人物描写英语作文范文15句（热门20篇）

我的外婆，天只是蒙蒙亮就起床了，背着一个箩兜，拿起镰刀，就一步一步地朝自己的树林里走去，外婆弯着腰，拣起一根小柴棒，一根，两根，三根、、、、、不过多久，箩兜装满了

她吃力地背起箩筐，一步一步地往家走，回到家，外婆放下箩兜，没有休息又提着一大个竹篮往菜园走去，不一会儿，就到了菜园，外婆拿起镰刀朝一大株青菜砍去，—下午，外婆吃完饭

来到了放在储存室以久的一捆捆柴，外婆背着一捆柴火，迈出了艰难的步伐，就这样，外婆来回了许多次，终于把柴火搬运完了。 一个人的力量虽小，但拥有了铁一般的意志以后，便得到了无穷的力量

可见，愚公移山精神是如此的强大，今天搬一点，明天搬一点，总会有一天会都搬完的，日复一日，一年的秋天又到来了，外婆得到了应有的回报，收成异 常丰富，可谓俗话说得好：功夫不负有心人，用来形容我的外婆恰倒好处。

看着外婆，我不禁想起了爸爸说过的话：如果中国没有像外婆这些为人民任劳任怨种粮食的农民，中国的资金已不成问题，但是中国缺的还是粮食，如果没了粮食，你有再多的钱，没有人买粮食给你吃

那么到底你只是会饿死了，从这点就已经可以看出，农民是我们的脊梁骨，没有了他们，就如同我们一个完整的人没有了脊梁骨，那么我们还能活吗，当然，我们就不能活了。

但在农村，有一些农村的小伙子，他们不愿种庄稼，都去外地打工去了，有时别人问起自己的身世，为了不让别人瞧不起，就隐瞒说自己是农民。就算让这块地枯死了，他一不管，还觉得什么事都没，放着这主上传下来的田枯死。

是啊，农民是我们的脊梁骨，没了他们，我们就垮了，但是，还有那么一些人，总是瞧不起农民，农民怎么了，农民就不是人了吗，都是一条生命，怎么能说是不平等呢，难道城里人就是天，农村人就是地吗。

怎么能这么说话呢，这是不对的。还有那些小伙子也真是的，是农民又怎么了，现在，中国也只是一个农业大国，没有了农民，中国人吃什么，放着主上留下来的农田不种，让它变成荒地，这也算是大不孝了吧。

新闻联播经常提到“三农”这两个字眼，那么，“三农”到底指的是什么呢？“三农”指的是：农业、农村、农民。那么，xx为什么要提出“三农”呢？因为总书记想让我们重视农民、农业、农村，不让我们再歧视农民

因为，我们已经明白，农民是我们的脊梁骨，为我们种出可口的粮食，现在，像我外婆这样兢兢业业的农民已经没有多少了。哎！真像九斤老太所说的：“真是一代不如 一代了啊”。

我的外婆，一个普普通通的人，但是，外婆是一个已经70岁的老人了，外婆其实可以不种庄稼了，自己可以安度晚年的，可是外婆却没有，还在兢兢业业的种庄稼，大家都叫她别去种地了，可是她却不能闲下来，是因为她勤劳的性格。

[描写一个人物的作文

无论在哪里，只要牵着你的手，就会心安。

——题记

晴天。

你牵着我的手，一步一步地走。不厌其烦地陪我玩堆沙子、和泥巴。你的身上、脸上爬上了淘气的泥点子，你的眼神也从未离开过我。你尽可能地满足我的物质要求，哪怕我犯了错，你还是会选择在某个晴天，牵着我的手，去买我渴望的东西。

这让我知道，你是爱我的。

雨天。

我坐在教室里，看外面的雨滴，发愁该怎么回家。

我的视线，突然被一把蓝色的伞所吸引。

那是怎样纯洁无瑕的蓝啊，比天空还要纯净，比海还要透明。

知道那把伞的主人转过头来，才发现那是一张多么熟悉的脸。只是，你的眼角出现了少许皱纹，不再是那个年轻的你。你捕捉到了我的目光，转过头，与我的视线碰撞到了一起。

我出门找到了你，你一手撑着伞，一手牵着我。撑伞的手一直努力地往我这边靠。你右半个身子已经完全湿透，牵着我的手依旧不肯放开。

眼泪突然一下控制不住，簌簌地落下来。

这让我知道，你是爱我的。

雪天。

你帮我带上围巾、帽子、穿上厚厚的棉衣，却怎么也找不到另一只手套。从学校到家不远的距离，但对于少了一只手套的我来说，足以让我感到寒冷。

你的眼神从焦急，倏的变成明亮。牵着我少了一只手套的手往假的方向走。我冻得快麻木的手，正在慢慢地找回自己的体温。我们两个人的脚印一直延续到了家，你一直没有放开我的手。我的手温热，你的手冰凉。

