初三优秀英语作文范文欣赏(汇集20篇)

When we read newspapers, we often come across the wordPollution. This word was not familiar to the people some decades ago. But now, it is a serious threat to us because.it means the poisoning of the air, seas, rivers and lands, which would do harm to our health.

There are many factories that bring pollution to us. We can not have fresh air in the morning. This is mainly because of the poisonous smoke coming from factories, especially chemical ones. In rivers, seas and oceans, there are industrial wastes. Some factories just throw their wastes into seas or let them flow into rivers. When people drink the water from such rivers, they get poisoned. Besides, there is rubbish from ships and when sometimes an accident occurs in an ocean, oil flows out from tankers.

On land, the accumulation of rubbish in the streets may dirty the city and ruin our health. This is mainly due to the improper disposal of rubbish by people.

If we do mot fight against pollution, surely one day all of us will be killed. Some people like to put the blame on the industrial revolutions. On the contrary, the pollution problem will be solved only with the help of modem science and technology.

[初三优秀英语作文:Pollution

As we all know water plays an important part in peoples daily lives. More and more water is needed in the modern society. So we should try to save it.

Now many places are short of water. For example, a big drought hit the Southwest of China at the beginning of this year. especially Yunnan province, milions of people has not got enough water for common life. A lot of rivers and lakes are polluted. Whats worse, many people are wasting water seriously.

In order to protect water, lets do something to fight against all kinds of pollution and waste of water.

我们都知道，水在人们日常生活中，扮演重要的角色。现代生活中，我们需要越来越多的水，所以我们应该保护它。

现在很多地方缺水，今年年初在中国西南部就发生严重的干旱，特别是云南地区，数以万计的人们没有充足的水资源供日常使用。很多河流湖泊被污染，更严重的是，人们对水浪费严重。

为了保护水资源，让我们付出行动抵制水污染和浪费的行为吧。

Welcome to Suzhou. Today I’m your tour guide. Suzhou is a beautiful place in Southeast China. It was built over 2500 years ago. So Suzhou is an old city with a long history. It’s famous for its gardens and Hanshan Temple. We are all proud of them. Many foreign tourists come to see them. In Suzhou, There are lots of old constructions like Tiger Hill, Beisi Pagoda and so on. After visiting them, you’ll be tired. But don’t be worried. There are also lots of snack shops in Suzhou. They are different from those in Western countries. They are much more delicious than some Western food. Suzhou is a modern city as well as an old city. There are lots of tall buildings and many other modern constructions in Suzhou, too. You can find hundreds of people in smart clothes in the street. What a beautiful city it is!

星期六早上我去了北京动物园。

I went there with my teachers by bus. It took us half an hour to get there. There were many kinds of animals. First, we went to see pandas. They were my favorite animals. How lovely they were!Then we watched the elephant show. The elephants were so clever that they were able to answer some math questions. At last, I took some photos of them. I had a great time. I stayed in Beijing Zoo for 2 hours.

我和我的老师们一起坐公共汽车去了动物园。去到那里花了我半个小时。有各种各类的动物。首先，我们去看了大象。它们是我最喜欢的动物。它们是多么可爱啊！之后我们看了大象表演。大象是如此的聪明，它们可以回答一些数学问题。最后，我给它们照了一些照片。我玩得很开心。我在北京动物园呆了两个小时。

When I came back home, I was tired but happy. I will remember these lovely animals. I am looking forward to seeing them again.

当我回到家的时候，我又累又开心。我会记住这些可爱的动物的。我期待着再次见到它们。

8My hometown

Great changes in my hometown

More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .

Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government’s efforts . my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .

9My house

We have a new flat. It’s on the third floor. There are there bedrooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a big living room. I have my own room now. It’s big and nice. There is a big curtains and an air-conditioner. It’s nice. I love my new room very much.

9 My House

We have just moved into a new flat,like most people here living in their houses in the suburbs. Our house is big though it consists only two floors.

On the first floor there is the dining room, the lounge or sitting room, the kitchen and the hall. In the hall we set a stand for hats, coats and umbrellas. A staircase leads from the hall to the landing on the second floor; On this floor there are four bedrooms, a bathroom and a lavatory.In front of the house we have a small garden in which we grow flowers: roses,tulips and some fruit trees. Thereis also a vegetable garden where we grow all kinds of vegetables, such as cabbages, cauliflowers, and tomatoes. We all know how to plant vegetables for my father was once a vegetable grower.

At the side of the house is a garage. We havent got a car up to now, but my moths said: wed have one at the end of this year. People ,in this high-consumer city are very rich, not like the people live in the inland,cities.

