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努力奋斗的初中作文

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芬芳美丽是花的心愿,春华秋实是树的心愿,茂盛坚挺是草的心愿,而我的心愿是看到一个和平的世界。

坐上时光的小船,几经摆荡,我回到了6岁那年:一天,我在家里看电视,电视上出现了一个极其恐怖的地方——那里没有高楼大厦,没有绿草茵茵,没有小朋友在开心地玩耍;那里有的只是焦土,有的只是人们撕心裂肺的哭泣。小小的我看了后又惊又怕,忙问妈妈是怎么回事,妈妈一脸沉重地对我说:“那里刚刚遭受了一个叫‘战争’的怪物的侵袭,所以才会变成那样。”虽然我不知道什么叫“战争”,但我知道了“战争”是一个可以毁灭家园的怪物。

再长大些,我对战争的了解进一步加深了,知道它并不是什么怪物,而是一种大型的人类活动,为的是掠夺他国的财物、领土。翻开历史的扉页,回望那些前尘旧事,心头又涌起一阵苦涩:“南京大屠杀”,血流成河,一夜之间30余万条鲜活的生命沦为刺刀下的亡魂!“红军长征”,从起程时的八万八千人到结束时的七千人……战争尤如一场生命与死神的赌博,战争意味着要家破人亡、妻离子散;每到夜里,回想起那血腥的场面,那无数惨死的人,我都会彻夜难眠……

八十余年后的今天,我有幸处于一个和平的国度,遥望那硝烟弥漫的战场,我能做的,只有放下仇恨,铭记历史;我能做的,只有不忘初心,牢记使命;将对战争的恨,转化为对世界和平贡献力量;相信将来的某一天,和平的大旗将飘扬在世界的上方,带给我们幸福而安宁的生活!

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篇1:感恩节的英语初中

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The power of love

Love is the parents is the world‘s largest love, is in their minds share of family support them, let them come in the heart of the disaster sons and daughters.

Kitagawa, May 14, 2008, the parents who struggle with death more than 40 hours after the three-year-old girl Song Xin Yi finally rescued, rescue workers to feed her milk. Her parents live in the time, desperate to protect the fragile body of her, until both passing away, also maintained that posture. Parents touched by the love of God, let the children saved, small Xinyi Zaitianzhiling parents can comfort!

爱的力量

父母之爱莫过于是世界上最大的爱,是他们心中的那份亲情支撑着他们,让他们在灾难来临时心系儿女。

北川,2008年5月14日,在父母身下与死神抗争四十多小时后,三岁的小女孩宋欣宜终于获救,救援人员喂她喝牛奶。她的父母在活着的时候,以脆弱的身躯拼死保护着她,直到双双逝去,还保持着那种姿势。父母的爱感动了上天,让孩子得救了,小欣宜父母的在天之灵可以安慰了!

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篇2:初中英语满分

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Dear Michael,

You want to know the changes about my hometown。 You know, great changes

have taken place since 60 years ago。

In the past, the living conditions were very poor。 There were not many

buses or cars, and the roads were narrow。 Usually, a big family was crowed into

a small, dark house。 Most families couldn’t get enough food。 The communications

were simple and slow。 People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far

away mainly by letter or telegram。

Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent

years。 The living conditions are much better and more comfortable。 The roads are

wide。 Some people have their own cars。 Most of the people have lived in big new

houses。 Quite a few adults have mobile phones。 Because of many good policies, I

think our lives will become better and better。

Sincerely

Kang Min

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篇3:我的老师初中英语作文

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Our new English teacher is Mr. Smith. He wears a pair of thick glasses. He is very serious and strict to us. I never saw him smile until the Teachers’ Day. On the Teachers’ Day, my classmates and I planned to give him a special gift——a smile. So the naughty John pretended to have passed out in the classroom. When Mr. Smith came in, he was so scared that he held John in his arms right away. On the way to the hospital, John burst into laughter suddenly, which made the teacher confused. After we told him that it was only a joke, Mr. Smith laughed too. We were all pleased to see him smiling at last.

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篇4:怀念的英语作文初中

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I am a girl of ten, and I live in a small mountain village far from

Taiyuan. The only person that lives with me is my mother, because my father is

away for eight years, working in a city.

During the Spring Festival, my father came back home. He looked thin and

tired. He gave my mother two thousand yuan, and told her that he would work even

harder, earn more money, and then he could take us to the city He stayed at home

for only ten days.We are living a poor life now. But what I want most is not

money, but my father. I miss him very much!

