关于reading的英语作文初三汇集20篇

whether teen should make their own decision

Whether teen should make their own decisions?I think we can talk about this question from two ways. On the one hand ,Although teen are young ,they have to make many important choices by themselves .such like making fiends ,wearing what kinds of clothes…… ,Teen should learn to plan things for themselves ,they need some skills to make a living in the future.many parents care about their children too much. This gives their children a lot of pressure .that is not good for teen. One the other hand ,although teen can make their decisions by them selves,but as for some serous things ,teen should also accept advice from their parents .because parents have more experience and they can tell you what is right and wrong.

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美中不足： 只要注意一下个别单词的使用和字母的大小写就可以了。

[初三英语作文-whether teen should make their

作者：许亚岚

Dear David,

Thanks for you latter. I’m very happy when I know you will come to Changsha soon. You said you wanted to learn Chinese. I think you can learn Chinese well. Because you love Chinese and you are a good boy. Now, I will give you some advice about learning Chinese . If you want to learn Chinese well ,you should read a lot and read aloud when you begin to learn it. I think you’d better learn Pingyin fisrt, then you can watch some Chinese movies and listen to some Chinese music. If you study hared , your Chinese will be good soon.

Sports benefit me in many ways. Firstly, sports call can make me fit and strong physically. When taking part in sports, I get the chance to train almost all parts of our bodies. In addition, sports call can maintain my psychological well being, Whenever Im in low spirit,aking part in sports can help me forget my anxieties and worries. Besides, sports can teach me some lessons about life. Through participation, I can learn that on the playground I not only struggle for my own self but also fight for my team. Sports teach me to be considerate, cooperative and optimistic.

I am fond of sports very much. I feel that I not only gain a well balanced life through going in for sports, but also get more chances to make more friends, to move closer to nature. Sports add happiness to my everyday life when I participate in them in a proper way.

My favourite sport is football, as it is very exciting. I play footetball three times a week. Most often I play it in my school. I feel very happy when I play football in school with my friends. Sometimes I play football in the playground near my school.Football is very easy to play. If you play football very well, you can form a football team to take part in the competition. You may become a famous football star.

Therefore, football is a very good sport. I think, you can play football, cant you?

Parents gave me life in this world,I love the most is them.

Expressing of loving parents do not need to pass a language that I love them.Whatever we can do some little things.In the Fathers Day or Mothers Day,we can prepare a delicious breakfast for them.We can remember their birthdays.In their birthdays,we dont need to buy gifts,but have to say happy birthday.

When parents come home from work,we can hand them a cup of hot water to make them relax.We can help parents to share some of the housework,so that they have more time to rest.As part of the family,we should take active to do housework.If we read out,we should always contact them,tell them recent things of our own.Let them not worry about us.

It is known to all our parents love is priceless,is not asking for anything.We should love them in return. But,parents can be very simple love.As long as the life of more concern to them,for them to have been very satisfied.Just do it.

父母给了我生命在这个世界上,我最喜欢他们。

表达爱的父母不需要通过语言,我爱他们。我们可以做一些小事。在父亲节或母亲节,我们可以为他们准备一份美味的早餐。我们可以记住他们的生日。在他们的生日,我们不需要买礼物,但不得不说生日快乐。

当父母下班回家时,我们可以把他们一杯热水让他们放松。我们可以帮助父母分担一些家务,这样他们有更多的时间休息。作为家庭的一部分,我们应该积极做家务。如果我们读了,我们应该联系他们,告诉他们最近自己的事情。让他们不要为我们担心。

众所周知我们的父母爱是无价的,不要求任何东西。我们应该爱他们的回报。但是,父母可以非常简单的爱。只要更多的关注他们的生活,他们非常满意。说做就做。

Now, the students learning pressure is great, and after class life is a good medicine to relieve the pressure of learning. I have a very interesting extracurricular life.

