环境问题及解决方法英语作文（汇总20篇）

一、明确作文要求，提高写作能力

一篇好的作文，要有一个主题思想，整篇作文应该是紧扣文章主题，遵循特定的文体格式，选用恰当的语言合理组织文章结构，内容统一、连贯，语法、拼写、标点 正确，用词恰当。很多同学在准备英语写作时找不到方向，一味的想在考研英语写作上面抓分，却又不知道怎么样提高。杨老师在此特别提醒考生首先要学会抓住考研英语写作要领，尤其注意文章逻辑关系在阅读中的运用。逻辑关系散布在文章的句子内部、句句之间、以及段落之间。最基本的逻辑关系有以下几种：

1、因果关系：as a result ，therefore，hence，consequently，because,for, due to, hence, consequently等等。

2、并列、递进关系：and, or, then，in addition，besides，in other words，moreover等等

3、转折关系：however，but, yet, in fact等等。

这些其实是已经很熟悉的逻辑提示词在文章中起的效果，并非仅仅是衔接文章的句子，从阅读的角度来看，其实同时在给我们某种提示，告诉我们哪些句子是有效信息，相对重要的信息，哪些信息是相对不重要的信息，因为我们在英语写作的时候，有一条清晰的思路，你不是为了完整翻译文章而进行阅读，而是为了获取主旨来写作。

二、摆脱无话可说 练习“三段式”思维

在英语作文写作时，无话可说的确让人比较头疼，无话可说是一个极端，有的考生题目看得懂，提纲也一目了然，就是不知道该说什么，在考场上头脑一片空白，想到的也只是空泛的东西，在考试过程当中，这会在很大程度上影响大家的做题效果和做题速度。杨老师表示，当头脑出现空白时，应该从具体的、细小的、琐碎的、微不足道的事物所引发的思考变成观点，再进行论述。例如，领导讲话总是第一部分、、第二部分、第三部分…这样条理比较清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）

2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）

3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）

5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）

6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）

8）most important of all, moreover, finally

9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）

10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）

建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！

三、用词准确保证语言连贯

考研英语写作中，同样是一篇作文，在没有语法、词汇等基础性错误的前提下，一个考生的句式平平，而另外一个考生的句式灵活多变，非常漂亮，毫无疑问，后者肯定比前者的分数高。但写英语作文时最忌讳的是用一些模棱两可的词，表达不够准确，而且考试时要特别注意语法、词语、语气、标点符号等，避免单词拼写错误、语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。建议考生考试时，最好选择自己最有把握的词汇、短语和句式。

很多考生习惯背诵模版，在写作文是喜欢套用背诵模版，但由于仓促，紧张等原因，很容易犯一些简单的错误，如语句不通。所以提醒考生选材时切忌胡子眉毛一把抓，词语堆积，不伦不类。前后及段落之间在逻辑关系上要紧密衔接，不能把没有任何逻辑关系的词放在一起，可以用恰当的关联词把思想连贯的表达出来。总之，无论想要套用那个模版，前提都要保证语言通顺，文章思想连贯。此外，要有自己的style，一来通过背诵或研究范文，把握考研英语作文的整体结构特点，以及写作格式，二来要在研究范文的基础上寻找自己的闪光点，比如闪光词汇。如果大家仔细研究真题，就会发现，几乎所有的高分作文都有一个共同点，那就是都具有几个闪光词汇，这个词汇可能并不是什么高级词汇，但是你能把它的延伸意，或者说你能把我它的一词多义，并且应用到你的文章中。

四、长短句巧搭配 精悍短语当亮点

写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。此外短小精辟的句子，也可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：

As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although oneaction is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy theintellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.

杨老师强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

春天来到了，花儿开的又红又大，像在比赛谁开的颜色最美丽又漂亮呢;小草己经长出又绿又嫩了;大树也不令外，长的高大又强壮。小鸟在大树上歌唱，小蜜蜂在花从中忙忙碌碌地工作，为人们酿造出甜甜的蜂蜜来。

Spring is coming, the large red flowers, like in the game who the most beautiful colors and beautiful; the grass has grown out of the trees are green and tender; not so long, tall and strong. Birds are singing in the trees, in the flowers bees in bustling about, for people to make sweet honey.

