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710高考英语作文评分标准
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+ 加入清单1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。 中国大学排名
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
不得分:(0分)
未能传达给读者仟何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清
2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3. 词数少于 80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
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篇1:高考英语作文:我的生日礼物
全文共 1448 字
+ 加入清单It was my birthday yesterday. I got a lot of gifts. All of them were covered with coloured paper. Among them there were two interesting ones.
My elder sister gave me a round paper bag and I thought it was a football. BUt when I opened it, it turned out to be a clock. My brother gave me a message, saying that My present has been put in your bedroom. As soon as I went into my bedroom, I found a box. I opened it and found a laptop. I was very happy.
These two presents aim to let me study hard and not to waste time.
昨天是我的生日,我收到了很多礼物。它们用彩纸包着,其中有两件有趣的东西。
我姐姐送了我一个圆纸包,开始我认为是个足球,但打开后才发现是一个闹钟。我哥给我留了张条,告诉我:“我的礼物已经放在你的卧室里了。”我走进卧室,发现一个盒子。我打开了它,里面是一台笔记本电脑。我非常高兴。
这两件礼物是为了让我好好学习,抓紧时间。
Yesterday was my birthday and I received a lot of presents. These presents were packed in coloured paper and two of them were funny and interesting, which impressed me.
My sister sent a bag of present to me. The bag was big and round. I though it was a football. But when I opened it, I saw a clock. The other one was given by my brother. He left me a message, which said my present is lying in your bedroom. When I got to my bedroom, I found a laptop. Oh!Great! I jumped with joy. I know, they Want me to study hard and not to waste time.
I would never forget this birthday.
昨天是我的生日,我收到了许多生日礼物,并且这些礼物都用彩纸包着。其中两件礼物很好玩很有趣,给我留下了很深的印象。
我姐姐送给我一个包,这包又大又圆。我认为是足球,可打开一看是个闹钟。另外一件礼物是我哥哥送给我的,他给我留了一张纸条,上面写着:“我的礼物放在你的卧室里。”当我进入卧室时,我看到了一台笔记本电脑。噢!真是太棒了!我高兴地跳了起来-。我明白他们想让我努力学习,不要浪费时间。
我将永远不会忘记昨天。
篇2:2024高考英语作文写作基本原则
全文共 4219 字
+ 加入清单一、 主题句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句).
Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
二、 长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
三、 一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
四、 短语优先原则
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.
这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
五、 多实少虚原则
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
六、 多变句式原则
1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。
比如说: I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短语可以用:besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短语:despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, not with standing
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语:then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
举例:This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
When to go, Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一举)
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、 挑战极限原则
既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!
篇3:高考后的暑假计划英语作文
全文共 1041 字
+ 加入清单导语:经历了高考后的暑假你有想过做什么吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
After the challenging College Entrance Examination, my anticipated summer holiday has begun. I will have a long winter holiday for almost three month. But I have already planned for it. Firstly, I will have a good rest at home and spend some time with my parents. I studied at school before, so I don’t have much time to company them. And then, I want to take a part-time job. I have graduated from senior school, and I think that a part-time job can help me being independent. I hope what I learn in school will be helpful to my new job. After earning some money, I want to have an after-graduation trip that I have been dreaming of for a very long time. My first choice is Xiamen, which is an attractive city. When the trip ends, it’s time for the college.
紧张的高考过后,我期待已久的暑假终于开始了。我将会有一个差不多三个月之久的暑假,而我也已经做好暑期计划了。首先,我会在家好好休息,花一些时间好好陪陪我的爸爸妈妈。之前我一直在学校上学,没有很多的时间可以陪伴他们。之后,我想做一份暑期兼职。我已经高中毕业了,我想做兼职能帮助我学会独立,也希望我以前所学的能用在工作中。等赚了一些钱之后,我想要梦想已久一次毕业旅行。我的首选之地是厦门,那是一个非常吸引人的城市。旅行结束的时候,我的大学生活就要开始了。
篇4:难忘的高考记忆英语作文
全文共 1073 字
+ 加入清单The Memory About College Entrance Exam
The college entrance exam is a big exam for students, they have learned so many years for the purpose of entering the college. For most person, they have the very deep impression about the big exam, it has changes so many people’s destinies. I had taken part in the exam, I remember it clearly, the situation just like happened yesterday. I studied so hard, in those days that were nearing the exam, all the students focus their attention on the study, we fought together. The paper and the books were piled up our desks, when I entered the classroom, I hardly could see my classmates’ heads. Though it was the tough days for us, we felt happy, because we fought for our future, we believe what we do will bring us a promising future. These memories will linger on my mind forever.