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篇5:初中英语学校生活作文

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I’m Tom。 I’m a student in Grade 7。 My school life is interesting。 I like it very much。 I have 5 classes in the morning and 3 classes in the afternoon。 I study English, Chinese, math and some other subjects。 I like English best because it’s easy and interesting。 I don’t like math because I always meet difficulties in studing math。 I try hard but it doesnt work at all。 After class, I often play basketball with my classmates。 I go to the school library for some reading twice a week。 I like my school life。 What about yours? Can you tell me something about it?

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篇6:初中英语作文大全之我的喜好

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我们每个人都有着不同的爱好,下面老师就为同学们带来一篇关于我的喜好的范文,供同学们写作参考。

Dear friend,

My name is Wang Lin . Now I live in Hangzhou , China. I want to find a pen pal in England. I’m now 14 years old . I speak Chinese .And I can speak a little English. I like sports ,swimming is my favorite . I also like playing the computer games . My favorite subject in school is math. I like to

go to movies with my friends. My favorite movie is Beauty and Beast . Now I live with my parents .

Can you write to me soon ?

Wang Lin

我们也许会喜欢唱歌,也许会喜欢跳舞,也有可能喜欢看书,但都有一个共同的特点,那就是我们都有自己喜欢的东西。

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篇7:初中英语作文:写给蒋老师的一封信

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Dear Miss Jiang,

I am writing toshare my ideas about our English class. Now, our main material in the class isthe textbook, which is reasonable. But I think we can get some other resources,such as English magazines, songs, movies and so on. We can learn the basicknowledge from out textbook, and get some more from other materials. Inaddition, those materials are more authentic and practical, which will beuseful to our learning. Besides, by doing so, we can get more fun from learningand develop our interest to English. Please take good consideration of myadvice. Thank you!

Sincerely yours

Bella

尊敬的蒋老师

您好!我写是想和你谈谈我对英语课的想法。现在我们上课用的主要材料是课本,这是合理的。但是我认为我们可以获取一些其他资源,比如英语杂志,歌曲,电影等等。我们可以从课本上学到基本的知识,同时从其他材料获取知识。另外,那些材料更真实和实用,这对于我们的学习会有好处的。此外,通过这样做我们可以从学习中获得乐趣从而培养我们对英语的兴趣。请您认真考虑我的建议,谢谢!

贝拉

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篇8:努力奋斗的初中作文

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俗话说:“你脸上云淡风轻,谁也不知道你呼吸得有多紧;你走路带风,谁也不知道你膝盖上有摔倒的伤;你笑得没心没肺,谁也不知道你哭起来只能是无声。"要想让人觉得毫不费力,只能背后极其努力。我不愿做别人眼中的弱者,所以,我会付出十倍百倍的努力!

正所谓“吃得苦中苦,方为人上人”,在这六年中,有谁能知道我对学习付出了多少辛酸和艰苦?每当我点灯熬油打夜战时,我就不停地鼓励自己:“努力,努力,再坚持几年就熬过头了”!又有多少个日日夜夜,一个个数学公式伴我进入梦乡,我这么努力,只是为了换来最终一份满意的答卷。每当我看到桌子上擦的答不完的卷子时,我的心底就有一种说不出的负荷感,也正因为付出这些数不清的“苦”,才换回了学习的“甜”,渐渐地,面对考试,我不再怯畏。

“十年寒窗无人问,一举成名天下知”。频繁的考试让我习以为常,然而只为了小升初那四张答卷,我一直苦涩的等待,等待什么?等待我的努力能有回报,等待我用六年时光换来的答卷!

“日日行,不怕千万里;时时学,不怕千万卷。"在寒冷的冬日里,虽然天还没亮,可是我早已起来奋笔疾书了,也许这时还有许多人在梦里邀游,我为了学习,倾尽了我的一切,用尽了我的精力,可别人看我表面很成功,但没有任何人知道我在背后默默付出了多少努力,他们玩的时间,我用来学习,虽然学习讲究“劳逸结合”,可一个又一个鲜活的例子摆在我的眼前,告诉我“只劳十二年,但却能逸一生”!

努力吧,少年!

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篇9:初中英语作文:艾米的家庭

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Amy is anAmerican girl .She lives in New York .

There are four people in her family, herparents, her elder brother and her.

Amy’s father is an engineer and he is busywith his work everyday. But he still plays with Amy in his spare time and Amyloves him very much.