谁在这儿叹息呀?原来是小鸟，它是在为人类而叹息。因为大森林的树木要被人们砍伐了。如果大树被砍完了，森林里的动物就没有了家。如果大风来了没有了树木的帮助，房屋要倒塌。如果树木被砍了，人们就听不到小鸟叽叽喳喳的叫声，这个世界就只有人类在说话。

Who here sigh? The birds, it is for the human sigh. Because the forest of trees to be cut down. If the tree was cut down in the forest, the animal has no home. If the wind to help without trees, houses collapsed. If the trees were cut down, people can not hear the birds chirping, the world is only a human talking.

请大家爱护环境吧。

Let us care for the environment.

What’s more, we should realize that only from our planet can we obtain our sheltering, food, cloth and so forth.

Over the past years, floods, droughts, landslides, and dust-storms have frequented our planet, the only habitat of human beings. Several days ago, tsunami(海啸) has swept the Southeast Asia, which has caused enormous damage. All these have sounded an alarm to human beings.

The destruction which is caused by human beings has aroused people’s concern all over the world. If we pay no heed to the present destructive human activities, our planet will become of tomb instead of cozy home. What’s more, we should realize that only from our planet can we obtain our sheltering, food, cloth and so forth.

Counter-measures must be taken to curb the destruction caused by human beings. Most importantly, laws must be established to punish those who are involved in destructive conducts.

[环境变化英语作文

1990年，拯救儿童国际组织指派史坦宁到越南成立办公室，希望他在六个月内，协助解决当地儿童营养不良的问题。

史坦宁到了越南，从政府官员和专家学者口中，听到儿童营养不良，起因于公共卫生差、平均收入低、乡下人民教育不普及等。问题看起来复杂庞大，即使有六年的时间，应该都解决不了。

他决定，不要忙着解决问题，先想办法复制成功。

史坦宁到一个乡下村庄，测量每个孩子的身高体重，找出其中家境不好，却长得比别人高壮的孩子。

结果他发现，高壮的孩子在同样艰困的环境中，有着跟别人不同的生活方式。这个村里的人民，一般人每天只有钱吃两餐饭。高壮的孩子家并不比别人富有，妈妈一天能煮的食物量一样多，但是她们把它分成四餐。

一般村民的孩子每天吃两餐、每餐平均分量较多，然而因为孩子长期营养不良，肠胃没办法一次消化吸收那么多食物，因此多吃的部分无益。反而每天吃四餐、每餐平均分量较少，孩子长得比较好。

此外，一般村民相信，孩子知道自己有多饿，一大锅饭菜端出来，全家人各取所需。但是高壮的孩子的妈妈，会先把他们的饭菜分出来，确保孩子吃得饱。遇到生病等特殊情况，妈妈还会一口一口喂孩子吃完饭。

最后，一般村民的孩子不吃虾、螃蟹和地瓜叶，前两者被视为大人才吃的东西，后者被视为喂牲畜用的低等食材。高壮的孩子的妈妈则不这样想，她们在田里捞出小虾小蟹，把地瓜叶剁碎全部加入白米中煮，增加了孩子的蛋白质与维生素。

发现高壮的孩子的秘诀，史坦宁将之推广到整个村落。这些做法其他村民都做得到，而且可以持续做下去。以前很多专家写过各种计划都没有成功，现在仅复制高壮的孩子的生活习惯，六个月后，村里65%的孩子营养不良改善。最后，这套做法总共影响了越南两百多万人。

这是《创意黏力学》一书的作者希思兄弟，二月再度联手出版的新书《转变》所举的一个例子。希思兄弟以此说明，改变要有进展，需要有明确的方向，告诉参与的人往哪里走、如何做、目的地在哪，因此，找出成功的部分非常重要。

当大脑需要专注在解答时，大家往往把力气放在问题上。希思兄弟建议主管，问问自己花多少时间在解决问题，又花多少时间在扩大成功。

史坦宁说：即使在失败中仍然有成功的部分。当初如果不是看到那些部分，他可能待在越南二十年，都还没有太大的成效。

星期五放学后，我和妈妈去公园散步。

After school on Friday, my mother and I went for a walk in the park.