高考对于学生来说是一个大的考试,他们已经学了那么多年,目的是考上大学。对于大部分人来说,他们对于这个重大的考试有很深的印象,它改变了很多人的命运。我已经参加了高考,我能清楚地记得它,那情形就像发生在昨天。我很努力学习,在那些接近考试的日子,所有的学生都集中他们的精力来学习,我们一起奋斗。那些书本和试卷堆满了我们的桌子,当我今日教室时,我几乎看不到同学的头。虽然那些日子很艰苦,但是我们觉得很开心,因为我们为未来奋斗,我们相信所做的会让我们的将来更加的明朗。这些记忆将永存在我的脑海里
篇5:高考英语作文带翻译精选篇
全文共 1383 字
+ 加入清单It is quite usual that one meets failures, for ones life can never be
plain sailing. However, different people hold different attitudes towards
failure. Some people think it a heavy blow to fail in achieving something and
they can not endure failure. When they meet failure, they will be seriously
dejected and can never pluck up their courage to try again.
遇到失败这是很平常,因为人的生命不可能一帆风顺。然而,不同的人对失败持有不同的态度。获取某些东西失败对有些人来说是一个沉重的打击,他们不能承受失败。当他们失败,他们将非常的沮丧并且不能鼓起勇气再试一次。
However, others think it natural to meet failures in ones career.
Therefore, they are psychologically prepared. When they meet failures, they will
not be frustrated. Instead, they will continue to meet new challenges. As to me,
Im in favor of the latter view. Failure is really a terrible thing but it is
also the mother of success. If one draws lessons from failures, in most cases he
will get success in the future. Furthermore, ones life can never be smooth
sailing; it must be full of difficulies and setbacks. If one is daunted by
difficulies and frustrations, he will always be a failure. However, if one holds
a positive attitude toward failure, he will overcome difficulties and
frustrations to win victory.
然而,其他人认为,在自己的职业生涯中的败是很自然的。因此,他们的心理有所准备。当他们遇到失败,他们不会失意。相反,他们将继续迎接新的挑战。就我而言,我赞成后一种观点。失败是一个可怕的事情,但它是成功之母。如果一个灵感来自失败的教训,在大多数情况下,他将在未来获得成功。此外,一个人的生活永远不会是一帆风顺的;它必须是充满困难和挫折。如果一个人被困难和挫折吓倒,他将永远是一个失败者。然而,如果耸对失败持有积极的态度,他将克服困难和挫折,赢得胜利。
篇6:高考英语作文素材
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+ 加入清单面对中学生“出国热”,社会对此有不同的看法。请你以Studying Abroad为题,根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的看法。
Advantages Disadvantages
1.良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。
2.拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。
3.传播各民族间的不同文化。 1.年纪小,缺乏生活经验,自理能力差。
1. 情感孤独,思乡。2. 生活学习费用高。
注意:1)第一句已为你写好,不计入总词数。 2)词数100 左右。
3)参考词汇:媒介,中间人 mediator
Studying Abroad
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.________________________
Studying Abroad
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese students have gone to foreign countries to study. Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are many advantages in attending schools abroad. First, students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. Second, we can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries. Third, we can learn foreign languages more quickly.
However, there are some disadvantages. Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience. Besides, being far away from their home country, they may feel lonely and homesick. Of course the costs are much.
篇7:2024年高考英语满分作文精选
全文共 1473 字
+ 加入清单A teacher just likes a shining star to students. Miss Fu, one of my English teacher, is a shining star in my life.
