中考英语高分作文句式（实用20篇）

Mrs Wang decided to make a trip to Beijing.When she told her son about her decision,he was so overjoyed that he jumped up.They began to pack their luggage.When the day came,the son became worried,for noboday would take care of his flowers.They would die if they were not watered.Suddenly a good idea came to his mind. "Mum",he said to his mother, "we can use a piece of cloth to take care of the flowers". He showed her mother what he meant by putting one end of the cloth into the basin, full of water,and the other end into the flower pot.

Three days later,when they came back from Beijing, the flowers were still alive and even started to bloom.

In our accommodations, many students have computers. Also we can see in the electronic reading room and the cybercafés, rows of students sit in front of the monitors. Computers play an important role in our everyday life.

We use computers to cope with files and photos etc. And the internet is just a large database and we can get on the internet to search for anything we need through the computers. We can keep in touch with the others with the emails, msn and QQ etc. Enjoying ourselves in music, games and movies can loosen us after nervous classes.

Each coin has two sides. Disadvantages of the computers can also do harm to us. Most of us students use the computers more to play games and chat with strangers than searching for useful information. That’s a waste of time. There is so much rubbish on the net, which are some medium messages about crime or sex. It does harm to our minds.

From all above, we should learn to use computers in our own right ways. The computers doesn’t have no responsibility, it depends on the way we use them.

1 The Chinese government pays great attention to environmental problems arising from China‘s population growth and economic development.

中国政府非常重视因人口增长和经济发展而出现的环境问题。

2 While developing its economy， China will handle properly the relationship among the population， natural resources and the environment.

中国在发展经济的同时，将处理好与人口、资源和环境的关系。

3 China relies on improving supervision， management and technological progress to promote environmental protection.

中国依靠强化监督管理和技术进步手段推动环境保护事业发展。

(注意：汉译英时的逻辑顺序)

4 Land， arable land in particular， should be used reasonably and economically. Strong measures will be taken to strengthen the building of the urban environmental infrastructure， regulate industrial structure and lay-out， shun the unpromising way of “pollution first， treatment afterwards”， and strengthen prevention and control of the pollution in major river valleys to ensure the security of the drinking water of the inhabitants.

合理和节约利用土地尤其是耕地资源，加强城市环境基础设施建设，规划产业结构和布局，避免“先污染后治理”的老路。加强流域污染防治，保证居民饮水安全。

(注意：这个句子比较长，首先要注意不要漏翻，再者要注意一些专有名词的译法，不要出现逻辑错误)

5 Measures should be taken to stop predatory development， and return to lakes， forests and grasslands what has been taken from them， vigorously plant trees and grass， treat soil erosion， prevent and control desertification， establish ecological agriculture， strengthen the protection of natural resources such as arable land， water， forest， grassland and biological species， and the conservation of bio-diversity.

改变掠夺性经营开发方式，有计划地退耕还湖、还林、还草，大力开展植树造林，治理水土流失，防止沙漠化，建立生态农业，加强耕地、水源、森林、草场、物种等自然资源和生物多样性保护。

(注意：这个句子比较长，要注意专业名词的翻法)

6 To economize on water， land， power， raw materials， grains and other resources.

节水、节地、节能、节材、节粮以及节约其他各种资源。

7 To endeavor to obtain high socio-economic benefits and a well-preserved environment with less investment and less consumption of resources.

努力做到投资少、消耗资源少，而经济社会效益高、环境保护好。

1.as…as 和……一样

中间必须用形容词或副词原级。例如：

This classroom is as big as that one. 这间教室和那间一样大。He runs as fast as Tom. 他和汤姆跑的一样快。

否定结构：not as/so…as,“不如……,和……不一样”。上面的两个句子可分别改为：

This classroom is not as/so large as that one。

He doesn’t run as/so fast as Tom。

练习：我的书包和你的一样好。 他的英语说的和你一样好。

2. as soon as 一……就……

用来引导时间状语从句。若主句是一般将来时，从句要用一般现在时。例如：

I’ll tell him the plan as soon as I see him. 我一看到他就告诉他这个计划。

He’ll go home as soon as he finishes his work. 他一完成工作就回家。

3. be busy/enjoy/hate/go on/finish doing sth. 忙于/喜欢/讨厌/继续/完成做某事

在enjoy, finish, hate, go on, be busy等词语后，一般用动词-ing形式作宾语。例如：

Lin Tao is busy making a model plane. 林涛忙着做飞机模型。

My mother enjoys taking a walk after supper. 我妈妈喜欢晚饭后散步。

I hate watching Channel Five. 我讨厌看五频道。

When someone asked him to have a rest, he just went on working. 当有人让他休息一会儿时，他仍继续工作。

I have finished writing the story. 我已经写完了故事。

4. fill…with用……装满， be filled with 充满了……, be full of 充满了

①be filled with 说明由外界事物造成的此种状态，表示被动。例如：

The box is filled with food. 盒子里装满了食物。

②be full of说明主语处于的状态。此外，还可表示程度，意为“非常”。例如：

The patient’s room is full of flowers. 那个病人的房间摆满了花。

The young man is full of pride. 那个年轻人非常骄傲。

③这两种结构还可以相互改写。例如：

I fill the box with food. The box is full of food。

5. be good/bad for 有利于/有害于…… 此句型是：be+adj.+for+n。结构。例如：

Doing morning exercises is good for your health。做早操对你的健康有益。

Always playing computer games is bad for your study. 总玩电脑游戏对你的学习不利。

6. be used to(doing) sth. 习惯于……

后必须接名词或动名词，可用于现在、过去、将来的多种时态。be 可用get,become来代替。 例如：He is used to life in the country。(He is used to living in the country。)他习惯于乡村生活。

