

首先将野菜干切碎，把野菜粉混入面粉里，浇上清水适量，然后开始揉面团。待到面粉软了，颜色也变成正常的青绿色之后，再开始一点一点开始揉出略大些的面块，用手掰开来，加入糖汁之后包好，用模具一压，一个饼就做好了。待到野菜面团用完了，也就做好了三十多个饼儿。

接下来是最关键的——烧。要是没有烧好，那么费尽心思栽来的山中野菜就白费了，并且上面的图案也没有了。别急，外婆可是有经验着呢！她拿出编好的竹盘子盛饼，小心地放到锅里煮，一次煮六个！原来能煮八个十个，她只弄六个，那是为了通气，这样饼才做得好。不一会儿，三十多个饼全部煮完了。

外婆做的清明团子有着浓厚的乡村气息。一个个清明团子上印着鲤鱼跃龙门的花纹，左上方有一个太阳，中间有着一条大鱼，栩栩如生，又张牙舞爪，惹的我急不可待地冲上去，抓起一个清明团子，猛地一咬，鱼头断了，太阳也被损失了大半。甜甜的糖汁滚到嘴里，甜到心里。特甜特过瘾！不愧是我外婆的巧手做的。

有空来咱们家尝尝我外婆做的清明团子吧！我们恭候您的光临。我外婆做的清明团子肯定让你回味无穷。

1、哥哥的眼睛高度近视，处处离不开眼镜，就像个“睁眼瞎子”一样，只要把他的眼镜摘下来，在我面前他就像绵羊一样服服帖帖。一天下午，哥哥要洗头了。他吩咐我给他拿肥皂换水。我得意地想：哼！我先给你跑跑腿，然后再治你。一会儿，哥哥伸长了脖子，把肥皂沫打得满头满脸都是。我一看时机到了，就悄悄地把哥哥的盆拿走了。哥哥搓完后去洗头，一捧水，捧了个空。他忙去找，可刚一睁眼，肥皂沫就杀得他直流眼泪。他像盲人摸路一样，东摸摸，西摸摸，好容易才摸起了毛巾，把眼一擦，可眼睛还是模糊的，就去找他的眼镜。

2、靠近东窗，坐着一个年轻的解放军战士。被汗水浸透了洗得发白的军衣，紧裹着他那健壮而匀称的身躯。他那白中透红的清秀的面孔，像涂了油彩似的闪闪发光。两条漆黑的、细长的眉毛，有力地向上扬，将到顶端时，才弯成形。一双像熟透了的葡萄一样又黑又大的眼睛，机灵地、警觉地扫视着充满汗味和传出鼾声的车厢。他的右手，很自然地伸到衣襟下面，汗湿的手掌，轻轻握着腰间的小工具。

3、看上去，杜老师也就30来岁，那张严肃的长方形脸上戴着一副黑宽边眼镜，两只不大的眼睛在镜片后边闪着亮光；两个嘴角总是紧紧闭着，平时很不爱说话。在我的记忆里，好像他只有那么一身半新不旧的蓝衣服，袖子也总爱往上挽一截。每当下课的时候，他就把书本往胳肢窝下一夹，把用剩下的半截粉笔往口袋里一装，低着头，像找来时的脚印似的，慢慢地，一步步向着自己的办公室走去。可是，在课堂上，他像变成了另一个人。他讲起课来滔滔不绝，朗读起课文来声音异常洪亮，有时还会激动得脸上放出红光，一步跨到讲台前，挥舞着手臂……同学们的注意力都被他吸引住了，睁大眼睛看着他。

The little egret is a delicate poetry.

Pigment, gestures, everything is appropriate.

The White crane is too large, too stiff, pink Ibis or grey heron, also think big, and too unusual.

However, egrets are because its common, and oblivion its beauty.

The snow-white body hair, it s a streamlined structure, the iron color growing, cyans feet, one of the increasing by one of reducing too long, too short branch, one of the suspicion of swells and white Diane come at the expense of one of the suspicion of the dark.

In clear water when there is a field only two standing fishing, the entire field has become a site of embedded in the glass box. The size of the field as Egret design seems to people from all walks of the mirror box.

