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关于reading的英语作文初三热门20篇

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2024年初三英语作文:食品安全foodsafety

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As is known to all, food is a priority for the common people. Recently, however, reports about food problems have often been seen in the newspapers, showing that people have always been concerned about what they eat every day. The reason for this problem is that some of the food producers are too fond of making money, leading to the result that they use whatever will make the food look good or taste better without considering the bad consequences. This is not normal because people just cannot live without eating anything.

So we should take all the measures necessary to forbid the food producers to make food that is not safe enough. Laws should be strengthened and the government should have more control over these producers. Only when people are no longer worried about whether their food is safe or not can they enjoy a better life.

众所周知,食物是百姓的当务之急。然而,最近报道食品问题经常出现在报纸上,表明人一直关心他们每天吃什么。这个问题的原因是,一些食品生产商太喜欢赚钱,导致结果,他们使用任何会让食物看起来不错或味道更好而不考虑坏的后果。这是不正常的,因为人们生活中不能没有吃任何东西。

所以我们应该采取一切必要的措施,禁止食品生产商做的食物还不够安全。应加强法律和政府应该有更多的控制这些生产商。只有当人们不再担心是否他们的食品是安全的可以享受更好的生活。

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篇1:初三年级英语作文:Wonderful life in winter holiday

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From the sixteenth of January to the seventh of February is our Winter Holiday. I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday. But I didn’t. Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.

I spend a lot of time on the homework.. Every day in my Winter Holiday, I always got up late. then I listened to the tape, it was nine o’clock. then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime! I’m not very slow but the homework was too heavy!

I’m unlucky on the playing too. I played firecracker but I hurt my finger with the fire. I ‘m careless to kindle the firecracker, so I’m very unlucky.

I still unlucky on my friend’s party. In the morning, I wanted to get up early but I woke up at 10:50. After ten minutes, the party would start! So I only eat a piece of bread then I go to my friend’s home! And I stay at his home for a long time when I came home. My mother and father were very angry and they scolded me!

I’m worried and feel unlucky on my weigh. Last term, I was 48 kilogram but now I am 51 kilogram! I must to do banting!

But most important, I have gone to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium, I want to go there very much because I want to see the horse, the monkey……in the sea. Now I’ve done it . It is a bright dot in my Winter Holiday.

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篇2:写给同学的信初三英语作文

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假如你(Li Hua)在互联网(Internet)上看到美国高中生Tony希望结识一位中国朋友的息,请你用英文给他发一封电子邮件,希望和他作网友,并希望能尽快收到他的回信。内容包括:

1. 表示愿和对方交朋友; 2. 简单介绍自己,如爱好、特长(体育、文艺等); 3. 希望多了解美国文化。

注意:1. 电子邮件格式已经给出,但不计入总词数; 2. 词数:100左右。

From: lihua@yahoo.com.cn

To: tony@163.com

Subject: making an e-pal

Yours,

Li Hua

One possible version:

Dear Tony,

I am Li Hua, a boy of 16 from China. Im a middle school student. Im glad to read your information on the Internet and I know you want to make an e-pal with a Chinese. I want to be your friend and wish to know more about the culture of the USA.

Im good at English and I think we can help each other to know more about America and China by sending e-mails. We can also chat on the Internet in English or Chinese. I like table tennis, enjoy singing and prefer popular music. At the same time, I like collecting stamps and traveling around in my spare time. I hope you can come to visit China, and Ill show you around many places of interest.

[写给同学的信初三英语作文

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篇3:2024年初三英语作文:中国梦chinadream

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Nowadays the topic on Cinese Dream by our Chairman Xi’s speech inspires everyone all over China, especially the students who will enter university to achieve their dreams. I’m so proud that I am the one.

As for my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge. I believe to help others is to help ourselves, and it surely can bring me happiness and pleasure.

To realize my dream, firstly, I must try to work hard from now on. And I must learn as much as possbile so that I can get into a good medical college, where I will prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Senondly, I have to train myself to be more careful, that is the basic to do everything . Finally, believe myself. Because confidence is the key to success. I think only in this way can I accomplish my goal, my Chinese dream.