He will get used to getting up early. 他将会习惯于早起。

注意：be used to do 的意思是“被用来做……”。例如：Wood is used to make paper。木材被用来造纸。

7. both…and…两者都…… 用来连接两个并列成分;当连接两个并列主语时，其后谓语动词用复数。

例如： Both the students and the teachers will go to the History Museum tomorrow。不论老师还是学生明天都会去历史博物馆。

8. can’t help doing sth. 禁不住做某事 help在此的意思是“抑制，忍住”，其后接动词-ing形式。例如：

His joke is too funny. We can’t help laughing. 他的笑话太有趣了，我们禁不止笑了起来。

听到这个坏消息，她禁不住哭了起来。

9. sth. costs sb. some money 某物花费某人多少钱

此句型的主语是物。cost一词带的是双宾语，它的过去式、过去分词和原型一样。

This book cost me five yuan. 这本书花了我五元钱。

10. either…or… 不是……就是……,或者……或者……

用来连接两个并列成分，当连接并列主语时，谓语动词与邻近的主语保持一致。

You may either stay here or go home. 你可以呆在这儿，也可以回家。

Either she or I am right. = Either I or she is right. 不是她对就是我对。

要么你去要么他必须去。 Either you or he to go。

11. enough (for sb。) to do sth. 足够……做……

在此结构中，for用来引出不定式的逻辑主语。例如：

The ice isn’t thick enough for you to walk on. 这冰还没有厚到你可以在上面走的程度。

他年龄做够大，可以自己照顾自己了。

12. feel like doing sth. 想要做……

此处like为介词，后面跟动词-ing形式。此句型与would like to do sth。同义。例如：

I feel like drinking a cup of milk. 我想喝一杯牛奶。

Do you like taking a walk? 你想不想去散步?

13. feel/find/think it adj./n. to do sth. 认为某事……

在此结构中it为形式宾语，不定式短语作真正的宾语。例如：

I find it very interesting to play football. 我发现踢足球很有趣。

She thinks her duty to help us. 她认为帮助我们是她的职责。

14. get ready for sth./ to do sth。

Get ready for sth。意为“为某事做准备”，get ready to do sth。“准备做某事”例如：

We are getting ready for the meeting. 我们正在为会议做准备。

They were getting ready to have a sports meet at the moment. 他们那时正准备开运动会。

15. get/receive/have a letter from 收到……的来信

相当于hear from 例如： Did you receive a letter from John?你收到约翰的来信了吗?

I got a letter from my brother yesterday. 我昨天收到了我弟弟的一封来信。

16. had better (not) do sth. 最好(别)做某事

had better为情态动词，其后需用动词原形。had better常用缩写，变成’d better，其否定形式是在其后直接加not。例如：We had better go now. = We’d better go now. 我们最好现在走吧。 You’d better take a rest. 你最好休息一下。 You’d better not go out because it is windy. 今天刮风，你最好别出去了。

17. have sth. done 使(某事)完成，使发生 (动作由别人完成)

sth。为宾语，done为过去分词作补语。例如：

We had the machine repaired. 我们请人把机器修好了。

注意区分： We have repaired the machine. 我们(自己)已经修好了机器。

18. help sb. (to) do sth./with sth. 帮助某人(做)某事

其中的to可以省略。例如：I often help my mother with housework。我常常帮助妈妈做家务。

Would you please help me (to) look up these words? 请你帮助我查查这些词好吗?

19. How do you like……? 你认为……怎么样?

与what do you think of …?同义。 例如：How do you like the weather in Beijing?你认为北京的天气怎么样? 你觉得这部新电影如何?

―What do you think of your boss? ―He is strict with us。

20. I don’t think/believe that… 我认我/相信……不……

其中的not是对宾语从句进行否定而不是对主句(否定前移)。that可省略。例如：

I don’t think it will rain. 我认为天不会下雨。

I don’t believe the girl will come. 我相信那女孩不会来了。

我认为他并不聪明。

21. It happens that… 碰巧……

相当于happen to do。例如： It happened that I heard their secret。

可改写为： I happened to hear their secret. 我碰巧听到了他们的秘密。

22. It’s/has been +一段时间+since从句 自从某时起做某件事情已经一段时间了。

该句型中since引导的时间状语从句常用一般过去时。例如：

It’s twenty years since he came here. 他来这里已经20年了。

It has been six years since he married Mary. 他和玛丽结婚已经六年了。

如果since从句中的谓语动词是延续性动词，则表示“从该动作结束起一直到现在的时间”。 例如： It’s three days since he stayed here. 他离开这儿有三天了。

我搬家到郑州已经20多年了。 since I moved to Zhengzhou。

23. It is +adj./n. + for sb. to do sth. 做某事对某人来说……

It是形式主语，真正的主语是不定式to do sth., for sb. 是不定式的逻辑主语。例如：

It’s not easy for us to study English well. 对我们来说学好英语并不容易。

It’s a good idea for us to travel to the south. 去南方旅行对我们来说是个好主意。

对我来说把英语学好非常重要。 to learn English well。

24. It’s + adj. + of sb. to do sth。

It是形式主语，to do sth。是真正的主语， of sb. 是逻辑主语，当表语(即形容词)能对逻辑主语描述时，常用介词of,而不用for。例如：It’s very polite of you to give your seat to old people. 你给老人让座，非常有礼貌。 It’s very kind of you to help me。

你能来车站接我真是太好了。 to pick me up at the station。

25. It seems/appears that… (在某人看来)好像……

此句中的it是主语，that引导的是表语从句。例如：It seems that he is lying. 看样子他好像是在撒谎。 It appears to me that he never smiles。

看样子要下雨了。 it’s going to rain。

26. It is +数词+metres/kilometers long/wide… ……是多少米(公里)长(宽)

用来表示物体的长(宽，高)，如数词大于一，名词要用复数。例如：

It is 20 metres long from this end to that end. 从这端到那端有二十米长。

27.It’s time for sb. to do sth. 是某人干某事的时候了

it是形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式to do sth.。for sb./sth。是逻辑主语。例如：