The biggest pleasure in my spare time is to collect rubber. Those strange and eccentric, imitate characters, animal images and daily necessities like rubber to collect a small jar, every time I look up will be an endless enjoyment. Those lively and lovely animals, such as rubber, lifelike daily necessities, erasers, and some funny and funny rubber, can relieve the pressure and annoyance of my learning and life. Whenever I collect the eraser, their lovely and genuine smile intoxicated me, as if I felt that I was one of them. I could play with them freely.

Im the only child at home. My mom and dad are busy, and I dont have time to play with me, so my best partner is the rubber. There are no secrets and lies between us. We take care and comfort each other. We are the best friends.

This year, people across China carried out a variety of activities to learn from Lei Feng. Lei Feng is a great man, it’s well –known to us that Lei Feng is really friendly, he always helps other people. He works very hared, and he is willing to make other people fell warm. As students, I think we can learn a lot fromn Lei Feng . We should try our best to help others, just like Lei Feng , and we’re supposed to study hard. In a word, we should learn from Lei Feng.

[初三优秀英语作文：Learn from Lei Feng

I live in a flat in a building. The building is very modern. There are about ten floors and I live on the top floor. I think my flat is very wonderful. The dining room is next to the kitchen. We always have dinner there, and my mother often cooks some delicious food for us. I can t cook, but I often help Mum wash the dishes. Sometimes my friends come to my flat and they teach me how to cook. So now, I can cook something for my family. I like the sofa in my sitting room. It is very comfortable and it is purple. What a nice colour! The bathroom with a bath and a shower has a mirror. It is in the shape of star. There are four members in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I. My parents work hard. They are very tired and I think they should have a good sleep. So the bedroom is the best place. My younger brother is only six years old. I love him even though he troubles me some times. In my bedroom, there are lots of posters of Angela on the wall. Angela is my favourite super star. She is beautiful. There is a garden in the district.

You can go walking there. I also want to tell you about my dream home. It is near a sea. It s made of wood. Maybe that will come true.

[最新初三英语作文:My Family And My Flat

The Great Wall runs across North China like a huge dragon, It winds its way

from west to east, across deserts, over mountains, through valleys till at last

it reaches the sea. Its the longest wall on the earth, also one of the wonders

in the world.The Great Wall has a history of more than 2000 years. The first part was

built during the Spring and Autumn Period.

All the walls were joined up in Qin Dynasty.All tile work was done by

hand.Thousands of people died while building the wall.Thus the Great Wall came

into existence.Since then, it has been rebuilt and repaired many times.

Now the Great Wall,the admiration of the world, has taken on a new look.

Its visited by large numbers of people from all parts of the country and the

world.

The Way to Keep Healthy

Its important for us to be healthy all our life.We cant study or work well without healthy body.

Therere many ways to keep healthy. First of all, we should keep taking exercises every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. After school, we can spend an hour playing ball games.

If we live in a high-rise,we can walk upstairs or downstairs. Second, we should have a balanced diet. Finally, we must remember: "Early to bed, early to rise is the way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise."

In my memory, I will never efface the image of a common service worker.

It was last New Year when all my family members gathered together that suddenly the heating pipe broke up. The warm steam burst forth from the crack. We could do nothing but have a shot at calling the household management center. Fortunately, someone answered it and decided to send a person here.

Ten minutes later, a middle-aged man came. He quickly shut the valve, but one of his hand was hurt by a spine carelessly. Not having a rest, he replaced the broken pipe. It took him half an hour to finish replacing it. Only after that did he remember his injured hand.

In our thankful sight, he disappeared in the curtain of night. He must have been getting together with his family, but he did the job for the sake fo others’ convenience at this special night. What a nice man! I will never forget him.

[关于初三英语作文推荐：I WontForgetHim

Christmas is one of the most important celebrations of the year for the western countries. it falls on the twenty- fifth of december and has the same importance as chinese new year to people with english backgrounds. the celebration is for the birth of jesus christ, who is the son of god in christianity. now days christmas is no longer only celebrated by the christians, but by most people from all over the world.

On the twenty- fourth of december everyone gets excited for it’s the day before christmas which is called christmas eve. the children are usually sent to bed early and are warned that “santa claus will only come and give you a present if you be good.” the younger kids actually believe that santa will come down the chimney on the sleigh that’s pulled by his reindeers. food like short bread and beer are prepared for santa when he comes, however most times parents just eat them. some children put socks and sacks up for the holding of the presents (that their parents put in).