这让我知道，你是爱我的。

而你的名字，就叫母亲。

My mother’s name is nancy. She has long hair, two big eyes My mother likes sports and shopping. Her favourite sports are football and yoga. And her favourite food is ice cream. She also likes dogs and cats.

我母亲的名字是南茜。她有长长的头发，两只大眼睛，我的母亲喜欢运动和购物。她最喜欢的运动是足球，瑜伽。她最喜欢的食物是冰激凌。她也喜欢狗和猫。

My mother is a high school techer, she works very hard and does very well in the school.

我的妈妈是一个中学老师，她工作很努力，也很好的学校。

My mother also concerns my study. She always helps me study and play the piano. She is very glad when I make progress.

我妈妈也很关心我的学习。她总是帮助我学习和弹钢琴。她很高兴，当我取得进步。

My mother loves me very much. And I love my mother too!

我非常爱我的母亲。我爱我的母亲!

Ive been to a lot of beautiful places, but in my mind, the most important thing in my mind is the Forbidden City.

The Forbidden City is a place where the ancient emperor of China can live. The imperial palace has: temple of heaven, echo wall, emperors study and so on many beautiful places. There are colorful flowers in the temple of heaven, very beautiful. The flowers and grasses and the famous flowers and plants are all numerous and numerous, very beautiful, far from looking like a colorful flower in the open. Like a fairyland on earth. The temple of heaven is not a famous artist.

The echo wall is a miracle of acoustics, which is a masterpiece of ancient craftsman. The wall tiles of the echo wall are not as strong as others. It is specially made in shandong linqing place. The slurry brick is exquisite, and the sound of the metal sound, commonly known as the gold brick. If you shout in the echo wall, the echo will be strong.

Its better to see if you have the chance, and believe that it will make you feel better.

My neighbour

I have lots of neighbours but I like Aunt Huang best. She is in her forties. She is slim and pretty with a round face. She is a medium heght with a pair of glasses on her small nose. She is friendly and helpful. When we have troubles, she always helps us. She likes traveling and reading books. She often tells us the places she has been and the stories. She also likes animals and she has a dog named Diandian and she often walks her dog. She sometimes play badminton with her husband. She is so kind that we all love her very much.

Perhaps the most vital person I have ever met is an Italian professor of philosophy who teaches at the University of Pisa.Although I last met this man eight years ago， I have not forgotten his special qualities.

First of all，I was impressed by his devotion to teaching. Because his lectures were always well-prepared and clearly delivered， students swarmed into his classroom. His followers appreciated the fact that he believed in what he taught and that he was intellectually stimulating.Furthermore， he could be counted on to explain his ideas in an imaginative way，introducing such aids to understanding as paintings， recordings，pieces of sculpture， and guest lecturers.

Once he even sang a song in class to illustrate a point. Second， I admired the fact that he would confer with students outside of the classroom or talk with them on the telephone. Drinking coffee in the snack bar， he would easily make friends with students. Sometimes he would challenge a student to a game of chess. At other times， he would join groups to discuss subjects ranging from astronomy to scuba diving. Many young people visited him in his office for academic advice； others came to his home for social evenings.

Finally，I was attracted by his lively wit. He believed that no class hour is a success unless the students and the professor share several chuckles and at least one loud laugh.Through his sense of humor， he made learning more enjoyable and more lasting.If it is true that life makes a wise man smile and a foolish man cry，then my friend is truly a wise man. Probably the best example of his wit is this bit of wisdom with which he once ended a lecture：“It is as dangerous for man to model himself upon his invention， the machine，as it would be for God to model Himself upon His invention.”

[大学英语作文人物

At the beginning of May each year five China is the most traditional festival, the Dragon Boat festival.

