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+ 加入清单中考英语作文评分标准一般分为三类:一等作文、二等作文和三等作文。为了让不同层次的学生在作文得分率上都能有所提高,现对各类作文进行分析,找出相应的得分秘诀。下面说说中考英语一等作文的写作方法。
一、中考英语一等作文的评分标准
内容完整,具体,丰富,包含所有要点,能够围绕内容适当发挥,语句流畅,应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连续,层次分明,表达清楚,无语法错误,书写规范,标点正确,计满分。
二、中考英语一等作文的写作要求
(一)确保作文的完整性,关注评卷第一印象
考试的时候,要尽量留出充足的时间写作文。这样,我们才能有足够的时间去构思,打草稿。由于评卷是人工进行的,所以作文留给人的第一印象是很重要的,从以往经验看,第一印象至少占1分,那些卷面整洁,文字自然流畅,书写工整,标点符号正确的非常“吃香”,所以,大家平时就应该注意作文的“形象”,“仪表”一定要保证自己看卷面时觉得舒服,那么中考得高分就不是一句空话了。
不论做哪种题目,审题是最关键的,写好中考作文更是这样!要做到内容完整,我们首先要认真看好题目的要求,分析题目到底要我们写什么。比如要求我们用第三人称来写作,如果审题没有审好,用了第一人称,那么,作文一定得不到满分,说不定还是最差的。所以,要重视审题,按题目的具体要求进行构思。中考书面表达基本上都是提示性作文(包括看图作文),因此要保证运用所有的提示要点,进行合理的发挥,为写下满分作文打好基础。
(二)打好草稿质量,全面留意扣主题
写好中考英语一等作文除了做到上面讲的内容之外,还要做到以下几点:
1. 要做到内容具体。中考提示性作文都有具体的内容和要求,写作时只要按规定将作文写出来,得分就不难,但是要想得满分,必须做到围绕内容适当发挥,并且要突出文章的主题,体现实际的中心思想。
2. 要做到语句流畅。这就要求有扎实的英语基本功。在平时的学习过程中,注意一些常用句式的表达方法。要尽量使用自己最熟悉的词语和句型,要尽量避免汉语式的表达方式。要注意句子之间的连贯性,不仅仅从语法上,更主要的是从句意上,把握句子的连贯性。
3. 要做到层次分明。写文章不都是一个段落,一个模式,要根据文章的具体需要,来确定文章究竟用几个段落,作文要讲究层次分明,突出主题。
4. 要按规定的词数书写。中考提示作文都有具体的词数要求,写作时要注意数一数所用的单词数量,词数过多或过少都会丢分。
5. 最后要注意检查。写完作文不是没事可做,最后一步就是细心检查,这很关键。检查时要从题目要求开始,到具体内容无误结束。保证词语,句型的运用正确,标点运用得当等等,都是重点检查的项目,直到在一定的时间之内完成好作文,不留遗憾为止。
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篇1:英语保护环境的作文
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+ 加入清单引导语:环境与人类共存,资源开发与环境保护协调。下面是小编为你带来的英语保护环境的作文,希望对你有所帮助。 保护环境初三英语作文(一)
Many people are active in fighting against unfair treatment to colored people, women , animals and so on. Right now I am talking about fighting for respect to our environment.Though the environment doesnt have a mouth to deprecate what humans have done to her, she retaliates through action. In the early years the Chinese cut down large quantities of trees, at the source of the yellow river, which led to the disappearance of big forests and terrible floods. As a result, the Huangtu plateau which was once covered with grass and forests was turned into barrens that supported fewer plants. Another example was in several developed countries. Because many chemical factories discharged poisonous gas without filtering it, cities were covered with so much poisonous gas that people were killed by the air they breathed in. What horrible scene!What we are suffering is only a small part of what the nature once suffered. If we dont take action to show respect to the environment.
Measures should be taken to protect the environment on which we are relying. First governments should forbid destroying vegetation, rivers and lakes, oceans, as and the atmosphere as well. Second voices should be made to announce the public of the importance of protecting the environment. Third enterprises should pay special attention to the effect they have on the environment and work out solutions for the problems.
Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along well with it. Only by saving the environment can we save ourselves. 保护环境初三英语作文(二)
The earth scale change of climate has brought a new kind of natural disaster and the developed and complicated city system is holding a latent risk of expanding the damage artificially. Also people has been spoiling the health since the immense quantity of chemicals have been produced and already used in pursuit of convenience and various toxic substances have been produced unintentionally and accumulated in environment.
Therefore, We need some countermeasures from the viewpoint to prevent the city environment form disaster and to manage environmental risks. So we will develop and improve a new risk management system and a disaster prevention system to preserve and create the city environment where people feel easy and sound in their life. 保护环境初三英语作文(三)
Pollution has been a serious problem for a certain time around the world. There are many causes for it. Transportation is the main factor of pollution. When the waste gas from cars is released, the air is polluted. People breathing in the polluted air can develop respiratory disease. Another factor is that people throw their garbage everywhere. All kinds of garbage not only spoil the splendid environment, but also cause environmental pollution. Whats more, industrial pollution also deserves our attention. Wastewater from factories is poured into rivers and this causes water pollution. As a consequence, the greenhouse effect becomes a problem which needs our immediate caution and how to solve is urgent all over the world. At present, some measures have been taken to prevernt.
For example, people classify the garbage and some is recycled after being collected. People are also encouraged to use paper products instead of plastic products because we know that our living condition will be worse if we keep ignoring this problem. And I believe we can prevent pollution if everyone makes the efforts.