公园里的花散发着淡淡的清香，小草从地下钻出来了，柳树摇着绿色的长辫子。但是我发现有人带着小狗在草地上跑着，有的小狗在草地上随地大小便，草地就搞得很脏，小狗的粪便污染了公园的环境。

The flowers in the park exudes a touch of fragrance, the grass from the underground drilling, willow shook his green long braids. But I found someone with a dog run on the grass, some of the dog in the grass on the grassland is defecate, get dirty, dog feces pollution of the environment of the park.

我想我们每一个去公园的人都应该管号小动物，不要随意污染环境，这样我们的地球才会更加美丽。

I think every one of us went to the park to the people should be small animal, do not pollute the environment freely, so that our earth will be more beautiful.

尊敬的环保局局长：

您好!

数年前，每当我们经过珠江边时，看到的是清澈见底的江水，上面点缀着点点金光，那是太阳留恋下的脚印，风一吹，清新的水味扑鼻迷人。现今，每当我们经过珠江边时，看到的是乌黑浑浊的污水，那是工厂给江水留下的印记。水面上漂浮着垃圾，死鱼，那是游人的不负责任，鱼儿的哀叹所留下的痕迹。

对此现象，我代表我们小学六年级向有关部门提出以下几点建议：

(1)防止由生产和生活活动引起的环境污染、化学污染，包括防治工业生产排放的“三废”。

(2)禁止游人随地乱扔垃圾，如有发现，给予适当的处置。

(3)严禁海上船舶运输排出的污染体，工农业生产和人民生活使用有毒有害的化学物品。

最后，望以上几点您能采纳。为了让广州更美好，请大家共同行动吧!

How Freshmen Adapt to the New Environment?

When freshmen enter the university at the first time they have to deal with all kinds of affairs independently.Whether a new student can understand and become familiar with the environment of the campus rapidly will determine whether he can live and study freely.

Firstly,the freshmen should be familiar with layout of the campus as soon as possible.As soon as freshmen arrange properly their luggage after entering the university,they should familiarise themselves with every location in the campus at once.In this way,they will save more time and get along smoother than others when they go through various kinds of formalities and solve various kinds of problems.

Secondly,freshmen should consult seniors more. It is the swiftest method to ask those familiar with the environment of the campus.

Finally,holding certain positions in the class can also help freshmen to adapt to their life on campus.

Create a Green Campus

It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college. Obviously， a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days， since the concept of “a green world” has become the focus of the society. The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment. To begin with， the development on the campus is to be sustainable and recyclable. Some of the authorities’ budget should be on how to reduce of the waste. What’s more， we’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us. Thus the idea of environmental protection may become a common occurrence in our daily life. It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to protect our campus from waste and pollution， and hence these activities are to play an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Certainly， there is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campuses.

With the development of our society and economy,people are confronting with serious environmental problem,including environment pollution and resource scarity.So for modern college students,it is of great importance to create and maintain a green campus in our university.

As we all known,the idea of green campus has become the focus of the most colleagues.What measures should we take to creat green campus?As far as were concerned we can take action from the following two aspects.Firstly,wed better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us and the importance of protection of environment.Only in this way ,the idea of environmental protection may become a common action in our daily life.Secondly,it is necessary for us to take effectie measure to protect our campus from pollution and waste,for example,we may call on student to save water and electricity and refuse sorting equipment treatment by the way of the slogan or other effective form of our purpose of make green campus.

Certainly there is no doubt that the further consideration must be paid to our green campus.And there is an increasing number of college students will participate in the action which is meaningful for our development.Under everyones joint effort,I believe that our environment

will become more and more beautiful.

People plant a great number of young trees in the mountains.When the trees grow big and tall enough,they are cut down by workers and carried out of the mountains to the paper mill where fine paper is made from wood.Then it is taken to every corner of the country and used for different purposes.Some people use paper to copy writing,others use it to write something such as letters,reports and articles.When paper turns out to be of no use,the waste paper is collected and retreated in the recycling factory before being put into use again.

