四年级期末考试英语作文：家庭family通用20篇

一天，小狗、小猫、小兔、小猴和小猪五只小动物准备在下午五点半的时候，去百树花园野餐。

到了下午五点，小猪提前来到了百树花园。小猪想：可不能让其他小动物吃我的东西。想到这儿，小猪立刻把东西藏了起来。过了一会儿，小狗和其他小动物们来了，看见小猪在树桩上一坐，以为它没带东西吃。小狗问：“小猪，你没带吃的吗？”小猪听了，一句话也不说。这时，热心的小兔给了小猪一块面包，小狗给小猪一杯茶，小猫给小猪一个饼干，小猴给小猪……

小猪看了很感动，就立刻把自己的东西拿了出来，分给大家吃。大家都笑了，只有小猪低下了头。

小兔安慰小猪说：“没事，我们原谅你了。”小猪问：“真的吗？”小动物们都点了点头，小猪一下蹦了起来。

就这样，小猪、小狗、小兔、小猫和小猴都过了开心、难忘的一天。

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My family lives in Taiwan, but my father doesnt. He lives in China. My family name is Jian. I have one brother and one sister. My name is Jeff. My brothers name is Art. My sisters name is Sophia. My fathers name is Jian Zong-he and my mothers name is Jenny. I like to watch TV and play PC games. My brother likes them, too. My father and my mother both like to watch TV. My brother and I are both junior high school students. My father is a businessman. My mother is a businesswoman. I like my family very much.

英语考试……应该跟原先一样不是很难吧。

终于开始了。我舒了一口气。写着笔试的内容，觉得这次还是挺简单的，全部都是课文里的内容，没有太多的课外内容。写到一大半后，我看到了“写作”这个题目。我背的东西有用了。可是，上面只是要按照一个短文来仿写。唉，看来是白用那么长的时间来背了。

写完笔试后，我检查了好几遍。因为我的语文数学都没考好，这次一定要细心了。

老师终于来给我们念听力了。我的心里乱成了一锅粥。这个单词是什么意思?算了，就填“B”吧。最后一个听力，我把自己的心揪了起来。这是老师说的最重点的一个题，这题要是错了，那这分数……

终于考完了!同学们都舒了一口气。我们在对答案。“这题应该是A。”“不对，应该是B!”同学们在争辩着。

明天就不用考啦!我们自由啦!同学们高兴地蹦了起来。

当我呆在家中无聊的在抽屉中翻腾时，就在不经意间，找到了三份试卷――那是我本次期末考试的卷子，我拿着它，仔细地读着，我的思绪又回到了考试时。

随着“叮铃铃……”，考试的铃声响了，监考老师抱着厚厚的一摞试卷走进教室，把试卷分发给到同学手中后，便宣布开考。

在把班级，姓名写好之后，就开始做题了，因为学校为了防止学生作弊，特意把我们和三年级的学生混到一起，其实这招挺灵，教室中一点说话的声音都没有，只有此起彼伏的写字时发出的“沙沙”声，，随着题型的变化，那声音一会儿被推向高潮，一会儿又落入低谷。大约五十分钟后，我的试卷上就只剩下作文题了，是让我们写有关“关心”的作文的，我冥思苦想了好半天，总算是写出来了。接下来就该检查了，我从第一题――看拼音，写词语开始查起，一直查到最后面的作文题，足足检查了三遍，才放下心来，可还是由于粗心漏掉了一个错题，扣去了0.5分，还有在作文上由于字写得不好看而丢掉了了2分。所以，我最终只得了97.5分。