I happened to be in Miss Fus class when I began my high school years. At that time, I dared not speak English aloud in public, for I was shy and my pronunciation and intonation were poor. Afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to answer the questions Miss Fu raised in class, even if I had some good answers to them. For a time, I even lost interest in practising spoken English. When Miss Fu found out the reason, she encouraged me to speak. First she bought me some English tapes and told me to listen to them carefully, and try to recite them. In class, I was often asked questions and given a lot of chances to practise speaking.Little by little, I became brave enough to speak, and was not afraid to speak English before others. Miss Fu smiled sweetly when she heard the news that I had been chosen to take part in an important oral English contest.
Whenever I look at the stars in the sky, I recognize the brightest one ---- the symbol of Miss Fu in my heart. Miss Fu will always be a shining star in my life!
老师对学生就像一颗闪亮的星。傅小姐,我的一位英语老师,是我生命中的一颗闪亮的星。
我碰巧在傅小姐的学生当我开始我的高中。那时,我不敢在公共场合大声说英语,因为我是害羞的,我的发音和语调很穷。害怕被嘲笑,我从未把我的手傅小姐提出了在课堂上回答问题,即使我有一些好的答案。有一段时间,我甚至失去了兴趣练习英语口语。傅小姐发现的原因时,她鼓励我说。她先给我买一些英语磁带和告诉我仔细听取他们的意见,并试着背诵他们。在课堂上,经常问的问题,我有很多机会练习说。渐渐地,我变得敢于说话,敢于在别人面前讲英语。傅小姐甜甜地笑了,当她听到这个消息,我被选为参加一个重要的英语口语大赛。
每当我看着天上的星星,我承认最亮的象征之一——傅小姐在我心中。傅小姐永远是我生命中的一颗闪亮的星!
篇8:高考英语作文预测:微信的利与弊
全文共 2211 字
+ 加入清单导语:微信,不仅能够发送传统的文字和图片还有语音讯息,甚至可以直接语音通话,因此成了不少年轻人拜年的首选方式。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Weixin has many functions. Weixin has basic functions, such as send hold-to-talk voice messages, text messages, pictures and videos. Weixin supports Wi-Fi and 3G data network. And it supports China, Hong Kong, Macau, Taiwan, Japan and US Phone Number.
Weixin has speakerphone. Gently press the button to speak. The other party will be able to receive the voice after the button release. Weixin can enjoy group chat up to 20 people. What’s more, Weixin has many other attractive functions. The most attractive function is search people around you. Weixin can search people near you who has Weixin base on your own location. This function can make user to know people around you and then to built a new relationship. Weixin alsosupports to send video. Shoot a video and send it to the other party immediately.
The compressed video is also suitable for transmission in mobile network. So you can always share the wonderful pieces of life with other people at any time. Weixin also has drift bottle function.
This function can share your messages to the world anonymously and make new friends. Weixin also has voice notes function. This function not only can save your voice memo, but also keep your pictures and texts in a convenient way. Weixin also can help you to catch your messages and keep you always updated. Weixin has QQ mail notifications which can alert you when new mails come to your QQ mailbox and you can read the mails right away. It supports sending and receiving messages from Tencent micro blog.
Weixin has English language edition. It is convenience for foreign to use it. It can help the company to dominate the market outside of China.
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微信有许多功能。微信的基本功能,如发送保持说话的语音邮件,短信,照片和视频。微信支持Wi-Fi和3G数据网络。它支持中国,香港,澳门,台湾,日本和美国的电话号码。
微信的扬声器。轻轻按按钮说话。另一方将能够收到的声音后,按钮释放。微信可以享受群聊的最多20人。更重要的是,微信有许多其他有吸引力的功能。最吸引人的功能是搜索身边的人。微信可以搜索你周围的人谁有威信的基础上自己的位置。这个功能可以让用户了解你周围的人,然后建立一个新的关系。微信还发送视频。拍摄一个视频,并立即发送给对方。
压缩视频也适用于移动网络的传输。所以你随时可以和别人分享美好的生活。微信也有漂流瓶功能。
此功能可以匿名分享您的消息,并结交新朋友。微信还具有语音记录功能。此功能不仅可以保存您的语音备忘录,而且还保持您的图片和文本以方便的方式。微信也可以帮助你抓住你的信息,让你随时更新。微信的QQ邮件通知可以提醒您,当新的邮件到你的QQ邮箱,你可以阅读邮件吧。它支持发送和接收消息从腾讯微博。
微信有英文版。它是方便外国使用它。它可以帮助公司主导中国以外的市场。
篇9:高考英语作文:我的大家庭
全文共 1345 字
+ 加入清单导语:我的家里每天都有欢笑声,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
In my big family, there are six members. They are my grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother, my little brother and I. We live together happily.