​导语：现阶段环境污染愈加严重，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

THE citys meteorological observatory issued a white warning sign Thursday indicating the citys weather could be influenced by a tropical sand storm in the next two days.

The meteorological observatory in Beijing said the storm could hit the city.

"Coastal areas in eastern Beijing could have winds as strong as force 8," the observatory said.

The air quality will become rather terrible with the sand storm.

The wind and sand will cause the city pulluted.

Terrible sand storm!

【参考译文】

星期四，该市气象台发布了一个白色预警信号，表明该城市的天气可能在未来两天受到热带沙尘暴的影响。

北京气象台说，风暴可能袭击该市。

天文台说：“北京东部沿海地区的风力可能比8级强。”。

沙尘暴将使空气质量变得相当糟糕。

风和沙将导致城市污染。

可怕的沙尘暴!

写作要求：

1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；

3.词数120左右；

4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇:pave the way

【参考范文】

From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son , well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.

It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.

Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.

[英语作文：父母关注孩子成长问题

On March 1, the activities of the school to carry out the "health small pacesetter". Class meetings, dong teacher said: "we waste a lot of the classroom, we want to see the paper picked it up and throw into the trash can, if you see a litter paper classmates, everybody is going to report, pick up the paper, most of which students report students, the more is the health of small fields, ok?" The students replied in unison: "good."

A class, the students will pick up the paper in the classroom, I found many scraps on the ground, and put them all picked up, and then all into the trash can. "You throw waste paper is wrong." See the classmate throw draft paper, I hurriedly went up to stop. He said: "Im sorry, Ill pick it up.

Through "hygienic pacesetter" activities, let I deeply feel: "everybody is responsible for environmental protection," not talk u, but every little bit in our daily life. We want to start from oneself, start from every little bit, love flowers and plants trees, no littering, no spitting.

The classmates, come on! Starts from me, start from now, protect the environment and make our school more beautiful!

3月1日，学校开展“卫生小标兵”的活动。班会课的时候，董老师说：“我们教室的垃圾很多，我们要把看到的纸捡起来丢到垃圾桶里，如果看到有乱丢纸的同学，大家就要举报，哪个同学捡的纸最多，举报同学的越多，就是卫生小标兵，好不好?”同学们异口同声地说：“好。”

一下课，同学们就在教室里捡纸，我在地面找到了许许多多的碎纸，并把它们都捡了起来，然后全部放到了垃圾桶里。“你乱丢废纸是不对的。”看到有同学乱扔草稿纸，我连忙上去制止。他说：“对不起，我马上就捡起来。

通过“卫生小标兵“的活动，让我深深地感觉到：“保护环境，人人有责”不是夸夸其谈的一句空话，而是我们日常生活中的一点一滴。我们要从自己做起，从一点一滴做起，爱护花草树木，不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰。

同学们，加油吧!从我做起，从现在做起，保护环境，让我们的校园变得更加美好!

Nowadays, a new lifestyle called carbon life is spreading every corner of our country. The conceps of low carbon are low energy and no waste. Firstly, a no-car day is supposed to set up every week in our city. Because cars not only cause serious air pollution but also waste energy. Its a good idea to go to school or go to work by bus,on foot and bu subway.

Secondly, we had better not use plastic bags any more. Nobody can stand the "white pollution".As we all know, people cant get the free plastic bags in the shops or supermarkets. Now in this way, people pay more attention to the environment and use fewer plastic bags. Instead of using the plastic bags, wed better use the cloth bags or use bags which can be reused again and again.

Finally, one thing that we should keep in mind, we should turn off the lights when we leave, turn of the tap in time, and reuse our textbooks and bottles. We shouldnt spit in a public place and we shouldnt trow litter onto the ground. We should plant more flowers and trees and we must pick up some rubbish and throw it into the dustbin.

In a word, let us try our best to protect the environment. If everyone makes contribution to portecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.

We came to a new environment,to the new environment is very important,if we quickly adapt to the new life,we will be happy,positive emotions,if our flexibility is weak,we will produce angst,thoughts,emotions,such negative nostalgic affect our normal life,work and low efficiency,sleep,poor communication,etc.In our mental health adversely.