在这一次期末考试中，我语文得了97.5分，数学得了96分，英语得了97分，由于粗心大意只取得了第六名的成绩，所以我决定要将粗心这个坏毛病改掉。

期中考刚结束，老师就叫我们进入状态迎接期末。可是层出不穷的新事让我们又喜、又怒、又哀、又乐。第一波就是“（双林）老师”，两个姓林的实习老师。他们一来，可给班主任张老师减负了。两位老师很出色，在这些日子里，若没有他们，不知整个班集体会不会散了。———喜第二波是“跳绳比赛”。这事可给同学们增加了压力。训练加学习，这好像还是劳逸结合哦！但同学们都有点气愤，只因为比赛成绩不太好，况且花了大工夫。———怒第三波是最令人头疼的值周工作。早起晚归，扫地、拖地、检查卫生……一周下来把人累得腰都酸了。大家怎么不会觉得不好受呢？临近期末，竟还有这等大事！———哀这一波，简直是要考验我们嘛！虽然大家都气愤。但是这次是学校请我们班举行一次“诚信”班会。还说要来观看。为了本班的形象，我们只好硬着头皮精心排练起来。班会那天，大家都好像把愤怒，抛到河外星系上去了一样，有的同学笑个不停，有的同学还捧腹大笑，反正大家开心极了。是呀，同学们用乐观的心态面对，还挺好的！———乐不觉中，欢送走了实习老师。“活动”也停止了脚步。大家都在欢喜时，期末考已经逼近了，我们又开始了紧张的冲刺。嗨，我们班的新事可真多啊！

Dear Manager,

I’m one of the candidates who have applied for the internship in your company.

I’m glad to have received your offer.

Here I’d like to express my gratitude to you and your company sincerely.

As far as I am concerned, the offer is far more than a simplex internship opportunity.

It’s particularly meaningful to me in the following aspects.

First of all, after years of study I can finally put my theoretical knowledge into practice.

By doing so, I feel my individual values will be fully embodied.

Secondly, during my internship period, I’ll meet many well-experienced colleagues.

And they can teach me valuable experience which can’t be acquired from textbooks.

Thirdly, it goes without saying that this internship experience will benefit my future job-hunting, as many recruiters are seeking for experienced employees.

All in all, I will cherish this precious internship opportunity and spare no efforts tocontribute my humble strength to the company.

Please accept my sincerest appreciation for your offer and best wishes for your company.

I’ll prove my worth through hard work.

Yours faithfully，Mike

本次英语命题是八年级备课组命题，以考查基础知识为主，在此基础上考查学生综合运用语言的能力。命题材料贴近学生生活，难度适中。期中听力题，短文首字母填空和书面表达失分较多。我所教两个班级在均分，及格率和优秀率上都比较接近，均分60分左右，八(1)班19个及格、高分9个，八(2)班21个及格、11个高分。

从本次考试所反映的现状来看，今后的教学中应注意：

1、加强听力训练，营造语言环境。课堂上一定要加强对学生的听力训练，坚持用英语组织教学，尽可能利用多种教学资源让学生接触地道的语音、语调，多听英、美人士的录音材料。

2、狠抓基础知识，加强写作训练。书面表达能客观地反映学生英语基础知识掌握情况，并且一直是学生的薄弱环节。

3、继续注重英语阅读教学。阅读理解在我们的各种测试中所占分值越来越大，而且选材也更趋广泛化。因此课堂教学中要侧重“篇章”，强调“含义”，将语篇教学贯穿于课文教学和阅读理解教学中，利用语篇教学扩大学生词汇量，增强语感，丰富文化知识，提高学生分析问题和解决问题的能力。

4、注重兴趣培养，慎防两极分化。从试卷分析中可以看出，两个班级都不同程度地出现了令人担忧的“两极分化”现象。一定要注意激发、培养学生的学习兴趣，关注学生的情感，营造宽松，民主、和谐的教学氛围，保护每个学生的自尊心和学习英语的积极性。只有这样，掉队的学生才会减少，也才可能大面积提高均分。

My name is Helen. I’m eleven years old.

There are three people in my family: my mother , my father and I.

We live in Wenzhou. It is a beautiful city.

My mother is very beautiful. She has long hair , two big eyes , a small nose and a small mouth.

My father is a cook. He is also very busy . He often comes home late. He likes playing football , sometimes he plays with me.