现在对Cinese梦的主题我们的主席习近平的讲话激发每个人中国各地,尤其是学生将进入大学实现自己的梦想。我很自豪我是一个。

至于我自己的梦想。我一直想成为一名医生。医生不仅可以挽救人的生命也是他们在做一个体面的工作。医生可以帮助人们过上更好的生活与他们的专业知识。我认为帮助别人就是帮助自己,一定可以带给我幸福和快乐。

为了实现我的梦想,首先,我必须试着从现在开始努力工作。和我必须学习半年,这样我就可以进入一个好的医学院,在那里我将自己充分准备一个医生的工作。Senondly,我必须训练自己更小心,这是基本要做的一切。最后,相信自己。因为自信是成功的关键。我觉得只有这样我才能实现我的目标,我的中国梦。

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篇4:初三描述食品安全英语作文

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"XX school student collective food poisoning", "XX place bleak look-out collapse", "XX place again there was a traffic accident"... Life, always hear or see some strange, let person sigh of accident, one after another tragedy always constantly in front of us.

Danger is in our each persons side, sometimes is so near to us. "Lucky" I experienced this once. That, I come home from school, saw this scene: a child was playing in the road, no attention paid to the coming danger, a large truck coming toward her. Others shouted, looking back, the childrens truck, immediately panic, his face pale, legs a soft, straight down to the ground, big trucks the emergency brake, but it was too late, the boy has been under pressure in the car. People suddenly gave a shout, some with burying his face in his hands, did not dare to look down, some by the sudden scene scared silly, just stand in situ. "Another child forever left the world", is really sad. However, when people return to absolute being, has found that children had miraculously stood up, not a little damage.

Many risks ah, had a narrow escape. Thanks to the girl in the middle of front, thanks to the cars chassis is high, if a little partial, if the body again a little bit low, the consequence is unimaginable.

Security, is inseparable from a topic, we will never pay attention to safety, is we all know the truth. But safety accidents happen every day, and constantly increasing, every day in the heartbreaking tragedy. Safety first, with safety, we floral life to blossom. With safety, we can happily spend the youth, life for everyone only once, lost, will not come back. Whenever we up and down the stairs, a little light, quiet a little. Whenever we cross the road, look around first, then walked briskly, whenever we school, want to go home as soon as possible, dont play on the side of the road.

Life is great, but it is fragile. We should cherish life, safety first!

“XX学校学生集体食物中毒”,“XX地方煤井塌陷”,“XX地方又发生了交通事故”……生活中,总会听到或看到这样一些令人惊心,让人叹息的事故发生,一个又一个地悲剧总会在我们面前不断地上演。

危险就在我们每个人的身边,有时离我们是那么近。我“有幸”经历了这么一次。那次,我放学回家,看到了这样一幕:一个孩子正在马路中央玩耍,丝毫没有注意到即将到来的危险,一辆大卡车朝她驶来。旁人高喊一声,那个孩子回头一看,是卡车,顿时惊恐万分,脸色发白,腿一软,人直直地倒在地上,大卡车紧急刹车,可是,已经迟了,那个孩子已被压在车下。人群顿时发出一阵惊呼,有的用双手捂住脸,不敢往下看,有的被突如其来的场面吓傻了,呆呆地立在原地。“又一个孩子永远地离开了这个世界”,真是悲哀。可是,当人们回过神来后,却发现小孩奇迹般地站了起来,没有受到一点伤害。

多险呀,真是死里逃生。幸亏了那女孩倒在了车前的正中间,幸亏了那车的底盘高,如果再偏一点,如果车身再低一点,那后果不堪设想。

安全,是我们永远离不开的一个话题,注意安全,是我们每个人都懂的道理。但是安全事故还是每天都在发生,而且不断地增多,天天都在上演那令人心碎的悲剧。安全第一呀,有了安全,我们如花般的生命才能绽放。有了安全,我们才能开开心心地度过青春年华,生命对每个人来说只有一次,失去了,就永远回不来了。每当我们上下楼梯,轻一点儿,静一点儿。每当我们横穿马路,先左右看一下,再轻快地走过,每当我们放学时,要尽快回家,不要在路边玩耍。

生命是伟大的,但又是脆弱的。我们要珍惜生命,安全第一!