How to adapt to the new environment and accept new things?First,the new things have an idea,such as schools,we understand the nature of the school,the students training objectives,and the characteristics of the other students,teachers and students attitude towards when we feel we study goals and objectives of the school of training,we would be accepted and approved by the school.Understanding the characteristics of the other students and teachers attitude,our hearts can have the preparation,and the relationship between his confidence,so we will do a pleasant performance,optimistic and positive.Secondly,we should actively participate in some collective activities.We live in the collective,we grow without education and training of the collective,we only participate in collective activity can benefit from the collective,can learn some development.So we should actively participate in collective activity,in the collective activity,let others know oneself,let yourself for success and accomplishment,the collective and the students can better,we accept us to new things.Third,we should be good at communication with the students.With classmates is a kind of art,respect and understanding,tolerance is open,the principle of communication in a relationship,we should respect each other,understand each other,actively open ego,YanYiLvJi generously,so that we can make friends,to make new friends.We have friends to share with everyone,can get help and understanding of others,we can obtain the support of others.

今天又为大家更新一篇中考作文范文，关于减肥的问题的。

假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》“heart to heart”专栏的编辑.下面是你收到的一位中学生的来信.请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信.针对他的问题。

Dear Xiaowei,

Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere. So Idon’t think you have much to worry about. Here are my suggestions. Eating lateat night is OK, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are goodfor you. Also, when you are free, you’d better do more exercise. Running isgreat. You don’t like running alone, but what about running with your friends?Or you can do some team sports like basketball. I’m sure your friends will bewilling to help you lose weight. I hope you have as much success in losingweight as you have had in your studies. “Believe myself, and I will win.” It’sreally important for us when we meet difficulties. Don’t lose heart; I’m sureyou will succeed one day.

Good luck.

Editor

It has been estimated that a thousand years ago there were less than 400 million people on earth. However, in the recent thousand years human population has increased nearly 20 times. Nowadays the world population has reached more than 7000 million. The population.

First, a lot of people cant get employment, which is a universal problem in the world. Second, in developing countries there are not enough shelters for too many people and so some people are not properly housed and even are exposed to the elements. Third, in underdeveloped countries a lot of people suffer from hunger because of food shortage, which in turn causes many other problems, malnutrition, disease, etc. Fourth, there are not enough schools for so many people and so a lot of people are illiterate.

Therefore, to eliminate these problems, human beings should take effective measures to control population.

Environmental protection is everyones responsibility, we all know! But now the environment is not optimistic, such as: someone spit on the ground, someone littering, still pulling weeds, folding flowers. These are nothing, because some people, not only protect the environment, but also damage the environment. Because of the existence of this kind of person, so only in the sharp deterioration in environment, so we should protect the environment, more to damage the environment should be discouraged. In this way, the tree will be much, grass and flowers also lush, natural, such as dust storms disaster would not have happened!

Today, I let you see how should protect the environment. Some people might say, put a few piece of propaganda to protect the environment in the city brand is not good, in fact, this idea is wrong. Someone may say: this is not a propaganda to protect the environment? Of course not, because there are two reasons: 1, some people may watch brand every day, so I wont join the team to protect the environment. Will likely continue to destroy the environment and bad habits. 2, is the man looking at, but he didnt want to join the ranks to or dont want to protect the environment. From these two points can illustrate just a few propaganda brand is useless. Which someone may be eagerly asked: what! Method is very simple, as long as their faith to protect the environment, the people around will follow suit yourself!

The first step to protect the environment: learn how to protect the environment. Requirements: oneself to voluntarily protect the environment, not even in your environment, so that you even pipe request wont be able to reach others. To protect the environment the second step: advice others to protect the environment. Requirements: if see people littering or spitting, etc., should be up to dissuade immediately. Of course also want tube that yourself! To protect the environment the third step: make a collective to protect the environment. Requirement: let the dozens of people and as a collective, and protect the environment. If you do this at 3 o clock, then you are an "environmental small guards"!

This is my idea of protecting the environment. I now are trying to protect the environment, and you?