Sunny in the morning, saw it alone at the apex of the tree stand, it seems as if it is not stable, yet it is. This is the other birds difficult performance hobby. People say that it is within our grasp whistle, it really is in sight whistle? twilight sky rare low-flying egret is a rural life in favor. It was clear to visualize, and have a life.

Some people might feel beauty, Egret cant sing. However, egrets are not of itself is a very beautiful songs?-no, the reason the song too.

The little egret is a poem, a charm in the heart of prose poems.

Autumn weather is clear, breeze Xu to.

The flowers in the garden are colorful and colorful. There are lovely trumpet, like a small speaker. There are blood red roses, you see it red face, too cute! There are yellow tulips, smell a smell, really fragrant!

Here the grass color is different, there are dark green, light green, there are green and yellow and white. Suddenly a sudden wind blowing, flowers and grass like a bit of a singer, singing from the first wonderful march, really lively it!

These wonderful march, caused a group of small bees and dancing butterflies, they sing and dance, held a grand dance.

Autumn garden really beautiful!

听说我这学期要换新老师了，这可是件大事呢！同学们说新老师还是位名师呢，我兴奋不已，早就想目睹一下名师的风采。

随着清脆的铃声，新老师终于来了。只见她相貌平平，扎着短发，皮肤稍微有点黑。

老师面带微笑走上讲台，啊！老师的笑多么灿烂，多么迷人啊！老师清了清嗓子说：“我姓金，你们数学老师姓黄，我们俩可是黄金搭档。”这一句话逗得我们全班同学都哈哈大笑。金老师那么幽默，使我一下子就喜欢上了她，更喜欢听她上的语文课。

金老师出口成章，妙语连珠。金老师读书的声音很优美，娓娓动听。()你听：“老师，这一切也许您已经忘了，因为您为学生做得太多太多……”金老师声情并茂的朗读把我们带入到书中的情景中去。听着听着，陶醉在其中。不管什么时候，金老师的脸上都挂着灿烂的笑容，犹如一朵盛开的菊花，加上她优美的朗读，让我们觉得听金老师的课真是一种享受。

金老师也是严厉的。那天下午，老师的脸上没有了往日熟悉的笑容，而是阴沉沉地走进教室，我预感到老师生气了。果然不出我所料，同学们一个二个接二连三被叫上台。原因是字迹潦草，抄阅的次数少……弄得我们担心吊胆，生怕被叫到。老师虎着脸，大声地训斥着我们，让我们对老师增添了几分敬畏感。

这几天，在课余课后，我们都说新来的金老师真好。

因为对人物思想性格的塑造离不开内心世界的描写。一种是对人物内心世界直接进行描写，写其怎么想，怎么感觉。比如课本中的《一件小事》，当“我”看到车夫送老女人向巡警驻所走去时，就有一段心理直接写，揭示了一名知识分子在“一件小事”中的心灵震动。另一种是对内心世界进行间接描写，这种描写，最重要的是语言描写，因为言为心声，通过对人物语言的描写，便可将人物的思想性格刻画出来。人物语言的描写，通常是以对话的方式体现出来的。对话描写要注意以下几个方面：一是力求显示人物的性格。人物要说自己会说的话，该说的话，而不是作者代替别人说话。二是要力求简单，切忌唠叨。

人物语言不能原样直录生活中的语言，需要修饰加工，使其简洁、明快，反映出说话者的特征。三是人物的话语还要和表情、动作描写结合起来，相辅相成。

人物描写作文课件小学，仅供参考。

一、教学目标：

1、知识与能力：了解并掌握人物刻画的方法技巧，将人物写活，提高人物形象塑造能力。掌握考场作文的构思过程。

2、过程与方法：阅读分析判断文学作品中使用描写的让人物活起来的方法。

3、情感态度与价值观：培养学生学会真诚做人，学会生活。

二、教学重点、难点：掌握人物描写的方法技巧，生动形象地塑造人物形象。

三、教学时数：一课时

四、教学过程：

一、情境导入。（同时设置情景：一个学生迟到从外面匆忙走进来。师：哟，不知鄙人在此军事演习嗦，怎么才大驾光临呢？请入座）

下面请同学们猜猜他是谁？

忽然，他看见脚底下有东西在动，他猫腰一看，原来是一堆报纸他刚要伸手拿报纸，“哗”地一声响，从报纸堆里坐起一个睡得迷迷糊糊的孩子，光光的脑袋上只有三根毛！这个孩子是--（三毛）（屏显）