In the festival, we get up early in the morning. Suddenly, I heard a smell of fragrance. I ran over to see it. What a big pot of zongzi! How sweet it is! Greedy dead me! Look at the next pot, wow! There is also a big basin of snowy white duck eggs and garlic. It looks lovely and I want to eat. Mom said, "hurry up and wash your face and brush your teeth." After I washed, I sat around the table. Dad put rice dumplings, duck eggs, eggs and garlic on the table. Our family finished our breakfast happily and cheerfully.

Then I went to the vegetable market with my father and mother to buy rice field eel and amaranth, and I asked my mother why I want to buy these things. My mother said, "this is the custom of Dragon Boat Festival". I still dont understand, but nodded. Later, my mother took me to buy some green grass to go home. Give me a bath with wormwood soaked mother, I asked why the mother with wormwood bath? Mother said, "because this mosquito doesnt sting you." The mother and the rest of the ed in the door, I asked my mother why the wormwood are ed in the door? Mom said, "because this mosquito will not fly to our house."

After the bath, my mother told me that there was another name called "dolls Day" on the Dragon Boat Festival. At last, mom wore colorful knits on my hands. Today, I know a lot of knowledge about five sessions. I am so happy.

“快，快切！”没错，爸爸正在教爷爷玩切水果游戏——一个风靡世界的游戏。“诶，好。对，不能切炸弹。那儿还有个西瓜，对！切的好。”听到爸爸的赞赏，爷爷嘻嘻的笑了，笑得那么天真，有几涎口水流了下来也不知道，像个小孩子得到了夸奖一样。

爷爷真的老了，上星期爷爷做检查，查出了脑梗与脑萎缩，爸爸急坏了。在晚上，他破天荒的开了一次家庭会议，决定将本是我生日礼物的ipad拿到爷爷家。让爷爷玩一玩上面的游戏，锻炼大脑，防止脑萎缩。

“宏”爷爷叫着爸爸的乳名，爸爸转过身，一只手搭在爷爷肩膀上，轻轻的，像母亲对待自己的孩子一样：“怎么啦？”

“炸弹不能切吧？”爷爷问。

“对，真聪明。除了炸弹什么都能切。”爸爸不断的鼓励着爷爷，就像爸爸当年创业时，爷爷鼓励爸爸的口吻一样。爷爷点了点头，又玩开了切水果游戏。爸爸也坐回电脑桌旁，打起了报告。

这是，奶奶端着水果拼盘进来了。爷爷看见奶奶，便叫奶奶过来，拿着ipad兴奋的给奶奶介绍着这个游戏，像开辟了新大陆一样。说罢，爷爷给奶奶腾了个座，让奶奶玩起了ipad，那神情，就像一个小老师。爸爸也笑嘻嘻地在一旁看着，生怕打扰了他们。

在回家的路上，爸爸对我说：“爷爷现在就是老小孩，你要多陪陪他。”我点了点头，爸爸突然转过头，用恶狠狠的眼光看着我：“你不是玩电脑玩的可好了吗，明天去爷爷家教教爷爷别的游戏，我看切水果这个游戏已经不能满足爷爷了。”我笑着点了点头，看了这个老师的重任还得是我的呢。

爸爸对爷爷的爱，我深深的看在眼里，也记在心里。等爸爸老了，我也一定要像小时候爸爸对我一样对待他，当然咯，还有妈妈。

侃侃而谈kǎnkǎnértán

【解释】：侃侃：理直气壮，从容不迫。理直气壮、从容不迫地说话。

【出自】：《论语·乡党》：“朝，与下大夫言，侃侃如也。”

【示例】：却从来不曾见过象这位蛮子般的那末～，旁若无人的气概。◎郑振铎《桂公塘·三》

振振有辞zhènzhènyǒucí

【解释】：振振：理直气壮的样子。形容自以为理由充分，说个没完。

【出自】：清·梁启超《关税权问题》：“今者外人之以排外相诬者，既振振有词，其乌可更为无谋之举，以授之口实也。”

【示例】：小顺儿的妈的北平话，遇到理直气壮～的时候，是词汇丰富，而语调清脆，象清夜的小梆子似的。◎老舍《四世同堂》八

炯炯有神jiǒngjiǒngyǒushén

【解释】：炯炯：明亮的样子。形容人的眼睛发亮，很有精神。

【出自】：明·李开先《闲居集·九·泾野吕亚卿传》：“先生头颅圆阔，体貌丰隆，海口童颜，轮耳方面，两目炯炯有神，须虽整秀，异不多耳。”