I am a good student. I like English , Math and Computer. I am good at playing the piano , My favorite pet is dogs. I like eating meat. So , I am a little fat. I love my family. We’re all very happy.

[我的家庭的英语作文

寒假即将开始了，但是在曙光前的黎明时最黑暗的，期末考试这关还要先过。期末考试的试卷也已经发下来了，语文试卷我不是很满意，在这里我给语文考试做一个总结。

在课内文言文阅读中，我将诗所描写的意境写错了，只写了一个似像非像的答案。我在以后的文言文阅读中就一定要注意这种题目，要全篇通读再下结论。

课内现代文阅读考了第一单元的内容，我没有复习到，但在考试时也没仔细读课文，而是凭记忆做题，死记硬背的结果是扣了三分。我仔细分析了这几道错题，其实只要我把文章多读几遍就可以找出答案。这也暴露出了我学习语文吃力的结症所在——死记硬背。这使我对文章的理解能力下降，再做其他题就总出错。

所以以后我在上课时要仔细听老师怎样分析课文，并学习阅读答题格式。将讲学稿理解透彻，并保证预习质量高。这样才能巩固学习。

课外现代文阅读中，我扣了四分，都是应为没将题意和文章理解透彻。所以要更加注意对文章的理解。

说到作文，他为我整整扣了八分，我也发现自己写作文总是抓不到主要的内容，“形散神散”，所以每次都得不了高分。我的文章语言也过于空洞无彩。所以我要在平时多积累多阅读，将文章内容更加充实，调理更加明确，中心更加突出。这样才能使我的作文水平提高。

纵览我的试卷，还是有有待提高的地方，所以我会尽力做到以上要求，以求语文成绩的提高。

20xx年07月07日 星期四 天气：晴

今天晚上，我去上菁华浩扬英语课时，徐老师让我们分成两组举行了一场对抗赛。首先她让我们给自己的队伍起一个好听的名字，于是在叽叽喳喳的叫嚷中我们选中了“雏鹰队”这个名字，而对手却选择了“猛虎队”来做他们的队名。

竞赛开始了，老师在我们两个队各挑了一个人，让他们到黑板前写单词，“斗”了几个回合后，我们组领先了两分，对方恼羞成怒，拼命想把比分给扳回来。可是在读单词环节中他们又输惨了，结果现在我们已经领先四分了。到最后一个抢答的环节了，老师说：“这个项目是考验你们的反应能力的，猛虎队还有扳回比分的机会，要加油呀！”猛虎队员们一个个跃跃欲试，摩拳擦掌，看起来要和我们拼一个你死我活，鱼死网破了。你看在比赛中他们都反应神速，你争我抢的回答问题，可我们的队员也不是好惹得，个个争的面红耳赤，最后徐老师统计比分，我们“雏鹰队”以26：17这样悬殊的差距赢得了比赛。徐老师说：“下次你们猛虎队要加油啊！”

下课了，我们的队员还嘲笑地说：“你们地上跑的还是不如我们天上飞的吧，哈哈哈！”

This summer holiday, I had travelled to Hong Kong with many other students. We went to Hong Kong by plane. Hong Kong is very small, but there are many people living there.

In Hong Kong, all of the buildings are very tall. There are lots of shops there and you can go shopping until about 11:00 at night. In Hong Kong, things are very expensive, so we only bought a few souvenirs.

We went to lots of places, such as the Avenue of Stars and Ocean Park. I like Ocean Park best. The park is very big. Sitting in the cable car, you can see two hills, lots of different flowers and the sea. Some students were afraid of sitting in the cable car!

We stayed in the Shu Ren College. There are many big trees around it. We had meals in the restaurants, but I didnt like the food.

Hong Kong is very beautiful. I like Hong Kong and I hope to go there again some day.

英语期中考试优秀作文：Hw t sta health（4篇）

If u want t sta health,u shuld eat re fruit and vegetables.If u want t eep health,u shuldnt eat t uch fried fd.We ust chage ur bad habits.And u shuld have enugh exercise ever da.I thin in this wa,we can eep health.