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篇2:关于保护环境的英语词
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+ 加入清单人类只有一个地球。他是生命的摇篮,是人类共有的家园。然而,环境污染与生态破坏已经对人类的社会经济发展和人们的正常生活构成了现实威胁。爱护环境,崇尚文明,无疑是人类自身的道义和责任。
There is only one earth. He is the cradle of life, is the homeland of all mankind. However, environmental pollution and ecological destruction of normal life has been on the social and economic development and peoples constitute a real threat. Care for the environment, advocate of civilization, is the humans moral responsibility.
我们渴望干净的地球,渴望健康的地球,渴望环保的家园,渴望绿色,健康,卫生的社区……让我们用爱心去关注环境的变化,用热情去传播环保的观念,用行动肩负起环保的重任。从我做起,从现在做起,从身边的点滴小事做起,把环保承诺变为实际行动。
We desire to clean the earth, to earth for environmental health, home, eager to green, health, the health of the community...... Let us love to pay close attention to changes in the environment, with enthusiasm to spread the idea of environmental protection, with action to shoulder the responsibility of environmental protection. Begin from me, start from now, start from the side of the little things, the environmental commitments into actions.
记住,保护地球,就是保护我们自己。
Remember, the protection of the earth, is to protect ourselves.
篇3:英语作文:保护学校环境
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+ 加入清单参考提示:
1. Why is the school environment important?
2. What should we do to protect our school environment?
3. How will our school be like if we all protect it?
4.起始句:Taking care of our school and
Taking care of our school and protecting our school environment! A clean and pleasant environment is very important, because it can make us healthy and happy. It’s our duty to protect our school environment. We should clean the school every day. And we shouldn’t drop trash here and there. We should pick it up when we see trash on the ground. We shouldn’t draw on the wall. If we all like our school the same as we like our homes, our school will be more beautiful. We will enjoy our study better. Let’s protect our school environment from now on, shall we? (102 words)
篇4:一年级环境保护英语作文带翻译
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+ 加入清单First of all, let me tell you a true event. That is my grandpa with me by boat from yichang to three gorges occurs when one thing.
We all got up that morning, the people on board, is preparing to play water to wash shu. But the faucet for half a day on the boat were down only a few drops of water, one asked, originally is the boat ran out of water! So, we only have stood in long lines, slowly, etc. Although I looked at the ship, the ship under a stream of water, but no one would like to use it. Because the water is so dirty, so HunHuang, who dare to use? Line only slowly, slowly, etc!
Although in the high-speed development of science and technology nowadays, but the impact on our environment. Reduced river pollution, air pollution, the trees, the increasing of the desert... All this is all thanks to the human! Countries while in value, although the world in value, environmental protection, what and how much these things figure up attention? In my opinion, is rare. Although countries in so to speak, but whats the use of words and not of deeds? Did just a few, too! Dont grab from main reason! You see, the Yellow River water is not still contaminated? So the factory does not still pollute the atmosphere? Should grasp, starts from the quality of people, quality grab, but the country and the world to do so? No! Just like to do even when you are done. In the polluted environment is not so?
Animals are extinct, flash floods in explosion, dust storms still exist... It fully shows the environmental pollution! Countries will only go to disaster relief, instead of simply grabbed, will only go to disaster relief, whats the use? Dont all kinds of disaster is still in? We should like lu xun. He had become a is in order to save the Chinese, and he found that it will not solve the fundamental, so he became a writer, to save the people of the spirit. Because this is the fundamental! So, we as the master of the 21st century, you should understand, what is the root of the damage to the environment, from the point to solve it. Work hard -- the 21st century we!
首先,我先给大家讲一个真实的事件。那是我随我的外公从宜昌坐船前往三峡时发生的一件事。
那天早晨,船上的人都起来了,正准备打水洗淑。可是船上的水龙头半天也只下来几滴水,一询问,原来是船上的水用完了!所以,大家只有排着长长的队伍,慢慢的等。我望着船下,船下虽然有着流不尽的江水,但却没有一个人愿意来使用它。因为江水太脏了,是那么的浑黄,又有谁敢去使用呢?只有慢慢的排队,慢慢的等!
如今科技虽然在高速发展,但这影响到了我们的环境。河流污染,大气污染,树木的减少,沙漠的增多……这一切的一切都是拜人类所赐!国家虽然在重视,世界虽然在重视,什么环境保护日,这些事又有多少人影起了注意呢?在我看来,是极少的。国家虽然在这么说,可是光说不做又有什么用呢?做了也只是少数罢了!根本没有从主要原因抓起!你看,黄河的水不是还在被污染吗?工厂不照样还在污染大气吗?抓,就应该从小抓起,从人们的素质,品质抓起,可是国家乃至世界这么做了吗?没有!即使做了也只是做样子罢了。环境不是照样还在被污染吗?
动物还在灭绝,山洪还在爆发,沙尘暴照样存在……这都充分说明了环境还在污染!国家只会去赈灾,而不去根本抓起,只会去赈灾,这又有什么用呢?各种灾难不还是照样在发生吗?我们应该像鲁迅一样。他当初从医是为了拯救中国人,而他发现,这解决不了根本,所以,他当了作家,去拯救人们的精神。因为这就是根本!所以,我们作为21世纪的小主人,就应该明白,什么是破坏环境的根本,从要点去解决它。努力吧――21世纪的我们!
篇5:熊猫英语作文
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+ 加入清单In the winter, I play with my father and mother went to the panda base.
An enter a door, every tree hung with a panda doll, quite the atmosphere of the panda base, in a short time, we went to the panda screens, there is very big, with little panda, its because of have to do, I went to a near-end, saw inside film about a pandas on.
I learned that the giant panda belongs to the spine mammalia animal door a carnivore, giant pandas have said the bear, length 120 cm, tail about 18 cm long, about 45 cm long arm, leg about 75 cm long. Weight about 90 kg, is my two times.