【示例】：～的眼光，足够表现出他是一个有志的少年。◎郑振铎《黄公俊之最后》

威风凛凛wēifēnglǐnlǐn

【解释】：威风：威严的气概；凛凛：严肃，可敬畏的样子。形容声势或气派使人敬畏。

【出自】：明·罗贯中《三国演义》第七回：“看那少年，生得身长八尺，浓眉大眼，阔面重颐，威风凛凛。”

The kookaburras, also known as the "laughing jackass", is a special bird in Australia. Its voice is hoarse, so it is often used as background voice in movies or TV programmes when people want to show the sound of jungle. The kookaburras is about 46 centimetres and weighs about 500 grams. It is the largest in size among all species of kingfishers. It mainly perches in Eastern Australia, but now it is successfully introduced into Western Australia. Unlike other species of kingfishers, it does not eat fish, but feeds on mice, little birds, snakes and insects. While in the west, it also takes chickens and ducks as food.

笑翠鸟，别名笑狗鱼鸟(laughing jackass),是澳洲独有的鸟类。它的叫声嘶哑(hoarse)，因而在电影和电视中表现丛林的声音时，它的叫声通常被用作背景音。它的身长有46公分，体重约500克，是翠鸟(kingfisher)家族中体型最大的一种，主要生活在澳洲东部，但现在已经被成功引进澳洲西部。它不吃鱼，主要捕食老鼠、小鸟、蛇和昆虫，但在西部，它们也捕食鸡和鸭子。

[描写鸟类的英语作文

I like dogs, because they are man s good friends. They can do many helpful things to us, such as guarding our houses, greeting guests, helping the police, and so on. Some trained dogs can even lead the blind people and save people s lives. So they re treated as our family members. I hope someday dogs will be in great harmony with human-beings.

我喜欢狗，因为它们是人类的好朋友。他们可以为我们做很多有用的事情，如，保护房子，问候客人，帮助警方等等。一些受过训练的狗甚至可以引导盲人、拯救人们的性命。所以他们都被当做是我们的家庭成员。我希望有一天狗能与人类和谐共处。

Cats are very cute animals,they are very special as well.

It has pointy ears, round eyes,little claws,and short but soft fur.Cats like eating fish and mice.They like to keep themselves clean, they do that by licking their fur.Also they are nocturnal animals, they sleep in the daytime and do most of their movements at night.

We should love cat, because cats are our friends,too.

[描写小猫的英语作文

Today I saw an article called "everybody comes to the bend". The message is that the students will work together to protect the schools environmental health.

The environmental health of our school is not good enough. Although many students love the school very much, every day you can see many students in earnest service for schools, some pick up the garbage in the trash on the ground, some active hand at the broom sweeping the floor, and take the initiative to clean the blackboard......

But also some students could have done better in cleaning, including me, sometimes very throw rubbish casually, confetti, some classmates clearly see the floor with paper scraps, but them as invisible, this is not "ownership" of the spirit, also greatly affect the appearance of the school. Hope the students to act, "everyone to curved waist" activities, all be the master of the school, everyone starts from me, for us to make our campus environment clean and beautiful. Let people study in high quality environment so that they can get good grades.

今天我看到一篇文章名为《大家都来弯弯腰》。内容是讲，号召同学们齐心保护学校环境卫生。

联想到我们学校的环境卫生也做的不够好。虽然许多同学都非常爱学校，每天可以看到许多同学在认真地为学校服务，有的捡起地上垃圾扔在垃圾桶，有的主动拿起扫帚扫地，还有的主动擦黑板......

可是还有些同学在保洁方面做得不够好，包括我自己，有时很随便地扔垃圾、纸屑，有的同学明明看到地上有纸屑，但他们当作看不见，这样很没“主人翁”的精神，也大大地影响了学校的面貌。希望同学们行动起来，开展“大家都来弯弯腰”的活动，人人争做学校的小主人，人人从我做起，使我们的校园环境既清洁，又美丽。让大家在优质的环境中读书，这样才会取得好成绩。