It’s time for the child to go to bed. 孩子该睡觉了。

比较下面两种结构：① It’s time for + n. 例如： It’s time for school。

②It’s time to do sth. 例如： It’s time to go to school. 我们该学习英语了。

28. It takes sb. some time to do sth. 花费某人多少时间做某事

it是形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式to do sth.。例如：

It takes her fifteen minutes to walk to the bus stop from here. 从这儿走着到公交车站将花费她15分钟。

It took the old man three days to finish the work. 那个老人花了三天时间完成这项工作。

我上学坐公交车要花半个小时。

29. keep (on) doing sth. 一直坚持做某事

keep doing sth。一般用于静态动词。keep on doing sth。意为“继续不停地做某事”，一般用于动态动词，但二者的区别并不是很严格，有时可以互换。例如：

Don’t keep on doing such foolish things. 不要再做这样的傻事了。

He kept sitting there all day. 他整天坐在那里。

30. keep…from doing sth. 阻止，使免于做某事

相当于stop…from doing sth., prevent…from doing sth.。在主动句中，stop和prevent后面的from可以省略，但在被动结构中，from不可以省略。例如：

Please keep the children from swimming in the sea. 请别让孩子到海里游泳。

The big noise outside my room stopped me from doing my homework. 屋外巨大的噪音使我不能做作业。

我会尽最大努力阻止他抽烟。I’ll try my best to 。

31. keep sb. doing sth. 让某人一直做某事

不可和keep sb.from doing sth。结构混淆。

例如：Why do you keep me waiting for a long time? 你为什么让我等了很长时间?

32. make sb. do sth. 使某人干某事

make意为“使”时，其后要有不带to的动词不定式。

例如：He made me work ten hours a day. 他迫使我每天工作10小时。

注意：上句如改为被动语态，则work 前的to不能省略。例如：I was made to work ten hours a day。

上个星期天爸爸让我做了一天的作业。

33. neither…nor… 既不……也不……

当连接两个并列主语时，谓语动词与邻近的主语取得一致(就进一致原则)。例如：

Neither we nor Jack knows him. 我们和杰克都不认识他。

He neither knows nor cares what happened. 他对发生的事情不闻不问。

34. not…until… 直到……才

until后可跟名词或从句，表示时间。例如：He didn’t come until late in the evening。他直到晚上很迟才来。 He didn’t arrive until the game had begun. 直到比赛开始他才来。

昨晚我直到做完作业才睡觉。Last night, I didn’t go to bed 。

35. sb. pays money for sth. 某人花钱买某物

此句型主语是人。I’ve already paid 2,000 yuan for the motor bike. 我已经花了2000元买这辆摩托车。

36. spend time/money on sth./(in)doing sth. 花费(时间、钱)在某事上做某事

其中in可以省略，通常主语为“人”。例如：

I spent five yuan on this book. 我在这本书上花了五元钱。

I spent two hours (in) doing my homework yesterday. 昨晚我花了两个小时做作业。

不要在打电子游戏上花太多时间。Don’t 。

37. so…that… 太……以至于……

用于复合句，that引导的是结果状语从句。so是副词，后面应接形容词或副词，如果接名词，应用such。 例如：The ice is so thin that you can’t walk on it. 冰太薄了，你不能在上面走。 He is such a kind man that we all like him. 他是一个非常好的人，我们都很喜欢他。

38. stop to do sth., stop doing sth。

stop to do sth. 意为“停下来做某事”。stop doing sth。意为“停止做某事”例如：

The teacher is coming. Let’s stop talking. 老师来了，咱们别说话了。

You’re too tired. You’d better stop to have a rest. 你们太累了，最好停下来休息一会儿。

39. Thank you for doing sth. 感激你做了……

For之后除了加动名词doing外，还可以加名词。例如：

Thank you for giving me the present. 谢谢你给我的礼物。

Thank you for your help. (Thank you for helping me。) 谢谢你的帮助。

40. thanks to 多亏……;由于……

thanks后的s不能省略，to是介词。例如：Thanks to my friend Jim, I’ve worked out this problem. 多亏了我朋友吉姆的帮助，我已经解决了这个问题。

41. There be句型

①在此结构中，there是引导词，在句中不能充当任何成分，也不必翻译出来。句中的主语是某人或某物，谓语动词be要与主语的数保持一致。例如：There is a man at the door. 门口有一个人。

当主语是由两个或者两者以上的名词充当时，谓语动词be要跟它邻近的那个名词的数一致(就近一致)。例如：There are two dogs and a cat under the table。桌下有两只狗和一只猫。 比较： There is a cat and two dogs under the table。

②There be 句型中的be不能用have来代替，但可以用lie(位于，躺)，stand(矗立)，exist(生存)，live(生活)等词来替换。例如：There stand a lot of tall buildings on both sides of the street. 街道两旁矗立着许多高楼。

There lies lake in front of our school. 我们学校前面有一个湖。

Once there lived a king here. 这儿曾经有一个国王。

There is going to be a sports meeting next week. 下周准备开一个运动会。

与there be 类似的结构： there seem(s)/happen(s) to be…

There seems to be one mistake in spelling. 似乎有一处拼写错误。

There happened to be a ruler here. 这儿碰巧有把尺子。

There seemed to be a lot of people there. 那儿似乎有很多人。

42. The + adj。比较级， the + adj。比较级 越……,越……

此句型表示一方随另一方的变化而变化。例如：The harder he works, the happier he feels。他工作越努力，就感到越幸福。 The more, the better. 多多益善。 这本书我越读越喜欢。The more I read this book, 。

43. too+adj./adj. +to do sth. 太……以至于不……。

此句型为简单句，后面的to表示否定含义。

例如：The ice is too thin for you to walk on. 这冰太薄，你不能在上面走。

The bag is too heavy to carry. 这个袋子太重搬不动。

他太生气了，一句话也说不出来。He was say a word。

44. used to do sth. 过去常常做某事

used to是情态动词，表示过去的习惯动作或状态，现在已不存在，因此只用于过去时态。

例如： He used to get up early. 他过去总早起。

When I was yong, I used to play tennis very often. 我年轻时经常打网球。

否定形式有两种：didn’t use to;used not to,例如： 他过去不常来。He didn’t use to come. = He usedn’t to come。

45. what about…? ……怎么样? 后面可接名词、代词、动名词等。与“how about…?”同义。例如：

We have been to Hainan. What about you? 我们去过海南，你呢?