Amy’s mother is a teacher. She teaches math in a smallschool. She is thin with golden hair.

What’s more, she is very kind and cookswell. His brother, John is two years older than her and he goes to school withher everyday. John is an active boy and often helps Amy. Amy feels happy tolive in such a family.

艾米是一个美国女孩。她住在纽约。她家里有四口人,她的父母,她的哥哥和她。艾米的父亲是一名工程师,他每天都忙于他的工作。但他仍然在空闲时间和艾米玩,艾米非常爱他。艾米的母亲是一个老师。她在一个小小的学校里面教数学。她很瘦,有着金色的头发。更重要的是,她很善良而且做饭很好吃。他的哥哥,约翰比她大两岁,他每天都和艾米一起去学校。约翰是个活跃的男孩而且经常帮助艾米。艾米很高兴生活在这样一个家庭中。

[初中英语作文:艾米的家庭

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篇10:初中作文不一定要努力

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不一定要努力。只要你快乐,这也是你学习,生活的一种努力!在这个大千世界里能够问心无愧的对别人说出我生活得很快乐,因为我不努力,我没有心又有几个呢!轻松地生活是大家的梦想,但是想轻松的生活的话我们就得先努力,如何做到不努力也能轻松快乐的生活呢!?我想这也是现在为人父母的家长们对自己的孩子所希望的吧!当然还有我们这些学生了。

不一定要努力。我也可以生活得快乐,不是我有很好的家庭,而是我有很好的秘籍。我很聪明,但是我不喜欢,我也不爱动脑,因为这很累,我累了就想睡觉。这也是广大学生的借口。我知道自己有很好的思维,头脑好的方面,但是现在的社会不喜欢我这样的人,多说少做。

我不想改,不是因为我懒,而是我这样生活得很轻松,你们可能会说我现在还小,不知道到人们的辛苦,而在旁边乱发言。说实话,如果我做起事来,我可以做得比别人好,可是我没有这个权利,也没这个心。我只想做一个特别的人,只要自己开心的同时我身边的人也要开心,因为这样我就很难被人忘记,那你也可以做一个非常有名的人啊!?有人是这么对我说的。可是做名人很累啊!我是这么回答的。

我不想我的学习成绩很好,因为这样一点也不好玩,想努力的时候一点都没有刺激感和挑战性。在班里做一个浑水摸鱼的机灵鬼也不错啊!让别人来猜猜你在想什么

如果人人想我一样的话,那世界就完了,有人一定会这么想。可是如果我们这么想的话就不同了:古代的贪官是怎么来的?还不是想生活得更好才成为贪官的。如果他们像我一样清风明月,平淡即美的话,那我们的中国历史,又会有多少的假案冤案?!

我并不是真的胸无大志,相反我有时也会尽志无悔,笑看风云还会凡事求真,言必由衷是不是看不懂我呢!就像我也看不懂机子身边的人样的。我们都很公平。

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篇11:初中英语作文:城市的变化

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I live in a city, since I was small, I witnessed all the things happened in this city. Now, in my eyes, after so many years, the city has changed so much. First, the transportation has become fluent.

Many years ago, there were less bus stations, people always needed to changed their lines by many cars.

But now, almost all the places can be reached by bus, people don’t need to change the line. Second, the buildings are enlarging, this reflects the city’s economy develops fast.

Indeed, I can go to many newly built public places to have fun, some are for children, some are for the old, all of these are good for people’s communication. The city’s change reflects people keep pace with time.

我住在一个城市,当我很小的时候,我目睹了发生在这个城市的一切事情。现在,在我眼里,交通变得便利。很多年以前,公共汽车站点很好,人们总是需要通过换车来改变路线。现在,几乎所有的地方都可以通过公交车到达,人们不用改变路线。第二,建筑正在扩大,这反映了一个城市经济的快速发展。确实,我可以去很多新建的公共场所玩,一些是给孩子的,一些是给老人家的,所有的这些对于人们的交流是有用的。城市的改变反映了人们与时俱进。

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篇12:初中写可爱的小狗英语

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Our familys puppy is called "yellow yellow". It is long with a long yellow hair; watery eyes still long with sweat more than the nose; tail hairy, like a long chicken scattered.

One time to see it cute? Haha! Or let me tell you! Once, I came home from school, happy to pick up my fathers cell phone, ready to "yellow" camera. I came to the kennel before the call to the "yellow ... ... yellow", it immediately fleeing out from the bushes, hurry to run in front of me, shaking the hairy big tail.