Film said above, the giant panda called "bamboo forest recluse", yes! Every panda each have each activity area but smaller scale, so less activity, thereby reducing the energy cost, with the usual TV introduction "giant pandas at low nutrition, low energy of bamboo, to reduce the scope of activities and activity level, more rest in special activities of energy saving way". Dont look at the panda fat, total love uphill climb. Just two or three hours, they are not eat bamboo and drink, is to eat, drink foot, climb up the tall wooden bridge, have a good nights sleep, as if just like to sleep on the wooden bridge, havent seen sleeping on the ground, and safe and comfortable, so probably originated from carnivorous ancestors instinct!
Finished watching the movie, we went to the youth of the giant panda "villa", intently I use my mothers mobile phone took nearly five minutes short, they are a little afraid at first, but soon adapted to. Let me it is a pity that they are so lazy, in addition to holding a bamboo chew is lay asleep, turn over a new sleeping position to continue is rare "big", rarely up to walk, let alone play, really wish them up with horn. Ha ha, no wonder they grow so fat!
To walk, we saw two little panda, a sleeping, a play, the last play naughty baby panda should only wake her brother. This is what a lovely baby pandas, naughty!
How time flies, soon in the afternoon, time to go home, I reluctantly left the panda base.
I look back, water, green bamboo, man and nature is how harmonious ah.
就在这个冬天,我和爸爸妈妈一起去了大熊猫基地玩。
一进门,每棵树上都挂着一个熊猫的布偶,颇有熊猫基地的气氛,不一会儿,我们来到了熊猫影厅,那里非常的大,上面还有熊猫的小百科,真是因有尽有,我走到一个影厅,看见里面正在播关于熊猫的影片。
我了解到大熊猫属于脊柱动物门哺乳纲食肉目大熊猫科,也有说是熊科的,体长大约120厘米,尾长大约18厘米,臂长大约45厘米,腿长大约75厘米。体重大约90千克,足足是我的两倍呢。
影片上面说,大熊猫人称“竹林隐士”,真是一点没错!每只大熊猫各有各的活动区域但范围较小,因此活动量少,从而减少了能量的耗费,这与往常电视上介绍的“大熊猫以低营养,低能量的竹子为食,采取减少活动范围和活动量,多休息以节能的特殊活动方式”相符合。别看大熊猫胖胖的,总爱往高处爬。短短两、三个小时里,它们不是吃竹子、喝水,就是吃饱了,喝足了,爬上高高的木桥,美美地睡上一觉,好像只喜欢在木桥上睡觉,没有看到在地上睡的,这样又安全又舒服,大概源于食肉祖先的本能吧!
看完了影片,我们到了幼年大熊猫的“别墅”,我目不转睛地用妈妈的手机拍了近5分钟短片,起先它们有点害怕,但很快适应了。让我遗憾的是它们好懒,除了拿着竹子啃就是趴着睡大觉,翻个身换个姿势继续睡觉是难得一见的“大动作”,很少起来走动,更别说玩耍了,真恨不得用喇叭喊它们起来。哈哈,怪不得它们长得这么胖!
走着走着,我们又看见了两只小熊猫,一只在睡觉,一只在玩耍,最后那只玩耍的调皮的幼年熊猫竟然把自己的哥哥吵醒了。这只幼年大熊猫是多么可爱,调皮啊!
时间可过得真快啊,不一会儿就到了下午,该回家了,我依依不舍的离开了大熊猫基地。
我回头看看,水流阵阵,竹子绿油油的,人与大自然是多么和谐呀。
篇6:英语作文保护珍稀动物
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+ 加入清单Animals Need Protecting
It is suggested that people have been aware of the issue--lack of preservation for endangered spieces, animals and plants, but as you see , they placed little efforts to cope with the problem.despite the versatility and intricacy of instruments , I would pore over some of the most striking ones and offer alternatives afterwards.
One of the major reasons , causing peoples inocence of protecting animals, is that the government did not function well as an educator, arosing peoples initiative in shielding wild animals, which led to the consequence that people do not know their responsibility to prevent animals from dangers, and specific knowledge in guarding them. what is equally important as the reason mentioned above is that media did not meet our satisfaction to inform the mass of the emergency which is crutial in arousing peoples conciousness to keep animals safe.
In spite of the serious problem, measure leading to profound improvement still can be taken. owning to the fact that funds are insufficient in some developing countries, developed countries or international organizations should shoulder more burden -- finacing them in order to capacitate them to accompolish the protection of animals. at the same time, education in telling people the way to make animals harboured ought to be focused on, thus resulting in peoples better awareness in the camouflage of our pla#from cutest creatures.
It is belived by me that if correct actions are taken to preserve animals, any kind of them will be far away from extinction forever.
篇7:2024高考关于环境保护英语作文
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+ 加入清单The environmental protection is the most major problem which in the modern life the humanity faces. Must solve this problem must start from foundation. First, must massively propagandize, enhances peoples consciousness with understanding, strengthens the environmental protection consciousness. Next, must carry on waste recovery use, reduces to forest-trees felling. Also must strengthen to white pollution processing, little uses the plastic product. Finally, must make improvement to clean aspect. Causes the citys appearance to be neater. For Earths tomorrow, we must start from the now diligently, will want the well local constable to protect the environment. To this us proposes as follows suggests: Implementation trash classification packed in bags. Like this not only can reduce the environmental sanitation workers work load, but also can even better basically arrive makes use of waste, to reduce the pollution, saves the resources.