保护环境是大家的职责，大家都知道吧!但是现在的环境状况却不容乐观，比如：有人在地上吐痰，有人乱扔垃圾，还有人拔草、折花。这些都不算什么，因为还有些人，不仅不保护环境，而且还破坏环境。因为有这种人的存在，所以环境才在急剧恶化，因此我们要多加保护环境，对破坏环境的人应该劝阻。这样，树就会多了，草和花也茂盛了，自然，沙尘暴之类的灾难就不会发生了!

今天，我就让大家来看看应该怎样保护环境。有些人可能会说：在城市里放几块宣传保护环境的牌子不就好了吗，其实，这种想法是错误的。有人可能会说了：这不是在宣传保护环境吗?当然不是，因为这里有两点原因：1，有一些人有可能每天都不看牌子，所以就不会加入到保护环境的队伍中去。习惯差的，还有可能继续破坏环境。2，那个人看是看了，但他不想加入到这个行列中去或是根本就不想保护环境。从这两点可以说明光是几块宣传的牌子是没用的。哪有人可能会急切地问道：那该怎么办!办法很简单，只要自己要保护环境的信心，自己身边的人也会跟着做的!

保护环境第一步：自己学会保护环境。要求：自己要自觉地保护环境，不能连自己都在破坏环境，这样你就连管别人的要求都达不到了。保护环境第二步：劝告别人保护环境。要求：如果见别人乱扔垃圾或吐痰等，应该立即上去劝阻。当然自己也要管得知自己哟!保护环境第三步：让一个集体保护环境。要求：让几十个人并成一个集体，并保护环境。如果你这三点都做到了，那你就是一个“保护环境小卫士”了!

这就是我保护环境的观点。我现在也在努力保护环境，你呢?

卫生健康饮食：健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会，请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法，写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。 (1)保持健康的重要性;(2)保持健康的方法;(3)保持健康的结论;(4)你的看法。 （1）How tokeep healthy /fit?

All of us want to be healthy. First，we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second，we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third，we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally，we should be happy everyday. Because smile will make us younger。

That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life。 （2）How to keep healthy /fit?

Here is my advice about how to keep healthy/fit. As a middle shool student. first youd better do more exercise such as playing ball games ，running， swimming and jumping ropes(绳子)。Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Dont eat too much meat or suger，but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest . Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustnt drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health. That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life。

Now in the era of rapid development, drive a car at work, waste water and electricity, such as timber has been used to it. And is this a series of moves, people are destroying the scar to the earth, environmental protection has been forgotten by the people.

I saw advertised in the country for a year only food waste is equivalent to pour out the ration of two hundred million people a year, this is an astounding number, thus we can see the waste is huge. Moreover, Chinas waste is not a little, we do not pay attention to the automobile exhaust, the harm of battery is buried in the soil... Thus China has become a "waste of power.

How can I be eco-friendly? This is a simple and complex problems. I think "starts from the minor matter" is the answer to this question, never throw rubbish casually, from shopping after all bring their own shopping bag, start from go out by bus more, since to use less disposable chopsticks, lunch box... Environmental protection needs to be done? Eat less animals, with environmental protection batteries, use less air conditioning, water reuse, conveniently turn off the faucet, will waste paper recycling and so on many ways, as long as it contributes to the environmental protection way, is environmentally friendly.

Environmental how many, how much your moral, environmental protection, how much you love how many, how many green, you how many character. From now on will do a green, understand environmental protection, people to protect the environment! Make the earth a better place, let the life become more beautiful, make people more beautiful!

Let the green, everywhere!