I looked, hurriedly squatted down, opened the phone. "Yellow yellow" in front of me back and forth a few steps to see me open the phone, turned down, his tongue spit it out, as if to say: "master. Shoot good ah!" I read, give it a shot A big head stickers, after the film, I got it in front of him to see just take a good photo. Looking at the phone in their own, "yellow" happy shaking his tail, as if to show off, said: "look at me, how handsome! Do you have me than handsome?

Another time, about 10 oclock or so, "yellow" to see a black and fat rat, brave and brave it rushed up, but unfortunately did not catch, it was run to the board, and this scene just I saw it, and I called "yellow yellow", it heard my call, quickly ran over, so when it came, I said: "Go and catch the mouse!" It seems to understand my words , Standing next to the board for a while, did not wait. So, it looked at me with a poor look, as if to say: "Lord ... Master, I ... did not catch the mouse, I ... ..."

"Well, do not catch it!" I said with a grin. The voice of the original, sad it has become a lively and lovely puppy, went to me, with my tongue on my feet, or biting the hairy big tail.

Ah! "Yellow", you really have been lovely puppy ah! I am proud of you.

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篇13:关于寻物启事的初中英语作文

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I lost my notebook in the library this afternoon. Its cover is blue and white. I wrote my name on the first paper. There are about two hundred papers. Many important notes and information are written on it. They are important to me. Will the finder please call me? My name is Xiang Yun and my telephone number is 5201314. Here are my sincere thanks.

今天下午,我在图书馆弄丢了我的笔记本,封面时蓝白色的。第一页上写了我的名字。笔记本大概有200页,上面记有许多重要的笔记和信息,那些对我很重要。请拾到者与我联系。我的名字叫向云,电话号码是5201314特在此感谢!

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篇14:怀念的英语作文初中

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When memory began for me, my grandfather was past sixty-a great tall man

with thick hair becoming gray. He had black eyes and a straight nose which ended

in a slightly flattened tip. Once he explained seriously to me that he got that

flattened tip as a small child when he fell down and stepped on his nose.

The little marks of laughter at the corners of his eyes were the prodnct of

a kindly and humorous nature. The years of work which had bent his shoulders had

never dulled his humour nor his love of a joke.

Everywhere he went, "Gramp" made friends easily. At the end of half an hour

you felt you had known him all your life. I soon learned that he hated to give

orders , but that when he had to, he tried to make his orders sound like

suggestions.

One July morning, as he was leaving to go to the cornfield, he said :

"Edwin, you can pick up the potatoes in the field today if you want to do that.

" Then he drove away with his horses.

The day passed, and I did not have any desire to pick up potatoes. Evening

came and the potatoes were still in the field. Gramp, dusty and tired, led the

horses to get their drink.

"How many bags of potatoes were there?" Gramp inquired. "I dont know.

"

"How many potatoes did you pick up?"

"I didnt pick any. " "Not any! Why not?"

"You said I could pick, them up if I wanted to. You didnt say I had to.

"

In the next few minutes I learned a lesson I would not forget: when Gramp

said I could if I wanted to, he meant that I should want to.

Gram hated cruelty and injustice. The injustices of history, even those of

a thousand years before, angered her as much as the injustices of her own

day.

She also had a deep love of beauty. When she was almost seventy-five, and

had gone to live with one of her daughters, she spent a delightful morning

washing dishes because, as she said, the beautiful patterns on the dishes gave

her pleasure. The bird, the flowers, the clouds-all that was beautiful around

her- pleased her. She was like the father of the French painter, Millet, who

used to gather grass and show it to his son , saying , "See how beautif ul this

is ! "

In a pioneer society it is the harder qualities of mind and character that

are of value. The softer virtues are considered unnecessary. Men and women

struggling daily to earn a living are unable, even for a moment, to forget the

business of preserving their lives. Only unusual people, like my grandparents,

manage to keep the softer qualities in a world of daily struggle.

Such were the two people with whom I spent the months from June to

September in the wonderful days of summer and youth.

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篇15:初中英语作文大全

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There was a basketball match between class 3 and class 4 yesterday

afternoon. before the match, all the students thought class 3 would win the

match because some good players were in the class.

The match began, And all the players played very well.other students

watched and shouted for their teams. It was an exciting match. When the first

half of the match ended, class 4 fell behind class 3. The players in class 4

tried their best to catch up with them in the second half. With the shouts "come

on", the players in class 4 won the match.