环境保护是现代生活中人类所面临的最主要问题。要解决这个问题必须从基础做起。首先,要大量宣传,提高人们的意识与理解,加强环保意识。其次,要进行废物回收利用,减少对森林树木的砍伐。还必须加强对白色污染处理,少使用塑料制品。最后,必须改善清洁方面。使城市的外观整洁。为了地球的明天,我们必须从现在开始努力,将希望和当地的警官保护环境。为此我们提出如下建议:实施垃圾分类袋装。这样不仅可以减少环卫工人的工作量,而且可以更好的利用废物,减少污染,节约资源。
篇8:2024年托福英语作文写作方法:审题和布局
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+ 加入清单一、审题的“精确性”
在上篇中,笔者已经介绍了部分考题中的“绝对性”的应对措施,而根据专家对于过去2年独立写作考题的分析,发现有90%以上的题目属于“支持/反对”型:
2011.01.30
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the change of the society is so rapidly, people are less happy or less satisfied with their life than people did in the past time.
而剩下的则是由“对比论述型”构成的:
2011.03.13
Some people think children should spend most of their time in studying and playing while others think they should help their parents with the household chores. What’s your opinion?
在审题时,考生必须首先把题目通读1-3遍,彻底把握题目主旨后,方可进行段落布局。在这里,笔者结合自己的经验给考生们一些建议:首先,判断题目是否包含“绝对”含义的词,若有,则按照上篇讲过的建议布局,若没有,则对于同意或者反对的理由进行快速的brain storming, 然后根据分论点的数量及论点的可延展性来敲定立场:
Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Disagree:
1) Endangered animals are valuable because of their limited quantities
2) Environment balance
3) Endangered animals sometimes stand for the country, so they are more valuable than farmlands
Agree:
1) life quality is the top priority
2) endangered animals can be raised in the zoos
经过一番考量,假如考生得出了上述的一些分论点及想法,这时候,主体段的布局基本就可以敲定大方向了。第一种就是完全反对题目的说法,采用五段式结构布局,每个主体段论证上述三个分论点中的一个;第二种也是反对题目的说法,采用五段式结构布局,但是前2个主体段从三个分论点中选二个去论证,而第三个主体段从“同意”的二个分论点里去选一个,最后的结论还是倾向于反对的。第三种是采用四段式结构布局,即第一个主体段从三个反对意见中选择二到三个分论点去写,而第二个主体段则从赞同的分论点里去选择,数量上比前一段少一个即可,最后结论还是倾向于反对多一点。这样说是不是有些同学看了会有点“晕”呢?那下面笔者就再举个简单点的例子吧:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
Disagree:
1) Most people are common, so they want to know something about famous ones
2) Famous people stand for some fashion
3) Constrain the public figures
4) Celebrities can improve the national cohesion and unity
又经过了几分钟思考,我们得出了上述的四个分论点,但是一时半会赞同的理由实在是想不出。若考试的时候遇到这种情况,千万别犹豫不决,马上从已经想好的观点里面进行挑选。于是,这个题目我们就采用完全反对的立场,以五段式结构布局全文,主体段的分论点从上述四点中挑选三个展开论述即可。这样一来,大家是不是明白一点了呢?
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Agree: Parents make decision for children.
1) Parents have more experience
2) 15-18 years old children are not adults, so they cant take responsibility
还有一种情况就是我们只能想出两个分论点,这时候考生应该果断采用四段式布局,而这一次,两个主体段都分别论述一个同意的理由,而在结尾时,可以顺便提一些反对的理由,这样也不失为一种灵活的方法,希望考生们可以借鉴。
二、分论点的排列原则
专家提醒考生们,在布局的时候我们不是随意编排分论点的先后顺序,而是需要有一定的逻辑性和合理性。一般说来,五段式的三个主体段,若都是同意或者都是反对的理由的话,一般这些分论点有两种逻辑顺序,即第一种按照“重要性”来排,将你认为最主要的理由放在第一个主体段中详细论证;第二种是按照“小到大”的原则,即个人方面的理由先写,然后再是家庭,公司,最后再是社会,国家等。倘若所有的论点都是在一个范围内的,比如都是属于个人的论点,则这个时候要看这些分论点后续的论证内容的多少,比如某一个分论点你既举得出例子,又可以进行对比或者因果论述的话那肯定应该先写这个分论点,若某一个分论点后续能够阐述的理由只有一句话的时候那就应该果断地将其排在后面写。若文章是四段式的结构,则在一个主体段中的排列顺序和前面讲的原则是一致的。
篇9:英语议论文的写作方法与技巧指导
全文共 7039 字
+ 加入清单议论文写作是几种常见文体中要求较高的一种。下面语文迷网整理了一些写作方法,希望对你有帮助。
一、议论文的文体特点和写作要求
英语议论文同中文议论文一样也是以议论的方式,通过摆事实、讲道理来阐述自己观点的一种文体。高中英语议论文是一种限制性的写作, 其论点、论据、论证都必须十分明确,学生必须结合题目要求来阐述相关观点。
议论文的结构可分为三个部分:1、引言段引出一个令人关注的问题或明白地亮出自己的观点,如提倡什么,支持什么,反对什么。 2、主体段对提出的问题进行分析、推论、并运用归纳法、演绎法和类比法等进行论证,取得以理服人的效果。3、结论段可以用两三句话来结束文章,同时要注意重申论点,与引言段呼应,但不能照搬原话。务必做到论点明确、要点齐全、论证严密、结构严谨、层次分明、首尾呼应。
二、议论文的写作方法与技巧
一)、审好题
人们常说:“磨刀不误砍柴功”。审题是写作的开始,是写好作文的前提条件,“好的开始是成功的一半”,议论文写作也不例外。只有明确题目要求,确立观点,确定论证方法及全文段落安排,才可能成功写出一篇好的议论文。如果写偏了题,再精心的构思、再好的语言表达也是枉然。审题主要包括六个方面:一是判断议论文所属类型。英语议论文根据命题特点,从形式上来看可分为如下类型: ①“一分为二”的观点。如:“轿车大量进入家庭后,对家庭、环境、经济可能产生的影响”。②“两者选一”的观点。如:“乘火车还是乘飞机”。③“我认为……”型,如:“你对课外阅读的看法”。④“怎样……(how to)”型,如:“怎样克服学习中碰到的困难”。⑤ 图表作文,通过阅读图表中的数字与项目得出一个结论或形成一种看法(杨家贵,2005)。二是确立该文的论点或作者须持的观点,以及支撑论点的道理和事实。三是确定全文所包括的要点。四是确定段落数及每段适用的连接词、过渡句,使文章连接紧凑、过渡自然、层次分明。五是选择全文主要时态及各段适用的其它时态。六是判断该文的格式,是书信还是短文。审题完毕,随即列出提纲。