——孙xx

Health is ver iprtant t us.We shuld be health.If u want t be health,u shuld have enugh exercise,eat health fd and have a gd tietable.I used t watch a lt f TV ever da.But nw I dnt wacth uch TV an lnger.I exercise regularl.S,thats wh I ver health.

——王xx

Ever peple want t eep healeh.But a lt f peple are unhealth because the dnt have a gd diet and the dnt have enugh sleep.If u want t sta health,u shuld nt eat t uch fried fd.u shuld eat se vegetables instead.And u shuld g t bed earl and get up earl.The st iprtant ting is t exercise rugularl.But I dnt have enugh exercise,s I shuld exercise ever da.In this wa,I can sta health.

——毛xx

We shuld sta health.Staing health is iprtant.But hw can we sta health?If we want t sta health,we shuld eat a lt f fruit and vegetables.If we want t sta health,we shuld drin enugh water ever da.If we want t sta health,dnt frget exercise.We shuld exercise regularl ever da.In fact,we can sta health in an different was.Fruit,vegetables,water and enugh exercise are useful t help us t sta health.We als shuld have gd habits.I used t eat a lt f sweets.But nw I dnt eat t an sweets an lnger.Nw I health and teeth are health,t.S if u have bad habits,u shuld change bad habits quicl.If u want t sta health,it will be iprtant t change bad habits.Lets sta health,shall we?

——朱xx

I want to be a model student. What shall I do?

I should be polite. I should study hard. I should capful and helpful. I should walk in the corridors. I should throw rubbish in the bin. I should be quiet in the library. I shouldn’t walk and run on the grass. I shouldn’t throw rubbish on the floor. I shouldn’t run in the corridors. I shouldn’t fight. I shouldn’t be noisy in the library.

在我们这个年纪，过年都很快乐，但是过年有一大难关，那就是要面临一只“恶魔”的攻击，这只“恶魔”就是烧脑的期末考试。

“临阵磨枪，不快也光。”在期末考试之前有一个疯狂的复习过程，所有人都在复习、复习、再复习。大家上课都很自觉，如临大敌，没有一个捣乱的，紧张的气氛笼罩着整个教室。就连我们班平时的“捣乱皇上”孟祥睿都老老实实在看语文书。

是什么让同学们都这么认真复习呢？是过年，考得不好，过年都是闷闷不乐的。爸爸妈妈脸上见不到一丝笑容，去拜年最怕亲戚问成绩，一说全家跟着败兴。自己哪都不乐意去，新年礼物不敢提，压岁钱也不敢要，这种超级精神折磨谁受得了呀！

现在这只“恶魔”的脚步越来越近，学校一次又一次的模拟测试，同学们都奋力拼搏，得分高的同学，信心倍增，得分低的同学，信心被击毁，可是老师还是在不断鼓励我们，千万不要失去信心，要坚持到底。

我希望每个同学都能打败“恶魔”，攀上学习的高峰，过上一个快乐的新年！

学校通过组织一个圣诞节英语派对，丰富同学们的课余生活，培养学生的学习兴趣和热情，增加小朋友们对于英语的兴趣，让所有小朋友都能广泛参与。英语圣诞晚会，还能激发学生在我们学校学习英语，帮助学生提高综合素质评价，在同一时间，提高学生学习英语的能力，为以后学习和竞争中取得良好的优势。

今天中午吃完饭后，妈妈送我来到了我们英语学校举行的年度圣诞节晚会。

大约13：30的时候，我们的晚会正式开始了，我们大家都非常高兴。首先，我们观看了精彩的节目：有打架子鼓的，有弹吉他的，有跳拉丁舞的，还有打双节棍的，等等等等，真是精彩绝伦，赏心悦目啊!