My grandfather and grandmother are in their seventies. My grandfather has something wrong with his heart, while my grandmother is in good health. Last summer, I taught her to play chess. She was so intrested in it that I had to play with her all day on weekends!
My father is a doctor and my mother is a middle school teacher. They are all very busy and hard-working. Although sometimes they disagree with each other, they respect each other.
My little brother is only two years old. He is very lovely. He has a round face and two big black eyes. There are two dimples on his cheeks when he smiles just like me. I often can’t help kissing him. Sometimes he is very naughty. When I don’t want to get up in the morning, he comes to pinch my ear to wake me, and runs away quickly when I open my eyes angrily.
What a harmonious family we have! I love my family forever!
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在我的大家庭里,有六个成员。他们是我的爷爷,奶奶,爸爸,妈妈,弟弟和我。
我爷爷和奶奶七十多岁了。我爷爷的心脏有点问题,而我的祖母身体很好。去年夏天,我教她下棋。她很感兴趣,我只好跟她玩一整天在周末!
我父亲是医生,我母亲是中学教师。他们都很忙,工作很努力。虽然有时他们意见不一致,但他们彼此尊重。
我的弟弟只有2岁。他非常可爱。他有一张圆圆的脸和两只大大的黑眼睛。他的脸上有两个酒窝,他笑得跟我一样。我常常忍不住吻他。有时他很调皮。当我早上不想起床时,他会来抓我的耳朵叫醒我,当我愤怒地睁开眼睛时,我很快就跑开了。
我们的家庭和睦和睦!我永远爱我的家人!
篇10:关于高考英语满分作文模板
全文共 3947 字
+ 加入清单Air
Air is all around us. Its around us as we walk and play. From the time we were born, air was around us on every side. When we sit down, it is around us. We live in air.
All living things need air. Living things cant live without air. We can go without food or water for a few days but we cant live for more than a few minutes without air. We take in air. When we are working or running, we need more air. When we are asleep, we need less air.
We live in air, but we can not see it.
We can only feel it. We can feel it when it is moving. Moving air is called wind. How can you make air move? Here is one way. Hold an open book in your hands in front of you. Close it quickly. What can you feel? What you feel is the air.
空气
空气包围着我们,当我们走路和玩耍的时候,它在我们周围。从我们诞生之日起,空气就在我们周围了。当我们坐下时,它在我们身边。我们生活在空气中。
所有生物都需要空气,没有空气生物就不能生存。没有水和食物,我们可以生存几天,但是没有空气几分钟我们都无法生存。我们吸进空气。当我们工作或跑步时,需要较多空气。当我们睡着时,需要的空气会少一些。
我们生活在空气中,但我们看不见它。
我们只能感觉到。当空气运行时,我们可以感觉到它。运动的空气形成风。你怎样使空气运动呢?有一种办法,手中拿一本展开的书放在面前,快速合上书,你能感觉到什么?你感觉到的就是空气。
Good to Enhance Our Social Experience 增长社会经验
Nowadays,social experience has increasingly been put into a significant position in jobhunting. As the result, some people advocate that college students should enhance their social experience instead of putting emphasis on academic studyonly. And I am in favor of the above view that it is good to enhance our social experience.