What about going to the park on Sunday? 星期天去公园怎么样?

46. What day/date is it today? 今天星期几(几月几日)?

―What day is it today? 今天星期几?―Sunday. ―What date is it today? ―June 24th。

47. What’s wrong (the matter) with…? ……怎么了?

What’s wrong with you, Madam? 夫人，您怎么了?

You look worried. What’s wrong with you? 你看上去很焦急，出什么事了?

48. Why not do…? 为什么不做……?

谓语动词用原形。与Why don’t you do…?同义。例如：Why not go to see the film with us?

= Why don’t you go to see the film with us? 为什么不和我们一起去看电影呢?

49. would like to do sth. 想做……

like后用动词不定式作宾语，也可用名词作宾语。例如： I would like to drink a cup of tea。我想喝一杯茶。 疑问句式：Would you like (to drink) a cup of tea? 你想喝杯茶吗?

50. adj./adv。比较级 + and adj./adv。比较级 越来越....。

若形容词/副词为双音节词及多音节词，则这一结构变为“more and more +形容词/副词”。

例如：It’s getting warmer and warmer. 天气变得越来越暖和了。

The little girl becomes more and more beautiful. 小女孩变得越来越漂亮了。

51. adj。比较级+than

than引导的是典型的比较级句型，表示“一者比另一者……”，起前用形容词或副词的比较级，than从句可以用省略形式。例如：I know you better than she does. 我比她更了解你。 This house is bigger than that one. 这所房子比那所房子大。

52. though-从句

though引导的是让步状语从句，意思是“虽然……但是……”。但不能和but连用，英语中表达“虽然……,但是……”时，though和but只能用一个。例如：

Though it was snowing, it was not very cold. 虽然下着雪，可并不太冷。

I was late for the last bus though I hurried. 虽然我拼命赶路，还是没搭上最后一班公交车。

We didn’t feel tired though we walked a long way. 虽然我们走了很长的路程，但是并没有感到累。

53. if-从句

If 引导的是条件状语从句，“如果;假如“。如主句用一般将来时，if从句要用一般现在时(主将从现)。例如：If I go to the GreatWall tomorrow, would you like to come along?

如果明天我去长城，你会和我一起去吗?

If it rains tomorrow, I won’t go. 如果明天下雨，我就不去了。

如果他不来我就不去。I won’t go 。

54. because-从句 引导原因状语从句，“因为”。 例如： He didn’t hear the knocking at the door because he was listening to the radio. 他没有听见敲门声，因为他正在听收音机。

55. so + do/be + 主语

“So + be/助动词/情态动词 + 主语” 表示前面所述内容也适用于另一人或物。be、助动词或情态动词的选择视前面陈述句中谓语动词的时态形式而定。例：He likes football and so do I. 他喜欢足球，我也如此。

Jim was playing football just now and so was Tom. 刚才吉姆在踢足球，汤姆也在踢足球。

比较： “So +主语+be/助动词/情态动词。”结构，是用来证实前一句所表达的内容(起强调作用)。be、助动词或情态动词的选择视前面陈述句中谓语动词的时态形式而定。

A: It is very hot today. B: So it is. 确实如此。

A: He can swim. B: So he can。

56. not only…but also… 不但……而且……

常用来连接语法作用相同的词、短语或句子。连接两个主语时，谓语动词要和紧靠它的主语在人称和数上保持一致。例如：She likes not only singing but also dancing. 她不但喜欢唱歌，而且喜欢跳舞。

He is not only a good doctor but also a good father. 他不但是个好医生而且是个好爸爸。

Not only I but also he is hoping to go there. 不但我而且他也想去那儿。

Not only you but also his father likes football and basketaball. 不但你喜欢足球和篮球，而且她的父亲也喜欢。

57. prefer…to… 喜欢……胜过…。

prefer (doing) sth. to (doing) sth. 意为“两者相比更喜欢(做)其中之一”。在此结构中，to是介词，接名词或动名词，结构中前后所跟成分一样。例如：

He prefers tea to coffee. 茶与咖啡相比，他更喜欢茶。

He prefers doing shopping to going fishing。购物与钓鱼相比，他更喜欢购物。

58. 感叹句型 What (a/an) + adj. + n. +主语+谓语! How + adj./adv.+ +主语+谓语! 例如：

What a clever boy (he is)! How clever the boy is!

What a wonderful film we saw last night! 昨天晚上我们看的电影多精彩啊!

How lovely the weather is! 天气多好啊! How hard he works! 他工作多么努力啊!

59. 祈使句型

祈使句型表示命令、请求、劝告等含义。说话的对象通常为第二人称，习惯上常省略。句末用句号或感叹号。肯定祈使句是：谓语动词用动词原形表示。否定祈使句是：在谓语动词前加do not(don’t)。例如：Be here on time tomorrow. 明天准时到这儿来。 Say it in English! 用英语说!

Don’t be afraid! 别怕! Don’t look out of the window! 不要朝窗外看!

60. 并列句型

用并列连词连接起来的两个或两个以上的简单句叫并列句。连接并列句常用的连接词有：and, but, or, so, however, not only…but also, neither…nor, either…or…等。例如：

I help her and she helps me。

He is very old but he is in good health. 他年纪很大了，但他身体很好。

We must hurry, or we’ll be late. 我们得赶快走，不然就晚了。

Kate does her work carefully, so she never makes any mistakes. 凯特工作很认真，从不出错。

Directions： You are allowed 40 minutes to write an essay no less than 150 words on the following topic.