The match was over. How wonderful the match was!

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篇16:我的小屋初中英语作文例文

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I am living in. It has a wonderful envirnment. I can see flowers and trees from my house. there is a playground right in front of my block.

Children always play there and senior citizens do exercises. Public transport is convience. School, hospital and super market are only a few minutes away. I like my housing estate very much.

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篇17:描写风景的初中英语

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In front of my house there is a Gulf stream, a very normal stream, the highest level four meters to the surface will be wide, the water hours a strong, all of a sudden will be able to jump past,溪岸see the long lines of willows and a whirling small peach trees, the other side of the production team of Daejeon. All this is as usual.

However, I like it very much.

Spring, like a luminous stream of white belt. Daliushu light to float a leisurely shoot fine. Xiaocaohu 3322 of unknown mixed with wildflowers, yellow, light blue, pink, micro-purple, like a flash flash stars. the other side of a large reflection of the cauliflower in water, just as the golden horizon of the carpet. that a group of cute little fish, now floating in the water, dive into the water a moment, a moment that a piece of polyethylene, while their spread . These tiny fish, most of them only half as big match stick, his eyes are large and black, together with the body is transparent, well look, like a piece of flashing colon

The heat of summer, here is my most comfortable place to rest, the two sides have already grown willow un only fishes continuously through the sun , leakage to the surface, the needles seem to support teams. Noon When the cicada一个劲and shouting "hot - hot -" I will be holding a book, sit under relying on the trunk, and let the water cool touch my leg, suddenly, the cool comfortable feeling from all over the body at the foot of Bay. Hey, how should the United States and the United States. look at the stream, the that the water, like soft, thin belt, while in the water floating light and curly, while Shu has started to gesticulate even the United States. In some cases, neighbors came to the small boy in the stream, while at the pier or in the bushes in touch will touch a number of small shrimp crab, so they will have to give the spoils of war high, the merry laughter of the stream shaman.

Ah, home of the stream, a very unusual and very beautiful stream.

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篇18:初中路努力一路精彩

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人生在勤不索何获——张衡

生活如一幅画,有黑白的线条勾画轮廓,也有五颜六色渲染精彩。有我们小时候牙牙学语、蹒跚学步的努力,也有我们考得第一次满分、上台获得第一次掌声的精彩。我们在坚持努力中成长和强大,同时也领略世界的精彩。

人生黄金,莫如少年。放弃过早的安逸,迎来我们努力的年华。伴着初升的太阳,我们在教室中书声琅琅,迎着落日的余晖,我们在操场上挥洒着汗水。我们或许可以享受在电脑前“打打杀杀”“造地建房”,但是那样的精彩,会失去了精彩本来的模样。

记得小时候的一次艺术比赛,我从当初的不敢报名,到后来初赛上台的惶恐,但是复赛中我充分准备,努力克服自己的不足,并坚持练习,最终获得了优异的成绩。我瞬时间明白了坚持努力才有回报的道理。真正努力经历过了,你才会得到人生的真谛。

还记得我当初学习游泳的时候,第一个教练期竟然因为我对下水的心理恐惧,导致老是掌握不了动作要领,居然我没有学会,看着同一期的伙伴们在水中遨游,我伤心的落下了眼泪,原来艰辛的付出过后也会有失败,但是妈妈对我说,成功固然值得表扬,但是经过努力了的失败也很精彩。并坚持给我报了第二期,我很快振作起来,并用心领会技术要领,很快我就能在水中遨游并和在和小伙伴的比赛中名列前茅了。( )

人生曲折如歌,悠扬起伏,有优秀、有平凡,有成功、有挫败,关键是看你自己的态度。你愿意永远做一只井底之蛙,活在安逸舒适的温室之地,还是愿意付出努力,到更广阔的天地活出精彩的自己?

我们会树立宏伟远大的人生理想和奋斗目标,也会对美好的未来无限憧憬,但是回报需要汗水,需要艰辛,需要付出。只有在当下的时光不断努力,坚持不懈,我们的目标才会达到,理想才会变成现实。

所以,我要对我的同龄人说,把努力当作快乐的人,才会收获真正的精彩。让我们一路成长,一路坚持,一路努力,一路精彩吧!

[初中作文一路努力一路精彩

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篇19:初中写可爱的小狗英语

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Sister home has a lovely puppy, she is happy, as to why give her the name? It is because the sister wanted the dog every day happy, so give her a happy name.