我的家

我们家刚搬进一座新房。房子就像这里郊区大多数的住房一样。虽然只有两层，但房子很大。

一楼是饭厅、休闲室、起居室、厨房和门厅。我们把帽予、外套和雨伞放在门厅里。楼梯从门厅通往二楼。二楼有四间卧室，一个洗澡间和厕所。

房子前面有一个花园，里面种满了花，有玫瑰、郁金香，还有一些水果树。还有一个菜园，种了各种各样的蔬菜，有大白菜、花椰菜、西红柿等。我们都知道怎么种菜，因为爸爸曾经是菜农。

房子的一边是车库。我们还没有车，但妈妈说到年底就会有的。高消费城市的人们都很富有，不像住在内陆城市的人们。

10 The National Day

"Oct,1 of every year is our National Day.Today is Oct 1st,2012 and is also our National Day.It is a important festival in Ｃhina.The Fｉve- Star Flag is flying high in the sky of the Tiananmen Square. And we can have a eight-- days holiday.During the holiday,people can go to some places of interest for visiting.

On the early morning of the 1st day, I had my breakfast quickly with my family, and then went shopping outside with my several friends.After lunch, I went to the park and played badminton with my younger brother.I had planed to travel to some places of interest but yoｕcan see so many people ， so many cars，and traffic jam everywhere , so I spent the holiday at home. I got together with my family to enjoy the moonlight, discussed some interesting topics,talked about the legends such as "ChangEr". Of course,I didnt forget to do my homework. According to plan， I did my homework everyday,so I think I had a good time and I am very happy. And I wish everyone has a happy holiday.

汉语对照：

每年的10月,1日是我们的国庆日。今天是,2012年的10月1日,也是我们的国庆节。在中国这是一个重要的节日。五星国旗在天安门广场上空中高高飘扬。我们可以有一个8天的假期。节日期间,人们可以去一些名胜古迹参观。

在第一天的清晨,我和家人很快就吃完了早餐,然后和我的几个朋友去购物。午饭后,我去了公园，和我的弟弟和打羽毛球。我本来打算前往一些有趣的地方,但看到人多,车多,到处都塞车,所以我就在家度假了。我和家人一起欣赏月光,讨论了一些有趣的话题,谈了一些传奇故事,例如“長娥奔月”。当然,我没有忘记做功课。根据计划,每天我都做作业的,所以我过得很愉快，也很开心

[关于初三的英语作文

She is very busy today, just like a busy bee. In the morning, I had two seccsions and after that I had a lesson for my IELTS. I dont even have my lunch. There lots of people in my IELTS class and most of them came from India. The reason why they want to attent this course is similar to me. Right now, I feel exhausted and dont want to work, but I still have lots homework to do.

I also have some other problem. Last term, I decided to start my new term in Newcastle, and asked Jhon to give my money back. And now, I have changed my mind, so told Jhon I did not want my fees back, but she told me the check had been sent out for almost two weeks. I havent received my check until now, and I told her the truth. Finally, she said she would help me to ask finaNcial officer to give me another letter, and then after I sign that form everything will be all right. What a absurd world it is. If I had not asked Jhon to give my fees back, it would have become much easier.

If my boy sleep quietly, he will see the busy bee, when it has made its honey fine, dancing in the bright sunshine. If my boy will slumber, angles without number will draw near, so fair and bright, for they only come at night.

A dream is to a man what wings are to a bird. With a dream in the deep hearts core， a man is spontaneously driven to hitch his wagon to a star.

A dream is an inexhaustible source of energy that keeps our enthusiasm burning， and kindles our desire to enhance our spiritual cultivation， refine our character， and upgrade our quality of life. A life without a dream is like a bird with broken wings， confined to a cage and oblivious of what lies beyond the range of its vision. On the contrary， a man with a dream is like a warrior armed with ambition， foresight and gallantry， daring to step into an unknown domain to make a journey of adventure. It is dream that adds fullness， variety， and spice to our life and makes it worth living.

I have a dream. It is a dream that is deeply rooted in human nature. I dream that one day people of all origins can live in harmony and peace without being discriminated against or persecuted. The bounty of the earth can be shared by every single human being. Mutual respect will guarantee the existence and continuation of the diversity of customs and cultures. Love， sympathy， and cooperation will alleviate the sufferings and disasters inflicted upon our fellow men. Respect for basic human rights will put an end to social injustices and evils. When my dream comes true， all men will be truly equal， happy， and free.