老师是雨露，滋润着我的心灵；老师是指路灯，指引着我走上一片光明之路。老师是伟大的，他们毫不保留的把所学的知识都耐心的教给我们。

有一天，老师正在教我做一道我自以为很难的题目，她一点一点的给我讲解着过程，时间飞快的从指尖溜走，一转眼，下起了细细的小雨，顿时我发现老师额头上有丝丝白发，在雨天的衬托下显得更要发白明亮。这个花一样年纪的老师却有着不一样的青春，要知道，这个老师来教我们的时候才刚满二十五岁，连发丝都没有一点的分岔，短短的一个学期就想起昨天下午自己还问着老师都下班了怎么还不回家，只见她仍旧是用着这个姿势抓着同一支笔，表情仍旧是那样的柔和，目光也依旧那样清澈再往下看，额头也有一丝淡淡的邹纹，突然想起那句人们常说的话老师就是我们的第二任母亲。确实如此，此时此刻我也深深感受到了，眼睛不自然的盯着老师，她用手轻轻的拍拍我的脑袋，满脸笑意的说道：看什么呢？这道题知道怎么做了吗？我心里慢慢的酸意，还是笑着点点头，很快就做出来了。

老师，我永远也忘不了你那温柔的笑和抓笔写字的姿势。

[小学描写老师的人物作文

Was a cold winter day, a cold wind blowing the bare branches on the side of the road. Blow to the with the wind, with creepy, and tremble.

From cram school I just from school, mother brought home a box of eggs when I go home. Mother with the help of colleagues, will this box heavy eggs carried to the electric vehicle.

Windy that day, people walking on the road is very difficult, dont say is driving electric cars, whats more, the car was carrying two eggs and a box. When the car to a fork in the road, the car of the box of eggs yield to the test of the wind, the eggs roll down, luckily isnt bad.

My mother and I hurried out of the car to pick up the eggs, but eggs pick up one, get one, I thought to myself: when will going to pick it up! What if pick it out, will be a case of heavy eggs home?

Right against the face come a big truck suddenly, I shouted anxiously: "what can I do, bus, eggs also dont want to!"

To my surprise trucks "cheep -" to a screeching halt. Down, an aunt said: "elder sister, so late how to still take so many eggs?" Say that finish, three of them began to pick up the eggs.

Everyone firewood high flame, too soon, just pick it up. My mother and I are very grateful to the aunt, aunt and help my mother the eggs onto the vehicle. Aunt looked at the far of figure, I think that as long as everyone sacrificed a little love, the world will be how good.

是一个寒冷的冬季里的一天，凛冽的寒风吹着路边那光秃秃的树枝。大风呼呼地叫着，吹到身上让人毛骨悚然，浑身直发颤。

我从补习班刚刚放学，妈妈接我回家时带回来一箱鸡蛋。妈妈在同事的协助下，才将这箱沉重的鸡蛋抬到电动车上。

那天风很大，人们在路上行走都很困难，别说是驾驶电动车了，更何况车上还载着两个人和一箱鸡蛋。当车行到岔路口时，车上的那箱鸡蛋经不住大风的考验，鸡蛋都滚了下来，幸亏还没坏。

我和妈妈赶忙下车捡鸡蛋，可鸡蛋捡一个，滚一个，我心里想：要到什么时候才能捡完啊!就算捡完了，又怎样将一箱沉重的鸡蛋运回家呢?

忽然迎面来了一辆大卡车，我焦急地喊起来：“怎么办，车来了，蛋也别想要了!”

令我大吃一惊的是大卡车“吱——”的一声来了个急刹车。下来一位阿姨，说：“ 大姐，这么晚怎么还带这么多鸡蛋呀?”说完，三个人就开始捡起鸡蛋来。

众人拾柴火焰高，过不一会，就捡完了。我和妈妈都很感激那位阿姨，阿姨又帮妈妈把鸡蛋抬上电动车。望着阿姨远去的背影，我觉得只要人人献出一点爱，世界将会多么美好。

New Years Day is one of important days for many people in the word during the year。Most people spend the New YearsDay in hotels。January 1st is considered as the New Years Day。most companies，shops，school，and government offices are closed during that time。People prepare for New Years Dayfrom late December。

Firt，people spend a few days to clean their houses completely。Some families then put up some new painting from November to be sent in January。The New Years meal is also prepcnared from the end of December。During the New Years Day，people usually do not cook and relax at home。 On New Years Eve，it is common to have a bag dinner with family members or friends at home or in hotels and hear bells which informs us of the coming New Year。

On New Years Day，people fiest greet each other。 Some people wear new coats and visit temples to pray for happiness and health theoughout the New Year。Children are busy with getting the gifts from their parents and relatives。