Happy with a pair of watery eyes, like a pair of black gems, there is not a long straight teeth. Happy hair is black and white, especially eye-catching, look very good!

Sister said: "happy very like to eat bread." Then put a piece of bread handed me, I will be this piece of bread on the happy head of the high 1 m place, happy to jump up, but how to jump eat If youre gone, youre gone. I jumped to the front in front of me, happy to the startled, I put the bread in front of happy, step by step to go back, happy to keep up with step by step, I baked the bread, happy immediately Ran past, and soon, happy to dang back from the bread. I turned my head and said to my sister, "Sister, happy and so nice!" I turned back and said to you, "Happy, this bread is rewarded for you." My voice is running, Listen to the words, devour to eat bread.

Happy very lively. Every time I go out to play, happy to jump to me, as if to say: I also want to go out to play, you take me out with the good? Happy too cute, I can not bear to refuse it, take it together Go out, we came to the field, happy to see the East, West look, look very lively. I saw a stream in front of it, with a happy came to the creek next to a large stone, sat down. Who knows, I sat down, happy to go to the small stream of water, really like a child.

Happy to sleep when cute than anyone else, I came to the happy "room" before, happy as if sleeping baby, and as if it is like a ceramic doll, a touch will be broken.

Happy sometimes better than anyone else, when we clean up, happy will help. It is stepping on a piece of cloth, in the help of garbage collection!

I am so happy! How lovely it is, how lively it is, how well it is!

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篇20:初中英语说明文写作要点

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说明文是阐述事物的特征、本质、性能、结构、用途或科学原理的一种文体。其说明的对象可以是具体的,如:自然环境,仪表设备等;也可以是抽象的,如概念定律等。以下是小编整理的初中英语说明文写作要点,欢迎阅读!

说明文的写作相对于论说文来说,有一定的套路可循,因此不是十分复杂。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分类法、因果法等;说明自然环境方面的内容常用时间次序法、分类法等。当然,随着对象的不同,具体应该采用的方法也会有所不同。

说明文的写作应该注意的事项有下面几点:

1.语言简明扼要,通俗易懂,避免夸张华丽的辞藻,要把真实的一面展现在读者面前。

2.说明时一定要把握一个中心主题。说明文中细枝末节较多,但不能喧宾夺主。

3.说明的次序非常重要。合理的次序会使文章条理清楚,脉络明晰。因此,练习时可以尝试不同的次序进行写作,找出最合理的一种。

4.由于说明文写实性较强,有时难免会让人感到没有生气。因此,可以适当使用一些比喻、拟人等修辞手段,来增加文章的色彩。

下面是一篇说明一所医院布局的文章。文章虽短,但需要说明的内容却达11处之多。平均一句话就要描写一处,如果组织得不好,便会给人凌乱的感觉。

为了避免这一点,文章把整个布局图分三部分来写:

贯彻医院的是main road,第一部分以大门为参照物,介绍了靠大门且通过main road东西相对的急诊楼和门诊楼。

第二部分以湖为参照物,中心线还是main road,介绍其他分诊楼、实验室、放射室等。

第三部分写main road尽头的建筑物。

这样,繁多的细节显得井井有条。因此,选择好主线及参照物是决定文章成功的关键。

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition about“THE LAYOUT OF A HOSPITAL”. Locate some important departments in the hospital based on the information given below.Your composition should be no less than 120 words.

(1)the Emergency Department

(2)the Out-patient Department

(3)the Surgery Department

(4)the Dispensary

(5)the Physician Department

(6)the Eye,Ear,and Throat Department

(7)the Dental Department

(8)the Laboratory

(9)the X-ray Department

(10)the Administrative Building

(11)the Ward

例文:

The Layout of a Hospital Near the gate,on the westside of the road is the Emergency Department. Opposite the Emergency Department across the Main Road is the Out-patient Department. The building to the southwest of the lake is the Dispensary,which face the Surgery Department lying on the other side of the road.Along the west wall,from south to north,stand three buildings:the Physician Department,the Eye,Ear,and Throat Department,and the Dental Department.

The Laboratory is to the northwest of the round about,and beside the Laboratory,the X-ray Department is located on the same side of the road. A winding road by the lake leads to the Ward.

Near the end of the Main Road,the Administrative Building is situated on the east side.The hospital is nicely and conveniently laid out.

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