Parents gave me life in this world,I love the most is them.

Expressing of loving parents do not need to pass a language that I love them.Whatever we can do some little things.In the Fathers Day or Mothers Day,we can prepare a delicious breakfast for them.We can remember their birthdays.In their birthdays,we dont need to buy gifts,but have to say happy birthday.

When parents come home from work,we can hand them a cup of hot water to make them relax.We can help parents to share some of the housework,so that they have more time to rest.As part of the family,we should take active to do housework.If we read out,we should always contact them,tell them recent things of our own.Let them not worry about us.

It is known to all our parents love is priceless,is not asking for anything.We should love them in return. But,parents can be very simple love.As long as the life of more concern to them,for them to have been very satisfied.Just do it.

父母给了我生命在这个世界上,我最喜欢他们。

表达爱的父母不需要通过语言,我爱他们。我们可以做一些小事。在父亲节或母亲节,我们可以为他们准备一份美味的早餐。我们可以记住他们的生日。在他们的生日,我们不需要买礼物,但不得不说生日快乐。

当父母下班回家时,我们可以把他们一杯热水让他们放松。我们可以帮助父母分担一些家务,这样他们有更多的时间休息。作为家庭的一部分,我们应该积极做家务。如果我们读了,我们应该联系他们,告诉他们最近自己的事情。让他们不要为我们担心。

众所周知我们的父母爱是无价的,不要求任何东西。我们应该爱他们的回报。但是,父母可以非常简单的爱。只要更多的关注他们的生活,他们非常满意。说做就做。

It is a happy family.Toms family are all at home in the evening.Tom is listening to music while his young sister is playing with a Cat.What are his parents doing? His father is reading a book. His mother is making a telephone call to someone.Look! His grandparents are watching TV.They are all enjoying themselves.It is cold outside, but inside it is warm.

这是一个幸福的家庭。汤姆的家人晚上都回家来了。汤姆正在听音乐，而他的妹妹在和猫玩耍。他的父母在干吗?爸爸在看书，妈妈在给人打电话。看，爷爷和奶奶在看电视。一家人都自得其乐。外面寒风凛冽，屋里其乐融融。

It is the best time in the evening.Tom and his family members all return home.After supper they enjoy themselves.Look! His grandparents are watching TV.Father is doing some reading as usual. By the window his mother is calling someone.His little sister is playing with the cat while Tom is listening to music.

这是晚上最好的时光。汤姆一家人都回到了家。晚饭后，全家人都过得很愉快。看，他的爷爷、奶奶正在看电视。爸爸像往常一样在看书，窗边的妈妈正给谁打电话。小妹妹在逗着小猫玩儿;而汤姆在听音乐。

The living room is very clean and tidy. You can see a nice picture and a clock on the wall. There are some books on the desk.It must be a happy family.

这间客厅干净而整洁，墙上挂着一幅漂亮的画和一个钟，桌上放着些书。这真是一个幸福的家庭。

Nowadays, any Chinese can enjoy the luxury of owning a private car - if he or she can afford it. Having a car of your own means no more traveling to work on crowded buses or subway trains, and you can drop off the children at school on the way. Moreover, it also means that you can enjoy the weekends and holidays better, because with a car you can go to places where the regular buses and trains do not go, and so you can find a quiet scenic spot with no crowds.

However, there are drawbacks to owning a car. For one thing, with the increase in car ownership in recent years, the roads are becoming more and more crowded, often making the journey to work more of a nightmare than a dream. For another, it is not cheap to run a car, as the prices of gasoline and repairs are constantly rising, not to mention the prices you have to pay for a licence and insurance coverage.

Having considered both sides of the argument, I have come to the conclusion that the advantages of owning a car outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore, it seems to me that China should increase its output of automobiles and enlarge the private car market. The result would be that cars would become cheaper, while at the same time the extra demand would encourage the auto industry to produce more efficient and family-oriented vehicles.

第一篇：

Zhang Ying is my good friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. She’s a model student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts and crafts, music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, too. But she doesn’t like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.

第二篇：

Hello!I＇m Amy.I have a good friend.Her name is ZhangYun.Her English name is Betty. She is a Chinese girl. She is ten years old.She is in the No.5 Primary school. She is in Class 7,Grade 2. She is good at English.She likes Chinese ,too.She is kind and very friendly. She likes helping others. She likes singing and playing basketball.

This is my good friend.Do you want to know more?