Rise and shine on christmas morning! the children are always the first ones to wake up, some even do at four. present wrappers everywhere! they look into their presents with a big smile on their face and oh dear….i hope no one’s disappointed. i feel sorry for anyone that got pink underwear. children play while dinner is prepared by the adults. the christmas dinner are usually eaten together by relatives. the tradition of christmas pudding and roosters are usually eaten with deserts afterwards. the rest of the day is usually games and fun before the good days all come to an end.

I wish everyone a merry christmas and a happy new year!

On the New Year’s Eve, our family gets together, my parents made the big dinner, we ate dinner at about five o’clock, we talked so happily. After finishing the dinner, my sister and I were so excited, because we planned to see the firework. In my hometown, people can play the firework as they want, people play all kinds of firework every year, it is so beautiful. When the time was about 9 o’clock, I heard the voice, then I looked at the sky, the darkness was lighted up by the firework, I saw many different pictures of firework, all were beautiful. I couldn’t blink my eyes, I was afraid of missing the beautiful moment. I love firework’s night.

在除夕夜，我们家人聚集在一起，我的父母做了丰盛的晚餐，我们大概在五点钟吃晚餐，聊得很愉快。晚饭过后，我的妹妹和我很兴奋，因为我们打算去看烟花。在我的家乡，人们能随处放烟花，他们每年都放各种各样的烟花，非常的好看。九点钟到来之际，我听到了声音，然后我望着天空，黑暗被烟花点燃了，我看到了不同形状的烟花，都很好看。我不能眨眼，生怕错过了美妙的时刻。我喜欢烟花之夜。

[烟花之夜初三简单英语作文

This summer vacation, because mom and dad to go to work, as usual, I go home, because I am more introverted personality, mom feel to give me a cake, it make me increase the chance of meeting people, learning some knowledge, summer holidays are still let me really let me a headache.

One day, grandma and grandpa took me to mother in advance to contact me good golden microphone host computer classes, I will be here on my summer vacation the first lesson. After go in, I saw one man sat on a small wooden bench, I cant help but think: this is the nursery? Havent I how this group of children. I wanted to think, and then found a small wooden bench to sit down, and the bench is too small to bearing force is insufficient, plus I chubby, bench almost to be overwhelmed. "Jingle bell" finally class, the teacher told us the stance of the host, how to vividly to introduce myself, at this point, Ive just had a little bit on the cram school. But the age difference with other classmates or embarrassing me. At the end of the first class, the teacher also let the parents in auditing students introduce themselves. Well, I will be like the little avoid performance which in turn, I cant help but feel very hurt. When I played seriously, the audience a group of parents might see me with other children age difference, could not help but laugh, suddenly, a thick hate to my heart, I hate this interest class, hate with this group of children, also hate these parents laugh. Mother after listening to my protest, afraid that her child is too small I cant adapt to, and teachers coordinate pulled out of the cake course.

Left the golden microphone host interest after work, I on to the second class interest class - the international phonetic alphabet. In after I am very surprised, because this is big and my age children in the class. Finds a seat, I also see the teacher, "wow, too good, is Mr Zhu", I used to English class is on her, my heart secretly pleased. A tall, thin boy became my deskmate, my deskmate also chatted with me, we talk about the game, chat to play, a lot of common language, therefore became good friends. I like go to class every day, has a strong interest on British standard, tested after the training for us, I also did very well in the last exam.

I think will do this summer vacation interest class, age, there are many students can chat, to both the interest and learn knowledge.