在时代飞速发展的现在，上班时开汽车，浪费水电、木材等已经习以为常了。而就是人们的这一系列举动，正在摧毁着伤痕累累的地球，环保已被人们遗忘在脑后。

我在广告上看见全国一年仅餐饮浪费就相当于倒掉了两亿人一年的口粮，这是一个惊人的数字，由此可以看出我们的浪费是巨大的。而且，中国的浪费不是一点点，我们从不注意汽车排放的尾气、电池埋在土里的危害……由此中国成了一个“浪费大国”。

怎么才能做到环保?这是一个有简单又复杂的问题。我觉得“从小事做起”才是这道题的答案，从不把垃圾随便一扔做起，从以后购物都自带购物袋做起，从出门多乘公交车做起，从少用一次性筷子、餐盒起……环保需要做什么?少吃动物、用环保电池、少用空调、把水重复使用、随手关水龙头，将废纸再次利用等许许多多的方式，只要对环境保护有贡献的方式，都算是环保。

环保有多少，你的道德就有多少，环保有多少，你的爱心就有多少，环保有多少，你的人品就有多少。从现在起做一个会环保，懂环保，做环保的人吧!让地球变得更美好，让生活变得更美好，让人们变得更美好!

让环保，无处不在!

Water is the source of life. Human can not do without water, animals, plants cannot survive without water. We every day to drink water, water, not only we need water, the fish in the water, the crops of the fields, the trees on the hill, and so on all need water. Some people may think so: water is to burn forever, love how how waste waste, this idea is wrong, we should change the idea.

I listen to mama said, in our city the creek, at the time of their small river on the bottom, they often catch fish in the river, catch shrimp, game play, but now is full of rubbish, into a dry river.

Water had a close relationship with each one of us, if there is no water, crops cant grow, we have no food to eat and vegetables, we wash hands, wash dishes, laundry every day... A moment also can not do without water. We cant live without water. Since the water effect, we should save water, form the good habit of saving water, do people go to close the tap, dont throw the rubbish into the river... Keep water clean.

For all of us have a good living environment, let us together hand in hand together, starts from me, start from now, sets up the idea of saving water, protecting water, take good care of water is to take care of ourselves.

In order to our better future, we all work together!

水是生命的源泉。人类离不开水，动物、植物也离不开水。我们每天要喝水、用水，不光我们需要水，水里的鱼儿、田里的庄稼、山上的树木等等都需要水。有的人可能这么想：水是永远用不完，爱怎么浪费就怎么浪费，这种想法是不对的，我们应该改变这种想法。

我听妈妈说，在我们城里的这条小河，在她们小的时候河里清澈见底，她们经常在河水里捉鱼、捉虾、游戏玩耍，可是到了现在却到处是垃圾，成了一条干枯的小河。

水与我们每一个人都关系密切，如果没有水，农作物就无法生长，我们就没有吃的粮食和蔬菜了，我们每天洗手、洗菜、洗衣…一刻也离不开水。如果没有水，我们就不能生存。既然水的作用那么大，我们就应该节约用水，从小养成节约用水的好习惯，做到人走关好水龙头、不把垃圾扔到河里…使水能够保持干净。

为了我们大家有一个良好的生活环境，让我们一起携手起来，从我做起，从现在做起，树立起节水、护水的观念，爱护水就是爱护我们自己。

为了我们美好的未来，我们大家一起努力吧!

1、立意——平庸病态

见解独到、构思新巧、主旨积极的文章无疑是任何人都梦寐以求的。可惜的是，在考场上有的学生为了追求所谓的标新立异，甚至写出了令人匪夷所思的文章。如有的学生在《假如记忆可以移植》中这样写：“我要把爱因斯坦的大脑移植过来，为自己发财致富……”由于思想格调不高，不符合高考作文“思想健康”的要求，降低了作文品位。

规避：树立正确的人生观、世界观、价值观，突破定向思维、线性思维，走向逆向思维、发散思维，视角独特，出人意料又在情理之中。

2、选材——陈旧苍白

有的学生作文材料陈旧苍白，缺乏厚重感。要么记叙一件事，有骨架没血肉;要么议论一个道理，观点+例子+结论，缺分析少论证;要么连例子都没有，翻来覆去，空谈漫议，写到哪儿算哪儿，凑够字数为原则。