1.some emphasize book knowledge

2.others stress practical experience

3.which one is more important？ Give your reasons to illustrate your opinion.

范文：

Which is more important in life， knowledge from the books you read， or personal experience you gain in reality？ The answer may vary from person to person. The young， educated may emphasize the former， and the old may stress the later. But in my opinion， they are of the same importance.

Experience is priceless. How to become an efficient secretary？ How to prepare for your first child to come into the world？ There is so much experience we need in careers， in life and even in academic studies. It helps one deal with the problems with ease and confidence. Especially activities and to accumulate experience of different kinds is more crucial.

Experience， however， is limited in terms of time and space. For one thing， it is impossible for anyone to experience all the important events and meet all the famous people. For another， as the speed with which skills are obsolete and new problems crop up is unprecedented because of the fast development of society， experience is far less adequate. Depending too much on it only leads to narrow-mindedness and prejudice.

One way to compensate for it is to read books. Books of various kinds can bring us almost unlimited additional experience. From books you can not only trace back to the wisdom of our antecedents， but keep up with the latest developments of science and technology. To be sure， it＇s secondhand experience. But it is the ideal supplement to our own limited experience. Few of us can travel around the world， or live long beyond one hundred years， but all of us can live many lives by reading books.

Both book knowledge and personal experience are essential. While experience makes one more resourceful， book knowledge makes one more learned.

[中考英语作文Knowledge or Experience知识或经验

教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。

问：“哪十字？”

“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！”

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be? him one day!

要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, whats more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

只要把这十个字都搞定了，那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定！

Long so big, lived a fairy carefree life, many people think we are very happy, in fact, we also have some trouble, such as I had a long is not high.

I this year 13 years old, is also and 10 years old children metre almost 4 a few, but not that I dont, just grow slowly, only a few centimeters a year, I mother worry dead, I am also very worry, hope I hurry up taller, because of the high long not too much trouble.

First, let me no face very much, the students often that I joke, such as once, Lin Qizhe and I went to the toilet, standing next to a four young children, he found a little bit taller than me. Yu Shilin kai zhe shame asked him: "kid, what grade are you?" "The fourth grade." And then he laughed at me said: "the fourth grade is higher than yours." I felt no face very much.

At another time, I went to the supermarket shopping and Lin Qizhe is originally very happy one thing, but when I came to the checkout counter, that aunt asked Lin Qizhe with smile: "the kid is your younger brother!" I nearly fainted on the spot, Lin smiled and explained the penguin, walk out the door he added opportunity to laugh at me, I think should make friends with him. This is a let me remember, I want to find a chance to even the score

Second, let me always sports than others, however, is not tall certainly sports is not good, especially what I run theres no way.

And one more thing is I in the morning exercises team is always the first, for six years, never change, once again, under the national flag, the front of the host is to find the nearest answer this question, I was just recently, he asked me, I didnt know, where is she reminded me that I didnt understand, let me very embarrassing, couldnt find a disappear. The back of the natural dont have to worry about finding yourself.

I couldnt get taller, but instead, I had to laugh at themselves: "concentration is the essence." "Im not a dwarf, but is not obvious." But I still want to grow taller.

长这么大，无忧无虑的过着神仙般的生活，好多人认为我们很快乐，其实我们也有一些烦恼，比如说我就有一个长不高的烦恼。

我今年13岁了，个子还和10岁孩子差不多高一米四几，但我不是不张，只是长得慢，一年只长几厘米，害得我妈着急死了，我也很着急，希望我快点长高，因为长不高太麻烦了。

第一：让我很没面子，同学们经常那我开玩笑，比如有一次，我和林启哲上厕所，旁边站了一个四年纪小朋友，他发现比我高一点点。于是林启哲不知耻的问他：“小朋友，你几年级啊?”“四年级啊。”，然后他嘲笑我说：“四年级的都比你高。”我当时觉得很没面子。

还有一次，我和林启哲去超市shopping，本来是很开心的一件事，可当我来到收银台时，那个阿姨笑着问林启哲：“那个小朋友是你的弟弟啊!”我当场差点晕了，林企鹅笑着解释完，走出门他又接着机会嘲笑我，我想是不是应该和他做朋友了。这是一只让我记忆犹新，我想找个机会报复一下

第二，让我体育总是比不过别人，个子不高肯定体育不好，尤其是什么跑步不行啊。

还有一点是我在早操队中是永远的第一个，已经六年了，从来没变过，又一次，国旗下表演，前排的主持人都是找最近的回答问题，刚好我是最近的，他问我，我没想到，她在哪里提醒我才明白，让我一下很难堪，恨不得找个地缝钻进去。后排的自然不用担心找到自己了。

我恨不得快点长高，但事与愿违，我只好自嘲：“浓缩就是精华。”“我不是矮，只是高的不明显。”但我依旧是想长高的。

参考范文：

Each of us should stay healthy, which is the foundation of our activities. Here are some ways to stay healthy.

First, we should spend one to two hours a day in regular exercise; try to walk instead of ride. Second, we should eat some healthy foods such as vegetables, fruits and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body. When we are in trouble, try to relax our mood, listen to the soft music. It also enables us to maintain a good health. Finally there is a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. If we can do follow these advice, I believe we can have a healthy body, a better life.