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篇5:初三英语作文:Thisisme

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My name is LuManLIi. I’m from hunan . I’m an outgoing girl. I like animals very much. Especially my favorite animal is rabbits. Because they’re very cute. I like reading books in the library. I think it’s very quiet in the library. And I also like studying history. I think it’s very interesting for me. But I don’t like doing homework,because it’s very boring. I have many friends. And I get on well with them. We often go shopping and chat interesting things. I like eating many snacks and noodles. I hope we can make more good friends and get on well with them.

[This is me初三英语作文

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篇6:初三关于爱的英语作文带翻译

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Parents gave me life in this world,I love the most is them.

Expressing of loving parents do not need to pass a language that I love them.Whatever we can do some little things.In the Fathers Day or Mothers Day,we can prepare a delicious breakfast for them.We can remember their birthdays.In their birthdays,we dont need to buy gifts,but have to say happy birthday.

When parents come home from work,we can hand them a cup of hot water to make them relax.We can help parents to share some of the housework,so that they have more time to rest.As part of the family,we should take active to do housework.If we read out,we should always contact them,tell them recent things of our own.Let them not worry about us.

It is known to all our parents love is priceless,is not asking for anything.We should love them in return. But,parents can be very simple love.As long as the life of more concern to them,for them to have been very satisfied.Just do it.

父母给了我生命在这个世界上,我最喜欢他们。

表达爱的父母不需要通过语言,我爱他们。我们可以做一些小事。在父亲节或母亲节,我们可以为他们准备一份美味的早餐。我们可以记住他们的生日。在他们的生日,我们不需要买礼物,但不得不说生日快乐。

当父母下班回家时,我们可以把他们一杯热水让他们放松。我们可以帮助父母分担一些家务,这样他们有更多的时间休息。作为家庭的一部分,我们应该积极做家务。如果我们读了,我们应该联系他们,告诉他们最近自己的事情。让他们不要为我们担心。

众所周知我们的父母爱是无价的,不要求任何东西。我们应该爱他们的回报。但是,父母可以非常简单的爱。只要更多的关注他们的生活,他们非常满意。说做就做。

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篇7:关于初三英语的作文:Privatecar

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Advantages of owning a private car. 2)Disadvantages of owning a private car. 3)Should it be necessary to enlarge the private car market? Why or why not? Nowadays, any Chinese can enjoy the luxury of owning a private car - if he or she can afford it. Having a car of your own means no more traveling to work on crowded buses or subway trains, and you can drop off the children at school on the way. Moreover, it also means that you can enjoy the weekends and holidays better, because with a car you can go to places where theregular buses and trains do not go, and so you can find a quiet scenic spot with no crowds. However, there are drawbacks to owning a car. For one thing, with the increase in car ownership in recent years, the roads are becoming more and more crowded, often making the journey to work more of a nightmare than a dream. For another, it is not cheap to run a car, as the prices of gasoline and repairs are constantly rising, not to mention the prices you have to pay for a licence and insurance coverage. Having considered both sides of the argument, I have come to the conclusion that the advantages of owning a car outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore, it seems to me that China should increase its output of automobiles and enlarge the private car market. The result would be that cars would become cheaper, while at the same time the extra demand would encourage the auto industry to produce more efficient and family-oriented vehicles.

[关于初三英语的作文:Private car

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篇8:初三中考英语

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My Low-carbon Life

The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut

down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon

life to save energy and reduce pollution.

Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I

always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I

always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.

I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more

beautiful.

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篇9:初三年级英语作文我的妈妈

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My mother is 36 years old, long longhair, intermediate mixed with a few gray hair, a pair of gentle eyes, high nose, big eyes, in my opinion, mother as a whole is very beautiful.