今年暑假，因为爸爸妈妈要上班，我照例回老家过，由于我性格较内向，妈妈觉得要给我报一个兴趣班，说是让我增加与人交往机会，学习一些知识，暑假还让我上课真令我头疼。

这天，爷爷奶奶带着我来到妈妈事先给我联系好的 “金话筒主持人”兴趣班，我将在这里上我的暑假第一课。进去后，只见一个个小人坐在小板凳上，我不禁心想：这是托儿所吗?怎么这群孩子都没我大。我想了想，随即找了个小板凳坐了下来，可板凳太小了承重力不足，加上我偏胖，板凳几乎要被压垮。“叮铃铃”终于上课了，老师给我们讲了主持人的站姿，如何生动地进行自我介绍，此时，我才对这个补习班产生了一丝丝好感。但是与其他同学年龄的差异还是令我尴尬。第一节课快结束时，老师又让家长们进来旁听同学们的自我介绍。唉，我要与这群小不点轮流表演，我不禁感到十分排拆。当我认真表演完了，台下一群家长可能看到我与其他小孩的年龄差异，禁不住大笑，顿时，一股浓浓的恨意在我心头产生，我讨厌这个兴趣班，讨厌和这群小孩一起，也讨厌这些家长们的笑声。妈妈听我抗议后，怕同班小孩太小我不能适应，和老师协调退出了这个兴趣班。

离开了“金话筒主持人”兴趣班后，我又马不停蹄的来到了第二个兴趣班——国际音标班。进去之后我十分惊喜，因为这个班里都是和我年龄差不多大的孩子。我找了个位子坐下，再看看老师，“哇，太好了，是朱老师”，我以前英语辅导班就是在她那上的，我心中窃喜。一个又高又瘦的男孩成了我的同桌，我同桌也和我聊了聊，我们聊游戏，聊打球，共同语言很多，因此成了好朋友。我每天很喜欢去上课，对英标产生了浓厚的兴趣，培训结束后对我们进行了测试，我还考出了优异的成绩。

我觉得暑假兴趣班就要这样，大家年龄差不多，有许多可以聊的同学，才能既有兴趣，又学到知识。

How to be Stronger

with the improvement of peoples material conditions, people have higher demands for living quality. everyone wants to have a strong body and good living habits. how can we do that?

first, get up early and keep doing exercises in the morning every day. its a good beginning of the day.

second, pay attention to daily diet and have balancedfood.it can ensure your health.

besides these, the most important thing is to be calm and good-natured. hope you will be happy forever.

with the improvement of peoples material conditions, people have higher demands for living quality. people wish to be in good health and to have good living habits. how shall we do?

first, keep going to bed and getting up early every clay. then do some exercises in the open air to breathe the fresh air in the morning, so we will have a pleasant mood in a day.

then have balanced food to ensure our health. eat more vegetables.

being calm and good-natured is most important for our health. hope you will be happy forever.

[How to be Stronger初三英语作文

“When I was young, I’d listen to the radio….” I heard a beautiful song called “Yesterday Once More”. I really want the past to come back like it does in the song.

When I was a little girl, I was very happy. I could watch TV. Every day, I watched cartoons. They were very interesting. I could play many games with my friends. We often flew kites and climbed the hills. I also could cry loudly and laugh happily. Life was free and easy. I didn’t worry about my lessons and there was nothing unpleasant.

But they have all gone. Now I’m in Grade Three. I have lots of trouble. I have a lot of homework to do. I have no time to play or watch TV! I have to spend a lot of time on subjects. I must try my best to study well. I really feel very tired. I want to sleep all day, but I know that no pains, no gains.

“It’s yesterday once more. Looking back, every sha la, la, la, every wo, wo, still shines….”

[2017初三英语作文YesterdayOnceMor

Many people will be unforgettable, memorable things, unforgettable person, memorable day, a class to remember... I was the most memorable of my childhood. Childhood like a cup of milk, contains the fun of childhood. Childhood is like a stream, flowing childhood friendship; Childhood is like a song, the song with our happy childhood. How is not memorable to me?

My childhood was spent in liao home for transshipment. The scenery there is beautiful, green grass, green flowers, fresh air, we all immersed in the village in the mountains, compose a colorful picture. We have a few friend, three group, two group of son, play in the process of that sweet voice, echoed across the sky, wandering the midterm, for a long time cant stop!

During my childhood, I often pick wild flowers on the hill, looking for the bamboo shoots with friends, play games, back childhood that a few interesting childrens song...