尊敬的各位评委，老师们：

大家好！我是来自河北省保定市高阳县龙化中学的吴永会老师。今天我说课的内容九年级下学期人物描写的作文复习。九年级学生对于写人、记事的文章已有了一定的功底。但是，在批改作文的过程中，我发现不少学生人物描写的能力并没有提高，刻画的人物形象干瘪僵硬，文章主题空洞，缺乏生活气息。

《基础教育课程改革纲要》指出“大力推进信息技术在教学过程中的普遍应用，促进信息技术与学科课程的整合，逐步实现教学内容的呈现方式，学生的学习方式，教师的教学方式和师生互动方式的变革”，这预示着我国包括语文在内的课程与教学将越来越多的渗透和发展信息技术。因此，我尝试在网络环境中进行一次人物描写作文复习的教学，有效地整合网络资源，利用主题网页，让学生在网页上浏览、学习，在网络中阅读一些相关例文，尝试写作，提高写作水平。

下面我从（出示幻灯片）教学目标、教学过程、教学反思三个方面进行说课。

一、教学目标：（出示幻灯片）

知识与技能：巩固掌握人物描写的方法。

过程与方法：通过群论坛交流、评改描写片段。

情感、态度与价值观：引导学生用心观察生活、思考生活。

教学重点：通过作文评改，引导学生掌握人物描写的方法。

教学难点：运用人物描写方法，描写生活中的人物。

二、教学过程

教学过程分为六个环节，分别是：

(一) 单刀直入，引出描写

（二） 链接百度，复习描写

（三） 进入论坛，点评描写

(四) 网上交流，评改描写

（五） 大显身手，刻画人物

（六） 合作互动，评选佳作

这几个环节，依据学生对人物描写知识的理解、巩固、掌握、运用、提高的认知规律，逐层深入，高效达成教学目标。

（一）单刀直入，引出描写

导入：在日常生活中，我们随时随地都接触着形形色色的人——无私奉献，努力工作的老师，活泼开朗、天真纯洁的邻家小妹，任劳任怨、不求回报的父母，尖酸刻薄、得理不饶人的小商小贩……人们在不同场景中的表现和举动形成了不同的性格，无论我们是主角还是旁观者，只要用心观察，细心体会，就能够用文字描写出这些生动的人物。今天，让我们再一次走进人物描写的学习中。

设计意图：简单明了的导入，吸引学生的注意力，使他们全神贯注、精神振奋。明确学习任务后，学生有的放矢，积极主动地去完成任务。这样，会取得更理想的学习效果。

（二）链接百度，复习描写

链接百度，自主学习“百度”中有关人物描写的相关知识，对“百度”中的描写片段进行赏析。

设计意图：学生通过自主学习，加深了对人物描写的理解，独立赏析，引导学生去探究新知，主动获得方法，为下一环节点评作文打下基础。

（三）进入论坛，点评描写

打开qq群论坛，阅读三篇同题同材料作文《开学第一天》，阅读完毕，以回帖的方式自由点评。

设计意图：这种自由回帖的学习方式，充分体现了学生的主体地位，充分发挥了学生的主动性、积极性、创造性，使传统的课堂教学结构发生根本性的改变。真正把作文点评的主动权还给学生，使每个学生都积极参与、相互评议、自主修改，提高了学生的语文素养和信息加工、处理能力，可以说新型的网络教学环境，把学生的创造精神与实践能力的培养落到实处。（点击回帖，学生的回帖印证了我的设计意图。）这个环节让学生进一步巩固了人物描写的方法，为评改描写做好准备。

(四) 网上交流，评改描写

阅读作文《偷梁换叉》，通过小组合作学习，进行作文评改，并回复其他小组的评改意见和建议。

设计意图：通过小组合作学习，师生互动交流，可以淡化教师“领导者”的“主导”地位，使学生的主体性和创造性在小组内得以最大程度地发挥，为实现真正意义上的交流互动奠定基础。学生提出问题的机会增加了，有利于全体学生问题意识的增强。网上交流合作，促进了“自主、合作、探究”学习方式的形成。根据同学们的评改，习作者对原文进行了修改，得到老师、同学的好评。此环节让学生进一步掌握了人物描写的方法。基于以上四个环节的铺垫，学生写作水到渠成。