Since I started in elementary school, my mother said to me: "you must good good study, as a child to go to school to listen to the teacher, finish the homework carefully". Mother after school every day the first thing to do is ask me: "what the teacher tell you today, my homework is what?" Although very nag, but I know it is the mothers care to me, so every time I am very serious answer. When you do your homework, I encounter a difficult problem ask mom, mom said: "go to their own brain to think about first." Each make a problem, mom will let me remember this way, also let me next time wont go wrong.

Mother not only care about me, in the study on the life and meticulous care me, mom often teaches me to be, just like a lamp that rev beacon to guide my direction, my mother taught me to be honest, to credit. In the daily life of my mother has always been very generous, every day after school, I entered the house, you can taste delicious food.

Mother, you comforted me in my sad; You encourage me when I encounter a failure, you guide me when I walk in the wrong direction. Strict with me in your learning; You to me in life takes good care of me.

Ah! Your mother for the sake of my life, learning to pay a lot, I will not live up to your expectations, study hard and make a good filial piety you in the future, contribute to the country!

我的妈妈今年36岁,长长的披肩发,中间掺有几根白发,一双温柔的眼睛,高挺的鼻子,大大的眼睛,在我看来妈妈整体是很漂亮的。

从我开始上小学时,妈妈就对我说:“你一定要从小好好学习,上学要听老师的话,认真完成作业” 。每天放学妈妈第一件事就是问我:“今天老师给你讲的什么,家庭作业是什么?”尽管很唠叨,但我知道这是妈妈对我的关心,所以每次我都很认真的回答。做作业时,我一遇到难题就去问妈妈,妈妈便说:“先去自己动脑想想” 。每做对一道题,妈妈便让我记住这种方法,还保证让我下次不再出错。

妈妈不但在学习上关心我,在生活上也是无微不至的关爱我,妈妈经常教我做人,就像一盏启明灯一样引导我的方向,妈妈教我要诚实、要拾金不昧。在我的衣食住行方面,妈妈一向是十分慷慨的,每天放学,我一进家门,就能尝到可口饭菜。

妈妈,您在我伤心时安慰我;在我遇支失败时你鼓励我,在我走错方向时你引导我;你在学习上严格要求我;您在生活上对我无微不至的关怀我。

啊!妈妈您为了我的生活,学习付出了很多,我一定不会辜负你的期望,好好学习,将来好好孝敬您,为国家做出贡献!

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篇10:初三英语400字作文

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These years, Internet is becoming more and more important for people. Many students like making friends on the Internet.

However, every coin has two sides. On the one hand, you may meet a good person and he or she can talk and play with you. And he or she may even help you deal with some problems in your life. But on the other hand, our students are really too young, we can not protect ourselves at all!

So I think you’d better make friends in the real world.

[初三英语400字作文

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篇11:初三英语作文:My View on Computers

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Computers have played an important part in our life. They can do most of the things people can do. Through computers, we can acquire knowledge and get the latest news. Computers have made the communication with our friends convenient and easy.But some young people are so interested in playing games on line that they even drop out of school. It is not the computers fault.It depends on the users. We should make good use of computers.

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篇12:初三毕业英语作文

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In the last summer, we have to say goodbye and look back. These three years, there are happy, sad...

Thank the teacher for three years of hard education and training of us, to teachers, a sincere voice: "teacher, you are hard!" At this moment, recall have gone through three years of junior high school life, we cant restrain inner excited, strong regret and feelings also arise spontaneously.

Some people say that junior high school life is a hasty book. Three years ago, we walked into one of the most exciting and admired mood. In the past three years, we have felt her warmth and richness here. Three years of time, more than 1000 pages of anger and sorrow, this is so hurried, but it has left so many wonderful pieces to us. Among them, a young naughty and naive, a sentimental failure experience, mature feeling enlightened, also has a successful history of lead a person to endless aftertastes.

In three years, we grew up with one middle school, and here is our warm home. In this joyous family, we create brilliance again and again with diligence and wisdom. We weave this warm and beautiful junior high school life with dreams and youth. Here, lets thank our alma mater with gratitude, thank all the leaders of the school, thank our beloved teacher, thank our dear classmates, and send them our best wishes.