如今,社会经验在找工作中已被放在一个越来越重要位置。因此,有些人认为大学生应该加强他们的社会经验而不是只注重学术研究。我同意上述观点,提高我们的社会经验是好的。
There are a few reasons accounting for my opinion. First of all, there is no denying that social experience makes a great contribution to our job hunting because we are usually asked to tell these experiences or information when seeking jobs.In addition, enhancing social experience is a good way to increase our knowledge and broaden our horizon. The more social experience we collect, the easier for us to understand various people and things. What is more, it is also beneficial for seeking our interest and choosing our occupation. These experiences we have collected will offer information and direction for our choice in occupation and friendship establishment.
我的观点的几个原因。首先,不可否认的是,社会经验为我们找工作做出了很大贡献因为在我们找工作的时候经常要求讲述这些经验或信息。此外,增加社会经验是增加我们的知识,开阔我们视野的好方法。我们获得更多的社会经验,我们就更容易了解不同的人和事物。更重要的是,它也有利于我们寻找兴趣和选择自己的职业。我们获得的这些经验在择业和建立友谊中会为我们提供信息和方向。
Therefore,it is good and wise to enhance our social experience. As college students, we should grasp each chance to exercise ourselves and experience various things aswell as try some new things so that we can understand various people and the society better.
因此,提高我们的社会经验是好的,明智的。作为大学生,我们应该抓住每个机会来锻炼自己并经历各种各样的事情,以及尝试一些新的东西,这样我们可以更好的了解不同的人和社会。
高考英语满分作文 学校要不要组织学生春游 The school should organize students outing
春天是旅游的好季节,某外国语学校校长要求各班同学就春游一事展开讨论.讨论的主题是:学校要不要组织学生春游.校长还要求班长就讨论的情况用英语写一封信给他.
假定你是某班班长李华,请你根据下列表格中的信息客观地介绍讨论情况.
注意:1,信的格式已为你写好;2,词数:100左右;3,生词:拓宽 broaden
70%的学生赞成春游
30%的学生反对春游
1. 可以领略大自然的优美风景;
2. 拓宽视野,增长知识;
3. 呼吸新鲜空气,有益于身体健康.
1. 时间紧,耽误学习;
2. 增加父母经济负担;
3. 担心安全.
Dear Headmaster,
Im writing to tell you the discussion weve had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.
范文
Dear Headmaster,
Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students.
Opinions on the question are pided as follows:70% of the students think that the school should organize the spring outing. They believe that the spring outing can make them enjoy the natures beautiful scenery, which can broaden our vision and fill us with more knowledge. They also say that the air in the open fields is fresher. Whats more, fresh air does a lot of good to our health.
On the other hand,30% dont like the idea of going out for a spring outing. In their opinions, time is very precious, so they have to grasp every minute to work hard at their lessons. Traveling costs a lot. In that case, it will add to their families burden. Above all, no one can be sure of the safety of every student.
Yours truly
Li Hua
篇11:虚假广告的负面影响高考英语作文
全文共 1845 字
+ 加入清单the negative effects of the fake ads
Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, fakes appear widely on the market, they range from medicines, 3C products to cooking oil etc. More serious is that these products have entered the Realms of TV advertising, theyhave deeper into human’s lives.
如今,随着科技的发展,假货在市场上随处可见,假货已经延伸到药物,3c产品等,更严重的是这些假货还进入电视广告领域,完全进入人们生活。
Bad commercial advertisements will undoubtedly take large numbers of side-effect and harm to consumers.If audiences believe the false advertisement and buy the products, both their property and healthy wouldbe damaged. In addition, fake commodities are not only extremely harmful to consumers, as well as the whole society, it break the market order, reduce the credibility of the real business ,make these kinds of product stay away from people’s trust.
这些广告毫无疑问的给消费者带来很大的负面影响和危害。观众相信电视上的虚假广告,去购买这些产品,不仅会人们财产受到损害,更危害他们身体健康。另外虚假广告不仅给消费者带来伤害,还影响了整个社会。它打破市场秩序,令真货商家信誉受损,让老百姓对该商品信任度降低。
In my opinion, for the government, certain policies andmeasures should be taken on the spot, such as dispose the TV station of handingin money, judge the selling fake bad manufacturer criminal punishment, and prohibit the emergence of the harmful advertisement. For the audience, they should strengthen the discrimination ability of the false goods, and would not be cheated by the fake television advertising as the cheap price and convenience.