看完精彩的节目之后，我们进行了三等奖的抽签活动之中。悲哀，我不是那30个当中幸运儿的其一，但是老师说，还有一等奖和二等奖。

我们休息了片刻，看了看同学变得小戏法之后，我们打二等奖抽签活动又开始了。果然，好心不负有心人，我是10名二等奖中的得主，获得了一个毛绒玩具。这时的我正在想，那丰富多彩的一等奖又会花落谁家呢?

接下来，我被邀请上台做了游戏。这个游戏的名字叫做家长互换。游戏规则：10位孩子站在舞台上，后面是自己的家长。然后，我们10位孩子蒙上眼睛，家长互相移动。1分钟之后，必须找到自己的家长。幸好妈妈有明显的标志物，手里拿着手机。

所有活动结束后，我们每个人都领了学习大礼包。里面有各种各样的学习文具，我们都异常的欢喜。

祝大家圣诞节节日快乐!

每位同学都有一个家，家里都有爸爸妈妈。可我的家里不同，我也有爸爸妈妈，带我家里还有“可爱的同学们”。

原来呀，我的家庭是班级呀！有的同学不以为然，因为他们认为班级只是学习的地方，老师整天布置多多的作业，做不完就批评。但是，我可不这么认为，因为我有一群“可爱的同学”。这群同学们跟我一起做作业，再多的作业也在欢声笑语中度过的。考试考砸了怎么办？没关系，一个成绩不好的就会走过来，装模装样的说：“苍天啊，大地啊，为什么我努力复习，可还考得这么差！”你就会立刻破涕为笑的。做事不成功怎么办？没关系，有好多同学“陪”着呢！

有了这样一个大家庭，再沉默的你，也会活泼吧！这样一个大家庭，谁不羡慕？

[我有一个大家庭四年级作文200字

我-----性格开朗，思维敏捷，平时学习成绩还算优秀，学校里的课程和作业我感觉都很简单，写起作业也得心应手。但每次父母检查时总会出现或多或少的错误，因此而经常受到妈妈的批评，我也暗下决心下次一定改正。

可一到考试，我就紧张，发挥不好，经常因为马虎而丢分，考试成绩平平，总是让老师和爸妈失望。其实，我很着急，同时也很羡慕我的好友王文龙。他非常细心，踏实，成绩一向很稳定。每次考试都考得不错，我因该学习他的优点-----踏实，认真好学。

就拿这次考试来说吧，卷子刚发下来，我一看就觉得很简单，平时都练过，考满分肯定没问题。可试卷发下来了我傻眼了。因为粗心数学观察图形把左看成右，语文基础字写错，检查时一扫而过，没发现错误，卷子发下来才后悔不已，马虎又丢分了;其次我平时学得不扎实，不灵活，不会举一反三，又有点骄傲，这就是我失败的原因。妈妈看到了卷子后十分生气，陈老师在一边不停地鼓励我，让我在这个寒假好好复习，采取一定的方法改正粗心的习惯。我采取的具体方法是：第一：若因粗心写错一道题罚做十道题。第二：若连续一周没有错误则免做部分课外作业。

我一定要吸取此次考试的经验教训，坚持执行我的纠正方法，力争在这个假期使我的学习有一个大的进步，为下学期取得好成绩作出努力。 我-----性格开朗，思维敏捷，平时学习成绩还算优秀，学校里的课程和作业我感觉都很简单，写起作业也得心应手。但每次父母检查时总会出现或多或少的错误，因此而经常受到妈妈的批评，我也暗下决心下次一定改正。

可一到考试，我就紧张，发挥不好，经常因为马虎而丢分，考试成绩平平，总是让老师和爸妈失望。其实，我很着急，同时也很羡慕我的好友王文龙。他非常细心，踏实，成绩一向很稳定。每次考试都考得不错，我因该学习他的优点-----踏实，认真好学。