Our junior high school life is about to draw a full end, which will also be the horn we pursue at a higher level.

There is a saying: "the idea that daily at the moment." Now, we are faced with a major challenge in our learning career - the middle school exam. This is an unusual moment, and a solemn and hopeful moment. It may be difficult, but know that when we are in the most difficult time, it is time for us to be close to success. At that time, we have to prove to the world that "there is a talent for the Jiangshan generation, each of them has been coquettish for hundreds of years!"

There is no banquet in the world. After the exam, we may be different, but the parting is also beautiful, because it is the prelude to the gathering! At that time, we might cry, but dont care. This is the evidence of youth. It is it, let us have the memory, know how to cherish. In fact, parting is not terrible, the terrible thing is that we forget ourselves. Every moment, everyone needs to be the best. I believe that we will show by our actions that we are worthy of being the best graduates in the field. Lets continue to fight against storms and go forward and realize our dreams.

We will always remember the slogan "today I am proud of one of the two, and I am proud of tomorrow."

In the last summer, were going to say goodbye.

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篇13:初三英语作文带翻译:我的朋友

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A persons life, there are many friends. If lost friends, will lose much fun! Now we are about to separate, and interactions of the two friends will also be less, so I want to write about them.

Huang Tinghui: when two years later, we have known each other for two years. Remember at the beginning, you turn to our class. Due to your poor eyesight to sit with me. The teacher write on the blackboard the word you couldnt see, you often ask me, I also tell you patient, so we established profound friendship. We laugh together, cry together, mad at a quarrelling, together to do according to evil. And you together of dribs and drabs, I will never forget.

Easy 媱 : in my mind your temper is very good, is also a name change most in our class. We will be together. Sometimes see the meat on your face, I will run to knead your face, you are always gentle smile, the smile has included in the friendship.

Along the way of the company of friends, no friends, no today of I, really thank you friends support, maybe well separate, but the fate.

一个人的一生,有许许多多的朋友。如果失去了朋友,将会失去多少生活乐趣呀!现在我们马上要分开了,和我俩个好友的交往也会少了,所以想写写她们。

黄婷慧:一晃俩年过去了,我们已经认识了俩年了。记得当初,你转到我们班。由于你视力不好跟我坐。老师写在黑板的字你看不清,你时常问我,我也耐心的告诉你,就这样我们建立深厚的友谊。我们一起笑过,一起哭过,吵过架生过气,还一起搞恶做据。和你在一起的点点滴滴,我永远也不回忘记。

易媱:在我的印象中你的脾气很好,也是我们班名字改的最多的一个。我们在一起中会闹脾气。有时候看到你脸上的肉,我就会跑过去捏你的脸,你总是温柔的一笑,这笑容中包括的有友谊。

一路上都有朋友的陪伴,没有朋友就没有今天的我,真的感谢朋友分支持,也许我们会分开,但是缘分。

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篇14:暑假计划初三英语作文

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Summer holiday plan

Summer holiday is coming. How excited! I havemade a plan for my summer holiday. First of all, I will go to Hong Kong tovisit my aunt. And then I will stay with her for a while. As Hong Kong is the shoppingparadise, of course, I will ask my aunt to go shopping with me . I will also eatthe delicious food there. And then I will go home. I know that study comesfirst. So I will finish my homework first. After that I will go out play withmy friends. And then I will take a good rest to prepare for my coming back toschool.

暑假计划

暑假即将来临。多么的兴奋啊!我已经为我的暑假制定了计划。首先,我会去香港拜访我的婶婶。之后我会和她呆一段时间。因为香港是购物天堂,当然我会叫我婶婶陪我一起去购物。我还要吃那里美味的食物。然后我就会回家。我知道学习是最重要的。所以回去之后我会先完成我的暑假作业。之后我就会和我的朋友出去玩。再之后我就会好好的休息来为回校做好准备。

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篇15:初三英语Unit7必考作文

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Unit7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.