（过渡语：你是根据什么猜出来的呢？一下子就猜出来的原因呢？是抓住了人物的独特的特征）什么特征呢？

师：瞧，这就是典型的细节与描写结合以后所产生的文字魅力。让我们认识了苦命的三毛。

那同学们想不想学习如何把人物写得如此传神呢？好吧，那今天我们就来学习人物描写的方法。（板书：人物描写）

二、探究方法。

“问询人物描写法”的秘笈在哪里？“为有大师作品里。”

读下面大师作品选段，小组内思考、讨论，(分七个大组，每小组第3人，每两组完成一个题)(（完后抽生汇报并屏幕显示）(过渡语;概括起来的方法有)（板书：方法）（过渡语;通过这些描写的作用呢？）（作用：刻画性格）

三、小试牛刀（口语表达）。

1、（过渡语：刚才同学们从大师那里学到这么多的描写人物的方法，想不想试一试呢？现在我们就用刚才概括的方法）说说这节课迟到的同学。（选择一点，放在具体的情境中，说你印象最深刻的地方，看谁说得最生动形象）（屏显）

2、展示学生眼中的迟到同学的形象文字。

展示时思考：你们是通过哪些方法将迟到的同学写活的？（屏显）

（那现在我们给这个片段命一个题目）

（过渡语：通过刚才的描绘小结一下）

3、小结：作文中人物描写有哪些要求？（屏显）

人物描写的三大要求：真、精、细。

4、那推而广之：“写人物的记叙文体片段作文”有哪些要求呢？（屏显）（学生回答后才显示）

四、退而结网--学以致用

过渡语：好，我们有了如此多的巧方法在手，现在我们“磨刀霍霍向生活”，相信同学会把生活中的人物描绘得很精彩。

同学们，在你们与同学们相处的过程中，肯定有许多精彩感人的情景：一个背影、一次牵手、一句叮嘱、一则短信、一个电话、一个手势无不蕴含着浓浓的深情和深深的爱意，请同学们打开记忆的闸门，以“难忘”为题，描写这个情景中的一个人物，100字左右。

（过渡语：成功的写作要先构思，怎么构思呢？围绕以下几方面来进行。）

1、酝酿构思。（抽生回答后才写）

⑴、主人公给我印象最深的一件事（标题或事件）：

⑵、事件中凸现的主人公的性格是：

⑶、我打算用什么方法将主人公写活？（2种以上）

2、要求内容充实，要写活，要有真情实感，写一百字左右的片段作文。

3、初写草稿。

（过渡语：下面我们一起来分享一下成果）

五、作品展示。（读后，教师或学生点评。点评时围绕场面描写和人物描写的要求，可适当根据评分标准打分。如果没完的，可适当补充和修改。）

六、总结：通过这节课的学习，你有什么收获？说出来与大家分享。

今天仅完成生活情景中的人物描写，至于情景描写还有哪些要求呢？我们留待以后的作文教学中。同学们，说屏显祝语

七、板书设计：

方法：外貌、动作、语言、

[人物描写作文课件小学

A New Year has begun, everyone will have a few new hope, I also like everyone, and hope to be able to achieve.

Resolutions of the first is: I hope my body health, can grow a bit, a bit fatter, this can increase the resistance, less sick, so Im going to exercise more, maintain the vitality of the body.

Resolutions are 2: I hope my brothers and sisters to academic progress, my father, mother, aunt, uncle, aunt and aunt can have a long career, grandma grandpa, grandma, and physical well-being, at the same time also hope that all concerned about me, take care of me, with my friends and relatives, teachers, students can be healthy, happy, happiness and peace.

My New Years resolution is 3: I hope my academic progress, can write speed faster, so that the rest of my time can be used to read more extra-curricular books, let me learn more knowledge, know more interesting things, believe that life will be more colorful.