对政府而言,他们应该尽快出台政策和采取措施,对播放不良广告的电视台采取罚钱的处置,对贩卖假货的不良厂家处于刑事处罚,以禁止这些有害广告的出现。对观众来说,应加强对虚假广告的辨别能力,不能因为贪图便宜和方便,受电视的广告蒙蔽。
To sum up, we need to work together to make the false advertisement disappeared in our lives. For me, I will not buy the fake goods, and will report them at the first time. It is time forus to practice whatwe preaches about cracking down on fake goods.
总而言之,虚假广告的消失,是需要所有人的共同努力,对我自己来说,我不会购买假货,当发现假货假广告会第一时间举报,以自己身体力行,反对打击假货。
篇12:2024年高考英语作文热门话题之六---光盘行动
全文共 2165 字
+ 加入清单节约是中华人民的传统美德,然而,当前国人的浪费现象却十分严重,尤其是餐桌上的浪费。请用英语写一篇100-120词的短文,描述你的一次“餐桌浪费”经历,并结合当前的“光盘行动”(Clear Your Plate Campaign)略加评论。
参考范文:
With large amounts of food thrown away each year, the problem of food waste is widespread in China. Last Spring Festival, my father invited several friends to dinner in a restaurant. My father ordered a lot to show respect and display generosity.
What surprised me was he ordered an extra dish before we could finish all! When we stood up to leave, there were many dishes unfinished. Out of embarrassment, my father was reluctant to take the leftovers home. Later, we all shared the opinion that it was a great waste.
Recently, the Clear Your Plate Campaign started nationwide. I firmly believe that if everyone does his bit, the food waste will be significantly reduced.
我们的身体健康与食品安全息息相关,但现在我们却面临越来越多的食品问题如染色馒头、毒奶粉。请用英语写一篇100-120词的短文,简要分析食品问题形成的原因并提出相应的解决措施。
染色馒头the industrial dye of steamed bun 毒奶粉the notorious milk powder
It is universally acknowledged that the safety of food is closely related to our health. As the famous saying goes, “we are what we eat.” However, things often go contrary to our wishes since we are faced with a series of food safety problems at present, ranging from the industrial dye of steamed bun to the notorious milk powder.
There are several reasons for this severe problem. First and foremost, many manufactures produce fake food of poor quality in order to get higher profits. In addition, the relevant laws and regulations are imperfect and even ineffective. Last but not least, the public especially customers from poor families, are not alert enough to the safety of food.
In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken to improve the situation. Firstly, it is essential that relevant laws and regulations on food safety should be enforced. Secondly, the relevant department should attach more importance to supervising监督 the manufacturers. Also, the public should be trained to be alert to food quality, believing our efforts will make an enormous difference. Only by taking these actions can the problem be coped with successfully in the nearest future.
篇13:高考英语
全文共 722 字
+ 加入清单Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,
Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into
our school bags or read our diaries . I fully understand why we are not
comfortable about it , but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are
checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble .
They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we
might do the same . Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing
it all wrong . My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as
we’d like to trust them .If you don’t think you can talk to them , write them a
letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it .
Thank you!
篇14:2024高考英语作文预测:自信的重要性
全文共 1214 字
+ 加入清单People say that self-confidence is half of the success that can bring you courage to stick to what you do. Without self-confidence, one can not do well in anything. Self-confidence is of great importance and value to a person.
人们说自信是成功的一半,它能给你带来勇气去坚持你所做的事。没有自信,一个人就不能做好任何事。自信对一个人很重要也很有价值。
Firstly, self-confidence enables us to have the ambition of being successful. Only when you have the ambition to be successful, can you be successful eventually. Secondly, once we gain self-confidence, we will possess the courage and strength to overcome the setbacks and difficulties. With self-confidence, no one and nothing can stop you to success.Thirdly, with self-confidence we may accomplish something which seems to be impossible previously. No great thing is easy for us, therefore we should hold the idea that anything is possible. We should, or have to trust in ourselves.