参考译文：

我们每个人都应该保持健康,这是我们活动的基础。这里有一些方法来保持健康。

首先,我们应该每天花一两个小时在经常锻炼;尽量步行而不是骑。第二,我们应该吃一些健康的食物比如蔬菜、水果等等。他们可以帮助我们保持健康的身体。当我们陷入困境,试图放松我们的心情,听轻柔的音乐。它还能使我们保持身体健康。最后有一个好的睡眠也能保证我们一个健康的身体。我们应该每天睡7到8小时,保持充足的睡眠。如果我们可以遵循这些建议,我相信我们可以有一个健康的身体,更好的生活。

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分主城区的同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，我们对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

关于体裁，本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型，其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。

关于题材，同学们的反应可谓是几家欢喜几家愁。上海中考写作也有自己的特色：一般围绕着生活化、学校化来考察。近几年，考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活，为中学生能够的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。比如：

2009年题目IWanttoDosomethingformySchool(我想为学校做的一件事)

2010年题目I‘mProudofmyself(我为自己感到自豪)

2011年题目Iamamemberof_____(我是 的一员)

2012年题目AlettertoJoe(给Joe的一封建议信)

2013年题目Howtoprotectmyself(如何保护自己)

2014年题目Thetimenextyear(明年此时)

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有无话可说的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

1.整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

2.内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

3.不满60个词，少15个词扣0.5分，610个词扣1分。

4.所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

5.每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

6.语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：词固定搭配、高频重点词汇；句复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子！

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：语言结构句子重点突出、内容清晰；内容结构论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；句数控制对于相对内容的句数掌握；亮点、出彩点排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

一、开头经典句型

一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。

1、对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。

如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.

2、对于论述性的文章，可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点，接着展开进一步的论述。

如“The Time and the Money (时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time. But I dont think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back， but……

3、在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。

这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget(永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)……

如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还可以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.

4、在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。

如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees? Dont you think planting trees is ……

再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?

5、有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。

如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. Its a ... story.

二、结尾经典句型

1、随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。

如“Helping the Policeman (帮助警察)”的结尾可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.

再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。

2、升华主题在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题，深化主题，起到“画龙点睛”的效果。

如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是：I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.

3、反问结尾，引起深思

这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，而且具有一定的强调作用，可引起他人的深思。

如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是：If we learn English well, we can …Dont you think learning English is great fun?

4、表达祝愿，阐述愿望

这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中，表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。

如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是：I hope the farmers life will be better and better.

另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语：best wishes; I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year; I wish you have a good time等。

When someone asks me: What is your Chinese dream? I will answer it without any hesitation: to be a good doctor. The reason why I want to be a doctor is that I want to save people’s lives as possible as I can. When I was young, I had a terrible car accident. Thanks to the doctors, they brought me back to life. From then on, to be a good doctor has always been an inspiration to me. I will study hard to make sure that my dream will come true in the future.

Chinese dream is made up of every ordinary people’s dreams. We should do our best to make our dream come true.

当有人问我:你的中国梦是什么?我将毫不犹豫地回答:是一个好医生。我想成为一名医生的原因是,我想要尽可能的挽救人们的生命。当我年轻的时候,我有一个可怕的车祸。多亏了医生,他们把我带回生活。从那时起,成为一个好医生一直是我的灵感。我将努力学习,以确保在未来我的梦想成真。

中国梦是由每一个普通人的梦想。我们应该尽力使我们的梦想成真。

英语是世界上最流行的语言，也是所有语言中使用最广泛的语言，学好英语有利于我们对外交流。下面是小编带来的是关于期中考试的英语作文，希望对您有帮助。

Today, I feel very unnatural when I go to bed together. No wonder! Mom and dad kept telling them that the air around them seemed to be frozen together.

After breakfast, our classmates went upstairs to do the preparatory work. The first two classes to test Chinese, I excitedly took out the pencil box, take out the Chinese book, began the last review. I havent had such a big exam for a long time, and Im nervous! I have learned Chinese books do not have to worry about basic questions, can recite fluently from memory, the key lies in reading, my level is not very good. Writing is OK, maybe get a full score.

Suddenly, the bell rang, and the faces of the students were so ugly that I got serious. My father always told me, "dont giggle in exams, it will distract your attention."." This is a very common examination, parents are stirred in disorderly fashion not tense, and are not calm down! The teacher rolled it, I got the first volume and looked back, huh?! Thats easy! I was secretly happy. But I still clear my throat, ready to jump into the "sea" to travel, explore. I also believe that peace is an important point, so that it can be static thought; seriously is also very important, the so-called "nothing is unachievable, as long as seriously, what things can be solved; also must be careful, careful person, who will love you!

I finally wrote my name, class, and started thinking about every question! The first question seems like I started doing it from grade one. Its a piece of cake! After second volumes, I suddenly realized that it was so hard and difficult to read. I read three times and didnt come up with the answer! Oh!

Finally, its time to roll in, and Ill have to take a good look at the next door! I think.

"Ding ding." The bell rings again, and I have to start doing some boring questions again.

After several I have done very well, that is, to the last one - English, and I am stumped.

Was that right? Whats this again?! Listening to a very vague English word, I really dont know what to choose is the correct answer, ah! Another door is doomed! What a bad luck!

Then I want to treat bad places I have seriously, for the future to test out koko!

今天，我一起床，就感觉十分不自然。怪不得呢！爸爸妈妈不停地叮嘱，周围的空气好像都凝固在一起——要期中考试了。

吃完早饭，我们班同学陆续上楼做准备工作。前两节课要考语文，我激动地拿出铅笔盒，取出语文书开始最后的复习。很久没有举行这样大型考试了，我不免有些紧张！语文书我已背得滚瓜烂熟，不用操心基础题，关键就在于阅读题，我的水平不是很好。作文倒是还可以，说不定能得个满分。

突然，上课铃响了，同学们的表情十分难看，我也严肃了起来。爸爸总是告诉我：“考试不要嘻嘻哈哈，这样会分散注意力。”这本是很普通的一个考试，都被家长们搅得糊里糊涂，不紧张的人，都冷静不下来！老师发卷了，我拿到第一卷后一看，咦！好简单呀！我心中暗暗高兴。可我还是清了清嗓子，准备跳入“题海”中去遨游、探索。我还认为平静是重要点，这样才可以静心想；认真也很重要，所谓“天下无难事，只怕有心人”，只要认真，什么事都可解决；还必须具备细心，细心的人，谁都会喜欢呀！