二)、注重主题句的设置
主题句又叫中心句(topic sentence),是段落的论点,限制段落中议论的范围,是整个段落的纲领。主题句必须要正确,要明确表明作者赞成什么,反对什么。主题句在一篇百来字的议论文中好比“画龙点睛”,帮助作者分层次阐述自己的观点,让读者快速了解作者的观点。
1、确定主题句的位置
英语议论文的主题句宜设在段首第一句,这是由以下两个因素决定的。1)、主题句出现的位置有三种情况:①在段首,以便读者浏览主题句就可掌握文章的概要,这个位置适用于写提供信息或解释观点的段落;②在段末;③段中(高长梅,2000)。2)、英语民族的思维特点是常采用路标式(直线式)篇章结构,即主题句在段首。
2、写出好的主题句
好的主题句具有以下特点:①有一定的概括性,普遍性而不是罗列具体事实。②句意明确而不是模糊不着边际。③让人有话可写而不是给出无可辩驳的事实。④不以问题的方式出现,也不要同时表达两个以上的观点。笔者要求学生写了以下的主题句:
1)Staying up late is bad for our health.
2)The more cars, the better?
3)There are two reasons why some people are fascinated by Super Girls and two reasons why some dislike them.
4)Beijing is famous for the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Imperial Palace and other places of interest.
5)a. Tom is a middle school student.
b. Tom is a hard-working middle school student.
6)Living in small cities is better than living in big cities.
然后让学生对照主题句的特点,他们一致认为1)、5)b、6)为好的主题句。在实践和对比中,学生学会了如何写好的主题句,并且运用到议论文写作中,收到较好效果,见以下实例(下段黑体部分是主题句)。
Everyone lives by selling something. For example, teachers live by selling knowledge, philosophers by selling wisdom and priests by selling spiritual comfort. Though it may be possible to measure the value of material goods in terms of money, it is extremely difficult to calculate the true value of services which people perform for us. The conditions of society are such that skills have to be paid for in the same way that goods are paid for at a shop. Everyone has something to sell.
由此可见,好的主题句能帮助作者阐明观点,起到提纲挈领的作用。作者围绕段落的中心论点,运用多种方法展开论证,达到以理服人的效果。
三)、用好连接词和过渡句
从行文需要出发选用恰当的连接词、过渡句可使整篇文章文句流畅,句意转换自然,同时使表达合乎逻辑,文章结构严谨。倘若一篇议论文的段落里不乏高级词汇和复杂语法结构,但缺少了连接词、过渡句的润色而不能从一个观点自然地过渡到另一个观点,或段落里的各论据(supporting sentence)连接松散,势必削弱论证的效果,就算不上一篇好的议论文。下面分别说明如何有效运用连接词与过渡句。
1、句与句的连接词
连接词通常由连词、副词、介词短语和插入语等充当。如何有效使用连接词,使句意连贯、紧凑,以体现文章良好的严密的论证逻辑?
2.段与段的过渡句
过渡句帮助作者展示文章的条理和层次。恰当运用过渡句能使表达锦上添花。当文章从一个层次转换到另一个层次,或由一段内容转入另一段内容时需要用过渡句。恰当有效的运用过渡句,效果明显(见下文,题目及要求略,黑体部分为过渡句)。
Wearing school uniform every day spreads an order over many schools. Is it good or bad for students? Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter.
Some people say that it has a bad effect on developing students’ personal character. According to them, students are tired of wearing the same clothes every day, which is hard to tell who’s who. Furthermore, the cost of the school uniform is not low as many people think. With the bad quality, it’s not well worth the money.
However, as a popular saying goes: “Every coin has two sides.” Others argue that it is good for students. In their opinion, wearing school uniform will prevent students from wasting so much money on clothes and the time on catching up with the fashion. In addition, it’s easy for the teachers to recognize the students. There is no doubt that wearing school uniform every day is good for students.
In short, I firmly support the view that we should wear school uniform.(康珍,2005)
上文黑体部分综合体现了恰当、有效运用连接词和过渡句的最佳效果。全文行文流畅、衔接自然、条理清楚,浑然不觉作者是在套用各种连接词和过渡句。因此,非常有必要熟记一些常用典型的议论文过渡句,使议论文结构严谨,论点清楚,行文流畅。
1)引言段的常用过渡句
Recently we had a heated discussion on…, Opinions are various among different people.
Different people have different opinions on the question of …
They differ greatly in their attitudes towards …
Different people hold different views/opinions on this matter.