首先,自信使我们拥有成功的雄心。只有当你有成功的野心的时候,你最后才能成功。其次,一旦我们获得了自信,我们就拥有了勇气和力量去克服挫折和困难。有了自信,没有人也没有什么能够阻止你成功。再次,有了自信我们可能实现一些以前看起来不可能的事。没有什么大事对我们是容易的,因此我们应该相信一切皆有可能。我们应该,或者必须相信自己。
In short, self-confidence is the spiritual pillar of a person as well as the inherent power, which is of great importance and value to a person.
总之,自信是一个人的精神支柱也是一个人的内在力量,它对一个人很重要也很有价值。
篇15:初中英语环保作文
全文共 1025 字
+ 加入清单The Low-Carbon Economic
Nowadays,with more and more serious problem such as the global increasing temperture,the melting ice and the rising sea-levering,people are recognizing the important of developing the low-carbon economic now.
There are many ways we can do to reach the loe-carbon economic.Fristly,discovering others fuels which is more clean and more green to instead of the using of carbon.Secondly, we should have the save-energy conscious and do something which we can make,for instance,using the bus ranther than car when you go out,re-use the thing that can be recycle used,reducing the use of plastic bags.Last but not least,we should plant more trees or other greenplants,in which way we can not only improve the environment,but also can make our home more beauty.
In my opnion, the most important thing to reach the low-carbon economic is everyone must try their best do what they can do for it.Once everyone have the sence of low-carbon economic and have the action by themselves ,it will be earlier to reach it.
篇16:低碳环保生活英语词Low-carbonLife
全文共 707 字
+ 加入清单Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion onLowcarbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.
篇17:关于重阳节的英语高考的作文
全文共 1008 字
+ 加入清单假设你是某中学学生会主席李华,你校与本地一所国际学样经常举办联谊活动。你计划在重阳节组织学生到养老院去慰问老人,拟邀请国际学校的学生参加,请你根据以下内容要点给国际学样的学生会主席Tony写一封信。
要点:向老人赠送礼物(鲜花、自制贺卡……);为老人提供服务(做清洁、陪老人聊天……);为老人表演节目(唱歌、跳舞……)。
[范文]
Dear Tony,
Chongyang,the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly,is coming around.We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the speeial day, and we would like to invite students from your school to join us.We have planned several activities. When we get there,we will visit the elderly in their rooms in groups,presenitng them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love. Then we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses.
As some old people feel lonely. We may chat with them about their old days, changes of our city, or anything they are interested in. We may also give th
em some performanees: singing,daneing,and so on.
I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in China. If you have any suggestions,please let us know.
Looking forward to your early reply.
篇18:2024英语高考作文模拟题
全文共 1679 字
+ 加入清单“灿烂星空,谁是真的英雄?”做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄,为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄,在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄……
一.Dr Norman Bethune
1.Nationality(国籍): Canada
2.Hobby: taking photos
3.Main stories: saved a lot of Chinese people; opened hospitals; invented medical tools
二.Liu Xiang
1.Nationality: China
2.Hobby: singing
3.Main stories: won the first
4.Olympic gold medal in the men s 110m hurdles event in Athens; set a world record in the same event in Lausanne
从上面信息卡中选择一位英雄,以The Hero in My Heart为题写一篇短文。
要求:① 包含所选信息卡上的内容;② 适当拓展,如学英雄的感想、行动等;③ 不能出现表明你身份的信息;④ 词数80左右,不含已给出部分。
The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. Forme,
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The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart. He was a great doctor from Canada.
Dr Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938, he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didn’t stop to take care of his own injured hand and died.
I am deeply moved by his stories. So I’ll work hard today and do my best to help others.
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The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me,Liu Xiang is the hero in my heart. He is a famous Chinese sports man.
Liu Xiang is good at running. In 2004,he won his first Olympic gold medal in the mens 110m hurdles event in Athens. Then, he set a world record in the same event in Lausanne. Besides training and taking part in competitions, Liu Xiang also likes singing and he sings well.