我终于写好姓名、班级，开始思考每一题啦！第一题好像是我从一年级就开始做的啦，简直是小菜一碟！一直做到第二卷，我突然发现，阅读题好难好难，我读了近三遍都没想出答案，算了，凑合凑合编一个吧！唉！

终于到收卷的时候了，下一门我一定得好好考！我想。

“叮叮叮。”铃声又响了，我只得又开始做那一些无聊的题目。

之后几门我都考得挺好，就是到了最后一门——英语，又把我难住了。

刚才是不是啊？这个又是什么呀！听着一个个极其模糊的英语单词，我真不知道选什么才是正确答案，啊！又一门要完蛋了！真倒霉！

以后我要认真对待我掌握的不好的地方，争取以后科科考满分！

根据下面的汉语提示写一个60字左右的口头通知：

假如你是班长，你们要举办英语讲座(lecture)。

1 时间：3 月1日星期五下午3 点至五点

2 地点：阶梯教室(lecture theatre)

3 讲座人：北京大学李平教授

4 报告的内容：怎样学英语

5 要求大家准时出席 (attend)，并且可以向他咨询有关的问题

例文：

Announcement

Girls and boys / Ladies and gentlemen，

May I have your attention，please ? / Attention，please.

I ve got announcement to make./ I m very glad to tell you that an English lecture will be held in the lecture hall / theater from 3 p.m .to 5 p.m. on Friday，March 1st.It will be given by Professor Li Ping from Beijing University. The topic is How to learn English well .You may take notes if you like. And you may ask any question on English learning / study after the lecture. Please attend the lecture on time / don t be late.

That s all，thank you.

[英语作文题目专项训练题中考备考

导语：越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)

内容包含：

(1)遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。

(2)别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

(3)劝父母不能酒后驾车。

你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。

参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道、zebra-crossing 斑马线

注：第一段已给出，不计入总数

关于交通问题的中考英语作文

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Dont play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

【参考译文】

随着越来越多的汽车走进我们的家庭，我们很高兴它大大改善了我们的生活。但不幸的是，它也带来了许多问题，如交通拥挤和交通事故。

交通安全人人有责。我们必须遵守规定!例如，我们必须走在一边，当我们过斑马线，停下来，看左，右，然后跨越快速。不要在马路上踢足球，我们可以告诉父母开车前不要喝酒，不要闯红灯，开车时不要说话和笑。

我们可以说汽车正在进入我们的生活，但只有当每个人都认为交通安全是每个人的业务，我们可以安全驾驶道路和人行道上行走。

As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart)， ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases)，significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____。 From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart， it goes without saying that ________。

There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______。 On the one hand， ________。 On the other hand， _______ is due to the fact that ________。 In addition， ________ is responsible for _______。 Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________。 But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

As far as I am concerned， I hold the point of view that _______。 I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

书面表达是对学生在初中阶段英语学习的综合考查，涉及篇章结构、句子构成、短语使用和单词拼写等多方面内容，的中考英语写作名师温馨提醒大家，在写作时要注意审题。下面小编将就中考书面表达的写作方法和注意事项进行指导：

一、认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式

时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。

说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。

根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。

如果句中出现了时间状语，时态则要遵循时间状语。

如ago，last…——过去时

next，in…——将来时等

人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。

例如：Thanks to the teachers， we have improved our English。

其中we和our就是人称的统一。

格式：注意书信格式的开头和结尾。

二、找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点

切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔标出，写完后再涂掉。

根据题目，可适当增加合理内容。

特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。

三、成文时表述正确，文字流畅

切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。

首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾，主系表等)。

同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。

四、文章结构清晰，重点句型出彩，可使文章在得分上提高一个档次

考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。

常用连接词：

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second…

And then，Finally，In the end，At last

2.表并列补充关系的：What ismore，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，Inaddition

3.表转折对比关系的：However，On the contrary，but

Although+clause( 从句)，In spite of+n/doing

On the one hand…

On the other hand…

Some…，while others…

4.表因果关系的：Because，As

So，Thus，Therefore，As a result

5.表换一种方式表达：In other words

6.表进行举例说明：For example，句子;For instance，句子;such as+n/doing

7.表陈述事实：In fact

8.表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion

9.表总结：In short，In a word，In conclusion，In summary

文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。

宾语从句举例：I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous。

状语从句举例：If everyone does something for the environment， ourhometown will become clean and beautiful。

动名词做主语举例：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes。

It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun。

常用状语从句句型：

1)时间when，not…until，as soon as

2)目的so that+clause;to do( 为了)

3)结果so…that+clause，too…to do(太……以至于……)

4)条件if，unless(除非)，as long as(只要)

5)让步though，although，even though，even if

no matter what/when/where/who/which/how

6)比较as…as…，not so…as…，than

五、认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰，短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。

检查后，将草稿誊写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。

下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误：

1.We live more and more comfortable。

改正：comfortably(副词修饰动词)

2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers。

改正：much information

(不可数名词由much修饰)

3.There has many programs in TV。

改正：There are many programs on TV。

(There be句型和介词短语)

4.I think ride a bike can keep our health。

改正：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy。(动名词作主语)

建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章，特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法，适当运用于自己的文章中。2015武汉小马寒假班火热开班中，还不赶快报名试听?关于中考英语写作的更多内容，欢迎您关注小马过河国际教育官网，或拨打电话400-813-9966咨询。

Dear Linda，

Im very glad that youll come to China to watch the Olympic Games. I know it isnt easy to learn a foreign language，but I have some ideas that may help. Firstly，its very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later. Secondly，try to catch every chance to practice speaking，both in and out of class. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Then try to listen and read more in Chinese. Whats more， youd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day。

Above all，you should be confident in yourself and dont give up whenever you meet with difficulties. Im sure you will succeed through your hard work。

Best wishes and look forward to meeting you in China.