很多人都会有难忘，难忘的事，难忘的人，难忘的日子，难忘的一节课……我最难忘的是我的童年。童年像一杯牛奶，蕴含着童年的乐趣;童年像小溪，流淌着童年的友谊;童年像一首歌，歌里有着童年我们的幸福。怎能不令我难忘?

我的童年是在廖家畈度过的。那里的风景格外的美，青的草、绿的花，新鲜的空气，我们整个村庄都沉浸在这青山绿水中，构成了一幅多姿多彩的画卷。我们几个小伙伴，三个一群，两个一伙儿，玩耍的过程中那甜美的声音，回响在整个上空，徘徊期中，久久不能停歇!

童年时，我经常和小伙伴们一起山上采野花、找竹笋、做游戏、背童年那几首生动有趣的儿歌……

导语：虽然离别的钟声即将敲响，校园的生活不再漫长，但请展开笑容收起悲伤，因为真挚的情谊不会远航，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理了优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Learn to give up wisely Never give up has been accepted by many people as a positive life attitude. Admittly persistence often plays an important role in one success. However,in many cases to give up might be wiser than to persist blindly. The following reasons can support this argument. Firstly,sometimes our goal may be unrealistic. If we insist on it blindly, it will finally bring us nothing but failure. At this time,what we should do is give up the orignal goal and reset a more pratical one. Secondly,not all persistence can bring deserving results. For a very simple example if we keep waiting in line for hours, only to have a luncheon restaurant may be it is unwise .

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学会明智地放弃不放弃已经被许多人接受为积极的生活态度。承认坚持经常在一个成功中扮演重要的角色。然而,在许多情况下放弃可能比一味坚持更明智。以下原因可以支持这一论点。首先,有时我们的目标可能是不现实的。如果我们盲目地坚持,它最终会给我们带来失败。此时,我们应该做的是放弃及目标,重新设置一个更实用的目标。第二,不是所有的坚持都能带来值得的结果。对于一个非常简单的例子,如果我们一直排队等几个小时,只有一家午餐餐厅可能是不明智的。

Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on.It won‘t stay to wait for somebody. You can‘t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won‘t leave them more. Today I found I hadn‘t enough time. Although I have 50-day holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do.

I had a lot of homework to do and I had something necessary to do.

[时间初三学生英语日记

暑假来了，你的暑假准备怎么度过呢，下面就一起来看看初三英语作文我的暑假吧

My Summer Holiday

Summer holiday is from July to August .It s a long time for me to do all kinds of things . I like visiting some places of

interest . And I like travelling by train . It takes me too much time , but it saves money .Sometimes I stay at home and do

my homework , sometimes I help my parents do some house work. When my parents are free , we often go to the park or

the zoo , and we have a good time there . I have a good summer holiday .

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我的夏日假期

内容：我的夏日假期暑假从7月至8。这山对我来说长的时间做各种事情。我喜欢参观一些地方的利益。我喜欢坐火车旅行。这要花我太多的时间，但它可以节省资金。有时候，我留在家里做功课，有时我帮助我的父母做一些家务。当我的父母都是免费的，我们经常去公园或动物园，我们有一个好的一段时间。我有一个愉快的暑假。

Summer Holiday Is Coming

The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also helps me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I’d like to make a trip to Xiamen. I’m sure I’ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday. I am looking forward to it..

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暑假来了

暑假即将来临，我打算好好休息放松一下自己。我要读很多有用的书籍，不仅有趣而且能使我学到知识的书籍。我将尝试花时间同父母交流，帮他们做家务。我将参加社会活动，以便更好地了解社会。如果可能，我将去厦门旅游。我想这个暑假一定非常有趣，并且有意义，我很期待。

These years, Internet is becoming more and more important for people. Many students like making friends on the Internet.

However, every coin has two sides. On the one hand, you may meet a good person and he or she can talk and play with you. And he or she may even help you deal with some problems in your life. But on the other hand, our students are really too young, we can not protect ourselves at all!

So I think you’d better make friends in the real world.

[初三英语400字作文

导语：英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧，希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。