规避：积累材料。一是在高三这段时间里继续收集鲜活的材料，并选记一些名言警句;二是把长期以来的“库存”分门别类筛选一下，择出可供用于写作的精品材料列出提纲。

3、审题——若即若离

虽然近年来高考作文多以“话题作文”或是“新材料作文”出现，题目宽泛，不设审题障碍，但也并不是想写什么就写什么，想怎么写就怎么写，依然要在所给话题、材料范围内进行审题写作，不可抛开话题、另辟蹊径地“信马由缰”。否则，就会不着边际，偏离话题。比如上海2007年高考作文题《必须跨过这道坎》，就应该牢牢抓住“必须”、“跨”、“坎”等“题眼”进行审题，还要重点关注、开掘出“坎”的引申义、比喻义。

规避：要加强审题训练，针对题目“辨字析词”，盯准“题眼”，尤其对于哲理性命题，涉及辩证关系的，更要深入分析题目的深刻内涵。审题越细、越准、越透，立意的思路就越宽、越深、越广。

4、入题——千呼万唤

高考作文因字数、时间的限制，不可能写得太多，但有相当多的考生往往出现“入题慢”的弊病，废话很多，以一当十的内容却千呼万唤不出来。引用原材料或可有可无的内容占去了很大的篇幅，重点部分无法展开。

规避：多看名家精短美文，为我所用，在“实战”中寻找不足，总结经验。

5、扣题——蜻蜓点水

有的考生写作文，从头到尾没有出现话题、话题的关键词或与话题相近的表述，犯了扣题不紧的错误，看不出是就所给特定“话题”或是“新材料作文”而写的文章，这样得分自然不会理想。

规避：在行文时牢记“考纲”中对作文扣题一项的具体要求，依照标准去做，回想老师的相关叮嘱及传授的方法

6、语言——艰涩难懂

有的考生喜欢使用缩写、英文单词、网络语言，其实这是要冒一定风险的。有的阅卷教师对这类语言很反感，就会对考生有害无利。高考大纲对于作文的要求是语言通顺、用词贴切，文句有表现力。因此，考生应当尽量用优美、有内涵的语言来表情达意，要用最规范、最传统的语言来写作，最好不用或少用网络语言。

规避：平时写作时尽量不使用网络语言或少数人才知道意思的语言。

7、形式——千篇一律

考场作文，事关重大，不仅内容要出彩，形式上也应该不拘一格，使内容与形式相得益彰，完美统一，方可获得高分。但教师在批改作文中却发现，形式创新的寥寥无几，多为千篇一律、似曾相识的“老面孔”，这应当引起注意，尤其是写作能力强的学生，不要因为形式的“不适宜”而失去了本不该丢的分。

规避：运用题记、后记、演讲搞、采访记录、日记体、书信体、小标题等新奇形式来诠释思想，表达意旨。

8、文体——似是而非

有的学生写的文章好像属于“四不像”的文体，因而阅卷老师难以读懂、把握这样的文章，判分就有争议。所以，一般说来，文体还是明朗为好。

规避：就高考作文而言，最好多使用记叙文(夹叙夹议)、散文(记事、抒情)、议论文3种常见样式，少采用或不用诗歌、戏剧、文言等体裁。

9、结篇——虎头蛇尾

有的学生由于没有分配好写作时间，以致在写作文时所剩时间不够了，有的考生来不及结尾，结果或用一句话硬断，或点上一串省略号，或干脆空在那儿。无论哪一种情况，都会被视为未完篇处理。因为阅卷老师衡量一篇文章的好坏，首先是看文章的整体，虎头蛇尾的文章是要被扣分的。

规避：考生平时要训练自己在大约45-60分钟内能够写出一篇完整作文的能力，最后交上的作文无论如何都应该是一篇结构完整的作文。

10、卷面——乱涂乱改

现在是电脑阅卷，字迹模糊、扫描不清就会丢失信息，老师看得吃力无疑会影响分数。我们都有这样的感觉：书写工整、卷面整洁的作文使人赏心悦目，印象分立即增加;而字迹潦草、勾勾画画、涂改得难以辨认的答卷，无形中就会多扣几分。高考作文偶尔出现一两处错别字无可厚非，如果接二连三地出现错别字，就会被认为语文基础太差，得分也会大打折扣。2008年高考作文对错别字要求更高，有的省已经规定，每错一字扣一分，应予以特别重视。

规避：养成好的书写习惯，不会的字、词要查字典、词典。