With his hard work, he is winning competitions one after another. This encourages me to study harder from now on.
篇19:高考英语写作素材:常用英语句子
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+ 加入清单英文写作中常用的句子有哪些?下面来看看小编为大家整理的内容吧。
Never think yourself above business.勿自视过高;不要眼高手低;永远不要认为自己是大才小用。
Life is measured by thought and action, not by time. 衡量生命的尺度是思想和行为,而不是时间。
It pays to help others. 帮助别人是值得的。
It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
He that thinks his business below him will always be above his business.自命大才小用,往往眼高手低。
Business may be troublesome,but idleness is pernicious.事业虽扰人,懒惰害更大。
We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
We should bring home to people the value of working hard.我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
Time tries truth.时间检验真理。
Time past cannot be called back again.光阴一去不复返。
Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.违反交通规则的人应该受到处罚。
There is no one but longs to go to college.人们都希望上大学。
The progress of thee society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
The great use of life is to spend it for something that overlasts it.生命的最大用处是将它用于能比生命更长久的事物上。
Taking exercise is closely related to health.做运动与健康息息相关。
Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃作运动。
常用短语:
1. 有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides。(不推荐用。。。) No gardenwithout weeds。
2. 对…观点因人而异 Views on …vary from person to person。
3. 重视 attach great importance to…
4. 社会地位 social status
5. 把时间和精力放在…上 focus time and energy on…
6. 扩大知识面 expand one’s scopeof knowledge
7. 身心两方面 both physically and mentally
8. 有直接/间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to…
9. 提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal
10. 可以取代 “think”的词 believe, claim, hold the opinion/beliefthat
11. 缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relievestress/ burden
12. 优先考虑/发展… give (top) priority to sth。
13. 与…比较 compared with…/ in comparison with
14. 对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
15. 支持前/后种观点的人 people / those in favor of theformer/latteropinion
16. 有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the followingreasons/evidence
17. 在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way
18. 理论和实践相结合 integratetheory with practice
19. …必然趋势 an irresistible trend of…
20. 日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition
21. 眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest
22. 长远利益. interest in the long run
23. …有其自身的优缺点 … has its merits and demerits/ advantagesanddisadvantages
24. 扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorableconditions andavoidunfavorable ones
25. 取其精髓,去其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs。
26. 对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to
27. 交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information
28. 跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreastwiththe latest development of …
29. 采取有效措施来… take effective measures to do sth。
30. …的健康发展 the healthy development of …
31. 相反 in contrast / on the contrary。
32. 代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of 大写)
33. 经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water
34. 提供就业机会 offer job opportunities
35. 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress
36. 毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that…
37. 增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutualunderstanding
38. 充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of
39. 承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure
40. 保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity ofoursociety
41. 更多地强调 put more emphasis on…
42. 适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society
43. 实现梦想 realize one’s dream/ make one’s dream come true
44. 主要理由列举如下 The main reasons are listed as follows:
45. 首先 First, Firstly, In the first place, To begin with
46. 其次 Second, Secondly, In the second place
47. 再次 Besides,In addition, Additionally,Moreover,Furthermore
48. 最后 Finally, Last but not the least, Above all, Lastly,
49. 总而言之 All in all, To sum up, In summary, In a word,
篇20:澳大利亚高考优秀英语作文
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+ 加入清单australia, the largest country in oceania, lies on the south coast of the pacific. it covers an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. it has a population of over 10 million. most of its people live in the east of the country by the sea. canberra,the capital of australia,is a beautiful city. sydney is the biggest city in australia, which has many places of interest. the opera house is well known all over the world.the olympic games were held in sydney.
澳大利亚是大洋洲最大的国家,位于太平洋南海岸,国土面积760万平方公里,人口超过1 000万,大多数居民居住在东部地区,濒临海洋。首都堪培拉是一座美丽的城市。悉尼是全国最大的城市,有许多名胜,悉尼歌剧院闻名于世。奥运会就是在这里举行的。