本单元以“规则”为话题,结合此话题就学校和家里的规章制度进行了论述。写作中常涉及这一话题。写作时可以发表自己的观点,在表达观点时,要有理有据,观点不能偏激。

写作此类话题作文的常用表达有:

(1)I think teenagers should be allowed to …

(2)I agree that…

(3)I don’t agree with…

【典型例题】

国有国法,校有校规。在你的学校中一定有很多的规章制度规范同学们的行为。请你写一篇短文,向大家介绍一两条校规或校纪,并谈一下自己的看法。

【优秀范文】

There are many rules in our school.

At our school we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. I?think young people should?look smart, so I’d like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear uniforms, we should?be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.

Although we have different views on the rules, I?think everyone should obey the school rules.

[初三英语Unit 7必考作文

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篇16:我的决心初三英语作文

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hoping to excite student interest in our reading center, i asked each teacher to write a new years resolution on a special form and send it to me.

after i posted the resolutions on the bulletin board in the reading center, one young teacher stopped by, looked at them for a few minutes, and then left abruptly. passing two teachers on their way in, she stormed, "my resolution isnt posted - and mine was one of the first ones in!" i cannt help but overhear, and the tone of her voice sent me flying to my desk in search of a misplaced resolution.

looking rapidly through stacks of papers, i uncovered hers. it read, "i resolve not to let little things upset me. "

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篇17:关于初三英语作文推荐:Don'tLetCardColl

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Now many students become crazy about collecting cards of heroes of the Three Kingdoms in my school. After one gets a card, he will share it with his friends. Being addicted to it, many students have changed a lot.

Some students even play the cards in class so that they have fallen behind in their study. The card is included as a gift in the bag of some food which costs 1.5 yuan. Therefore, to get these cards, many students try their best to get money, even steal money. Sometimes they would rather not eat breakfast than give up buying the food with that card.

It is not long before they collect a lot of cards. Without good care the cards can be stolen easily. Thus, many students fight for the cards, which damage their friendship.

SoDont be fascinated in collecting cards any longer. Study earnestly and become a good host of the new century!

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篇18:初三英语

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Anything can happen in this rapidly changing society. People who cant

believe in miracles are impossible to achieve miracles and to create miracles.

In fact, sometimes it is easy to get a miracle. If you dont hesitate, you can

do it. Good luck, you think, is the result of action. The only way to catch the

seemingly impossible is to go after it. It is impossible to create a miracle if

you are satisfied with the status quo, doubt everything, and fear the

failure.

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篇19:初三年级英语作文:Serious Floods

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The Yangzte River is the longest river in China. And it’s important and helpful to us Chinese. But these days the Yangtze River is bringing us serious floods.

Many villages were destroyed by floods. The floods made hundreds of millions of people lose their homes, relatives and friends. Many children can’t go to school as usual .Now the foods have drawn the attention of the whole world. People from abroad have offered their help too. In China, millions of soldiers are busy fighting against the floods. They are working very hard. Many of them have lost their lives in their attempt to save the villagers.

Though we can’t help them to fight against floods, we should help them to rebuild their homeland. We can present them our pocketmoney and clothes. I believe most of the people will return to their homeland in the near future.

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篇20:初三英语作文-whetherteenshouldmaketheir

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whether teen should make their own decision

Whether teen should make their own decisions?I think we can talk about this question from two ways. On the one hand ,Although teen are young ,they have to make many important choices by themselves .such like making fiends ,wearing what kinds of clothes…… ,Teen should learn to plan things for themselves ,they need some skills to make a living in the future.many parents care about their children too much. This gives their children a lot of pressure .that is not good for teen. One the other hand ,although teen can make their decisions by them selves,but as for some serous things ,teen should also accept advice from their parents .because parents have more experience and they can tell you what is right and wrong.

点评:文章观点明确,能通过一分为二的辩证的观点看问题,非常好。思路清晰,句子前后连贯,过渡自然,句子结构正确,能够使用一些重要的短语和句型,简单句和复合句的并用增强了文章的色彩,提高了文章的档次。文章写得非常成功!继续努力哦!

美中不足: 只要注意一下个别单词的使用和字母的大小写就可以了。

[初三英语作文-whether teen should make their

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