[我的好朋友英语作文欣赏

First cut up two tomates.Next put two teaspoons of oil into the pan.When the oil is hot,put the tomatoes into the pan and fry for a few minutes.Then add a bowl of water and boil.When the water boils,put the noodles into the pan and boil for 5 minutes.Break two eggs and put them into the pan.Finally ,add two teaspoons of salt.It’s very easy.

You can try to make it.

[最新初三英语作文：How to make tomato and egg noodles.

Another new term comes again,so i should have a study plan to promot myself.

firstly,i descide to finish my homework more carefully than before.And pay more attention to the knowledge which i didnt know it clearly.

secondly,i will do a lot of read to widen the range of my knowledge.and try to combine thoery to practice.

Finally,i will learn to adjust, to be more positive and more helpful.

Thats what i plant to do in a new term.

新的学期马上就要到来了，因此，我应该给自己制定一个学习计划来提升自己.

首先，我决定做好的家庭作业比以前更仔细点，和关注那些我不是很了解的知识，其次，我应该扩大阅读面并，并把理论和实践联合在一起.最后，我应该学会适应，变得更积极更乐于助人.

这就是我新的学期计划.

Some people are born with the belief that they are masters of their own lives. Others feel they are at the mercy of fate.New research shows that part of those feelings are in the genes.

Psychologists have long known that people confident in their ability to control their destinies are more likely to adjust well to growing old than those who feel that they drift on the currents of fate.

Two researchers who questioned hundreds of Swedish twins report that such confidence, or lark of it, is partly genetic and partly drawn from experience.

They also found that the belief in blind luck-a conviction that coincidence plays a big role in life is something learned in life and has nothing to do with heredity.

The research was conducted at the Karolinska Institute-better known as the body that annually awards the Nobel Prize for medicine by Nancy Pedersen of the Institute and Margaret Gatz, a professor of psychology at the University of Southern California in Los Angeles. Their results were recently published in the United States in the Journal of Gerontology.

People who are confident of their ability to control their lives have an "internal locus of control,"and have a better chance of being well adjusted in their old age, said Pedersen.

An "external locus of control," believing that outside forces determine the course of life, has been linked to depression in latter years, she said.

"We are trying to understand what makes people different. What makes some people age gracefully and others have a more difficult time?" she said.

The study showed that while people have an inborn predilection toward independence and self-confidence, about 70 percent of this personality trait is affected by a persons environment and lifetime experiences.

Pedersens studies, with various collaborators, probe the aging process by comparing sets of twins, both identical and fraternal, many of whom were separated at an early age.

The subjects were drawn from a roster first compiled about 30 years ago registering all twins born in Sweden since 1886. The complete list, which was extended in 1971, has 95,000 sets of twins.

[英语作文欣赏：自信

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In the coming summer holiday, I am going to do a lot of interesting things.

First, I will finish my holiday homework. Second, I am going to have a good rest. I am going to play computer games or listen to music when I am free, because I like them very much. But I am not good at them now. Then, I will join a basketball club to play basketball. Even if I was a girl, I like basketball very much. It can not only make me become sunny, cheerful, but also can make me healthy. Finally, I am going to visit some of my friends. We are going to play together. Maybe we will go sightseeing.

I think I will have a great summer holiday.

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在即将到来的暑假，我打算做很多有趣的事情。

首先，我会完成我的暑假作业。第二，我打算好好休息一下。我打算在我有时间的时候玩电脑游戏或者听音乐，因为我很喜欢它们。但是现在我却还不擅长。之后，我会参加篮球俱乐部来打篮球。虽然我是个女孩，但是我却非常喜欢篮球。它不仅可以使我变得阳光，开朗，而且也可以使我健康。最后，我要去拜访一些朋友。我们打算一起去玩。也许我们会去观光。

我觉得我将会有一个很棒的暑假。

I have a great time during the winter holiday, because I enjoy myself as well as focus on my study. As its known to all, the Spring Festival is the most important in winter holiday that would occupy much time to celebrate it. Therefore, I finished my homework first, so that it won’t bother my enjoyment during the festival. I finished my home work in one week. And I went shopping with my parents. We bought a lot of things, especially snacks and fruits. Then, it was the Spring Festival. We had a big dinner on the New Year’s Eve. My parents prepared the big dinner and I could only act as assistant. The dinner was so delicious that I ate so full. In the next several days, my parents and I visited our relatives and friends or they visited us. Sometimes, we went out for fun together. We children were always the most excited. Now, holiday is coming to the end and I will go to school soon. I am so happy that I have a wonderful winter holiday.

hoping to excite student interest in our reading center, i asked each teacher to write a new years resolution on a special form and send it to me.

after i posted the resolutions on the bulletin board in the reading center, one young teacher stopped by, looked at them for a few minutes, and then left abruptly. passing two teachers on their way in, she stormed, "my resolution isnt posted - and mine was one of the first ones in!" i cannt help but overhear, and the tone of her voice sent me flying to my desk in search of a misplaced resolution.

looking rapidly through stacks of papers, i uncovered hers. it read, "i resolve not to let little things upset me. "

My Low-carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut

down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon

life to save energy and reduce pollution.

Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I

always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I

always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more

beautiful.

Environment is a basic human existence conditions, if we destroy the environment, it is ruined our survival conditions.

At present, the ecological environment is becoming more and more bad, is the greatest influence on our water resources. According to the relevant information reported: the laying of drainage system and detergent used to grow, consume the oxygen in the water, fish died, deterioration of ecosystem. Human activities can make a lot of industrial and agricultural pollutants into the water, the water is polluted. The world each year about 4200 sewage into the river, polluting the 5. 5 trillion of fresh water.

This is how the startling fact, protect the environment is everyone duty, why want to destroy?

Lies a small river near my grandmas home, on the bottom, before my sister and brother in ones childhood often swimming in the river, and their friends to play in the water, uncles and aunts are often in the river to wash clothes, wash dishes, and now, near the river built a chemical plant, the production of waste water discharge into the river, originally the bottom stream gradually turned into a black sending out the smell of the river. The adults never go to the river to wash clothes to wash the dishes, friends never go to the river to play, too!

How I miss the crystal-clear stream! I think: cherish resources, good care environment, these are GongZaiDangDai, force and art event! If we are in such polluted water, that we can use water resources will be less and less, we destroy the environment, is destroying our living conditions.

Let us join hands to jointly protect the environment, dont let water into water, protect the environment, is our common responsibility!

环境是一个人类生存最基本的条件，如果我们破坏了环境，这等于破坏了我们生存的条件。

目前，生态环境日益恶劣，对我们影响最大的就是水资源。据有关资料报道：排水系统的铺设和清洁剂的使用有增无减，消耗水中的氧，使鱼类死亡，生态系统恶化。人类的活动会使大量的工业、农业污染物排入水中，使水受到污染。全世界每年约有4200多亿的污水排入河中，污染了5。5万亿的淡水。

这是多么让人触目惊心的事实啊，保护环境是人人有责的，为什么要破坏呢?

我外婆家附近有一条小河，以前清澈见底，我的姐姐、哥哥小时候常常在小河里游泳，和他们的小伙伴们在水中嬉戏，叔叔、阿姨们也常常在这小河中洗衣服、洗菜，而如今，小河旁建造了一个化工厂，把生产的废水排放到河里，原本那清澈见底的小河渐渐变成了黑黑的散发着怪味的小河。大人们再也不去小河洗衣服洗菜了，小伙伴们也再也不去河里嬉戏!

我多么怀念那条清澈见底的小河啊!我想：珍惜资源，爱护环境，这些都是功在当代、力及千秋的大事啊!如果我们在这样污染水，那我们可以用的水资源就会越来越少，我们破坏环境，就是破坏我们生存的条件。

让我们携起手来，共同保护环境，不要让淡水变成污水，保护环境，是我们共同的责任!

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一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

No matter when and where, in no circumstances can we deny the great importance of manners.

无论何时何地，我们都不会否认礼貌的重要性。

Firstly, a person with good manners is often considered to be more trustworthy and easygoing, which helps him make more friends and get needed help from others. Besides, people are more willing to show their respect to the polite people and cooperate with them, bringing them many opportunities to change. Still most importantly, being polite helps reduce misunderstanding between people, contributing to a harmonious and enjoyable relationships.

首先，一个有礼貌的人往往被认为是更值得信赖、更随和的，这有助于他结交到更多的朋友，得到别人的帮助。此外，人们更愿意尊重有礼貌的人，与他们合作，这会为他们带来很可以改变的机会。还有最重要的是，礼貌有助于减少人们之间的误解，促进和谐、愉快的关系。

My name is LuManLIi. I’m from hunan . I’m an outgoing girl. I like animals very much. Especially my favorite animal is rabbits. Because they’re very cute. I like reading books in the library. I think it’s very quiet in the library. And I also like studying history. I think it’s very interesting for me. But I don’t like doing homework,because it’s very boring. I have many friends. And I get on well with them. We often go shopping and chat interesting things. I like eating many snacks and noodles. I hope we can make more good friends and get on well with them.

[This is me初三英语作文