Although most people think… I believe…
此类过渡句能迅速引起读者注意,自然而然地引出全文要讨论的话题,或者开门见山地阐明文章的论点。
2)主体段的常用过渡句
Some may hold the view that… because… But others have a negative attitude. From their point of view…
Some people think that… While others believe…
Some people are for the idea of… because… But some people are against the idea of… because …
本文所指议论文的主体段可以是一段也可以是两段。通过正确使用过渡句,文章思路清晰,结构清楚,显示作者严谨思维,增强表达效果。
3)结论段的常用过渡句
As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with the statement that…
Therefore, it’s easy to draw the conclusion that…
As a consequence/result, I firmly support the view that…
Taking all these factors into consideration, we may reach the conclusion that…
To sum up/in a word/in conclusion/in short/above all/in general/ generally speaking, I still hold the view that…
运用过渡句的提示作用进入结论段,作者或是重申论点,或是强调论点,以便加深读者对全文的了解和深刻认识。
英语议论文范文:
Should Examination Be Abolished (取消)?
The examination system has come to be the main theme (主题)of modern education. One should take an examination andsucceed in passing it before he could be admitted, promoted or graduated. As it plays so important a role in the realm of education (教育的领域) it is under much criticism (评论) as to its validity (有效性) . People who are in favour of it try to develop this system more; those who are against it believe that such a system should be abolished. Should examination be abolished? In my opinion it should be.
Many people think that an examination is the only means to test knowledge, but, in fact, that is not true. A few questions given in an examination could by no means cover the whole field of the subject. Thus those who are able to answer them may be the poorest of the students and yet happen to know just a few points about that subject.
Id like to say that, because of the existence of the examination system, students pay so much attention to gaining high marks, that they often forget the chief purpose of education. The so-called clever students devote (贡献) themselves to the study of textbooks only. They, of course, know nothing but the skeleton (梗概) of knowledge. The end and aim of education, however, is to enable students to learn how to live. To do this, students must get themselves to do all kinds of training, physicalas well as mental. The present examination system has discouraged students from making such an attempt.
Moreover, since the students try so hard to put their lessons into memory in as short a time as possible, psychologically (心理上来看), they soon forget the whole subject as soon as the examination is over. Surely this is one of the greatest wastes ever made in the history of civilization.
Lastly, in order to get high marks, there is a great temptation (诱惑) for students to cheat (作弊) in an examination. Indeed, such a practice becomes the means to the end. They cheat their teachers, their parents and also themselves. Such a tendency would impair (损害) our moral standards (道德标准) .
Therefore, I am of the opinion, in conclusion, that the examination system should be abolished.
篇10:熊猫英语作文
全文共 1070 字
+ 加入清单The panda is a national treasure of China, is also one of the most precious animals in the world.
Panda head and ears is circular, the tail is very short, body fat, the colour black and white. Particularly liked is a pair of black rim of the eye, like wearing a pair of dark glasses.
The giant panda docile personality. Is darling. Funny like the giant panda is not only a national treasure of China, but also by the world wildlife federation elected emblem, and often served as the Chinese ambassador of peace, brought the friendship of the Chinese people.
Giant panda although belonging to a carnivore, but is a vegetarian. They just love to eat sweet arrow bamboos withered bamboo and China.
Baby panda born only 25 kg, the skin is pink, three months can open your eyes, one can see completely.
? The giant panda such is life!
熊猫是中国的国宝,也是世界上最珍贵的动物之一。
大熊猫的头和耳朵是圆形,尾巴很短,身体肥胖,毛色黑白相间。特别惹人喜欢的是一双黑眼圈,就像戴了一副墨镜。
大熊猫性格温顺。憨态可掬。逗人喜欢的大熊猫不仅是中国的国宝,而且还被世界野生动物协会选为会标,并常常担任中国的和平大使,带着中国人的友谊远渡重洋。
大熊猫虽然属于食肉目,但却是个素食主义者。他们只爱吃略带甜味的箭竹和华枯竹。
大熊猫的宝宝生下来时只有25千克,皮肤是粉红色,三个月时可以睁开眼睛,一岁可以完全看清了。
怎么样?大熊猫的生活就是这样!
篇11:环境保护大学英语作文
全文共 1054 字
+ 加入清单On Water Shortage
No one can have failed to notice the fact that water shortage is a grave problem with which the whole world is confronted. Actually, it has become so widespread that it has severely affected peoples daily life and hindered the development of the global economy.
A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following might be the critical ones. First, with the development of agriculture and industry, an increasing amount of water is needed. Secondly, the ever-increasing population is another leading cause of water shortage. Besides, the global tendency of warming up also contributes to the problem. Whats worse, pollution and waste of fresh water aggravate the situation.In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. First, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out and enforced to protect water resources. Secondly, people should enhance their awareness of saving water. With these measures taken, it is reasonable
for us to expect a brighter future.
篇12:英语作文保护环境60字
全文共 450 字
+ 加入清单Good environment can make people feel happy and fit .To improve the environment means to improve our life.
We should plant more trees and flowers around us .We shouldn’t cut them down .We should stop factories from pouring waste water into the river and waste gas into the air.
Whenever we see litter on the ground ,we should pick it up and throw it into dusbins.Never spit in public.Don’t draw on public walls.It’s our duty to protect the environment.
篇13:环境污染保护英语
全文共 951 字
+ 加入清单Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river. We found the water so dirty that we could hardly catch fish in it.
A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted. In this way most of the fish in the river were killed.
If the river water all over the country is polluted like this, no living things will exist in the water. As we all know, environmental pollution does great harm to living things and human beings. Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is. Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution. We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.