（五）大显身手，刻画人物

教师布置任务：

根据自己的生活经验，写一篇叙事作文，在叙述事件的过程中完成人物描写，将习作上传至群论坛。

设计意图：在学生写作之前,运用多媒体再现情境，播放精彩的生活瞬间，激发学生的创作灵感，让学生多角度、多层次地体会和品味人物，拓宽思维的广度、增强思维的深度，再引导学生由学校生活、家庭生活联想到社会生活中的人物，通过细心观察，用心体会，学生的写作热情随之点燃。这些作文，为评选优秀作品提供了素材。

（六）合作互动，评选佳作

小组合作选出优秀作品。

三、设计意图

师生对作文进行网上评选，通过交流、探讨达成共识，创立民主、平等、和谐的课堂氛围，让学生真正成为课堂的主人，积极参与到作文评选的过程中来。

通过讨论，全班评选出了5篇优秀作文，并把这5篇作文收录到班级的《悦写越快乐》作文小册中。这是我班的作文小册子，每次作文活动我们都把评选的优秀作文收录进来，有些文章发表到博客中。

通过学习，学生巩固了人物描写的方法，并且学会了描写人物。上课时间有限，网上的交流是无限的，课后学生可以继续到网上交流，把自己对人物描写的收获、困惑和感想发表在论坛上。老师也会在网上与大家进一步交流人物描写的方法技巧。

四、教学反思

信息技术以其图像清晰、动态感强、信息量大的优势，激发了学生写作的积极性、主动性。运用信息技术突破时空的限制，把现实生活中的某些情、景、事、物搬进课堂，为学生提供了宽松、愉悦的无纸化作文环境，使学生自主修改作文，方便、快捷。群论坛扩展了学生作文交流的空间，教师既能与学生共同对习作进行评改，又能把作文评改的主动权还给学生，使每个学生都参与评议修改。学生在网络交流中互相欣赏、互相批改，提高了评改水平，写作水平也随之提高。

由于网络信息资源与生俱来的不规则性和复杂性，第二个自主学习的环节有个别学生被动地在泛滥无效的信息海洋中消磨时光，导致他们参与课堂不积极。今后，我会在激发学生的学习兴趣，改变学生漫无目的的学习习惯。同时，网络的负面影响，我们也不能忽视，教师要引导学生网络文明上网，组织好学生的网络活动。

[在网络环境中的人物描写作文教学

I am a small goldfish, beautiful and lovely. The head of a pair of eyes bulging, looks thriving. An "O" -shaped mouth is always cheerfully bubbling. Its belly chubby, the back inlaid with golden scales, like wearing a gold armor, swimming up glittering. Its two fins on the chest, like two oars, helping it to draw water and walk through the water. But the most beautiful but also the number of its tail, like a bright princess skirt, swimming is simply a blooming Golden Flower.

Small goldfish just bought back, fed it bait, it began to eat, it seems very shy, very afraid, and so we are familiar with the bluntly. Now whenever I go to feed it, it will swing the tail happy to swim to the surface, staring at big eyes, Zhang big mouth, while eating and greeting me. Sometimes the little goldfish eat a big mouth to spit out a bubble, and sometimes eat the fish and spit it out, like playing like. After eating, its mouth looked up, as if singing! But this little guy silly, never know what is "full". If you keep feeding it, it will eat it. So every time I can only feed it a little bit. In addition, I often let it to the sun in the sun, so that its color will be more vivid.

Sometimes I want to tease small goldfish, put his fingers into the water, small goldfish that is delicious things, then bit hard to bite my fingers, but found that this thing is very hard but can not eat, and no point Taste, just know fooled. At this time, the small goldfish will shake its big eyes, as if I rolled his eyes

Look, more lovely little goldfish! Looking at it in the water free to swim, I am happy!

Wearing winter clothes, bathing winter rain, with a strange feeling can not tell. Although the falling rain bead mixed with the cold wind gives a feeling of cold, but it rushed to the earth a happy new year bath, to meet the New Years coming. But also reflects the atmosphere of the winter.

Walking on the road, and the raindrops hit the crack on the crack, so I remembered the summer wearing a raincoat umbrella scene. Suddenly look back, everything as old The swaying of the wind swiftly reminds me that it is winter! All the creatures of the earth are beginning to hibernate. The rain in the winter is like a pearl sprinkled on the earth, and the careful observation of the dense raindrops will make you dazzled and dizzying.

Look up and wait and see you will find the rain racing scrambling to fall from the top down, and some quietly lying in the grass, like a crystal clear and shiny shining light; some directly falling on the tree, like a Precious stones to help it dressed beautifully to meet the coming of the New Year; some fall into the thirsty river and lake, for their quench their thirst, like a mother to feed their own son, so timely. Suddenly, blowing waves of wind, feeling waves of cold but the heart is so sweet, because we immediately have to New Year friends.