就拿这次考试来说吧，卷子刚发下来，我一看就觉得很简单，平时都练过，考满分肯定没问题。可试卷发下来了我傻眼了。因为粗心数学观察图形把左看成右，语文基础字写错，检查时一扫而过，没发现错误，卷子发下来才后悔不已，马虎又丢分了;其次我平时学得不扎实，不灵活，不会举一反三，又有点骄傲，这就是我失败的原因。妈妈看到了卷子后十分生气，陈老师在一边不停地鼓励我，让我在这个寒假好好复习，采取一定的方法改正粗心的习惯。我采取的具体方法是：第一：若因粗心写错一道题罚做十道题。第二：若连续一周没有错误则免做部分课外作业。

我一定要吸取此次考试的经验教训，坚持执行我的纠正方法，力争在这个假期使我的学习有一个大的进步，为下学期取得好成绩作出努力。

我心中的一块大石头总算落地了。我心里既高兴又不塌实。我高兴是因为期末考试终于考完了。我心里不塌实是因为我生怕期末考试考的不好！

期末考试在15号就会正式结束了，可以好好玩一场的，但现在还是提心吊胆，无论如何也落不下来了。回想到其实在数学上，我是非常粗心的。还有找规律我有时也找不出，希望老师多多指导。

提起英语，我还是挺高兴的，每一题我都仔仔细细的检查过了，只不过有一些是比较难，那要看自己课外知识了。

虽说语文上难过了些，但里面也渗透着一种满足与高兴，我抱有这样的心理，可别说我骄傲呀。

总体上来说，我已经进步了，因为我努力了，赴全力了，这少不了老师的教导，父母的关心，当然更少不了自身的努力。

深信，在下一学期，我会有更大的进步。在这里，我祝自己在以后的每一天开开心心，努力向上。如果太阳是我的目标，那我会踮起脚尖，因为只有这样，才能更靠近阳光，才能向着目标一步一步的进发！

Environment Protection

Nowadays, peoples life has changed a lot with the development of modern technology and economy, which has put lots of negative effects on the environment.

Why this? Because, firstly, some factories are pouring wastes into rivers, lakes, seas and so forth; secondly, because of human activities, agreat number of plants and animals are losing their lives; thirdly, using modern machines and chemicals is bad for the environment. Besides these, there are a lot of human activities which have done or are doing harm to our surroundings.

For this, I think, first, our government should make drastic measures to regulate human activities; second, we human beings should take pains-taking work to stop ourselves destroying the environment and try our best to protect our living space more.

[高一英语期末考试作文

记叙文是记人叙事的文章，它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个" W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一个" H "( how )。记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写"，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。

一、记叙文的特点

1. 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过"我"来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。如：

The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.

用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受"我"活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：

Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.

2. 动词的时态

在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3. 叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。

4. 叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.

The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.

What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5. 叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：

I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.

这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把"悬念"给冲淡了。可作如下调整：

I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "Its you." I said, quite released.

二、写好记叙文的基本要领

1. 头绪分明，脉络清楚

写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个" W "和一个" H "有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些" W "和" H "，但动笔之前，围绕五个" W "和" H "进行构思是必不可少的。

2. 突出中心，详略得当

在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.

I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors - they are hungry also!"

3. 用活语言，准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文：

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didnt take it. She served them with tea but they left.

修改后：

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.

"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.

"Dont worry, well send you home."

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boys house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Choosing an Occupation. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.职业的选择很重要

2. 如何明智的选择自己的职业

3. 你的职业选择。

作文范文

Every individual faces the problem of choosing an occupation after graduating from university, which is of great importance in ones whole life. An appropriate occupation makes a man work with vigor and zest. Besides, it is beneficial for both the individual and the country。

To make an advisable choice, a graduate should take into account at least two aspects, namely, individual interest and the demand of the society. Only when the two aspects are connected, can a man show his ability and talent to the best advantage. If the two factors conflict, the former, in most cases, should give way to the latter, for it is interests that stimulate ones vigor and potentials。

In regard to my choice in the future, I want to work as an interpreter. I am keen on learning foreign languages, English in particular. Moreover, in the contemporary society, international exchange in economy and culture has been growing significantly. However, competent interpreters are far from enough. So I am determined to be a qualified interpreter。

[大学英语四级考试预测作文职业选择