上个星期日我和爸爸一起去钓鱼。我们发现水太脏了,我们几乎不能在它的鱼。
沿着这条河的许多工厂总是把废水和垃圾倒进河里,使河水受到污染。这样,河里的大部分鱼都被杀死了。
如果这个国家的河水都被污染了,水里就不存在生物。我们都知道,环境污染对生物和人类都有很大的危害。现在越来越多的人开始意识到这个问题有多严重。我国政府正在尽最大努力采取措施打击污染。我们期望在每一条河流中的水将在长时间内变得更清洁,更清洁。
篇14:保护动物英语作文
全文共 896 字
+ 加入清单Many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction, because the environment that they are living in has changed greatly。 For example, with the developmet of cities, the using of insecticide and serious pollution, their living areas have become narrowcr and narrower。 Many of the wild animals, now are confronted with food crisis。 At the same time, man is killing off species just for getting their fur, skin, horns, teeth and meat。
In order to protect our resources of ecology, people should realize that the loss of any species is at least the loss of source of knowledge and a source of natural beauty。 There fore, measures of the following should be taken: pollution standards are made to keepdown poisons; killing off certain rare species is prohibited; national parks should be set up as wild life, reserves。
Only if we human beings take some drastic measures can wild animals be preserved。
篇15:环境保护大学英语作文
全文共 2161 字
+ 加入清单My Views on Environmetal Protection
Nowadays, the world we live in is becoming more and more intolerable because of environmental destruction. Each day thousands of tons of gases come out of the exhausts of motor vehicles. Smoke from factories pollutes the air of industrialized areas and the surrounding areas of the countryside. Recently,haze weather has become a usual phenomenon here in large part of China. People are forced to wear the mask to avoid breathing poisonous air. Some people think it is impossible to solve the problem,however,from my opinion,if we find out the reason and take effective measures the environment can be better.
If we trace the cause for haze weather,the main points are as follows,first,our countrys air quality standards are rather lax and evaluation factors are limited,so you will see that current air appraisal system has defects. Second,some people just go for economic interests instead of turning out products according to relevant law and regulations. They tend to use obsolete equipment in which they are more likely to emit a great deal of wasted air. Third,across our society,the awareness of protecting the environment has not built up so that people havent formed a habit of using green product and saving energy as much as possible. If we dont take action to show respect to the environment, we will have to face an increasingly awful situation.
Therefore, effective measures should be taken and laws passed to conserve the environment. In my opinion, to protect the environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, people should be educated to recognize the importance of the problems, to use modern methods of birth control, to conserve our natural resources and recycle our products. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the policy of population into practice, because more people mean more pollution. Finally,laws concerning environmental protection should be put into effect and enforce strictly just as our government has been doing. To sum up,if we work together to take out such measures,our environment will get better and better and haze weather will vanish completely.
篇16:英语保护动物初一
全文共 780 字
+ 加入清单Earths biological diversity is being fast decline of many species facing extinction.Threat to the survival of wild animals and plants is a major factor in habitat loss, business development, and wild animals and plants and their products in international trade.Resources are limited, it is necessary for the endangered species, to propose specific measures of protection level.We can formulate the corresponding endangered species laws, application to establish nature reserves, endangered species breeding centers, means of conservation biology, endangered species, the implementation of in situ conservation and ex situ conservation.At the same time, we must restrict international trade in Endangered Species of Wild Fauna and Flora, to make laws to protect endangered species。
篇17:保护环境的小学英语
全文共 1217 字
+ 加入清单Remember last years summer vacation, my father and I went for a walk EHu edge, a way, Im kind of shouted thirsty, so my father on the side of the road store bought me a Popsicle. I ate and go, soon finished eating, carelessly threw the ice sticks into EHu. Dad saw, reminded me immediately; "Coco, cant litter oh! If everyone like you to throw garbage in the lake, the beautiful EHu lake becomes waste." Im ashamed of say: "know, next time I must not litter." Dad smiled and stroked my head and said: "the earth is our home, we should protect it, cherish it, let the sky bluer, the water cleaner, the grass is greener." I naughty to say: "oh, that is, everybody has said, the city is my home, clean environment depends on everybody. I understand." From then on, I no longer throw garbage.
I want to take care of the environment is closely related to everyone, so lets start from everyone!
今天,我们读了很多关于保护环境的小短文。我想起曾经在我身边发生的事情。
记得是去年的暑假,我和爸爸一起去鹅湖边散步,走了一段路,我就一个劲的喊口渴,于是,爸爸就在路边的小店给我买了根冰棍。我边吃边走,一会儿就吃完了,随手把冰棍棒往鹅湖里一扔。爸爸看见了,马上提醒我说;“可可,不能乱扔垃圾噢!如果每个人都像你一样往湖里扔垃圾,这美丽的鹅湖不就变成了垃圾湖了。”我羞愧的说:“知道了,我下次一定不乱扔垃圾。”爸爸微笑着抚摸我的头说:“地球也是我们的家,我们应该保护它,爱护它,让天更蓝,水更清,草更绿。”我调皮的说:“噢,那就是大家一直说的,城市是我家,环境清洁靠大家。我明白了。”让从那以后,我再也不乱扔垃圾了。
我想爱护环境与每个人息息相关,所以要从每个人做起!
篇18:如何保护环境英语词
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+ 加入清单Global warming in the Antarctic glaciers melt faster, sea level will rise rapidly, life on earth will have ones head above water. I told grandpa, this is too much carbon emissions. When the Spring Festival, we do not have as they often buy a lot of fireworks, fireworks set off once the only in the New Years eve, can rise to exult beaming atmosphere is ok, otherwise the carbon dioxide is really too much, families, cumulative emissions are impressive. I appeal through the Internet, the farmers dont in the wheat straw burning, after the autumn harvest of freshwater and sell special corporations to finish molding fuel, can not only generate economic benefits, can save the environmental protection, protect the earth.