The rain has been under, it seems to let people review the winter atmosphere. After the rain the earth is more like bathing New Years weather, the air is more clean fresh, clean up the dust, but also sober people impetuous heart.

我们班有个高老庄来的猪，因小小的运动都流出半个塑料杯的氧化钠溶液，故称之曰：八戒。

八戒可为我们班增添了不少乐趣，这不，我们正上数学课呢，老师正聚精会神地讲解题目，就在这鸦雀无声之下，老师地目光停留在了八戒之上。我们也随着老师地目光望去，只见八戒憋着通红，正纳闷时，只听扑哧——一声，八戒顿时神清气爽，原来八戒要放屁了，可他又怕打扰课堂，就憋着，最后，脸涨得通红，屁还是没憋住。

这可苦了我们，这位屁中仙排放的毒气弹威力极其惊人，不一会儿，大家就被熏得受不了。老师也开玩笑对八戒说：这就不能调成振动吗？谁知八戒来了一句：我这是山寨版的，调不成振动的！顿时，我们就笑得合不拢嘴，这八戒真逗！

到了大课间时，八戒又大显神通了！广播操音乐一响起，大家的目光都不约而同地汇集在八戒身上，看看他找观音姐姐学的兰花指版体操，可真让人忍俊不惊。八戒极其优美的将手抬上，又缓慢地720°旋转落下，配合着他那肥胖的身躯，实在是滑稽可笑！这时，八戒又将手伸出去，作采花状，忽又折回，举到鼻尖，作闻花香状，好一个宫廷少女！到了最后一节，八戒，夫人摆出高傲姿态，傲视前方，兰花指又柔软地翻了几下，好不华丽的落幕！

作为八戒，他吃东西的份量也是极为有名！这不，在老师家补课，他一下就嗅到了老师家厨房中的美味佳肴，他就对老师说：老师，给我吃点吗？好不娇羞！老师笑着对他说：只要你那次考了全班第一，我就请你吃。他顿时来了兴趣，那好，您要说话算数，我可要听得很多呢？打个比方说，我吃热干面、要吃五碗，三两的牛肉粉要三碗，肯德基家桶要二桶才能勉强算个饱！老师一听，惊异地看着面前的老猪，你吃得可真不少啊！，我还是收回刚才的话吧

这八戒；可真是我们班的活宝，在哪都有他那独特的闪光点呀！这不，瞧他又来了：再给我吃点儿吧！三十六计，走为上策，撤啊

[描写我的同学人物作文

生活中，有许多人都喜欢帮助别人，我叔叔就是一个好榜样。

一次，在狂风加大雨的时候，我叔叔来接我，车开得很慢。

突然，来了个急刹车，还好我坐得稳，否则，一定会被甩下车。我向前望去，原来是一辆大卡车挡住了去路。叔叔一看便知到大卡车坏了。于是，我叔叔说：“我以前学过一些修车技术，我来帮你吧！”那位司机听了，万分欣喜，“那太谢谢您了！”“庭栋，稍等一下，马上就好。”我刚想说什么，但是，看着叔叔七手八脚的忙着，便不忍心说出来了。

这时，夜幕渐渐降临，风更狂了，雨更大了，风雨交加着，我在一旁埋怨着叔叔，也在一旁看着叔叔，看着那一滴滴的汗珠从头上滴下来。

一会儿，叔叔和司机从车下钻了出来，那位司机紧紧的握住叔叔的手，“真是太谢谢您了！”说完便迅速的从口袋中拿出100元人民币，往叔叔的裤袋里塞。叔叔见此情景，连忙推辞，笑着说没什么，这是我应该做的。出门在外，谁没有遇到困难的时候？这钱我不能收！司机见叔叔死活不肯收，便再一次道谢，准备开车了。

大卡车开动了。叔叔走到我面前说：“冻坏了吧！我们快回家吧！”我看着满身都是泥水的叔叔，回想着刚才的一幕幕，顿时对叔叔肃然起敬，就得他是那么高大。想起我对叔叔的埋怨，觉得自己是那么渺小。

叔叔笑着骑上了自行车，送我去回家的路上，路上，我暗暗下定决心，一定要做像叔叔那样做人。做一个踏踏实实、乐于助人的人！