Finally, my hope is that the economy of our country can be a bit better, let those unemployed, poor people in society, there is a job can be done, let their children can be happy go to school, to find their happiness. Although I can do now is limited, but I in my heart silently pray for them.

Everyone wants to finish his resolutions, I also hope I want to be able to realize, so it must be hard to achieve,) do his bit to handle yourself, believe that hope things will be realized one by one.

新的一年已经开始，每个人多多少少都会有几个新的希望，我也和大家一样，并且希望都能够实现。

我的新年新希望第一是：希望我的身体健康，能够长高一点，长胖一点，这样就能增加抵抗力，比较不会生病，所以我要多运动，保持身体的活力。

我的新年新希望第二是：希望我的兄弟姐妹能学业进步，我的爸爸、妈妈、阿姨、伯父、伯母和姑姑能事业顺利，爷爷、奶奶和外婆身体安康，同时也希望所有关心我、照顾我、陪伴我的亲朋好友、师长、同学都能身体健康、开开心心，而且平安幸福。

我的新年新希望第三是：希望我的课业进步，写字速度能够再快一点，这样我剩下的时间就可以用来阅读更多的课外书籍，让我了解更多知识，认识更多有趣的事物，相信这样生活一定会更多采多姿。

最后，我的希望是：我们国家的经济能够好一点，让社会上那些失业、穷困的人，有工作可以做，让他们的小孩能够快快乐乐的去学校上课，找回他们的幸福。虽然我现在能做的有限，但是我在心里默默的为他们祈祷。

每个人都想要完成自己的新年新希望，我也期望我的希望能够实现，所以就必须认真去达成，尽到自己的本分，管好自己，相信这样希望的事情一定会一一实现。

We all like to make friends, because no one can survive without a friend. If you ask someone how many friends do they have, most will answer a lot. Indeed, we make friends in different stage, even we are old, we still make friends. But not all friends are as honest as they are, some friends we made since we are young, some are just meet a couple of times and we don’t know much about them. The former are real friends, while the latter are not true friends. What is the real friend, a real friend is someone who you can talk about anything and can be show up the moment you need. Other friends are just for drinking and eating, they will not help you if you are in trouble. When we make friends, the real one is what we need.

在我的记忆里，和父亲真正的沟通很少，他总是用那严厉的目光谆谆教导着我。父亲他平常话语虽多，可从是没有几个正题。在很小很小的时候，我成绩很好他也不太管我应该说是似管非管。。。

我五年级的时候就出去上学，很少回家，每次回家的时候父亲总是用那严厉而又慈爱的目光看着我，每次都想有好多的话要和我说，可又卡住了。

真正了解父亲的是这次月考，考试之前，爸爸他千叮宁万嘱咐要考好，在考试的前一天晚上，妈妈给我打了一个电话，说：你把昨天晚上做了一个梦，说所有的孩子成绩都比你高，他急得一个晚上都没睡觉。这虽然是一句简简单单的话，可是我哭了快一个小时，我知道爸爸一直在念着我，他怕我考不好。。。

月考过后，成绩下来了，不是很理想，爸爸什么也没说，只是一个劲抽着烟，我不敢直视着爸爸的眼睛，我对不起爸爸。在昨天，刚回家，看见爸爸翻着我的日记本，我的心好痛，抢了过来:爸，这是我的个人隐私你知道吗？你怎么可以这样。爸爸用他那独有的眼睛看着我，无奈的摇了摇头。我不知道该怎么办才好，第二天我补完课回家了，刚和一个同学下楼的时候，似乎感觉有一个人影一晃而过，可没太注意，过了一会快到家了，我看见爸爸从我后面闪出来，他问我：那个男生是谁哪的叫什么，我一下子愣住了，爸爸，是爸爸，他竟然跟踪我，胡到家后我哭了一个通宵，甚至有自杀的念头，可后来想通了，算了，他也是为了我好。

后来，奶奶告诉我，爸爸的肝病犯了，我的泪水夺眶而出，爸爸，对不起，我错了，是女儿的错，爸爸原谅我。。。

爸爸，我爱您。