全球气候变暖,南极的冰川消融的速度在加快,海平面将急速抬升,地球上的生物将有灭顶之灾。我告诉爷爷,这都是碳过多排放惹的祸。春节时候,我们没有像往年买上许多烟花燃放,只在除夕燃放过一次鞭炮,能起到欢腾喜气的气氛就可以了,否则产生的二氧化碳实在是太多,家家户户累积起来,排放量实在惊人。我通过互联网发出呼吁,农民秋收后不要在把麦秸集中焚烧了,可以变废为宝,卖给专门公司制作成成型的燃料,既能产生经济效益,有能节约环保,保护地球。
篇19:熊猫英语作文
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+ 加入清单I like carefree cute polar bears, light and lively kitten... But my favorite clumsy panda.
I was seven years old, I went with mother, cousin, cousin and aunt seven stars play in the park, we saw a lion, will go to the panda house to see the giant panda.
The giant panda to come out from the room! It was the first time in my life, I see the giant panda, the giant pandas eyes round, near the eyes around in the dark, dark circles, like the giant panda "black rim of the eye".
Mother told me that the giant panda is one of the worlds most precious animals, mainly distributed in Chinas sichuan, gansu and shaanxi province of individual mountains region, quantity is very rare, belongs to the national first class protected animals, known as the "national treasure".
I saw the giant panda in the bamboo forest next to "home" walk a circle, and then picked up a piece of bamboo chew up and that the appearance of the bamboo really funny.
Although some people say that the giant panda fur is white, but after I saw the giant panda, found that pandas are very yellow fur, he rolled soil too much should be!
Giant pandas very clumsy, but it is very lovely, beloved, I like clumsy panda!
我喜欢悠然可爱的北极熊,轻巧活泼的小猫……但我最喜欢的笨拙大熊猫。
我在七岁那年,我跟着妈妈、表姐、表弟和舅妈去七星公园玩,我们看了狮子表演之后,就去大熊猫馆看大熊猫。
大熊猫从屋子里出来了!那是我平生第一次看到大熊猫,大熊猫的眼睛圆圆的,眼睛旁围着黑黑的圈,像是大熊猫的“黑眼圈”。
妈妈告诉我大熊猫是世界上最珍贵的动物之一,主要分布在我国四川,甘肃,陕西省的个别崇山峻岭地区,数量十分稀少,属于国家一类保护动物,被称为“国宝”。
我看见大熊猫在“家”旁的竹子林走了一圈,然后拿起一根竹子啃起来,那吃竹子的样子真好笑。
虽然有人说大熊猫皮毛很白,但是我看了大熊猫后,发现大熊猫的皮毛非常的黄,应该是他滚泥土太多了吧!
大熊猫虽然非常笨拙,但是它非常可爱,受人喜爱,我喜欢笨拙的大熊猫!
篇20:关于功夫熊猫英语作文中英对照
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+ 加入清单Everyone should know the pandas, but who have seen the Chinese kung fu panda?
电影《功夫熊猫》讲述的就是一只会功夫的熊猫。电影中的主角――熊猫阿宝,对中国功夫是非常喜爱。他的爸爸是村子里一个名气很大的面店老板,他的爸爸一直希望阿宝能继承祖辈传承下来的这家面店,可阿宝不甘心当面店老板,他想实现自己心中的梦想――学中国功夫,他连做梦都会梦到在练功夫。
The movie "Kung Fu Panda" is the story of a Kung Fu panda. The main character in the film -- the Panda Po, the Chinese Kung Fu is very fond of. His father is a village, a noodle shop owner great fame, his father always wanted Po can inherit this noodle shop ancestors passed down, but Po not reconciled to the face shop owner, he wants to realize his dream -- to the hearts of his learning kung fu, he even dream about practicing kung fu.
上天给了阿宝好机会。一天,阿宝听说村子里要竞选“神龙大侠”,选中的人将被派去除掉危害群众的残豹,保卫村子。阿宝为了观看比赛,想方设法,坐了一把“飞天椅子”飞了进去。出乎意料的是――他竞被选为“神龙大侠”。功夫大师不相信阿宝能练好中国功夫,把他赶走了好多次,可是阿宝坚持不懈,一次次地到翡翠宫恳求大师。功夫不负有心人,大师终于被阿宝的诚心打动,决定教阿宝功夫,可是怎么教呢?大师看着笨拙的阿宝苦恼起来。一天,大师突然发现阿宝在厨房里偷吃东西时,无意识中做了许多高难度动作,于是功夫大师便用吃的方法引导阿宝学功夫。阿宝经过千辛万苦的刻苦学习,功夫终于学成了,最终阿宝打败了残豹,拯救了村子。
God has given each opportunity. One day, Paul heard the village to run for the "Dragon Warrior", selected will be sent to remove residual leopard harm to people, to defend the village. A Bao to watch the game, try to sit a "flying chair" fly in. Surprisingly -- his contest was selected as "the Dragon warrior". Kung Fu Master dont believe Po can practice good Chinese Kung Fu, get rid of him many times, but Po, perseverance, time and time again to the jade palace begged the master. Hard work pays off, the master was finally A Bao sincerity moved, decided to teach A Bao Kung Fu, but how to teach? Everyone looked at Po awkwardly to chagrin. One day, the master suddenly found Po steal things in the kitchen, the unconscious has done a lot of difficult moves, so a kung fu master will eat methods to guide Po Kung fu. A Bao painstakingly study assiduously, finally learn kung fu, A Bao finally defeated the residual leopard, save the village.
阿宝在自身条件不利于学功夫的障碍下,坚持自己的梦想,不向困难低头的精神,令我非常敬佩!想想自己在学习中、生活中遇到的困难与阿宝比起来差远了,我要向阿宝一样,坚持梦想,做一个不向困难低头的人。
A Bao is not conducive to learn kung fu obstacles in his condition, hold on to your dream, do not bow to difficulties of the spirit, that I really admire! Think about the difficulties and Po himself encountered in learning and life of the far worse than up, I would like to treasure, insist on your dream, do not a man to bow before difficulties.