标题：中考英语作文题目为感谢信的写法

关键词：中考英语作文题目

导读：中考英语作文题目虽然是我们没有办法准确预测的，但是有些类型的题目还是出现频率比较高的。下面我们就挑选了“感谢信”这种题材为大家介绍一篇优秀的范文，帮助大家。

假设你叫Liu Yan，初中三年，你与同学们在一起学习、参加各种活动，相互帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊.校园网的英语论坛开辟了 “Thank you letter” 专栏.请按下面的要求给你的同学Ling Feng写一封感谢信.注意：1.这封信要表达你对Ling Feng的感谢；2.信中要简述感谢Ling Feng的原因，适当举例，并谈谈自己的感受；提示词语：thank you, at the end of , kind, forget, help? with,

stay in touch

Dear Ling Feng,

I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education. You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.

You have given me so much help that I will never forget. Last term, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week. When I was worrying about the lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help, I didn’t fall behind others. Since then, we have become very close friends. I think I’ll try to help others just like you.

Thank you again. Even though we may go to different schools, I’ll always stay in touch with you. I wish you success for the future.Yours,

Liu Yan

导语：昨天已成为历史。我们不能做什么来挽救它。明天不是我们力所能及的。我们能做的就是珍惜今天，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Time waits for no one. If it flows away, it will never come to us again. We can t take charge of our time but we should know the importance of time and cherish time.

Yesterday has become the history. Nothing we can do to save it. Tomorrow is not within our reach. We don t know what will happen tomorrow. So the only thing we can do is to cherish what we have today and fight for tomorrow. Victory only belongs to those who work very hard! Therefore, we should make full use of today, fighting for what we want.

【参考译文】

时间不等人。如果它流逝了，它就永远不会再回来。我们不能控制时间，但我们应该知道时间的重要性并珍惜时间。

昨天已成为历史。我们不能做什么来挽救它。明天不是我们力所能及的。我们不知道明天会发生什么。所以我们唯一能做的就是珍惜今天，为明天而战。胜利只属于那些努力的人!因此，今天我们应该充分利用今天，争取我们想要的东西。

My mothers name is # # # , a forty-three-year-old businesswoman. She loves vegetables and fruits, because they can help to lose her weight. In addition, she likes animals very much, especially dogs because she thinks they are sensitive as well as cute. She likes watching TV except for the sports. She really likes going shopping although she doesnt have too much time.

My mother has got long, brown hair and pretty big eyes. She is really beautiful and looks very young. In life she is a very lovely woman always with a bright smile on her face. Of course, Shes also very outgoing and generous.

My mother has been very popular with her friends and customers, perhaps because she not only has a good temper but also such a helpful personality. All of her friends are willing to get along with her. But sometimes she is strict with me. I think the reason for that is that she wants me to study hard in order to get into a better university. In her free time, she always cleans up the house to create me a comfortable learning environment. I am constantly thinking about how to express my appreciation for what mother does for me. Maybe silence is the best key before my dreaming mansion is built.

I love my mother and may she be healthy and happy forever.

我的妈妈叫XXX，她是一个四十三岁的女商人。她喜欢吃蔬菜和水果，因为这样可以保持她的身材。另外，她非常喜欢小动物，特别是小狗，因为她觉得狗非常可爱和善解人意，她喜欢除体育节目之外的所有节目。她热衷逛街购物尽管没有太多时间。

我的妈妈有一头长长的棕色头发和一双炯炯有神的大眼睛，她看起来既美丽又年轻。生活中，她是一个脸上永远洋溢着灿烂微笑的可爱女人，当然，她人也很开朗大方。

我的妈妈深受她朋友们和顾客们的喜欢，不仅因为她和蔼可亲而且也由于她乐于助人的性格，她所有的朋友都乐意同她相处。但她对我有时很严厉，我想她这么做的原因是她希望我考上好大学而让我努力学习。在她的业余时间里，她常常打扫家里的卫生来为我创造更好的学习环境，我时常想到应该怎样报答她对我所做的一切，也许在我的理想大厦尚未建成之前，沉默便是最好的诉说。

我爱我的妈妈，我希望她永远健康幸福。

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。小编收集了中考英语作文的写作技巧，欢迎阅读。

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

四、要心有全局

英文写作十分强调形式上的严谨性，特别是全局的丝丝入扣。如果写作时结构意识良好，应试写作就简化成为一个填空的过程了。框架万变不离其宗，适当地填如观点、素材，文章就自然而然地立起来了。

掌握了这些英文写作中的练习技巧，会使提高英文写作水平的努力有更大的收益。

下面智康教育跟大家分享写作的“五项基本原则” ：

1、 长短句原则

工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：

as a creature, i eat; as a man, i read. although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.

如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉?牢记!

强烈建议：在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短，且先长后短;在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

2、 主题句原则

国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事!

特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!

to begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句). without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.

3、 一二三原则

领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1)first, second, third, last(不推荐，原因：俗)

2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐，原因：俗)

3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐，原因：俗)

4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐，原因：俗)

5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)

6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)

7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)

8)most important of all, moreover, finally

9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)

10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)

4、 短语优先原则

写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如：

i cannot bear it.

可以用短语表达：i cannot put up with it.

i want it.

可以用短语表达：i am looking forward to it.

这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。

5、 多变句式原则

1)加法(串联)

都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：

i enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.

如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：

not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.

其它的短语可以用：

besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2)转折(拐弯抹角)

批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。

the car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.

the coat was thin, but it was warm.

更多的短语：

despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3)因果(so, so, so)

昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!

the snow began to fall, so we went home.

更多短语：

then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4)失衡句(头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重)

有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。

举例：this is what i can do.

whether he can go with us or not is not sure.

同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：

when to go, why he goes away…

5)附加(多此一举)

如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他;或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。

the man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.

i don’t enjoy that book you are reading.

mr liu, our oral english teacher, is easy-going.

其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。